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Re: Chapter 9

Postby hidden watson » Sat Jan 08, 2005 11:23 am

Totally over the moon that you're keeping to your resolution and continuing to write more fantastic fics. Don't think your readership can get enough of your stories, at least this is how particular reader feels, so more Island of Death, more short fics, more Green Eyed Red and more of whatever you're planning next :P . Please.



Donnie's suspicion and reaction to Willow was completely understandable, he has the sheriff's people getting at him left right and center and here was a complete stranger telling him (in a roundabout way) to leave town. I'm a little frustrated that he's so stubborn, he knows the sheriff wants his hide but just having bravado isn't enough, unless he has a good plan and people willing to help him, he was always going to end up in that proverbial pine box.



I honestly believe that he didn't think about what will happen to Tara if he lost his fight, but I'm glad Willow reminded him and opened his eyes to the harsh reality. Tara is capable, but again without help, she won't last long.



So finally they have help in the form of young Will. So how? Getting Tara out of town isn't the answer, he can't fight alone. The best thing he can do? Enlist the help of Will and some of his friends and come up with a plan to get rid of the sheriff and his minions. I wonder if Will is more, I don't know, powerful, strong, resourceful, than she's letting on. I won't be surprised if she pulled a secret weapon from some hidden compartment that will make them win. Well, apart from the fact that she's actually a girl. Which brings me to how that little tidbit will eventually be revealed and what Tara's reaction might be :glasses . Young William need to be more careful, babbling and calling forests "pretty" will blow his cover very soon and at this juncture, not a good idea.



Can't wait for what happens next. More please.



- greedy watson

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quiet thoughts

hidden watson
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Postby TromDeGrey » Sat Jan 08, 2005 3:59 pm

I am such an ass. I can't believe I waited until two nights ago to sit down and read this through. This is so much FUN!!!!! I loved the vernacular at the beginning and it has just been a terrific ride since! Forgive me for being late to the party. It's a horrible habit of mine. Oddly enough, I tend to like stories with a decent Donnie too. I know most folks just hate him on principle, but I keep wanting to find something redeeming about him. Another failure of the show, I suppose. I like him here. Flawed, but someone worthy of Tara's love at least. I'm enjoying Will and Tara's interactions too. I was as shocked as Tara when she thought she might be in love with him/her, but I adored how you brought it around again with the conversation with Anya. Sick, indeed. I can't wait for more!!





Trom's Brain: Rubbing the World the Wrong Way

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 9

Postby The Rose24 » Sat Jan 08, 2005 8:03 pm

Phew! I am glad you are continuing.



I am sure Willow will be happy to convince Tara to leave town with her. :grin

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Edited by: The Rose24  at: 1/8/05 7:05 pm
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Green Eyes

Postby wimpy0729 » Sat Jan 08, 2005 10:59 pm

Yay Cam!



You finally gave us the Will/Donnie conversation, and wow, how surprising to see Donnie act that way. Good for him. And good for Will. I like both of them considering what's going to happen to Tara.



And Xander's incompetence, lmao.



Great job! Can't wait for more.



Wimpy

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RE:resolved Donnie

Postby Viximon » Sun Jan 09, 2005 5:13 am

Wow, Yay. Yipie!!!:applause a update a update.



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“Name it,” Willow replied, feeling simultaneously defeated and inspired by the young man’s resolve.




mmm, I think Willow psoke too fast there. :laugh

I'm gessing Tara will be a hard bone, stuborn and loyal woman she is, I don't think she leave town so easily.



:D I can't wait to read how Willow manage that, if she manage. he hehe



Continue soon please, :bow

Viximon
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 9

Postby Reallybigpineapple » Sun Jan 09, 2005 6:17 pm

:D Phew!

That sure was a close 'un! The gals were restless almost to the point of duellin' at high noon, here partner! Mighty fine timin' with this here update... Well, we'll just be waitin' for the next un' over here on the porch... Just drop by if ya want a shoot of that old cactus whisky... We sure is much obliged for the entertainment, ma'm! We sure would be grateful if we could see some more of miss Anya as well some courtin' and smoochin' sometime in the near future...:bounce The offer to rid this here town of that no-good scallywag still stands... Once again, me and the gals are much obliged... The cattle sends their regards!:moo :flower :bigkiss

Edited by: Reallybigpineapple at: 1/9/05 5:18 pm
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Howdy, Ma'am.

Postby thebardgirl » Mon Jan 10, 2005 2:06 am

*elizabeth moseys onto thread wearing long jacket, spurs, Stetson and full-cowgirl outfit*



*tips hat to Cameron, sitting elegantly at bar, sipping at an extremely fancy drink, notices other kittens and tips hat to them as well, throws a coin into musician's hat onto piano*



*sees Tara behind bar and can't help but stand for a while, staring*



"Humina, humina..." :eyebrow



*Tara glares and clears throat*



"Erp."



*Goes over to Cameron--avoiding eyecontact with barmaid, now--slowly moseying with every jingle of her spurs*



"Ma'am. I've been wantin' to tell yas how much I do appreeceeate a good ol' story now and then. This is a mighty-fine one at that, and I'm 'shamed to say I haven't found it 'til oh...I reckon 'bout five hours ago."



*Cameron, unimpressed, holds up a cigarette to light, but thebardgirl swiftly leans in and lights it for her*



"So, I's been workin' and workin' up a storm, and while it's nothing much....*shakes match of fire*...compared to this here story..."



*bardgirl pulls out wide sheet of rolled paper with red ribbon tying it and hands it to Cameron*



"I just...want'd to show you how much I love this here story...and I figur' since I came in so late, you deserved somethin' to make up for't."



Green Eyed Red and Miss Horsey



*bardgirl bows and delights in seeing when rising Cameron's indifferent face become slightly amused*



"Ma'am." *tips hat and walks out of Saloon, but turns in last moment, sunset bleeding onto her profile.*



"Oh, and, thankyee kindly for the chance to talk like this. T'aint nothin' better than a bad west'rn dialecKt."



*jumps onto her flee-bitten grey and rides off to local Broffle, where she's been achin' to go since the beginning of puberty.*



"HYAH! Giddyyup! There's dames waitin' for a visit!"



~The Sketch-Rider of the West :D





You shanked my janga ship!



thebardgirl
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 9

Postby thebardgirl » Fri Jan 14, 2005 7:01 pm

*stumbles in from Broffle with glassy-eyed stare on her face and lots of red lip-imprints on her face*



"Uhmahaliha..."



*sees Tara at bar, tsking at elizabeth's lack of proper conduct*



"Hiyaash..." *elizabeth waves drunkenly*



*Tara scoffs and walks off*



"Whoaky...we'll talk later...but hey! Couldya give this *hickup* to Cameron *hickup*"



*Tara loathingly takes paper*



*elizabeth smiles lazily and then falls over unconscious*



*Tara looks at her own potrait and quirks eyebrow at unconscious girl on the floor*



"Kittens...are so weird."



Lovely Tara, Western Barmaid





-elizabeth :spin



p.s. Dear Cameron, I know asked about clothing, and barely used it. But! I just liked this expression more than a cartoon-like one as with Willow. Cheers!

You shanked my janga ship!



thebardgirl
 


Re: Howdy, Ma'am.

Postby terra21 » Sat Jan 15, 2005 7:52 pm

I finally had the chance to catch up on this fic and the whole time I was reading I had the tune to "When Johnny Comes Marching Home" in my head.



Loved the interaction between Tara and Donnie. And Will and her poker buddies. You're a delightful storyteller Cam!



I ain't fixin ta beg, but I'm ready fer sum Will and Tara smoochies, as always.



terra



"And we'll all feel gay

When Johnny comes marching home"

terra21
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 9

Postby Tempest Duer » Sat Jan 15, 2005 11:36 pm

Cameron - Way to keep us hanging. Because of course none of us can be sure that Tara won't be immune to all of Willow's charm...



Liz - Oh wow... your pictures are so adorable! I love them. Really.

I got bitten by a drunk lesbian! Does that mean I'll turn into one?



~my friend Mary

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Howdy, Ma'am.

Postby Artemis » Sun Jan 16, 2005 3:26 am

Elizabeth: Wow, Tara really is lovely :heart I love the way the light's playing across her face, it's so real. And Willow looks so adorable in her Western gear :) And Horsey looks great, very lifelike. I'll put them up on Looking-glass, I hope that's okay?

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Edited by: Artemis at: 1/16/05 2:30 am
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 9

Postby wimpy0729 » Sun Jan 16, 2005 12:40 pm

Dearest Cameron, so sorry I'm late. Forgive me? Believe me, I have a very, very good reason. ;)



Anyway, great job again. Now I can't wait to see what these interesting minds have planned for the bad guys.



Gimme more please!



Wimpy

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

wimpy0729
 


Re: Howdy, Ma'am.

Postby thebardgirl » Sun Jan 16, 2005 5:46 pm

Tempest Duer: Aww...thankyou, I was majorly inspired by this story...exactly my cup of tea. Melodrama/comedy with OH so much W/T sweetness. Yay!



Artemis: Oh that's absolutely no problem at all, it's really cool of you and Cameron to want to stick my humble addition on with the fab-story. Hurrah! Thanks again!



Cameron: Update? Please? I know you said maybe-possibly-Monday. But...well, monday is SO far away, it being Sunday and all and....I'm impatient!



Elizabeth: Why am I talking to you? I am you. Go away!



*scampers off*



-elizabeth :spin

You shanked my janga ship!



Edited by: thebardgirl at: 1/16/05 4:46 pm
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 9

Postby Tempest Duer » Mon Jan 17, 2005 4:19 pm

You don't have to be so humble Liz, because you totally rock. You're one of the few artists who can do justice to Willow and Tara and their incredible hotness.

I got bitten by a drunk lesbian! Does that mean I'll turn into one?



~my friend Mary

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Howdy, Ma'am.

Postby WickedReds » Mon Jan 17, 2005 4:28 pm

*thrown in thread* Ya stupid horse.. *dust off jacket* Y Howdy there Cam... see what the ummm dog draged in.. *smiles big and points at self*... I must say that there was a great up date... but i dont think that pretty bar maids gonna high tail it out of town... *walks up to bar* see *looks at Tara beatting off kittens* errr... ummm... maybe she will leave us kittens took over the Bar... *Gets a glare from Tara* EEK!..... *runs in courner* more please Camminess...



-reds:willow



Meine Banane tanzt für Rußflocke :banana

Smutbunny Anthem: *sung to tune from Goldfinger* Smutbunnies...they'e the bunnies, the bunnies that love the smut...and Willow's butt. They surf for smut fiction...always lookin' for the next naked sweaty fix...of Tara's tits.- Written By Cameron(tarawhipped) For Us Smut Bunnies

Edited by: WickedReds at: 1/17/05 4:44 pm
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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 9

Postby stillrunning » Sat Jan 22, 2005 8:17 pm

Hey y'all(sorry I actually tend to say that a lot in real life). Just wanted to say that I'm loving this fic. I can't wait for Tara to find out that Willow's really a girl!! And I think you just have the characters totally nailed, from Warren as a *gasp* scumbag(who would've guessed it?!) to Cordelia and Harmony as hookers. Everythings perfect!!

"Heaven's not a place that you go when you die...it's that moment in life when you actually feel alive"

stillrunning
 


The Return of the Sketch Rider of the West

Postby thebardgirl » Sun Jan 30, 2005 11:32 pm

Ma'am.



You know the drill, I can't resist a good story.



Hope this is what you were going fer....





Wanted Red Bandit





-elizabeth :spin



*gallops off to find a dame that won't do her wrong.*



p.s. Here's the same pic, less dark , if you wanted to make sure the writing's right.

"Oh, where are my manners, Tara, Willow, Willow, Tara."



-random line I know I search for in every fanfic out there.

Edited by: thebardgirl at: 1/30/05 10:34 pm
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Re: The Return of the Sketch Rider of the West

Postby tarawhipped » Mon Jan 31, 2005 8:36 am

Elizabeth-



You are amazing. Thank you thank you THANK YOU!!!



For anyone just wandering in, please take a gander at Miss Elizabeth's fine sketchwork. The next chapter will be up in a day or two, and will include a reference to said aforementioned Wanted poster. Thank y'all kindly for your patience, and I'll see you real soon.



:wink -Cam



p.s. Elizabeth, did I mention that you are amazing? Well, you are.



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

tarawhipped
 


Re: The Return of the Sketch Rider of the West

Postby thebardgirl » Mon Jan 31, 2005 10:23 am

*smiles dreamily having just wokeup*



T'ank yee kindly, ma'am. Your sketch was a joy to do...very fun seeing as it is so AU...I love the Old West....And wow...*blush blush* At first I was thinking, "uhoh...how in the frilly heck do I...I mean, how does one make Willow scarey?" But then I looked up WANTED posters on google and I got to learn about a few of them like Billy the Kid's and...it was fun! I haven't had that much fun in sketching since last time I was in here Cam, so thanks!!



I look forward to the update...oh please, please, PLEASE give us an update! I think I have shown my worth as an "active" reader...and am dying to read more.



-elizabeth :spin



p.s. Teehee :blush









"Oh, where are my manners, Tara, Willow, Willow, Tara."



-random line I know I search for in every fanfic out there.

thebardgirl
 


The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 10

Postby tarawhipped » Tue Feb 01, 2005 6:22 pm

Title: The Legend of Green Eyed Red

Author: tarawhipped (Cameron)

Email: tarawhipped@hotmail.com

Rating: R (just to be safe)

Disclaimer: All characters are the property of Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy

Feedback: Throws head back and screams YESSS!!!

Distribution: Take it, just tell me where to visit it!

Summary: A redheaded stranger rides into a town full of trouble and meets a blonde barmaid. Can they save each other and the town?

Setting: AU (the Old West)




Chapter 10



Ethan Rayne watched from between two buildings as the cart and its two occupants rolled down the road and out into the countryside. He briefly toyed with the idea of following them, until his shrewd gaze spotted the blonde busybody across the street also watching the cart’s progression from behind the large glass window of the general store. He smirked in amusement when she stepped out onto the front porch and stood with hands on hips, her head swiveling between the retreating cart and some point of interest further down the street and out of his line of vision. When it became apparent that she would not be going back inside any time soon Ethan crept backwards, deeper into the shadowy recesses of the alleyway, before turning and walking out the opposite side.


As he made his way to the railroad station, Ethan thought back on his conversation with Mayor Wilkins that morning. In truth it had been more of a monologue—the Mayor certainly loved a rapt audience—but Ethan did not mind playing the part of His Honor’s loyal subject...not for the moment, anyway. At least he had not had to break the news that the newcomer’s unexpected visit would be prolonged for several more days, in effect delaying their latest…acquisition. That unfortunate task had fallen to that nitwit Levinson, who’d stammered and cowered and apologized until Ethan had nearly felt compelled to strike the young man, and Ethan abhorred violence. Well, any violence that involved him, especially on the receiving end. Not to mention that it just wasn’t seemly for a man of God to engage in fisticuffs.


Ethan had found the situation almost laughable, watching Levinson and Mears falling all over themselves to deny that they or any of their scurrilous colleagues had had anything to do with the destruction of the stranger’s buckboard. Wilkins had made it perfectly clear that he was none too pleased that shenanigans were going on in town apart from those he himself had orchestrated. Yes, Ethan would have found the Mayor’s consternation quite amusing if that imbecile Sheriff hadn’t hastily volunteered that Ethan believed he recognized the redhead. Until that moment he’d managed to escape the withering stare of the Mayor, and Ethan again cursed Mears for divulging a detail he’d carelessly revealed after one too many whiskies at the card table.


“Really,” Wilkins had stated, gazing at the preacher. “Well, isn’t that interesting.”


The comment was spoken casually, in an almost unnervingly cheerful manner, but Ethan recognized the cold steel behind the velvet voice. It quite loudly relayed that the Mayor found it not so much “interesting” as “unexpected,” “unplanned for,” and “potentially dangerous.” In short, all the things the Mayor despised, and had spent years ensuring would never affect him in his town.


Ethan however, while admiring the Mayor’s meticulous planning, thrived on the unexpected. He had long ago discovered a knack not only for taking advantage of such situations for his own gain, but also for inconspicuously helping those situations to develop. His sojourn in Dusty Hollow had been disappointing as yet, due in large part to Wilkins’ iron-like grip on the shady goings-on in the town. Ethan did not enjoy playing second fiddle to anyone, even to a man he had a grudging respect for. The current circumstances offered him his first real chance to unseat the Mayor from his lofty perch, and have a little fun in the process.


The preacher waited until the morning train had arrived and the station agent had left his office to oversee the unloading and loading of sundry passengers and cargo before slipping unseen into the small room and sitting down in front of the telegraph. He pulled a slightly weathered piece of paper out of his breast pocket and unfolded it. The face on the page looked off to the side, the wide eyes captured in a slightly startled expression. The wild mane of chin length hair, furrowed brow, and intense gaze came together to emit a rather crazed demeanor. In truth, Ethan thought the Wanted poster bore little resemblance to the polished young man he’d spied in the saloon the night before, but something about the boy’s manner convinced him they could be one and the same. For Ethan’s purposes it hardly mattered, and as long as the redhead had nothing to hide, only the Mayor and his cronies would be inconvenienced. Ethan stuffed the page back into his coat pocket with a shrug and began to tap out his message.





“Lieutenant Finn!”


The young Cavalry officer snapped to attention as his commander’s booming voice echoed through the empty stable.


“Sir!” he barked back.


“I’ve just received word of a probable sighting of the Red Bandit. You and your men need to be on the next train to Dusty Hollow, Nebraska. That is all.”


“Permission to speak, Captain?” Finn promptly requested as his superior turned to leave.


“Granted, but make it quick.”


“Is the suspect in custody?”


“Not at this time, but he is being carefully watched. Our source says he won’t be going anywhere for several days due to an unspecified delay, but you can be there by nightfall and have him back here tomorrow.”


“With all due respect sir, whether he’s planning his next attack or just hiding out, he’s bound to be watching the trains. I’m familiar with that part of the country, and can ride in with a few men without danger of our arrival being announced. I wouldn’t want him to evade us…again.”


Finn knew that his none too subtle reminder would sway the Captain, who had been both personally and professionally embarrassed by the ease with which the bandit had evaded capture after the theft of several hundred pounds of dynamite from a stockroom under his jurisdiction. The truth was that Finn simply found it distasteful for a Cavalry unit to take a train, but that was a subject that did not need to be broached.


“Alright, Lieutenant. But you’d better not muck this up. I don’t want to see you back here until you have that scoundrel in custody. Do I make myself clear?”


“Yes Sir,” Finn responded.


“Assemble your team and leave at once. Dismissed.”


Finn snapped his hand up in another smart salute and took a deep breath once the Captain marched away. He was looking forward to being on the trail again, even if it was a hard two days ride to Dusty Hollow. Without a moment’s hesitation he located the stable boy and indicated which mounts he wanted prepared, then jogged off quickly to assemble his team.




TBC





What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

Edited by: tarawhipped at: 2/1/05 5:25 pm
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Chapter 9 Feedback

Postby tarawhipped » Tue Feb 01, 2005 7:21 pm

Yippeekiyayyyyyyyy!!!! Howdy pardners! Thank ye all kindly fer yer continued support, and saddle up fer the next installment, right after I git to some individual appreciatin.'



behindhereyes: Awww, Kim! You are so sweet.:blush And way to get large with the butch. If the gals need any assistance kicking Darla's ass in the future, I'll be sure to write you in, ok?:wink Of course Willow's going to help--she's a helpful gal. As for Tara leaving town, you say there's "no way" do ya? Hmmm...


YMKA: Marina! Yay, another member of the "Donnie's not a complete jackass" club! Of course everything will will be fine...eventually. Thanks for reading!


EasierSaid: Thank you kindly, Heather. As you know, I had a lot of trouble writing this chapter, in large part because I had no actual Willow/Donnie dialogue to draw on, so it's nice to get positive feedback. As for the "look" of the story, I'm a very visually oriented person, so when I write I do try to imagine the scene as it might be filmed. It's nice to hear adjectives like "great" and "entertaining" rather than "reminiscent of Ishtar." But blinking is important, Heather...please do not neglect to blink. :flirt <--see! blinking is fun AND saucy!


meretricious: Hiya Mary. Tara will definitely not just go along with any old crazy plan Willow and Donnie concoct, which is going to lead to all sorts of fun! Very astute assumption about the cart, but no need to worry about giant snakes...just the garden-variety 2-legged kind.:wink You know, I was actually a little concerned about starting a costume, cross-dressing fic set in the 1860s because Pips was already doing it so well, but then I decided "screw her...she's not the boss of me!" As for fighting, I have no idea what you're talking about...but she started it. Thanks Mary!


pipsberg: Pipsqueak! Thanks for your always lovely comments, dude. Willow's difficulty talking to Donnie seemed appropriate as she hardly knows the guy, but it was also a little dig at my own trouble writing it (which you know from my spazzy emails):p
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I can't wait to see Willow rushing in, with Donnie's backing, and saving the day for Tara
Me too! Gee, I hope it goes off without a hitch!:whistle


hotydnic: Yeah, yeah...thanks for reading, and sorry about the wait (for the last one and this one). Willow will come up with some fine plan, no doubt, but there may be others out there plotting as well.:paranoid


Rhiannon9891: Thanks Rhi! It's always nice to be grouped with other authors I admire, and Pipsberg's Rosenberg Institute is one of my favorites. I'm glad you liked the little touches (Will walking behind the cart; Donnie punching the cart) that seem like remarkably clever planning on my part, but were in fact both happy accidents. Thanks for making me appear smarter than I really am...though now that I've revealed the truth...damn. Does honesty count for something?


Artemis: You're right, Chris, Tara is not going to be easily convinced to go anywhere. She's not the type to need rescuing by the menfolk (even if one of them is really a womanfolk), so Will and Donnie will have their hands full. As for Donnie, he may be unlucky, but I've grown rather fond of him, so I'm going to do my best to keep him out of that pine box. Thanks!


xonethousandtears08x: Thank you for your enthusiastic feedback! I love dancing bananas! As for Tara leaving town, it's going to be a tough call which is stronger: Willow's powers of persuasion or Tara's sense of duty.


robotguru: No, no Chris...your Western is fine! *snicker*bloody Brits*snicker*:p Your assumption about Willow's success in convincing Tara to leave is pretty accurate, but that doesn't mean they won't be leaving. Thanks dude!


hermitfish: Yes, Donnie may put the "fool" in "foolhardy," but he ain't no yellow-belly! And why does eveyone think Tara's so stubborn??? Not moving an inch, huh? Guess Willow'll have to think of something else. Thanks, Cyd!


hidden watson: Aww, watson! Your praise had me grinning and blushing furiously, and I feel the same way about your stories. Thanks for your comments r.e. Donnie's reaction to Willow's revelations. I had a hell of a time writing it, so it's nice to get good feedback for it. As for his stubbornness (must be a Maclay thing), you're right that it doesn't make sense considering the forces that are aligned against him, but Donnie's not the sharpest knife in the drawer. He also believes himself to be responsible for his own predicament and deserving of the repurcussions, but his new pal Will (and some timely interference by outside forces) may allow him to keep his hide. I don't know if I'd call Will powerful, but clever, resourceful, and resilient would definitely apply. Bits and pieces of her story will come out over time to better explain, so I won't say more right now. Thanks again!


TromDeGrey: Welcome, Trom! No beating yourself up in my thread...you're here now and that's enough to make me happy. So grab a seat at the bar, place your order, and relax a spell. It's funny, I really didn't intend to make Donnie that big a character (or as noble). I just wanted to give Tara a LITTLE bit of familial support, and I knew her parents would be out of the picture. The response has been very cool, though, especially considering how far away from canon "nice Donnie" is. Glad you're enjoying it.


The Rose24: No fear of me not continuing, even if I may take extended breaks from time to time. Willow will surely try to convince Tara to leave, but Tara may take more than simple logical persuasion. Thanks Rose.


wimpy0729: So Pam...did you know you left me feedback twice, and the second time you apologized for not leaving any before? I don't know if it's the result of a concussion or too many shots at the saloon, but you take it easy, okay sweetie?:glasses You were the second person to comment on the "Xander's incompetance" bit, which was fun to throw in there, and seemed in keeping with people's opinion of him throughout much of the show (though how he went from being an apprectice carpenter to a supervisor in one season is beyond me). Thanks Wimpy!


Viximon: Thank you Viximon! Tara will definitely NOT be all "OKAY! I'll just quick pack a bag and let's go!" But once Willow sets her resolve face, well...they'll be leaving town somehow, I reckon.


Reallybigpineapple: I'm still grinning madly over your Western feedback...awesome! Miss Anya, smoochin', and courtin' will not be appearing in this next update, but there could be all of the above before long. Give my regards to the gals...and the cattle!


thebardgirl: Elizabeth, my dear, words fail me (not that it'll keep me from babbling on anyway). First off, I'm far more likely to be spilling coffee down the front of my shirt than "elegantly sipping an extremely fancy drink," but young talented artistes can light my smokes any time.:wink As for this:
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Cameron's indifferent face became slightly amused
Slightly amused, my ass!!! You made my WEEK, Liz! Seriously, the drawings are wonderful, and I'm overjoyed that you shared them with me and everyone else. I can't think of any higher praise for my lil' ol' story. I also appreciate the constant badgering--err--I mean gentle nudging to get back to work. It really helped. Thanks again.


terra21: Thank you terra, it was so cool to see your name in here, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Smoochies are still a ways off, but more flirting and some dancing is just around the corner.


Tempest Duer: First off, I agree with you that Elizabeth and her drawings rock.
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Of course, none of us can be sure that Tara won't be immune to all of Willow's charm...
That is true. Willow might say "come on, baby," and then Tara might be like "I ain't your BABY, biotch!"...and then Willow'd be all "aw, why you trippin'? Don't be that way!" to which Tara might hold up a hand and say "step off, girlfriend."



Ummm...none of that dialogue will be appearing in this fic. But an excellent point, nonetheless.


WickedReds: Gina, YOU are a nut! But you're also sweet and adorable, so I'll let you off the hook for riling up all the Kittens and causing a ruckus in the saloon (and don'e even TRY to deny it was you:wink ).


stillrunning: Thank you! One of the benefits of an action adventure is that I don't have to write long drawn out descriptions of...well, ANYTHING...and can just do kind of cartoony supporting characters. It helps that everyone already has them pictured in their heads, and I'm glad you like them!


Okay, enough of my yakking...on to the update!






What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

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Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 10

Postby robotguru » Tue Feb 01, 2005 7:50 pm

Ooh, the plot thickens!



Grr, i know i promised updates myself but real life bit me in the ass in the form of assignments, grr.

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There can be no rainbow without rain, you cannot know true happiness until you know sadness first.

robotguru
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 10

Postby meretricious » Tue Feb 01, 2005 7:59 pm

hah, riley gets to be cowboy guy, sort of, i love how you use the secondary characters in this story. they are all just perfectly cast. and now the bad guys are looking to turn on each other, always a good sign. your writing could completely stand alone, but liz's fabulous drawings are such a bonus, esp. with the wanted poster- makes me feel like willow was more in this update than she actually was.

now, i'm wondering who's on riley's team, and i think somehow having more good guys in town could be helpful. more, please cam~mary

hey girl, get on the dance floor
rip it up girl
that's what it's there for~razorlight

meretricious
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 10

Postby hermitfish » Tue Feb 01, 2005 8:27 pm

Hey Cameron...good to see you in the land of update. I was wondering if any other characters from a la canon would rise from that big imaginative brain of yours. My brain, on the other hand, is in some sort of swampy purée. This makes it impossible for me to say anything remotely useful or profound about the recent addition. Therefore, I'm gonna wave my two little thumbs high in the air for a moment before crashing ungracefully onto the bar. I'm gonna sleep life off for a while until either you or Miss Tara swat me out with a broom. Hope more is soon.



~Cyd







P.S. Elizabeth...the artwork is fantastic.




All you need to start an asylum is an empty room and the right kind of people.

~Eugene Pallette in My Man Godfrey (1936)



Altered Shadows

hermitfish
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 10

Postby xonethousandtears08x » Tue Feb 01, 2005 8:42 pm

Oh ok, let me guess..Willow is the Red Bandit?..



Great update.;)

xonethousandtears08x
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 10

Postby stillrunning » Tue Feb 01, 2005 9:10 pm

Oh boy!! It's the 'Revenge of Cowboy Guy'!! Riley Riley Riley...I just never liked him. But seeing him as Cowboy Guy was funny in the show, so I'm thinking it's going to be good here too.

"Heaven's not a place that you go when you die...it's that moment in life when you actually feel alive"

stillrunning
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 10

Postby Rhiannon9891 » Tue Feb 01, 2005 10:15 pm

Nice update Cam,

Disloyalty amongst thieves, the Red Bandit and Cowboy Guy.

I can't wait for more...till then...I'll just sit at the bar with Wicked Reds and the rest of the patrons, and mind my own business...see ya pardner.



Rhiannon :seesaw

She is like a cat in the dark

And then she is the darkness

Rhiannon9891
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 10

Postby thebardgirl » Tue Feb 01, 2005 10:34 pm

*The sign, "Cameron and Her Kit-Cats" swings loosly at the top of the local saloon*



*a pair of anonymous stirrups clank and clink with slow steps, slowly walking in*



*The Skether-Rider tips hat to Cameron at bar again*



"Ma'am...I want ta' thank yee fer this might-fine update. My heart's been achin' for one...and you delivered. I 'preciate it. But now I fear I must wait fer the next installment...maybe per'aps our fav'rite ladies will make an appearance as well?"



*Cameron smiles, neither answering nor denying this request*



*Elizabeth sees all the kind words over her crazy-work and blushes happily*



"I thank yee kindly Kittens..."



*sees some are less-than-fully-clothed*



"Really...I...I really...what was I talking about?"



*Elizabeth sees Tara behind bar again, cleaning a glass, and just stares, pointing*



"That'saTaralajakajajawoowoo..."



*Tara, annoyed at the staring girl walks off in opposite direction...again.*



*Elizabeth sighs and goes to craddle a (non-alcoholic) drink, resting her head on the bar*



"Ain't no woman that'll do me right..."





-The Lone-Writer of the West :spin











"Oh, where are my manners, Tara, Willow, Willow, Tara."



-random line I know I search for in every fanfic out there.

Edited by: thebardgirl at: 2/1/05 9:40 pm
thebardgirl
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 10

Postby Tempest Duer » Tue Feb 01, 2005 10:51 pm

Riley on the chase? This should be entertaining...

I got bitten by a drunk lesbian! Does that mean I'll turn into one?



~my friend Mary

Tempest Duer
 


Re: The Legend of Green Eyed Red: Chapter 10

Postby Artemis » Tue Feb 01, 2005 11:41 pm

Hmm, that's interesting... you know, I can just picture Riley as a pony soldier, a young Custer - brave, dedicated, good at what he does but afflicted by the occasional bout of abysmal judgement :) I'm curious to see how his part in this story is going to play out. Obviously he's going to be on Red's trail (probably not very successfully, if Willow discards the cowboy outfit and wears a dress instead - Riley doesn't strike me as the imaginative type that'd see through that kind of trick), but what if he finds out about the Mayor's sordid schemes? I'm just guessing what this version of him will be like - he could be a maniacal bastard intent only on his orders, of course - but he and Will might find a common cause in defeating the Mayor's pesky posse. But what then - would Riley be willing to go back to his captain without Red in handcuffs, no matter what happened in Dusty Hollow?

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Artemis
 

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