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POEMs

Postby Drumbly » Sun May 04, 2003 9:12 am

When I look in you eyes

I see the love that light my live

You’re the one that always smiles

Always the one that make me cry

I wonder why you’re not around anymore,

Why’d you have to walk out of that door.

I want you to see that you’re my whole world.

I want to see us growing old.

I don’t understand the fighting,

When we do that, I feel like dying,

Please come home and hold me,

I promise I’ll be your destiny.



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Okay, i wrote this Yesterday i dunno why, but i did it.

Hope y'all like it.:flower



Love: Jesse/Drumbly:blush

Edited by: Drumbly at: 5/4/03 8:13:51 am
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Re: POEMs

Postby Drumbly » Sun May 04, 2003 9:17 am



I came home yesterday,

With the sun gone and the skies all filled with grey,

I heard you fighting with him,

Screaming and yelling.

I can’t stand the pain anymore,

I just want to walk out of the door.

Why do you guys always do this to me,

Leave me cold and lonely.

Nobody that gives a damn about lil’ Jesse,

Please mom, dad stop fighting cause it kills me



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Okay this one is kidda dipressing so ... hope you like it 2 :flower



Love: Jesse/Drumbly:blush

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Re: POEMs

Postby muFFin1811 » Sun May 04, 2003 9:29 am

Hey there!



Great poems. I really liked both of them. U should write more, but a happy one?? :whistle (I so want u to be happy, *shutting up now* :rofl )...



Hope to read more.



Kattie :moo





All they gave me was this ticket to heaven, a damn ticket to heaven...

Now I'm restless and I'm running from everything, I'm running from everything - 3 Doors Down



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Re: POEMs

Postby pacou » Sun May 04, 2003 1:37 pm

Awww Jesse, those were great :sob :sigh



I really, really liked them and I'd so like to hear more from you, maybe, like kattie said, some happy poems next time? :p



Although, you could go on with that kind of stuff too ;) I just hope it's not really anything that you've witnessed... :)



Thanks so much for sharing and please go on with the great stuff :grin



:peace -Viv-





Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

pacou
 


Re: POEMs

Postby SJ » Mon May 05, 2003 4:17 am

Great poems :read

SJ
 


Re: POEMs

Postby bluewillowwitch » Mon May 12, 2003 4:53 am

Jess,

Love them. They are beautiiful.





bluewillowwitch :fallen

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

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Re: POEMs

Postby Stroke of Luck » Sat Aug 30, 2003 6:42 am

Hey lil sis!!!:wave



Oh i havent seen that u even wrote poems...well i am late but now i am here :p



Those poems are fantastic...i really felt what u have been gone through...hehe u know i nearly felt the same...i started to write poems too, when my parents were fighting and when they seperated..but they are not THAT good



Hope to see some more of you:)



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony

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Re: POEMs

Postby shadowygirl » Thu Sep 04, 2003 8:08 pm

Jess those are just wow they are wicked kool to me .... keep up the great amazing work ....





Love April :pride

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