My short poems - short and meaningful...

[pacou]

Hey Kitties



Now here's another poem... I'm talking about someone in particular and that person knows that I'm talking about her... Right, baby? I love you darling



Okay, back to the topic... aah yes...



Thanks for replying Sam, I am really glad that you liked that poem and the thing with the dark to bright



Now there's the new poem, enjoy



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Right now

My legs start shaking when I think of your body

My mouth is watering for just one kiss, I wouldn’t mind more though

My hands are longing for one touch, well, or for more than one

My skin is burning with desire to make you mine

And my whole being is aching for just a sight of you



And soon

My legs will shake under your body

My mouth will be watering for another kiss

My hands will be touching you over and over again

My skin will be making you mine forever

And my whole being will be satisfied with the sight of you



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Hope you liked, take care everybody and thanks for reading



-Viv-

"Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired."
Robert Frost

[SJ]

Hey Viv,glad you've posted another poem,great writing

[pacou]

Hey Kitties



I know, it's been ages... but you know... life, love, laziness... it keeps you away from writing Not that I'd complain in the love way...



But thank you Sam for your wonderful reply, hope you'll enjoy this one too



Thanks also everybody who read and enjoyed



It's about people in generally... you could call it society maybe?



Less talking, more posting, enjoy

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Strong



Dangerously the alarm clock rings

Yet again destroying my deepest dreams

Automatically I push the button right away

Aware that I’ll have to face yet another day



Numbly I pour milk and cornflakes into a bowl

Always feeling my insides’ cold, dark, deep hole

Strange, dangerous happenings lay ahead of me

What would I give to get rid of these?



Breakfast’s done, I leave the house

Again heading for the well-known grouse

All the people that I know

It’s always the same, they complain about which way to go



They whine about the butter getting more expensive

Complain about the delegates’ life being so excessive

They grumble over the bad, cold weather

Although I know, warm conditions wouldn’t do any better



And the numbness inside of me goes on and on

I seriously wonder if I am the only one

Who can see the beauty of the world outside?

The cloudless sky and the sun shining bright?



But on this plain day, suddenly I know that I want to change this sickening ignorance

I approach them; make them aware of the wonderful chance to just have a dance

They look as if I were stupid; I suggest them to smile instead of complaining endlessly

To my surprise they give me a smile, though I know they’d rather get rid of me



I try to make them see that there are still good things for humankind

Try to prevent them from getting more and more blind

Try to make them aware of watching leaves dropping in deepest fall

Try to make them worship the most important things of all



I wish they loved rather than fighting each other with appalling brutality

I wish they saw the planet’s everlasting beauty instead of its temporary cruelty

I wish they learned hoping again, not giving up in hard times completely

I wish they trusted instead of being wary of sincere humanity



I walk through the streets

To my surprise I suddenly see a lot of laughing kids

Playing, smiling, having fun

And I know in my heart, the world’s change has begun



In the late evening I get into bed

More contented rather than being sad

I may not change the grief in this world; no one can on his own

But I won’t give up on love and others will also realize that only together we’re strong



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Thanks for reading everybody



-Viv-

"Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired."
Robert Frost

[Spikeizmine87]

HELLO! Ive been reading all of your poems and i like them alot! very well written and angsty!! I could relate to alot of those poems! Youre a great writer! keep it up!



I HATE MY HANDLE

-Rose



I loves me AMber!

[SJ]

Hey Viv,liked that poem,great writing

[intricate mirage]

Hey! Lovely poem you've got here. The first two lines had me grinning away. Maybe it's that the alarm clocks sounds like quite a weapon. Or maybe it just reminded me of the trashing my poor alarm clock gets every morning. Hehe keep up the great writing

~ Cassie

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My fountain of strength that never runs dry

You are the shooting star across the midnight sky

Edited by: intricate mirage at: 11/1/03 11:22 am

[pacou]

Hey Kitties



Time for a new poem, or what do you say?



Hey Rose, thank you very much for your reply I think it kinda sucks that a lot of my poems are/have been angsty as I’m usually such a angst-hating person But I also think that angst always shows a lot of emotion and moves people, it moves me too… well… I like angst every now and then



Thanks Sam It’s cool that you always stop by here, I really like that, thank you



And thanks Cassie You know that I so like your poems and writings... so thanks for reading my stuff too and even liking it



Also, thanks to everyone who's lurking



This one… gosh, just read, it’s crap But it suddenly came to my mind… please don't ask me what it is about



Is there a sense in it? I must stress: NO!



Just read (and enjoy maybe)



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I walk the shadows

I touch the sky

Not sure what I’m looking for

But I’m endlessly searching for it



My feet on the ground

My heart in the sky

I guess I must have lost my head in this height

It doesn’t matter, I don’t need it anyway



My journey goes on

Places have to be touched

Colours have to be painted

My heart soaks everything up



And here I’m standing tall

I connect earth and sky

And still I’m so very small

Only my heart knows why it keeps me searching



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Thanks for reading



-Viv-

"Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired."
Robert Frost

[SJ]

Enjoy reading your poetry Viv

I didn't think it was crap,liked that poem,thought it was interesting

[onyxsundrops]

Quote:

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Only my heart knows why it keeps me searching

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Loved that line. Please post more

Onyx

[pacou]

Hey Kitties



Yes, you've just won a new poem! Congratulations!



Thanks for your reply Sam, I'm really glad that you thought it was interesting... I was kind of trying a new style... writing without thinking lol Thanks again



And thanks Yvonne Cool that you liked this line... nice thing that got into my head there huh? Thanks for reading



Thanks to everybody else who read



And this one... short, sweet, romantic. Basta.



Enjoy

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Together forever, never apart

My sweet darling, this is the message of my heart



I know, darling, in my whole life there will only be one love

Yes, baby, it’s you who makes me feel high above



Honey, you think there might come times when I might not love you

But, my love, believe me, those times will never come true

My dearest, if you’re lost and want to be found

Remember my words, sweetie, I’ll always be around



My love protects you as yours protects me

Loved we are and forever we will be

I will be there whenever you’re in pain

And your gentle love will forever keep me sane



Together forever, never apart

My sweet darling, right now this is our start.



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Thanks for reading :



-Viv-

"Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired."
Robert Frost

[intricate mirage]

Aww Viv That was such a lovely poem! I loved the way the poem began and ended with its two lines. Perfect way to begin and end! Ohh I loved everything in between too Enjoyed reading the poem. Keep up the great work



<-- putting this little fella here cos I think he's so adorable!

Cassie





Ask me if I loved you yesterday. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I love you today. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I'll love you tomorrow. I'll say 'Always'

[SJ]

Hey Viv,lovely poem

[pikescoob]

Viv!! Hey girl Awesome poetry...I'm glad I got caught up on your posts, it's been a long while since I've been on here. The last one is just so sweet...definitely awwww worthy...I know the inspiration for that and I'm so happy for you girl Take care *hugs*



Michelle

[pacou]

Hey Kitties s



Yep, time for an update



Thanks everybody who’s reading and enjoying And thanks to everybody who’s reading and not enjoying



Thanks Cas for stopping by Lol yeah that banana is cute Hehe I’m glad you liked how it started and ended, smart idea, wasn’t it? Thanks girl



Thanks Sam I’m really glad you enjoyed it, I’ve tried to make this one as great as the last one to have you enjoying it, too Thanks Sam



Michelle!!! *hugs* I’m so happy you got back here for some time!!! I miss you around the board Take care girl, I’m so happy you got to surf the board and like my poems Yeah, my inspiration… I have a niiiice inspiration… *happy sigh* Anyway, before I get carried away by my inspiration... Thanks for reading, take care!



Well, now there’s the new poem It’s simple but with a deep meaning…



Enjoy



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My phone rings

It’s the usual irritating tune, nothing is special about it

But I know who will be on the other end



My fingers almost crush the receiver as I pick it up

They’re so strained that my knuckles turn white

I clutch my ear closer to the phone, knowing your voice will be in my ear in a second



As I nervously answer the phone you just say hi

And I’m in heaven, there’s not other place than that

I’m so happy to hear you just say something again



I hear your lips whispering something

And I virtually want to crawl into those lips

Wanting, needing to become a part of them



I can imagine your lips opening and closing

Your chest slowly rising and falling

Your adorable lips forming words, barely audible breathing and sighing



We talk, talking about what you did

Talking about what I did

And every second of it I want you so bad



But I can read between the lines

I know you want to crawl into my lips as much as I want to become a part of yours

We continue talking, realizing that our lips are hanging at each others sighs



You have to get back to work

We hang up

Understanding you’ll be busy, I miss your voice already



There are certain things about you that I simply can’t resist

Your voice is one those things

Thinking for a second, I dial your number

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Thanks for reading Kitties



–Viv-

"Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired."
Robert Frost

[SJ]

I can relate to that poem

Great writing

[intricate mirage]

Viv!!!



I'm here! And I just read it! *leaps onto you* And you know what? I love it!



Now... That is certainly one damn bloody good phone call and I know you're gonna have many more of it! *wink*



(Ok ok, so I'm super energetic right now *hops excitedly all around your thread* But hey! I know you'll be understanding of that! )

Cassie



My whole life I've only loved one person, that person was you.

[TaraBaby77]

Holy Goodness!!! You are amazing. WOW!!! Everyone but me has a gift of writing. I guess I have a gift of reading because I just find myself in enjoyment reading your poems. Awesome!!! If you have more, keep them comin', kay??? =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

[pikescoob]

Viv girl!! Loved the poem...I can definitely Identify with that need to hear that certain someone's voice *grin* Take care sweetie...talk to you soon.



Michelle

[pacou]

Yay Kitties, time for a new poem again, isn’t it?



Well, this one is… um, about people, two people… together Well, nothing naughty though, sorry to disappoint (Come on, I know you are a little disappointed, don’t pretend you’re not )



Hehe Sam, what would I do without you Thank you for your reply, I’m really glad you could relate to that Oh yes, phone calls can be nice, right?



Okay… and of course my biggest bows and thanks to Cas Thanks for reading (to go with your words) dude!!! Okay girl, jump around in my thread if you want to, but please don’t break anything *grabs her poems and the replies* Thanks for stopping by



And of course, thanks to Aaron!!! Aww, I bet you have a gift of writing as well, just always keep trying Oh and I will try to keep them coming, hope this coming (not that kind of coming *rolls eyes* ) made you happy Thanks a lot for reading



Yay, Michelle!!! Welcome back on the Kitten, thanks for reading, I’m glad you liked it!!! It’s really cool to have you reading here… and the best part is when you even like it Thank you so much for hopping in my thread in your rare Kitten time Take care girl, talk with you soon!



And thanks everybody for reading!!! Thank you, all my lurkers



Okay… yes, Kitten, you finally made it through all the replies, now the poem



Enjoy



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When I lose myself in you, the adorable you

What does the rest of this huge, gigantic world do?



Is the planet continuously spinning faster?

Leading to an unavoidable disaster?



Are there suddenly dogs taking people for a walk?

Are rabbits beginning to talk?



Are all couples losing themselves in each others eyes?

Are all of them feeling as if they were above the skies?



Is everyone radiant with contentment and happiness?

Enjoying as much as we do the togetherness?



It’d be so nice to know, but I guess I will never find out

Because with you, dearest, the entire world is just shut out



When I lose myself in you

The world is just us two



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Thanks for reading Kitties!!!



–Viv-

"Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired."
Robert Frost

[TaraBaby77]

Awww, that is so beautiful. Yeappers, beautiful. I like it. And if you don't mind, I am going to share it with a friend of mine. Anyhoo, thanks tons for sharing. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

[SJ]

Hey Viv,nice poem,lovely words,thanks for sharing

[intricate mirage]

Hey dude!

Quote:

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Are there suddenly dogs taking people for a walk?

Are rabbits beginning to talk?

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Quote:

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Are all couples losing themselves in each others eyes?

Are all of them feeling as if they were above the skies?

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Sweetness!

Quote:

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When I lose myself in you

The world is just us two

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Awwww

Did I love it? Yup! I sure did

My whole life I've loved only one person, that person was you.

Edited by: intricate mirage at: 12/28/03 7:58 am

[pacou]

Hey Kitties , time for another update Well, I’ve decided it’s time



This one is, um… ( )... hard to describe , maybe you better just read it and make up your own opinion



Hey Aaron, thanks for your reply Of course, ‘s okay when you take it to show your friend, actually I feel flattered Thanks for reading



Thanks Sam , I’m really glad you enjoyed this one and I certainly hope you’ll like this one as much as the last (or even more ) Thanks



Thanks Cas for your reply I’m really glad you enjoyed reading it Oh, and thanks for the rhyme on “chum”



And thanks to everybody else who is reading



Here it comes, enjoy



NOTE: Don’t take this too serious, I’d never punch them!!!



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Ode to a stuffed animal



Stuffed animal, my delightful, little friend

How I enjoy taking you by your sweet hands

Hugging you and squeezing you tight

Whenever I want to, day or night



Oh, my stuffed animal, my comforting, little pal

Countless times my tears have covered your silky, smooth pelt

Sadly they were dripping down your little eyes, your cute, soft nose

But for me you’d every time be willing to be drowned in those



My dearest stuffed animal, my calming, little chum

You let me throw you ‘round when I’m mad and feeling numb

Patiently you hit the wall, get punched, slapped or get knocked on the head

You even don’t mind if my fury squeezes you under the bed



My dearest, sweetest stuffed animal, my tolerant, little mate

I seem to have forgotten you, but I did not, in fact you’re great

And you’ll always be there, no matter what weird mood I might get in

Stuffed animal, my true, good friend you will be and always have been



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Thanks for reading



-Viv-

"Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired."
Robert Frost

[SJ]

Hey Viv,love that poem,quirky and fun

[intricate mirage]

Yo Viv dude!



I've only got one thing to say...

Quote:

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Ode to a stuffed animal

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Cassie xx

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My whole life I've loved only one person, that person was you

[pacou]

Hey Kitties



After that other, ummm, unusual poem this time I’ll give the seriousness a try again



Sam Thank you for reading Yep, it was quirky indeed… but I soo felt the need to write it you know Thanks for replying girl



Hehe Cas Okay, I will just take that as a compliment now, okay? Thanks for reading



And thanks of course everybody else who keeps reading



So here it is, weather and season didn’t get unnoticed by me either



Enjoy



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Again it is winter

And it is cold out here

Still, I am outside, just going for a walk

I am freezing, my feet are cold, yet they resolutely keep moving

The frosty, arctic breeze freezes my face

The snowflakes carelessly cut my skin, leaving it cold and lifeless

I pull my scarf tighter around me, trying to shut out the frostiness

And, pushing my ice-cold hands deep down into the pockets of my coat, I hope they’ll warm up just for a bit

But I keep going, ignoring the unfriendly feelings around me



It is strange that I’m out here

No one gets out at this time of the year

Everyone wants to escape the harsh and rough winter

I wonder why I got out

What is it that keeps me putting on my clothes?

What keeps me moving out of the house at this time of the year?

I know the answer is somewhere around here

Striding through the snowy wilderness, my eyes search for a hint of an answer

But I can’t find it in this entire white, cold surface

So I keep following the path, being swallowed by thick, white snowflakes



At a frozen lake I come to a halt

Children ice-skate on the deep solid ground, having fun, they don’t feel what I do

Blinking slowly, I suddenly realise something

Smiling at my recognition I tug out my hands and form a snowball

And with a heartfelt chuckle I throw it away, it gets lost somewhere in the snow-covered landscape

I can feel the warmth crawling up my entire body

The snowflakes no longer cut my skin, I am not freezing anymore

Instead, I take in this place’s entire, peaceful beauty

It really doesn’t matter why I want to go outside

What matters is that I am outside

To be at ease with myself



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Thanks for reading, take care



-Viv-

"Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired."
Robert Frost

[SJ]

Viv,great poem

Great imagery in your writing,you've captured winter so well

[intricate mirage]

Hello Viv!



Finally read it and yes as Sam said, you captured the imagery very well, kudos to you mate



Loved the last four lines

Quote:

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Instead, I take in this place’s entire, peaceful beauty

It really doesn’t matter why I want to go outside

What matters is that I am outside

To be at ease with myself

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You know I love you writing, so keep it up ok? You keep on writing, I'll keep on reading

Cassie xx

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My whole life I've loved only one person, that person was you