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Magic

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sat May 10, 2003 10:07 pm

Magic

By: bluewillowwitch (aka Grace)



You walk into the room. Everyone else just disappears. The only one left in the world are you and me. The feeling is magic.

        The smile on your face light up the room. No words need to be spoken for me to know what your thing. I just look into your deep eyes and they tell me everything your heart is feeling. It is a sweet magic.

        The feelings that are running through me are amazing. I only feel them when I’m near you. They run so deep. I never want to be away from you. I want to build a world around you and me together.

        When we first met I knew you would be the one I would spend the rest of my life with. I was instantly drawn to you. It was a strong magic.

        I love you so much and you choose to be here with me. Our love was built to last to last a lifetime. Our love is the only magic.





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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: Magic

Postby muFFin1811 » Sun May 11, 2003 5:31 am

Wow, that was just amazing. :sob (made me almost cry)



You said you are a bad writer? Nope, you are so not that. That was just cool. :)



Hope to see more.



Jope then. Take care.

Kattie :moo

All they gave me was this ticket to heaven, a damn ticket to heaven...

Now I'm restless and I'm running from everything, I'm running from everything - 3 Doors Down



muFFin1811
 


Re: Magic

Postby pacou » Sun May 11, 2003 1:20 pm

Grace, that was sweeeeeet :sigh



It was really, really nice, thanks :grin



You could share more if you want...:whistle



:peace -Viv-



Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

pacou
 


Re: Magic

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sun May 11, 2003 7:01 pm

Hey,



Kattie, Thanks. I needed that.



Viv, Thanks. Are you giving me a hint there? lol. I may actually post another if people like this as much as you two.



Grace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

Edited by: bluewillowwitch  at: 12/27/03 12:20 pm
bluewillowwitch
 


Re: Magic

Postby SJ » Mon May 12, 2003 12:17 am

Nice writing :)

SJ
 


Re: Magic

Postby bluewillowwitch » Mon May 12, 2003 1:38 am

Thanks SJ.I love to hear from you kittens.





bluewillowwitch

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: Magic

Postby Drumbly » Thu May 15, 2003 6:46 am

:clap



GRACE!! that was great!!



i'd love to hear more from you, this is really lovely!!



Love: Jesse:blush





Drumbly
 


Re: Magic

Postby kiwi6969 » Thu May 15, 2003 6:45 pm

Grace your poem was just amazing



I loved it:clap



Please dont stop



kiwi6969

kiwi6969
 


Re: Magic

Postby bluewillowwitch » Thu May 15, 2003 8:37 pm

Hey Jess and kiwi6969,

Thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you like the poem. I'll try to have another one up soon.



bluewillowwtich :fallen

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: Magic

Postby shadowygirl » Fri Dec 26, 2003 3:18 pm

GRACE !!!!!:bigwave :peace



That was beautiful and I didnt even know it was there glad I looked around and found it :p



Beautiful work Hun keep it up :pride



Luv

April :kitty

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Re: Magic

Postby TaraBaby77 » Sat Dec 27, 2003 1:09 am

Grace -



Beautiful work. Isn't love the best??? :D Anyway, I just was in awe reading that. Hope to see more sometime soon. Sweet and beautiful, that is how I am going to describe that. =)



P.s. sorry for not commenting earlier. Not sure how I missed this one. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Magic

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sat Dec 27, 2003 1:24 pm

:bigwave April and Aaron :flower ,

I see you two found the hiden poem huh? :whistle Guess it wasn't as hiden as I thought :P This is an old on, the first I ever posted actually. Don't feel bad, it was way back before you two started :read ing my stuff. :p I'm glad that you liked it. I am going to post a new poem in my other Poem section here soon I think.





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



"I'm here with out you baby/But your still with me in my dreams/And tonight girl, there's only you and me."--3 Doors Down-Here Without You----Mine and My Baby's song.

bluewillowwitch
 


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