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Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sun Aug 17, 2003 7:49 pm

:bigwave Kittens, heres that second poem I promised. Enjoy!



Find the Love Inside

By: Grace (a.k.a. bluewillowwitch)



I've been sitting around wondering what is happening to me. I have found someone who is great. He is in love with me. I want to feel the same. Why can't I?



I'm looking to myself for what should be there. Looking deep down. I'm looking for the strength I know I have. I have to find the love inside.



My love is a great thing. It is deep down hidden somewhere. It has been so long since I have felt this way. I never thought that I would be at this point again.



Find the love inside! I tell myself this again and again. I will find it. Then I will let my love know how I feel. He will know that all I have is for him.



Find the love inside. Once you do never let it go. Never lose it again. It is a very important thing. Love inside is the only thing that will keep us warm. You give your love to me and I will give you all of my love.



Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

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Re: New Poems

Postby Artemis85 » Sun Aug 17, 2003 11:21 pm

:jaw omg wow... i loved them Much, expecialy It figures Brilliant work grace keep it up girl. <>

:clap



~Lex

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"There could be Outfits" -Buffy (family)

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Re: New Poems

Postby Stroke of Luck » Mon Aug 18, 2003 3:13 pm

Hey Grace :wave



Great work, i loved the first one....really emotional....well love isnt that easy huh?!:whistle Second poem is great too but u can never tell your heart to love the person. Not really possible heheh wonder why i know that :p



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



Ps. Have fun tonight with Lauren :wink hahahah

This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony

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Re: New Poems

Postby SJ » Tue Aug 19, 2003 1:43 am

Great poetry :clap

SJ
 


Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Tue Aug 19, 2003 10:40 pm

:bigwave Kittens,



Lex-Glad you liked it. :) I'm happy to see that the emotion showed through. :clap Oh btw, yeah I can send it to you.



Nat-Glad you enjoyed. Yeah that was a very personal piece for me to write. :( The second one, welllllllll :whistle , that was, that was me going through what it took to realise that I couldn't make myself love someone, no matter how hard I tried and no matter how good that person was. :eyebrow You'd be surprised what you can think til you make yourself see the truth. :wink Oh and btw, yes I had a blast hanging with Lauren yesterday. :lol Very much fun to be had.



SJ-Glade you liked my stuff. Thanks for the feedback. :clap



Thanks and another update really soon. Promise. :wink



Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

Edited by: bluewillowwitch  at: 8/19/03 10:11 pm
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Goody

Postby muFFin1811 » Wed Aug 20, 2003 3:49 am

Hey Grace,



i really like your poems. I am also sorry that i did not reply earlier, but ya know, HARD TIMES. Anyways keep the great work and write more of that stuff. :applause



Love: Kattie :sleepy





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Re: Goody

Postby bluewillowwitch » Thu Aug 21, 2003 12:21 am

:bigwave Kattie,

I totally understand. :flower Thanks for repling. Glad you like. More is on it's way. Hope you feel better.





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Thu Aug 21, 2003 12:25 am

Stroke Of Luck

BY:Grace (a.k.a bluewillowwitch)

Nat thanks for the loan of your screenname as the title.



Nothing ever seemed to go my way. Everything always seemed to go wrong. Then suddenly out of nowhere I got a stroke of luck.



Out of no where you walked into my life. You were the greatest thing that I had ever seen. My whole world just seemed to turn around. My heart just seemed to soar.



The black cloud that hung over my head has gone. From the moment you took me into your arms I felt safe and warm.



The love that you have shown me covers me like a blanket. I feel it all around me.



My world has been turned upside down. Where my world use to be sad and lonely, it is now happy and full.



You are my stroke of luck. You made everything in my life worth while. I will always trust you to never let me fall. I love you my sweet stroke of luck.



Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

Edited by: bluewillowwitch  at: 8/20/03 11:39 pm
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Re: New Poems

Postby SJ » Thu Aug 21, 2003 2:48 am

I can relate to that poem :)

Lovely writing :clap

SJ
 


Re: New Poems

Postby Stroke of Luck » Thu Aug 21, 2003 2:15 pm

Great poem Grace :clap



I love it and well hey MY name is in it YAY :bounce

No harm was done, because u used my name as title...still alive lol



Cant wait till u post the next part...oh and i wonder whos name the title will have ;)



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sat Aug 30, 2003 5:51 pm

:bigwave Kittens,

First replies:



SJ-Thanks forrading. I'mgld that you can relate to this. would hope they everyone could.



Nat-Yup used your name.Glad it's cool with you.Glad you liked. Have a :flower for the loan.



More poem fun on the way.





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keep on happening."--Ainta Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sat Aug 30, 2003 6:09 pm

ALONE

BY: Grace (a.k.a. bluewillowwitch

NOTE: It's a short poem this time.



I wish I were alone. Have no one to tell me what to do. Have no one to make me do what I don't want.



They tell me to be my own person. They said not to become someone I'm not.



Then just as quickly they say, "You do what I say when I say it."



I can't stand it. I want to be alone. Why can't they just leave me alone?



I am me. I can only be me. Why can't they see that? Why can't they let me be?



WHY?



Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

Edited by: bluewillowwitch  at: 8/31/03 12:56 am
bluewillowwitch
 


Re: New Poems

Postby SJ » Sun Aug 31, 2003 1:50 am

Great poem :)



SJ
 


Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sat Sep 27, 2003 1:05 am

:bigwave SJ- Thanks for the kind words. :flower

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Broken

By: Grace (a.k.a. bluewillowwitch)



How am I to go on now? How am I suppose to act like nothing is wrong? You are gone and have left me here alone. I'm broken in so many tiny peices.



You said you loved me, that you could never be without me. Well all that is gone now. Now that you are gone. Where am I to go?



My heart is broken into millions of pieces. It will never be put back together without you.



You are my heart. When you went away you took away my heart. How am I to love again with my heart missing?



I know that you didn't choose to go. I will always love you so. You took our love when you went away. All I want is for you to come back and stay.



Until the day that we meet again, I want you to keep my love close to your heart. You have to carry it alone. For my life, my heart, and my soul are broken in two.





bluewillowwitch :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: New Poems

Postby kiwi6969 » Sun Sep 28, 2003 5:14 am

Awww Grace, I love ur poems, love reading them, keep them up, good for the soul so they say...*hugs*







kiwi/teresa:flower

"she's out there,our souls have meet, our hearts have meet, just not ourselves"

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Re: New Poems

Postby SJ » Sun Sep 28, 2003 8:01 am

Sad poem,powerful words.

Great poem :clap

SJ
 


Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Fri Oct 03, 2003 12:21 am

:bigwave



teresa- :flower Thank you. I'm glad that you love my poems. I don't know if :read them is good for the soul but I know writing them are. Help me get everthing out. I'm thinking of trying the school poetry contest but not sure if I should yet. Hope you keep on :read .



SJ-:flower Thanks for :read . Yeah, this is one was sad.I had just written it the day I posted. I'm glad that you found the words powerful. I try to touch peoples hearts with these poems. It's god t know that I might. Hope you keep :read .





bluewillowwitch :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Fri Oct 31, 2003 10:17 pm

Love I Send You

By: Grace (a.k.a. bluewillowwitch)



I know that you miss me when I'm gone, I know I don't have a lot but, I hope you will take the love I send you.



I leave you because I have to. I don't want to, but I can't help you with what I have. All I have to give is the love I send you.



I promise, one day I will come back for you and I will never let you go again, but until that day take the love send you.



I don't leave you with much, I know, but it is all I have to give. Don't worry I will send you all you need of me, so keep all the love I send you.



I love you and I wll never forget you. Just think of the day when all the love I send you will come and we will be together forever.





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: New Poems

Postby intricate mirage » Sat Nov 01, 2003 1:32 am

Sad. Yet also filled with some sense of hope. Lovely poem :clap

~ Cassie

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My fountain of strength that never runs dry

You are the shooting star across the midnight sky




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Re: New Poems

Postby SJ » Sat Nov 01, 2003 6:55 am

Lovely words,great poem :read

SJ
 


Re: New Poems

Postby chewy 19 » Fri Nov 07, 2003 2:48 am

I know i already told you this but i thought it needed to be repeated.



Those were WOW (for lack of a better word)!!

Gina



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Like music heard in dreams, Like strands of harps unknown, Of birds forever flown— Audible as the voice of streams That murmur in some leafy dell, I hear the gentlest tone, And Silence cometh with her spell Like that which no my tongue doth dwell, When tremulous dreams I tell My love to thee alone! ~~~ Edgar Allen Poe

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Re: New Poems

Postby Karmah » Fri Nov 07, 2003 9:30 am

Grace great poems your writing is very heart felt thank you for sharing it with us

Arron

You don't love a woman because she's beautiful,

She is beautiful because you love her.

~ by Anonymous ~

Karmah
 


Re: New Poems

Postby onyxsundrops » Fri Nov 07, 2003 1:55 pm

Very nice poem, Blue. It gives a great feeling of hope! Please write more.



Onyx

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Replies

Postby bluewillowwitch » Fri Nov 07, 2003 8:19 pm

:bigwave :kitty 's :flower ,

I love all of you! :clap :bow You are the best! :pride :pride Here are some replies for you.



Cassie-Yes, a little sad. :sob But, from what I can tell, love is sad but, love always ends with hope. :love



SJ-Thanks! :flower



Gina-WOW, is a good word! :flower thanks, I'm glad you liked. :grin



Arron-Thanks. :flower I pour a little of myself into everthing I write and I'm glad that you like that. :) I :love sharing my words with all of you :kitty 's.



onyxsundrops-Thanks. :flower Hope and love go hand and hand. :grin More to come. :flower





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


I Love You Always and forever

Postby bluewillowwitch » Fri Nov 07, 2003 9:00 pm

Okay :kitty 's, this is a poem that I wrote when I was 14. It is actually my first ever. Please no :lol .



I Love You Always and forever

By: Grace (a.k.a. bluewillowwitch)




I love you always and forever

I will love you all my life

I will never leave you or let you down

I love you with all my heart and soul

I love you with all of my love

I love you always and forever

I love you more everyday

I need you love

So speed your love to me

I will always need you

I love you always and forever

I have been missing you so long

So come home to me

I miss you like crazy

So come to me and give me all your love

I love you I love you I love you

I love you now and I will love you then

I love you always and forever

You are my baby and I need you

I need you next to me all my life

So always be mine

I always will be true

I love you always and forever

I love you like nobody ever could

I need you to love me so much

Nobody knows how I love you

I need to love you everyday

Love is a chance so give your heart to me

I love you always and forever





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: I Love You Always and forever

Postby shadowygirl » Sat Nov 08, 2003 12:53 pm

GRACE!!!!!!!!!



Hey hun I love your poems they are freaking wicked awsome :wink

and the last one was beautiful you are a very talented woman:clap keep posting please :pray



Love April



p.s. heh I just had to add this lil dude cause he's freaking cute heh :banana

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Re: I Love You Always and forever

Postby intricate mirage » Sun Nov 09, 2003 2:30 am

Aww the poem's real sweet :heart See, I'm not :lol I really enjoyed that poem, brings back all the loving from those good old teenage days! :wink

Cassie





Ask me if I loved you yesterday. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I love you today. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I'll love you tomorrow. I'll say 'Always'





intricate mirage
 


Re: I Love You Always and forever

Postby SJ » Mon Nov 10, 2003 12:20 am

That was your first poem,great writing :clap

SJ
 


Re: I Love You Always and forever

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Mon Nov 10, 2003 8:00 pm

:thud I love your poems! I can relate to them so much! :love I hope to see more!!! :pray s Keep up the good work! Youre awesome!

:pride

:peace

-Rose



I loves me AMber!

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: I Love You Always and forever

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sat Nov 15, 2003 3:51 pm

:bigwave :kitty 's :flower ,

Here are the replies.



April-Thanks. :flower Yeah, I'm an okay poet. :) Yhe last one, being my first, is my most presious. It is what started me out. :love



Cassie-Hey, you know I have a fear of :lol on this one being my first ever. Yeah, takes you back to puppy love when you thought it would never end. :heart



SJ-Thanks. :flower :grin



Rose-Thanks. :flower I'm glad that you can relate. :) I put a little of me into each one and really want them to touch people. :grin





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

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