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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 7/21/05) 4

Postby watty » Tue Jul 26, 2005 9:11 am

SallyMcFine wrote:"Librarians do it quietly"

Good Lord! I'm shocked *cleans glasses* [/Giles voice]

they have naughty descriptions for everything don't they? I was a chemist *waves to Cyd* and I had stickers that say "Cuddle a Chemist and See the Reaction". Now I'm in the financial industry and we get "Bankers do it with interest".

btw: I edited the post above.

btw 2: to bring this post back on topic, therefore escaping the wrath of Cordy the Mod ... someone needs to continue the momentum and post the next challenge entry. Otherwise I'm gonna start threatening to post another entry using yet another of my personalities. Okay, folks. Fair warning.
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 7/21/05) 4

Postby GayNow » Tue Jul 26, 2005 9:53 am

the many-sided watson wrote:someone needs to continue the momentum and post the next challenge entry. Otherwise I'm gonna start threatening to post another entry using yet another of my personalities. Okay, folks. Fair warning.


For the love of all that is holy people....PLEASE contribute something before watson pulls another one out of her hat!
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 7/21/05) 4

Postby wiccanbotanist » Tue Jul 26, 2005 1:56 pm

Watson/Whipped: I suspected something but you seriously had me fooled, had no idea it was you, should have guessed with the link. Glad I'm not the only one with multiple personalities, though only one has an account on here.

Sally: What a fantastic award! You are great, fabulous even, I humbly :bow to you. And I'm thinking I'll be putting up the award on my site as well.....which is exciting it will be my first.

Cyd:
way to apply foreign languages for perverted uses...that's about all I can do with mine these days

Isn't that what learning other languages are for?

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Come one people! Listen to Car, we need more entries!! Watson is making us look bad with her multiple entries.

And I apologise to "cordy the mod" for being off topic but anyone know how botanists or ecologists do it? I guess I'll have to work on those....
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 7/21/05) 4

Postby watty » Tue Jul 26, 2005 5:40 pm

wiccanbotanist wrote:anyone know how botanists or ecologists do it?


how they do it
No botanists/ecologists. I'm thinking botanists do it in the bushes?
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 7/21/05) 4

Postby Artemis » Tue Aug 09, 2005 11:03 am

Title: Being Together
Author: Chris Cook
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Tara gives Willow a present to tide her over until they're together again.
Spoilers: None.
Copyright: Based on characters from Buffy The Vampire Slayer, created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and nothing else for a change. All original material is copyright 2005 Chris Cook.
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Note: Just playing with an idea I've had for a while - I don't know if it really works or not, but anyway, here it is. Hope I didn't forget any of the Challenge elements :D

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[center]BEING TOGETHER[/center]

Willow regarded herself critically in her hotel room's floor-length mirror, and turned this way and that. The dimmed lights glittered off the sequins on the pink thong which was, at present, her entire wardrobe. She experimentally tugged the waist straps a little higher and studied the displaying effect on her hips, then she turned and crouched slightly, giggling quietly at her bottom in the mirror.

'Perfect,' she thought, with a decisive little nod as she sauntered into the bathroom, swinging her hips in time to an imaginary beat. 'That's that taken care of.'

Being one of the Travel Network's leading reporters - a purely accidental career move that had surprised Willow, nearly as much as the fact that she loved it even more than her previous occupation of becoming the world's first laptop-addicted life-form - had one drawback, and that was the occasional absence of Tara. The Network was willing to accommodate 'Willow Rosenberg and guest' on its expense account, but while Tara's lecture schedule was flexible, it wasn't so flexible that she could accompany Willow on every single assignment she ended up with. They had compromised that they would cajole and wheedle whatever scheduling changes were necessary, either from Tara's faculty or Willow's network, to go together on Willow's overseas assignments, but to avoid trying the patience of their superiors, any trips within the country would be taken whenever the network's powers-that-be chose, even if it meant coping with each other's absence for a few days.

Willow continued bopping her hips from side to side as she prepared for bed, and when she reached the teeth-cleaning stage, she began opening and closing her lips to turn her electric toothbrush's whirr into an amateur, and rather gurgly, musical accompaniment. She imagined Tara watching, then grinned as imaginary Tara burst into a fit of giggles.

The thong, and the matching nipple tassels which remained in her luggage, were the latest in a series of odd purchases that marked Willow's globe-trotting travels. It had begun with a trip to Disneyland, on which Willow, apropos of nothing, had bought a pair of Mickey Mouse ears, and when she arrived home surprised Tara by waiting for her in the bedroom wearing the ears and nothing else. Since then every trip more significant than the weekly shopping meant Willow would find some item of clothing appropriate for the location, and contrive to seduce Tara when she got home while wearing said item, a task made significantly easier by Tara's extreme willingness to be seduced at the drop of a hat.

Indeed a section of closet was now devoted to Willow's souvenirs. There was the kimono from Tokyo, the hula skirt from Hawaii, the imitation-fur-lined Eskimo coat with its big fluffy hood from Alaska - though few Inuit, Willow acknowledged, would have been inclined to leave their pants off, as she had that night - the Roman toga, the sari from New Delhi, the gauzy veil from Turkey, the flamenco shoes from Spain, and even mementoes of trips closer to home, such as the 'I (heart) NY' shirt, deliberately several sizes too small. On those trips where Tara accompanied her Willow had taken to hiding away her new purchase until they got home, which had proved quite difficult - though rewarding, in the end - when in Paris she'd got her heart set on a full Moulin Rouge dancer's outfit, complete with peacock feather tail.

In Willow's opinion it beat postcards hands down.

So, here in Las Vegas with her exotic dancer's outfit duly purchased, Willow returned to her bedroom with a sense of satisfaction, stripped off the thong, and pulled out a t-shirt of Tara's to sleep in - the purpose for which Tara always made sure to put one in her luggage when they had one of their brief enforced separations.

"Save a tree - eat a beaver!" she read from the front of the shirt, chuckling at the memory. Tara had spotted it at a market six months ago, and had it hit her funny bone in just the right way that she was unable to stop laughing for half an hour. They had waited another half an hour for the stall to be un-crowded enough that she could buy it without being seen by anyone, with Willow keeping a look-out as she hastily pointed the shirt out to the stall-holder - a task made harder by her inability to actually say the words, and having to rely instead on directions along the lines of 'that one, between the other two, no further back, below that one, that's it' - and of course, Tara had never actually worn it in public. Willow pulled it on, feeling it settle comfortably on her slender form.

As she drew back the covers her eye lit on the satin-wrapped bundle on the coffee table across the room, and she decided it was time.

[hr]

"You did?" Willow grinned excitedly, and held her cellphone between her ear and shoulder as she waved vaguely in Xander's direction. "Xander, hand me my bag?"

The trio of Willow, her location producer Giles, and cameraman Xander, were waiting for their flight to Vegas start boarding. Giles was sipping tea from a styrofoam cup, which he clear disapproved of, Xander was engrossed in a comic, and Willow was taking full advantage of her network cellphone account to talk to Tara.

"What, did you forget something?" Xander asked, handing the in-flight bag past Giles, who sat between them, to Willow.

"Tara packed a present for me," she replied, beaming. "Because," she added, speaking into the phone, "she's the best girlfriend ever! Oh here it is, with the satin- huh? Oh... oh, right, okay then." She quickly zipped the bag up again.

"No present?" Xander asked.

"Um, it's not really a present for opening at the airport," Willow explained, blushing slightly. "No reason of course! Just, you know, later on, not so much noise and confusion - don't want to have someone bump into us and make me drop it, that'd be a horrible thing to happen to a present."

Xander looked around the departure lounge, which was quite sedate.

"I don't see a lot of people running around not looking where they're going," he offered, with a grin that said he knew he was being unhelpful.

"Navigationally-challenged people could happen at any time!" Willow insisted. "It's okay baby," she added to the phone, "I've put it away again... uh-huh... yeah," she suddenly grinned very widely, and Xander chuckled.

"What?" she protested. "I'll have you know our conversation is entirely innocent."

"I didn't say anything!" Xander replied.

"I know that look, that's your grinning-at-Willow look - I can tell, you always use that look... when you... grin at me," she finished, not entirely happy with how the sentence turned out. "Yeah I know," she admitted to the phone, "it sounded more authoritative in my head ... I should only talk to you when we're alone," she added, mock-frowning at Xander. "That'll teach him to infer that we're spicy-talking... oh? Oh, darn." Her face fell with disappointment.

"What's up?" Xander asked.

"Tara's covering an evening seminar," Willow explained. "No evening chat with the phone bill going to the company - I mean, not unless I stay up late. I could stay up late!" she insisted into the phone. "Well I could," she repeated after a pause. "Um, about six-thirty the next morning... I can get by on less than eight hours sleep just fine. Alright, I promise I'll get enough sleep," she finished. Xander smiled indulgently and went back to reading his comic.

"I'll miss your voice," Willow went on. "Uh-huh... I know it's only one night, but still... Okay then, how about when I get back we go do something special? ... Actually I was thinking more along the lines of... um, maybe a camp-out?" She glanced warily at Xander, who was off in his own world.

"Uh-huh... yep, out by the lake... Oh no, remember that time I went out trail-bike riding, just to get in practice so I wouldn't make a doofus of myself on national TV the week after? I found this spot just a little way from the lake, with an overlook, and it's... um, secluded," her voice dropped to a whisper.

"Secluded?" Xander asked, coming out of his comic-trance like one of Pavlov's dogs hearing a bell ring.

"Xander!" Willow complained. "Private moment - not that there's anything private going on," she added hastily, "we're just discussing, um... yeah, stargazing!" she said, nodding in agreement with the voice on the other end of the line. "Nothing unusual about stargazing at all."

"You have to be secluded for stargazing?" Xander asked. "Do the stars mind either way?"

"It's important!" Willow insisted. "Because... otherwise... um, light pollution! If there are other people around all the house lights and so on bounce around the sky, and you can't see as many stars." A comment from her phone got her attention, and she blushed and grinned.

"Yeah I'm sure we'll see plenty of stars," she agreed. "Um, perhaps, if you like, we could bring... the, uh... the new... telescope, yeah, that we bought last week?" Her grin got wider and her blush disappeared as her eyes glazed over and she stopped paying attention to her surroundings.

"Yeah I'd like to," she nodded slowly. "If we start out with one of the smaller ones... um, to see where the stars are, generally... and then switch over once I'm- it's all ready... Oh it is most definitely a date, baby," she smiled. She was startled out of her reverie by a boarding call over the airport speakers.

"Drat honey, gotta rush," she said. "Yeah they're calling the flight, I have to go."

"Yes please do," Giles said quietly, "before my modesty receives its death-blow."

"Um, I'll talk to you tomorrow night," Willow said, blushing furiously. "Love you, bye baby." She shot a glare at Xander, who was laughing so hard he was holding his sides.

[hr]

Willow sat cross-legged on the bed, with the hem of Tara's 'beaver' shirt resting on her thighs, and the present in her lap. She took a moment to appreciate the satin cloth wrapped around it, running a hand softly over it, feeling its soft texture. There was once a time when the mere mention of a present would have her shredding the wrapping to get at it, but one of the many things Tara had brought to her was an appreciation of the journey, as well as the destination. She lifted the corner of the cloth, and leaned down to brush it against her cheek.

"Satiny," she murmured, adding a quiet "Well, duh," as an afterthought.

She carefully unwrapped the cloth from around its contents, which proved to be a slim wooden case, with tiny vines and flowers painted on the edges, and gleaming with a deep, rich varnish that brought out the texture of the wood. Willow smiled as she studied the careful artistry, recognizing her lover's work.

She opened the box's hinged lid and, finding a handwritten page inside, lay it in front of her and stretched out on the bed, pulling a pillow over to prop beneath her chin, with the satin covering it, while she read.

My precious Willow,

Here's a little something to keep you company of a night, until I see you again, and can - how should I put this? - attend to your needs in person. If you hadn't guessed by now, the contents of this box are meant for a private moment when you're not likely to be disturbed. I wouldn't want you to get half-way through and be interrupted before you finished.


Willow giggled, seeing Tara had drawn a little eye with an arched eyebrow above it, echoing just the teasing expression of Tara's that she was already imagining.

Make yourself comfortable, sweetest... and know that nothing can carry you far enough away that my love can't reach you. And just in case you're not sure, I fully intend for you to 'make yourself comfortable', if you know what I mean. And you know the smile I'm smiling while I write this, don't you?

Sweet dreams, my sweet dream girl.

- Tara (yours)


Willow found her heart racing as she finished reading the brief note - while its meaning was clear enough, she had no idea what might lie beneath it in the box. Willow knew from considerable and enjoyable experience that Tara gave her imagination free rein when it came to their intimate moments, or indeed intimate hours and, on occasion, entire days. Over the course of the five years they had been together Tara had surprised Willow with velvety seductions fit for the most squirmingly-enticing romance novel, love poetry that in Willow's opinion would have made Shakespeare bite his quill in half, exotic encounters that left her scandalized, in the best possible way, for days afterwards, and playful romps that were so silly they could only be the product of true love.

'I still can't see a French maid's outfit without giggling,' she thought of one of their more recent escapades.

She took a moment to savour her curiosity and expectation, then lifted the paper and deposited it on the bedside table. Beneath it in the box was a slim book, hand-bound with gold patterns painted onto its crimson leather cover, and a single word in delicate calligraphy: 'Tara'. Willow quickly lifted the volume and moved the empty box onto the table with the note, settling back down and slowly opening the cover.

The inside cover was blank, but on the first page, marked with a cloth bookmark, there was a column of text. Willow looked at it, slightly puzzled - Tara had written over less than half the width of the page, and the length of each line was different to the one before, as if her right margin were waving gently in and out. Some words had their letters tightly-packed, others were written flowingly, spread out, and on some letters, some words, Tara had gone over the lines several times, strengthening the characters, while others were normal, and some written with the faintest of marks. Willow shook her head in bemusement and read:

There are times when you hold me so tenderly I could slumber forever in your arms; or bring me such joy that I laugh until I ache. When the capriciousness of the world grates on me and my temper rails against my control, you can soothe me with a word, and when I see only greys and monotonous existence, with a look you bring me back to a world of colour and surprise and life. From me to you, with nothing in between. I love you.

Willow smiled, biting her lip with gentle pleasure as she heard Tara's voice, and felt her fingers stroking her hair as she spoke, slowly and with care for every word. She lifted the bookmark to turn the page, and noticed one more line of text, sideways. Instinctively she turned the book side-on, read the cheeky line: Our little secret..., and gasped as she glanced idly at the irregular column of text, finally seeing it for what it was as her unfocused eyes took in shades and contours, not letters. The image was well-hidden, indistinct by nature, existing only in delicate patterns of thin and thick lines, dense and sparse letters - but Willow knew Tara's form too well to mistake the curve of her waist to her hip, the angle her thigh would rest at as she lay with one knee bent, the triangle formed as she would prop her head up on one arm and gaze longingly at her lover.

Willow marvelled at the work that Tara had put into the simple page - how she must have sketched and compared and experimented and drawn the lines again and again, to capture the most ephemeral echo of her own form in a few lines of text. She felt a secret joy in seeing Tara's work revealed to her, a tingle down her spine as if she and Tara had locked eyes over a busy room and shared a glance laden with private meaning, or stolen a second amid a crowd to whisper words that would never be heard by anyone else. She shifted her hips on the bed, remembering just such moments, when the space she shared with Tara, personal and private, had suddenly sprung out of its usual haunt in their house, or the secluded, scenic spots they frequented, and wrapped around them in the most unlikely moments. Packed onto a bus, waiting for a flight at an airport, standing in a queue at the theatre, wandering the aisles at the supermarket - every now and then, with moments of intense, secret joy, they reminded each other that there was no such thing as 'mundane' while they were together. Willow knew, for certain, that this was exactly what Tara was saying to her right now, and she felt a thrill to the part of her soul that was always virgin to Tara's exploring touch, as she righted the book and turned the page.

A moan escaped her lips at what she saw. Above a delicately-written paragraph Tara had drawn herself, lounging on a contoured sofa, a single rose held between her fingers, light and shadow playing across her from reflections and distant spotlights - the surroundings were sketched in only a few lines, but Tara herself was complete. She wore a sleeveless top - golden, Willow knew, even though Tara's pencil caught only the texture and not the colour of it - that was just on the verge of opacity, but not quite. Almost, but not quite enough to completely conceal the plane of her stomach as she reclined, or the swell of her breasts as she leant back with her elbows against the back of the sofa. A gap, a sliver of bare skin, showed between the top and tight black jeans. Willow remembered, and peered closely, seeing Tara had even drawn the tiny rose vine embroidered on the left leg of her 'vixen pants'.

Do you remember? Tara asked, and Willow did, of course, at once. The night they had dressed up on a mutual dare, to 'turn heads' at a club they had found months ago, where the friendly, casual atmosphere permitted them to shed some inhibitions a little way - Willow had worn leather pants, a silk top and a matching corset, but she believed Tara had trumped her in the clothing department. She remembered the exact moment Tara had reconstructed, when she had gone to fetch drinks, and returned to see Tara waiting for her at their modestly secluded table, leaning back on the sofa, with the strapless black bra she had been wearing tucked away in her handbag. Willow had near as dropped the bottle of wine she was carrying - for a moment her mind ran in opposite directions, arousal one way, panic the other, stretching her line a tug-o-war rope between, until Tara had caught her eye and given her a look that said-

Like what you see? she had written below, just as her eyes had said, and then: Who would have though it, shy Tara Maclay drinking in the feel of your eyes on her, your gaze penetrating me as easily as it did my clothing, with nothing now keeping the secrets that gauzy material was eager to give up. Remember how you stared, how as you sat with me your breath caught, watching my arousal grow in the coloured lights, rose-tinted skin and pale purple nipples under their gleam, all for you. Remember the whispered promises, the things you and I said that only we could hear, teasing each other, testing - how far could we go? Remember the trembling exultation as our eyes locked, standing, walking slowly to the shadowy recess off the dance floor, you whispered the words I wanted to hear, and I said the one word that neither of us, earlier that day, would ever have believed I would say, like that, there. Yes, I want you. Yes, now. Yes, here. Yes, like this, no closed doors, no waiting until later. Will anyone see, through the shadow? I don't care. You don't care. What I give you can't be stolen by an outsider's glance. Remember how it felt to reach into my pants, feel my ocean, dive deep? Remember arching your back as I pulled your top open, sucked your nipples, biting as you made me come so hard?

"Oh god I remember," Willow breathed, squirming. Her arms wrapped tightly around the pillow beneath her chin, crushing it, while her hips worked slowly, pressing again and again into the mattress, grinding her mound against the sheets. She squeezed her eyes shut, hissing a breath between clenched teeth, and exhaled a shuddering sigh as she turned the page.

For a moment she was surprised by the next image - a simple drawing of two hands clasped together, hers and Tara's. Then she read the words beneath it, and her heart swelled with love and remembered desire.

I know you remember this, my lover forever. That first night, when we were both so shy and awkward, and could barely muster the courage to speak as we knew that we would be spending the night together, in the same bed, and by an agreement spoken in half-finished sentences and coy glances, no longer hiding our bodies from each other. Remember how we hesitated, looked to each other for guidance, afraid of seeming too eager, and secretly hoping for the other to make the first move, reach out and touch first? We lay together, side by side, our arms touching beneath the blankets you'd pulled up against the cold - and as soon as we touched, neither of us was cold. Our hands found each other in the dark, and held, and everything began. I turned onto my side. Your arm reached for me, hesitant, but hugging me close. I felt your breath against my cheek, and knew how close your lips were. I knew the next kiss would be nothing like those we had exchanged before. That the desire we felt was new, that there was nothing left between us. That if we kissed now, neither of us would be able to stop.

You asked "Do you want to kiss?" and I moved forward without thinking, and it was only the touch of your lips that made me realise what was about to happen. With our lips already brushing together, I spoke, telling you my vulnerability, that I had no defences, and no will to stop. I remember, always, the moment you claimed me, with a trembling nod, the moment you let me inside you. That nod, in darkness, felt only by your face moving against mine, changed my life. It began my life, and yours. And for the rest of the night, we celebrated our new birth.


Willow nodded without realising, remembering the scalding-hot, panicked realisation she had experienced when Tara had uttered those words, "If we kiss... I-I won't be able to stop kissing you, and...," and how she had needed nothing more to know that, frightened of these new feelings as she was, terrified of being inadequate, or somehow shattering their newfound love with a wrong word, a wrong touch, she wanted Tara to kiss her with all her heart. It was, she believed, the first time in her life she had wanted something with all her heart - and her heart had been proved so, so right. She had found courage she never knew, to venture, to touch, to love without reserve, to trust herself to feel what was right, and as she had lain beside her, legs tangled together, arms around each other, on the verge of sleep with the musk of sex wreathing them and the first light of sunrise peeking through the curtains, she had known that she wanted to love this woman for the rest of her life.

Grinning like a giddy schoolgirl, she was sure, she turned the page. Her mouth went dry as she saw the next image, a sight that had been seared into her memory by a blaze of passion ever since the first time, almost a year after they had fallen in love. There was no surrounding detail, but none was needed - Tara had drawn herself kneeling, docile, her eyes lowered, her features soft and peaceful, framed by the few strands of hair escaping the tight French twist she wore. She was naked, and displayed her nakedness proudly, her shoulders back, presenting her breasts with her nipples already hard, her thighs parted, offering an inviting glimpse of her mound, its covering of hair neatly trimmed into the shape of a heart for tonight, her lower back arched to present her full, smooth ass to whatever attention Willow might give. Just as she remembered Tara's hands were behind her back, her wrists touching. She remembered, as clear as if Tara were straddling her right now, leaning forward to whisper in her ear, her words: "Tell me I'm bound, and I don't need cuffs to make it so."

This, she had written, I remember as if my body itself were memory, such that I cannot recall this moment without becoming as soaked as I was then, waiting for your pleasure, without my hips moving, anticipating your entry, without my sex clutching for you, my body aching for you, my mind laying at your feet, to be yours. The names we first took that night, 'Mistress Willow' and 'little kitten' - how I love to be Your little kitten, my Mistress. I adore the pleasure I can give in return, when you kneel beneath my stern gaze, but I think this pleasure, the first submission, will never be overwhelmed.

Remember how nervous I was, my Mistress, to tame myself to You not as a lover, but as Your little kitten, Your tender, willing slave? How kindly You took me, and let me find my place between Your thighs, how generous You were with the gifts You bestowed, climax after climax, flood after flood of Your nectar until my face gleamed with Your juices. I will always, always remember how You held Your little kitten, Your one hand on my back, pressing in time to my heartbeat, Your other on my chest, stroking with my breathing - how I closed my eyes and felt my world change, my body give itself to You, You making my heart beat, You making my lungs draw air, You making me Yours, controlling me more completely than even I could myself. I became You, my Mistress Willow, and even when we lay our heads down and shed our names and our game, we remained one.


Willow had no way to stop herself reaching a hand beneath her body, splaying her fingers through the soaked hair at the apex of her thighs, dragging her fingertips through the hot, needy folds that pulsed with desire as she touched them. She squeezed her clit between her fingers, bringing tears to her eyes, then lifted her hips and sank back down, her arousal easing the snug passage of three fingers past her clenching entrance, into the tight, grasping cathedral within.

With shaking fingers she turned the next page.

She couldn't place the image at once, but it stole her breath nonetheless. Tara had drawn herself - even without guessing Willow couldn't have failed to recognise her body - from waist to thighs, as if seen from very close to. She was resting on one side, and her legs were parted, one thigh thrust out before her, bent up near her stomach, the other stretched out beneath her. She had drawn every detail, and Willow found herself unbearably aroused and infinitely touched that Tara had done this, had devoted so much time and effort to giving her such an intimate, personal portrayal of herself. In the stroke of pencil over paper she had captured sunlight gleaming on her exposed inner thigh, revealing a stretch of skin moist with the orgasmic issue of her sex, which was pouted open, spent and satiated, flushed with satisfied need, glistening with liquid pleasure. Willow recognised her own hand as the one draped, as if in sleep, over Tara's thigh, barely an inch from her cleft, and she recognised the gleam on her fingers.

Think of when the new sunlight entered us - how we had planned our stay, how we had revelled in our island seclusion knowing no-one else would see us in the little cove we had travelled to. Remember days spent swimming and laughing, without a care in the world, the love we'd make as we spread lotion on our bodies, so we would need nothing else to shield us as we played, and the love we made in the water, and among the palm trees, on the grass, on our towels spread out just where the waves reached out legs, and the love we made every night as the sun set behind the mountains. Always love, and only love.

Lose yourself in the memory of that last night, the last of the old year, as we lay on the beach under starlight, talked and sang and slept and made love all night long. I remember how, with each passing hour, I needed you more and more, how I could almost feel the daylight of the new year's dawn rushing towards us from over the horizon, like desire overtakes me when you gaze at me with love in your eyes. I remember how we made love, more and more, tasting becoming devouring, until we were within each other, indivisible, engrossed and gorged on our love. I think of how I teased your nipples until you cried for release, of how we lay side by side, head to toe, and lowered our eager lips to each other's cores and licked and sucked and drank heaven's bounty until we were a flood, how you, oh my goddess, teased me open, more and more, until I lay with your hand inside me, and felt such a wonder as I still have no words for, that first, brilliant realisation of how totally, wholly within myself I could take you, and you me in return.

But most of all I remember the dawn, while we lay together, almost asleep, two creatures of the earth without clothes or shame, our muscles worn from our exertions, our skin forming rose-tinted marks to show where we had kissed and sucked and bitten in lust, the bursting dams of nectar from within us slowed to trickles which never quite ended, but still came sneaking out on silent thighs which were spent and sore from the hot nights which came before, and then, then my love, the sun came, and its light entered us, shone upon our bodies and warmed all the secret places which we gave to each other, and we saw in the new year not with eyes shielded against the glare on the horizon, but with sated bodies drinking it in.


Overcome by memories Willow worked her fingers quickly within herself, not sparing herself at all, but thrusting firmly in, deep. She would be tender later, but she would wear it as a badge of pride, of the moment when she lost herself to her love, her Tara, completely - when her lover took her, though she was all alone, miles away.

"Tara," Willow moaned, feeling herself tense, her climax near. "Tara... Tara!"

She pushed herself up with her free hand, pushed her hips back into her palm as her fingers buried deep, arched her back, offered herself to the goddess who had reached out and loved her over all the distance between them, and she came and came and came until she collapsed, almost surrendering to sleep.

Almost - one thing, still, she needed before she could rest. She reached for the bedside table, felt around until her fingers closed on her phone, and drew it to her ear, pushing a button as she did so. She listened as the phone dialled, the connection was made, their answering machine picked up and played its quick, cheerful message in her own voice, and then she spoke:

"I love you."

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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby umgaynow » Tue Aug 09, 2005 12:05 pm

DAMN, Chris!! That was just...well...damn!!!!!!!
(fanning self )

Especially the bit about how fully she could take her lover inside her etc.
Almost had to swoon at that bit...I repeat...DAMN!

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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby Emms » Tue Aug 09, 2005 12:09 pm

Awesome Chris!! simply awsome....

"Tell me I'm bound, and I don't need cuffs to make it so."


wow.......

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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby FineyMcFine » Tue Aug 09, 2005 2:00 pm

Chris, that was faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaabulous! The fic elements were so unobtrusive. I especially liked Giles's comment:

"Yes please do," Giles said quietly, "before my modesty receives its death-blow."


Heh!

And when Willow was reading what Tara made for her, and reminiscing, YOWZA! I especially liked the remembrance of their first night spent together and their kiss. The best part about fan fiction is filling in those gaps.
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby GayNow » Tue Aug 09, 2005 4:52 pm

Oh, Chris...thank you so much for adding this to the challenge. It was well worth the wait.

The first requirement of this challenge stated that there must be smut present in the tale. However, while you write *wonderful* smut, I can't use that term to describe what you've written. This is so much more. It's deeper. It's more meaningful. It's more fullfilling. It's love. That's what it is....love. And it's so beautiful.

The line that just stood out for me...and I'm not sure why...is
This, she had written, I remember as if my body itself were memory

That is just so absolutely wonderful. Amazing, Chris. You truly amaze me.

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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby watty » Wed Aug 10, 2005 2:01 am

Wow! That was worth the wait, and then some. Willow as Travel Network presenter, I can just imagine it cos she has such infectious enthusiasm that could be so evident on TV. I laughed at
the world's first laptop-addicted life-form

cos that's a fitting description of a few of us here :lmao Getting a little souvenir from each location traveled, actually it requires more thought and care than expected -- most places nowadays is full of tacky plasticky stuff aimed at the unsuspecting tourists that finding something truly "local" is bordering on impossible.

Tara's gift to Willow. Oh my. It's sooo beautiful, the whole thing is like a giant love poem, a very sweet and private and deep love poem between two people in love. Miles better than any sex toy or images sent via bluetooth. The drawings alone would have done the job of attending to Willow's needs, but the words, the words ... I'm speechless again.

I could quote every single word that Tara wrote, simply cos they are so moving and caring and fully of poetic beauty. From the first shy glances, and the first time
"Do you want to kiss?"
"If we kiss... I-I won't be able to stop kissing you, and...,"

and the urgency in the club
Yes, I want you. Yes, now. Yes, here. Yes, like this, no closed doors, no waiting until later. Will anyone see, through the shadow? I don't care. You don't care. What I give you can't be stolen by an outsider's glance.

and then to the Mistress/ little kitten and the lovemaking in the island. Beautiful.

One thing I've noticed recently, and Debra's probably sick of me going on about this, and that is how sometimes it's even more sensuous and sexy to write less smut rather than more. Debra did it to very great effect in SAI, and you did that with the last Smut Bunnies update, the loving warm bath had more meaning than the actual sex deed. You've now taken that approach to another level with this entry. Yes there was smut, but I feel it's more Willow's reaction to Tara's love that is so evident from the drawings and words that are simply ... and I say again, beautiful.

Oh, and the FC elements? I didn't even notice them, they were blended in so seemlessly. Kudos for using all the hard parts, especially the Ani lyrics. Anyone who can incorporate the silent thighs line without it seeming to be like quoting the song is a master ... course we know that's what you are already.

I hope that this entry will prompt more readers and more writers to contribute in terms of feedback and entries, cos interest in the FCs is certainly on the decline and I can't begin to fathom why. Is it cos people see "challenges" and they have connotations of hastily clubbed together short stories that are built around the requirements rather than the other way round? But the quality of entries we've had, for all 4 challenges, show that this is by no means the case, we have writers here who have given us stories that are standalones in their own right. It's a bit disillusioning really, so much so that I think Car's about to give the whole idea of fic challenges a break, or at least putting it on hiatus, and that's a big shame.
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby wiccanbotanist » Wed Aug 10, 2005 3:27 am

Chris I shall say again you are a God. I really could go on but everyone has already said it, you have a way of making it more than just smut, you really show the love. And that is what I love best about Willow and Tara stories.

:bow :bow :bow :bow I humbly bow to thee

As for everyone else, I believe in you, you can write stories...you can add to this wonderful collection (don't be intimidated by Chris or Watson we all can't be as cool :glasses as them). But you can contribute and I know it will be wonderful. So hop :bounce to it. :-D

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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby GayNow » Wed Aug 10, 2005 10:04 am

the prolific watson wrote:I hope that this entry will prompt more readers and more writers to contribute in terms of feedback and entries, cos interest in the FCs is certainly on the decline and I can't begin to fathom why. Is it cos people see "challenges" and they have connotations of hastily clubbed together short stories that are built around the requirements rather than the other way round? But the quality of entries we've had, for all 4 challenges, show that this is by no means the case, we have writers here who have given us stories that are standalones in their own right. It's a bit disillusioning really, so much so that I think Car's about to give the whole idea of fic challenges a break, or at least putting it on hiatus, and that's a big shame.


My dear friend is correct. There are so many wonderful writers out there who have contributed in the past..and so many others who have not contributed, yet. And it would be a wonderful thing if we had 22 fics for each challenge, though I know that's not entirely realistic. But, there have only been 4 authors who've contributed to this particular challenge (4 authors, 5 fics...watson couldn't hold back). That's quite a drop off in participation. So, I'm thinking this will be the final challenge for a while. Some people seem busy working on other projects...while others just seem to have lost interest. Fic Challenge 5 will show up in the future...I just don't know when.

Thank you to ALL of the wonderful kittens who have contributed in each Challenge. I've really been overwhelmed by the overall response to them. Such wonderful stories! I have them printed so they are easily available for quick reading. Good stuff. I'm proud to share a community with you all.

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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby Artemis » Wed Aug 10, 2005 10:20 am

Thanks everyone; more thorough feedback and feedback replies later, once I've finished reading the other fics. In all the Challenges I've avoided the thread until I had my own ready, so as not to 'cross-contaminate' my fic.

GayNow wrote:The first requirement of this challenge stated that there must be smut present in the tale. However, while you write *wonderful* smut, I can't use that term to describe what you've written.

I still get a Foursome Award though, right? Or a Threeandahalfsome Award, seeing as I doubled up the first two Challenges in one fic?
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby GayNow » Wed Aug 10, 2005 10:28 am

the wonderful Chris wrote:I still get a Foursome Award though, right?


Of course you do! Smut was definitely present...I just didn't want to call it that. You've gone beyond mere smut, sweetie.

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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby terra21 » Wed Aug 10, 2005 11:10 am

...............uh....................um.........................gulp....................er......
......................sigh.................whimper...................yeah.............


Thanks alot Chris, now I'm late for work!

Dammit, I should have waited until I got home to read this, cause NOW I need a cold shower. (Mary warned me, but noooooooooooo, I couldn't wait, serves me right I guess.)
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby hermitfish » Wed Aug 10, 2005 11:30 am

Chris:

Wow. That was wonderful.

What a beautiful W/T life you presented in such a great format.

Thanks for finishing this entry. I'm so glad I'm got a chance to start catching up on my reading with this one.

But mostly I'm just stuck on Wow.

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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby vix84 » Wed Aug 10, 2005 5:57 pm

Chris - well done, that was a pleasure (in all ways) to read. I love the depth you gave to the story, the images of a relationship that is so full of love and wanting. The concept was beautiful.

Car - As someone who has enjoyed contributing to other challenges, I'd just like to add my two cents. It's not that I'm no longer interested in reading/writing challenge stories. I don't enjoy writing short fics with smut, because when I write it, it feels like there's more sex than characterisation and storyline. Of course, there are many authors who can pull off both, as we have just seen in the above five entries, but I wanted to explain why I haven't been involved in this one. I prefer the rating and smut content to be optional.

If people disagree, so be it... just thought I'd explain. I'd really like to see challenge number five and contribute to it.

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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby spells42 » Wed Aug 10, 2005 7:47 pm

Car
Hi. I'm newly 'out' in this forum tho' I've been reading for months. I recently came across this fic challenge and after enjoying the entries here went and read all the fics in No.3. I'm impressed by the talent shown and the skill needed to shape a story around random requirements. I don't think I could ever do that, but one day I might try. I rushed over here last night when I saw another story was posted.
I can understand your disappointment over the level of response, but everything has a natural ebb and flow - give it some time and I'm sure FC5 will be eagerly received. I will certainly be keeping an eye out for it.

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First, let me say 'Thanks' for Through the Looking Glass. I think I've read just about every fic there, and they've given me many hours of enjoyment. I came to the Kitten Board because of your site.
I love your writing, and your offering in this FC is outstanding. I read it last night on the Looking Glass after the KB server went down, and I've spent all my waking hours since thinking about it. To receive such a gift as Willow did, showing such love, tenderness, passion and devotion, not to mention artistry, seems so wonderful as to be impossible. Yet, through this fic, you give us all that experience.
I whole-heartedly agree with watson's comments - it is indeed poetry - and so would just like to add...thank you.

I've enjoyed the other fics here and would like to give some fb but I have to go deal with RL stuff now - lunch break is over, sadly.

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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby Artemis » Sun Aug 21, 2005 8:18 am

Hello Kittens. Apologies for taking this long to leave feedback, sometimes all the fics I follow for Looking-glass pile up :blush

Sally McFine: I love the art exhibit, particularly the decor and Anya's vagina comment :lol Carleen was right, this challenge is very hard on poor Giles' glasses, he's going to wear right through the glass I'm sure. Willow and Tara's private flirting was very cute, but their later visit to the bathroom :drool And especially Tara telling Willow to open her eyes, what a sight for her :x

Incidentally, awesome work on all the award images you've done :clap

Wiccanbotanist: Lovely - I like Tara/Dawn as a pair, there's a really sweet mix of friend and parent/child relationship to them, and Tara gives Dawnie genuine respect. That was really nicely portrayed. Poor castor rubrum though, in danger of not being eaten - though everyone's varying reactions to Tara's statement made me laugh long and hard, especially Buffy knowing there was a threat happening, but not being able to work out how. As for the finale, yee haw indeed :D

Watson: Wow, that was an incredible work for a short story - pretty much a whole episode. And so many things to enjoy - Tara's musings on technology, followed by Willow teasing her, followed by her teasing Willow in the car - did I mentioned I really liked the use of first person? I did, it brought a very intimate feel to the story. And the White Lady :blush I really enjoyed that story, especially the ending. It wasn't your everyday 'everyone lived happily ever after' kind of story, with our heroes finding the missing girls, slaying some demon and going home, yet everyone did live happily ever after, according to their particular desires. I loved the subtext of the White Lady giving Willow and Tara a look-over, and an unofficial inclusion into her group through the outfits - almost as if to say that they've found exactly the same rapture as the girls on the stage, they just don't need the White Lady to provide it.

Just out of random curiosity, from her description - tall, pale, white outfit and hair, violet eyes, she's not perhaps based on Volmae from Farscape, is she - the euphoria-leader from 'Thank God It's Friday, Again'? Probably not, but I'm just curious.

GayNowWhipped: :D I always wondered what a world would be like in which Anya's normal and everyone else is eccentric :lol That was so much fun... from Anya's devices to the well-meaning yet nutty city policies, to Willow and Tara having their moment of fun, in spite of being sherherded up on stage in front of everyone. I liked their little 'rebellion' too :x

And now onto the feedback-feedback. That fic was really just the product of a couple of strange ideas I had - Tara drawing sexy pics for Willow, and a Willow/Tara fic that Tara's not actually in, yet is, in a way. That last one caused most of the delay in trying to write this, as I worked on the phone conversation so it made some sort of sense without having Tara's dialogue in it. Anyway.

Umgaynow: Thanks :) I was nervous about that bit, 'cause it's pretty heavily sexual, but I didn't want it to dominate the fic at that point.

Emms: Thank you. That line said though, just because they don't need cuffs doesn't mean they don't have any :D I like the idea that they're unnecessary though, it seems to put the D/s game they're playing into a less physical and more mental arena. I imagine, physically, they don't do anything especially different to usual when they play Mistress and Little Kitten, it's all in the mind.

Sally McFine: Thanks. I'm sure I remember reading that line, or something like it, somewhere - from the sound of it in my head I think it may be Flashman. I think it fits Giles nicely though, he's a reserved guy, but he still knows exactly what's going on. I enjoyed putting in their first night too - I wanted to have a couple of moments that were less intensely physical, to contrast with the do-me-now club scene and the Kitten bit.

GayNow: Just so long as I get the award, I'm happy to call it whatever you like :D Thank you for the feedback, and for putting in the work to do these challenges in the first place. That 'memory' line, I have no idea where that came from. Things like this just kind of turn up, when I get writing on a roll - everything up to Willow opening the box took ages to get written, with lots of stops and starts to plan the next bit and work out how to handle it. Once she started reading though, it all came together in a very short space of time.

Watson: Thanks. Yeah I can easily see Willow as a TV presenter - I imagine her reservation about public speaking wouldn't apply to a camera, and she'd talk to it pretty much like she was talking to just one person. And we know how infectious her enthusiasm is when she talks :D I'm not laptop-addicted myself, though only because I lack a laptop - my trusty desktop sees me through. I agree it can be difficult to find a suitable souvenir, but if anyone can ferret through all the mass-produced consumer junk to find something worth bringing back to Tara, I'm sure Willow can. As for the lyrics, for some reason that context for the 'thighs' line just jumped out at me as soon as I read it. And I agree, less smut can be hotter than more smut - which makes me realise, darn it, I've gone and set up expectations for Smut Bunnies to be all meaningful now :D

Wiccanbotanist: Thanks :blush

Terra: Sorry I made you late :)

Hermitfish: Thanks :D

Vix84: Thanks, I'm glad you found depth in the story - it started off as a simple little thing, even the idea for Tara to draw on memories, rather than just draw herself and Willow generically, only turned up half-way through.

Spells42: Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying Looking-glass too, it's really nice to know the site's well-loved.

You and Watson have both called it 'poetry', so I guess I should revise my comments from the previous challenge - Willow, in that one, expressed essentially my view on poetry, which is that I don't have a clue how it works or how to read it, but I like listening to it if the reader is cute :blush I still can't rhyme, though :D

Well folks, that's me done. I'll look forward to the next challenge, whenever that may be.
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/9/05) 5 F

Postby Foomatic » Wed Aug 24, 2005 6:42 pm

So I have the daunting task of following five very well written, very enjoyable challenge entries. This being the first time I've attempted to write smut, I hope this one can hold a candle to the ones before it.



Title: Good Vibrations
Author: Foomatic
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Nothing but some ol' fashioned smutty goodness!
Disclaimer: Don't own any of the characters. That distiction belongs to Mr. Joss Whedon.
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“Thank you, come again!” Willow pushed the cash register closed before turning to Giles. “This is kinda fun! I feel all ‘knowledge girl’ being able to pass on my witchy intellect to your customers!”

“Well, you’ve been a great help since Anya’s been gone.”

“When are they coming back from their honeymoon?” she asked as she walked to the display window to put up the closed sign.

“They should be back this Thursday. Honestly, I don’t think I would have managed without you, Willow. “

“I guess what Anya lacks in tact she makes up in work ethic, huh?” She began to gather a few miscellaneous items and brought them to the counter.

“Yes, well, she’s quite the natural entrepreneur. Her ability to sell chicken feet is quite remarkable.” The sound of the doorbell filled the shop, and Willow turned to see who walked in.

“Hey, how’s my favorite Wiccan?” Tara flashed a lop-sided grin before greeting her beloved with a kiss. She had intended for it to be just a quick peck, but could hardly resist when Willow captured her lips and forced her mouth open with a flick of her tongue.

Giles quickly averted his eyes, and cleared his throat. When the two witches continued on undisturbed, he did it again, this time louder. Still, they were undeterred. He let out a frustrated sigh. “When you’re finished with your ritual snogging,” he stated, rather exasperated, “I’d appreciate some help closing up the shop.”

Tara blushed profusely. “S-sorry Mr. Giles.” Giles shook his head before continuing to restock the herb containers.

“So what brings you to the Magic Box, other than the fact that your cute and oh-so-adorable girlfriend is temporarily employed here?” Willow asked as she began reshelving several books lying on the counter.

“Could be the whole ‘I practice witchcraft and I’m out of hellebore’ thing.”

“You’re not going to go all Oprah on us if we tell you we’re closed are you? “

The blonde giggled. “No, no . . . I’m not buying anything. I just wanted to tell you that-“ she glanced nervously at Giles, “-the stuff we ordered, um, c-came in the mail today.”

Willow turned to face her lover, excitement in her eyes. “Really? Which ones? The-“ she too shot a nervous look at Giles, “-the plug in or the handheld?” she finished in a hushed tone.

“Both.” The two women smiled mischievously. “So I was wondering you know . . . since you’ve been working all day . . . if you needed to relax a little . . . you know, unwind after a hard day’s work. We could, um, test them out.” Giles had turned to the cash register and began closing it out, causing Tara to hesitate before continuing. “S-see which one works best at um, relieving the um . . . tension.” Tara bit her lip as she watched the redhead’s mouth slowly drop open.

“Yeah . . . yeah,” she stammered, noticing Giles from corner of her eyes. “I have um . . . much tension that needs relieving,” She looked at Giles briefly, thankful that he was pre-occupied with counting money.

“So,” Tara said brightly, hoping to steer the conversation to less steamy waters, “what time do you get off?”

“Well, that depends,” Willow replied wryly.

“On what?”

The red head leaned forward, resting her arms on the counter. “Well, you see,“ she purred, “If you stick around and, uh, help me out, I can get off a lot sooner, but if I have to do it by myself it might take a while.” She cocked an eyebrow and licked her lips suggestively, waggling her eyes at a rather stunned blonde. Willow lifted her hand and seductively bit the nail of her forefinger as she waited for a response.

“Right, then, off you go.” Willow jumped in surprise as Giles grabbed her shoulders and ushered her from behind the counter.

“Hey! But we’re not done closing yet!” she protested.

“Yes well, I’d like to keep some semblance of my modesty intact, so if you don’t mind, I will gladly close the shop up myself.” He deposited the redhead next to her girlfriend and promptly shooed the pair out the door.





“Hello? Anybody home?” Willow entered the house, Tara in tow, silently hoping the answer was no.

“Hey guys!” Dawn appeared at the top of the stairs, and bounded down to greet the two witches. “How goes the Magic Box?”

“Good, good. I got off a little early.” Behind her, Tara tried to suppress a snicker, to no avail. Willow glanced at her and smiled as Dawn gave her a curious look.

“What? What’s so funny?”

“Oh, nothing. Nothing. Are you headed out?”

“Yeah. Don’t worry, Buffy said it was okay. I’m sleeping over at Janice’s tonight.” She grabbed her keys off the dining room table. “She and Riley went out to eat, then they’re going to patrol, and they’ll probably end up at his place, like usual.” She rolled her eyes as the sound of a car horn came from outside. “Okay, that’s my ride. See you guys later!”

“Have fun Dawn!” Tara waved as the car pulled away. She closed the door, then turned to face Willow, only to find herself suddenly pinned between her lover and the door. Willow’s mouth left a trail of hot kisses on Tara’s neck as her hands slid down her body.

“Now,” Willow whispered, ”going back to this business of getting off . . . “

“Now hold on there, Missy.” Tara put her hands on the red head’s shoulders and pushed her away slightly. “If you think we’re going to make with the monkey love before you’ve had your after work shower, well, sweetie, you’re sorely mistaken.”

“Shower? But you’ll just get me all dirty again . . .” Willow reached for Tara’s breast, and gave her biggest pout when Tara swatted her hand away.

“If that lip sticks out anymore,” the blonde said as she directed Willow up the steps, “You’re going to trip over it in the shower.” Tara stopped her in bathroom doorway, and slid her hands around her waist before lapping at her earlobes. Willow groaned as Tara slowly maneuvered one hand down her belly and into her pants, stopping at the small wet spot forming on the front of her panties.

“Now, if you take a shower like a good girl,” she whispered, letting a single finger trace up and down her folds, “I’ll show you exactly how quickly I can get you off.”

Willow shuddered at the contact. “Right. Shower. Now. Me.”

Tara released her lover. “Oh, and when you’re finished, don’t bother with clothes.” With an enticing smile, she closed the door.


With the sun quickly setting outside, Tara busied herself with setting up the mood of the evening. So Buffy and Riley won’t be coming home. . . For a change of pace, she brought down their pillows and a warm fuzzy blanket and arranged them neatly on the living room floor, in front of the fireplace. Satisfied, she whispered, “Ignis incende!” and was bathed in the soft glow of light from the fireplace and the candles she had placed around the room.

Hearing the bathroom door open, she quickly unwrapped the night’s “instruments of pleasure,” plugging one in and placing the other on the couch, making sure both were within an arm’s reach of the makeshift bed. She immediately undressed as Willow made her way down the steps.

“I know you said no clothes,” she came downstairs wearing a towel, “but it’s kinda cold and I don’t know how you feel about pale purple nipples . . .” Her voice trailed off when she caught sight of Tara. She froze in her tracks, feeling her stomach clench in a most delicious way.

The blonde was on her side, head propped up by her hand. The glimmer of the fire illuminated the curves of her body, which was only covered by a sparkly pink thong and a matching bra. Willow felt the towel slowly slip down her body, but made no move to stop it.

“Pale purple nipples, huh?” Tara said, sending the towel across the room with a flick of her wrist. “Are you going to stand there all night or are you going to let me warm them up for you?”

“Yes m’am,” the red head breathed. She joined her lover on the soft blanket, and slowly traced the contours of her body with her fingertips.

“You . . . are . . . absolutely . . . gorgeous,” Willow whispered placing kisses along her lover’s neck and shoulder, before seizing her lips in a passionate kiss. Her hands roamed the soft, supple landscape of Tara’s body, strengthening the desire that had already been built up since the moment the blonde walked into the Magic Box.

The blonde let loose a blissful groan as Willow’s hand connected with her breast. She gave it a gentle squeeze before moving on to the quickly hardening nipple, rolling it in circles with the palm of her hand. As Willow expertly removed the pink bra with one hand, Tara buried her tongue in Willow’s mouth, melting when the red head wrapped her lips around it and began sucking on it, sliding her lips up and down the wet muscle like it was popsicle.

Not to be outdone, Tara rolled the red head onto her back. Willow’s protests were cut short when Tara devoured her breasts, swirling her tongue around one and pinching the other.

“They’re not so pale and purple now,” Tara giggled, watching in delight as the small red nubs stood at attention.

Willow could feel the heat radiating from the blonde’s center onto her thigh. She reached down, mirroring Tara’s action from the bathroom doorway, and smiled as Tara’s hips rushed up to meet her touch. She gently traced the outline of her slit through the pink thong, marveling at how saturated it had become. Tara moaned and spread her legs, a silent invitation to her lover. Willow complied, sliding her hand underneath the flimsy material, before stopping abruptly.

“Whoa,” she said in surprise. She looked at Tara, then at her crotch, then back at Tara again.

“You like?” Tara asked shyly. “Cause if not it’ll grow back in no time . . . “

Willow slowly rubbed the newly shaved skin with her fingertips, lost in its incredible softness.

“I, uh . . .” Willow swallowed. “I think . . . “ Her fingers had found their way down to Tara’s outer lips and hovered there, feeling the silky smooth skin before spreading them open and diving into the pool of moisture. “I think I like. I mean, I’m positive I like.” She moved her fingers in a circular motion, occasionally brushing her clitoris. “You’re so soft down there, baby. A girl could get used to this . . .”

“I’m glad you –“ she shuddered as Willow’s finger probed deeper “-like . . . oh,” she moaned. Tara wrapped he arms around the red head and pulled her into another searing kiss, thrusting her hips forward as Willow entered her with two fingers. She gasped against Willow’s mouth, but did not break the kiss.

“Goddess baby, don’t stop,” Tara whispered, her consciousness slipping into a haze of desire and lust.

Willow’s lips curled into a devilish grin. “I think it’s time to break in our new toys, baby.” She reached across the blanket and grabbed theplug in vibrator, changing her position so that she was kneeling in between Tara’s legs. She slipped the thong off and threw it aside.

“You ready baby?” Willow asked, flipping the switch, the low hum of the vibrator filling the room. Tara’s eyes sparkled with want as she nodded her head, and braced herself as Willow brought the vibrator to her center . . . where it promptly shut off.

“Huh?” Willow flicked the switch on and off, confused. “What’s wrong with this thing?” The cord was still plugged in at the base, and the plug was secure in the socket. “Hey! We paid good money for this!” She continued to examine it, repeatedly flicking the switch in hopes of jumpstarting the vibrator again.

“Willow, look outside,” Tara said, hoping to draw the red head’s attention away from the vibrator before she got the urge to run to the basement to get her tool kit. “The houses are all dark, I think there’s a power outage.” Willow craned her next and looked out the window. Sure enough, the entire block had gone dark.

“Geez, anticlimactic much?!”

“Hey,” Tara murmured, removing the vibrator from Willow’s lap before sitting in it. “Don’t forget, we can still go handheld.” She reached down and dragged a finger slowly up her lover’s moist slit before furiously rubbing the hard bundle of nerves at the top. The red head exhaled loudly as she collapsed against Tara, the sensation rendering her body into a puddle of Jell-O.

“If . . . you keep . . . doing that . . . won’t need . . . handheld . . . “ Willow tightened her grip around the blonde.

With her other hand, Tara reached for the vibe on the couch. She had pushed for this one in particular, the dual bullets allowing for the possibility of simultaneous orgasms, which greatly appealed to her. She placed one bullet in Willow’s palm, and guided her hand between her folds. She did the same with the other, placing it against the red head’s hot center. Crushing their lips together, Tara turned the dial to high, not wanting to wait any longer for a release.

Nothing.

“Okay, what the hell?!” Tara exclaimed, in an uncharacteristic display of frustration.

“Um, Tara? Did you buy batteries?”

“Batteries?”

“Yes, hence, the ‘battery operated’ part.”

“I thought they came with it?” She flipped the toy over to open the battery compartment. Empty. “Okay, there’s gotta be four double A batteries lying around the house. You check the remote controls, I’ll look in the kitchen.” Willow stared dumbly at her love, surprised at take her charge attitude.

“Willow, move!” Tara dragged the red head to her feet before dashing to the kitchen. Willow scoured the room for the TV remote, finally finding it underneath the cushions of the couch. She opened the back and pulled out two batteries.

“I found two!” she yelled.

From the kitchen Tara responded, “I don’t think we have anymore!”

Suddenly, a thought popped into Willow’s head. “Tara, wait, I think I know where to find two more!” She dashed up the steps as Tara entered the living room. The red head came bounding down the stairs, brandishing two batteries in her hand as if they were the cure for cancer. She grabbed the blonde and dragged her to the blanket, throwing her on her back. She popped in the batteries, laid down next to her love, grabbed the bullet, and strategically placed it between Tara’s legs, all before the blonde could utter a single word. Without so much as a warning, she quickly turned the dial to high.

Tara yelped as the sudden vibrations caught her off guard. She squeezed her arms around Willow’s body, feeling her body jerk to the small explosions of pleasure as Willow maneuvered the bullet up and down her folds. Not wanting to deny her lover the pleasure, Tara groped around for the second bullet.

“Turn yours up baby, all the way,” she commanded, resting the tip of the bullet against the red head’s swollen clitoris. Willow flicked the dial, and responded with an involuntary jerk of her head as the waves of pleasure assaulted her body.

Bodies writhing in the firelight, the two women lost themselves in each other. Tara could feel the tension building, her body straining to jump head first off that peak. She felt a cold tingle travel from the soles of her feet to the top of her head as she climbed higher and higher.

“Oh god baby, here I come . . . “ A burst of white hot pleasure surged through her body as her back arched violently. “Willow!” she exclaimed, body shuddering as orgasm after orgasm washed over her.

Hearing her love cry out her name was just enough to push Willow over the edge. The sound of Tara’s voice detonated a massive orgasm so powerful that Willow could barely breath, let alone say anything. It was intense and lasted so long that Willow thought she was going to pass out before it subsided.

Tara felt the red head’s body stiffen, then relax slowly. A long sigh escaped her lips, and she settled into the blonde’s warm embrace.

“I can’t feel my legs,” she slurred into Tara’s shoulder.

“Yeah,” Tara replied, “I think I’m paralyzed from the waist down.”

“Can we just lie here for a minute, baby?” Willow asked sweetly, snuggling deeper into Tara’s arms. “But no sleeping, I fully expect a round two-“

“Sweetie if we do that again, you’re going to have to mop me up off the floor and carry me upstairs in a bucket-“

The sound of a car door slamming outside woke the two wiccans from their after sex glow. Willow peeked out the window to see Dawn making her way up to the house.

“Oh god, Tara we have to-“ But Tara was way ahead of her. In one motion she swooped up the blanket and the pillows dashed up the stairs, pausing only to swipe Willow’s towel off the floor. The red head looked around frantically before grabbing the two vibrators and Tara’s undergarments. She made it up the stairs and into her room just as the front door swung open.

“Willow? Tara?”

“We’re up here Dawnie,” was the muffled response.

“Did you get everything?” Tara asked breathlessly as she fumbled for some clothes in the dark.

“I think I did,” Willow replied. There was a knock on the door.

“Just a sec!” The red head quickly finished dressing and ran smoothed out her hair before opening the door.

“Hey guys, what’s with the mood lighting downstairs? All those candles can be considered a fire hazard. And why are you standing in the dark?” Dawn flipped the light switch and caught sight of two very frazzled looking women.

“The p-power went out earlier,” Willow explained in an even voice, trying to hide the obvious.

“Yeah, it went out at Janice’s too. But it’s back up now.” She eyed the two with suspicion.

“What?” Willow asked, rather defensively.

“Nothing. I just came back because I forgot my electric toothbrush.” She gestured to the item in her hand. “You wouldn’t happen to have some extra batteries? Cause it looks like someone took the ones out of this one. I can’t imagine why . . .”

Tara shot an amused look at Willow.

“No, I uh, I don’t have any extra.”

“Okay. Um, I’m really sorry I interrupted your, um, evening. I’ll make sure to call next time.”

“What are you talking about Dawn? You didn’t interrupt anything. We weren’t . . . doing . . . anything that could be possibly be interrupted. We were just, uh, practicing some spells. You know . . . cause we’re witches and all,” Willow babbled nervously.

“Right. That’s why there’s a thong on the stairs.” Both women’s eyes widened in horror. They looked at each other helplessly, unable to defend themselves. “I may only be fifteen,” Dawn continued, “but I know about these things, okay guys? No need to shelter me. See ya later!” With that, she closed the door, leaving the two women speechless.
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/24/05) 6

Postby GayNow » Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:15 pm

FOO!

That was fantastic! Thanks so much for contributing! YAY!

What I really loved about this contribution is that I just didn't notice the requirements -- you blended them so wonderfully. LOVE the coded talk and Giles' reaction to it. :lmao Just too damned funny.
This being the first time I've attempted to write smut, I hope this one can hold a candle to the ones before it.

First time writing smut? Holy Orgasms! You did a very nice job. That being said, I expect to see more and more smut from you! Cuz, ya know, practice makes perfect and all. ;)

So very nicely done, Foo! Great job and thanks for keeping this challenge alive!

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P.S. Anyone else want to contribute? The challenge is still open.
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/24/05) 6

Postby GayNow » Thu Aug 25, 2005 6:41 pm

Okay, it's not possible that I am the only person who has read Foo's challenge fic. C'mon, Kittens! Let's hear (read) what you have to say!
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/24/05) 6

Postby UnderTheirSpell » Thu Aug 25, 2005 8:00 pm

Shaved Tara in a pink thong by firelight.......





:drool

Oh! Heh, back now. Sorry. Um, yeah - working with that image!
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/24/05) 6

Postby watersong84 » Thu Aug 25, 2005 8:18 pm

Foo - that was great!

“You wouldn’t happen to have some extra batteries? Cause it looks like someone took the ones out of this one. I can’t imagine why . . .”

Tara shot an amused look at Willow.


That is quite possibly the funniest thing I've read in a long time. Just imagining Tara's face when she looks at Willow is enough to have me rolling on the floor with laughter. :-D

Great job!

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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/24/05) 6

Postby watty » Fri Aug 26, 2005 4:14 am

Car wrote:it's not possible that I am the only person who has read Foo's challenge fic

No, no, no! I read it too! Car emailed it to be while I was at work yesterday. Total my bad for not getting off my sorry little ass and writing feedback.

What a fun challenge! It was a great read, especially during a busy and depressing work day. From the first sentence, when Willow was so channeling Anya, you promised fun fun fun.

Love Giles'
ritual snogging

comment, because all snogs must involve a great deal of ritual, definitely.

I chuckled at
“Could be the whole ‘I practice witchcraft and I’m out of hellebore’ thing.”

cos Tara is sooooo good at the deadpan.

The smut was great. Very tender and passionate. And with surprise after surprise! Sensitive, shaved Tara, yum. Thin thongs, even yummier. Love the shock, disappointment of the power cut and battery outage, followed by the urgency. Very well paced and detailed, so loving too.

A burst of white hot pleasure surged through her body

very nice!

You know, I only have naughty uses for electric toothbrushes in my mind (surprised? nah), so I'm happy to learn that not everyone is as perverted as me, and here the toothbrush is only needed for its batteries. I'm kinda relieved actually.

Thanks for contributing to the challenge, thank you so much.


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Now if I can take this opportunity to say a couple of words of thanks. First for the fb from Chris.

For White Lady:
I really liked the use of first person

Thank you, Chris. Like I mentioned, this started off life as a Coffee Mood which is, up till now, always written in first person. It brings a certain perspective to the proceedings and suit the short story format.

I loved the subtext of the White Lady giving Willow and Tara a look-over, and an unofficial inclusion into her group through the outfits - almost as if to say that they've found exactly the same rapture as the girls

It was subtle, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. This whole concept of the White Lady is kinda abstract, more of an idea than an actual person. Of a state of mind where the followers are brought to rapture, but willingly, rather akin to worship. Alas, no, she is not based on a Farscape character, cos, um, I haven't watched Farscape. In my mind, she's a more soulful and sexual version of Galadriel.

For Clean City:
Anya and Giles in charge, of two extremes, that's what I was driving at. Those two are perfect foils for each other. Willow and Tara are almost bit part players in Anya's stage show, but yeah, I'm glad they had their little rebellion. Wonder what the "punishment" is, if they're discovered? Forced to use Anya's gadgets for 30 days?


My second thanks go to Car, for creating these challenges. They are flexible enough to allow creativity, while leaving certain required elements as the "challenge" part. This means we can let our imagination run riot without being too constrained by the criteria. You know, putting these challenges together require skillz, so it's a bit of a shame that for whatever reasons, the take-up rate has dropped. Let's hope that when the challenges return, whenever that might be, we are more refreshed and able to think of even crazier entries -- though that's probably just me speaking for myself.
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/24/05) 6

Postby Artemis » Fri Aug 26, 2005 6:45 am

Another challenge fic! :party

Tara? Very hot :drool I loved her and Willow's playtime with their new toys, especially the bizarre moments like suddenly having to raid the house for batteries :lol And the coup-de-grace from Dawn was great, I love it when she gets a bit of respect. Giles was cool too, with his 'ritual snogging' comment :D
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/24/05) 6

Postby Foomatic » Sat Aug 27, 2005 9:52 am

Hi everyone!

Gaynow: I'm glad you enjoyed! I also wanted to say that I love having these challenges . . . it's what prompted me to start writing, which was something I had never done before. There was something about taking random elements and building a story around them that appealed to me. It's a great exercise for a beginner like me, cause I find that writing a full fledged fic can be overwhelming because there's so much to deal with in terms of plots, emotions, characterizations . . . with the challenge you've got your parameters to create a basic story line and you work with it. Also, it's fun to see how people tackle the elements in different ways. All the stories I've read in each of the challenges have been amazing. It's great to have these stories . . . a nice depature from the perpetual angst that swirls around this forum day in and day out. :-D

In short, thanks for putting these challenges together, and my only regret is that I wasn't able to contribute to the first two. But I can guarantee an entry to the next challenge, if and when that happens.

Oh, and thanks for the prompt!


UnderTheirSpell:

Shaved Tara in a pink thong by firelight.......


Yeah, I kinda was in la la la land after I wrote that too . . . thanks for reading!


watersong84: Hey, thanks for stopping by! I'm glad you enjoyed it.


watson: I'm glad you liked. It felt kinda strange writing smut for the first time. I tried really hard not to sound redundant or cheesy. It's quite an exercise, trying to describe something in a hundred different ways.

so I'm happy to learn that not everyone is as perverted as me


Give me some time to spread my little wings of smut, and I'm sure I can whip out some stuff that'd make Jenna Jameson blush.

:-D


Artemis: Haven't we all, at some point or another, torn the house apart looking for batteries? Or is that just me? :) (It gets more frustrating when you need one of those stupid 9 volt ones . . . then you have to get the ladder out and tear out the smoke alarm . . . but I digress) Thanks for reading!
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/24/05) 6

Postby Foomatic » Sat Aug 27, 2005 10:27 am

Feedback for previous stories . . .



SallyMcFine: I loved the whole art exhibit premise! And the smut? With the bathroom . . . and the looking in the mirror . . . and the counter . . . did I mention looking in the mirror? HOT! I don't think I've been that hot and bothered since . . . um, hehe . . . Great job!


wiccabotanist: Yay for the rare beaver! I loved

“You are right, plus beaver is her favourite animal.” Willow gave Tara a wink at the comment.

“I thought cats were your favourite animal?” asked Dawn turning towards Tara.

“They are.” She told Dawn, trying to ignore the smirk the redhead had since the beginning of this conversation, and the larger smirk brought on by her own comment, while at the same time miraculously keeping her blush away.


And now the two of them dressed as cowgirls has been burned into my mind. Yum.


watson: I'm always floored at your ability to weave a story together. The challenge elements were fun (who can resist naughty pictures of Willow and Tara) and the smut was full of 'wriggle in your seat hoping no in the library is looking at what you're reading' goodness.

Sex and the Clean City was an interesting read. Your characterization of Anya was hilarious . . . actually, the whole premise of your story was pretty wild, a very unique approach to the challenge.

Artemis: Lyrical. That was the first thing that came to my mind when I read your entry. I would have to concur with Carleen, what you wrote was so beyond smut . . . love, desire, passion, I've never read it so beautifully written. Truly amazing. And a tough, if not impossible, act to follow. :-D
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/24/05) 6

Postby FineyMcFine » Mon Aug 29, 2005 7:46 am

Foo, are you serious that it's your first time writing smut? Because it seemed so natural, like you've been writing it forever. I loved the scenario of W&T getting naughty while everyone's away. The fic elements were seamless and I of COURSE love the discovery element of them getting caught because of a thong that was thrown to the side in the throes of passion. :)

Great job and very enjoyable to read! And I especially loved coming home from vacation to find another fic submitted for this fic challenge - I'll take it as a personal gift to me! Ha.
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Re: Fic Challenge: "Fourplay" (Updated 8/24/05) 6

Postby hermitfish » Mon Aug 29, 2005 9:59 am

Hi Foo…

I have to chime in with the others and say I’m very surprised that this was your first attempt at smut. Well done. I had to laugh as their frustration built over the non compliant toys. The idea of naked scrambling for batteries…well after I got outta happy fantasy land on the visual…was so funny. You know now we’re gonna be expecting more good writing from you now than we’ve seen some smutty talent. Kudos.

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