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Wytchi's wot not's

Postby Wytchi Grrl » Sat Mar 29, 2003 1:02 pm

Hi All, Just thought I'd open up a thread for a few bits and bobs I'd like to share with ya.

First off I wrote this poem a while back, It kind of has two meanings for me and I'd be really interested in kitten feedback on what it's meaning is to you and well if you like it etc. This is a great idea for a board, got me feeling all creative!:dance



Satans child



A blood red rose

Lie sleeping on my pillow

Out the window she sits

Under the weeping willow



Her white skin blushed

As Her eyes shed pain

For her enternity in darkness

Is with the devils rain



A secret letter between the sheets

Tells me Nothing I don't know

For she is seen as a beast of the night

And at sunrise there's no where to go



She is so alone

In her world she suffer's shame

I would give up everything

To be her holy name



I would save her from the shadows

From the midnight moon

From everything she fears

It would be over so soon



Our worlds so far apart

Although our heartaches the same

We both fear the sunlight

We both play the same game



What are you so afraid of?

Is it me, or taking me away?

If we could be together

I don't want to stay



Your Eyes tell a story

Of tragic nights

hunting for survival

And soul destroying fights



You can feel my emotions

You can hear me think

You can see into my soul

You want to drink



Your thirst grows greater

You can almost see the crimson water

You can just taste

You need not slaughter



So take me in your pale arms

I am so meek and mild

Give me your evil kiss

Make me satans child



:bigkiss




Toujours, Pour toujours, Élément essentiel - Saule et Tara

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Postby MellindraX » Sat Mar 29, 2003 10:47 pm

Struggle for perception, for the exceptance they see is there, to become something they long to be... That's what I heard in the poem... Excellent poem...

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Postby SJ » Sun Mar 30, 2003 3:05 am

Great poem :)

SJ
 


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Postby Wytchi Grrl » Tue Apr 01, 2003 10:34 am

Thanks Guys! Yeah MellidraX thats basically it- I wrote it for my first girlfriend, It was kinda of my way of breaking through the tough barrier of exceptance etc for our sexuality and being together Plus I was well into the idea of sexy vampires! ;)

Thanks again for your feedback:bigkiss




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