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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby saule77 » Mon Oct 14, 2002 9:15 am

Countdown to next week started...

To know that you're OK (ouch with the leg, though...) is enough to make me wait patiently...



I love this fic so much that I'd even wait until the END of next week to join the harrassing mass of your fans... How's that? :p

"You are Willow Rosenberg, vixen-y lighter of the flame and keeper of my heart.”

(Camp Flutie by Rane)

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby foreverpiper » Mon Oct 14, 2002 5:40 pm

Aww! Thanks guys! All for my lil ol' knee! :grin heh, i should get injuries more often :wink Well i've cheaked and seasons over on Thursday, which means i'll get to work on the updates after school!!! :party YAY! :grin Thanks again for the patience!

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby MissQuirky » Mon Oct 14, 2002 8:56 pm

Quote:
Good catch! I knew Ashley was sneakin that stuff in, and I can't believe I missed it.


I have No idea what you guyz r talkin about! :rolleyes I'm NOT sneakin anything! :mad



~Ashley~

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby barnabasvamp » Tue Oct 15, 2002 5:17 am

Nice try sweetie, but Granny knows!

BV

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby fairydust » Tue Oct 15, 2002 3:48 pm

mmkay...I know you are hurt and everything...but I had to point this out;) dontcha love me....lol

Quote:
Well i've cheaked


Uh...I believe its "checked";) lol

ttyl:grin

get better!

*****Faye*****

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby foreverpiper » Tue Oct 15, 2002 4:57 pm

*pulls a Garfield face* :mad :rage DAMMIT!

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby fairydust » Tue Oct 15, 2002 5:25 pm

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:grin :laugh :laugh :laugh :laugh :laugh :laugh :laugh

*****Faye*****

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby Jennpurr » Tue Oct 15, 2002 5:27 pm

:rollin



Jen

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|My Fan Fiction and More|

"Oh, sweet Brigit’s bra!"~ Emily from, "Milestones," by Lisa, Chapter 13

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby foreverpiper » Tue Oct 15, 2002 5:32 pm

:|

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby Jennpurr » Tue Oct 15, 2002 5:37 pm

Awwww, Piper. I didn't mean to laugh. I'm sorry. Shame on them for picking on you. That's not very nice.



I am sorry. Still love me? :)



Jen

- - - - -
|My Fan Fiction and More|

"Oh, sweet Brigit’s bra!"~ Emily from, "Milestones," by Lisa, Chapter 13

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby fairydust » Wed Oct 16, 2002 6:01 am

:grin

*****Faye*****

fairydust
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby foreverpiper » Wed Oct 16, 2002 3:37 pm

Jen, yes, of course! how on earth could i ever stay mad at you?



As for you Faye...YOU INHALE DEEPLY THROUGH A STRAW!!!

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby fairydust » Wed Oct 16, 2002 3:39 pm

Quote:
As for you Faye...YOU INHALE DEEPLY THROUGH A STRAW!!!


YOU KNOW ABOUT THAT!?!?!?!?!?!:mad

*****Faye*****

fairydust
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby foreverpiper » Wed Oct 16, 2002 4:13 pm

LMAO! :lol Oh i'm sorry! Was that supposed to be kept confidential? *innocent grin*

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

Edited by: foreverpiper at: 10/16/02 3:14:33 pm
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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby fairydust » Wed Oct 16, 2002 4:25 pm

:mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no :mad :no

*****Faye*****

Edited by: fairydust  at: 10/16/02 3:25:45 pm
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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby Jennpurr » Wed Oct 16, 2002 10:53 pm

Quote:
Jen, yes, of course! how on earth could i ever stay mad at you?




**Blows out the breath I was holding** Pheeewww... had me worried there for a min. Glad you still love me. :grin



Now....



**Tests singing voice: "Me, me, me, me..."**



U-U-U-U-U-U-U-U



That means we want an update, Piper. ;) :kiss



Jen



- - - - -
"Oh, sweet Brigit’s bra!"~ Emily from, "Milestones," by Lisa, Chapter 13

"You're like a text book with arms..." ~ Buffy to Giles

Edited by: Jennpurr at: 10/16/02 9:54:33 pm
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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby foreverpiper » Fri Oct 18, 2002 9:58 pm

Pfft! Of course i still love ya!! *shakes head* how on earth could you think otherwise? tut tut tut! lol



And as for the update...*singsong voice* I have the new update! :grin *evil grin* Now the question is...



*sigh* to post...or not to post...



:wink



hehe, j/k i'll post it in the morning (over here where i am that is) cause i gotta read over it and everything :grin

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby foreverpiper » Sat Oct 19, 2002 8:34 am

Well, here it is (finally)! You guys have been very patient...Thank-you SOOO much! :grin I'll try to write some more later. But until then...the update!



Chapter 15: Cotton Candy



By the time they had finished the Rapids, it was around 3:00, and despite them already having lunch, they were all hungry. The decision to go get cotton candy was unanimous. Luckily, when they finally found a cotton candy machine, there were only 3 people in front of them, so the wait wasn’t that torturous.



“So what’s it taste like?” Anya questioned excitedly.



“What?” Tara questioned.



“What’s it taste like? The cotton candy?”



Xander’s eyes widened “Hold on! You’ve never had cotton candy before?”



Anya shook her head.



“You mean you’ve been alive for 1100 years and never, not once have you ever had cotton candy before? Not once?” Xander asked her desperately.



“No I haven’t. Why is that so hard for you to understand Xander?” Anya shot back, her patience with him getting thin.



Xander decided to shut his trap for once. He didn’t want to get in trouble with his soon-to-be-wife yet again. Plus his shoulder was still sore from all the times she had hit him that day.



***



Stepping up to the worker, they asked for 4 sticks of the cotton. One for Xander and Anya, one for Willow and Tara, and one each for both Buffy and Dawn. Handing one to each of them they all gaped. Each individual stick of cotton candy was so big that if Xander were to hold it up to his face and someone was looking at him directly, they wouldn’t be able to see any part of his face.



They strolled lazily down the walkway, eating their fluffy candy, looking for something to do.



Anya reached over to where Xander was holding their cotton candy and ripped a huge chunk off and delicately put a tiny piece in her mouth. Her eyes lit up as she tasted the sugary goodness. She then took the remaining hunk of fluff and promptly shoved it all into her mouth. She chewed the sticky fluff off, or at least, she did the best she could, seeing as how almost half of what she had put into her mouth had somehow managed to stick all over her face.

       

Buffy, Dawn, Willow, Tara, and Xander’s stared at Anya’s little display. She continued chewing while giving them a look that said “what” while shrugging her shoulders.



Willow finally couldn’t hold it in any more and she let out a bark of laughter. Following her, everyone else began to laugh also, everyone except Anya that is, who was still looking at them, eyes wide with innocence.



Buffy fumbled in her pocket and pulled out Xander’s camera, which only had but a few more pictures left in its life. She aimed, and shot. She’s gotten the perfect shot, at the perfect angle, with Anya’s eyes wide open, and mouth partially open, and goo all around her face. This means lips, cheeks, nose, and chin, all covered with pink.



Blinded, Anya shielded her eyes and stumbled around, blinking furiously, trying desperately to get her sight back.



Once the black had cleared her out of her vision she shot Buffy a glare, and then did something not one of them was expecting…she laughed. Her sneer turned into a grin, which turned into a chuckle, which blew into a total rib hurting, eyes tearing howl of ex-demon laughter.



After almost a minute of laughing the Scoobies, excluding Anya, finally calmed and waited for Anya to get out of her laugh fest. She didn’t.



Xander leaned forward a little, “Ahn, it wasn’t that funny.”



Anya was doubled over, “Yes it was!!!” she gasped for breath, “See, I-I had sticky stuff all over my face! And then,” she took another deep breath, “she took a picture!”



Xander sighed and turned to look at the group, who all had their eyebrows raised at him. He gave them all a pitiful look and shrugged his shoulders. Willow shook her head, “Hey, she’s your fiancé.”



Tara nudged her, “Be nice,” she whispered.



“Aren’t I always?” she asked with pure sincerity.



“Well-” Tara replied before Willow hushed her with a hand.



Anya finally finished laughing and she brought up her hands to wipe at her mouth. What she succeed in doing was create even a bigger mess. Now along with her face being sticky, her hands were now just as bad. She cringed at the horrible stickiness and tried to wipe it off unsuccessfully.



“Darn it!” she wailed, trying furiously to get the stuff off her arms. “Ew! It’s all stuck to me! Xander get it off!”



Xander was trying to stifle his laugher. “Honey, it’s okay, just put a little water on it and it’ll come right off.”



“Well where am I going to find water?” she moaned.



“Just go to the bathroom,” Tara told her, “I was going to make a quick stop pretty soon anyway.” Unseen by the others she quickly threw a wink in Willow’s direction. Willow grinned.



“Okay then!” Anya beamed; glad to be able to find a solution to get the residue cotton candy off of her, “Lead the way then.”



Dodging through the crowd the group made their way to the bathrooms. Tara and Anya went into the girls’ bathroom, closely followed by Willow.



“Oh no you don’t!” Buffy said, yanking Willow back from halfway in-between the doors.



“Hey!” Willow shouted indignantly.



“You’re not going in there.” Buffy said.



“But I’ve gotta pee!” Willow wined. Buffy saw right through the meek excuse.



She shook her head, “Nuh uh! No way.”



“Why not?” Willow challenged.



“You know as well as I do that if you go in there you probably won’t be coming out anytime soon.” Buffy gave Willow a knowing look.



Willow gave her best friend a pout and crossed her arms and hunched her shoulders over, sticking her lips out, “Humph! You know me too well!” She glared good-naturedly at her friend and waited for Tara and Anya to come back out.



A few minutes later they emerged with Anya being 100% cotton candy free.



They joined back with the rest of the group and began walking again, to no place in particular. Tara made her way over to Willow and they separated themselves from the group a little. “Where’d you go?” she asked her, giving her hand a tiny squeeze.



Willow pursed her lips, “Buffy wouldn’t let me go.”



Tara shook her head playfully and giggled, not being able to resist at the look Willow was giving.



They went into a comfortable silence before Tara’s nose twitched, as she smelled something familiar. Her face lit up and she realized what it was. She turned back to the group and signaled them to follow her, “Come on!”



“Where are we going?” Dawn shouted over the crowd’s mumblings.



Tara grinned, wondering how Willow would react, “You’ll see!” she shouted back.



When the crowd finally thinned Willow and the rest of the group saw exactly where Tara was taking them. Willow’s eye’s widened as she stared at the large building with terrified wide eyes, “You’ve got to be kidding me!”



TBC…



It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby TheWhiz » Sat Oct 19, 2002 9:02 am

I finally get around to checking the site and your thread after what feels like weeks only to see a new update!! Yay!!



Great update Piper- worth the wait :grin

Anya and her reaction to the cotton candy (I keep wanting to say Candy Floss being British and all!) was really funny :lol



Keep up the great work!

"Emily" :D

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"


"Make your own kind of music"-Mama Cass

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby 4evaWill » Sat Oct 19, 2002 9:16 am

Yay! I know I've been v. bad not giving feedback but loving the whole thing! And yay again, you updated! Anya and the cotton candy was v. hilarious! :laugh Yay! Great update!



~Cath~

Tara: No, I-I understand. You have to be with the person you l-love.
Willow: I am.
NEW MOON RISING

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby XWickedXWiccan » Sat Oct 19, 2002 11:43 am

Yay update!! :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce



-Trinity-



P.S. I'm very hyper from to much sugery goodness :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce

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Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love, the clarity of hatred, and the ecstacy of grief. It hurts sometimes more than we can bare. If we can live without passion maybe we'd know some peace. But we'd be hollow, empty rooms, shuttered, and dank, With out passion we'd truly be dead. ANGEL in "Passion"

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby Grimaldi » Sun Oct 20, 2002 11:24 am

loved the update :clap Anya and the cotton candy was funny, as was Buffy stopping Willow from following Tara and Anya to the bathroom, and let me guess the ride that Tara was dragging Willow to had a giant Toad wearing a top hat standing out front :)

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

2nd place??? That's just a fancy term for loser!

Screw you triangle thief!

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby Miss1234Kitty » Sun Oct 20, 2002 2:10 pm

Anya was so funny! Yay, we got an update! Were those two remarks the wrong way round? *scratches head in puzzlement*



Gem

Tara: There's just so much to work through... and can you just be kissing me now?

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby foreverpiper » Sun Oct 20, 2002 3:08 pm

Emily: hehe, well it did take a few weeks for me to get it out there :wink And Candy Floss? that's what they call it over there? interesting...



Cath: Well i'm just glad that your still reading! lol, it's taken so damn long i'm surprised yall even remember! And im glad you enjoyed it! :grin



XWickedXWiccan: :lol hyper? i hadn't noticed! :wink



Grimaldi: Well i have a feeling that if Willow were to follow Tara into the bathroom they'd be in there just a little longer than they should be...and as for what Tara led willow too...well, you'll just have to wait and see...*evil cackle*



Gem: lol, i guess ya could say that, but i got em anyways so all's good! :D

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby pikescoob » Sun Oct 20, 2002 3:30 pm

I love cotton candy...definitely a must do at any amusement park :D Loved it when Anya got it all over herself :p not surprising since she tried to shove it all in her mouth at once. Poor Willow not being allowed bathroom smoochies :p I wonder where Tara lead them :hmm



--Michelle

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby MissQuirky » Sun Oct 20, 2002 3:43 pm

Great update, Piper! :clap Anya with the cotton candy, now that was hilarious and even funnier when she started laughing at herself! :lol She's a hoot! :D



OK you totally have me stumped with the Tara dragging the gang along to where ever the hell she took em thing! - But whatever it is it should definitely be good! Can't wait for more! - Soon, right?! :pray



~Ashley~

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby XWickedXWiccan » Sun Oct 20, 2002 4:36 pm

Okay I want to take two guesses to where Tara is taking them. A reptilian exhabition (nah that's too mean)?? Or one of those tall building where you sit down and the ride goes all the way up then goes down really really fast making you feel like your head is going to be ripped off? I forget what those are called. Or maybe the stables where they can watch horsies. I'm just guessing anything so don't mind me.



-Trinity-





--------------------------
Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love, the clarity of hatred, and the ecstacy of grief. It hurts sometimes more than we can bare. If we can live without passion maybe we'd know some peace. But we'd be hollow, empty rooms, shuttered, and dank, With out passion we'd truly be dead. ANGEL in "Passion"

XWickedXWiccan
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby barnabasvamp » Sun Oct 20, 2002 6:48 pm

:bounce

Thanks for the update. Always love a story that includes candy (and Anya of course)

:hmm a large bldg. that Willow is afraid of?

BV

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby foreverpiper » Mon Oct 21, 2002 4:29 am

Michelle: Who doesn't like cotton candy?! hehe, i just recently went back to the amusement park over here (Busch Gardens) and my friend shoved the whole thing in her mouth so i put it in...just...spiced it up a bit! ;)



Ashley: :grin Well if ya screw up...why not laugh? hehe, makes things easyier...lord knows, i should know! And yes, the next update should be soon later this week cause i know exactly what i wanna say for the next part...just gotta put it in words. Probably be up Thursday or Friday, and earlier if i get some free time Tuesday or Wed. :D



Trinity: hehe, that's 3 guesses...and i'm not saying a word :wink



BV: Well your very much welcome! As for what Willow's 'fraid of...well...you'll just have to wait and see now won't you

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby littlecrazy80 » Mon Oct 21, 2002 12:03 pm

WooHoo!!! I can´t believe it, after weeks of waiting there´s finally an update.

:bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce



*lil´c*



Unter den Blinden ist der Einäugige König.

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