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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby sam7777 » Fri Dec 16, 2005 6:27 pm

I'm glad that Willow decided not to have her magic bound. I can't help but think it will come in hany later and that her love for Tara will help her overcome the darkness. Still Giles concern is realistic and something one wishes we had seen on the show. Great update!
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby grimlock72 » Sat Dec 17, 2005 4:47 am

My main problem with Giles' concern is that I don't follow what it is based on. Did he have problems with magic in his childhood or just hear a lot of bad stories when training for whatever he does today?? Giles will do nicely as badguy until we know more about mr. Walking Corpse.

Giles' asking Willow if she was hiding something, ha! The nerve of that man, obviously he himself is hiding quite a lot, and eavesdropping on private conversations... bwah. To bad we don't know the details of that night's conversation. One thing that does bug me is why Giles would have anything at all to say about what Willow does with her magic. He is not her parent or something, nor has he earned any trust. The only route via which Giles can influence Willow is Tara, and she is keeping that somewhat under control.

I'm missing Willow/Ashley interaction. Ashley wont have had her mind poisoined with Giles' ideas and preconceptions about things, so she'll 'judge' Willow more fairly. Was that the pirate from the pirateship from the restaurant by the way ?? :P

To Willow, challenge Diebel to take you of the case and lets see if he finds another pair detectives who CAN solve the case. It's highly unlikely, since those other detectives wont have access to the same sources. Diebel likely knows this, so call his bluff and lets see.

This was ironic coming from Giles
" I trust everyone in this room implicitly"
No he doesn't. We know he does not trust Willow, he said as much himself. Also for some reason I think that he (a) knew the names of the seals he told them about much earlier, (b) Ashley has something to do with seals, or is one and Giles knows this. I'm also not too trusting with the chance that of 9 seals coming from Sunnydale area (several thousand people) one happens to be directly related to someone in the scooby-group of only 7 people (Ashley excluded). The odds of that happening are VERY small.

Did I mention I don't trust Giles ?? :lol I really don't, at least mr. Walking Corpse is sort of direct. I understand Giles wants to protect Ashley and Tara, but he never states directly from WHAT. Besides, I like Willow so anybody being mean to Willow has a problem with me :).

Difference between Tara and Willow casting spells remains interesting as Tara again had to speak to do spell... Not sure if that is related to power or type of magic or just a way of doing spells.

About that babysitter, evidently the guardians were either not properly trained or are unaware of the type of threat they are facing. A big sword is stupid as indoor weapon either way, clearly it's not needed to kill the henchman (cf. Buffy shooting them single-shot dead). A sword isn't going to do much vs. magic either so whats with the bad choice of weapon???

Hmmm... come to think of it, why wouldn't mr. Walking Corpse disarm his enemies first and then let the henchman do the killing???

It's good that Willow can somewhat defende herself against mr. WC. For some reason I think she'll do fine to defend Tara or Ashley as well, should the need arise. Giles is excluded from such protection of course :devilish

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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby gabbles » Sat Dec 17, 2005 6:19 pm

Oooo good update!

Willow and Tara certainly seem to...how should I put this?...get caught up in each other when together? Very fast moving :-D But with all that tension that was around in the begining? Who can blame 'em. Hehe.

This worried me:

How can one person be so perfect?


Poor Tara...there's a lot to live up to right there. No ones perfect, Willow, and you're setting yourself up for a disappointment if you allow yourself to think of someone that way. Still cute, though :flirt

Seriously, I must say again, I love your Anya. Great comic relief!

Anya patted his shoulder, “Well spotted honey, you impress us all with your knowledge of Kindergarten math.”


Poor Xander :lol

“And do what with them?” Anya asked dubiously, “Because I am not hosting them at my house, I’ve just had the carpets cleaned!”


Ahh, the tack :dance

Was thinking that something was going to come of tracing the seal lineage. And am loving the whole 'Dawn being shipped off to boarding school for being a klepto, and being the one smudge on the perfect Detective Buffy's reputation'. Can't wait to see Dawn into this fic if she and Buffy don't get along (more then usual, that is). Should make for fun.

Can't wait to get more, Alcy. Your fics rock!

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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby caz » Sun Dec 18, 2005 1:02 pm

Great update! I'm glad that our girls are finally together. IMHO I think Willow will make a great mother and I'm sure that Tara will realise this in time.

Sorry, but I don't trust Giles as far as I can throw him. Maybe he thinks that if Willow & Tara get together then he will lose his 'family' - I don't know! I just feel that he is up to something.

Looking forward to the next update.

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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby Artemis » Wed Dec 21, 2005 8:29 am

You're just an updatey machine at the moment :D Not that I'm complaining, no siree...

What's standing out most strongly in this chapter, for me, is Giles - he's either wrong, in which case he could cause a lot of trouble, or right, in which case everyone is already in a lot of trouble. What I mean by that is that I worry his attitude is bred of necessity. He's coming across as highly defensive, untrusting, and frankly dictatorial, in a low-key sort of way - I wonder if that's an attitude that he's developed because he's had to, in order to serve what he no doubt sees as the greater good (that being, no demons charging around eating whole populations, and so forth). That he doesn't place much trust in Willow is obvious - but, I think he really should have more trust and faith in Tara, as Willow's 'contact' within their group. I give Willow immense credit for still coming out with the disturbing truth about what passed between her and Corpseman, even after Giles interrupted her conversation with Tara, in a rather intimidating fashion. It's no thanks to him that Willow didn't just clam up and say "Er, nothing," when asked what she was about to say - that, I think, is purely to do with the trust Willow has for Tara.

Plus, Giles promised Ashley cookies, and evidently isn't going to provide said cookies! Bad Giles :happy

Love the very palpable passion between Willow and Tara, and how they both got themselves into a mental knot thinking ahead, when really they're still at the let's-kiss-a-lot stage. I do like how, sooner or later, everything for Tara comes back to Ashley, even in her relationship with Willow, it's not long before she considers what this could mean for her daughter. She's such a devoted mother - it brings home the moment from the previous chapter, where she muses that Ashley is the single unquestioned 'good' in her life.
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby AlysonGoddess » Wed Dec 21, 2005 12:38 pm

Yay! Great, Super, Fantastic update... hehe willow and tara in the magic box :x that was awesome.. keep updating please!
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby pipsberg » Wed Dec 21, 2005 2:33 pm

Alcy,

I'm really enjoying Tara and Willow connecting. It's very intense... and well, hot. :) Great job!
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby Alcy » Thu Dec 29, 2005 3:21 am

WillowRulez: Hmm, groping indeed...I admit that I let myself get a little carried away with this sudden intensification of their relationship in relation to believability but they've been bottling feelings up for so long it seemed justifiable that this might realistically happen! And it's Willow/Tara groping! All good I say.
I do enjoy the challenge of writing Ashley, she and Anya are the fun, light parts at the moment.

will Updatey goodness has been temporarily delayed by the holidays but it won't be too far away. I'm not liking Giles in this story...and I'm liking not liking him!

sam7777: Yes, magic with major arse-kicking potential is bound to come in handy at some stage when faced with a hugely evil BB. Hmm, I think Giles' concern is bordering on being realistic and being over-paranoid...he certainly loves Tara, but he has to realise that she's a big girl who knows exactly what she wants.

Grimmy; Giles' concern seems to be purely based on his feelings for Tara at this point, although it remains to be seen whether he knows something extra that no one else does...these Watcher types tend to be quite insightful.
Technically, Giles has no right to say anything about Willow's magic except in the fact that she has accepted he knows something about it and has given him that right. If Willow wants Giles out, then he's out. I would think he would have more faith in Tara and trust her to see to the 'Willow-problem' - if there is one at all.
I'm really enjoying Giles as the bad guy, although there will come a time when the threat from outside has to be made more papable to all of them, otherwise the whole premise just doesnt work.
More Willow/Ashley interaction promised - Willow is Ashley's idol at the moment, it's going to be interesting exploring that, what makes a little girl look away from her mother and to an almost complete stranger...and no, it was just a little plastic pirate, no doubt with a patch and a red and white stripey shirt.
The main difference between Willow and Tara's spell casting focuses on the fact that one is highly trained and the other not. Willow has no idea what she is doing and I thought spells which are unspoken, brought on by her emotions were the best way to illustrate this. And possibly justifies Giles' fears about Willow, she is unpredictable and possibly even dangerous.
Hmm...possibly because henchmen are inherantly useless and are really only there for entertainment value. I wanted to illustrate his power straight off the bat...albeit in a relatively small way.
And no, I don't think Willow will be jumping to Giles' aid...although she is a detective, protect and serve and all that!
Thanks again for your excellent observations Grimmy!

Gabbles: Exactly, I'd be caught up if someone I wanted that badly let me have just a little taste...and then didnt protest when I took more. They've probed their limits and realised that yes, sex on a counter-top was moving too fast!
Good point, while Willow thought that I think what she really wanted to ask herself was 'what is wrong with her?' Although she's too wrapped up to think that way at present.
And yes, I've always loved writing Anya, I had to make up for her not being in Captain Red by having her in R & R. I've also had a lot of fun writing the Buffy/Dawn interaction in the next chapter. Although i was never a remotely rebellious teen so I had to draw on inspiration from my partner - who was!
Thanks Gabs!

Caz Thanks very much Caz! Willow's parenting skills are a long way removed from the present plot but yes, would be fun to see this side of her coming out. And yes, Giles' is a slippery blighter who shouldbe watched carefully!

Artemis: I should be the one complaining! All this writing...but I love it too much.
Either way, it is trouble...and I like trouble! There's a major lack of trust in evidence...with Giles being the root of most of it. I think Willow coming clean about what happen to her in the confrontation with the BB will go some way to rectify that...hopefully. Willow went out on a limb telling Giles...and I hope he realises this. Hmmm, backing out on a promise of cookies...that's evil enough for me!
You put it so well Chris, 'kiss-a-lot' stage...I like the sound of that! And you're right, there is too much going on for them to take stock of the long term, but it is uplifting to think that Willow might join Ashley to make the ultimate unquestioned good in Tara's life.

AlysonGoddess: Thanks Erin! Only too happy to please. And never fear, although the holidays are upon us I am still scribbling frantically.

pipsberg: Thanks Pips, gotta love that hottness, more promised soon. I just realised that I havent written any smut in like...ages! Time to rectify that methinks!

Happy holidays to all kittens, I'm thinking of all you Northern Hemisphere types and hope you dont get too cold! I'm basking in the heat and working on my tan!
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby watty » Thu Dec 29, 2005 5:46 pm

Hi Alcy,

Apologies for the lateness of feedback, I was busy appreciating your beautiful country. And I came home with a tan!!! We want to go back, we loved it so much.

They're moving along in their relationship.
It was as though the intensity of the feelings which had once worked to keep them apart, were now thrusting them together…literally.

Though with all the kissing and groping and thigh touching; and how abrupted Tara called a halt to the proceedings,
Willow withdrew immediately, she stepped back with a concerned look oh her face. She did not withdraw her touch completely, one hand rested lightly on Tara’s knee in a reassuring gesture.

I'm pleasantly surprised at how well Willow reacted to it.

This Giles gives me the creep.
Giles was giving her a chill every time he looked at her

Eavesdropping on the girls, interrupting just at the right moment, hiding in the bookcases. His whole attitude, grrrrrr.

Intriguing that Dawn is a seal, and I'm guessing the 7th seal is Ashley?
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby Alcy » Sun Jan 15, 2006 12:32 am

Apologies accepted! I'm glad you had a great time, although next time you have to stop in Wellington...although to be honest there isnt a whole lot to see even though its the capital. There is the museum where I work though!
They're moving fast but I'm trying my best to avoid going too fast...despite the fact it would be nice to write some smut!
I'm just having so much fun writing Giles at the moment, he's just so ambiguous and his sympathies could be going either way.
I'm not going to reveal anything....

Next chapter is moments away Kittens!

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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby Alcy » Sun Jan 15, 2006 12:38 am

Chapter Twelve – “Old Flames Best Forgotten”

The silence that hung over the stately brick building was shattered as a black sports car rocketed up the ornate and tree-lined driveway. The gravel crunched beneath its tyres as it ground to a halt at the foot of a rather impressive series of stairs and the doors swung open. The driver stepped out wearing a satisfied smile on her face. The passenger on the other hand stepped out looking rather worried and immediately did a circuit of the vehicle to check for any sign of damage to its paintwork.

“There’s not a scratch on it!” Faith moved around the back of the car to head Buffy off, she patted the large spoiler rather heavily, “Definitely looks like Red’s trying to compensate for something though!”

Buffy just rolled her eyes and made a beeline for the stairs, Faith jogged to catch up. The brunette’s eyes roamed over the entrance. A sign to the left of the door read, ‘Sunnydale School for Girls.’

“This place is trippin’!” Faith said with all her usual inflection, “And all they could think to call it was ‘Sunnydale School for Girls?’ Talk about serious lack of imagination!”

“Well, they should call it ‘Sunnydale School for Delinquent Girls,’ Buffy’s voice echoed slightly as she moved into the impressively grand foyer, “At any rate…it’s too far removed from a prison, which is where she should have gone.”

Buffy’s voiced was heavily barbed, obviously the topic of her little sister rubbed salt into unhealed wounds. Her palm came down heavily on the reception desk, causing the receptionist to glance up with a very annoyed look.

“Can I help you?” the receptionist asked in a prim voice.

“Yes, I’m Buffy Summers, I’m here to pick up my sister, Dawn Summers,” Buffy’s voice was curt.

Buffy and Faith were forced to wait nearly half an hour in the foyer. The Slayer grew increasingly agitated with each passing moment, first tapping the palms of her hands on her thighs before resorting to full blown pacing up and down the length of the foyer. Buffy watched the deliberate movement of Faith’s hips, each undulation carefully calculated to taunt. Even as she tried to focus on something as innocuous as the floor tiles, her mind kept wandering back to those hips swinging. She was watching Faith’s latest pass when the brunette looked over her shoulder and flashed a smouldering glance. A hot flush flooded Buffy’s face and she renewed her focus on the floor tiles so fiercely her eyes began to ache. The detective was saved further embarrassment by the arrival of a long-legged teenager, complete with sullen expression.

“Buffy…what the hell?”

Faith ceased pacing and Buffy stood, facing down her little sister with a firm stare. The blonde planted her hands on her hips while her sister folded her arms across her chest. Dawn’s mousy hair fell in perfect folds about her angelic face…an angelic face ruined by her sulky expression.

“Dawn, I don’t want a scene…we’re here to pick you up,” Buffy said in as neutral tone as she could manage.

Dawn’s face brightened considerably, “Hello! Did you honestly think I’d make a scene at you taking me away from this hellhole?”

“Well…you do tend to make a scene at the slightest invitation,” Buffy began, Faith elbowed her sharply and Buffy tried not to provoke, “But there’s no time for that…we have to be going.”

“Who’s the skank?” Dawn asked eyeing Faith through lidded eyes, she looked her up and down with barely concealed contempt, “Are you serious? Leather pants?”

Faith met Dawn’s gaze without blinking and replied in a deadpan voice, “Name’s Faith…and I’m very serious.”

Dawn huffed, hardly feeling threatened despite the fact that Faith had her fixed in her unwavering gaze, “Whatever! Shall I go and pack?”

Buffy shook her head, clearly agitated, “There’s no time, and we really have to get going.”

She grabbed her little sister by her upper arm and began dragging her to the entrance. Clearly upset at something, Dawn yanked out of Buffy’s grip with an indignant expression on her face.

“What I am supposed to wear? I need to pack a few things!” she insisted as only a teenager could, “You can’t seriously think that I would wear your stuff...seriously Buffy, it’s high time someone told you that you dress like a lesbian.”

Buffy looked down at her sensible suit and then up to Faith who just shrugged.

“I’m not in a position to comment, I wear leather,” Faith said dryly.

Buffy groaned deep in her throat and grabbed Dawn by her ear. The teenager shrieked but was forced to follow along with her sister or else risk her ear being ripped from the side of her head. The two made a comical sight as they went to leave the building. Meanwhile, the receptionist stood behind the counter, peering anxiously over it at the fleeing trio.

“Hold on!” she yelled in their wake, “You can’t just remove a student from school like that! There are forms to be filled out…the forms need filling out! Parental approval!”

Faith spun around but kept walking backwards as she spoke, “Piss on your forms, are you going to stop us?”

“Well I never!” the receptionist snorted and sank back into her chair; her bold statement hardly concealed the slight tremor in her voice.

Faith smirked and delivered a parting gesture with her finger before following Buffy and Dawn down the steps. In her wake, the receptionist breathed a sigh of relief.

Once outside, Dawn ceased squealing in pain only when Buffy released her hold on her ear…and that was because there was a trench-coated figure leaning up against the car. Buffy’s face had gone a rather ashen white as she stared at the newcomer. His garb was straight out of an eighties rock video, a leather trench coat falling to his ankles over a hideous red shirt and tight leather pants tucked into army surplus boots. Worst of all, his spiky hair had been peroxided within an inch of its life, framing an all too pale face and cold, knowing eyes. Casually, he flicked his spent cigarette to the ground at Buffy’s feet. Buffy looked down in horror at the cigarette smouldering below her and then back up to the strangers face, her own face fell even further. He merely smirked at her discomfort.

“It’s good to see you again Buffy,” his accent was clearly British.

“Who the hell are you?” Faith marched up to him and jabbed his chest with her forefinger.

“Might be asking you the same question. Why don’t you ask Buffy who I am!” he drew himself up to his full, not inconsiderable, height and towered over Faith.

Both looked across to Buffy, whose face was growing redder by the second.

“I made a mistake…once,” Buffy growled before rounding on Dawn, the teenager was standing defiantly with her hands on her hips as though daring Buffy to confront her, “What the hell is he doing here?”

“You were involved with…him?” Faith asked Buffy incredulously.

“He’s my boyfriend,” Dawn replied snappily.

“What the fuck?” Faith was thoroughly confused and she took a step back, out of the path of any potential mudslinging.

Buffy’s eyes bulged on their stalks, her mouth worked soundlessly like a fish gasping for air. She crossed the short distance between herself and the peroxided stranger in a single, angry bound. Her fist snapped out with her entire body weight behind it, catching him squarely on the jaw and sending him reeling backwards.

“Ow! You stupid bitch!” he clutched his jaw as he did a little dance of one in pain.

“She’s fifteen! It’s illegal…not to mention gross!” Buffy snapped, kicking him childishly in the shin.

The Englishman yelped again, creating a rather comic picture as he clutched his jaw and tried to rub his shin at the same time. Not quite finished with her victim, Buffy pushed him to the ground. Already dangerously off-balance, he fell heavily. Once he was down Buffy proceeded to kick him repeatedly in the stomach. Faith just stood and watched, arms crossed and stance relaxed as though she were enjoying the show.

“Buffy!” Dawn tried to restrain her sister in vain by holding her around the waist.

“Oi! She’s lying!” the cowering man protested, he finally dragged himself to a kneeling position only to have Buffy kick him again.

“Buffy, I lied!” Dawn finally admitted, throwing down her hands in defeat.

Buffy stopped her assault on the peroxided man only to grab him by the front of his coat and yank him to his feet roughly. She found herself face to face with her ex…uncomfortably close. Feeling all sorts of uncomfortable feelings, Buffy released her hold and he scrambled away from her in fright.

“Little bit! What did you have to do that for?” he snapped at Dawn, “Coulda told her the bleedin’ truth!”

Dawn shrugged and replied in a bored voice, “How was I to know she didn’t take her medicine today?”

“Well, what are you doing hanging around my sister?” Buffy obviously did not feel any remorse for what she had done to him.

“I’m her bleedin’ Guardian!” he insisted, “Supposed to keep her safe I am…although how was I to know that I was the one who would be in need protecting?”

“You’re her Guardian!” Buffy and Faith intoned at precisely the same moment.

“Yeah, why are you surprised? I’m trustworthy…and the little bit and I get along really well,” he indicated Dawn with a nod of his head.

Dawn shrugged, “He’s got a good point, he’s the only one who ever treated me like I was an adult.”

Faith stomped her foot angrily, “Isn’t anyone going to tell me who the hell this is!”

Buffy groaned and doubled-over, massaging her temples as though she had a terrible headache. When she straightened up she stared the Englishman in the eye, giving him her very best ‘don’t mess with me’ expression.

“Faith…it gives me no pleasure at all to introduce Spike.”

******

“One-Six-Seven right?” Willow glanced at the mailbox as she pulled Giles’ car up to the curb, she resisted the urge to scrape the rims against the concrete.

Willow glanced up at the nicely appointed suburban home. It looked exactly like the house she had grown up in, a home of the pretentious middle–class. It was homes like these that concealed some of the most dysfunctional families.

Tara double-checked the note for the tenth time as she was well aware of the consequences of collecting the wrong person, “This is the one…you all set?”

Willow nodded and was about to clamber out of the car when she turned to Tara with a funny expression on her face. Tara raised her eyebrows questioningly and in response Willow smiled wickedly.

“We’re alone…in a car,” Willow looked over her shoulder to check out the back seat, “Backseat is a little cramped…but as this car belongs to a tight arse like Giles, I can understand.”

“Willow, you can’t be serious,” Tara glanced upwards to emphasise the open air above them, “It’s a soft-top and the top isn’t up!”

Willow felt a little ashamed of herself, given the situation they were in, “Sorry, I just thought a little levity would help…and that would be a no with the levity.”

“Levity? Willow, please be serious,” Tara gave her a steady gaze with no trace of mirth on her features, “We’re here to save a little boy…for all we know that warlock you saw last week has been here already…or is still here.”

Willow froze and looked at the house with a newfound appreciation for their situation. She had absolutely no desire to face down that nightmare again. Her face was apologetic when she turned back to Tara.

“I’m all set,” she checked inside her coat and felt the cold metal sitting in its holster, “Shall we go.”

They both exited the car and made their way up the well-manicured front path. Before they reached the front door, Tara reached out and gently gripped Willow’s hand. Willow halted and turned slightly.

“I’m sorry Will…next time we’re alone together in a car, you can take me straight to the backseat,” she said quietly, a twinkle in her eye despite the serious tone of her voice.

Willow gave Tara’s hand a brief squeeze before letting go and continuing to the front door. She noted with relief that there were no signs of forced entry. However, there was a little hesitation in her knock as she wondered whom the door would open to reveal. It swung open a few moments after her knock.

“Yo, can I help you?” a teenage boy answered the door, his face broadened into an awkward grin when he saw the beautiful women on his doorstep.

He was lanky, as though his limbs were growing at a different rate from the rest of his body. His unkempt black hair grew over half his face; his green eyes could barely be seen peering out from beneath it. He wore a bright blue t-shirt over jeans which were sitting half way around his bum, leaving a copious amount of his bright yellow boxer shorts showing. A pair of headphones sat around his neck, the music blaring audibly from them…something very loud and incomprehensible.

“Matthew Murphy?” Willow asked dubiously.

“Matt!” he insisted, “Am I in some sort of trouble? Cos I haven’t done anythin’…lately.”

Both women shook their heads and Tara replied, “No Matt, you haven’t done anything…”

His grin widened even larger when he knew they were here for him, “Sweet! What can I do for you ladies? Would you like to come in for a drink?”

He stepped aside to make a path for them into the house, making a sweeping gesture with one arm.

Little charmer, Willow thought with a raised eyebrow, “Um, we’d actually like to speak to a guardian, is someone else at home.”

His face fell slightly, although his grin seemed to be a permanent fixture, ‘You mean my parents? Cos they ain’t here, in New Zealand or somewhere on holiday…or do you mean my Guardian?”

His emphasis on the word was slight, but it attracted both women’s attention. Obviously he knew something of what he was and possibly even the danger he could be in. Matt’s grin never faded however, even as both women nodded again. He ushered them inside quickly as though they were all part of a secret conspiracy…which wasn’t far from the truth.

As they were shown into the sitting room, Willow had a good look at her surroundings. Never for a moment did she cease being a detective; she constantly checked exits, danger spots and points of concealment. She also noted that it was exactly like her parents house, right down to the hideously overdone family portrait hanging over the fireplace.

“Take a seat, I’ll just go get Nat,” Matt turned and bounded up a set of stairs, leaving the two women to take spots on an overstuffed couch.

Willow studied the portrait. It appeared recent. Two smiling adults stared back at her, a balding but fit looking man in his forties and an attractive but plasticised woman of the same age. Then there was Matt, his hair swept back from his face for the occasion, trademark grin in place. The absence of hair revealed a handsome, young chap. There was one last person in the portrait, a young woman, possibly in her early twenties. Her perfect brown hair fell down around her shoulders. A short skirt revealed a pair of gorgeously lithe, tanned legs. Her warm smile was a more feminine version of Matt’s grin.

“Can I help you?”

Willow turned to see the subject of her attention walking down the stairs, every bit as perfect and beautiful as her picture. She had obviously required no touching up whatsoever. Willow felt a momentary surge of disappointment that her legs were clad in a pair of sweat pants. On top she wore a UC Sunnydale t-shirt and her hair was thrown up in a messy ponytail. As Willow stared, she did not notice that Tara was in turn staring at her.

Tara swiftly erased her worried frown and stood, introducing herself in a warm voice, “I’m Tara Maclay, and this is Willow Rosenberg…”

Willow bounded forward as well, extending her hand to the brunette, “Detective Willow Rosenberg.”

The young woman shook both their hands with a firm grip, “Nat Murphy…thank goodness someone has finally made contact with us…I knew those murders in the paper had something to do with us! Three children…magical circles…”

Wow, she’s straight off the mark Willow mused, genuinely surprised by the fact that Nat knew exactly what was happening, “Well, don’t worry Miss Murphy, we’re here to help,” Willow reassured her.

“Having the police here makes me feel so much safer,” she smiled gratefully.

Matt thudded down the stairs just behind them, stopping a little short of the bottom where he placed on hand on the banister and leapt deftly over it. He grinned as though he was both incredibly talented and irresistible to ladies. His gaze moved over Willow and Tara, scrutinising their appearances and obviously found fault with what he saw.

“You two are cops?” he asked in a sceptical voice.

Tara looked down at her flowing skirt and blouse and then across at Willow who was looking a little miffed. The redhead was wearing her favourite suit, a black pinstripe which was both smartly cut and decidedly ‘no-nonsense.’ At least one of them looked like she meant business.

“Ah, we’re not exactly the police,” Tara was quick to dispel any misconceptions, the thought of herself as a police officer almost brought a smile to her lips, “Willow is a detective yes, but our little operation really has nothing to do with the police. Um…W-Willow and I are w-witches.”

Nat raised her eyebrows and Mat’s jaw dropped. However, the siblings recovered quickly.

Nat nodded once, “Exactly what we need, I contemplated going to the police myself but what could they do?”

“Not a lot unless you count sitting around on their arses eating donuts,” Willow grinned, “The closest they get to magic is taking their kids to see Harry Potter.”

Tara raised her eyebrows and whispered through her teeth in Willow’s direction, “That description sounds a lot like a certain detective not too long ago.”

Willow’s cheeks coloured to be embarrassed in front of the attractive young woman. Tara narrowed her eyes and felt that Willow was asking for it. The redhead had used her ‘charming grin’ on Nat, the one she had used to such good effect while wooing Tara.

Nat didn’t seem to notice the unspoken interaction between the two witches, “So, where to…”

Matt interrupted, “What sort of stuff can you guys do? Nat can just do stupid stuff like fireballs, it was cool to start with now it’s just boring…so can you change all my grades at school so I’m getting As instead of Cs?”

Willow let out a loud laugh, “You don’t need witchcraft for that! Just a really good computer and a highspeed connection…” however, while Matt listened eagerly, both Nat and Tara were giving her exasperated looks, Willow quickly changed tack to avoid their combined wrath, “But no, that’s wrong, you should work hard at school…the old fashioned way.”

“That’s what I keep telling him!” Nat agreed, “Anyway…so we’re going with you for protection? Should we pack?”

“Quickly,” Willow added, remembering the fatal timing of her last encounter with one of the seals, “I’m not sure how much time we have…and we’ve wasted enough already.”

Tara nodded, relieved that Willow had her eyes firmly set on their mission rather than the legs of their hostess.

Nat began dragging Matt up the stairs even as he continued talking, Willow and Tara got the impression that he often needed silencing.

“Can I take my PSP?”

“No.”

“My Ipod?”

“No!”

“Well, I’m taking both!”

Willow watched them disappear upstairs, wondering for a moment whether she should follow them rather than let them go on their on.

“Should I go upstairs too?” Willow peered up the stairs, straining to see where the pair had gone, “I mean, letting them out of our sight can’t be good…”

“W-Willow, are w-we exclusive?” Tara asked while Willow’s back was turned, her increased stutter betraying how worried she was.

Upon hearing her name Willow spun around to face Tara with a slight frown, “What did you say baby?”

Tara gave a slightly annoyed grunt and repeated her question, “Are we exclusive?”

Willow frowned, wondering where that question had come from, “Tara?”

Tara continued, “Because if you want to be free to date other people then I suggest you find a new girlfriend because I’m a one woman kind of girl.”

Willow fully heard all of Tara’s words this time around, her eyes bulged out and she hastily spluttered a reply, “Tara…no…I mean, yes! Yes we are exclusive, I’m exclusively yours!”

Tara placed her hands on her hips and gave Willow an ‘are you telling the truth?’ stare, “I know we’re only been going out for two seconds but the way you were looking at Nat, I thought I was going to have to follow you around with a mop to clean up your drool!”

Willow’s jaw dropped, “Tara? I wasn’t!”

Tara gave her an eye, “You were too, admit it!”

Willow was about to resort to pleading but instead she jammed her hands on her hips and stamped her foot, “Now look here Tara Maclay, I’ve only got eyes for one hottie around here…and trust me, she’s all the hottie I need.”

Tara’s face softened slightly leaving Willow with no idea where she actually stood, or how mad Tara was with her. The redhead twiddled her thumbs nervously and kept her eyes firmly on Tara. She knew full well that no naughty thoughts about Nat had crossed her mind, save for a few that were very brief and swiftly banished when Nat had first walked down the stairs.

Tara ducked her head, cheeks colouring with embarrassment when she realised how foolish her jealously really was, “Will…”

Willow stepped forward and silenced Tara by taking her into her arms, “No apologies…I know it’s a little too early to be making grand statements…but honestly Tara, I feel as though you’re the part of me I’ve been looking for all these years…”

“Ah, so that’s how you justify all your w-womanising?” Tara revealed the source of her concern and Willow’s eyebrows shot up.

“Tara…you’re not going to bring up who I was whenever you feel insecure. I’m not going to make excuses for myself and quite frankly I shouldn’t have to,” Willow replied honestly as she hugged Tara all the more fiercely to her chest, “I’m doing my best to be a one woman gal too, although I guess some parts of my little brain haven’t read the memo yet.”

Tara almost laughed at the mental picture of Willow’s brain that the statement conjured, hundreds and hundreds of little workers divided into colour-coded teams, all sending each other memos on coloured post-its. Thoughts of cuteness inexplicably became thoughts of desire and Tara could not restrain herself. She moved forward in one swift movement and swept Willow up into a quick but fierce kiss. After a few brief seconds of heaven, Willow found herself deposited back on earth.

There was a loud footfall on the stairs and Willow and Tara spun around to see Matt descending quickly, backpack over his shoulder.

“You guys are lesbians right? Matt asked in an excited voice, “Hot lesbians…excellent!”

“Matt!” Nat was following close behind and cuffed him hard over the back of his head.

“Ouch sis!” Matt reached the bottom and withdrew a cellphone from inside his jacket.

He promptly began typing a text message, no doubt telling some of his friends exactly where he was and whom he was with.

“I don’t think so,” Nat reached over and snatched the phone out of his grasp, she tucked it in a little pocket on the strap of her shoulder bag.

“We’d better move out,” Willow said, the longer they hung around, the more likelihood of someone unpleasant showing up.

As the four of them moved out of the house, Tara noticed Nat looking around with reluctant expression on her face. No doubt she was already missing what she was leaving behind.

“Are you going to call your parents?” Tara asked quietly, sensing her worry.

Nat met Tara’s gaze, “I already tried, they must have moved on from the hotel they were scheduled to be at, I’ll try again later. Tara, are we going to be alright?”

Tara set her lips resolutely, “You’ll be as safe as you can possibly be, we’ve got a good group of people.”

Nat locked the door behind them, she then hid the key in a hollow rock in the garden.

“I hope I come back for it,’ Nat looked wistfully at the rock for a moment.

The four were silent for a few moments as Willow led the way to Giles' car. It was mere seconds though before Matt let out a wild cry and raised his hand triumphantly as though he had scored a winning goal.

“Dibs on shotgun!” Matt yelled making a beeline for the front passenger seat.

His excitement quickly faded when he realised he was struggling against an unseen force holding him back. It was his older sister, one hand securely holding his backpack, effectively halting his flight.

“Wait a minute buster!” Nat cautioned, “You’re going in the back with me!”

“Oh joy,” Matt muttered sarcastically.

He didn’t bothered to open the door, in an athletic bound he leapt into the back seat of Giles’ car. His skate shoes landed squarely on the leather. Nat glared apocalyptically and he slid down into the seat.

Willow waved her hand dismissively as she walked around to the driver’s door, “I wouldn’t worry, it’s not my car…and I don’t particularly like the guy it belongs to.”

“Willow!” Tara exclaimed in a horrified voice.

Willow looked suitably guilty and peered over her shoulder to address Matt, “But just because you don’t like someone, it doesn’t mean you don’t respect their stuff.”

Matt grinned like a co-conspirator.

“Right, where are we going? Some secret bunker that you guys have got hidden in the mountains somewhere?” Nat asked hopefully.

“Errr no,” Willow looked across to Tara, “We’re going to a magic shop.”

******
Giles felt the distinct urge to wash his hands whenever he touched the Veneficus. For some reason, the book exuded immense evil. Giles was a logical man and he did not attempt to explain how mere bound paper could have this effect.

He removed his glasses and rubbed his tired eyes. After hours of searching the tome, he had found several useful incantations, dark magicks which of course he would not use…but they were interesting nevertheless. However, there was nothing that he didn’t already know concerning the seals and the concealed evil. Giles had reasoned that the book ought to contain something about how to defeat it, a passage that would no doubt be cryptic and mysterious…but something to start with at least.

With an angry snort Giles pushed his chair back, legs scraping on the linoleum. Ashley immediately lifted her head from where she was still playing with her Lego as she had for the past hour. By now she had constructed an impressively intricate fort, her construction however had used all her available materials and her patience was stretched to the limit. Her belly rumbled loudly, reminding her that it had been simply forever since she had eaten. She watched Giles pace for a few moments, observing his clearly agitated state. Being a very smart girl Ashley knew better than to interrupt adults when they were in a bad mood but she overruled her own judgement and stood.

“Giles?” Ashley deliberately spoke loudly so that he could not pretend he did not hear her, “It’s almost dinner time.”

“Yes, yes,” Giles waved his hand absently as he continued pacing, “In a minute…it must be a spell, perhaps a renewal of the binding spell with seven new seals…or replace those that have failed, no, it cannot be that simple…”

Ashley hopped up onto Giles’ recently vacated seat and propped both arms up on the chair back. She rested her chin on her forearms and stared at Giles as he continued talking to himself. He showed no signs of letting up any time soon. Ashley gave a snort of disgust and swivelled in the chair to face the mountain of books piled high on the table. She brought her small fist crashing down on the book nearest her, venting her frustration on the objects which seemed to be causing all the trouble. In doing so, she knocked one from the table. It landed with a muffled thud on the floor, its binding and pages spreading apart upon impact. Face frozen in horror, Ashley glanced up to Giles who was still pacing. She held her breath for a few moments, confirming that he was indeed so rapt up in his own thoughts that he did not hear her. With stealthy movements, Ashley slid from the chair and bent down to pick up the book. However, Giles turned just as she jerked to her feet. Ashley clutched the book to her chest and looked down to see a single page fluttering to the ground.

“Oh fuck,” Ashley whispered, her eyes meeting Giles’.

Giles eyes widened, but not due to the fallen page, “Ashley Maclay! Where did you learn language like that?”

Ashley cocked her head to one side and looked at Giles as though he were joking, “Giles…have you forgotten I live with Faith?”

Giles groaned, “How could I?”

Ashley retrieved the fallen page. She picked up the paper between her fingers and was surprised to find it felt slimy. However, when she looked at it, the paper wasn’t moist in the slightest. A shiver ran down her spine and she quickly held out both book and paper for Giles to take.

“I’m sorry Giles, I’m not sure where the page fell from,” she whispered sheepishly.

Giles glanced down to see the Veneficus in her outstretched hands. Quickly he snatched both the book and page away from her. Ashley regarded him with wide eyes as though she were about to bear the brunt of a furious tirade.

He smiled wearily, “No Ashley, it’s okay, let’s go…”

Giles stopped abruptly when his eyes fell on the single page. Even at a glance he could tell that it had not come loose from the Veneficus. His thumb caressed the thick paper, sliding over words written in a heavy, black ink. The words seemed to tremble as though they had been written in a shaky hand. He looked up to the little girl, who still obviously under the impression that she was about to be scolded.

“Ashley, where did you get this page from?” Giles asked urgently, shaking the page in her direction.

“It was in the book…” Ashley began, pointing to the offending tome in Giles’ other hand.

Giles shook his head, “No, it wasn’t…tell me honestly, where did you get this page from? Did you take it from one of the other books?”

She responded with a decidedly firm shake of her head, “No Giles, it was in that book. I knocked it off the table and it fell out.”

Giles was satisfied that Ashley was telling the truth, he finally allowed himself to read what was written in its entirety. His eyes were fixed to that single sheet of paper as they followed the shaky scrawl.

“When the hour is dire and the seals are failing, it is the Guardian of the seventh seal who will be both the last hope of the righteous and the key to their destruction.
For the Guardian of the seventh seal faces a terrible choice.
If they are brave and true, they will kill the unnamed power wielding the Contorqueo Gladius.
If they are corrupt and evil, they will kill that which cannot be killed by any other, the seventh seal.


The handwriting became almost illegible near the end…

What a terrible burden to bear”

The note was not signed, just initialled in the bottom right corner, MW

Despite the fact that it was exactly what he had been searching for, Giles felt empty and drained. It was a solution that left everything up to the frailty of an individual…and that was a situation that Giles did not like at all. His knees buckled beneath him and he slipped to the floor with a dull thud as Ashley looked on with a worried frown. She approached cautiously and laid her small hand on his shoulder.

“Giles, I’m sorry I said fuck,” she apologised and them immediately clamped both hands over her mouth as she realised she’d done it again.

“Good lord,” Giles whispered, not even looking up at Ashley, “We have to find the seventh seal…”

TBC in Chapter Thirteen – “The Seventh Seal.”
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby GayNow » Sun Jan 15, 2006 9:26 pm

More and more interesting all the time, Alcy. You sure do know how to tell a tale. I can't wait for more...of this AND Captain Red. ;)

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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby caz » Mon Jan 16, 2006 12:40 pm

Hi Alcy - another wonderful update.

I loved jealous Tara, she's definitely not going to take any crap off willow is she. I can just see Willow stamping her foot as she was trying to get her point across to Tara. I'm glad that Willow is a 'one woman girl' and was honest enough to admit that she was working on staying that way.
“I’m doing my best to be a one woman gal too, although I guess some parts of my little brain haven’t read the memo yet.”


I'm still not sure about Giles - and now he's neglecting Ashley! I hope Tara kicks his arse when she gets home. Okay, I know he is worried. Thank God Ashley pushed that book and found the page.

More soon please! :bounce

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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby will » Mon Jan 16, 2006 2:48 pm

Wow really great update i love it.

Ashley is just so cute!
I want more please update soon.
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby tru2urheart » Mon Jan 16, 2006 3:50 pm

Okay, so even though I don't feedback too much, I'm going to give it a try. I'm loving this story. Excellent plot and wonderful cliffhanger. (I'm a fan of them myself). Anyway, Loving it. Keep it up. :bounce :-D
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby mag » Tue Jan 17, 2006 9:04 pm

I am new here, please continue, i am worried that willow wants to be exclusice but that isnt in her nature, what if she failed her Tara, just a little hehe, Tara is so determinated I hopw willow can see what she has now.

btw, great update...

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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby gabbles » Wed Jan 18, 2006 4:16 am

“Oh fuck,” Ashley whispered


That made me crack up! Then followed by:

Giles eyes widened, but not due to the fallen page, “Ashley Maclay! Where did you learn language like that?”

Ashley cocked her head to one side and looked at Giles as though he were joking, “Giles…have you forgotten I live with Faith?”


:lol :lmao

Loved the update, as always, Alcy :-D Brilliant! This plot just gets more and more intriuging, and I'm loving how bit by bit more characters are being added to the mix: first it was Willow and Buffy, then Tara and Giles and Faith and Ashleigh, then Anya and Xander joined, now Dawn and Spike. Adding them all in bit by bit keeps the story moving and keeps things interesting as new interactions emerge. Am also loving Nat and Matt-great characters. Their brotherly/sisterly affection is very well done:

“Can I take my PSP?”

“No.”

“My Ipod?”

“No!”

"Well, I'm taking both!


And:

“Matt!” Nat was following close behind and cuffed him hard over the back of his head.


Lol *sighs* Ah, sibling love.

Also, how could we not love this:

“You guys are lesbians right?" Matt asked in an excited voice, “Hot lesbians …excellent!”


Lol...hilarious. As was his instant sms'ing to his mates to let them know. This Matt is going to be great to have along, and Nat seems like, even after Willow and Tara's little chat, she may cause a bit of upheaval-should be fun!

Am loving you making Spike Dawn's Gaurdian. Classic-Buffy seems thrilled. Having her beat up Spike made me laugh out loud for some reason. It seems like she just wanted the chance to pound the hell out of him, and jumped on the chance when Dawn said "He's my boyfriend" which most people would have gaped at/laughed at/disbelieved automatically first....but no, Buffy's beats the crap out of him straight off. *laughs*

You have Faith down, by the way...

Faith just stood and watched, arms crossed and stance relaxed as though she were enjoying the show.


Lol. The little lines you haev of her are great.

Well, I've babbled enough! Can't wait to find out more about this seventh seal prophecy (which I've formed some theory's on, but I shan't say anything as of yet). I get the feeling that Giles and Willow are going to come to heads soon, by the way...it should be interesting.

Bloody Brilliant, Alce!

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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby Kaia » Wed Jan 18, 2006 6:12 am

Wow, Alcy...
Your story keeps getting better and better, and you're doing a fantastic job at keeping all of us kittens at the edge of our seats.
I'll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
Thanks for the update. :flower

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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby Artemis » Thu Jan 19, 2006 2:55 am

Okay, first of all: you got my favourite Spike! Seriously, aside from various comic interludes (like voicing over Angel when he saved that woman in the alley - "And now I must nance off like a giant poof.") I've never cottoned to Spike as a character, except when he's being Dawn's 'guardian', as he did seem to be for a bit (somewhere between 'dopey Buffy love Spike' and 'angsty wanker Buffy love Spike'). I love the bit of kindred spirit-ness to the pair of them, and for me that seems to add the final touch that makes the rest of Spike's character work. So, yay. Also, Dawn's "He's my boyfriend" line was too funny, especially the reaction it provoked. I like dysfunctional Dawn and Buffy pairing when it's done right :lol

Willow and Tara's parallel outing to pick up their charge provided less overt comedy (though plenty of chuckles - hot lesbians!), but I found Tara's moment of anxiety really touching. She's a young mother, utterly devoted to her daughter, it's easy to see how she'd pretty much always be worrying that anyone she was interested in might be taking it more casually. I like that Willow reassured her there, but I'd like to see further reassurance of a less lusty, more devoted nature. Willow keeps expressing her feelings for Tara in a very physical, hot-gay-love kind of way, with the suggested making out in the back seat, and telling Tara she's all the 'hottie' she needs. While there's no doubt she's sincere, I wonder if perhaps Tara still needs to hear Willow express her affection in a more, well, non-lusty kind of way - just to reassure her that Willow isn't just after her (fabulous) body.

It's looking real likely to me that Ashley is the seventh seal, and I suspect Willow is the one who'll be in the position of saving or damning the world, by either protecting her or killing her. Looks like a fairly obvious choice for her, but I don't discount the possibility that there's forces at work inside her besides her own personality - I worry that Corpseman's machinations include some way of manipulating Willow into doing something she'd normally never contemplate. Or that some sort of complex plot in in the works, and what I think is going to happen is actually an illusion to conceal what's actually happening, so that for Willow, doing the thing that looks right may doom them all.

Just as well Ashley's expanded her vocabulary, really - if it turns out that she is the key to saving the world, and there's a hugely powerful evil magical force trying to off her, that's a suitable moment to drop the F-word into conversation :D
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby grimlock72 » Sat Jan 21, 2006 4:32 pm

Who numbers the seals ?? What if the Seventh Seal was the first one killed, hmm ?? Would be quite sloppy evil doing, but that has been known to happen :P

Jealous Tara is somewhat understable, she wants a stable relationship but such a thing takes time (from both sides, Willow to settle down and Tara to get used to that). I would have worried if Willow did NOT look Nate over like any proper lesbian would pay attention to a good looking woman :).

Matt reads like a bit to overconfident and therefore difficult to protect. I do wonder how much protection a place like NORAD (bunker in the mountains he said:-) would offer to magical enemies. They still need to get into the place to kill appearantly, not mr. Walking Corpse but his hired-help do.

Heh, just wait till Tara comes home and finds that Ashley is hungry 'cos Giles hasn't properly fed her :devil Besides, Giles should know that thinking about a problem non-stop eventually stops being usefull.

I can easily see Willow's mind filled with little works divided into color-coded teams btw. Makes a lot of sense :P. Can't say I blame her for not liking Giles, I hope Tara wasn't actually shocked by that.. she should have know that already.

Dawny and Buffy aren't exactly friends I see. Although it was fun to see Buffy blow a fuse over Spike that easily, it is basically unprovoked assault... I hope guardians have some sort of speed-healing for Spike's sake :) Speaking of which, did I read that Buffy is a slayer ?? I really do need to re-read this story... I know she thought of some evil critters... bit fuzzy on the details. I'll re-read this one right after reading the update to Capt. Red I saw mentioned... honest :P

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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby watty » Fri Jan 27, 2006 4:00 am

feedback catch up, part 2. :P

Even though I can't stand Spike, I've always liked his interactions with Dawn. He genuinely worries about her and they have great sibling chemistry together.

:lol at the moment of backseat levity, though not entirely appropriate under the circumstances. Willow ogling at Nat and Tara's jealousy gave me a big chuckle though. I can see their love growing and growing

You know what I can't wait to read about? How the kids -- Dawn, Matt and Ashley -- gel together; and how the adults deal with the matter at hand.

Great stuff, as usual.
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby Alcy » Thu Feb 02, 2006 8:38 pm

GayNow: Careful, or my head might swell and pop with all the praise you are lavishing on me! I do enjoy writing a tale for Kittens to read however!

Caz: I think it’s not so much a jealous Tara, as a very wary and careful Tara. She is a single mother and possibly has this crazy notion that Willow might not be all that attracted to her…hmmm, that’s got to be the silliest thing I’ve ever written!
I wouldn’t worry about Ashley too much, yes Giles is a prat, but thank goodness she knows how to take care of herself…and now she’s made the breakthrough that could play a big part in chapters to come.

will: Thanks a lot. I’m working on the next update now, although work has been really busy and is slowing me down.

tru2urheart: I’m glad you decided to give feedback a go! It’s good to know who’s reading and enjoying (or who’s not enjoying so I can make it better!) Thanks very much!

mag: A great big welcome to the Kitten. You’ll find a ton of excellent stories here written by talented, like-minded people. We love W/T! Up until now, Willow hasn’t at all been exclusive but now that she’s got Tara, that will change.

gabbles: I hope I’m not adding too many characters! The chapter I’m writing at the moment has my head spinning trying to keep track of them all. I’d written half a scene before realising I’d missed out a character who was supposed to be in it!
Yes, Nat and Matt are fun – although I didn’t have much to base it on as my brother is only 3 years younger than me and way too smart arse to listen to me! It’s different when you’re all growed up though. I’m enjoying the added humour that a horny teenage boy brings along!
Spike is also great, he was a bit of a whipping boy in this chapter, but hopefully he’ll be fleshed out into more of his usual self in upcoming chapters.
And Faith is just well…so Faith!
And I know what you mean about Giles and Willow, the G-man is about to be on the receiving end of one of Willow’s spells very soon if he doesn’t start being nicer!

Kaia: Thanks so much for reading, make sure you don’t fall off your seat! Hopefully I’ll be able to finish the next chapter soon, I don’t like leaving Kittens waiting for too long.

Artemis: I’m very glad to be able to deliver your favourite Spike! I have to admit, I have a soft spot for Spike from season 4 onwards. He has to be one of the funniest characters on the show.
I like writing dysfunctional Dawn and Buffy too, hopefully I can get it right. Too many shows write teenagers so unrealistically, hopefully I can get it right.
I fully agree with your analysis of Willow and Tara’s moments in this chapter. While Willow is happily being swept along with her feelings for Tara, she hasn’t stopped to think about exactly where their relationship stands. Tara on the otherhand, can’t stop thinking about it. You’re right when you say she’s a young mother, often a demographic who have trouble attracting decent partners, or at least ones that will love their children as much as they do and love them as well. It’s time for Willow to reassure Tara, although where she’s going to find time to do that over future chapters…I don’t know!
Hmmm, you’re sneakily trying to trick me into giving away what’s going to happen and it’s not going to work. All I can say is I’m quite happy for you to speculate!
And I love Ashley’s foul mouth, she’s not a naughty child by any stretch of the imagination but she does live with Faith! And there are some events which justify strong language!

grimmy: I number the seals! But you’re right to notice what could be a rather large flaw. It may not have been stated clearly…hmm, in fact I’m sure I haven’t stated it, but the seventh seal needs to be killed last…we’ll get onto that!
Jealous Tara is understandable of course but I also agree that lesbians check hot chicks out all the time! Although I do get a little jealous of my girlfriend’s obsession with Mel C.
Matt does read like a 14 year old boy, and I have no doubt that he will want to do his own thing. Although Im also sure that he realised how much danger he is in.
Hmmm, no I didn’t write that Buffy is a Slayer, if you re-read the part I think you’re referring to, you’ll find its Faith I’m talking about. Although we are all used to referring to Buffy as ‘The slayer.’

Watson: Well, I hope I don’t annoy you with too much Spike. Although as said above, I do quite like him!
Hopefully W & Ts love is growing in a realistic manner, I keep trying to slow myself down but I don’t seem to want to! I just want to write smut I think! Given that there has been none in Captain Red for so long and none at all in this fic yet…and writing Fuffy just wouldn’t help!
Your question is answered in the very next chapter, there will be kiddy interaction I promise!!!

As mentioned above, I’ve actually had to do some work lately, so the chapter has been a little slow in developing. Soon Kittens, soon I promise!
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby Alcy » Thu Feb 16, 2006 7:32 pm

Chapter Thirteen – “The Seventh Seal.”

“This stuff is so cool!” Matt exclaimed, his eyes roved over the Magic Box and its merchandise, his fingers twitched involuntarily and it was clear he longed to reach out and touch everything. He knelt down to examine a jar he found particularly interesting and his smile broadened, “Werewolves bollocks? Excellent! How on earth do you get something like that?”

His hand reached out to wrap itself around the jar. Behind him, Giles was having an apoplectic fit at the sight of Matt’s teenage hand reaching out to pick up the merchandise. He knew for a fact that teenage hands were undoubtedly covered in all manner of filth, not to mention the almost certain likelihood that the jar would be dropped. In a single bound he strode across to the table and swooped down upon the jar, whisking it away to safety in his own much more capable, hygienic hands.

“Werewolves bollocks happen to be very expensive and difficult to come by due to the…ahhh….reluctance of the werewolves to part with them….for good reason,” Giles held the jar up so that he could inspect the integrity of its contents.

The audience found Giles’ concern for the pickled testicles terribly funny. Willow openly snickered and even Tara had a broad smile on her face. Nat, who didn’t even know Giles, guffawed loudly and craned for a better look at the jar. An indignant Giles glared at each of them in turn until his gaze came to rest on Tara, whom he least expected to find his actions funny given that she owned half the store and knew exactly what they were worth.

“I’m sorry Giles,” Tara had resorted to giggling, she covered her mouth with her hand and tried to restrain herself, “But if you could only see how silly you are!

The doorbell tinkled its welcoming little chime and everyone looked to the door to see the next team to arrive back with their precious cargo. Buffy strode in first, escorting a pretty but sour-faced teenage girl with a decidedly firm grip on the girl’s elbow. Behind her, Faith sauntered in nonchalantly, twirling a set of keys around her index finger, and slammed the door shut behind her with her foot. Willow kept a suspicious eye on the brunette who was looking quite pleased with herself for some reason. As the three of them walked forward to greet the others, Giles quickly replaced the jar he held on the table. He gave Matt a very sharp look which caused the teenager to stuff his hands into his pockets.

“Everyone, this is my sister Dawn,” Buffy made the introduction with little enthusiasm.

Dawn sighed dramatically, “Who are these freaks?”

Even as Buffy was about to cuff Dawn over the back of her head, Tara stepped forward and diffused the sibling tension. She extended her hand to Dawn with a warm smile on her face.

“I’m Tara, along with Mr Giles here, I own this store,” she swivelled slightly and inclined her head to Ashley who was standing next to Willow, “This is my daughter Ashley and this is Matt Murphy and his sister Nat.”

“Nice to s-see…I mean meet you!” Matt stammered with an awkward wave of his hand, his face was beet red in the presence of the pretty young woman.

Dawn politely managed a tight-lipped smile as Tara finished up her introductions.

“And I think you might know Willow?”

“Yeah, hi Willow,” she replied quite civilly, evidently Willow was not on her blacklist.

“Nice to see you again Dawn,” Willow smiled, although she didn’t take her eyes of Faith.

Behind the trio of women who had just entered the door opened and a tall man strode in. He let out a loud cough in order to draw attention to himself. Everyone in the room turned to look at him, even Willow who had managed to drag her eyes away from glaring at Faith. He beamed, pleased at being the centre of attention and waited for Buffy to introduce him. Buffy groaned loudly, as though she had managed to forget that he was actually there.

“Spike, Dawn’s guardian,” she stated it so rapidly that more than a few people were left wondering what she had said.

“Nice of you to shut the door in my face,” he drawled in Faith’s direction.

Faith shrugged and was unapologetic, “Forgot.”

Spike threw up his hands in exasperation and resorted to introducing himself, “Name’s Spike in case you didn’t catch that babble. Pleased to meet everyone.”

There was a murmur of reply from the group. It was subdued however, as they didn’t quite know what to make of the peroxided newcomer. Spike smiled and appeared to be at ease in the role of outsider. Once the pleasantries were over, Willow resumed glaring at Faith. The Slayer finally noticed that she was the focus of Willow’s attention and immediately realised what it was all about. She tossed the car keys in Willow’s direction,

“Not a scratch on it Red…you can check it if you want?” Faith said with a wink.

“I will,” Willow muttered, with a hastily murmured ‘excuse me,’ Willow slipped out the front door to go and check on her car.

Faith shrugged and turned to Tara, “Honestly T, if she loves you half as much as she loves that car then you guys are gonna be just fine!”

“Has anyone heard from Xander and Anya yet?” Tara quickly deflected the conversation away from her relationship with Willow, “They should be arriving back any moment now.”

Faith smirked, “Probably stopped to have a little quickie along the way!”

“Faith!” Giles snapped angrily, wondering if it was his lot in life to be surrounded by children and adults who acted like children, “Despite their…eccentricities, Xander and Anya are were aware of the nature of their assignment and the urgency of retrieving their seal. I guarantee that they have not stopped for a …quickie, as you so charmingly put it!”

“Whatever, that’s your prerogative,” Faith shrugged.

Giles threw up his hands in despair and decided that it was high time everyone had a cup of tea to diffuse the tension. While he was taking orders for drinks and snacks, Tara took the opportunity to get everyone settled around the round table to begin discussions about how to proceed. While they had retrieved the seals safely, they had not planned any further ahead. Careful planning would ultimately would be one of the things that kept them all alive…that and sheer dumb luck.

Giles and Tara disappeared to the flat upstairs to prepare food for everyone. Ashley followed close behind, thoroughly annoyed at her hunger having been ignored in all the excitement around the arrival of the seals. Meanwhile, Willow strode back into the Magic Box, slamming the door behind her with such a force that the little bell was almost jarred from its hinges. She marched straight up to Faith with a look of pure fury on her face. Halting right in front of Faith, she jabbed the Slayer in the chest with her index finger.

“My car reeks of cigarette smoke!” Willow spluttered, “And the ashtray is full of cigarette butts!”

“It is an ashtray,” Faith replied dryly.

“It was stuffed to the brim and overflowing!” Willow continued, “How could you have smoked that many, the drive can’t have been more than forty-five minutes!”

Faith shrugged and replied in a sarcastic voice, “Cos it looks cool to drive and smoke at the same time.”

Willow held up the keys, “Well, you’re not getting these again!”

To make her point she jammed them in her pocket. Angrily she stomped over to where Nat was sitting at the table flicking through books and sat down with her. At least books didn’t have an attitude. She glanced up at Spike to find him staring at her with a sardonic grin.

“What are you looking at Billy Idol?”

“You’re a real piece of work aren’t you?”

“She’s not normally this bad,” Buffy spoke up from just beside Spike, highly amused by the whole situation, “She’s been all uptight ever since she found out she can do magic tricks like setting vampires on fire without a word…and then she shacked up with Tara who was avoiding her for-like-ever. So basically, she’s just a big nutcase at the moment.”

Willow looked up from her book to stare at Buffy with a mixture of surprise and horror written on her face. She had been under the impression that, even though the rest of the world was out to get her, she could at least count on Buffy and Tara to back her up. One ally down…she looked around frantically for Tara who was still upstairs preparing food and drink.

A lazy grin rolled across Spike’s face. Matt was grinning broadly as well as he had moved to stand next to Spike. Clearly he viewed the older man as a co-conspirator in the long tradition of males of all ages believing that lesbians were mysterious and excellent food for thought.

Matt jabbed Spike in a friendly manner with his elbow and said simply, “Hot lesbians,” as though the two words needed no further explanation.

Spike narrowed his eyes and looked down at the teenager with a superior expression on his angular face. Matt glanced up at him and his grin slowly faded when he saw Spike didn’t share in his excitement. In fact, the look on the blond man’s face was positively hostile. Matt began inching away from him without a further word. He had moved at least a foot away before Spike brought his steel toed boots down in an almighty stomp that reverberated on the wooden floor. The stomp was accompanied by an even more primeval shout in Matt’s direction,

“Raaahhhh!” Spike growled gutturally and suddenly.

“Gah!” Matt squeaked and ran back to his sister’s side, cowering behind her.

Spike glared in a satisfied manner at the upstart young man, “Bleeding little blighter! Do I look like a friendly chap!”

Just as the situation was about to deteriorate with Spike at odds with Matt and Willow at odds with just about everyone, Giles, Tara and Ashley trooped downstairs carrying plates of sandwiches and cookies. Ashley had her mouth full to the brim, evidentially having already helped herself to one of the cookies on her plate.

The tension diffused, Willow and Nat cleared away Giles’ books from the Round Table. Willow reasoned that even though the books belonged to Giles, books were still books and should not be left anywhere near food. The group gathered around and listened intently as Tara pointed out which sandwiches were turkey, and which were egg and so on. Matt helped himself to a stack of peanut butter and jelly ones and settled atop the counter, far away from Spike who was lounging by a stack of merchandise. He had somehow managed to salvage his cell from Nat and was discreetly taking photos of Spike. No doubt to send to his friends so that they too might lay eyes on the monster that was Spike.

Just as everyone was settled with their sandwiches of choice and Ashley had been berated for having nothing but cookies on her plate, the door swung open and two very harassed looking figures practically flew in. All eyes looked up to see Xander and Anya make an impressive entrance. Both looked furtively out the window into the street outside to see if they had been followed.

“Are they out there?” Anya asked her husband in a worried voice.

Xander shook his head, “No, I think we lost them outside the city limits.”

He set his rather hefty battle-axe down, leaning it up against the wall as though it might be needed for future service very soon. With a tender touch he reached out and stroked his wife’s arm reassuringly. Anya calmed momentarily, realising she was out of danger. However, she quickly turned away from Xander and thundered down the steps, Giles firmly in her sights.

“You!” she pointed her finger in an accusatory manner at the Englishman, “You sent us to go and pick up that kid and we were very nearly flambéed alive! I used to do that to my victims for fun when I was a vengeance demon! You almost got us killed!”

“What’s a vengeance demon?” Matt asked with wide eyes.

“Matt, go watch over the kid.”

Nat gave her brother a gentle shove in the direction of the back of the store where Ashley was playing with her Lego quite capably and not needing any supervision at all. Obviously vengeance demons were old news to her.

“No way, I’m not five!” Matt huffed.

“Dawn, away you go too,” Buffy made a shooing motion with her hand.

“I wouldn’t want to listen in on what you morons are discussing anyways, boring!” Dawn gave a petulant huff, slammed down her uneaten sandwich and went to join Ashley, pushing past Matt on her way.

Matt watched her go with wide eyes, he looked quickly back to his sister, “Um…yeah, I’ll go watch over the kid!”

Xander had joined Anya and managed to steer her into Dawn’s recently vacated seat. He poured her a steaming cup of black coffee before helping himself to a large stack of turkey sandwiches. Obviously his brush with death had not damaged his healthy appetite. With Anya much too annoyed, the task of recounting their tale fell on him, which he did between great mouthfuls of sandwich.

“The whole thing was over before we even showed up at the address,” he managed between bites, pausing as he wolfed down another, “We didn’t actually see much before we got out of there as fast as possible…just guys in those robes like Willow and Buffy described…guys with knives. I thought it better that we didn’t stick around.”

As Xander was polishing off the last of his first sandwich, Giles nodded in agreement, “You did the right thing, there was most likely nothing you could have done.”

“Nice of you to say,” Anya replied in a snarky tone, glancing up from her coffee, “Xander, stop masticating with your mouth open…it’s disgusting.”

“Sorry,” Xander mumbled guiltily.

The young man was appearing decidedly uncomfortable, no doubt reminiscing on his narrow shave with their foes. While Anya had openly voiced her discomfort, she was also physically manifesting it. Her chair was pushed as close to Xander’s as possible, one slender arm wrapped around her husband’s bulky upper arm.

“So there’s another seal gone,” Giles commented as though he were mentally ticking off seals in his mind.

“And another child dead,” Tara whispered sadly, thinking of the young boy who was no doubt dead.

The blonde witch lifted her head and her gaze lingered apprehensively over her daughter’s small form at the back of the store. Oblivious to the adult’s discussions, Ashley sat between Dawn and Matt with a rather noticeable scowl on her face. The teenage boy had appropriated her beloved Lego as he demonstrated the most effective construction techniques in a vain effort to impress Dawn. It was obvious that Dawn wasn’t the slightest bit interested and instead sat punching buttons on her cell phone. Tara would have smirked at the rather comical situation had she not been so worried.

“I hate to hurry everything along but…” Nat spoke up, gripping her coffee mug tightly

Tara managed to drag her gaze away from Ashley, despite the scowl on her face, her daughter appeared to be quite safe.

Nat continued, “While we’re sitting here they could be honing in on our position…and now we’ve so kindly bundled all the seals up together for them…”

“All save one,” Willow commented, referencing the as yet unknown seventh seal.

“Well, two of the remaining three at any rate…and I am not about to sit around talking while my brother is in jeopardy.”

“I think we’ll go to my lake house,” Giles decided on the spot, “It’s quiet, secluded, and you can see every route in and out…we’ll be safe there until I can think of a more permanent solution for the young people.”

“There’s an awful lot of ‘I’s in there Giles,” Willow muttered darkly, “Planning on letting anyone else have a say?”

“Have you got a better idea Willow?” although it was very much Giles’ question to ask, it was Faith who actually spoke the words.

Willow stared definitely at Faith for a moment before allowing her face to relax slightly. If it had been Giles who spoke, she would have felt compelled to ask another pointless, spiteful question simply for the sake of irritating Giles. As it was, if Faith believed it was a good idea for their safety then she would trust the Slayer’s judgement. While Faith’s judgement was undoubtedly questionable when it came to morals and fashion sense, Willow had no qualms about taking her word when it came to life and death matters.

“I’ve been to the lake house,” Faith continued, now speaking to the group as a whole in an authoritative voice that demanded attention, “I reckon Giles is right…we just need to slip out of town real quiet like and hope like heck that we aren’t noticed. If we can get out unseen, I’d give us a good few weeks before they even look like tracking us down.”

“Well, glossing over the fact that they managed to find the seals rather quickly, I’m not going to argue about a holiday house,” Buffy was thinking of it like a holiday, “Willow and I still have jobs of course though…”

“C’mon Buff, this is case work!” Willow said in her best impression of enthusiasm, “Although you can be the one to tell Diebel.”

Buffy scowled but reached inside her jacket for her cell. With a mumbled excuse, she moved into the training room for a spot of privacy. Willow watched her go with a medium of surprise, not expecting Buffy to give in so easily.

“And I guess we’ll have to close up the store…” Tara admitted reluctantly.

“So we’re all in?” Giles looked around to gage the assent on everyone’s faces. Most were appearing less than pleased but there was no argument.

“If we all up and leave at once, won’t they know something is up?” Xander asked quietly, fearing he would be pounced upon for asking such a stupid question.

“That’s a good point Xander…” Giles began.

Faith interrupted Giles with a curt nod, as though she felt she ought to be in charge of matters concerning security, “I agree, but I think we all know that when it comes to these guys there is no option, we can run and we can hide but sooner or later we will have to come face to face with them…otherwise they will continue hunting the Seals until they are all wiped out.”

“Like rats in a barrel,” Spike muttered darkly from behind them all.

With casual indifference he tapped a cigarette into his fingers and lit it up, paying absolutely no heed whatsoever to the horrified looks on Giles and Tara’s faces.

******

Before leaving town that evening, Giles quietly slipped away to do some research at his home away from home, the town archives. The archivist greeted him with a familiar smile as he entered. He offered no assistance, as Giles knew the archives like he worked there. He proceeded immediately to the birth records. It was a large, comprehensive archive and as far as he knew it remained intact since the towns founding, making it valuable beyond measure.

Before starting out on his quest, he paused to wipe his glasses. Although he knew exactly what he was looking for, it would no doubt take time, lots of time. It would be tedious, time-consuming trawling through paper. They were trials which historians accepted as their lot in life.

He removed a fresh pair of white gloves from the stock on offer and slipped them on. With a quick glance at the clock on the wall behind him, Giles opened the earliest leather-bound, crumbling volume in which he knew he would find his starting point. His gloved finger gently traced the names, pausing to turn the pages as necessary.

He drew in a breath when he finally found the name he was looking for…Mary Wroth He only hoped he would be able follow her trail all the way to the Seventh Seal.

******

Willow hated to even think it, but Giles had been right when he described his lake house as the perfect place for them to hide out…at least for the time being. She fervently hoped that it would be a relatively short time, just being under the same roof as Giles for one night had tested her patience to the limit.

It was late, Willow did not know the exact time but she figured it ought to be around one in the morning. By the time they had arrived at the house, night had already settled. Tara had set magickal protections around the house and its surroundings. She weaved her strange wards and alarms, all designed to both give them warning and a small measure of defence. Covering such a large area had taken its toll on the young witch and she had retired much earlier that evening.

The sleeping arrangements were sorted with some minor arguments as to who would take a room and who would be bunking down in the living room. Giles had claimed ‘his’ room which the women secretly thought was very unchivalrous of him. Anya and Xander were in another of the rooms, although everyone was quite relieved by this as it was apparent they still planned to have sex despite the rather gloomy situation they were in. Tara and Ashley shared the tiny room off the kitchen which contained just a single bed. Willow had seen the momentary twinge of disappointment flick across Tara’s face when she knew that Willow would not be sharing a room with her. An arrangement Willow was somewhat relieved about. This early into her relationship with Tara, she felt decidedly uncomfortable expressing her feelings around Ashley. Buffy, Dawn, Nat and Faith were crammed into the bunks in the attic despite Dawn’s protest that she would rather sleep outside than in the same room as her sister. Willow presumed she would share with them, but oddly enough, she had no desire to find out just what sort of relationship Faith and Buffy had. The single guys were bunking down in the living room. Matt seemed oddly worried about this until Spike grudgingly told him he meant no harm. Matt took this to mean that Spike wanted to be best buddies and stuck like glue to the older man.

Willow was in no hurry to renew her summer camp experiences of sharing a room with other people. As she was an only child, sharing a room with any number of others was rather difficult. She settled for the balcony and the cool, refreshing air rising from the lake below.
The view was one of the most spectacular she could imagine. Although she disliked Giles intensely, the man could definitely choose his vacation spot. It was a view that Willow was only too happy to escape into, away from the others inside.

She paced up and down the length of the balcony for a few minutes, her feet sounded only softly on the wooden deck. Eventually she settled her elbows on the railing and leaned her weight against it. She allowed the night to was over her as she gazed out over the thickly bunched trees which surrounded the lake and the house. Every so often she swore she caught a brief glimpse of Faith through the trees, although the Slayer moved like a shadow herself. She tried not to entertain the thought that it might not be Faith at all…although it was a definite possibility. Every so often a chill would run up her spine and her fingers clenched involuntarily around the wooden railing.

The slightest footstep behind her caused Willow’s heart to leap out of her throat. She whirled around to find Tara standing in a pair of cotton pyjamas, her bare feet pale white in the moonlight.

“I-I was on my way to get Ashley a glass of water and I saw you out here…are you going to get any sleep? You look as though you need it.”

“Do I?”

It was then that Willow realised her arm was raised as though she were about to throw something. There was a tiny flicker of light dancing across her fingertips. She felt the heat on her cheek. Terrified, Willow snapped her hand shut and the flames disappeared. She had unconsciously been about to throw a fireball at her girlfriend. The thought of what could have happened made her sick to the stomach.

“Oh god…Tara…”

Tara swept forward in one graceful movement. She snatched up Willows hand in her own and brought it up to her chest.

“Don’t even start to apologise, Willow,” Tara breathed as she gently prised Willow’s fiercely clenched fingers apart.

Willow felt a momentary twinge of panic to see the flames flare up almost instantly and she tried to snap her palm shut once more. Tara had one hand tightly around her wrist, and the other holding her fingers in an open position. With a worried gaze, Willow looked up into Tara’s eyes…questioning. As she met the twin pools of sapphire blue, she felt oddly reassured even without words. Despite her racing heart, she relaxed and joined Tara in staring at the flames which were now dancing steadily across her palm as well as her fingers.

“Don’t be scared of them,” Tara released her grip on Willow’s hand, “You created them, and you’re controlling them not the other way around.”

“But it’s fire…it’s…hot,” Willow said rather lamely, feeling momentously stupid after the words had left her mouth.

“Yes it is,” Tara agreed, as though Willow’s words had been incredibly wise. Ever so gently she reached out and scooped the fire from Willow’s palm. The fire flickered merrily on, not faltering for an instant as it was transferred to Tara, “And at the same time it isn’t.’

Willow’s eyes goggled slightly at the sight of the flames now securely in Tara’s hand. She may have been seeing things but she imagined them to be burning a little brighter.

“I thought you said it was my fire,” Willow whispered quietly, thoroughly entranced by the fire’s shadows playing across the angles and surfaces of Tara’s face, “But I see it’s gone all extra-flamey for you”

Tara’s lips curled upwards into a vibrant but subdued smile and she spoke just as quietly as Willow, “You let me have it…oh, not consciously, but…in a way, you gave it to me.”

“I ‘gave’ it to those vampires,” images of exploding bodies flashed across Willow’s mind and she winced, “Was it because I gave it in anger?”

Tara nodded, “Mostly yes. If you really wanted to, you could do that to me as well…”

Willow looked horrified, “Tara, never in a million years would I ever have reason to…and besides, I wouldn’t be able to do that to you would I, I mean, no one would be able to do that to you, you’re a witch, you have defences against people setting you on fire…don’t you?”

Tara was touched by the genuine concern in Willow’s voice and she replied simply, “Yes Willow, I have defences.” But not against you I think…

Before Willow could ask any further questions, Tara changed the subject and brought them back to their impromptu magic lesson.

“Take it back,” she held out her flamey hand to Willow.

The redhead viewed the fire with suspicion as though it would burn her, even though she knew better. Somewhat hesitantly, she retrieved the fire from Tara’s hand and it was back burning in her own as though it had never made the transition. She watched and studied it carefully but she could not bridge the gap between the innocent little flames on her palm and the deadly fireballs that she knew full well she could conjure.

Experimentally, Willow let loose with a quick flick of her wrist in the direction of a stately Yucca plant in an ornamental pot. Predictably, the flames leapt from her palm straight at the plant. In a matter of seconds, the Yucca was ablaze.

Tara reacted quickly, “Fluentum!”

Thick, misty water enveloped the fire and almost instantly extinguished it. The Yucca now stood blackened and scarred, beyond saving. Tara glared at Willow who was looking rather sheepish.

“You knew full well that would happen didn’t you?” she snapped as though she were talking to Ashley.

“Errr…yes and no,” Willow replied, reaching out to touch one of the long, spiky leaves, it disintegrated at her touch, “I thought maybe…”

Tara growled low in her throat and continued in her mother-voice, “You thought maybe it would be cool to set something on fire.”

Willow’s reply was barely audible but it sounded like a ‘yes.’

“Willow, magic is never, even ‘cool.’ Although some people use it as a tool, it is not. It is a way of life and a part of who you are…hopefully, in time, you will come to understand that.”

“With your help?” Willow asked hopefully.

Tara nodded firmly, “With every bit of help I have to offer and perhaps I can save a few innocent Yuccas along the way.”

Willow regarded the once stately plant with a narrow gaze, “They’re not really worth saving, they’re kinda ugly…but before you go telling me off, I was joking!”

With a playful glare, Tara allowed Willow to enfold her with her arms as way of an apology. Willow responded with an equally playful little smile and buried her face in Tara’s chest. Tara giggled as Willow’s cold little nose burrowed between the top buttons of her pyjama shirt to find the bare flesh beneath. Willow quickly became impatient when the top button barred further progress. Before Tara could realise what was happened, she had deftly popped it open with one hand. The same hand then parted the shirt from the skin, allowing her unrestricted access to Tara’s breasts. She lifted her gaze to Tara’s and found the blonde with a look of mock outrage on her face. Nevertheless, she nodded her assent and Willow grinned a little too eagerly in reply. The thought of Tara’s breasts was already making her mouth water and she dove in for her prize.

“Hey!” a voice called from the ground below.

Willow hastily withdrew her face from the haven of warmth that was Tara’s chest, a mere hairsbreadth from her goal. Then both she and Tara looked down over the balcony to see Faith standing there with her arms folded across her chest. The Slayer looked immensely threatening.

“Are you two trying your very best to draw attention to us?” she asked angrily, “Because, between setting stuff on fire and ripping your clothes off in public, you’re doing a pretty good job.”

“We’re sorry Faith,” Tara replied to the rather pissed off Slayer, “We’re off to bed now anyway.”

“Yeah right,” Faith muttered and disappeared into the darkness once more.

She disappeared just as the thought of throwing something at her entered Willow’s head. Faith had completely ruined the moment. She sighed disappointedly when she saw Tara doing up her top button. Obliviously to Willow’s disappointment, Tara snickered.

“What’s so funny?” Willow asked, failing to see how the situation could be anything but a diaster.

“Faith…telling us not to draw attention to ourselves!” she laughed a little louder this time, “Talk about the pot calling the kettle black!”

Willow joined in Tara’s laugh, “I think you’d be hard pressed to find a blacker pot!”

A voice sounded out of the darkness, it was Faith calling in a very pissed off sounding voice, “I can hear you two you know!”

Tara saw Willow roll her eyes in the most adorable fashion. With the childish gesture, the detective seemed no more than a young girl. Her impish grin lit up her face even in the darkness. Tara instinctively reached out and traced Willow’s jawline with a gentle finger.

“Are you coming to bed?” Tara whispered, tickling the underside of Willow’s chin.

“Coming to bed?” Willow asked with raised eyebrows, “Tara, you’re sleeping in a single bed with your daughter.”

“Going to bed then,” Tara sighed reluctantly, ” Although I’m sure there’s room…”

“And scar Ashley for life?” Willow wrapped her arms around Tara’s waist and gently drew her close.

Willow buried her face in Tara’s neck and breathed in deeply of her scent. She snorted it hungrily, delving even deeper until she was completely smothered. After nuzzling with the tip of her nose, she laid a trail of kisses down the side of Tara’s neck.

“I think it would take a lot to scar that little hellion,” Tara remarked truthfully, her eyes half-lidded as Willow’s lips moved against her skin, “Okay, if you won’t be persuaded then I’ll have to respect your wishes…but you should really get some sleep. You never know what tomorrow’s is going to bring.”

Willow deposited a last kiss below Tara’s ear and finally stood back slightly, regarding the beautiful woman that stood before her.

“No,” Willow replied finally, turning her face so that she was staring out into the darkness, “I thought I’d sit up and keep watch. You know, with those freaky monks running around…”

“Faith will be more than enough to keep watch sweetie.”

Willow ducked her head, “I know, I just wouldn’t be able to sleep if I knew something might be out there.”

Unless Tara was mistaken, she saw Willow stand up a little straighter and puff out her chest as though she were assuming the role of protector. Her attitude did not even venture into comic, it was natural.

“I for one will sleep easier then,” Tara stepped forward and laid a single kiss on Willow’s lips, “We’ve probably still got an audience so that’s all you’re getting.”

“Night Tara. Sleep well.”

“You too…well, if you ever get some sleep. Promise you will?”

“Promise.”

With one last blown kiss, Tara disappeared indoors and Willow was once again left alone to her musings. She decided that it had been wise of Tara to put a stop to their little spot of fooling around. No doubt Faith would have been out there watching had things gone any further. The thought of the Slayer intruding on what was supposed to be a private moment made her more than a little uneasy. Her loins however were still growling in protest, so much so that Willow thought about a quick dip in the lake. No doubt it would be like ice and completely remove all traces of unsated desire…and it was undeniably more romantic than a cold shower. Willow sighed…Faith was still out there. A cold shower would have to do.

******

Tara hummed absently along with the nonsensical children’s theme song that came from the small television in the next room. She lifted her head from the toast she was buttering and craned her neck to see both Willow and Ashley sitting cross-legged in front of an energetic cartoon. For a brief moment she was struck by the similarities between the two of them. Both sat with their shoulders slouched, a habit Tara had tried hard to break Ashley out of but to no avail. Every so often, at different times, they would tuck hair behind their ears, shaken loose with laughter. Even their laughs were similar, quiet but just as intense as a loud belly laugh.

Another of Ashley’s bad habits was leaving half empty glasses sitting on the carpet and as a result, accidents were frequent. Tara watched as Willow discreetly plucked Ashley’s latest beverage from the floor beside her and set it up out of harm’s way. A smile spread across Tara’s face as she knew it was not Giles’ pristine carpet that Willow cared about.

Tara resumed buttering the toast, a slight anxiety creeping into her mood as her thoughts dwelt on both her loved ones. Everyone she cared about stood squarely in danger…especially her daughter. She ladled a healthy portion of strawberry jam onto her toast, smooshing it around half-heartedly. Tara was right to wonder whether she should have found somewhere else for Ashley to go, somewhere safe and away from all of this. It was nothing to do with her little girl, that she was sure of. She lifted the toast to her mouth and absently ripped a chunk off, chewing as though it were tasteless.

Your mama’s sorry Ash, Tara thought watching her little girl, But where on earth would you be safe?

“Tara,” Giles’ soft words interrupted her musings, “I was wondering if I might have a word in private?”

Tara paused with a piece of toast sticking out of her mouth and swallowed quickly, placing the uneaten portion back on her plate. Clearly whatever Giles had to tell her could not wait until she had finished breakfast.

She followed Giles out onto the balcony, the same one that she and Willow had shared the previous evening. Her gaze travelled to the blackened Yucca and she fervently hoped that Giles would not notice it. However, when she met his gaze, she saw there the seriousness that he reserved for only the gravest of situations. He had her full attention even as he fiddled with his glasses, seemingly distracted.

“Giles, has something happened…have you found something?” Tara asked, knowing Giles as well as she did she suspected it to be the latter.

“Um…Tara…it would seem that…” Giles paused, mulling over the right choice of words.

Tara only just realised that she was tapping her foot impatiently. She had since realised that whatever he had to say, concerned her in some way and she wished he would just spit it out! Forcing her foot to be still, she instead folded her arms across her chest.

“Tara…” for some reason Giles could not meet her gaze.

Tara wanted to grab him by the shoulders and shake it out of him, she forced her voice to remain calm and level, “Giles, just tell me.”

Giles lifted his face and she met his cool eyes. Eyes which were strangely veiled and unreadable.

He drew in a deep breath as though fortifying himself, “Tara…it would seem that Ashley is the Seventh Seal…”

TBC in Chapter 14 – “Guardian Revealed.”
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby Cynthia Taz » Fri Feb 17, 2006 8:30 am

Kinda lurker crawling out from under the rock... should have reviewed long time ago... :blush

Not liking Giles right now, especially the way he treated Willow, or the tone he used on Ashley:
Giles shook his head, “No, it wasn’t…tell me honestly, where did you get this page from? Did you take it from one of the other books?”
It's like he's saying that Ashley's a liar... when he isn't that honest himself. :happy

Experimentally, Willow let loose with a quick flick of her wrist in the direction of a stately Yucca plant in an ornamental pot. Predictably, the flames leapt from her palm straight at the plant. In a matter of seconds, the Yucca was ablaze.


Poor yucca, got burnt for nothing... though I am wondering myself too, cos Tara managed to 'take' the flame from Willow cos Willow let her have it, when would the plant got burnt when Willow give her the fireball? Is it like, strictly human transaction? Isn't that like, plant discrimination? :geek

Great story! Please update soon! :-D

Okay... crawling back under the rock now...

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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby grimlock72 » Fri Feb 17, 2006 12:11 pm

Oh I think the Yucca got burn for a good training and expect more stuff to be burned. I thought Willow might have wanted to try and dispel her own fire and see if that worked. Her reaction-speed is good, having spell and all ready-to-fire when scared... not bad :).

That Ashley is the 7th seal comes as no surprise for some reason. I would have to re-read the entire story to pinpoint why I saw that coming. I still think Giles knows more about that part than he lets on.

Having all the seals/targets in a single location is a mayor tactical error in my opinion. That they can see all routes into the area is irrelevant, remember how mr Walking Corpse got away from the crime-scene, hmm ?? As long as the evil people don't change their tactics this might work, but if they decide to just drive a suicide-truck filled with TNT into the house...

Just for the record; I would never let either Faith or Buffy drive MY car :lol. Willow's car is now a mess by her standards, it's probably pristine clean according to Faith :)

Not sure what to make of Spike just just, fairly sure I don't like Matt too much. Of all the people in the house he's the most likely to get them all into trouble one way or the other.. with Dawn and her mobile phone a close second.

Had to smile at the image of Willow and Ashley watching cartoons together. Sounds very sweet :bounce :bow

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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby caz » Fri Feb 17, 2006 3:08 pm

Hi Alcy - A good update. I sorta guessed that Ashley was going to be the seventh seal. I agree with grimlock - Giles does know more than he is letting on and I still don't trust him!

Dawn needs her arse kicking. She has no respect for her sister, but I think that will probably change by the end of this tale.

Willow's impromptu magic lesson with Tara was good. Willow definitely needs to get her magic under control or she will cause an accident. I don't feel sorry for the Yucca Tree cos I don't like 'em!

Willow is being very good - resisting Tara's offer to share her bed. Willow is gonna have to get used of Ashley, especially if she and Tara plan to make a life together.

Looking forward to the next update. :bounce

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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby WillowRulez » Fri Feb 17, 2006 5:52 pm

“I’m sorry Giles,” Tara had resorted to giggling, she covered her mouth with her hand and tried to restrain herself, “But if you could only see how silly you are!

Hihi! Great update!
Tara, Wilow, a lake and a secluded (or so I imagine) cabin... what can go wrong? Apparantly a lot :-D
I kinda suspected that Ashley is the last seal... poor Tara.
Cant wait to see what happens next! Dont make us wait too long! Meanie cliffhanger!
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby watty » Fri Feb 17, 2006 6:32 pm

Been expecting the "shock" announcement about Ashley, the girl is simply too precocious. Willow is prime candidate as guardian for her, and I can't help but think that Giles may be a little riled up there. I won't put it past this Giles to expect to be Ashley's guardian.

Sniggered at Dawn, Matt and even Spike's antics. To see the whole group interact so well is important to me; despite their bickering they have the same aim in mind. I get the feeling, like grimmy says that hiding away in the same location is dangerous, though they have virtually no alternative. It will take the combined forces of Tara and Willow's magic, Giles' experience and the fighting abilities of Buffy, Faith and Spike.

Willow has such potential for magic, glad to see she is getting over her fear and making progress with Tara's guidance.

“Yes it is,” Tara agreed, as though Willow’s words had been incredibly wise. Ever so gently she reached out and scooped the fire from Willow’s palm. The fire flickered merrily on, not faltering for an instant as it was transferred to Tara, “And at the same time it isn’t.’

Willow’s eyes goggled slightly at the sight of the flames now securely in Tara’s hand. She may have been seeing things but she imagined them to be burning a little brighter.

I love the image of Tara gently taking the flame from Willow. There is something connect-y and even slightly erotic about it. In my mind at least. Willow shows a hell of a lot of self-control by not joining Tara in bed, I suppose she has a lot to think about.

Great storytelling, Alcy. The pieces are slowly coming together, the "team" is in place. Looking forward to the next part.
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby will » Sat Feb 18, 2006 4:06 pm

I love the update.
Me too I suspected Ashley was the last seal,
I can't wait to read what will happen next please update soon.
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Re: Rhyme and Reason

Postby Artemis » Fri Feb 24, 2006 1:05 am

I guessed a plot twist :party Okay, it wasn't exactly the end of The Usual Suspects, but I have to take what joy I can when I get one of these things right...

So, on the up side they have in fact got all the Seals safely under guard in one location. On the down side, they've got all the seals in one location which may or may not be safely under guard :eyebrow Faith's kick-ass and all, but Corpseface seems to pack quite a wallop, and I suspect may be one of those villains whose magic automatically trumps physical assault, and has to be confronted magic-to-magic.

Which leaves Tara and Willow - Willow certainly seems to have the 'battle strength magic' to do the job, but there's that huge question mark over how she got that power, and whether it'll really be hers to control when it comes down to it. And she's got so much to learn, and so little time (I suspect) to learn it.

(On the other hand, I'm kind of with Willow on one issue - blasting Yucca plants may not be the best way to demonstrate it, but I'd say magic should be fun sometimes - like martial arts, you can have fun sparring with it, or use it to kick someone's kidneys out their nose. I know Tara wants Willow to take it seriously, but I wouldn't be surprised if Willow was already on a bit of a knife-edge of being actively afraid of her own magic.)

Now, given what Tara knows about Ashley, and what Corpsebutt said to Willow... how will she react now? Trust Willow, or fear her?

Matt showing off to an unimpressed Dawn was hilarious, by the way :lol
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