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Island of Death

Postby tarawhipped » Mon Oct 11, 2004 8:49 pm

Title: Island of Death

Author: Tarawhipped (Cameron)

Email: tarawhipped@hotmail.com

Rating: R (violence, possibly sex)

Disclaimer: All characters are the property of Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy

Feedback: I LIVE for it!

Distribution: Sure, just tell me where so I can visit!

Summary: Ten strangers are invited by a mysterious host to a remote island off the Pacific coast of South America.

Notes: AU (no Scoobiage at all); thoughts in italics

Warning: Character death






Prologue



Rupert Giles walked slowly through the labyrinthine halls of Meson de Manco Capac, straightening odd bits of furniture and paintings and running his feather duster over the chair rail. His movements were precise and attentive, but he did not dawdle. His employer’s guests would be arriving soon, and he was anxious to ensure that all preparations had been attended to. Although his highly controlled exterior revealed nothing but calm, Giles was filled with apprehension.


Just a few more days and I’ll be back in England where I belong. No more of this bloody debt hanging over my head. Just the quiet country life for me from here on out.


Giles continued his ministrations with increased urgency, winding his way around the west corridor until he reached the cavernous central gallery. Setting his duster down on the small foyer table, he took in the full expanse of the room. When he was satisfied that nothing appeared awry, he crossed to the far side of the enormous fireplace, framed on either side by a large tapestry. Pausing out of habit to look around, he reached up and gently tugged on the iron sconce hanging several feet above his head. The faint scraping sound that followed made Giles’ nose twitch, and he made a mental note to find the oilcan. Stepping quickly to the other side of the fireplace, he pulled back the tapestry, and disappeared into the darkened passageway.


At the end of the dank corridor was a large steel door, it’s polished surface anomalous with the bare stone walls and brick floor. Giles looked up at the security camera and softly cleared his throat. The door slid open at once, and he proceeded into the room. The modern furnishings, fluorescent lighting, and plethora of machinery never failed to put Giles on edge, and he stood as near to the door as he could without seeming disrespectful. The figure sitting behind the spacious Lucite desk faced away from the door, concealed within the large leather armchair. The chair never turned in Giles’ presence, but he was acutely aware that his employer was cognizant of his every move—throughout the entire mansion.


“Is everything in order?” the familiar voice rasped.


“Yes, quite,” Giles replied, uncomfortably conscious that, as usual, he could not ascertain the age or gender of the figure behind the desk.


“And they have all accepted their invitations?”


“Yes, the last confirmation came this morning. They should all be arriving in Lima tomorrow morning, and I took the liberty of arranging transportation to the island. The boats will be here at noon.”


“That will be all Giles.”


Giles hurried out of the room, but before the door slid shut behind him, he distinctly heard the sound of a low chuckle.


The figure waited until the butler was gone before spinning around to face the desk, on which lay a number of file folders. Fanning out the stack as if they were a hand of cards, the figure brushed a hand over each name printed in bold black ink across the margin: Cordelia Chase, Riley Finn, Alexander Harris, Anya Jenkins, Faith Johnson, Tara Maclay, Daniel Osbourne, Willow Rosenberg, Dawn Somerset, Buffy Summers.


“Soon,” the voice murmured without the slightest hint of emotion. “Soon you will all get what’s coming to you.”





TBC



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

Edited by: tarawhipped at: 1/2/05 9:17 am
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Re: Island of Death

Postby onyxsundrops » Mon Oct 11, 2004 8:54 pm

You've done it again! Very interested in seeing where this is going. Please update sometime soon.



Yvonne:peace

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Re: Island of Death

Postby WickedReds » Mon Oct 11, 2004 8:56 pm

Cameron!!!! New story... YAY!!!... will there be smut at some point??? U know me Smut bunny... Ok... so what's this figure and Giles up to??? dose not sound to good... Buffy and Dawn aren't sisters...anyways can't wait for more..



(Edited in : Hey i'm sassy eggs now cool)



-reds (the smut bunnie):willow



my banana dances for smut :banana

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon

Edited by: WickedReds at: 10/11/04 7:58 pm
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Re: Island of Death

Postby thebardgirl » Tue Oct 12, 2004 12:16 am

I'm on board! *jumps into non-existant boat*



-elizabeth :spin

You shanked my janga ship!



thebardgirl
 


Re: Island of Death

Postby pipsberg » Tue Oct 12, 2004 10:15 am

Cameron!



Wow, I am so happy to see a new story from you. I was just thinking to myself the other day that we needed a new one from you and lookie here, we have one. I like the premise so far. It's very mysterious. I am all on board with the votes for smut... I think we all have a healthy portion of smut bunny in us!



:peace

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

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Re: Island of Death

Postby amazonaa » Tue Oct 12, 2004 2:04 pm

Oh man. This is going to be great. Can't wait for more.





Great beginning.





brittney







~Good friends help you move. Real friends help you move the body.~

amazonaa
 


Feedback

Postby tarawhipped » Tue Oct 12, 2004 9:27 pm

:wave Hi everybody! You all know the drill...feedback replies, then an update. Here goes...



onyxsundrops: Yvonne--first poster! Yay you!
Quote:
very interested to see where this is going
Hey, me too! Seriously, this idea kindof developed quickly, and I decided to go with it without planning it out completely, which is weird for me. I hope you like it.


WickedReds: Reds! Feedback on 2 boards--you are such a sweetie! There might be smut at some point, but this is gonna be a darker story, and I don't want to just do it gratuitously (not that YOU would complain, right?:wink ).


Glad you got the Dawn/Buffy thing. Everyone had to be strangers, hence Dawn's new last name (it was either that or Winters, which just seemed silly).


Congrats on your sassy eggs...umm...you know what I mean:blush .


thebardgirl: *blows boatswain's whistle* Welcome aboard, Elizabeth! Um, just so we're clear, we are going to the Island of Death, not the Island of Scantily Clad Amazons. Okay, shuffleboard on the Lido Deck!


pipsberg: Yay Pips! Your kind words at the end of Secrets & Spies encouraged me to get back to work, so thank you.


Have you been hanging out with Reds? As I told her--MAYBE smut (though you know I'm a big pushover).
Quote:
we all have a healthy portion of smutbunny in us
Um...you know, some people (not me) with exceptionally dirty minds (not me) might misconstrue that statement (not me).:flirt


amazonaa: Hiya, Brittney! Glad to have you along for the ride, and I hope it lives up to your expectations.



Thank you all for reading and responding!


-Cameron



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

tarawhipped
 


Chapter 1

Postby tarawhipped » Tue Oct 12, 2004 9:30 pm

Title: Island of Death

Author: Tarawhipped (Cameron)

Email: tarawhipped@hotmail.com

Rating: R (violence, language, possibly sex)

Disclaimer: All characters are the property of Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy

Feedback: I LIVE for it!

Distribution: Sure, just tell me where so I can visit!

Summary: Ten strangers are invited by a mysterious host to a remote island off the Pacific coast of South America.

Notes: AU (no Scoobiage at all); thoughts in italics

Warning: Character death






Chapter 1



Before:


Tara Maclay stood leaning against the counter top in her cramped kitchen, a half empty coffee cup loosely held in one hand. She stared at the opposite wall, seeing nothing, her mind replaying the events of the previous week.


Her boss had considered the invitation a godsend—an assurance that the shelter would be able to operate for years to come, even without any other donors. Tara’s unease stemmed from the invitation being addressed specifically to her. As Assistant Director she was fully qualified to meet with potential benefactors, but the Donations Administrator or Managing Director usually handled the larger gifts. The letter had been clear, however. Either Miss Maclay agree to come, or another shelter would be the beneficiary of an extremely generous sum of money.


Tara took a sip of her coffee and rushed to the sink to spit out the lukewarm sludge. With a resigned sigh, she went to her bedroom to pack.





Dawn Somerset looked in dismay at the contents of her dresser, then back to the small suitcase lying open on her bed. Opening her closet, she shoved aside a row of hanging clothes and pulled out another—larger—suitcase. With a satisfied nod she began filling both.





Riley Finn turned off his hall light, locked his front door and pocketed the keys, hefted his large olive green rucksack over his shoulder, and strode purposefully to the cab waiting in his driveway.





Cordelia Chase waited for the chauffeur to open her door and offer his hand before stepping out of the limousine, never pausing in her phone conversation. She glided into the airport, not bothering to check that her bags were being attending to because she knew that they would be.





Xander Harris smiled at the ticket agent as he handed over his driver’s license and placed his suitcase on the scale. Within a few minutes he had his boarding pass and was directed to the gate.





“This is the final boarding call for flight 333, non-stop service to Lima, Peru.”


Anya Jenkins hurried down the ramp as the announcer’s voice faded behind her. She took her seat moments before the door was sealed and the plane began taxiing back from the gate.





Willow Rosenberg frowned at the readout on her laptop. Careful not to disturb the computer perched on the fold-down tray, she twisted around it to reach for her briefcase under the seat in front of her. With her upper body leaning halfway into the aisle, she had just felt the handle when a pair of shapely legs stopped inches from her face.


“Need a hand?” the flight attendant asked, and without waiting for a response knelt to pull out the bag.


“Uh…thanks,” Willow replied, blushing.


“How ‘bout a drink?” the bottle blonde inquired.


“Oh…that’s really…but I just got out of a relationship, and I’m not…are you supposed to be drinking on the job? Cause I know you’re not the pilot, but—”


“I meant can I get you a drink.”


Willow looked at the woman, horrified, but the stewardess seemed amused by the redhead’s embarrassment.


“Scotch…rocks…please.”





Daniel Osbourne sat glued to the window as he had for most of the flight. The salesman next to him continued to try to interest him in some insurance, oblivious to the fact that the young man had said nothing to him for the past several hours. As the wheels bounced and screeched on the tarmac, Oz turned to his neighbor and tilted his head toward the small window.


“Hey…Peru.”





Buffy Summers tried to remember the little Spanish she’d learned in high school as she wandered through the airport in search of the baggage claim. Once she was reunited with her stylish luggage, she looked around for an information desk when she noticed a man holding up a sign with her name on it.





“Right this way, Miss.”


Faith Johnson gladly allowed the driver to carry her bag to the waiting car, and smiled broadly when he opened the door for her.


“Thanks, Jeeves—love the service.”





Now:



Ten black sedans, carefully spaced, idled along the waterfront as each driver awaited the signal to proceed. Once received, each car in turn approached the assigned pier, where its occupant was guided to the waiting yacht. For their trouble—and discretion—each driver was handed an envelope with enough cash to cover the fare a hundred times over.


When the last of the ten passengers was aboard and firmly told to remain in their stateroom for the duration of the voyage, the Eind van de Lijn sounded its horn and pulled away from the dock.





TBC





What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

Edited by: tarawhipped at: 10/12/04 8:48 pm
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Re: Chapter 1

Postby WickedReds » Tue Oct 12, 2004 9:49 pm

Cameron.... i'm a sweetie... y that u.. hehe... Well lets see smut... well i would be very satisfied with alot of smut... But if i have to settle for heavy smoochies and make out sessions i guess i'm alright with it... hell i want smut even if its ur dream smut :aww ...*snaps fingers and magically appears in Dominatrix bunny costume with whip*

*CRACK* Smut now... well at some point... because it Willow and Tara and i need one of ur smut scenes... I need a fix dammit...:p

okay, but i love that ur doing a darker fic... so yep i can understand less smut... I'll stop talking about smut now..

*snaps fingers.... back to normal clothing*

Update soon..



-reds(ur loyal smut bunny):willow



my banana dances for smut :banana

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon

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Re: Chapter 1

Postby pipsberg » Tue Oct 12, 2004 10:05 pm

SMUT SMUT SMUT!



Hehe, sorry I had a rare giggly moment (still hopeful though). I loved the second part. I especially adored Willow's miscommunication with the flight attendant. I was lmao at that one. I can so see her doing that. I think it's great that Willow assumed she was coming on to her because, come on, who wouldn't try? ;)



More please!



:peace *smut bunnies unite for Cameron (yah dirty dog)

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

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Re: Chapter 1

Postby taralicious » Tue Oct 12, 2004 10:32 pm

OOOOOOOOO, yeah.

it's like the Agatha Christie classic And Then There Were None only with the carrot and stick of W/T smut dangling before us.

Set all of the pieces in place and then have the mysterious benefactor hunt The Most Dangerous Game.

I can keep pulling literary references out of my hat as that's what a liberal arts education prepares you to do.

Obscure and arcane literary references is what it's all about.:wave :peace

taralicious
 


Island of DEATH!!

Postby EasierSaid » Wed Oct 13, 2004 1:31 am

Just back from Vegas (Vegas baby, yeah!) and smiled broadly when I saw you had a new fic. And, as an added bonus I've been cracking myself up all night saying the title. 'Island of DEATH!' "Where are they going?" "Oh just a little place off the coast of Peru called the Island of DEATH!" *snicker* Okay, so maybe it's not funny. (*snicker* Island of DEATH!)



This is a very intriguing premise and I love the cast you've put together. Great character introductions, each one was spot on (so very 'them') and I can't wait to see where this is going. Hurray!



....DEATH!

EasierSaid
 


Yay new story

Postby hermitfish » Wed Oct 13, 2004 7:39 am

Thanks for this...I like having something interesting to read when I crawl out of bed in the early morn. I was reminded of the Christie book as well but also a 1976 movie called Murder by Death. Can't wait for the mystery, intrigue, and lesbian romance...there will be some right?



By the way...what do the travel brochures for a place like the Island of Death look like? I mean are they all white sand, red sunsets and puppies or are they more like carnage, blood, and complementary cable that only includes the Lifetime Channel?



Looking forward to more



~Cyd




All you need to start an asylum is an empty room and the right kind of people.

~Eugene Pallette in My Man Godfrey (1936)

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Re: Yay new story

Postby alysagoddess85 » Wed Oct 13, 2004 10:56 am

wow so this seems really cool...i dont know if an island called death would be somewhere i would accept an invitation too...but maybe its got nice beaches??



anyways..love all the different characters...and i noticed the whole dawn and buffy thing...and at first i was like 'silly goose,...they should have the same last name!!'...but then i read your reply to reds up there and i was like 'oooooo...got it!'...so very cool.



haha...and gotta love willow with the stewardess...i thought that was great...keep up the great work!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

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Re: Yay new story

Postby shuyaku » Wed Oct 13, 2004 2:44 pm

Oooh - quirky island, murder mystery :D Fun stuff. I love how with just a sentence or two, as you introduce each of the characters, that we get a glimpse at their true selves - Anya running late, Cordelia's attitude toward her attendants, Willow misinterpreting the stewardess. Really, really fantastic.



-shuyaku

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Chapter 1 feedback

Postby tarawhipped » Wed Oct 13, 2004 8:55 pm

Thanks for the swell comments, and to everyone for reading!

-Cameron



WickedReds: Hmmm...stop being so coy, Reds...just say what you want. Well, since I can't promise smut yet, I wrote the Smutbunny Anthem just for you...


*sung to tune from Goldfinger* Smutbunnies...they'e the bunnies, the bunnies that love the smut...and Willow's butt. They surf for smut fiction...always lookin' for the next naked sweaty fix...of Tara's tits.


pipsberg:
Quote:
smut bunnies unite for Cameron
Wow! My own virtual radical organization! See above for theme song.


Glad you liked the update. I wanted to establish that Willow is gay, single, etc., and I liked the idea of her misinterpreting signals (maybe coz I've been reading Neverland so much), and I was hoping it would be good for a laugh, cause there won't be a lot of 'em.


taralicious: Yay! I'm glad you mentioned And Then There Were None, since this is a blatant ripoff of it! Hmmm...maybe I should put that in the disclaimer. I'm not familiar with the other reference coz I was a history major, and reading literature was frowned on (not really, but my knowledge is sorely lacking).


EasierSaid: Heather, stop mocking my title!:miff Glad you like the idea and the characterizations--it helps to have such vivid characters to play with (especially for someone as lazy as me). Since you're so amused by the title, you get a song too--Love Theme From Island...of DEATH!


*sung to tune from Hawaii 5-0* Let's go to the island...the Island of Death. It's a creepy island...the Island of Death. Lots of people getting bumped off, Will and Tara may get to boff on the island...the Island of Death. It's a spooky island...the Island of Death. It's a kooky island...the Island of Death. You know you should all be afraid, but the lesbians may get laid on the island...the Island of Death. The Island of DEATH!


hermitfish: Hooray! You got my second inspiration (such smart kittens around here!)--I LOVE Murder By Death (though the silliness will be confined to feedback responses):)
Quote:
complementary cable that only includes the Lifetime Channel
*shudder* Now THAT is truly frightening.


alysagoddess85: So if it had nice beaches, a good buffet, and great live music (tho probably goth), you WOULD go to the Island of Death? You are far braver than I, Mel. Glad you're liking it so far.


shuyaku: Thanks for your comments r.e. the character introductions. It's a big cast, so I didn't want to go through each one's preparations for departure, but I wanted to show a glimpse of each step in the process and reveal a little of everyone's personalities. Much more will come out soon, and it'll get much easier when I start killing them all off.:devilish



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

tarawhipped
 


Chapter 2

Postby tarawhipped » Wed Oct 13, 2004 8:56 pm

Title: Island of Death

Author: Tarawhipped (Cameron)

Email: tarawhipped@hotmail.com

Rating: R (violence, language, possibly sex)

Disclaimer: All characters are the property of Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy

Feedback: I LIVE for it!

Distribution: Sure, just tell me where so I can visit!

Summary: Ten strangers are invited by a mysterious host to a remote island off the Pacific coast of South America.

Notes: AU (no Scoobiage at all); thoughts in italics

Warning: Character death






Chapter 2



The Eind van de Lijn pulled out of the bay and headed due west for its two-hour voyage. The ship’s small crew was doubled for this journey, the extra men easily distinguished by their black clothing and blank expressions. As the boat got underway, the additional men quietly moved to position themselves in front of the ten occupied staterooms.





Exhausted from their late night flights, Buffy, Oz, and Dawn slept soundly as the gentle rock of the boat soothed them into dreamland.





“MAXWELL! CAN YOU HEAR ME?” Cordelia shouted into her phone, but only static reached her ears. She threw the phone into her overnight bag with a squeal of frustration. Propping up a stack of pillows, she flounced down onto the bed and pulled out a stack of fashion magazines.





Faith completed her search of the cabin and climbed onto the bed to look at her haul: two ashtrays, four matchbooks, a set of stationary, a set of towels, six small bottles of various toiletries, and a Bible. Picking up the last item, she tossed it into the trash and began stuffing the rest into her backpack.





Xander lunged for the bathroom just in time to throw up what little remained of his breakfast after his first two episodes of seasickness. Giving up on any attempt to sleep, he placed a cool towel on the back of his neck and slumped against the side of the tub.





Realizing she was well out of range of a signal for her wireless connection, Willow pulled up a page she had previously downloaded to her hard drive and began to read, her forehead creasing noticeably as she scrolled down the page.





“Eind van de Lijn… Eind van de Lijn,” Anya repeatedly muttered as she paced around the cabin, chewing her nails as her eyes darted nervously.





Despite the crewman’s request that he remain in the room, Riley had fully intended, after stowing his bag in the small closet, to investigate the rest of the ship. When he found the door securely locked, he was first puzzled, then outraged. For the rest of the voyage he pounded on the surprisingly solid door, demanding to be let out to see the Captain.





When Tara heard the banging and yelling from the room next to hers, she tried her own door and found it locked as well. Sitting down in the stuffed armchair, she drew her knees up to her chest and wrapped her arms around her shins. Despite her best efforts to calm her nerves, her concern grew with every passing moment.





Shortly before noon local time, Giles made his way down the narrow path to the dock. He waited at the top of a steep flight of stairs for the passengers to disembark. One by one they climbed to the top while the crew unloaded their luggage.


He watched as the passengers eyed each other for the first time. A plethora of emotions was evident: curiosity, trepidation, disdain, fear. As the last of the guests reached the crest of the staircase, Giles smiled and opened his mouth to speak.


“I demand to know why we were locked in our cabins—are you in charge here?”


“Mr. Finn, I presume?” the butler asked, not bothering to conceal his irritation.


Officer Finn. And you are?”


“My apologies, Officer Finn. I am Mr. Giles, but you may all call me Giles—”


“You’re not the one who invited me here,” Anya interrupted, looking the man up and down critically.


“No…Miss Jenkins, is it? My employer could not be here to greet you, but if you would follow—” Giles had turned to continue to the house, but was again stopped by Finn.


“I still want an explanation for the ship’s crew.”


“Well, you see, the passage can be quite treacherous, and it was for your own safety that you were asked to remain below deck.”


“They didn’t have to lock us in like criminals,” Finn insisted indignantly.


“So you weren’t trying to leave your cabin, Officer Finn?” the Englishman inquired. Finn looked away and clenched his jaw. Giles allowed the tiniest smug smile to grace his lips.


“If you would all follow me, we’ll proceed to the Manor. I’d like to welcome you to Supai Island.”





Five miles away, on the other side of the island, another boat floated at dock, the crew unloading its cargo. As the island’s guests made their way up the winding footpath, ten identical rectangular pine boxes were laid out side by side on the pier.





TBC





What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

Edited by: tarawhipped at: 10/13/04 8:00 pm
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Re: Chapter 2

Postby WickedReds » Wed Oct 13, 2004 9:23 pm

OKay i won't be coy... I want smut... but i have to wait :aww .... anyways The Smut Bunnie Anthem.. lets just say u gave me a new sig.

And hey are those coffins i see... Well read.. island of death indeed... but i like what ur doing with everyone... telling little snips of how they are reaction on the boat... less is good in this case with the development of everyones feelings... me like... But still i want my smut :D



-reds:willow



my banana dances for smut :banana

oops my new sig. is a bit screwed up... i fix

Edited by: Warduke at: 10/13/04 8:31 pm
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Chapter 2...of DEATH!!

Postby EasierSaid » Wed Oct 13, 2004 9:27 pm

No, no mocking--enjoying, I was enjoying the title. :angel



... OF DEATH!!



This is so interesting. I can't wait for this to continue, to see why they needed ten planting boxes. Oh they were caskets? Oh crap. :aww Absolutely loved indignant Riley, and I had to break out 'oh no' pouty lip for Tara curled up and concerned on the chair. Great job, Cameron.



p.s. hehe Hawaii Five-O and DEATH!!... there really is nothing wrong with that.

EasierSaid
 


Re: Chapter 2...of DEATH!!

Postby WickedReds » Wed Oct 13, 2004 10:01 pm

Crap i forgot... Cameron... Where is wimpy??? she needs to see the smut bunnie anthem...



-reds:willow

Edited by: Warduke at: 10/13/04 9:05 pm
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Re: Chapter 2

Postby taralicious » Thu Oct 14, 2004 1:22 am

Can I first give a shout-out to my fellow "Murder by Death" fans. It's been one of my favourite movies since I was a kid.

The scene between Alec Guiness as Bensonmum the blind butler and Nancy Walker as Yetta, the mute cook who can't read or write is one of my favourites.

Now, as for Chapter 2, very ominous to have all of the characters locked below deck in their cabins. Gives them a sense of claustrophobia before they've even set foot on the island.

I too was a history major in a previous existence, getting a B.A. from the University of Iowa but a lot of my friends were English majors and I've always read a lot.

Read The Most Dangerous Game sometime. It's a short story by Richard Connell.

It's about this big-game hunter who lures another man to this remote private island because he's run out of challenges since he's successfully hunted and killed each of the big-game species.

He decides that the only challenge worthy of his skills is to pit himself against another man, the titular object.

So many books and W/T stories:buried so little time.

Oh well, who needs :sleep

taralicious
 


Re: Chapter 2

Postby alysagoddess85 » Thu Oct 14, 2004 8:53 am

hehe...this rocks...and hey if it had gothy music id sooooo be there...love it...but this is creepy...with the boxes(COFFINS!!)...and i love how youve managed to nail everyones characters...absolutely perfect!! great work!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

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Re: Chapter 2

Postby watersong84 » Thu Oct 14, 2004 10:10 am

This is great! I must say, you write extremely well. The characters are all exactly how they were in the show, which is sometimes hard especially when writing AU. I also love the way you wrote the flight sequence. Each character started where the last one left off. Clever. Update soon! :pinky

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Re: Chapter 2

Postby ladydameon » Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:36 pm

Why is everyone obsessed with smut?



I for one enjoy a slow build-up. I like to see the delicate and wonderful progression of characters getting to know one another. Secrets and Spies had a very nice build-up.



What's going to happen on the island? Will this be the Island of Dr. M. or a Jurassic Park theme? OR the classic Dr. Cyclops?



I'll have you know that you are teasing your readers! Such short updates and very little information.



This lady likes her smut with a plot and give or take a little violence.....

ladydameon

----------------

Goddess of Violence

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Re: Chapter 2

Postby amazonaa » Thu Oct 14, 2004 3:26 pm

Hey alright. This is getting kind of creepy.



I LOVE IT!!!



More soon, please.







brittney







~Good friends help you move. Real friends help you move the body.~

amazonaa
 


Re: Chapter 2

Postby Artemis » Thu Oct 14, 2004 11:18 pm

Firstly let me just say I love the Smutbunnies theme song. I think Smutbunnies could well be a series of its own - it'd be just like the Avengers, only instead of fighting evil megalomaniacs they take on network censors, homophobes, anti-smut people, etc. Anyway.



On to the actual story that this thread is here for: I'm so intrigued :) Why have these people been gathered here by this mysterious personage? Certainly not for any benevolent reasons, to judge from the pine boxes - so why? They don't see to know each other, yet the Villain knows them, or has some reason to bring them here and, one imagines, put them through unpleasantness of a lethal nature. What could it be? Grudge against their families? Something mystical? Some connection in their pasts to the Villain? I think it all hinges on: who is he/she?



They all seem like fairly normal people, even Riley (poor Riley... whenever I see him, I can't help thinking of that line from Mystery Science Theatre 3000: "There goes a stupid, stupid man."). What's the motive? And of course, who will survive?



May I host this story on Looking-glass? Pretty please :flirt

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

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Re: Chapter 2

Postby bindingwiccan » Fri Oct 15, 2004 12:41 am

ok, im hooked... update asap please:pray







-Kelsey

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Re: Chapter 2

Postby hermitfish » Fri Oct 15, 2004 5:39 am

This is really a great set-up. I loved Faith with the stealing of all things not nailed down (except, of course, for that pesky Bible). I'm patiently standing at the edge of the water watching the ominous clouds roll in...



(happily humming Goldfinger now)

~Cyd






All you need to start an asylum is an empty room and the right kind of people.

~Eugene Pallette in My Man Godfrey (1936)

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Chapter 2 feedback

Postby tarawhipped » Sat Oct 16, 2004 2:24 am

Holy crap! Look at all the yummy feedback. Y’all rule! Thanks for reading and letting me know how I’m doing.

-Cameron



WickedReds: Hey Reds! I made your sig line! I feel so bloated with self-importance—I mean, I’m grateful and humbly pleased *heehee* Glad you like the song, Reds. I was wondering where Wimpy was too…maybe we should send out a searchbunny. *releases bunny, which hops directly over to lettuce patch and nibbles away* Darn bunny! Well, she’ll turn up eventually.


Coffins? Who said they were coffins?:smug Glad you liked the snippets—the next couple of updates will start revealing a bit more about everyone.


EasierSaid: Oh, okay, I see…there is such a fine line between mocking and enjoying, I’m always getting them confused. *grumbling* smartass


Planting boxes, huh? Yeah, you could say that—buwahaha! Glad you liked ticked off Riley. After I reread it, he kinda reminded me of my dad there (if that says anything). And of course, the Tara image was right out of NMR.


taralicious: Thanks for the recommendation. As long as we’re reminiscing about Murder By Death, my favorite bit is when Peter Sellars says “voice coming from cow on wall,” and Truman Capote yells “MOOSE! THE moose on THE wall—say your damn pronouns!” I get a chuckle just thinking about it. Thanks for reading.


alysagoddess85: Creepy is good, I’m definitely aiming for creepy. I’m glad you think I’ve done a good job with the characters…just don’t get attached to them.:devil


watersong84: Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the flight scene—I was hoping it would show a bit of each character as well as conveying the sense of everyone going through more or less the same process in the same time frame. As for the characters, I wanted to introduce them as the ones we all know, but there are some surprises in store too—more in experiences than personalities.


ladydameon: Umm…cause it’s fun? Seriously, while I enjoy a well written PWP as much as the next girl, I agree with you that smut’s far more satisfying in the context of a well developed relationship over the course of a story. Thank you for your comments r.e. S & S. This is not a love story, but there will be a physical relationship—not gratuitous, but not flowers and Valentines either.


While the idea of throwing in genetically altered people and or dinosaurs has its appeal, this is pretty solidly based on Agatha Christie’s And Then There Were None. I am very aware I’m being a tease (though you really shouldn’t be surprised by now;) , but the next update is longer, and the rest may be. I kind of have set beginnings and endings for each update, and how much or little goes on in between depends on my mood. As for revealing information, bits will come out here and there, but hey, it’s a mystery, and I plan on stringing you along for as long as I can!


amazonaa: Thank you Brittney. Creepy is exactly what I wanted to convey, and I’m glad it’s working!


Artemis:A smutbunnies series?! That would be hilarious, but I think you should be the one to write it, Chris (and if you do, feel free to use the theme song). BTW, I LOVE the banner for Island of Death!


As for your many questions, I say ‘hmmm…good questions.’ The next chapter will reveal why (most of them) believe they are there. That’s about all I can say now. They do all seem pretty normal, don’t they? Again, more soon (the chapter after next has some major revelations in it).


:lol R.E. Riley and MST3K (god I love that show). I do keep making him a big doof, don’t I? He’s just so convincing that way. Maybe I’ll make it up to him in my next fic.


bindingwiccan: Thanks, Kelsey. I hope to reel you in even more. Update…now!


hermitfish: Thank you, Cyd! I could totally picture Faith cleaning out the place, but I have to admit the Bible-tossing was a last minute addition. I liked the idea that there would even be one on the boat, and it just seemed like a Faith thing to do. Ominous clouds are on the way!





What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

Edited by: tarawhipped at: 10/16/04 1:24 am
tarawhipped
 


Chapter 3

Postby tarawhipped » Sat Oct 16, 2004 2:26 am

Title: Island of Death

Author: Tarawhipped (Cameron)

Email: tarawhipped@hotmail.com

Rating: R (violence, language, possibly sex)

Disclaimer: All characters are the property of Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy; plot borrowed from Agatha Christie’s And Then There Were None

Feedback: I LIVE for it!

Distribution: Sure, just tell me where so I can visit!

Summary: Ten strangers are invited by a mysterious host to a remote island off the Pacific coast of South America.

Notes: AU (no Scoobiage at all); thoughts in italics

Warning: Character death






Chapter 3



Willow looked anxiously around the hall before knocking softly on the door. Leaning forward a little, she could hear shuffling feet approach and pause. The redhead held her breath as she waited. After a long moment, the door opened a crack, and Willow found herself staring into troubled blue eyes.


“Willow.”


“Tara…I just wanted to see if you were okay.”


“I’m f-fine.”


“Good—that’s good. I just thought, if you, you know, wanted to talk at all…” Willow trailed off, looking at the blonde hopefully. Tara made no move to open the door, and looked sadly at the redhead before dropping her eyes to the floor.


“I’m fine,” she repeated. “I’m just going to try to get some sleep. Goodnight,” she said, her voice wavering slightly as she closed the door. Willow’s shoulders drooped when she heard the lock click, and she turned toward her own room.


Settling down at the large oak desk, the redhead pulled out her laptop, intending to document the disturbing events of the day. She looked at the blank screen as her mind drifted, recalling in detail everything that had happened since her arrival on the island.





The walk from the boat had been pleasant, with Giles pointing out the local foliage, the hiking trails, and the bike path that circumnavigated the island. The narrowness of the path made it difficult to get much of a look at her fellow passengers, but Willow’s attention had immediately been drawn to the shy blonde who walked behind Giles, listening attentively to his commentary.


As the jungle gave to way to carefully manicured lawn, the guests got their first view of the mansion sitting atop a gently sloping hill and Giles gave the group a moment to take in the impressive sight before encouraging them on. The grey stone walls topped with turrets looked more like an English castle than a tropical resort, an impression that was only magnified upon entry into the house. The rich paneling adorning the Great room and halls was clearly not from native trees. Oriental rugs, antique tapestries, and huge wrought iron chandeliers adorned the interior. Directly across from the entry hall, a ten foot wide, red carpeted staircase led to the second floor, where it curved and branched to the left and right galleries.


Giles showed the guests to their rooms, the three men to the West wing, the seven women to the East. After informing them that their bags would arrive shortly, and that the lunch gong would sound in half an hour, the butler retreated to the kitchen.


Willow had waited for her luggage before heading downstairs, intending to locate Giles and ask him about the island’s history. However, when she reached the ground floor and was unable to find the man, she wandered into the library to wait for the others. The room was well stocked, but the redhead was annoyed to find all of the bookcases locked. Despite the beauty of the island and the luxurious accommodations, Willow felt decidedly ill at ease, not least in part from learning that she had unknowingly been locked in her cabin on the boat. At the sound of voices, she walked back into the hall, unconsciously pulling a pack of cigarettes out of her pocket as she looked up at the paintings gracing the walls.


“I’m sorry Miss Rosenberg, but there’s no smoking in the Manor,” Giles spoke from behind the redhead, who spun around at the sound of his voice.


“I’m not smoking,” she snapped irritably.


The butler nodded curtly before moving to sound the gong for lunch. Willow frowned and turned away, bumping directly into the blonde, who smiled warmly at her.


“Trying to quit?”


“Uh, yeah,” Willow admitted, “five weeks already and it still sucks.”


Tara moved closer, causing the redhead’s breath to hitch as she took in the piercing blue eyes.


“Do you want to know what helps?” the blonde asked, and at Willow’s nod moved in to whisper, “you just have to find something else to keep your fingers and mouth occupied.”


Willow stood frozen as the woman walked away to the dining room, turning once to wink at the redhead, who regained her senses and followed a moment later.


Lunch was served buffet style, with a wide assortment of delicacies from around the world represented. As the last of the guests took their seats, Giles began filling their wine glasses.


“So where exactly is our host, Giles?” Riley asked, as several others murmured in agreement.


“I am to inform you that my employer will contact you in the Great room following your meal.”


“You keep saying ‘my employer,’” Cordelia pointed out. “Don’t you know his name?”


“No, actually, I don’t,” Giles replied, avoiding the stunned expressions directed at him while he concentrated on pouring. “I’ve never met him…or her.”


“You don’t even know if you work for a man or a woman?” Buffy asked in disbelief.


“It’s a man,” Anya insisted. “My invitation was signed by a man—a Matt Sekhmet or something. Otherwise I certainly wouldn’t—” the woman cut herself off abruptly while the others nodded at the familiar name.


“This is ridiculous,” Riley declared, pushing himself back from the table and standing to confront Giles. “You tell your ‘employer’ to show himself, or I’ll—”


“You’ll what, Officer Finn?” the butler snapped, staring down the larger man. “There are no phones on the island, nor will your cell phones work—Miss Chase,” he directed pointedly. “The next boat will not be arriving until Friday, and it’s a bit of a swim back to Peru.”


“Just what the hell are you telling us, Jeeves?” Faith interjected.


“I’m saying that we are all stuck here, my employer will appear when he or she sees fit, and there’s no point in getting huffy with me over it. Now if you’ll kindly sit down and finish your lunch, Mr. Finn, you may get some of your questions answered shortly.”


Giles stalked out of the room, slamming through the swinging door to the kitchen as the guests stared mutely after him. They remained silent for some minutes, their food ignored as the full impact of the man’s words sunk in.


“Huh,” Oz stated after a moment.


“Well,” Xander offered, clearing his throat. “As long as we’re all stuck here—”


“I’m not stuck anywhere, pal. I’m gonna get to the bottom of this if it’s the last thing I do.”


“Okay…settle down…Finn, is it? All I’m saying is that we’re all in the same situation, we might as well introduce ourselves, maybe figure out why we’re all here, okay”


Various sounds of assent greeted the suggestion.


“Fine. Officer Riley Finn, Cedar Rapids Police Department. I was offered a position as head of security for this…well, they said it was a hotel.”


“Security?” Willow inquired, sitting up straight.


“Yeah, why? Don’t tell me that’s why you’re here too,” Riley sneered, looking the diminutive woman up and down dismissively.


“No—well, yes—not like rough people up security…computer security…you know, safeguarding networks. I have a business in Seattle, but I was invited here for a freelance job. I’m Willow…Willow Rosenberg…is me.”


“T-Tara Maclay,” the blonde began, catching Willow’s eye and smiling shyly. “I work at a battered women’s shelter in Chicago. Mr. Sekhmet wanted to make a donation.”


“You came all the way here for a check,” Cordelia stated rather than asked.


“Um, well, it’s a really big donation,” Tara explained, ducking her head under the withering stare of the brunette.


“Whatever—I’m sure you all know who I am, but for the benefit of anyone living under a rock for the last few years, I am Cordelia Chase, and I’m here to shoot my new calendar.”


“Xander Harris,” the young man hastily jumped in, smiling at the model. “I’m in construction—I was asked to come out and take over the renovation of this place. Though there doesn’t seem to be any going on, or in need, so now I’m just confused…and a little scared.”


“Hi, I’m Buffy Summers from Sunnydale, California, and I won a vacation on some radio contest thingy…that I don’t remember entering.”


“OH! Me too! Oh, I’m Dawn Somerset, and I’m going to UCLA…go Bruins!”


Faith smirked at the enthusiastic coed.


“Faith…I just needed a place to crash.”


“What’s that supposed to mean?” Cordelia demanded archly.


“It means it’s none of your business why I’m here, Princess.”


“Oz,” the spiky haired man uttered, sensing the growing tension. “Daniel Osbourne, actually, but people call me Oz. I’m here about a recording deal, but it’s starting to not seem like such a good idea.”


“I’m Anya—Anya Jenkins…I got that ‘win a trip’ thing too,” she hastily added, nodding her head once at the sound of it.


“Well,” Riley stated, “now that we know who we all are and why most of us are here, I say we go find out what the hell is going on.”


“Shouldn’t we w-wait for Mr. Giles?” Tara asked hesitantly.


“He’s been gone a while,” Buffy commented with a frown.


“He’ll figure it out. He told us to go to the Great room after lunch, so I say we go,” Riley decided, standing up and looking at the others, who one by one rose to follow him.


Upon entering the room, all eyes were immediately drawn to a large easel placed in front of the fireplace.


“That…wasn’t there before,” Willow commented.


Pinned to the back of the canvas resting on the easel was a large scroll, with carefully lettered calligraphy forming what appeared to be a poem. As they moved en masse to stand in front of the easel, Cordelia began to read aloud:




Ten little murderers didn’t see the sign,

One strayed off the path and then there were nine.


Nine little murderers stayed up much too late,

One slept the day away and then there were eight.


Eight little murderers looking up at heaven,

One took a nasty spill and then there were seven.


Seven little murderers practicing their kicks,

One got a muscle cramp and then there were six.


Six little murderers poking at a hive,

One got stung to death and then there were five.


Five little murderers walking on the shore,

One got swept away and then there were four.


Four little murderers sitting down to tea,

One got a bitter brew and then there were three.


Three little murderers looking for a clue,

One found the evidence and then there were two.


Two little murderers thought the game was won,

One joined the other team and then there was one.


One little murderer seeing what they’d done,

Went and found a length of rope and then there were none.






Willow looked at the blank screen on her laptop, sighed, and shut it off. Moving to the bed, she curled up fully dressed, facing the door. The poem had been unsettling enough, but when they’d turned the painting around, all had been shocked to see a surprisingly accurate group portrait of the ten of them. Willow shuddered at the image and pulled the bedspread around her, feeling only a minimal degree of comfort in her makeshift cocoon. The uneasy stillness after viewing the painting had only lasted a moment before they were startled by a voice behind them.


“Now that I have your attention, ladies and gentlemen…let’s talk about why you’re here.”





TBC



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

Edited by: tarawhipped at: 10/16/04 1:51 am
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