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Re: Update

Postby Tempest Duer » Mon May 31, 2004 9:43 pm

Tara's got some real courage, Alcy. We know that... you write it really well though. You can portray her with a certain... accuracy, even when she's not a witch.

Saying that up is down will not make up, down.



~Gene Burns

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Update

Postby veiled isis moon » Wed Jun 02, 2004 2:39 am

awwwww, i made you blush!! No, seriously, you mind couldn't be thinking up anything worse than mine.....it's just not possible i'm afraid!



Sweet and innocent.......you?........yeah-riiiight........you forget missy, i read your fics! Captin Red is definetly not innocent!



Michelle.x

veiled isis moon
 


Re: Update

Postby KiwiAlcyone » Fri Jun 04, 2004 10:40 pm

Tempest Duer: I've always thought of Tara as the stronger of the two and I try and make that come through in my fics.



veiled isis moon: Well, compliments always make me blush! And I am sooooo innocent! Captain Red isn't naughty...



the next update is almost done, just proofing...



:peace Alcy

Reality continues to ruin my life - Calvin and Hobbes

KiwiAlcyone
 


Chapter 30

Postby KiwiAlcyone » Fri Jun 04, 2004 10:43 pm

Chapter Thirty – “More inklings.”





Willow Rosenberg purred contently as she felt the thrill of feeling nothing but a sheet covering her naked body…and even then the sheet was only draped over her lower legs. She turned her head slightly to see Tara’s face only inches away from hers, a small smile on her face as she lay on her stomach. Willow’s eyes roamed over her naked back appreciatively.



Winter sunlight drifted through a gap in the curtains and fell across her stomach. Willow gasped in delight when Tara’s hand chased the sunbeam, tickling her teasingly. Willow giggled and tried to squirm away, but she didn’t try very hard at all. Tara’s musical laugh joined her own as she tried to pull the sheet up over herself. It was quickly tugged it off and thrown aside by a mischievous blonde. Tara leaned over Willow and placed one hand on either side of her, soft strands of blonde hair tumbling down to tickle the rd head’s chest. Willow smiled up at Tara, reaching up to cup the back of her head tenderly.



Tara felt so comfortable in Willow’s gaze, the green eyes alone speaking volumes of love before she even opened her mouth.



“I love you Tara Maclay,” Willow said softly.



“I am the luckiest woman in the world to get to hear those words from you…I love you my Willow,” Tara smiled her gorgeous lopsided smile, before she added in a soft, slightly nervous whisper, “R-ready for round two?”



“I thought you’d never ask. C’mere gorgeous,” Willow drew Tara down to her, their lips met gently.



Tara lowered herself on top of Willow, their naked bodies pressing together…her hand moved up to cup one of Willow’s breasts, teasing the nipple with her thumb. Willow was moaning softly through the kiss.



“Y’know,” Tara whispered in the scant moments when their lips weren’t pressed together, “It’s…supposed…to be even…better the…second time.”



Tara drew back and nuzzled Willow’s nose. Willow nipped Tara’s playfully, “What about the third…and the fourth?”



Tara shrugged, bending down to nibble Willow’s earlobe, “I should imagine it keeps getting better and better.”



Willow laughed as Tara’s tongue flicked over her ear, “I’d like to test that theory!”



“You get one taste and already you’re an hungry as a ravenous wolf!” Tara quipped with a raised eyebrow.



Willow blinked, blushing furiously, “Tara, I-I hope you don’t think that from now on all I want from you is sex…”



“You mean you don’t want sex all the time?” Tara asked incredulously.



“No…I-I…”



Tara rolled off Willow and scooted to the edge of the bed to see if she could locate her clothes. Willow sat up with an intense frown on her face,



“Baby?”



Tara swung her legs back up onto the bed and rolled over. She reached up smoothed back her hair tenderly and kissed the worry lines furrowing Willow’s pale brow, “Sorry…a very poorly judged attempt at teasing you. Willow…that’s the last thing I would think…making love with you…being with you like this, is the most beautiful thing I have ever experienced and I don’t think I’ll ever be able to get enough of it but amazing as it is, we both know that there’s more to our relationship.”



Willow nuzzled Tara’s neck, “Much more!” she announced confidently, “Though it is very nice…”



“Nice?” Tara arched an indignant eyebrow.



Willow giggled even as Tara began to tickle her mercilessly. She fell onto her back and squirmed in mock terror. Tara returned to her previous position atop Willow, holding most of her weight on her arms as she looked down at the still-giggling red head.



“So what’s this about sex getting better and better the more you do it?” Willow asked innocently.



“I-I don’t know from experience or anything…but I’d like to…”



“Me too,” Willow replied quietly.



“Then lets hurry up and see if we can make it to at least the third before lunch,” Tara stroked Willow’s cheek tenderly before running her head down over her throat, her collarbone and to her small breast.



Willow choked back a gasp as Tara resumed paying attention to her hard, pink nipple.



“Lunch? Why do we have to stop for lunch? Who can be hungry at a time like this?” Willow watched intently as Tara’s thumb moved over her nipple.



“I’m famished!” Tara stopped her ministrations and Willow pouted, “Besides, we’re meeting the girls for lunch at Patsy’s remember?”



“Oh gosh darn it! Can we be late?” Willow asked plaintively.



“Well…” Tara paused for effect and looked down at Willow’s breasts, “I suppose a Willow-snack will keep me happy.”



*****



Willow and Tara were indeed almost a half an hour late to Patsy’s. Faith, Abby and Anya had already well and truly staked a claim on their favourite booth in the corner. The three of them had obviously been a little antsy waiting for the girls to arrive as Anya jumped up excitedly when she saw them.



“It’s about time! Faith has been wanting to order without you for the last fifteen minutes but I kept saying you’d be here…just as well you came otherwise I would’ve had to eat my words!” the blonde ushered them into the booth.



Willow and Tara slid around the circular booth and Anya shoved a menu under their noses. Tara nestled against Willow, pressing their thighs together beneath the table.



“So how was Christmas Day?” Abby asked, at the same time looking up to see where the waitress was.



Willow fought to keep the heat she felt coursing through her body from rising up into her cheeks, The best day of my life after the day I met Tara, wonderful…special “It was fine,” Willow replied, pretending to be seriously interested in the menu.



“It was really…n-nice,” Tara added, browsing her own menu even as her cheeks went red.



Faith lowered her own menu, her eyes narrowing with suspicion at the two girls.



“Fine? Nice?” Anya said in exasperation, slamming the palm of her hand down on the table, “Didn’t you two give each other decent presents?”



“Oh yes,” Willow smiled awkwardly, “Tara gave me a signed first edition of Gone with the Wind.”



Faith and Anya rolled their eyes.



“Willow gave me the cutest beret, among other things…” Tara stopped and bit her lip, casting Willow a sideways glance as she knew they were both thinking exactly the same thing.



Willow grinned and ducked her head as her cheeks flamed.



“Oh my god!” Faith’s eyes widened as she jumped up and clapped her hands excitedly.



She would have leapt up on the seat if Abby had not reached out and grabbed the sleeve of her cardigan, dragging her back down.



“You’re making a scene Faith,” Abby asked, looking around the diner to see more than a few heads turned their way, “What’s your problem?”



“Those two!” she almost yelled, stabbing her finger at Willow and Tara.



“Shush Faith!” Abby clamped her hand over Faith’s mouth, “Those two what? Yes, that red headed doll is Willow…and the gorgeous blonde is Tara…”



“Ohhh,” Anya started clapping as well.



Abby looked incredibly perplexed as she looked back and forth between Willow and Tara and Faith and Anya, who were still clapping excitedly. Tara was roughly the same shade as beetroot and Willow was holding her menu up in front of her face so Abby couldn’t even see her. She reached out and yanked the menu down to see Willow’s face matching her hair. Her eyes widened…



“You two…” she began.



“Had sex!” Faith interrupted loudly.



Willow wanted to sink down into her seat as her eyes darted around to see people staring to see who was making such a commotion, she whispered fiercely at her friends, Faith especially, “I am beginning to think that the three of you are on a mission to embarrass us wherever we go!”



“But we’re right aren’t we?” Faith asked in an insistent voice, leaning across the table until she was almost right in their faces. She grabbed the ketchup bottle from the centre of the table and pointed it at each of them in turn, “Speak or say goodbye to those squeaky clean sweaters!”



Abby snatched the bottle from Faith and set it back down, swatting the dark-haired girl over the head. Beneath the table Tara reached out and took Willow’s hand in her own, stroking the soft skin gently with her thumb.



“You’re r-r-right,” the blonde replied quietly. Willow shot Tara a quick look and the blonde grimaced apologetically even as Faith and Anya turned to each other and squealed loudly. Tara whispered to Willow over the din, “They would have found out anyway. You okay?”



Willow flashed Tara a dazzling smile, “More than okay baby,” she then turned to the two over-excited girls and asked pleadingly, “Can you just keep it down a bit?”



“Definitely,” Abby nodded and glared at Faith and Anya, “We’re sorry but since none of us have boyfriends and therefore are seriously deprived of sex, well except Faith who is never without a boyfriend, we have to get it vicariously through you two,” Abby said with a grin, staring intently at the pair of them.



“Hey, fine…I didn’t mean to badger you but it’s just so obvious!” Faith said, suitably chastised.



Abby nodded in agreement, “You can notice it! Honestly, Willow, Tara, you two are positively glowing! It must’ve been good then?”



“Ooh, yes, please tell us what the sex was like,” Anya leaned forward over the table, waiting expectantly.



“Um…girls, we are going to go now…” Tara began, her hand tightening on Willow’s.



“Oh come on!” Faith reached out and grabbed Tara’s shoulder, dragging her back down against the seat, “If you’re doing it then you can talk about it!”



“Like I said…it was fine,” Willow replied awkwardly.



“Hello? Fine is not an appropriate adjective to describe losing your virginity,” Anya pouted.



“There were stars,” Willow mumbled.



“What?” Abby prodded with an evil grin, “I didn’t catch that Will?”



“There were stars alright, is that enough info?” Willow almost snapped.



Abby, Faith and Anya all erupted in a chorus of giggles. Willow met Tara’s gaze to see that the blonde was smiling, the colour in her face had almost completely disappeared save for two pink spots on her cheeks. The red head was instantly reassured and smiled back, leaning across to place a quick kiss on Tara’s cheek.



The waitress came to wait expectantly by their table, an indulgent smile on her face as she waited for the giggles to subside.



“Burgers with everything all round!” Faith finally managed to get out.



“Except no beetroot for Tara,” Willow added with a small smile at the blonde.



“Fries as well?” the waitress asked.



“Most definitely,” Abby piped up, “And cokes too please…and apple pie and ice cream for dessert.”



“You girls sure are hungry,” the waitress said taking their menus.



“We’re celebrating,” Faith grinned.



“Oh really, what are you celebrating?”



Willow and Tara brushed bright red and looked down at the table.



“Santa was extra good to some of us this year,” Faith winked at the two lovers discreetly.



The waitress smiled and moved to off to take their orders to the kitchen.



“Santa had nothing to do with it!” Anya added firmly.



*****



Tara drummed her fingers impatiently on the desk as she watched the sole remaining customers browse the shelves. She finally realised how rude she was being and stopped, clenching her fists and forcing herself to sit politely. It lasted all of a few seconds before her foot began to tap on the floor. The man and woman were obvious a couple, his hand guiding her elbow gently as they perused the shelves. Tara let out a quiet sigh as she willed them to leave so she could go and be with her lover.



Lover, Tara suddenly found a silly little smile even as she merely thought the word.



Finally, they left and Tara leapt to her feet. She practically ran the short distance to the door to turn the sign over to read ‘closed.’



Tara moved quickly to lock up, the cash went in the safe out the back. She had already swept and dusted hours ago in order to leave as early as possible. Glancing at her watch Tara saw she had an hour to get home and ready herself for a night out of dancing and fun with her four favourite girls. This of course meant Willow would be dressed up in her best outfit with her cute dancing shoes…a sight Tara always appreciated. She stopped at the coat rack by the door to grab her hat and mittens. Finally, she pulled on her coat and stepped out into the chilly dusk. Snow had began to fall softly. It was a beautiful night and she couldn’t wait to be with Willow.



However, just as she slipped the key into the lock behind her, a vice-like grip tightened around her wrist. She gasped and spun around to find herself staring into an all too familiar face.



“I wouldn’t lock up if I were you…we’re going to need somewhere to talk.”



With a shaky breath Tara withdrew the key from the lock. She couldn’t quite bring herself to turn the handle though, her hand was shaking so. For a few moments she contemplating shouting out…or even running but she knew it was pointless before she even tried. He brushed past her and opened the door, pushing her inside so roughly she almost fell to her hands and knees.



Tara heard the quiet click of the door closing shut behind them and felt herself trembling uncontrollably even as she turned around and forced herself to meet his gaze.



Willow!





TBC in Chapter Thirty-One – “Winter’s Chill.”



Reality continues to ruin my life - Calvin and Hobbes

KiwiAlcyone
 


Re: Chapter 30

Postby her BRIGHTeyes » Fri Jun 04, 2004 10:59 pm

okay. whew.



two updates!!!



first with the awwwe.

and then with all the :thud :thud :thud

and then with more :thud and some :bow



and more awwwe's and happy sigh's.



and then this update. with more awwe.



and then :blush and :heart and :flirt and :laugh



but then :paranoid :wtf and :sob



who the eff did that to Tara??? is it a pimp? it sounds like a pimp to me. damn him. I don't like him already, I'm sure of it.



overall, great updates!!! :bounce :love :peace



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she had eyes bright enough to burn me --conor oberst

Edited by: her BRIGHTeyes at: 6/4/04 9:59 pm
her BRIGHTeyes
 


Re: Chapter 30

Postby Tempest Duer » Fri Jun 04, 2004 11:00 pm

It was going so well and then the little bastard just had to show up... *sigh* Not fair!

Saying that up is down will not make up, down.



~Gene Burns

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Chapter 30

Postby DreamsToDream » Fri Jun 04, 2004 11:42 pm

NOOOOO Dont Stop There!! What Bastard Has Tara Afraid Now?? Is It Mr Maclay? Its Mr Maclay Isnt It! Darn Him!!!:rage

D2D



Damn You Vile Woman!!!- Stewie Griffin



I Try My Best To Feed Her Appetite, And Keep Her Coming Every Night... - "This Love" By Maroon 5

DreamsToDream
 


Re: Chapter 30

Postby pipsberg » Fri Jun 04, 2004 11:45 pm

Aww that was great... and now the plot thickens. Dumm du dummm!

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

pipsberg
 


> Re: Chapter 30

Postby tmr » Fri Jun 04, 2004 11:53 pm

you have to make it better they can't hurt :tara they can't





freat fic

:pride :peace

tmr
 


Re: Chapter 30

Postby BurningWhiteRose » Fri Jun 04, 2004 11:58 pm

NO!



I know you didnt...its not....is it!?! It cant be! I thought they had just let it go...



PLEASE DONT LET IT BE HER BROTHER OR DAD!!! :pray :pray :pray :pray :pray :pray :pray



Sincerely,

:flower BWR

BurningWhiteRose
 


Re: Chapter 30

Postby Axel Avalon » Sat Jun 05, 2004 12:06 am

DUDE YOU ROCK:applause :applause :applause :applause

THAT WAS AWESOME:applause :applause :applause :applause

I BET THE SICK FUCKER WHO GRABBED HER IS HER FATHER

:rage :rage :rage :rage :rage :rage :rage :rage :rage :rage :rage :rage





NOW I'M THINKING :wtf IS GOING TO HAPPEN NOW

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE









- - - - - - - - The greatest human accomplishment is being able to go to ones grave knowing that at some point in your life you loved someone completely............... that and that you had some good fucks.

Axel Avalon
 


Re: Chapter 30

Postby sharleen711 » Sat Jun 05, 2004 3:11 am

I love you fic!

.....except for this bastard

I hope it will go on better, please....:pray

Can't wait for the next update...

( and i love Calvin and Hobbes!...)



Edited by: sharleen711 at: 6/5/04 2:14 am
sharleen711
 


Re: Chapter 30

Postby russ » Sat Jun 05, 2004 4:52 am

Hi Alcy,



It's a good thing a person can't actually die of embarrassment, otherwise the story would have come to a sad and premature end. "If you're doing it then you can talk about it," says Faith. Maybe for her that's true, but for many of us, and certainly for shy W/T, it's not that way at all. By the way, is beetroot something you normally put on burgers in NZ? 'Cause, I have to say, Gross!



Tara has known more happiness the last months than in her whole life before. Now the source of her misery is back, and already becoming violent. Is she to be dragged back to that life? Who can save her from this tyrant who has law and custom on his side? Alcy of the evil cliffhanger strikes again!



Russ

russ
 


Re: Update

Postby photographer02 » Sat Jun 05, 2004 9:25 am

Wow...great update!!



OH NO!! I hope nothing will happen to Poor Tara! Is it Hugh? Or the father? Or the brother? If it is Hugh....ARGGHH!! Or father or brother...:rage



Anyway, don't leave us like that!! Update soon!



Sincerely,

photographer02

photographer02
 


Re: Update

Postby veiled isis moon » Mon Jun 07, 2004 6:51 pm

Now Alcy, that just wasn't a nice thing to do bad, bad girl! Just when things were going so sweetly, she has to be scared shitless and we arrive at angstville........... I LOVE IT! I'm obviously not so happy that Tara is so scared by her father/brother, i'm guessing due to the 'familiar face' bit, unless someone else has been a bastard to her, in which case i'm back to being......Who is it????



Loved the scene with the five girls all together having lunch. Willow and Tara are just so easy to read, the red faces..........wrong words......... shy glances....please!! Like they'd get away with it with Faith and Anya there! No chance.



Okay, okay, okay *hands in the air* your all innocent........and Captain Red is not naughty............it's just your evil twin, or split personality that writes all the naughty bits.......you do the fluff!



Michelle.x

veiled isis moon
 


Re: Update

Postby jixer » Tue Jun 08, 2004 12:04 am

Hello Kittens-



Oh no! Much happiness, true love and then-the bad guy! I'm not even going to speculate about who it is because Alcy can be tricky...no I mean is a clever writer. That's what I meant, really!





Jixer

jixer
 


Re: Fic: What's your tale, nightingale? (AU)

Postby KiwiAlcyone » Tue Jun 08, 2004 9:19 pm

her BRIGHTeyes: wow, I caused a bit of a rollercoaster of emoticons huh? Stay tuned to find out who it is but you are very right not to like him. :rage



Tempest Duer: I know, I’m evil and mean for not being able to write continuous fluff but hey…a gems not polished without a little friction!



Dreams to Dream: I’m certainly not stopping there! Would I do that to you kittens?



pipsberg: Thanks so much, more soon!



tmr: This is Pens, of course I will make it better…I promise. ;)



Burning White Rose: I did…I’m sorry…I’m a meanie but this aspect of the story had to be dealt with.



Axel Avalon: Thanks so much. Hopefully more can be delivered very soon!



sharleen711: Thanks for joining in on the fun! Calvin and Hobbes is very cool!



russ: Death by embarrassment is certainly not the happy ending that I, and everyone else, is hoping for. You don’t put beetroot on burgers in the US? If you ask for a burger with everything here then yes, you will get beetroot on it! I hate it!!

I think I’m starting to get addicted to cliffhangers sorry! But I always make everything all better…it may just be a little rough until then – Kleenex is prolly needed. :sob



photographer2: I’m working on it very speedily for all the wonderful kittens – we cant leave Tara in perpetual peril now can we?



veiled isis moon: lol, I’m glad you love it cos I love writing it! And you’re exactly right about my having spilt personalities. I think late at night my naughty twin comes out and writes certain scenes for me. I do the innocent stuff! :whistle



jixer: woohoo, I’m clever!…or I might just be tricky! There’s bad guys galore in this fic so it was really only a matter of time before one of them reared their very ugly heads!



Sorry for the complete lack of W/T updatey goodness but our landlord is kicking us out of our apartment so we’re busy hunting for a new place to live atm.

Thanks so much for all your wonderful feedback and I hope to deliver the next chapter ever so soon because I know you’re all hanging on to see if Tara is ok.



Much love to you all



:peace Alcy

Reality continues to ruin my life - Calvin and Hobbes

KiwiAlcyone
 


Re: Chapter 30

Postby pipsberg » Tue Jun 08, 2004 11:50 pm

Alcy,



Sorry to hear about your apt. emergency. Good luck finding a place. Take your time, I know rl can be a bitch.

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

pipsberg
 


Re: Chapter 30

Postby gabbles » Wed Jun 09, 2004 5:12 am

Ahh! Let Tara go! *realises bad evil man cant here her*



*ahem* :)



Ok....loved the update, and the teasing Tara and Willow got from Faith and Co. Was so sweet and cute and funny all at once.



*sitting on edge of chair* Can Ibeat the peson up? Is it Donny? Or Hugh? Or her father? Please, let me have a few moments alone in a room with them?



Hope you get youe apartment situation sorted out Alcy:)

*hugz*

~Gabs

"I'm known as the fat lesbian chick on Buffy. Of course, I mean you stand me next to an actress like Sarah and I look like I'll eat her. *beat* Wait, that didn't sound right. But, you know what I mean."-Amber

gabbles
 


Re: Chapter 30

Postby veiled isis moon » Wed Jun 09, 2004 3:56 pm

Yeah riiight! I believe you!



Michelle.x

veiled isis moon
 


Re: Chapter 30

Postby her BRIGHTeyes » Wed Jun 09, 2004 4:03 pm

good luck finding a new place. :)

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she had eyes bright enough to burn me --conor oberst

her BRIGHTeyes
 


Re: Chapter 30

Postby KiwiAlcyone » Wed Jun 09, 2004 8:28 pm

pipsberg: Thanks so much, hopefully it won’t take long :)



Gabs: Trust me – if evil fic men could hear us – Willow and Tara would be very safe indeed! Do you want some grenades? Thanks for the feedback!



veiled isis moon: Have I ever given you cause to not believe me? :p



her BRIGHTeyes: Thanks – hopefully somewhere better!



Okay, I'm busy writing right now everyone - new update by the weekend if not sooner. Although we have heaps of places to go and look at on Saturday - should be fun, not :P



:peace Alcy



Reality continues to ruin my life - Calvin and Hobbes

KiwiAlcyone
 


...

Postby Tibbs » Wed Jun 09, 2004 10:29 pm

Loving this fic.



It's one of the ones that keep me awake while I do the overnight shifts at work. Thanks for that! :D



Update soon!



Tibbs

:pride

Tibbs
 


Re: ...

Postby veiled isis moon » Thu Jun 10, 2004 3:38 pm

Okay well no.....you haven't......true, but.........a sweet and inocent mind couldn't just think that stuff up unless you had something to work off of. A sweet and inocent mind wouldn't know that such things even existed!!



So i'm going with my previous statement.........inocent mind, i think not.......well.........not totally.........maybe a little........along with a whole lota naughty!! It's all good fun!



Michelle.x

veiled isis moon
 


Re: ...

Postby Tempest Duer » Thu Jun 10, 2004 10:07 pm

Nice metaphor, sexy.

Saying that up is down will not make up, down.



~Gene Burns

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Chapter 31

Postby Tempest Duer » Thu Jun 10, 2004 10:24 pm

Okay, not liking the Tara getting beaten up, but I'm a sucker for hurt/comfort situations and Willow is so cute when she's protective.

Saying that up is down will not make up, down.



~Gene Burns

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Chapter 31

Postby BurningWhiteRose » Thu Jun 10, 2004 10:25 pm

:rage :mad :fit :fit2 :angry



That arrogant son of a....Wow I hate that man. No one should do that! Its so evil. Willow was all dressed up, ready for a date, but the date's late. She goes out to look and finds her date beaten and bloody on the floor of a shop. YOU HAD BETTER HAVE LOTS OF LOVIN TO COMPENSATE!! THAT WAS VERY VERY UPSETTING!! IM CRYING A RIVER, AND I HATE JUSTIN TIMBERLAKE!



:sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob :sob



In other words, I love this, keep going.



Sincerely,

:flower BWR



Ps: Dont cry Argentina

BurningWhiteRose
 


Re: Chapter 31

Postby her BRIGHTeyes » Thu Jun 10, 2004 10:39 pm

oh my.

just. oh no.

with the... and the. and the ouchies.

and the crying. and with the sadness.

and then more tears.

and then the worrying.

and then with more confusion.

and then the gasps.

and the fright.

and the sadness.

and. oh. geez. i need to lie down.



fluffy goodness soon? no more angst for a bit? :flirt



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she had eyes bright enough to burn me --conor oberst

her BRIGHTeyes
 


Re: Chapter 31

Postby pipsberg » Thu Jun 10, 2004 11:25 pm

Oh my. What a great emotional update. I loved it!!



Quote:
“You won’t…besides, I’ll feel safer in your arms.”




This just summed up the w/t relationship in your story and it is so beautiful. Thanks for the update and I am so happy to see much more.



:peace

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

pipsberg
 


Re: Chapter 31

Postby wimpy0729 » Thu Jun 10, 2004 11:36 pm

OMG Alcy -- you should have put up a Kleenex warning for that one. Man, my stomach is in knots and my heart feels like it's been ripped out and stomped all over. Don't like Tara getting hurt...NO, NO, NO!!! So, so tired of it! Because, that's no good, because then Willow's pain is unbearable, but she wants to be strong but knows she can't because she feels what Tara feels, oh, that just sucks!



The sweetness was when Tara's thoughts of Willow got her through the crappy stuff. Willow loves her! Okay, back to the tissues.



Did I mention I hate Mr. Maclay? That's the evil the world needs to be worried about -- not what's in his sick, twisted little mind as being evil!



Okay, now I'm going to try to think happy thoughts of the girls resting comfortably together and waking up to a better, brighter day, with lots of goodness that you'll be bringing them, right? Well, eventually, right?



Wimpy

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