My short poems - short and meaningful...

[Ten10239]

I...I..I'm at a loss for words. I think that this will sum it up .



Leni

"F#&k you, but have a nice day!"

[pacou]

Hey Kitties



Here’s a new poem, it’s actually nonsense but it’s a nice one I think Well, it’s ridiculous stuff of course, but I like it



Thanks Sam I’m glad that you liked the poem I really like that poem, too (I know, the author should never say that )



Thanks Leni Aww, a bow! Thanks Lol actually I have to bow when I read your stuff Speaking of that… Are there gonna be more poems soon? *hint*



Thanks for reading everybody



Now the poem, enjoy please

Forgive me if it’s weird

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The game

Without a name

That’s a shame

But who is to blame?

The game?

The non-existent name?

It doesn’t matter, we shouldn’t complain

These questions are lame

It’s all the same

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Thanks for reading



–Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

[pikescoob]

Viv!! It was cool catching you online earlier today I'm all caught up with your poems! I really do enjoy coming here to read what you share cuz you have great talent! Take care sweetie *hugs*



**Michelle

[SJ]

I liked that poem

Not weird at all.

[pacou]

Hey Kitten



Okay, here's a new poem



Hmm, lol can I say anything about it, except: Enjoy?



Probably not. Enjoy.



Thanks Michelle *hugs* Lol I'm not sure if i am talented lol I just write and hope that people will like it But thanks for reading and catching up



Lol Sam, thanks for your opinion but it is weird Thanks for reading



And now the poem, really



Enjoy

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Leave me

There is nothing that you can do for me

It’s too late

I’m already dead

Now the hand that you are offering me

Is coming too late

I died



Leave me

I can’t stand your help anymore

Can’t you see that?

It is too late now

I’m dead

Just think about that

I died when you left me



Stay

Please, don’t turn away and leave me

It’s not too late

I’m not yet ready to die

Please, won’t you open your hand once more

And let me live again?

I’m dying if you leave me now

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Thanks for reading



-viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

[SJ]

That is a bit dark but emotive

Great writing

[voxanglsm]

Some of these are a little angsty, but I've done that before, too. Anyway, the poems that struck me were "Memories" and "Weak" and parts of "Love." The last one was pretty good at expressing emotions, too, although, again, a little angsty. But keep writing and thanks for sharing.

"Welcome to Kristin" -Kristin School

[pacou]

Okies, my dear Kitties



I thought it is time for a new poem again Hope you like It’s, well, a general view about people and the contradictions of their feelings. People and their feelings…



Thanks a lot for reading Sam I’m really glad that you liked this one THANKS, THANKS, THANKS



Thanks voxanglsm I'm really glad that you liked all those Yeah, "Memories" is one of my favourites, too, very private Lol I'm really sorry if most of my poems are angsty, I don't even want it but that's the only crap that comes out of my crazy brain when I'm writing I guess it's my way to get along with this insane world Oh and sorry, another angsty one Thanks for reading



And now the poem, enjoy please



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You hate it



Everyday the same doubts, questions

Again and again



You’re a mess

You don’t know what you’re feeling

You’re screaming



You’re torn

You want her

And at the same time

You want somebody else



And no matter which direction you’re heading in the future

You’re going to hurt somebody

Yourself

Her

The both of you?



And you hate to know that you’ll be hurting somebody

You hate hurting people

You hate wounding yourself over and over again

You want to see things clearer

You want to know what you want

But you don’t, because no one does, and that kills you

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Thanks for reading



Take care everybody



-Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

[SJ]

Hey Viv

I liked the raw emotion of this poem

Thanks for sharing

[pikescoob]

Viv!! Wow...I can definitely feel the conflict going on here...no matter which direction you choose, someone will get hurt...it can be hard to know exactly what you want when your mind is telling you a bunch of different things...but when it's right, when you find "the one" it'll be VERY clear, something you can't deny. Thanks for sharing sweetie!!



**Michelle

[RedVampire]

Excellent! I've read all those poems and they are just...WOW lol. Those are way better than anything I've ever written! I could relate to a couple of them and the rest of them were a great read! Hope to see more, soon!



Peace out,

Redvampire

[pacou]

Hey Kitties



Finally it’s time for a new poem again, good huh?



This one is… about no one in particular, I was only inspired by some people I know… Hey, you can be proud of me, it’s not that dark this time



Thanks for replying Sam I’m glad that you liked this emotion thing going on lol Thanks for reading



And thanks Michelle I’m always astonished how good you analyze my poems lol It’s always great fun to read your comments Thanks a lot and take care sweetie



Thanks Red Vampire Hmmm My stuff is excellent? Thank you, I’ve never heard that before… I think so lol And my poems are even thud worthy? Thanks so much for replying and just for you here my new poem, I hope I didn’t let you wait too long



Thanks for reading and replying everybody



And now enjoy the poem

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I hate myself

You lie to me

You treat me as if I’d be some kind of toy for you

You turn to me when you’re in the mood for me

And push me away a second after that



I’m hurt

But you don’t see that



I hate you

I lie to you

I treat you as if you’d just be some kind of amusement for me

I turn to you when I feel like that

And push you away when I’m done with you



You’re hurt

But I just don’t see that



Why must people always hurt other people?

Nobody wants it, but everyone does it

Why must I always hurt you?

I don’t want it, but I still do it



I wish I’d show you all the love that I have for you

Instead of all the hate that I have for me



Please forgive me, I don’t mean to hurt you

I never do

I never did

I never will



I love you

I wish I could show you



But as long as I don’t love myself

I can’t show you my love

Please, wait for the day where I finally love myself

And I’ll show you what true love is

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Thanks for reading Take care everybody



–Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

[SJ]

Hey Viv

Kick ass poem

Yeah not too dark

[kiwi6969]

Well Viv...



Can I just add that this poem was great,

I'm going through the same thing as I write this,so thanks for shareing and keep on writting.







cheers kiwi6969

[pacou]

Hey Kitten



It's time for a new poem



Thanks Sam You know, the -smiley so fit to the "not too dark" part Thanks for reading



Thanks for reading Teresa Lol, yes, you may add that it's great No, seriously, thanks for reading, keep them reading and most of all: Enjoy them Thanks



And now the poem..it's not too dark again lol Oh well, just check it out



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I’m not sure if I can take this

I’m not sure I want this at all

I’m not sure if I can hold back my tears

I’m not sure I like you kissing another girl



I’m just not sure

The whole situation has gone too weird

You’re happy, I’m not

What are we going to do?



I’m not sure if I’ll do anything

I’m not sure I’ll congratulate you on your victory

I’m not sure if I’ll go insane

I’m not sure I like me being unhappy



I’m just not sure

The whole situation is still very weird

You’re happy, I’m not

What am I going to do?



I’m not sure if this is a good thing for me

I’m not sure I’ll survive it

I’m not sure if you want me to be happy

I’m not sure I want to be happy for you



But I’m just sure now

The whole situation is still a little weird

You’re happy, I’m, because you are

What is going to change?



I’m sure that I’ll be happy for you

I’m sure that I’ll be nicer to you

I’m sure that I’ll be happy for your love

I’m sure that I’ll be just happier



I’m sure it’s still all for you

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Thanks for reading, take care everybody



-Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

[SJ]

Not too dark,little angsty maybe but once again great poem full of emotion

[RedVampire]

Another great poem, loved this one too. Hope to see more soon.



Redvampire

[pacou]

Hey Kitten



Okay, now here's another poem



Thanks for everybody who read it



And what a surprise..this one is angsty, too I just don't get out happy ones Hmm and it's not about anyone in particular, just the loss of the love in your life...



And thanks Sam I'm happy that you like this one, thanks for reading



Thanks RedVampire I'm glad you like it Hehe and a new one for you to read, too Thanks for reading



And now the poem, enjoy

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Tears escape my eyes...

You used to drown in those eyes

A single tear runs down my cheek...

You used to kiss that cheek



The tears journey is long, terribly slow and tiring...

Just like our way together used to be

The tear runs into my mouth, it is salty...

Just like the sweat of our bodies used to be



The following tear drops onto my hand…

You used to hold that hand

The last tear falls onto the ground...

You used to make love with me on that ground



These are only tears…

But they remind me of so much about you

How am I supposed to live with a whole earth

Full of memories about you?

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Thanks for reading! Take care



-Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

[SJ]

Good poem,sad and angsty

[kiwi6969]

Viv...



Not very often anything gets me crying but this poem did it,but shhhh don't tell anyone...again thanks for writing wonderful emanational poems for us to read..







kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

[pacou]

Hey Kitten



Some time has passed, I know, I'm bad



But here's a new poem



Thanks for reading everybody



Thanks Sam, I'm glad that you liked it



Awww, Terri, it made you cry? That's like..the best compliment ever (Sorry Kitties, you know I still LOVE your replies ) Thanks so much



Here's the poem..kinda about me and a... situation now



Enjoy

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Am I happy?

I can be



I can be sure you don’t love me

I can be sure all your touches had the reason loneliness



I can be sure you don’t care for me

I can be sure you don’t listen to me



Thank you

I am free



I am free for love

I am free for understanding



I am free for all the things that I never got with you

I can be sure now



I can be sure that waiting for your love makes no sense

I can be sure that you will never love



I am sure that I am able to go on now

I am free, freed from the love that killed me

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Thanks for reading



-Viv-

Yes, I have Keyboard Dyslexia!

[kiwi6969]

Oh god Viv you are reading my mind*slaps hand*...I'm..well I'm

...going through those same thoughts as we speak....thank you and please don't stop..







kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

[pikescoob]

Viv!! I read your email today, that's why I'm here! I've missed like 4 poems I'm sorry sweetie...I didn't know you'd posted. I really do like this latest poem cuz I know you've been confused about this situation for awhile and I'm happy you have closure with it and can move on *big hugs* And I just wanna put this dude in here cuz that's what I look like most nights trying to stay awake to chat Take care girl!!



**Michelle

[SJ]

Hey Viv,great poem

Good that you have closure with that and brighter times ahead for you

[pacou]

Hey Kitten



Yup, finally I've written a new poem that's worth to be posted



Thanks for your reply Kiwi I'm do happy that you like my new poems and I hope that you like my new ones kinda too cos I think from now on they might be slightly happier again



Oh Michelle, dear, thanks fro reading and it's not bad that you've missed some, the main thing is that you like them and don't get tired of reading them Thanks so much



Thanks Sam, I'm really glad that you liked this poem too Yes, I'm already having a better time ahead of me I'm so happy right now



And thanks, Dianne, nothing new for you now, but thanks for telling me what you think of the new one *hugs* Thanks, thanks for being there, my shredder girl



And now the poem, enjoy

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Let’s dance for awhile

Give me your hand

I’ll hold you close

And dance with you



We’re dancing

Our bodies are melting together

Our feelings are dancing

The whole world is dancing for awhile



And I feel

Here in your arms I want to stay forever

And dance.

Just dance.



I’m enjoying this dance so much

And I feel so are you

I’m sorry that every dance has to end eventually

But let’s just go on dancing, just us.

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Thanks for reading, take care you all



-Viv-

Yes, I have Keyboard Dyslexia!

[fidds]

wow very sweet poem , i liked it alot



*hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

[SJ]

Hey Viv,thanks for telling me you'd posted a new poem and a happy one too

Like the poem a lot

[kiwi6969]

woohoo *does the happy dance* and did I say yay!! I loved it very much...*sits down before I fall* I can't wait for more.





kiwi/teresa

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

[pacou]

Yeah Kitties, I really did it



Here's a new poem, after what? Like one month?



Thanks for replying Hannah, I'm really glad that you like it



Thanks Sam, of course I tell you when I post something I'm glad that you enjoyed it



Thanks Terri for replying, I'm really happy that you liked my poem



This is a new one... just... read lol



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Black

Dark

The Sky

Like my heart used to be

Nobody can change it

Wait a minute, nobody?

That’s just not right



White

Bright

My heart

It’s not like the sky used to be

You could change my heart

Yes, dear, it was you

That is damn right

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-Viv-

"Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired."
Robert Frost

[SJ]

From dark to bright,great poem Viv