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Tara's poems

Postby tara24alh » Sat Sep 20, 2003 10:59 pm

Hello everyone! I've been posting some poems lately and I figured I'd just make my own thread to put them in. I hope you like them.:)









This is a little poem I thought up spur of the moment.









My girl



She is so small and pure

She says "watch this" when she rolls on the floor

Her little voice full of excitment

This is what god sent

Her long brown hair and baby blue eyes

She told me once she wanted to touch the sky

She says she wants to be big and strong

That's why she drinks her milk all gone

Playing without a care in the world

However, she is only four

Her favorite thing is to color

To make pictures and put them on the refrigerater

Attention is what she likes best

That's normal for a kid I guess

Hearing her laugh makes me smile

I can forget my problems for a little while

She loves putting coins into her piggy bank

She'll dump them out, then she'll shake

When we go out she shouts "hey" to everyone in sight

Making my face go red everytime

That's my girl being sweet and nice

So, I'm willing to sacrafice

Her little soul is what makes it all worth while

Each little giggle, each little laugh

My little girl makes life a blast



~Tara~

tara24alh
 


Re: Tara's poems

Postby SJ » Sun Sep 21, 2003 3:11 am

Sweet poem :)

SJ
 


Re: Tara's poems

Postby tara24alh » Sun Sep 21, 2003 11:38 am









What next









Where has the time gone?

I was little, now I'm grown

I sit here waiting

For what I still don't know

I have loved ones, family, and friends

Yet I'm still looking for that special lense

So I can see everything more clearly

I want the path that I long for so dearly

People ask me my dreams

What can I tell them?

What do I say?

That I stopped dreaming a long time ago?

That when I use to tell my dreams all my mom said was "so"?

I think I'll skip that question

What next?

I still don't know yet

Everyone has a purpose

I think I lost mine

When I finally know it'll be the end of time

When the skies are red, from blood and fire

I'll still be here trying to figure out my desire

Hell will claim me

Burn me and shame me

All because I'm stuck here without a clue

I think this could be my destiny

To live and rot for eternity

So, I hold my head high and walk right in

Into a life full of sin

Into the fire, the darkness, and the blood

I will be here forever creating my own flood

When you pass me on the street just walk on by

Wistle, twittle your thumbs, look towards the sky

Pay me no mind cause I will forever be

Locked in my own hell hoping the world can't see





~Tara~

tara24alh
 


Re: Tara's poems

Postby SJ » Mon Sep 22, 2003 3:17 am

Great writing :)

SJ
 


Re: Tara's poems

Postby tara24alh » Mon Sep 22, 2003 7:38 pm







Water



Water's to the edge

As if they're falling off a ledge

Sometimes weak, sometimes strong

It feels right, then wrong

Wrong when it tries to take you under

When the lightning hits it along with the loud thunder

Waves thrashing, crashing

Lightning flashing

The boat's rocking, tipping, trying to be put under

Who the hell's idea was this, I wonder

My hearts pounding as the thunder sounds

I reach with my heart for something that can not be found

The rain's hitting my face hard

The boats going to sink, I'm out so far

The weight of the water's taking it down

I fear I will be lost, not found

Oh god, the boat is disappearing

Down my face, tears are streaming

The boat's gone now

It's just me here to bear this sound

Of thunder, the rain, and my heart

I'm splashing, screaming, internally falling apart

Should I give up or fight?

There's nothing and no one in sight

No one to help me, to take away my fear

This will be the end of me, drowning, here

I decide it's not worth it, I'm all alone

Like always, I'm on my own

I take a breath and let go

I start to sink, down below

Little by little, the sounds fade

What happened to this, once upon a time, wonderful day

I start to feel weak and nimble

Everything, for once, feels so simple

My lungs flood

My heart stops pumping my blood

I start to drift

I welcome it with bliss

I'm moving slowly towards this woderfuly bright light

The most beautiful place I've ever seen fills my sight

It's coming closer, getting brighter

Makes me glad I wasn't a fighter

I smile, I'm not sure why

I think I could fly

The smile on my face turns to a frown

I close my eyes to open them to a world that's upside down

People are standing to my left and right

What the hell's going on?

Where is my light?

No! I want to go back!

I think I fell through a crack

Then I see, something so great and pure

Blue eyes, beauty galore

Who is she?

Where did she come from?

From heaven? Or maybe the sun?

I changed my mind, I wanna stay

To see this beauty that fell upon me on this day

Life is great, now I see

Just how sweet life and love can be







~Tara~



tara24alh
 


Re: Tara's poems

Postby SJ » Tue Sep 23, 2003 2:23 am

Great poem,good imagery :clap

SJ
 


Re: Tara's poems

Postby Willster » Tue Sep 23, 2003 1:30 pm

Loved your poems Tara!!



Thanks for sharing them with us



Caro

Willster
 


Re: Tara's poems

Postby tara24alh » Fri Oct 03, 2003 10:16 am

I want to thank those who left feedback, so.....thanks so much:)



This one's called......



Wasted Love





Wasted Love









My love goes deeper than any has before

However, it just leaves me sore

I've tried all I can do

From the bottom of my soul and all the way through

To me, actions speak louder than words

The actions tell me you don't love me so maybe I should just get out the swords

Shove it deep, I can feel the warm blood running down

Down my stomach, then legs, till it reaches the ground

I can feel it and I haven't even done it yet

Then you'll be free and all set

The pain I feel can't be described

How do you live, when living is a lie?

I think I'll be ready soon

Ready to leave this place under the moon

Even if it's hell, it's still better than what I face

To love and not be loved, what a waste

Just like me, I'm a waste to the world

So, I stand here today, looking into your eyes

No worries though cause one of the tomorrow's, I will die







~Tara~



tara24alh
 


Re: Tara's poems

Postby onyxsundrops » Fri Oct 03, 2003 11:59 am

"How do you live, when living is a lie?" I really liked that line! Nice poem, a little sad...yet good. Thanks for sharing.:)



Yvonne:peace

onyxsundrops
 


Re: Tara's poems

Postby SJ » Sat Oct 04, 2003 7:20 am

Angsty but good,great poem :)

SJ
 


Re: Tara's poems

Postby TaraBaby77 » Thu Dec 25, 2003 10:08 pm

WOW, that last one had me a little water eyed. Strong, meaning full. I like them. Great poems..... Always a big thanks for sharing. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Tara's poems

Postby intricate mirage » Fri Dec 26, 2003 12:57 pm

Quote:
So, I stand here today, looking into your eyes

No worries though cause one of the tomorrow's, I will die/quote]

Wow :clap Very emotional and powerful build up Tara. Gre


My whole life I've loved only one person, that person was you.

intricate mirage
 


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