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Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sat Nov 15, 2003 3:59 pm

Last Night

By: Grace (a.k.a. bluewillowwitch)



We were only joking around. It wasn't supposed to go that far. We can never speak of what happened last night.



I know that we weren't all there. But we didn't seem to care at all. I said no and then gave in. If you asked I would do it again.



Our parents would never understand. They must never know. Last night was between me and you.



Just between us is the perfect place to be. The sweetness of that memory. It will always stay with me.



The feeling was to goo to forget. To good to let go. It was wonderful. I want to stay in last night forever.





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: New Poems

Postby Karmah » Sat Nov 15, 2003 11:00 pm

Grace

wow that last one was amazing I love the way you write and I am looking forward to reading more





What lies behind us, and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.

~ by Ralph Waldo Emerson ~

Karmah
 


Re: New Poems

Postby intricate mirage » Sun Nov 16, 2003 1:48 am

Grace! :bounce I loved the concluding sentence. :heart

Quote:
I want to stay in last night forever.


Aww there you did it again, made my heart go all... :heart Your poem made me wanna go write less angsty poetry mann. :lol Keep up the great work! :clap





Cassie





Ask me if I loved you yesterday. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I love you today. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I'll love you tomorrow. I'll say 'Always'





intricate mirage
 


Re: New Poems

Postby SJ » Mon Nov 17, 2003 12:47 am

Great poem :clap

SJ
 


Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Wed Nov 26, 2003 11:15 am

:bigwave :kitty :flower ,

Thank you all for reading. I will hopefully, time permitting, get another poem up by tomorrow. Well here are the replies.



Karmah-Thank you. :flower I will be putting a new one up soon. :) I hope you like it just as much.



Cassie-Thank you. :flower Yeah, I have felt like that on a few occations, where you just want to stay in that moment for ever and never leave. :blush It always suck when you have to go. Less angsty poems huh? I wrote a couple of those but I'm better at these. Don't know why. :hmm



SJ-Thanks. :flower





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: New Poems

Postby shadowygirl » Thu Nov 27, 2003 3:22 pm

GRACE !!!!!!:bigwave



As My Girl said I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE ..... :wink

I hope you keep posting more soon cause your poems are wicked kool ..... and I love reading them .....



....I know that we weren't all there. But we didn't seem to care at all. I said no and then gave in. If you asked I would do it again.......



that was totally my fav lines in that poem .... :banana



WOO HOO Keep up the amazing work plzzzzzzz :pride



Luv April :kitty



shadowygirl
 


Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Thu Nov 27, 2003 5:42 pm

:bigwave April :flower ,

Well thank you. :bow I'm glad that you like my writing.:grin Well you see, this poem is actually about me and a guy I really liked and went out with but never really got to date. :blush That line, just shows how head over heels I was for him. :blush Okay I think that is enough of the emotional stuff. Just cause you asked so nice. I'm going to post another poem now.





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Thu Nov 27, 2003 5:54 pm

Living Again

By: Grace (a.k.a. bluewillowwitch)




You walked out that door and left me here alone. You thought that I would die. You thought I would cry. Well I'm sorry to say that I'm not. i'm learning to live again.



I brust off the dust of you on my life. I know that I'm going to be just fine. now that your gone, i'm going to start living again.



People asked me out and I turned them down. I did everything for you. You wanted me to change and I did. I died a little everyday and I did it with a smile. Well no more.



I finally kicked you out the door. I don't want you anymore. You were never any good. You hurt me too much.



I am strong and now my life can start again. I don't ned you. I have family and friends. I have light in my life now. I am going to start living again.





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: New Poems

Postby shadowygirl » Sat Nov 29, 2003 12:12 am

GRACE !!!!!!!!! :bigwave



Hey Hun I just read your new poem I Love it as always .

I love the way you write its kinda wicked awsome if ya ask me :lol ....



MORE SOON PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ :banana :eatme :pray



Luv April :pride :kitty

shadowygirl
 


Re: New Poems

Postby SJ » Sat Nov 29, 2003 1:32 am

Great writing :read

SJ
 


Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Tue Dec 02, 2003 9:33 am

:bigwave :kitty :flower ,



April- Thanks! :flower Glad that you love them. :D More is coming right up.



SJ-Thanks! :flower



Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: New Poems

Postby bluewillowwitch » Tue Dec 02, 2003 9:41 am

To Hold You

By: Grace (a.k.a. bluewillowwitch)

For my Baby




You are so far away from me and I miss you so. I wish that I could be there to hold you tight every night and day. I want the feel of you in my arms to stay.



I know that I can't have you in my arms for now, so I will take the next best thing. I will close my eyes and picture you holding me tight.



I will see our arms wrapped around one another and pulling us close together. I will see our lips pushed together. I will see our love flow from me to you and back again.



All that I have for now are these pictures in my head and the words that we share. But one day, one day I will have you to truely hold in my arms. I will feel your warmth and will give you mine.



Please hold on to that day in your heart, as I hold on to it in mine. Our love is a candle in the dark. Follow it and it will always bring you home to me.



Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

Edited by: bluewillowwitch  at: 12/2/03 5:18 pm
bluewillowwitch
 


Re: New Poems

Postby intricate mirage » Tue Dec 02, 2003 11:35 am

Hey Grace :bigwave



:heart The poem was simply lovely :happycry

Cassie





I don't mind being alone

I just don't want to be alone without you





intricate mirage
 


New Poem

Postby muFFin1811 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 1:19 pm

Hey Grace :bigwave



That was awesome. I really love that poem. *sniffs* :sob



Love: Kattie :blush

muFFin1811
 


Re: New Poem

Postby ambersagoddess » Tue Dec 02, 2003 5:45 pm

Grace,



Oh, don't lie, you are sooooo bi. It was lovely and you should give it to she who makes the muse juice flow. You know what I think? I think you're like my friend, the Raped Avenger (she pops in every now and then) She's bi, but she's only ever liked one girl. From what you wrote in the poem it sounds like the same relationship with the muse that RA has with her 'you made me bi' friend. Anyway, have fun in Germany, and when you get back tell us how the screwing went





-Rei

Spero eorum amo donbit tu animus magnamus



Why yes, the rumors are true, I have patted the Great One's ass...

ambersagoddess
 


WICKED KOOOOOOOL

Postby shadowygirl » Tue Dec 02, 2003 6:17 pm

Hey Grace :bigwave



AMAZING heh I love the way you write and I wanna read more and more and more and more :lol :clap



please keep up the amazing work and I'll keep reading .



BTW I love this part of your last Poem



"I will see our arms wrapped around one another and pulling us close together. I will see our lips pushed together. I will see our love flow from me to you and back again."



Plzzzz post more soon :pride



Luv

April :kitty

shadowygirl
 


Re: WICKED KOOOOOOOL

Postby Karmah » Tue Dec 02, 2003 7:11 pm

WOW Grace

that was amazing I loved it. I can't wait to read more.

Arron



What lies behind us, and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.

~ by Ralph Waldo Emerson ~

Karmah
 


Re: WICKED KOOOOOOOL

Postby bluewillowwitch » Tue Dec 02, 2003 7:54 pm

:bigwave :kitty 's :flower ,

Now replies.



Cassie- I'm glad that you like it. This was for my baby and thus came straight from the heart. :love



Kattie- I'm glad that you loved it. :grin Love to you too. :bigkiss



Rei-Anyone ever tell you that you know too much for your own good? :eyebrow Let me be the first if not. My baby will have a copy. The orginal. Glad you liked. :grin



April-I'm glad that you liked the piece. :) It was for My Baby, thus it was from my heart with all my love. :flower



Arron- Thank you. :flower Your in love, you know how it is when you just have something you have to say. I wanted to show my baby my love. :)





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


How I Hate Good-bye

Postby bluewillowwitch » Tue Dec 02, 2003 8:07 pm

How I Hate Good-bye

By:Grace (a.k.a. bluewillowwitch)

For My Baby




Oh I hate it when you go away. It is always the saddest thing for me to watch. I know that you will be back soon, but I hate to see youi leave.



Everytime that I have to say good-bye to you my heart breaks into so many pieces. Yet I have to sweep them up and go on until I see you again and you put them back together.



You are the only one that I want. My love for you is a river that I love to drown in over and over again.



I never want to say good-bye to you ever again. I want us to be together forever. I want to be with you everynight and to hold you tight.



I want to be the shoulder you cry on, the ear you whisper all your secrets to. I want to be there for you to run to.



But no, we have to say good-bye. Soon I will start to cry. But not in front of you. For you I will stay strong and smile.



I can feel my heart start to break. My tears are barely being held back. I love you. Come back to me soon. Good-bye



How I hate good-bye.





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



Edited by: bluewillowwitch  at: 4/21/04 6:51 am
bluewillowwitch
 


Re: How I Hate Good-bye

Postby ambersagoddess » Tue Dec 02, 2003 8:43 pm

Grace,



Sorry



You should give her that last poem too, the original copy.



Hopefully you'll never have to say goodbye, maybe you can just stay there forever. It would be cool.



Shnark



You know what that sound is. I will be happy as long as she has internet so you can get on and post updates to ToY. ::snicker snicker::



-Rei

Spero eorum amo donbit tu animus magnamus



Why yes, the rumors are true, I have patted the Great One's ass...

ambersagoddess
 


Re: How I Hate Good-bye

Postby SJ » Wed Dec 03, 2003 1:08 am

Like those two poems,great writing :clap

SJ
 


Re: How I Hate Good-bye

Postby Karmah » Wed Dec 03, 2003 11:27 am

Grace,

wow umm your last one I can completely relate umm wow who ever this person is they are truly blessed, and the way you can so effortlessly write is amazing. I wish you all the best. I hope that soon you won't have to say good bye anymore cause its the hardest to say. But the line that got me was about standing there staying strong. if I haven't said it lately let me say it I love your writing and I hope you will continue to post.

Arron



Edited to fix my not so great spelling :)



What lies behind us, and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.

~ by Ralph Waldo Emerson ~

Edited by: Karmah at: 12/3/03 10:36 am
Karmah
 


Re: New Poems

Postby Yellow Crayon » Wed Dec 03, 2003 1:10 pm

i just read all of your poems and theyre increable. No less than amazing.:clap



You're a very veryyy talented writer and i wanted to thank you for sharing the poems...:)



-YC (Tori)

Yellow Crayon
 


Re: How I Hate Good-bye

Postby shadowygirl » Fri Dec 05, 2003 3:17 pm

GRACE !!!!!!!!!!!:bigwave



I LOVED THAT POEM .....heh have I told you I love the way you write ?? heh :clap :clap :clap



Keep up the good work plzzzz cause I love reading your poems :pride '





Luv April :kitty

shadowygirl
 


Replies

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sun Dec 07, 2003 12:59 pm

:bigwave :kitty 's :flower ,

I want to thank everyone who has :read my stuff. Now on to the replies.



Rei-Yeah, I'll have to give her that one too. :grin Lil sis, lets not put ideas into my head and get me started kay. :eyebrow Thanks. :flower



SJ-Thanks. :flower Glad you liked. :grin



Arron-Thanks. :flower I'm sorry that you have to miss your girl and say "good-bye" to her. :sob I hope that my baby feels bless. :heart I try. Yeah, you have to be strong for the one you love. :wink Unfortunatlly we have alot of "good-bye" :sob But we will come out the other side better and stronger. TOGETHER. :heart



Tori- Thank you. :flower I'm glad that you like them. As Long as y'all :kitty 's :read them I will continue to post. Thank you. :grin



April-Thanks. :flower Yeah you may have meantioned it once or twice. :lol Never tire of hearing it though. :wink More soon.





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: How I Hate Good-bye

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sun Dec 07, 2003 1:40 pm

Your Love

By:Grace (a.k.a. bluwewillowwitch)

For My Baby




If I could have one wish, I would wish that you could see how your love touches me. The way that your love makes me feel inside.



I feel you deep inside. There isn't a thing in this world that could keep me from you. You are my light at the end of a cold, dark, lonely tunnel. you are what I work to reach.



If I could give one thing to you, it would be the love that you give to me so that you could see how good it is. Your love is the greatest thing that has ever touched my life and the greatest thing I shall ever know.



What did I do to be so lucky to deserve your love? I hope that I will always live up to the love that you give me.



Trust me in this one thing. I will never stop loving you. I will hold your heart close to mine for all eternity and longer. you will never lose me.



All that I hope and pray for is that you will always be mine and that I can always be yours.





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

"I'm here with out you baby/But your still with me in my dreams/And tonight girl, there's only you and me."--3 Doors Down-Here Without You----Mine and My Baby's song.

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: How I Hate Good-bye

Postby SJ » Mon Dec 08, 2003 12:35 am

Lovely words :read

SJ
 


Re: How I Hate Good-bye

Postby shadowygirl » Mon Dec 08, 2003 12:47 am

Ya know I've said this before but I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE ....... heh:lol :lol





Hey Grace :bigwave :bigwave

Just wanted to say I read your new poem and well I loved it yet again ...

please post more again soon :pride



Luv April

:kitty :flower

shadowygirl
 


Re: How I Hate Good-bye

Postby ambersagoddess » Mon Dec 08, 2003 5:21 am

Grace,



I logged on to read your poem, it was brilliant, well done, ::gives Grace a cookie::



I'd love to write more but it's six thirty and I have to get to school!



Bye bye



-Rei

Spero eorum amo donbit tu animus magnamus



Why yes, the rumors are true, I have patted the Great One's ass...

ambersagoddess
 


Re: How I Hate Good-bye

Postby bluewillowwitch » Fri Dec 12, 2003 11:19 am

:bigwave :kiity's :flower ,

Okay I so love hearing from you all.



SJ- Thank you. :flower



April- Yes you have said it before but I still love hearing it. :grin I will post more soon. My baby is great inspiration for writing. :grin Thanks for reading. :flower



Rei- Thanks. :flower Yay! :applause cookie. :grin Yeah, you go to school and learn something. :glasses



Thanks to all who have :read and replies are always welcome. :grin More soon, promise.





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



"I'm here with out you baby/But your still with me in my dreams/And tonight girl, there's only you and me."--3 Doors Down-Here Without You----Mine and My Baby's song.

bluewillowwitch
 

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