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Re: Society in Denial

Postby Miss Evanescent » Tue Sep 07, 2004 6:13 pm

This fic is entirely do to my fiancee's lovely and overactive imagination. all plot lines are hers and hers alone :) i am merely the filler in the details girl....love you this is for my sweetie and for my sis!

Homecoming in Hatfield, Massachusetts. The autumn leaves swirl around the parade of cars full of anxious seniors, waiting for another year to start. The sooner started the sooner it will be over. The Varsity girl’s soccer game is over in the late afternoon. Jane W----- watches as her beloved Sarah L----- leaves the locker room, still sweaty from the intense match. They had won 5-4 over Hampton, almost tying at the end, but Sarah scored the final point. Jane slowly opens the door of her rented beat up 89 Ford Tempo, anxiously waiting for Sarah to notice her.

Jane had been dating Sarah for almost five months long distance over the internet. She had collected some vacation from work and filed for a leave of absence in school, all to come and see her love. Sarah was not be any means expecting to see Jane until she herself was flying to Alaska to meet her for the first time….or so she thought. Jane had other ideas, she figured that summer was just too far away and intended on proving her point to Sarah, even if it took her whole trip to so do.

Sarah walks quickly out to her 2001 Mitshubishi Galant hugging her arms to her chest as the wind whipped through her hair. Never noticing Jane, Sarah put her soccer gear into her backseat and leaned into retrieve her jacket. It had been a cold and windy day for soccer, and she was especially cold after her shower. Just as Sarah grabbed her coat she felt warm arms wrap around her body and legs press up against hers. For a moment she panics and leaps up, hitting her head on the top of her car in the process. She hears a familiar giggle.

Could it be? Is it really her…I would know that giggle anywhere, Sarah thought to herself. No it can’t be…is it? Sarah’s mind raced with so many questions.

“Sorry Sweetie!” Jane apologized profusely, turning her GF around to face her.

Sarah couldn’t believe her eyes, It is her, she shouts inside her head. Suddenly Sarah grabbed Jane’s head lightly and pulls her into a passionate kiss, giving her everything she had. Jane melts into Sarah but as the kiss broke she turned five different shades of red. Sarah simply smiled, grabbed Jane’s hand, her jacket, and walked towards the field. The Varsity boys soccer teams was now playing and Sarah knew the bleachers would be a good place to talk without intimidating her girl too much. With everyone around Jane would know that Sarah wouldn’t try anything too soon. Sarah leads Jane up the many steps to the very top and best spot in her opinion, to watch the game. They sit cautiously still holding hands unbeknownst to Jane.

“So…” Jane starts lamely.

Sarah quickly covers for her girls’ lack of speech, “What are you doing here” she blurts out.

“I…..umm…I just needed to see you…” Jane blushes and casts her eyes down.

“Sweetie, I…I love you” Jane begins, gaining confidence. “I just needed to come down here to prove it, really prove it. I know we have been talking every day about how we love only each other, forever but I needed to show you…” Jane leans to kiss Sarah gently, and its Sarah’s turn to blush profusely. Jane begins to tell Sarah about how she had earned a weeks vacation from work and decided that she could afford to miss the three days of college she would have that week, as she was already ahead in her classes. Seeing Jane’s story come to and end, Sarah begins to complain about how shitty her school can be sometimes.

“No one understands me here, Jane” Sarah states softly. “When I’m here I miss you all the more. I just wish…”

“Just wish what Hun” Jane interrupts, concern showing in her eyes.

“I…I just want to be with you…” Sarah mumbles. “I know that now, I was so scared…of us…of everything, no one here understands about us.” “ But I’ve realized, all I want is you, they don’t need to understand, just as long as I have you…always”…Sarah trailed off, her eyes becoming misty.

“Sarah, I…” Jane replied slowly.

“Hey Trouble” yelled a short girl with brown hair, “Who’s your friend.”

Sarah whispers quickly into Jane’s ear, “Shh is okay sweetie these are my friends, we can finish this later right?” Jane nodded slowly and smiled at the group of seniors approaching them.



Miss Evanescent
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Miss Evanescent » Tue Sep 07, 2004 6:55 pm

Sarah and Jane walk hand in hand, back to the parking lot. They look toward each others car, Sarah making a face at the old rental Jane had picked up for her stay.

Jane, noticing Sarah’s dirty look, “Hey, it was cheap…”

“Yeah, I can see that J” Sarah laughs. “Lets take my car, I want to show you around town anyway.” “Plus we all know it took you five tries to get your license” Sarah laughed, as she pulled Jane towards her car. “I’m going to take you to my favorite place and show you why people really come to New England in the fall” Sarah said, opening the car door for her love.

“I would go anywhere for you, Sarah…especially if YOU drive” Jane giggled, as she climbed inside the passenger seat.

The drive was beautiful, the hill lined valley glowing in the warm sunlight. The crisp wind of the afternoon had died into a cooling breeze, though still quite chilling. They drive off the paved roads, taking many twists and turns through the old gravel road. Just as they get to what looks like a footpath, Sarah stops and has Jane cover her eyes.

“No peeking Lovies!” Sarah exclaimed teasingly.

“Oh, I would never dream of such a thing Sweetie” Jane replied evenly.

As Sarah led Jane carefully out of the car, Jane’s heart began to race.

Am I finally going to get to tell her that I’m sure of forever? Finally get to show her how much she means to me? Oh god…I hope so…she means everything to me…Jane thought to herself.

Sarah slowly leads Jane down the little path. Her arm wrapped protectively around her love, her other hand covering Jane’s eyes, as Jane is not to be trusted when it comes to surprises. Jane hates them with a passion only Sarah can bring out of her and still live to tell the tale. The come upon a tree lined clearing, and all there is to see is dozens of tiny waterfalls surrounding one medium sized one. They cascade magnificently down, crashing on the many water smoothed stones. Jane, being from Alaska, immediately knows what surrounds her, but look of puzzlement crosses her face.

“Sarah, are there waterfalls in Massachusetts?”

Sarah burst into a fit of giggles. “Duh, babe, wow…seriously you need to get out more.”

Jane opens her eyes, gasping at the beauty surrounding her.

“You like?” Sarah says in a low seductive tone.

“I know something I like better” Jane retorts, pulling Sarah into her arms. “Yes, its beautiful but not nearly as beautiful as you.”

“Aww, baby…hokay…” Sarah says not believing for a minute that Jane is serious.

“Sarah! When are you going to realize that I love you? You are everything beautiful in my eyes. I am yours, always…”



“And forever... Sarah finishes for her Gf, cupping Jane’s face she moves in for a slow, passionate kiss. Tongues searching and playing while lips caress and sooth. As the kiss breaks, Jane turns red and giggles, quite embarrassed by the strong emotions that Sarah seems to pull from her.

“W W Wow..” Jane stutters nervously.

“You were pretty wow yourself babe” Sarah replies giggling “ But I want to show you something a little more at home, c’mon babe, its getting cold.” Grabbing Jane’s hand once more, they walk, back hand in hand, still glowing from that amazing kiss.



Miss Evanescent
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Miss Evanescent » Tue Sep 07, 2004 6:58 pm

The silver Galant pulls up in front of a small ranch style home. They walk inside, everything is dark and still.

“Wow, everyone must still be at the homecoming game” Sarah said as she smiled hugely. Sarah begins to give Jane the tour, ending by leading her down the steps and into the basement.

“And this is my room” Sarah finishes her tour.

They sit quietly on the bed as Jane nervously twitches and begins to babble as she spots a stuffed bee sitting on the bed.

“Ooh a bee…this reminds me of this one time I was out on the porch at work and there were bees all around me just all around but not stinging me and I had all the kids with the other teacher back up against the fence and I was just on the porch with like a can of 4d-40 and spraying down the crack of the wooden porch and they were flying crazily around me but I killed them with the spray and then just to be sure when things got calmer, I ran inside and mixed up a concoction of umm…bleach and ammonia….which by the way should never ever be mixed…umm they can start a fire…but hey it worked I poured it down there and sure enough…the next day there were no bees…. And I didn’t even get….

“Sarah leaned forward, she had heard enough bee babble for a lifetime, and kissed Jane firmly, shutting her up.

“Stung” Jane finished. Jane looked stunned but quickly recovered, as she wrapped one arm around Sarah and held her face in the other. She stared deeply into the blue eyes watching her oh so carefully with a passion that Jane had never seen anyone look at her with before. Jane slowly and agonizingly moved into the kiss, watching the effect she had on Sarah. Sarah moaned lowly and pressed harder with her lips against Jane while Jane erotically ran her tongue across Sarah’s lower lip. Sarah pushes Jane on her back, climbing into her lap and straddling her legs. Sarah leans into the kiss, slowly teasing and stroking her tongue over Jane’s. Jane leans back slightly and hits the remote to Sarah’s stereo accidentally. The soothing familiar chords of their song begin to play.





“It’s a big mistake

50 days, 3 months away

I’d be laughing today

But your voice on the phone gives me no reason”

Jane moans, as Sarah runs her hands down her sides lightly, teasingly.

“I’ve decided to make the most of your visit” Sarah declares, as she slides her hands down and in between Jane’s thigh, a low moan growling through her throat. Sarah slides her hand from Janes’s thigh to the very bottom of her shirt. Jane looks worried and more than a little bit shy, she starts to say something, but Sarah quickly silences her with her tongue.



”Don’t take from me

My heart is barely beating

Don’t take from me

I’m falling down”



Miss Evanescent
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Tue Sep 07, 2004 8:28 pm

:mad :punish :gnome :angry



HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYyyy! Wheres the rest? "goes and searches for more smut" damnit...and youre right sis! IT IS werid readin this...no worries i still like it anyway! And can you speed things along please????

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Miss Evanescent » Tue Sep 07, 2004 9:38 pm

I forgot to put in my last post that I do NOT own “worst to December” all credit goes towards Sugarcult! And my fiancée pretty much wrote out the whole smut part…go her and her creative side and yes this one is all smut but it was a combined effort...hope u like the new details sweetie!



They stop kissing for a moment. Sweet brown eyes stare into a pools of blue. Sarah sees that Jane is frightened but also brimming with lust, desire and love. Sarah didn’t know whether she could continue with Jane so unsure of herself.

“I love you Sarah, I am yours and I love you more than anything”….Jane starts slowly, “And I’m ready.”

Sarah stands up holding out to arms to Jane. They stand there smiling for a few seconds until Jane playfully smirks saying, “But if my clothes have to come off so do yours!” Sarah wraps her arms tightly around Jane, bringing her into another passionate, love filled kiss. They both forget to breath as the continue making out while talking off each other’s shirts. They gasp as the press their chests between them, but the bras get in the way, they are quickly disposed of. Sarah runs her tongue down Jane’s chest teasingly. They stand quivering with need, sweating from the heat. They lick, scratch, bite, kiss, and nibble each other’s upper body into a frenzy of soft moans that become louder and louder.



”All I want to do is lie in bed with you

All I really ever need is you

All I got to do is give up all I have to be with you”



Sarah breaks the kiss, breathing heavy. She slides her body down Jane’s never losing contact, Jane shivers as her lover rests on her knees, staring at Jane’s Jeans. Sarah unbuttons and unzips her pants, taking them off teasingly slow, she licks and caresses the newly exposed flesh. One her pants are fully discarded, Sarah licks her way back up to Jane’s underwear, taking them off with her teeth. She stares at Jane’s naked form, as Jane looks expectantly at Sarah to her jeans and back again.



“It’s a different day

1500 miles away

Why would you want to stay?

So take a look around”



Jane giggle’s and pulls Sarah back up to her by the belt loop. Jane slides her own body down Sarah’s pushing her head seductively close to her lover’s center. She pulls off Sarah’s pants and underwear in one sure motion. Jane runs her nails across Sarah’s inner thighs causing Sarah to moan in ecstasy. Jane suddenly leans in to bite her lover’s hard and throbbing clit. Sarah’s knees buckle and as she falls to the floor Jane catches her and places her gently on the bed.





“All I want to do is lie in bed with you

All I really ever need is you

All I got to do is give up all I have to be with you”



Jane lays her self on top of Sarah, kissing her slowly and enjoying how her naked skin felt on hers. They kiss faster as Sarah beings her knee up between Jane’s thigh and Jane moans loudly inside her mouth. Sarah rolls Jane over so she can straddle one thigh and pushing her leg deep into Jane’s hard core. She brings her ear close to Jane’s

Whispering she says, “I love you.”

Sarah makes her way down Jane’s body, leaving searing hot kisses and bruising where she sucked her lovers skin. She sucks on first the right breast and then the left, teasingly the nipples slowly and then suddenly running her nails down Jane’s stomach while sliding the rest of the way down her body. She kisses both sides of Jane’s inner thighs, breathing lightly on them. Without warning Sarah runs her hot tongue into Jane’s slit. Jane bucks her hips up, begging and willing Sarah for more. Evily Sarah pulls away, trying to be a tease but Jane whimpers, melting her heart. Sarah could never deny Jane anything.





“All I want to do is to be close to you

All I want to do is to be next to you

All I want is you to give up all we had to be

I can’t remember why I’m here

If you’d let me spend my life with you”



Sarah brings the tip of her tongue over Jane’s clit, slowly circling it with her tongue and again without warning sticks two fingers into her. Sarah begins to suck softly on Jane’s clit, and her fingers pump in and out faster. Jane moans loud as Sarah sucks harder and harder while inserting another finger. Jane is almost incoherent mumbling demands….”fster..hrdr…oh….god…mre.” Sarah thrusts deeper and faster as her tongue pays ruthless attention to Jane’s clit. Jane arches her back as her moans turn into screams. Jane is so close, Sarah can feel it so she slows, teasingly, achingly denying her lover her closure. She teases slow circles with her tongue but suddenly bites Jane’s clit while she slams her fingers inside her lover’s hot well.

Jane comes screaming “Saaarraaahhh.” Sarah removes her fingers and sucks them clean. She climbs Jane’s body and kisses her forehead and then her lips. Jane opens her eyes and smiles and kisses Sarah softly.



”It came and went

All I really need is you

I’m waiting here for you

December’s gone

It came and went”



Sarah can tell that Jane is exhausted so she lays her head over Jane’s heart to listen to it while she calms down.

“Its your..” Jane starts but Sarah kisses her into silence.

“We have forever, there is no rush…you need to rest you had a long flight…and a long hard day.”

Jane yawns complacently and lays her head back down. Sarah lays her head back over Jane;s heart and contently they fall asleep in each other’s arms.

:banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana



Miss Evanescent
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Tue Sep 07, 2004 9:53 pm

:thud :drool :drool :thud :thud :drool :boot :shower :drool :drool :drool :drool :thud :thud



im a bad bad bad person....HOLY SHIT.....omgomgomgomgomg :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow



thats all.....

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby FallenAngel981 » Wed Sep 08, 2004 12:38 am

:devilish :bounce :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :banana :devilish :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :dance :dance :dance s



Oh my god, I can't believe what my eyes just read... *looks blank* OH man and my almost kind of sister wrote this.... *blank stare*



um... Good job ... :D

FallenAngel981
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Wired vixen » Wed Sep 08, 2004 7:26 am



:thud :dance :party :bounce



These smilies don't mean enough!!!



:banana :bow :boot :clap



There should be an ultimate smiley for only the best posts, so i give you my most cherished.....

:sheep





Woooh!



Great stuff!



Stace xXx

"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87

Wired vixen
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Wed Sep 08, 2004 6:40 pm

:happy

"tapping foot on ground as i look at the watch thats not on my hand" ok...i need more smut....im waiting!!!!

:smash :pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Miss Evanescent » Thu Sep 09, 2004 12:25 am

Sorry sis it isnt smut but it'll have to do for now as my inspiration is asleep!

For Shanna



More than Myself



Waiting for inspiration

here without your grace

waiting paitiently

for the moment

that i may look upon your face

the smile

that holds me captive

keeping me alive day to day

with only the thought

of your love

holding me standing still

though others may not understand

others simply do not see

that with you i'm everything

and without nothing at all

without you

i am not the person i am today

without you

i'm just a girl

lost, broken, empty and shattered

the girl that you found

and fixed, perfect in your love:flower :love :heart :luv

Miss Evanescent
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby SJ » Thu Sep 09, 2004 1:07 am

Great fic and lovely poem :read

SJ
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Thu Sep 09, 2004 6:01 pm

:banana :banana :applause :banana :bounce :bounce



3RD BASE!! Go baby go! "dances around"

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Renee85 » Fri Sep 10, 2004 3:55 am

I love your stories and your poems are just great too.

Thanks a bunches for sharing them and looking forward to reading more. :)



__________________

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." -Judy Garland

"Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever." -Mahatma Gandhi


Renee85
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Wired vixen » Sun Sep 12, 2004 2:13 pm





You let me jump right past your last update?! Fuck nooooooo........



Great poem! reflected your mood at the time, i'm guessing, with the sleeping gf and all.....



:D



Yay for expressive poemness!!



Stace xXx



(You're on top now, Rose is gonna kill me LOL)

"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87

Wired vixen
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby onyxsundrops » Wed Sep 15, 2004 1:19 pm

Wonderful poem. Thanks.



Yvonne:peace

onyxsundrops
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Miss Evanescent » Fri Oct 01, 2004 1:32 am

just a poem i wrote yesterday that i forgot to post when i got home from class

I just dont know what to do anymore

it feels so right

how do i know

what decision to make

how can i choose

when i know i cant let go

if its right for me

is it right for you?

i dont know how

to make this work

when everything

excpet loving you

its a completely

chaotic mess

what if whats

best for me

just isnt an option anymore



...as a side note or add on

what if whats best for me

its simply being with you

its a dream come true

a fairy tale

what if their is no prince charming

no knight in shining armor

just me, you and forever

and a very happily ever after





Miss Evanescent
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby SJ » Fri Oct 01, 2004 2:37 am

Great poetry :read

SJ
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Fri Oct 01, 2004 7:02 pm

:thud :thud :jaw :jaw



that was sooooo fucking GOOD!!! that reminded me of liz...wowness sis and hoorah for new poemness!! sheep sheep sheep! :sheep :sh eep yay yay yay!! loves ya sis!! you rock!!

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Wired vixen » Mon Oct 04, 2004 2:29 am





Hey sis!



Woooh! POEMNESS!!



:bow That was great! I'm so glad you updated! I missed your poems :(



So here's me again typing quickly and stealthily LOL



TTYL!



Stace xXx

"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87

Wired vixen
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Miss Evanescent » Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:04 am

for Shanna:bigkiss :love :luv2 :luv :kiss2 :flower :heart

In my forever

there is a smile

laughing away the years

there are eyes

so blue

knowing only the warmth of love

never the cold of pain

never burning with anger

only with desire

in my forever

there is an embrace

of the interlocking hearts

perfect as a puzzle

in my forever

there is my everything

there is only you

Miss Evanescent
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:35 am

:bounce :bounce

yay sis posted!! Whoo short poem but it was also a lovely poem!!! Good to see a poem from ya sis! I liked it! We need to get you to 4th base damnit!!! CHEER UP!! Youre so loved! :love

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby SJ » Thu Oct 14, 2004 1:08 am

Great poem :read

SJ
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Wired vixen » Mon Oct 18, 2004 2:37 pm





Short n sweet, just the way we like em! And cute, don't forget the cuteness of the poemness. :)



Yay for an update! You rule!! :cool



Stace xXx

"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87

Wired vixen
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Miss Evanescent » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:28 am

did i mention wootwoot for being flaming o!!!! :)

for my Shanna:flower :love :bigkiss :heart :kiss1 :luv2 :luv



You have no idea

How good it feels

Just to hear you

Say hello

It is the best

Part of my day

As goodbye

Is the most

Bittersweet sorrow

So hello my love

Hello to the new day

A day full of

My love for you

As is every

Day to come





Miss Evanescent
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Wired vixen » Sat Oct 23, 2004 12:25 pm





Awwww! You get soppier every update! That was real sweet, woooot for flaming o! and you were on 69 posts the update before this *giggle*



Yay!! poemness!



Stace xXx

"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87

Wired vixen
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby SJ » Sun Oct 24, 2004 7:08 am

Lovely poem :read

SJ
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Sun Oct 24, 2004 2:36 pm

:bigwave

"walks in and pretends she just read the update" :whistle



hehe hi sis! you updated! YAY YAY I give you :dumbo dumbo! hahaha this was a pretty poem, and you know how I love pretty things! "staring at a toaster" this toaster is shiny....oooohh....write more soon! :p

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Miss Evanescent » Mon Nov 01, 2004 1:08 am

found the truth

ready for love

go with the emotion

feeling is all we have

even for the damned

and i think im drowning

here tonight

in everything that is

and everything that

will never be

when did words become

more important than people?:rage :tear :punish :cry :happycry :fit2 ::angry :

Miss Evanescent
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby SJ » Mon Nov 01, 2004 1:38 am

Great poem :read

SJ
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Tue Nov 02, 2004 6:57 pm

:eatme :smash :sheep :pride :bounce :bounce

poemness YAY!!!! Look im leaving feedback! Is the feedback whore fullfilled? better freakin be!! Loved the short poem! write more soon!!!!!!!!!! :applause

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 

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