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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby Artemis » Mon Nov 29, 2004 10:02 pm

Eeep! I missed giving feedback for a whole chapter - bad me! This is what I get for thinking "Oh, I'll do it tomorrow..." - mind you, it was 3am when I thought that, so the feedback had I left it might've been kinda incoherent in any case :)



So, for the previous chapter: love Willow thinking about Tara. Suuuure she's gonna just spend a night in the town and then mosey on out of it without a backward glance... :) And I'm looking forward to seeing Tara's interaction with Willow now that she's got a better - and non-dirt-encrusted - look at her.



Which I'll do right now as I read the new chapter :)

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Artemis
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby meretricious » Mon Nov 29, 2004 10:31 pm

so glad you updated-i'm having the kind of night where ringing phone+hyper dog=hot chocolate all over my remote and my favorite big head todd and the monsters t-shirt, but flirty update makes all things better :) mistaken gender indentity, always fun, i can totally see "will" with a julie andrews victor/victoria reveal in her future. and willow getting large with the butch there at the end, very nice.

but how does donnie even keep a business running? i guess tara's hard work, and the demand for booze keeps him just above water-he and warren deserve each other-mary

let's do it let's do it let's jump
in with both feet~julia fordham

meretricious
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby EasierSaid » Mon Nov 29, 2004 11:19 pm

Well I'll be! Good stuff, Ms. Cameron. I loved how Tara's first thought was 'well shoot he's just an itty bitty thing'. For some reason, that cracks me up; not only is she possibly falling in love with a man (horrors! ) but a boy (not even old enough to shave)! Warren... well what can you say about him... doesn't cut that imposing a figure (cause you know, Warren) but authoritative nonetheless. I'm very intrigued about Willow's adverse reaction to him. Surely it can't be just because she's in drag... (although, in them days that thar might be enough). Protective Willow *swoon* gotta love that. Can't wait to see what happens next - thanks so much!

EasierSaid
 


Update

Postby wimpy0729 » Tue Nov 30, 2004 1:51 am

Don't worry, I'm being good. No asses were grabbed during the typing of this feedback.



Whoa there...what's this? Tara having feelings for a man...a smooth-faced, small-boned, flirtatious, protective young man. What's this world coming to?



Loved Will and the age discussion, and Tara being the older woman. Again, the delicious flirting. Willow is so adorable.



It's cute how Tara is having this inner turmoil about her having the feelings for this person, not typically her type, but yet I think she senses something very special about him/her. I am so looking forward to the chapter when all is revealed. And yes, I mean that as a double entendre. Until the revelation, please feel free to torture me senseless.



BTW, this being the old west, there are ranches around yes? I'm thinking at the far edge of this here town, is the best little Bunny Ranch this side of the Pecos. And ya know what...ass grabbers are more than welcome.

:D





Wimpy





"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

wimpy0729
 


Re: Update

Postby silentinformer » Tue Nov 30, 2004 3:41 am

So I loved it although with the way you described Willows dress now i have an unmistakable image of a mobster i think it had something to do with the felt hat my mind immediatly went to a fedora :laugh well anyway Tara's disbelief at having feelings for Willow is understandable and I really liked how she sensed Will's instictual protectivness it just helps move the plot along so anyway can't wait for the next update :bow

silentinformer
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby Arwen276 » Tue Nov 30, 2004 5:56 am

This is simply delightful!

I really liked it! Tara being troubled by her attraction to a man, Will-ow, LOL ...

The sheriff moment was certainly awkward, I wonder what sorts of mischief Will Smith?? lol has caused!!



Can't wait for more!



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby Viximon » Tue Nov 30, 2004 6:37 am

Enjoying the story very much. Wow It's so cool. Tara's falling for Willow, Tara is falling for Willow :party What about Will? I mean "he" is so obiously flirting with Tara :glasses (in that cute maner :p ) but we don't know how Will is around others...you catch what I mean?



AGh! Donie and Warren businness parters? :rolleyes Nothing good of it.



Upload soon, please. I can't wait to read more about that wonderful fic

Viximon
 


Cool!

Postby Whisper » Tue Nov 30, 2004 2:59 pm

How cool! I love the whole western scenario, I have the whole picture in my mind. Say, will any of the other Scoobies be making an appearance? I loved the way you portrayed Willow, first the dust-covered outsider and then the smooth-faced protective "boy". And Will Smith? Priceless! :lmao



The relationship between Donnie and Tara is certainly interesting, Donnie being the irresponsible, but not abusive brother. I wonder if he will straighten himself up? :hmm



I absolutely loved the interaction between Willow and Tara. Poor Tara, falling in love with a "man". :lol I can't wait to see her reaction when she finds out Will's identity, I'm thinking she will either be pissed and storm out or she'll thank the gods. :p



And Warren... :fit2 Someone really needs to give him an ass kicking! I'm really curious about Willow's reaction to him, though. It wasn't fear of having her cover blown, was it? Or maybe she had an unpleasant story with authorities figures before? I can't wait to find out.



I also have been wondering what exactly is Willow's hole in the story, I kind of got the impression that she would be some kind of kick ass shooter or something, but her attitude with Warren kinda threw me off a bit. Is she going to be kicking some ass anytime soon?



Anyway, great fic! Can't wait for the next chapter! :bow

Whisper
 


Angst

Postby Idgie » Tue Nov 30, 2004 3:45 pm

Having survived the angst of School Days' misunderstandings about teacher-student relations, now I'm setting myself up for more drama regarding gender confusion. I hope Tara will figure out that "Will" is a woman sooner than she figured out Willow was a teacher.

This is a great story so far - I'm seeing a little bit of Maverick, with Willow playing Mel Gibson's part and Tara as Jodie Foster. Yum.

Idgie
 


Re: Angst

Postby robotguru » Tue Nov 30, 2004 5:54 pm

I've been naughty and not left feedback, i do check for updates every day though.



Heh, poor Tara, she'll find out soon though right?



Anyways, loving this fic, and don't worry about Western dialect, i am currently reading a book about drug users in Scotish dialect for English, it's called Trainspotting, the Western dialect is a nice change.



More?



:bounce

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There can be no rainbow without rain, you cannot know true happiness until you know sadness first.

robotguru
 


One of the very few virtues of having a bad cold....

Postby babyblue » Tue Nov 30, 2004 7:00 pm

...is that it gives you the chance to read in bed, with a laptop serving as an ersatz hot water bottle. This fic is a lot of fun to read. I've always enjoyed genre fiction and you handle it so well I'm intrigued by which one you might tackle next... But for the moment, I'm happy to settle back, kick up my heels, and enjoy this fine yarn.



babyblue

babyblue
 


Re: One of the very few virtues of having a bad cold....

Postby eirnlove » Tue Nov 30, 2004 10:24 pm

I loved the fic. The worst thing about every good fic is that you have to wait to read...



:crash

eirnlove
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby WickedReds » Tue Nov 30, 2004 11:21 pm

Haha... she thinks... shes a he... :lmao

Warren is a fuckmook.. so when do some of us kittens get to play...



-reds:willow



Mein Banane tanzt für Schmutz :banana

Smutbunny Anthem: *sung to tune from Goldfinger* Smutbunnies...they'e the bunnies, the bunnies that love the smut...and Willow's butt. They surf for smut fiction...always lookin' for the next naked sweaty fix...of Tara's tits.- Written By Cameron(tarawhipped) For Us Smut Bunnies

WickedReds
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby Tempest Duer » Tue Nov 30, 2004 11:42 pm

Yes indeed, I did say "shaft." But I'll have you know that I can make anything lewd if I want it to be. Up to and including "gift basket." (which by the way is for private viewing only.)



Poor Tara! She thinks she's falling for a man! I'm reminded of Dreiser's "Just One of the Wiccans" from all of the Willow in Drag escapades.

I got bitten by a drunk lesbian! Does that mean I'll turn into one?



~my friend Mary

Tempest Duer
 


Chp 4

Postby hotydnic » Wed Dec 01, 2004 3:57 am

oh no!! just browsing thru and find this nice fic and.. oh no!! no updates yet???

*pace pace pace... *



love the story.. more please??? :blush

Edited by: hotydnic at: 12/2/04 12:48 am
hotydnic
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby pipsberg » Wed Dec 01, 2004 3:38 pm

Cameron,



Long time reader, first time comments (on this story anyway). I love your new tale. Westerns are great, especially if they involve a cross dressing red-headed hottie named Willow. I can't wait for more. Sorry for the lack of feedback of late. I've been neglectful to you, one of my most favorite writers.



:peace

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

pipsberg
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby Artemis » Thu Dec 02, 2004 9:42 am

Okay, so, I'm up to date now :)



:clap Greatness! Poor Tara, all confused about being in love with an apparently-male man. But what a man Willow is :D



She sure didn't like it when the Law (in the less-than-worthy guise of Warren) lumbered in, did she? Methinks she's maybe gotten her pretty face on a couple of Wanted posters. The question is, if 'Will' is a wanted man (by someone other than Tara, of course), does that apply to Willow, or might the not-too-inspiring Sheriff not put two and two together?



And yeah, suuuure Donnie's not going to play cards tonight... or end up passed out and smelling of cheap whiskey, or somesuch thing...

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Artemis
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby shuyaku » Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:40 pm

This fic is just so much fun! :D I too am wondering about Willow's (almost over) reaction to the Sheriff. She has so much confidence until he comes in. Is she as Artemis mentioned 'Wanted'? Or is she nervous about being discovered for her true self (someone else mentioned that as well)? Great stuff!



I think we need a round of sasparillas :laugh Don't you?

-shuyaku

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby alysagoddess85 » Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:58 pm

ok so i just read this whole thing...and so now im commenting...how the hell can people think willows a he?!?! haha...thats one girly man thats for sure...ooo maybe her and warren can get into a gun duel and warren can die! hehe...and yea im all for ginas idea of you sticking kittens in there! can i be a rodeo person?! wait...did they have rodeos back then?? are u putting a rodeo in here?! dammit...i wanna be a rodeo person...OOOo or a bank robber!! hehe...nevermind.



anyways...awesome story! cant wait for more!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

alysagoddess85
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby WickedReds » Thu Dec 02, 2004 3:47 pm

see Cam my girlfirend (alysagoddess85) wants in on the kitten fun too... see that y im gonna behave.. unlike wimpy and the ass grabing... ill just lear and chat.. and grab my girlfends ass..



-reds:willow



Mein Banane tanzt für Schmutz:banana

Smutbunny Anthem: *sung to tune from Goldfinger* Smutbunnies...they'e the bunnies, the bunnies that love the smut...and Willow's butt. They surf for smut fiction...always lookin' for the next naked sweaty fix...of Tara's tits.- Written By Cameron(tarawhipped) For Us Smut Bunnies

WickedReds
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby robotguru » Thu Dec 02, 2004 3:54 pm

If the game is Texas Holdem, you'd find me at the poker table :p Pity the Sheriff cheats though.



That or listening to some gals problems, maybe a guys if he's cute :p

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There can be no rainbow without rain, you cannot know true happiness until you know sadness first.

robotguru
 


The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 5

Postby tarawhipped » Thu Dec 02, 2004 6:12 pm

Title: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Author: tarawhipped (Cameron)

Email: tarawhipped@hotmail.com

Rating: R (just to be safe)

Disclaimer: All characters are the property of Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy

Feedback: Throws head back and screams YESSS!!!

Distribution: Take it, just tell me where to visit it!

Summary: A redheaded stranger rides into a town full of trouble and meets a blonde barmaid. Can they save each other and the town?

Setting: AU (the Old West)




Chapter 5



Willow stole a furtive glance at Tara, the fortieth or so in the hour since she’d sat down. Like every other time, the blonde had the same pensive expression: slightly furrowed brow, set jaw, eyes that seemed to focus on everything and nothing at the same time. Not once had the redhead caught the object of her attention looking back at her, but she believed in her gut that she was at least part of the reason for the barmaid’s consternation. She tried to tell herself that was wishful, arrogant thinking on her part, but the look in those soulful blue eyes when their hands had touched told her otherwise.


‘It’s like she was seeing right into me, like she knew I woulda taken on every man in this whole rotten town for her. And why the hell am I acting this way? I ain’t even gonna be here come mornin’. Not to mention she thinks I’m a man, for pete’s sake. It’s not like she could ever love me. Why did I have to be so damn charming? It’s a curse is what it is.’


“Hellooo? Will!”


Willow jerked her head as a hand waved in front of her face, and she looked in confusion at the dark haired man on her left.


“You playin’ poker or daydreamin’?” he grinned knowingly. “I know we ain’t as nice to look at as a certain blonde saloonkeeper, but you could at least try to pay attention.”


Willow cursed under her breath and tried not to blush. Apparently her sneakiness wasn’t as sneaky as she believed.


“Sorry Xander. Where we at?”


“Larry raised, Clem folded.”


“Right,” she nodded, peering down at the cards held close to her vest, sighing, and tossing them down on the table. She knew she could bluff circles around these guys, but found her concentration and desire lacking. An hour earlier, when Tara had stuttered that she needed to get back to work, Willow had grudgingly accepted the invitation to join the three men. Since then, she’d come to genuinely enjoy their company.


The barber, Larry, was big as an ox and acted a fool, grabbing and snorting at every whore who passed within three feet of him. They all seemed pleased by the attention, however, and Willow suspected he did it more out of habit and expectation than anything.


Xander was the town’s sole carpenter, which helped account for the lack of buildings. He reminded Willow of a puppy she’d had as a child: friendly, over-enthusiastic, eager for praise, but overall fun to be around. As the night’s most consistent winner, he had also generously bought every round of drinks.


Clem had been a stage driver until the railroad drove him out of business. Now he manned the post office located inside the general store. The old timer was so wrinkled Willow feared his face would fall right off, and when he removed his slouch hat to scratch his bald head, his large ears flapped like flags in a breeze.


The three men had been thoroughly entertaining, and surprisingly informative. Shortly after joining them, Willow inquired about the Sheriff.


“You don’t want to mess with that one,” Clem had earnestly proclaimed, looking nervously toward the back room. “He may not look like much, but he’s bad news.”


“Yeah,” Larry heartily agreed. “He’s got a mean streak longer’n my—”


“And he’s married to the Mayor’s daughter,” Xander hastily interjected. “So he can pretty much do whatever he wants.”


Willow frowned, thinking about the familiar way the Sheriff had addressed Tara, and how obviously cowed Donnie was by him. As several other men entered the saloon and headed straight for the back room, her new friends eagerly filled Willow in on them.


“That little weasel was Deputy Andrew, though most of the time he works in the bank. Word is he’s smart—went to college and ever’thing—but he ain’t got the sense God gave a turnip.”


“That’s the mortician. Folks say he spends so much time with corpses he’s starting to look like one—him and his wife too. Everybody calls him Spike on account of when he first got here he had to remove a railroad spike outta some poor sap’s head and he passed out. Nice guy though. Probably got the steadiest job in town.”


“That’s our new preacher, just arrived from St. Lou a couple of months ago. I think he spends more time in here than he does in church, and Larry claims he saw him sneaking out of Madam Darla’s one night last week.”


“I’m telling you it was him,” the barber insisted. “I couldn’t see his face too good, but I heard one of the girls call him Ethan.”


“So how come none of you are back there?” Willow casually asked as she shuffled the deck. All three paused and stared at her.


“Well, you see Will, that’s complicated,” Xander spoke slowly, gesturing vaguely with his hands.


“We ain’t got the money,” Larry clarified.


“I like it out here,” Clem added, smiling and nodding, ears flapping.


“It’s also invitation only,” Xander continued. “’Cept it’s more like a command. And those commanded end up losing everything they have, and I mean everything: money, business, home…everything."


‘Donnie,’ Willow thought, looking toward the back room. When her eyes shifted over to the bar again, she saw Tara lift up a tray of glasses in one hand and pull aside the curtain.


“Donnie’s gotta be close to staking the saloon by now,” Larry assessed bitterly.


“Why don’t he just say no? Decline the ‘invitation’?” Willow speculated. Her eyes were still focused on the curtain, thus missing the worried looks that passed between the men. At length Xander spoke, his voice hushed but clear.


“Because it don’t make no difference. If you got something they want…the Mayor…the Sheriff…they’re gonna get it. The only difference is that the folks that say no ain’t around anymore to complain.”


“Donnie shoulda seen it coming,” Larry spat. “He shoulda high-tailed it outta here when they first pegged him. Damn fool.”


“I just feel bad for his sister.” Clem shook his head sadly. “Say what you will about Donnie, but she doesn’t deserve this. Such a sweet girl.”


Willow felt a chill creep up her spine at the implication of Tara’s predicament. She contemplated beating the hide off of Donnie…the Sheriff…hell, the Mayor too.


‘What’s she gonna do if Donnie loses it all?’ she thought grimly. ‘Where’s she gonna go? Who’s gonna take care of her?’


As Willow watched, the curtain parted and Tara stepped quickly behind the bar. In the moment before the blonde had turned her back to the room, Willow had seen her face and knew what was written in the pained expression.


‘Donnie’s playing…and he’s losing.’




TBC





What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

Edited by: tarawhipped at: 12/2/04 10:41 pm
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 4

Postby tarawhipped » Thu Dec 02, 2004 7:05 pm

I can’t begin to tell you all how blown away I am by all the lovely feedback. This story’s hardly begun, and it’s so much fun to write, and it means a lot that people are enjoying it. Thank you.



Artemis: Hiya Chris, glad you’re all caught up. I guess it’s no surprise that Willow’s going to find a reason to stay awhile, though as of this next chapter, she’s still telling herself she’s leaving. And your assumption about her relationship with the Law is not far off. Maybe not Wanted posters, but wanted nonetheless, and soon someone (not telling who, yet) will think they recognize ol’ Red.


meretricious: I’m happy the update was a treat, Mary. I have a spastic cat, so I understand. I love playing with gender identity, and Julie Andrews…*sigh*…I swear her Maria in Sound of Music is the reason I’m a lesbian.

Tara is most definitely the one keeping the business running, and not to take away from her hard work, but it is a one-saloon town. Where else are parched folks gonna go?


EasierSaid: Thanks Heather! I love the way you phrase your synopses, it always gives me a chuckle.

Warren alone does seem like he’d be an inconsequential ass, but in this case he’s got someone who’s actually dangerous calling the shots, so he’s going to be trouble. As for Willow’s reaction, it’s not just the clothes. And I’m glad you like protective Willow (how come I never make girls swoon?:( ) cause there’ll be a lot more of her.


wimpy0729: Nice to see you’re behavin’ yerself, Wimpy. Glad you liked the flirting and Tara’s thoughts. It’ll be a while before all is revealed (though it will be a full reveal when it happens). In the meantime, there will be more of the “does gender really matter when it comes to love” type soul-searching.

As for ranches…I suppose there must be one somewhere…it’s a little far off right now though.


silentinformer: Sorry about the fashion confusion. I suck at describing clothes and hair and hats and probably many other things. I did have in mind the Maverick style that Idgie mentioned, though. Glad you liked Tara’s disbelief at her own feelings. I wanted to show that while heterosexuality may be society’s idea of normal, it’s not for her. How she deals with her feelings will play a big role.


Arwen276: Thank you Arwen! Willow’s shady past won’t be revealed for a bit, though there may be hints of it in another couple of chapters. Glad you appreciated the name thing.


Viximon: Thank you Viximon, and I’m glad you like it. Ahh, so you’re wondering if ‘Will’ flirts with all the ladies or just Tara? Well, whatever her history, Willow’s gonna realize pretty quickly that Tara’s a special case, and it’s not just casual flirting.


Whisper: Thanks Whisper! There will indeed be many people from the Buffy-verse popping up, several in the next chapter. As for Donnie, the cards are (literally) stacked against him, but I wanted to make him more of a hard-luck guy than a villain. There’s going to be enough bad guys in this story as it is. Speaking of which, Willow’s reaction to Warren has less to do with her disguise than with her past (and present) activities. Don’t worry, though, he’ll eventually get what’s coming to him. Willow’s history will develop slowly, so I don’t want to say too much, but I’m glad you liked her interaction with Tara. As for Tara finding out Willow’s identity,
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I’m thinking she’ll either be pissed and storm out or she’ll thank the gods
Hmmm…possibly both.


Idgie: To even mention my fic in relation to School Days makes me feel incredibly honored. I too am a veteran of that wonderful ordeal, and now I see what I must do: string you all along until you’re begging for mercy and then drag it out just a little bit longer.:devil Much as I despise Mel Gibson, that is the general look I was going for with Willow, but Tara’s a lot less flashy than Jodie was. Thanks Idgie!


robotguru: No worries on lack of feedback, since you’ve more than made up for it by posting twice in one update now. Texas Holdem is sooo addictive, but unfortunately my poker face tends more towards :D or :fit2 instead of :| As for revealing Will/Willow:
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poor Tara, she’ll find out soon though right?
Ummm…define ‘soon.’


babyblue: Thank you bb, and I hope you’re feeling better. I discovered uber fic at Through the Looking Glass (Artemis’ site, there’s a link to it under ‘links’ if you haven’t seen it yet), and I thought it was so cool where people have taken these characters. Now you’ve got me thinking about what to do next…hmmm…but I think I better finish this one first.


eirnlove: I’m glad you like it, and I try not to make readers wait too long in between updates (mostly ‘cause I fear you’ll all go find some other fic and forget about mine).


WickedReds and alysagoddess85: Okay you two, no ganging up on me or I’ll put you in the story as two girls fighting over Donnie!:devilish Um, sorry mel, no rodeo, but a showdown between Will and Warren may be brewin’ in the future. Until then, just…play grabby-ass amongst yourselves or something. Oh, and Reds?
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Warren is a fuckmook
Errr…I don’t know what that is…but it sounds bad, so I guess he is.


TempestDuer: Oh! I love “Just One of the Wiccans.” That was a riot!
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I can make anything lewd
You truly have a gift there, my friend. There’s a laundromat on the north side of Chicago (in a fairly gay area) called ‘Queen’s Basket,’ and I just dissolve into giggles every time I go past it, wondering if the owner has a clue.


hotydnic: Stop pacing! You’re making me dizzy! Update coming right up.


pipsberg: No apology necessary, pips. I’m just thrilled to see you back on the board, one of my most favorite writers! I have to admit I was a little worried that I was stepping on your genre, so it means a lot to me that you like it.


shuyaku: Thank you! It’s been a lot of fun to write, and I’m glad people are finding it fun to read. While Willow definitely doesn’t want her feminine identity revealed, her reaction to Warren had more to do with other issues, which will play out in time.






What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

tarawhipped
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 5

Postby pipsberg » Thu Dec 02, 2004 9:28 pm

Cameron,



Awesome update! I really found the concern that Willow has for Tara, already fiercely protective of her in fact, very endearing. In the tradition of any great romance, your Willow (or Will) is chivalrous and kind, while at the same time being quiet and mysterious. Who IS this Will Smith. I giggle every time you use that name. *giggle*



I also like the vulnerable Tara. She's clearly trying to take care of herself, as she probably has had to all her life, but you can sense her impending troubles and how dissatisfied she is with her life.



I can't wait for more interaction between our girls. By the way, there was absolutely no genre stepping on here. Firstly, I don't own the genre any more than I own BtVS. And B) your western themed gender-bending in not that similar to my civil war "occasionally in drag" Willow. And finally, who cares! I love your writing so I want more. Between you, Heather, Chris and Alcy I'm in heaven on this board... where has Alcy been lately anyway? And Chris, no more Hellebore shorts? I'm one to talk, huh? LOL. Pot meet kettle.



Alright, enough rambling. More please Cameron!



:peace

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

pipsberg
 


*sings* you gotta know when to hold her, I mean, 'em...

Postby EasierSaid » Thu Dec 02, 2004 9:35 pm

I think I've learned a valuable lesson from this last update. Next time I'm in a strange city and I need the skinny on the locals, I'll need to find me a card game. Willow couldn't have asked to be sat at a better table, and you did a great job with all three of the newcomers (loved Clem's agreeable 'I like it out here' line, so him). Looks like the gangs all here; Spike, Darla, Ethan... going to be very interesting to see how things shake out. And Donnie... reminds me of that line from the movie 'Rounders', "if you can't spot the sucker in the first half hour at the table, then you ARE the sucker." Poor Tara, in love with a boy and sister to an unlucky chump. Great job Cameron, looking forward to reading more.



p.s. If the mayor is The Mayor and Warren is married to Faith I'm going to lose it... (in a good way, but still, preemptive, possible ew)



p.p.s. *ahem* Anybody that can write devastatingly charming probably makes the girls swoon plenty.

I'm just sayin'...

EasierSaid
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 5

Postby WickedReds » Thu Dec 02, 2004 9:55 pm

k ill stop ganging up now... and no fighting over donnie... eww gross...:puke

Ooo bad.. not good.. if Donnie keeps being an ass and losing.. poor tara...



-reds:willow



Mein Banane tanzt für Schmutz :banana

Smutbunny Anthem: *sung to tune from Goldfinger* Smutbunnies...they'e the bunnies, the bunnies that love the smut...and Willow's butt. They surf for smut fiction...always lookin' for the next naked sweaty fix...of Tara's tits.- Written By Cameron(tarawhipped) For Us Smut Bunnies

Edited by: WickedReds at: 12/2/04 8:59 pm
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Re: *sings* you gotta know when to hold her, I mean, 'em...

Postby alysagoddess85 » Thu Dec 02, 2004 10:44 pm

ok...so theres no rodeo...thats ok..shoot outs are good. and yea....gina and ill TRY and behave...sorta...maybe...ok probably not...but itll be fun! lol...well just ass grab each other..while yall go around and do whatever...i have NOOOO problem with that at all...and if i read that her and i are fighting over DONNIE(WTF?!?! EWW) i WILL come over there and 'beat the hide' off of ya! so there!



and if for any reason my girlfriends ass gets grabbed by someone other then me....yea...dont let it happen...lol...there will be a mother of a thread brawl! MY ASS!! haha.



oooo yea...and poor tara and the bar...lol...i almost forgot we had an update on here...this is like the kittens own western thread...but yea...update is angsty...dont like angsty...oooo make willlow and tara have sex on the bar!! hehe...ok well maybe nows not a good time...but later!



ok...off to go grab my girls ass...again...and again...and again....haha....yall soooo shouldnt have told me to do that.



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 5

Postby hotydnic » Thu Dec 02, 2004 11:30 pm

Updates!!! ha.. :laugh :read

i'll be good and stop pacing around here.. nice update by the way.. love the distracted looking "Will".. :rofl



Can't wait to see more of the story..

more please.. :pray *soon?*:pray





p/s: do you have other finished story out there?? :dance

Edited by: hotydnic at: 12/2/04 10:36 pm
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other fics

Postby tarawhipped » Fri Dec 03, 2004 12:45 am

Hi hotydnic! I just happened to catch your post, and thought I'd reply right away since I'm very flattered by your interest. My first fic, Secrets and Spies, can currently be found on page 7 (maybe 8 by the time I finish typing this). I also have a few short fics that I think are now on page 2. Thanks for asking!



-Cameron



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

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Miss Behavin

Postby wimpy0729 » Fri Dec 03, 2004 12:55 am

Alls I hafta say is that at the moment, I don't have to behave,...nope...I'm free to misbehave all I want to, even if it is in fic-land :p



Loved it again. Your introduction of the towns folk is so fun. Clem's all wrinkly with floppy ears, LMAO. Loved them all!



Still, Will bein all flustered and protective...still adorable. Poor Tara. Hope the revealing will be well worth the torture you're going to put us through, although, knowing you...I'm eagerly awaiting!!



More soon please!



Wimpy



"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara



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