Rhiannons Fragments of Lucidity

[MissKittys Ball O Yarn]

Wow Rhi. I really love this one. It's such an open way of describing the combination of longing and positive apprehension felt when bringing the start of a relationship to the next level.



From the POV of the person speaking in It's only notes It's easy to tell that they feel something remarkable for the other person.



I love the way this poem stays on the fringe of decision. I mean, we know it's coming...and it's fairly obvious that they are going to decide to take things further...but I just love the way the whole poem seems to sit inside that moment....balancing on the verge of finality.



I especially love this part...Because of the whole rhythm obsession that I have...and the fact that it's pure poem genius.



Isn’t it time

to take this dance.

Time to make it real.

Time to take the time,

the time to really feel.



awesome poem Rhi... I really love it a lot.



Now, on another note...hmm *looks around* It seems as if I am the first one here today. Yay for me. *smug* I guess Henny must have tripped over her own two feet trying to get here before me...but I guess that's what she gets for rushing... hehe. Right Henny?



xoxo

Emms (Rhiannon and Hennys' # 1 fan)

Edited by: MissKittys Ball O Yarn  at: 4/19/05 8:28 am

[DreamLover]

Rhi I will be right back with my replay..... just hang on.....





*runs to Emms* why you little woman.... I should have know better then to trust you.... huh... There was no free ice cream in The Flamingo Lounge .... now I'm not the first one to reply



Sorry Rhi but Emms cheated she said that Amber was in the lounge selling ice cream not normal ice cream but strawberry ice cream....with real strawberries and cream... but there wasn't any .... and no Amber too





Before I give you feedback on your new poem... BTW that is an amazing poem.... I promised you a real reply on The Trilogy.... I know I know it took me along time but you know how real life is and especially a KZ..... And here it is so sit back and relax my friend.





The Trilogy



Three pieces of art that are united as one. In the most perfect way I have ever seen before. Every poem has his own meaning and every meaning that you created... to show us... is so perfectly clear.



It's a journey through Life with each step towards the "new" future. Alternative the save harbour of life that allows us to escape the real world and lets us be who we are.... and gives us a save feeling that we all need from time to time. Scenarios There are no words needed to explain the meaning about this poem. It shows the love of two beautiful souls.



That's what The Trilogy is all about.... and again thank you for sharing it with us.







It’s Only Notes I wanted to say so much....about this amazing, perfect, beautiful, brilliant, love poem.... I really don't want to say it because Emms was here first..... but Emms is right about everything I am 200% with her on this....And not only Emms was first and took all my words... she also quoted the part I really loved.... so I will just quote it again..

Quote:

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Isn’t it time

to take this dance.

Time to make it real.

Time to take the time,

the time to really feel.

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It was a cool poem and I loved it... Thank you!!





See y soon.

Henny

Edited by: DreamLover at: 4/19/05 10:54 am

[MissKittys Ball O Yarn]

I guess it pays to be first huh Henny? (this is a great day... )



xoxo

Emms (still Rhi and Hennys #1 fan)

[Rhiannon9891]

Now Emms, there will be no gloating here (OK, maybe just a little)....you deserve a great day...enjoy it.



Henny, I am sorry that Emms told you those tall tales of ice cream and Amber, but I'm sure that it was only a fantasy that Emms wishes would come true....for all of us...



OK, Henny and Emms....play nice together...there are plenty of poems to go around here at "The Inward Eye".

And remember that you are both my # 1 Fans.. ...thank you.



I will post individual replies to all soon...thanks for reading.



Rhiannon



Henny and Emms # 1 Fan and Gina's #1.5 Fan

She is like a cat in the dark

And then she is the darkness

[DreamLover]

I can't belief I'm doing this but OK...... For once in my life (hehehe that reminds me of a song)... I will give in...I Henny will tell the world!!!!! ....I was late!!!!

EMMS

It's your day today

PS RHI I just let Emms win for once ... you know ... but don't tell her that.

[behindhereyes]

Rhi wow,



How can I even begin to touch on what the Trilogy brought up in me. The depths and heights you took us to within your world... amazes me. To with-stand such pain, then have the sheer will to draw breath... you are an amazing woman .



behindhereyes

Kim

"To the world, you may be one person; but to one person, you may be the world"

[SJ]

Great poem

[WickedReds]

OOO... what wonderful wonderment poemness u have there Rhi!I cant pick one out the this update or the last... can i have them all... hehe.. please??



-reds



Meine Banane tanzt für Rußflocke 

Smutbunny Anthem: *sung to tune from Goldfinger* Smutbunnies...they'er the bunnies, the bunnies that love the smut...and Willow's butt. They surf for smut fiction...always lookin' for the next naked sweaty fix...of Tara's tits.- Written By Cameron(tarawhipped) For Us Smut Bunnies

[Rhiannon9891]

Okay, before I post my replies to all of your kind feed back…
Let me just say…’Holy Cow’…has it been this long since I’ve been here ???...
I am soooo sorry….real life’s been a bitch as of late.
But, please know that I have not abandoned anyone. I am still here….’silently’ … but still here on the board for all of you. I am reading and enjoying all of your fics. , poems, posts and replies.
Again I thank you all for your feed back to my poems…..it means sooo much to me.
Thank You;
Rhi

Replies to “The Trilogy” and/or “It’s only Notes”. …….
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A Special Note of Thanks:

DreamLover / Henny;

How can I ever thank you enough…??
You have always been there,… when I needed you most,…and even when I didn’t think I needed anyone.

Thank You…You rock Babe! ! !

Luv Ya…

Rhi

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Emms;

I do not even know how to reply to your feed back concerning my poemness. ,….”Thank You So Much “… is all that comes to mind.

I get the feeling that you really understood where my words originated from. There is not always a clear and decisive rhythm and / or cadence to my work…but as I think you have discovered, there is always a hidden / subtle if not obscure beat/timing to everything I write. It just takes a while to dig through the lines to find it. I am glad that you find my words deeper than most…that’s just the way I write;…Again I thank you for your diligence to discovering the links between “The Trilogy” and the meaning behind each work.
But I must bow in the presence of such great words as yours…be it poetry or the many fics. that you have and are currently writing….again,…I bow…

Thank you
Rhi

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SJ…
What can I say? … Hey there. How have you been???...I thank you…as always …for me to get a reply from “The” “SJ”…means sooooo much to me.
Thank you,
Rhi

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“It’s Only Notes”

Emms,
As I am so glad that you like the position and the time of ‘decision’ it projects…The finality of the relationship as it stands from that prospective of time. We have all felt that moment at one time or another in our lives.
I am glad that the whole rhythm / cadence obsession that you have was detectable in this poem…(I wrote this just for you..lol)…

On to another note…..I don’t think that Henny tripped over her own feet…,…she was just delayed by a smut bunny…lol…

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Henny,
You see ‘The Trilogy’ as…as simple as it was meant to be….my journey through life with the one I loved most and my life as it is now with out her and how I am dealing with my life and thoughts now. … Thank you, Henny

It’s Only Notes;

Henny,
I’m sorry that Emms stole the words right out of you mouth. (Bad Emms…bad, bad Emms).
But having two wonderful poets fight over leaving feed back to my poems….well…it just makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside…

Thanks Henny
And Emms too.

Henny, you are always # 1 to me…shhhh…don’t let Emms hear that ok.
But you both are really my # 1 Fans

Thanks, Rhi

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Kim,

Hey there sweetie, I miss you. You are one of the reasons I have the sheer will to draw breath today… Thank you for everything.

Rhi

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S.J.

Again thank you S.J…. just having you take the time to acknowledge my poetry means sooo much to me…

Thanks… Rhi

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Gina,

My little smut bunny…How are you? I bow in your presence of my poems and bow again to your poemness…looking forward to more of your words.

Thanks… Rhi

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Okay folks… here’s another poem. I hope you all like it.


Author: Rhiannon9891

Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: Original poems – all rights reserved

Distribution: Please ask

Feed Back: ummm ummm…. Yes please


Lies

Look
At the colors
You
Left my heart
Not just
Black and blue
There are
So many
Shades
Of gray

Why isn’t life
Black and white
Wrong or right
Love and hate
Trust or distrust
So many
Have a say

Who knows
What’s for real
We all have
A conscience
Who do we
Believe in today

In your eyes
I see
Your soul
Contradictions
Roam
Your mind
Hear your heart
Can you obey?


Rhiannon9891

[Emms]

Ha HA! I'm FIRST! I beat Henny..... *taking a moment to bask in the coolness that is me......*...............................................................................................................................*Still basking*........................................... Okay...I'm done....

Hi RHI! I was going to come out here yesterday and beg for an update but I decided to be patient and look what happend! You updated! Woo Hoo!

I really liked the poem sweetie.

Not just
Black and blue
There are
So many
Shades
Of gray

Oh wow, I loved those lines.....and they speak such truth....I loved the words you chose here. You 've paired two cliche phrases together and managed to get from them something completely NOT cliche.....if that makes any sense.

Why isn’t life
Black and white
Wrong or right
Love and hate
Trust or distrust

I think that is one of life's greatest mysteries... I'll just tell you what I tell Morgan and Nae when they ask why I'm not being 'Fair" I say to them.... " because life isn't fair. There's a fair that you pay to ride the bus, and a state fair, but life just isn't fair. " If it were so easy to figure out life's choices, what would there be left to learn?

Who knows
What’s for real
We all have
A conscience
Who do we
Believe in today

that part was just so lyrical.....I could just hear it in a song. Wonderful....

Contradictions
Roam

perfect.

Rhi I'm so glad you decided to post this poem, it's wonderful on so many different levels....and I could continue to go into detail about each level....but I'm afraid Henny will get here before I'm finished and post before me.... and we know that I need to be first....

one more thing.......

Henny, you are always # 1 to me…shhhh…don’t let Emms hear that ok.

*Clears throat loudly* Hello........Standing right here!

xoxo
Emms

[DreamLover]

Hey Rhi,

I'm just posting this little note before returning with my real reply ps this one is soooooooooooooo good...I really loved it....just wait for my reply....

EMMS how could you beat me??? how?? this isn't fair...and your not the coolnes ....that's me... see ...hehehe ok you may be baby cool.... but I'm still number 1 cool

Henny Rhi's # 1 and Emms # 1...I'm so confused lol

[Emms]

I'm so confused lol

me too......

xoxo
Emms (Rhi and Henny's #1 fan)

[DreamLover]

Hey Rhi

As you saw above me....Emms did it again....she took all my quotes sigh....ooo well you can't win them all.

I really loved the poem...it was partly moving softly in a rhythm and it still was a deep poem.

I got this urge to quote one thing....

Look
At the colors
You
Left my heart
Not just
Black and blue
There are
So many
Shades
Of gray

I really can feel it like if my heart was smashed and molded..... the feeling you never forget. It's hard time after time after time to find trust and we all try but still scared to be hurt by the lies some people tell us.

Ok before I go way to deep here....I really liked the poem and I'm glad that you are posting again...so come on we all want more to read.

PS Emms next time I will try to win lol

Take care everyone,
Henny

[behindhereyes]

Rhi..

Sometimes I sit and wonder, how through your words... I can see parts of lives mine and others. The way you write gets inside me... they make me feel many things, and today I want to thank you for the gift of emotion. I miss you too!!

behindhereyes

[SJ]

Like that poem,nice rhythm to your writing.

[DreamLover]

Yo Rhi,

I have this feeling that you are hiding something for us!!!! The feeling like ....... like you have more poems..... poems that are tuck away in an old sock under your bed.... Now here is the deal.... We all want to read more.... so I'm making a challenges for you.

In a couple of weeks it's my 22 birthday ..... yeah 22 I can't wait sigh I will be in the prime of my life .... So the challenge is can you post a new poem on that day for all us kittens.... and if you do everyone on this board will get a free drink in the Flamingo lounge (Emms is paying heheheh) ..... I all ready warned Charlie to get extra drinks.

So are you up to the challenge.... I bet you are....but that doesn't mean you have to stop posting now... no way we want more.

Yours and Emms #1 fan

The one and only Henny

[Rhiannon9891]

This is a poem that I wrote for a challenge presented to my by someone that shall remain nameless *coughHennycough*. I hope you all enjoy it.

Happy Birthday Henny

Author: Rhiannon9891

Rating: G

Disclaimer: Original poems – all rights reserved

Distribution: Please ask

Feed Back: ummm ummm…. Yes please


Designs

A solitary thread
Retained by two
One commonality
Tended the loom
Stronger they bind
Stronger with time
Every word spoken
A stitch…woven
An intricate tapestry
Ensued
Dreams bared
Truths revealed
Intertwined and tangled
Seldom mangled
A labyrinth of lives
Trust shared…
Never broken


Rhiannon

[DreamLover]

Thank you Rhi!!!!!!... my friend.... This is great I love it...

Well you can read this poem two ways part one.
It reflex's our friendship so well. Your a great friend and you always will . Thank you for this beautiful gift.

Part two.... the other one.... the more smut thinking me
It's about love... two people united at a slow speed.... trusting one and other...with there deeps secrets..... making there love stronger and deeper...

Quote the best part

Designs

A solitary thread
Retained by two
One commonality
Tended the loom
Stronger they bind
Stronger with time
Every word spoken
A stitch…woven
An intricate tapestry
Ensued
Dreams bared
Truths revealed
Intertwined and tangled
Seldom mangled
A labyrinth of lives
Trust shared…
Never broken

Have a beer on me mate!!!!! Rise your glasses please.....On our friendship takputo.


Heeee Emms I was first this time nananananana....and that for a old lady.... not bad... .

PS Here I thought you wouldn't be on time to post this challenge...but I was wrong so the beer in the lounge is on Emms account.....I'm so sneaky hehehehe.

Henny/Henster/BeT

[Emms]

Hey! it's no fair that you got here first Henny!!

LOVED the poem Rhi! Short, sweet and simply lovely. So the poem was Henny's birthday gift? Hmm....why didn't I think of that... I was going to buy her tube socks, until I realized that I had no place to send them. So I'm wearing them myself. They're comfortable and functional at the same time.....

PS Here I thought you wouldn't be on time to post this challenge...but I was wrong so the beer in the lounge is on Emms account.....I'm so sneaky hehehehe.

Why you little sneak! Oh well....I guess I'll let you get away with it this time on account a I didn't get you anything for your birthday......*Puts arm around Rhi and Henny's shoulders* Come on you two, lets go across the street to the lounge and have one on me. Yes....even you henny. I'm tellin' charlie you're allowed drinks at the bar again.... Happy birthday!!


xoxo
Emms

[DreamLover]

WELL it is fair I won!!! I was first

Tube socks functional..... do tell Em... all in details please in the finest detail are they blue or black?

Why you little sneak!

Who me.... never I'm so brilliant... so I may have a drink woooo hooo thank you Em.... even a orange explosion fire cocktail? Woohooo great

Thank you sweetie for the Happy Birthday and the amazing song.... I can't wait to hear it again.
Henny

[SJ]

Great poem.

[DreamLover]

KNOCK KNOCK... no update??? uggggggggg RHI!!!!!!!!!! where are yeah .... grumpy Henster runs off.

[WickedReds]

Rhi... I so love ur work... *sigh*

and i see Henny is running crazy for an update... again...

-reds

[DreamLover]

Gina!!!!...I'm not running crazy again...I'm ..I'm.. I'm just a little impatient that's all.

[hahler]

i have it on good authority that Rhis puter is still on the fritz.
If you classify rhi as good authority

just kidding Rhi you know i love you and would miss your friday phone calls

dawn


that is rhi on the chat

[DreamLover]

Yeah I know what you mean Dawnie. I think it isn't the computer you know blondie's and computers and she is blond yeah know. Oooopsss your blond too...*runs off* yelling I didn't say that really I didn't.

Henster

[hahler]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


henny that wasnt nice though it is sometimes true
and you had better be nice or you will end up on a horse that bucks


LMAO




dawnmyster

[DreamLover]

I'm nice I'm always nice <
I like blonds you know and brunets and black and blue

ps cool name dawnmyster

[hahler]

way to back peddle henny i know your just trying to save your butt even though it will be sore when your done riding

but like everyone else i hope that rhi updates soon






dawn

[DreamLover]

way to back peddle henny i know your just trying to save your butt even though it will be sore when your done riding

Dawnmyster I'm not trying to save my butt...naaa my butt is to cute

PS it will take awhile for Rhi to update with her broken fingers and all her work to do....so why don't you DAWNMYSTER sing us a song. How about "rodeo song" by chris ledeoux. I have a feeling this will fit the mood here since we are talking horses...Come on Dawnmyster sing us a song!!!!

Henny