The Kitten, the Witches and the Bad Wardrobe Willow & Tara Forever

by **WTfan4ever** » Tue Nov 11, 2003 3:40 pm

Okay, I only wrote these like 2 days ago, and it's my first attmpt at poetry... ever, so be gentle.

(whenever there is a line between sentences or whatever, it's a new poem. confusing if you think they're all the same one like my friend did.)

normality has long since fled/

a shadow of you is left instead/

all I once knew is now so fragile/

until distant future I hold denial/

/the truth a demon, in my eyes/

confusion clouds the air and mind/

my view is darkness, tainted and broken/

my Eden is now only shards of glass/

a shattered mirror, distorting my image/

/and no one knows/ no one will ever know/

silence breaks like waves on a shore/

so loud in my mind/ I can’t believe you’re gone/

I can feel your heart/ still beating inside of me/

but I don’t deserve it/ I have never deserved you/

I got so scared/ I pulled away/ Why?/

I need you back here/ I need you here with me/

but I don’t deserve you/ so stay away from me/

I cannot hold you/ even though I need you

/because I will never deserve you/

-kelz

by SJ » Wed Nov 12, 2003 12:49 am

Your poetry is great,thanks for sharing :clap

by **intricate mirage** » Wed Nov 12, 2003 4:13 am

WTfan4ever :bigwave

Welcome to Inward Eye

Great poetry you've got here. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing

Cassie

Ask me if I loved you yesterday. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I love you today. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I'll love you tomorrow. I'll say 'Always'

by **WTfan4ever** » Thu Nov 13, 2003 3:35 pm

Hey, thanks for checking my poems out. I just finished this one… hope it’s up to par… is that even a real expression?

how is it/ that you do this/

you bring me to the edge/ the end of sanity/

wanting you/ I cannot believe how much I need you/

it scares me sometimes/ it stays with me always/

it is a hole when you are gone/ I am empty when you are not here/

but I cannot wish it away/ it alone does not abide by rational laws/

it stands above all else/ present in my entire being/

your face/ always at the front of my mind/

your name/ always on the tip of my tongue/

it cannot be real/ it outshines all I know/

while all else changes/ one thing is constant/

it burns through me/ breaks down my barriers/ exposes/

ignorant of the laws it defies/ uncaring of the emotions it overshadows/

it stays with me/ my love for you endures above all else/ forever/

/my always/