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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 27 Aug)
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Alcy! It’s really great to see you back, and an update to boot. I have to say that I’ve missed this story, but I always say that ‘cause I love it. Another great update (but I always say that too), so let’s see if I can come up with something better to say this time.

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…I only meant pleasing in terms of seeing my sister happy and with someone who clearly loves her,” he replied, keeping his voice down so that our conversation did not carry ahead to the rest of the group.

I love Abraham. He seems to be truly noble, but I can’t help but wonder how safe he can keep his sister. Hmmm.
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My whole body was gripped with a spasm of fear as his fingers dug deep into my arm. I glanced up at his sickly smile and was terrified to think that he might see the truth in my eyes.

Ah, ominousness (word?) looms on the horizon. Nicely done. As much as I like Abraham, I do not like Edward. Assuming that this was your intention, I have to say well done again.
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Even as Willow scanned the first few sentences she realised that she knew exactly what happened in the entry.

I love the way you are weaving together Willow’s dreams and the contents of the diary. I really wish I knew how this was all going to come together, but I supposed that’s why they call it “tension.” And her growing awareness, through the reincarnation research, that something supernatural is at play regarding her own existence is nicely done in the next few paragraphs.
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Willow frowned disbelievingly as her friend slipped past her towards the pulpit, “You go to church?”
“Of course,” Faith glanced back over her shoulder, “With everything I see in my line of work…well, let’s just say it gives me a sense of peace.”

I love this little interplay. It serves as a lovely way to give us a bit of information about Faith, painting her as multi-faceted without beating the point to death, even allowing us to see that maybe no one, not even her best friend, truly knows all about her.
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“Who I am is not important,” she spoke softly as she moved, circling Willow while keeping her piercing gaze fixed on her, “You should be asking who she is.”

Again, I really liked this, the way you paint a cryptic picture to let us know that there’s much more at play here than Willow ever imagined. I sense that she’s coming to awareness pretty quickly (her earlier research would indicate this to me), and it’s fascinating.
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…she desperately wanted to stay with the woman, even if only to stand in silence with her, her proximity somehow felt natural…

They are connected. It’s killing me to know how, but I’ll be patient (well, as much as I can) and wait to see what happens. And now the mystery woman disappears just as quickly as she appeared. Wow!
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…glanced down now at the one strand of hair she still held. With a sigh, Tara let it fall from her fingers. It fell for a moment before being swept off into the darkness by the wind.

I had to mention this just because the image is really beautiful and haunting. I could, as usual, speculate madly about what’s coming, but I really want to wait and see what happens. I know that I won’t be disappointed.

In closing, I’d just like to offer you an additional “well done.” This story is so very good. It gets more and more complex with each update, and I’m perched at the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next. The mechanics of the thing are great and the resulting tension you manage to create is wonderfully agonizing. Kudos to you, Alcy.

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 27 Aug)
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Alcy - Wow. Just when I thought you were gone, you come back and gift us with this incredible update. There is so much in it to discuss that I don't even think I can get to it all. First, Willow's memories of the events in the journal are so well done. Your transitions make clear that they are both the journal writings (excellent touch with the journal written by Tara rather than Willow) and Willow's memories coming back. It does seem that she is slightly less unnerved by the sexuality of the journal than she was in the beginning but not terribly so.

Then, I love the way Faith loves her enough to simply say yes to taking a trip for the day. Surely she had something else to do (Lara comes to mind but that's a different update...) but she just says yes and off they go. Now, where are these horrific demons coming from and why are they after Willow? That is really just one of the questions lying about.

Willow's interaction with Tara is quite longer but no more revealing (or little more revealing) than the past ones. This:
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“W-Willow…” her voice choked on the word as though she had never uttered it before even though it was her own name, she swallowed before continuing, “Willow Van Helsing…born on the sixth of October 1760, died on the seventh of June 1785…tu fui, ego eris.”

A soft voice spoke behind her to translate even though Willow knew exactly what it said, “What you are, I was. What I am, you will be.”

A shiver crawled slowly up Willow’s spine as she heard the translation, she did not know whether it was the words or the manner in which it was said that troubled her the most.

“We all die,” Willow replied matter-of-factly as she straightened up and took a few steps backwards, away from the grave.

“Yes we do,” the blonde woman turned to face Willow but kept her head turned to face the grave for a few moments longer, “But I think that you alone could interpret that particular inscription on that particular grave in a different way.”

She eventually drew her gaze away from the stone and turned to face Willow, her expression betraying very little and certainly giving no hint as to what she meant with her cryptic words.

“What do you mean by that?” Willow demanded, once more forgetting that she had not even thanked the woman, “You can start by explaining everything…who you are for a start, why the hell you’re following me around…”

“You did not come here to find those answers, the answers you are looking for lie at your feet…I thought you would realise their importance by how desperately he wants to keep you from them.”
Wow. There is such a lot there. I mean... Willow is Willow surely and who wants to keep her from the answers? I still don't understand Tara's role and why she wants to keep Willow safe while also fulfilling whatever she is tasked with.

I have to say that this is probably my favorite current story and the one which I find myself least able to predict. So well done.

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 27 Aug)
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WOW. Oh man, that was exciting. Not that having Willow's and Faith's lives in danger is exciting ... oh heck the fight was exciting. I could almost smell the fear and desperation as Willow ran from the attacking Atramen. I did expect Tara to show up and rescue her, because Willow had no hope of defeating the demon. But even so, I was at the edge of my seat the whole time.

The smooth flow between the memories and Willow's realisation that they were more than dreams was done to perfection. There's a difference between what Willow can find in books on reincarnation and what she feels/sees/remembers.

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“Do you know how Willow Van Helsing died?” Willow repeated in a soft voice and without any trace of her earlier anger and frustration.

“I do,” was the quiet response, “And not a day has gone by that I do not wish to die for what I did…”

1785. I can't even begin to feel the pain that Tara has had to carry for over 200 years. There's so much more depth to this story, and I'm so glad that you are taking care to reveal things slowly, allowing us to explore more before pealing back yet another layer. Thanks, Alcy.
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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 27 Aug)
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Excellent story... update-y goodness soon pleaaase :pray

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 27 Aug)
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Wow Alcy! This is such an amazingly intriguing story, and I am totally caught up in it. Sorry I haven't left fb before, but usually by the time I'm done reading the update, my mind feels mushy like a bowl of oatmeal and I don't really know what to say. I just wanted to tell you I'm loving it. You have a true gift in many ways, and one of them is always leaving us with so many questions. I'm still trying to figure out what exactly Tara is. I mean is she truly a vampire, but a vampire that can do magic too? Or is it possibly some kind of curse, and it has to do with what happened to her Willow, and is Willow really her reincarnated? So sad, that her Willow was only 24 when her life came to an end...or did it really??? Oh, here comes the oatmeal brain again.

Also, that diary is just swoon-worthy.

Oh please, update soon so we will all have at least some more clues as to what is really going on.


More soon please!


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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 27 Aug)
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Hey great fic ... really enjoying the inter-weaving of the story-line and the characters! Plus how hot is it to think of Faith and Lara Croft getting it on! :D Keep up the great work!

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WolfDragonGod: Thanks very much, I promise you won’t have to wait long for more!

WillowRulez: I agree, Willow’s horse fear never gets old, I make it a point to mention it in every fic I write!
Glad you enjoyed Faith’s church attendance, believe it or not I myself once attended church on a regular basis until I realised that there were significant conflicts between what the church taught and my private life…suffice to say, church and I have yet to reacquaint ourselves with one another.
I definitely won’t stay away so long in the future!

diamondforever: Glad you felt the whole haunting vibe, that’s definitely a good vibe to go for when you’ve got a Victorian, vampire…past lives kind of deal going on and there is definitely something mystical going on…no answers though…not yet anyway! Thanks!

Myfamiliar2824: I agree, RL does tend to suck far more than it should. I’m a little worried for your nails as I fear there won’t be any left by the time this story is finished. Thanks very much!

dlline: Hi there Diane, yes it is good to be back and I couldn’t very well come back without an update now could I?
Abraham is one swell 18th century dude, he will definitely play a part in future updates…I wont let a silly little fact like being dead stop me from writing him in! And unfortunately, this also means that our dear friend Edward will play a role too, he is more in the traditional mould of 18th century gentleman.
Glad you’re enjoying the diary weaving, it is definitely tricking but it’s a fun plot point to play with. And yes, there’s a great big cryptic picture being painted here…gotta love cryptic-ness (not sure if that’s a word!) I’m going to be feeding little bits of information in each chapter, all building up to paint a complete picture but it’ll take some working out to realise how it all fits together.
Thanks so much for your praise, it is a difficult story to write but it’s great to know that it’s being enjoyed and appreciated. You labelling it ‘Wonderfully agonizing’ is high praise indeed!

JustSkipIt: Hi there Deb, you should know I would never actually go anywhere…and certainly wouldn’t want to leave anyone hanging.
I think in terms of the diary that Willow’s reaction to the sexuality has less to do with her acceptance of it and more to do with the fact that there are just so many things going on in her head that she doesn’t know quite what to be unnerved about. Whether the fact that this is a diary predominantly about two women in love or the fact that it’s starting to intrude on her own life.
I really love Willow and Faith’s relationship, while they would make the worst romantic couple (I’ll definitely not be writing any Willow/Faith fic in the future), they make a great platonic duo.
This is Willow’s longest interaction with Tara but it’s just as annoyingly cryptic, even if a little more is given away. There is definitely a lot more to understand about both their roles, and more clues will be given in the next chapter.
Wow, I am floored by your admission that this is probably your favourite current story and hardest to predict and I can say nothing except thank you very much for what is exceedingly high praise. I’m all overwhelmed.

watty: Of course having Willow's and Faith's lives in danger is exciting, I live to make their lives as dangerous as possible!
Tara has had to carry an overwhelming amount of pain for a long time, (more like a little over 100 years rather than 200 but who’s counting!) Just how much pain will be revealed in an upcoming chapter…but I’ve given away enough already, it’s definitely best to peel things back slowly. Thanks very much watty.

Zampsa1975: Hey, glad you’re enjoying! I promise an update soon!

wimpy0729: Hey there wimpy, no problem about not having left fb before, I’m exceptionally guilty of that little sin myself.
I do thoroughly enjoy leaving readers with lots of questions (again, there are many people on this board who do the same thing!) and I’m mean enough to allow you very little in the way of answers.
The diary has had to be swoon worthy so far because that’s the only way I could introduce any smut…oh, the diary and the whole Lara/Faith thing! Well, whoever said too much smut was a bad thing!
I can promise an update soon but I can’t promise too many more answers!

Littlebit: hi there, thanks very much for joining in the fun! And yes…Faith and Lara Croft equals mucho hotness, glad you enjoy it as much as I do!


Given the length of time between this update and the last, I have felt compelled to churn out the next chapter rather quickly as my way of apologizing for leaving you all hanging. It will be up very shortly after I’ve completed all the usual pre-posting checks…you know, cos it’s anoying wen things arent speled proberly.

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Oh yeah I cannot stand incorekt speling! lol :D

Look forward to the update!

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CHAPTER EIGHT

26th February 1778

In hindsight I should have known that Edward Walsh harboured me ill intentions following his strange behaviour at Captain Van Helsing’s birthday. I however thought I was safe from the likes of him, safe in my secret world with W. I had not forgotten his marriage proposal of some months past but my response was to simply ignore it until he grew tired of my disinterest and found a more willing bride. While one would expect that brides would be easy enough to come by for a man of his means, tonight it became painfully apparent that it is me he intends to marry.

These past few weeks I have spent a grand total of seven glorious days alone at Hagley Park with W. On each occasion I told my mother that Abraham would be at home with a small party of friends including Edward Walsh and that we would be amply chaperoned at all occasions. There was no small party of friends on any occasion, and I did not feel the slightest bit guilty in lying to my mother, especially if it meant time alone with W. I revelled in the sheer decadence of it and we spent much of our time making love. Sometimes I felt as though we had all the time in the world and it was slow, languorous, and yet there were other times when I scared myself with the fierce intensity of my passion for W and my need to be with her completely before she was taken away from me forever. It was tonight I realised that this may happen sooner than I ever anticipated.

I forget what tonight’s ball was for and I do not think that I ever cared in the slightest, save that it was my duty to be seen and I would at least be consoled by W’s presence, if in the midst of a crowd. The night started well, W was by far the most handsome woman in the room attired in a vibrant green silk that had all the gossips speculating as to whose eye she was attempting to catch. Those old hags would have been scandalised to realise it was me…and I how wanted to tell them just to see the expressions on their sour, judgemental faces. However, I was content to admire her from the apparent perspective of a dearest friend, and was even fortunate enough to dance with her on the pre-text of having no other dance partners (it was not a case of not being asked but rather refusing absolutely every gentleman that asked!)

Although I knew full well I could not avoid Edward all night, I nevertheless made a valiant attempt and succeeded until supper. He made polite conversation at first but before I knew quite what was happening he was standing on the musician’s stage with me at his side announcing our imminent wedding. I was fully aware of his arm linked with mine, seemingly innocent to all assembled. Only I was aware of the painful grip he had on my bare arm as though to speak out in disagreement with his announcement would be a mistake I would regret. The entire room erupted into an enthusiastic cheering and clapping save for two people, one of whom my eyes had sought out as soon as I had recovered from the shock of Edward’s announcement. I sought out her gorgeous face to find that all colour had drained from it completely, she was stark white against the vibrancy of her gown and hair. The sweet mouth I loved to kiss was frozen open as though she were struggling to shout something out over the noise in the room. I could discern no further emotion as she turned and made a discreet but hasty exit from the room. I saw Abraham’s tall figure further towards the back of the room, also staring in shock until he turned and followed his sister from the room.

How I longed to tear from Edward’s grip and follow them but his grip only tightened to the point where I emitted a small gasp of pain that was lost amidst the cheers. I turned to look at him and saw in his eyes that he had not missed W’s exit…and the reason for it. He lent close to my cheek and the repulsive words that he whispered burn in my mind still.

“Come our wedding night Miss Maclay you will learn what it is like to feel a man inside of you and I guarantee you will enjoy it far more than the perverted ministrations of that red-headed whore!”


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Rupert Giles liked to think of himself as a rather unflappable character. However, on this particular morning as he was passing the training room he had the rather unfortunate experience of nearly dying of shock. He heard rather savage sounding yells and cries coming from within and every so often the smack of solid objects coming into contact with one another. He rather discreetly slipped through the door to find the sounds emanating from none other than Willow Rosenberg, clad in nearly full Japanese kendo regalia armed with a bamboo stave, attempting to beat the life out of an unfortunate practice dummy. He could not stop the colour draining from his face, despite her complete lack of technique, and less than traditional shouts, he was struck by the picture she presented and the memories it stirred.

After recovering from his initial shock, Giles managed a polite cough, loud enough to carry across the room and interrupt the redhead in her exertions.

“Giles?” Willow paused in mid-swing, her cheeks flushed red from both exertion and the embarrassment of being caught acting out her frustrations on the practice dummy, “You look like you’ve seen a ghost.”

“I was just reminded of someone I used to know,” Giles smiled weakly, taking a few more steps into the room.

Willow’s eyebrows lifted disbelievingly as she looked from the practice stave in her gloved hands back to Giles, “This reminds you of someone you used to know?”

“Well, everything save your complete lack of technique and the fact that you’re wearing the chest plate upside down,” he managed a chuckle in respect to this, “Honestly, I don’t see how you even managed to fasten it…here, let me fix it.”

Willow glanced down at the chest plate, furrowing her brow as though figuring out just how she had managed to get it so wrong before turning around to let Giles undo the straps and position it correctly.

“Well, it would remind you of Faith wouldn’t it?” Willow asked, shifting slightly as Giles re-strapped the piece of armour.

“No, Willow,” Giles said quietly as he laced the straps around her waist, “You do not remind me of Faith…I have seen Faith practice often but she does not favour the Japanese style of swordsmanship…and she also does not use practice to work out her anger.”

“I’m not angry…” Willow began before stopping abruptly, realising that of course Giles heard her rather raucous shouts just a few moments earlier.

Giles finished the lacings and turned Willow around to face him, satisfied with his work, he crossed to the neatly stacked practice equipment and selected a robe and armour for himself. Willow watched as he rather deftly pulled on each piece of equipment until he was attired exactly the same as she was. She was more than a little nervous as Giles crossed the pads to stand in front of her with his own stave raised in front of him.

“Giles, are you sure about this?” Willow tentatively lifted her stave, “I’m pretty angry and I don’t want to hurt you…”

She had absolutely no warning when Giles sprung forward, quick feet making short work of the distance between them. The stave danced in his hands and it was all Willow could do to desperately block each slashing motion as she was forced backwards. The initial bout lasted mere seconds before Willow found herself up against the wall with nowhere to run.

“This has nothing to do with anger,” Giles said as he levelled the stave at her neck, “Although I have to admit I’ve never seen you this angry in all the years I’ve known you, I would hazard a guess and say you’re upset about Faith…but I would be wrong wouldn’t I?”

Willow stepped forward back onto the pads as Giles lowered the stave away from her head and turned to move back to his starting position, “Yes…well no…I mean I’m concerned about Faith of course but I saw her just yesterday evening and she’s going to be fine…fine as only Faith can.”

Willow padded across the floor to rejoin Giles and was ready for his second attack, blocking each movement successfully…if only because his strokes were considerably slower.

“You’re angry at someone else?” Giles guessed even as he continued to swing, “Croft? Or Myles, has that little devil been neglecting his tasks? Certainly not me I hope?”

The bout ended with Giles poking Willow in the stomach, she dropped her stave and doubled over instantly with her eyes bulging out.

“Not you Giles!” Willow gasped, “Edward Walsh…I’m angry because of Edward Walsh!”

Giles paused even as he was about to sweep Willow’s feet out from beneath her; it was clearly his day to be surprised by the young redhead.

“Willow, where did you hear that name?” he asked quietly.

Managing to straighten up, Willow retrieved her stave and replied, “Just from that diary, I read a passage that mentioned him, I’ve never heard of him before but if he were indeed a real person, it seems that he was a thoroughly dislikeable individual…his actions incensed me…I’m not quite sure why, I guess the diary’s just written so vividly…”

“Thoroughly dislikeable would be one of the politer terms used to describe him,” Giles muttered in acid tones, he then noticed the strange way that Willow was looking at him and managed a brief smile, “I’m not surprised you haven’t heard the name, political history has never been one of your great interests.”

“Political history?” Willow queried.

“Indeed,” Giles raised his stave once more and waved at Willow to do the same, “He was an outspoken Member of Parliament for almost twenty years and I do believe I read that he vehemently opposed the establishment of this very fine institution which now employs the both of us. How was he described in the diary?”

Willow paused before replying, while she had no qualms about reading the diary herself she felt odd relaying the events as recorded by Tara. For some unfathomable reason she felt connected to the woman, even though she no doubt died many years earlier, and that for her to read Tara’s words was almost natural. She didn’t know why she should feel so guilty about sharing the information with Giles but it felt personal and very real to her.

“Err, I suppose I can see how he would come across badly,” Willow completely skirted the issue and fired back a question of her own, “Giles, since you seem to be so learned when it comes to the life and times of Edward Walsh, can you tell me if he was married?”

It was Giles’ turn to pause before replying but eventually he nodded, “I do believe he was…and fathered several children…but I cannot tell you the name of the woman.”

“Her name wasn’t Tara, Tara Maclay?” Willow asked quietly, her voice lingered over the syllables of the name.

Even as the words left Willow’s lips she was suddenly assaulted by a wave of memories, she remembered saying the name over and over, almost as though it were the only name that had ever meant anything to her. She vividly remembered whispering the name in the heat of passion…even though she hadn’t the slightest idea what the heat of passion actually felt like, and the small waves of pleasure at saying the name in greeting…as well as the pain of screaming the name in vain. All this passed in just a few seconds, the rush of emotions overwhelming Willow completely and driving her to her knees. She vaguely heard Giles saying her own name but it wasn’t until the wave had passed that she could bring herself to look up at him and accept his offer of a hand to her feet.

“It may have been Tara,” Giles said softly, “but I can’t be sure.”

“That’s okay, Giles,” Willow said a little too brightly, “It’s no biggie and it certainly doesn’t mean anything to me anyway…can you go another round or have I worn you out?”

“Worn me out?” Giles gasped in outrage, “Why you little upstart…prepare to be humiliated!”

Giles had no sooner raised his stave than the wind was knocked out of him as Willow’s surprise blow caught him full across the chest, he was knocked backwards and she continued to drive him back with each new swing. If he were surprised, he managed not to show it and instead doubled his efforts. However, only Giles himself was aware of the fact that he was exerting almost every ounce of his not inconsiderable skill to block Willow’s stave and try and gain the upper hand. He watched the look of concentration on Willow’s face change from one of red-faced exertion to an intense, fierce competitive expression that was most unlike the person wearing it. He noted her almost flawless technique…no longer even bothering to conform to the rigid forms of the kata but adopting a more fluid, natural style that was difficult to predict.

Giles only managed to gain the upper hand when Willow paused momentarily, as though she were realising that she had suddenly acquired a skill she never knew she possessed. Her look of concentration was replaced by one of confusion. Giles did not pause, he darted inside her guard and stabbed her once again in the stomach so hard she crashed backwards into the practice dummy and it toppled forward to land on her.

Willow lay on her back beneath the dummy groaning until she heard the sound of hearty laughter coming from the side of the room. She lifted her head and twisted her neck slightly to see Myles doubled over with mirth at her embarrassing situation. She scrambled to her feet, neither quickly nor gracefully with all the armour on and pointed her bamboo staves in the direction of the young man.

“You just come over here and start laughing, Myles!” Willow had a good attempt at a stabbing motion in his direction which only served to make Myles laugh even harder, “You shouldn’t laugh at people that are carrying big sticks!”

“Ordinarily no,” Myles was still grinning, “But you can when they can’t run fast enough to catch you!”

And with that parting shot Myles bolted from the room and Willow followed a split second later with a last grin over her shoulder in Giles’ direction. Willow made a valiant attempt to catch him so as to deliver the thrashing she felt he deserved but after fifteen minutes of chasing him around the lower levels of the museum and bowling over Cordelia Chase, she was exhausted and had to admit defeat…and Cordelia was threatening to expose her less than grown up shenanigans to Croft.

Meanwhile in the practice room Giles removed his protective gear slowly, wincing as the blows that Willow had managed to land now made themselves known. Something moved in the shadows, emerging from the darkness between two practice dummies but Giles continued to disrobe, completely unconcerned by the additional presence in the room.

“Things are moving fast,” the presence commented quietly.

Giles turned to face the pale young woman standing next to him, “They are…Tara…but are they moving fast enough? I don’t know if she’ll be ready in time and she must…you know that as well as I do.”

Tara inclined her head slightly as in agreement. She ran her eyes over the rows of practice equipment and then the mats on the floor where Willow had stood just a few moments earlier. There was a small smile on her face as though she were remembering what had just taken place in the training room.

“She’ll be ready Giles; I’ll see to that…you always were such a worry wort,” there was just the hint of humour in Tara’s voice.

Giles turned away to stow away his gear neatly, “Can you blame me? I’m placing far more trust in you than I would like.”

“Why can you still not bring yourself to trust me after all these years?” any trace of humour had vanished from her voice, replaced by open annoyance.

Giles finished his tidying before deigning to reply to her, he still could not bring himself to look at her and his tone was firm, almost accusatory, “Because I know what you are and I know what you did…and nothing you have done since, or ever will do, can erase that.”

“It is not your forgiveness I crave Giles…but rather hers.”

When Giles could bring himself to look up once more, she was gone and he was alone in the room.

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Willow shifted uncomfortably on the high backed leather chair in front of Croft’s desk; she winced as it squeaked slightly. Croft stood on the other side of the desk, staring out the window for the time being, as though she were deep in thought and did not even realise Willow was there.

Being alone in the presence of Lara Croft was not exactly top on the list of Willow’s favourite situations to be in. For a variety of reasons, reasons which she was sure had something to do with the potent sexuality issuing forth from every pore of Croft’s being, Willow felt ill at ease and decidedly provincial in the company of her employer. Faith’s presence had always made things somewhat easier. Although Willow was slowly coming to realise that this was due to the fact that whenever Faith was in the room Croft’s attention was singularly focused to the point of almost ignoring everything else. As innocent and naive as she was, Willow knew there was more going on between Croft and Faith than a simple employer/employee relationship. It unnerved her somewhat; it would have been easier to accept if Croft were a man. As it was, Croft was most definitely a woman…as Faith was a woman. It had nothing to do with disgust and revulsion as it would with most people…but rather it had everything to do with insecurities on Willow’s part. Their relationship unnerved her because it was what she wanted for herself…not with Croft of course, a chill ran down Willow’s spine when that thought ran through her head. It was bad enough being in the presence of the woman fully clothed let alone naked. Willow grimaced as she felt the familiar sensation coursing through her cheeks and she knew that her face had turned an embarrassing shade of red.

As Croft turned slowly, finally dragging her attention away from the window and back within her office, Willow ducked her head, letting her hair fall forward over her face to disguise the redness in her cheeks. She could feel Croft’s eyes on her but could not bring herself to look up.

“Faith’s condition has improved markedly,” Willow commented, still staring down into her lap, “The doctor was having a difficult time keeping her in bed…and she was rather annoyed I did not see fit to bring her any cigars.”

Croft chuckled softly as she took a seat, “Why does that not surprise me.”

Willow managed to raise her head, she was surprised to find a slightly pained expression on Croft’s beautiful features and she swallowed nervously.

“She…expressed a desire to see you…just whenever you had a spare moment were her exact words. I think perhaps she would like to deliver her report verbally.”

Croft turned to face Willow directly, the pain replaced by the slightest twinkle in her eye, “Yes, sick bed or not, I do need her report…thank you, Rosenberg.”

Willow nodded in acknowledgment. She was then surprised to hear a knock at the door behind her, turning she found a rather pale faced Myles standing just over the threshold.

“Ah, Cavendish, so good of you to join us,” Croft beckoned him forward with a motion of her hand, “Come and take a seat next to Rosenberg here.”

Myles almost raced across the floor to perch himself rather awkwardly on the seat beside Willow. Willow glanced across and gave the young man a smile of reassurance. Given the fact that she had to bear Croft’s presence almost every day, she could imagine how uncomfortable the young man was. She knew for a fact that he would hide in closets until Croft had passed by him…and she suspected that it was for a similar reason as her own fear. Willow hated to compare herself to a hot-blooded teenage male, but they were both faced with the same predicament when in Croft’s presence.

“I’m sorry I was late Lady Croft, but Giles would not let me go until I had finished all my tasks…he did seem rather busy, preparing for another of Faith’s trips from the looks of things…” Myles stopped abruptly as though he realised he were waffling.

Willow glanced across at Myles with a confused expression on her face and then back to Croft, “Why would Giles be preparing Faith’s equipment…she can’t possibly go anywhere in the condition that she is, you’re not seriously considering sending her on assignment?”

“We have received a message from Faith’s contact in Eastern Europe…a piece of information that we desperately need to have and someone must be sent to meet our contact in person…”

“That person can’t be Faith, I won’t allow it!” Willow insisted, no longer intimidated by Croft with her friend’s health on the line.

“I agree, which is why I’m sending you,” Croft said simply.

She looked on with an impassive face as Willow’s expression morphed almost instantly. At first her features were frozen and then comprehension dawned. As her mind chewed over Croft’s words and realised exactly what they meant for her, her jaw dropped and her eyes bulged. Her face stayed like this for several seconds before her jaw began to work as though she were trying to say something. The words would not come and Croft continued.

“It simply isn’t prudent for us to wait until Faith has recovered, you of all people should understand the need for speed when it comes to vital information,” Croft intoned in a serious voice, “We need you on this, Willow.”

Willow’s mouth continued to work ineffectively until she paused to pull herself together. She closed her eyes for a few moments and when she opened them she blurted our, “I’ve never left the country before and you’re sending me to Eastern Europe?”

“That is correct,” Lara nodded.

“But you can’t…I mean, this is obviously important, crucial even to our work around Vlad Tepes and you’re sending me?”

“That is precisely why we’re sending you.”

In the chair beside her, Willow heard Myles snigger behind his hand. She turned her head and glared at him through narrowed eyes. He very promptly wiped the smile from his face.

Croft watched the interchange and had a small smile of her own for Myles, “I wouldn’t look so smug if I were you Cavendish…you’re going too.”

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“Right…crossbow…complete with your standard barbed bolts, silver-tipped bolts and armour piercing bolts,” Giles paused for a moment before selecting another quiver of bolts with their heads coated in an odd black surface, “I better throw in some flammable headed bolts given all the Atramen that have been giving you grief lately.”

Giles nodded as though satisfied with himself and packed the bolts and crossbow into the bag open in front of him. Willow made a face as Giles turned his back on her to rummage on the racks behind him. Meanwhile Myles was peering into the bag with an excited grin on his face. Giles slapped his hand away from the silver-tipped bolts when he turned around.

“Dagger,” Giles commented as he placed a rather long and wicked looking weapon in the bag, “Longsword…”

He ran into an obvious problem when he went to fit the sword into the canvas bag, he paused with a frown on his face as though trying to work out how he could manage it.

“Ah, Giles,” Willow was eyeing the weapon nervously as though it were going to leap out of the scabbard and run her through of its own accord, “Surely you must have something a little smaller?”

Giles glanced up at Willow’s interruption of his packing process, his eyebrows raised as he considered her question. He glanced from Willow to the longsword and back and then made a thoughtful little sound as though accepting the fact that Willow would have great difficulty in lifting the weapon let alone swinging it at anything that was intent on harming her. With a reluctant sign, he replaced the sword on the rack behind him and selected a far shorter, lighter rapier-like blade that even Willow would have little trouble in wielding. He glanced up at Willow to seek her approval and she replied with a nonchalant shrug.

“I don’t plan on using any of those weapons, Giles,” Willow commented firmly, “Especially not while I have two good legs and am quite capable of running.”

Giles chuckled, “Where’s the fun in that?”

“My point exactly!” Myles chirped in agreement.

Willow glanced from one to the other and gave an exasperated sigh, it was clear that she was fighting a loosing battle.

“You two finish packing all of this…” Willow waved her hand at the various accoutrements that Giles had littering the table in front of him, “All of this stuff…I’m going home to pack the real essentials…books, writing implements and the like…I’ll see you both tomorrow.”

Willow stumbled from Giles’ workroom; the full realisation that she was being sent to Eastern Europe was only just beginning to hit her. As she stumbled down the corridor in the general direction of her office, she made a mental note to seriously consider self-incapacitation in order to avoid going.

I’m sure Croft wouldn’t send me if I were missing my thumb… Willow mused as she glanced down at the offending appendage, although even as she began to wriggle it back and forth she decided that she quite enjoyed the use of her thumb and severing it was not the best course of action.

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It was a fully intact Willow that arrived completely out of breath at the docks the next morning, thanking her lucky stars that the steamship was still there and had not left with out her. Myles was waving urgently from the railings and Giles was waiting near the gangplank with exasperation clearly written all over his face.

“I’m sorry…I slept in,” Willow wheezed between gasps of air, dumping her small travel bag at her feet but retaining a tight hold on an elegant wooden writing case which contained her papers, writing implements and more importantly, the diary.

“Your subconscious really wanted you to miss the boat didn’t it?” Giles thumped her lightly over the head with a sheaf of papers he held in his hand, “Here, these are essentials which you will not want to lose…I almost gave them to Myles, I couldn’t quite decide who was the more trustworthy out of the two of you.”

Willow accepted the papers and quickly leafed through them, most were standard documents of introduction and the like, a few looked like instructions from Croft and Giles and would require a closer inspection once she was on her way. As she was looking downwards Willow caught sight of the bag of weapons that Giles had packed the previous day and she kicked it with the toe of her boot. While completely unaccustomed to expeditions of any kind, and still clad in her usual worn suit, Willow had at least managed to find an old pair of hiking boots from her university days. Giles looked her up and down with a frown.

“You might want to purchase some new clothes en route, if I might suggest an excellent outfitting store I know in Paris…”

“What’s wrong with my attire?” Willow glanced down at her sensible suit.

Giles sighed once more, “I really have to run, and so do you…pick up your bags, and get on the boat, I’ve arranged for a guide to meet you in Paris…do you think you can get that far on your own?”

Willow had picked up her travel bag and was awkwardly attempting to get a hand on the weapons bag as Giles spoke; she glanced up when Giles mentioned the word ‘guide.’

“You’re giving me a guide?” she asked hopefully, “Why didn’t someone tell me that earlier, I was up all last night colour coding travel plans and maps…honestly Giles…”

Giles was already departing with a last smile and a wave over her shoulder even as Willow struggled with her belongings.

“Really!” she gasped, “He could have at least given me a hand!”

Behind her the ship’s whistle pierced the crisp morning air with several short bursts; Willow glanced over her shoulder to see the sailors already beginning to hoist the gang plank. With a panicked yelp, Willow turned and ran, yelling at them to hold the plank. She barely made it, tossing her bags across to a sailor and having to leap over a good foot of water herself. Once safely on the plank and making her way up onto the deck she breathed a sign of relief. She crossed the deck to join Myles and was annoyed to find that the young man had managed to kit himself out quite respectably for their trip. He was wearing sturdy denim trousers tucked into high boots with a sweater and thick coat and topped by a rather ridiculous pith helmet that she suspected had been liberated from Giles’ workroom.

“You do realise we’re going to Eastern Europe, not Africa,” Willow commented upon eyeing up the helmet.

Myles was unperturbed by this little detail and rapped his knuckles on it, “Still, looks pretty spiffing though doesn’t it?”

Willow avoided replying, instead concentrating on a niggling little feeling at the back of her mind that usually meant she had forgotten something. While trying to remember what this was she turned her attention back to Giles’ parting words.

“Did you know a guide is to join us in Paris?” she asked Myles.

“Yes,” the young man replied cheerfully.

“Great…to make this trip even more unbearable I have to put up with a Frenchman!” Willow threw up her hands, still trying to remember what it was that she had forgotten.

“I don’t think he’s French, I think Giles said he was an American,” Myles commented helpfully.

Willow groaned, “This could not get any worse!”

Even as the ship set out on the River Thames Willow found her stomach lurching in a manner which hinted at the possibility of some rather spectacular gastro expulsions once they were actually in the Channel. It was at this already unpleasant moment that Willow realised what it was she had forgotten. She lent forward and smacked her forehead on the iron deck rail.

“What’s wrong?” Miles asked cheerily.

“I left all our weapons behind,” Willow muttered, banging her head on the rail for a second time.

While she wasn’t sure whether she ought to be miserable or ecstatic at leaving this key piece of their luggage lying on the dock, she did know that the boat was carrying them to continental Europe and all its associated sights and marvels…and dangers and monsters, and she was definitely sure that she didn’t like that one little bit.

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Hey :wave

Its great to see two updates so close together :party

I definitely wouldnt mind it one little bit if it continued like this :grin

This is a really cool fic, with all the mystery and stuff... i wonder what Tara did that was so unforgivable... :confused

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Another great update, again leaving my mind reeling. Giles knows about Tara? And what exactly did she do??? And...and...Willow's getting some kind of new skills or powers and to fight what/who? Is it the "he" Tara referred to in the last update? And if it's Edward Walsh, I hope she obliterates the bastard.

Now it's even scarier that Willow is being sent off in place of Faith, of course, without her weapons. I just know that there's some hidden reason behind this, and who is this American guide?

Please update soon and hopefully you will be kind enough to get us closer to some answers. You're driving me crazy, but in a "I Love This Fic" kind of way.


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He rather discreetly slipped through the door to find the sounds emanating from none other than Willow Rosenberg, clad in nearly full Japanese kendo regalia armed with a bamboo stave, attempting to beat the life out of an unfortunate practice dummy. He could not stop the colour draining from his face, despite her complete lack of technique, and less than traditional shouts, he was struck by the picture she presented and the memories it stirred.

Memories of...? Giles knows too much for my liking. And he knows Tara, I suspected that :D
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“I agree, which is why I’m sending you,” Croft said simply.

Hehe, Willow the adventurer. I cant help picturing Myles as teenage Xander or maybe Zack from Bones :smash
A ship... how convenient for Tara ;) Not sure if she is the gude too since Myles didnt correct Willow when she assumed it was a guy.
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Perfect, just perfect :kitty
Great update... as usual :P

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Ooh what a good update! I love the mystery and suspense you’re building. You just keep supplying almost enough information to crack the mystery and then by the end of the update some new piece of information is thrown at me which blows away any assumptions I had previously made. I’m super keen to find out what Tara did that was so inexcusable/unforgivable, but on the same hand I’m curious as to the connection between the two Willows – are they the same person? Is this reincarnation? Also why is it that most of the characters seem to know what went on over 100 years ago as well as what the deal is now???? They cannot all be vampires?? Also even though there seems to be some sort of connection between Tara and the “Angel Crew” I don’t get the feeling that she is a vampire – not sure why??? Can you tell me? ;)

Looking forward to the next instalment!

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Woooooo an update! I'm always so happy to see a new chapter for Van Rosenberg. :D

The subject of reincarnation has always been interesting, especially the idea of innate abilities being transferred. What more can Willow do? Van Helsing was "talented" in many ways, and so must have been Van Rosenberg...

And Giles knows something, and it's big...I wonder how long he's been in contact with Tara. Was the marriage announcement the end of W and T in the past? Is that why she's so adamant for forgiveness?

I can't wait to see where you're going with this. It's shaping up to be an absolutely swash-buckling adventure. :D

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Like everyone else, I am so impressed by your writing to the point I'm a bit intimidated. You have surely captured the mood of the period. I must confess to not have been able to sit through Van Helsing (the movie, too much helter skelter action) but I've read Bram's DRACULA several times so with that in mind I devoured your whole fic in one sitting. i was left breathless by your discriptive narrative. I felt I was there. This is just flat out good.

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Oh Alcy,
How supremely fantastic. First, it appears that Willow has retained some knowledge and skill in her fighting skills into this lifetime. That's both surprising and encouraging. Then there's Giles's overwhelming involvement in this, whatever this is. It certainly seems that he not only knew Willow and Tara but knows this entire plot. While makes me particularly wonder at his early involvement in Willow's life. Has he basically been grooming her toward this point for her entire life? I don't know whether to be happy about that or to feel a bit betrayed on her behalf.

I feel as if I should be amused at the thought of Willow and Myles on this mission. The picture of her jumping to the gangplank (is that the word?) is amusing and makes me think even more of the athleticism that she's retained.

I'm so thrilled that you've posted two this month and that you're currently writing more (according to the what are you doing thread - although I'm not stalking you).

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hehe so silly willow she forgot the weapons anyway nice update

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Excellent update-y goodness... I just hope that Willow won't need those weapons she left behind... I hope Willow would forgive Tara's mistakes and much :wtkiss ensues...

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ceridwen: It’s great for me to have two updates ready for you so fast and I think I may be able to continue like this for a little while at least, especially given that the next chapter is almost done!
I’m glad you think it’s a cool fic!

wimpy0729: Reeling is always a good state of mind to be in after finishing a chapter.
Yes, Giles definitely does know Tara, that much I can say as it is clear in the update and Willow’s going all large with the butch with her fighting skills…exciting times indeed.
Willow is being sent off in place of Faith is of course scary, but it’s also a whole lot of fun, the American guide will be revealed in the next chapter.
No worries about not finding out at least a few answers soon as I will have the next update up shortly. I’m sure I’ll keep driving you crazy though!

WillowRulez: There are many fishy things going on at the moment, although the fishiest person of all seems to be Giles.
I don’t watch Bones so I’m not sure who Zack is but I can tell you Myles is based on his namesake in the Master and Commander movie, that’s the sort of look I was going for, although I’ve made him a little clumsier but no less brave and dashing! I’ll pop a photo here soon

LittleBit: Well I’m not going to supply all the information at once! That would be giving the game away but I do like feeding the kittens little bits at a time. There are many questions to be answered in this particular fic of course, first and foremost of the ones that you are interested in is who are vampires and who aren’t…I ca’t answer that except to say that some people are vampires…and some aren’t. Thanks so much for reading!

diamondforever: You’ll be doing a lot of Woohoos over the last few weeks then with three updates in fairly short succession!
I find the subject of reincarnation really interesting too, and while I’ve played with it a little bit in Rhyme and Reason, I’d say that I’m taking it further here. Nothing is based on fact of course, I’ve made it all up!
Yup, Giles knows something! We’ll see how much he knows in upcoming chapters.
The marriage announcement between Tara and Edward Walsh was in the past but I can’t say whether that is the act that Tara requires forgiveness for.
Thanks very much, plenty of swash-buckling adventure still to come.

cathy north: I wouldn’t be intimidated by my writing at all! Honestly, there are so many brilliant writers around here that I find it gets my creative juices flowing and I’m spurred to write more and learn as I go in order to improve my writing.
I’m glad you feel I’ve captured the mood of the period, while being no expert, I do read and watch an awful lot of movies so all my knowledge is informed by what I have learnt that way. Don’t worry that you haven’t been able to sit through Van Helsing, it is a truly awful movie and even having the gorgeous Kate Beckinsale in it can’t make it any better. Thanks so much

JustSkipIt: You know how much I like writing kick-arse women Deb! Although writing Willow is somewhat more challenging, while she may have been kick-arse in a past life…she’s now definitely gone all soft and bookish. Giles’ involvement is also a key point to note and I’m pleased that you spotted and remembered his involvement in her early life and education, nothing is written just for the sake of it, it all has a point!
You should definitely be amused at the thought of Willow and Myles on this mission. While this fic is undeniably dark in the gothic tradition, there’s still an element of humorous adventure along the lines of Indiana Jones etc and that’s where I want to keep it, more in line with Captain Red than Rhyme and Reason.
Yes, I should be worried that you’re stalking me (kidding!) but I am about ready to post the third update for the month! Go me!

WolfDragonGod: Glad you enjoyed the update (and silly Willow)

Zampsa1975: Well, Willow might need some weapons given that she heading off into the very heart of vampire country, but I’m sure she’ll make do because she’s quite resourceful!
You can guarantee that much Willow/Tara loving will eventually ensue…although it may take a while.

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CHAPTER NINE

5th March 1778

My hands shakes for a reason other than excitement tonight…events have moved to the point where I now feel as if I am standing on the edge of a precipice and I know I shall fall. W surprised me at a soiree this evening by making no attempt to disguise her desire to speak with me alone. I thought perhaps after Edward’s announcement that she would disavow all knowledge of our relationship. However, she made it very clear that this was not her desire for us.

“I want you to leave with me,” W asked simply as we were alone in a secluded hallway of Hagley Park, “I cannot abide the thought of you wed to that foul toad Edward Walsh, you must leave with me.”

I was struck dumb by the fierce intensity in her voice and I knew that these were no mere girlish dreams that she was giving voice to. W was serious in her intent…and I must admit that I was scared.

“Where would we go?” I asked in a strangled whisper.

“Paris…anywhere in Europe…even America!” W grasped both my hands in her own, squeezing them firmly and holding them to her breast, “Abraham will see us safely anywhere we wish to go…and you know there is the money for us to do this, he will deny us nothing. It is simple!”

My dear, dear W…she could not even begin to understand the ties that bound me to Edward Walsh and my intended fate. She could only understand love…

“I can leave,” I admitted, “But my family would be ruined…our lands lost to debtors, my parents and siblings destitute, not all are fortunate enough to have the family fortune you have inherited from your parents...in marrying Edward I will save my family.”

W’s brow furrowed as though she were mulling over this information in her mind, her solution was all too simple, “Why not allow me to help…I’m sure Abraham would…”

“W, please desist with your follies!” I stamped my foot in exasperation, if only she would make it easy on me, “The only course of action is for me to marry Edward…anything else is unacceptable to society.”

“I love you, Tara,” W protested, “surely that is all that matters?”

With those impassioned words she threw herself forward into my arms and pressed her lips to mine. That kiss served to remind me that we belonged together, W and I, the skin on my lips melded to hers, I closed my eyes and I was lost to her touch. At that point I began to entertain the thought that perhaps her folly would work, and we would be able to find a place where we could be together, away from my family and Edward.

My lips parted with a gasp as she thrust her tongue into my mouth, I accepted it hungrily, my hands cupping her face. She forced me back against the wall with one fierce shove as our kiss continued, growing in intensity. I felt her begin to tug at my skirts with one hand, lifting them over my knee and up my thigh until she reached the hem and her hand could find its way beneath. I parted my thighs eagerly; god knows I needed her regardless of the open hallway in which we stood.

It was as her fingers tugged at the laces on my underwear that our kiss broke as I felt her weight cruelly dragged away from my body. I opened my eyes in time to see W thrown back against the opposite wall of the hallway, a man stepped between us. It was Edward, his face alight with fury as he drew back his hand and slapped W across her face with all the force he could muster. She fell, sprawling on the ground at Edward’s feet. I cried out, dashing to my W’s side but Edward grabbed me by my hair and yanked me backwards. Tears were brimming in my eyes as I looked to W crumpled on the ground. I saw her stir; she rose into a crouching position before using the wall as an aid to stand. With her cheek already a violent red, she stood and faced Edward and I. With fire in her eyes she stepped towards us. Edward threw me to one side as Willow approached.

Even now I can still see W, standing toe to toe with Edward, him towering over her small frame. She would not back down. Even when he threatened to give her the beating she deserved she did not flinch once. Edward was as immovable as a rock, I could see in his eyes the immense and overwhelming hatred he felt for W for the simple fact that, even though he may marry me, she will forever remain the one I love. I screamed as Edward raised his fist, rushing to restrain the hot-headed fool but he shoved me aside once more with a mere flick of his hand. I was thrown into the wall behind me and collapsed like a sack of flour with the wind knocked out of me. It was at that precise moment, just as Edward was about to bring his fist crashing down on W, that someone else rushed past me to restrain him. I saw a flash of red hair, a military uniform. Abraham Van Helsing was on Edward Walsh in a second, the dandy hardly having time to turn his head before the hardened captain drove his fist straight into Edward’s nose. A shower of blood spewed forth, staining Edward’s shirt and sending him flying away from W. Abraham pressed forward and seized the fallen man by the scruff of his bloodied shirt, hauling him upwards so the two of them were nose to nose. One trembling with fear, the other with barely controlled rage.

“If you ever lay a hand on my sister I will see to it personally that you never use either of your hands again…that should be simply enough put even for the likes of you!” Abraham growled, “I wish to god I could stop you from marrying Tara as well…”

It was at that point that Edward laughed, and it wasn’t the laugh of someone even remotely amused…it was the laugh of insanity, the whites of his eyes were huge as he met Abraham’s stare.

“But you can’t can you, Captain?” his voice was high-pitched, close to a shriek, “Your abomination of a sister is going to spend the rest of her life knowing that I’m the one who gets to take my rights with my wife…and be most assured, I will take them!”

I could see the desire to do murder written plainly on Abraham’s face and I desperately wanted him to go through with it, to drive his fist again and again into Edward’s face until the bastard was nothing but an unrecognisable and bloodied corpse. Yet I knew that would only bring instant satisfaction and not the lasting life of peace with W that I craved. I knew at that point that there was nothing that I could do that would bring about the end I craved with all my being…although I could not guarantee W’s happiness; at least I could guarantee her protection. If Abraham were labelled a murderer, she would be left completely alone. It almost killed me to do it but I threw myself over Edward even as Abraham was about to lose himself to the rage, pleading for the Captain to spare him, vile a man as he was. I will never forget the look of incomprehension on Abraham’s face, or W’s as I pleaded to spare the life of the man I most loathed in all the world. I watched on as Abraham backed away from us both and turned his back on me to face his sister. I only saw W’s face for a moment but it was more than enough to reduce me to tears. The expression of disbelief and pain that was written there forced a terrible sob from my throat that might have been an attempt to say her name. Within seconds she was gone, bundled away from the scene by Abraham and I was left kneeling next to a bloodied, dazed Edward.

Although I am quite sure that I am now rendered less than whole with the loss of my W and my impending union with Edward, I cannot accept that my life is over. While I fear I will never again know love, I will know duty.


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…while I fear I will never again know love, I will know duty…

Willow traced her fingertips gently over the long dried ink on the page of the diary from which she read, feeling the anguish that Tara must have felt through the physical contact with the paper. The last line for the entry was written with such fierce strokes that the words were intended into the page…and duty had been underlined thrice. She snapped the small volume shut and clutched it tightly against her chest. Feeling her eyes burn fiercely, Willow turned to stare out the window of the train and lost herself for a few moments in the tranquil French country side rolling by. As she felt one hot tear escape to slide down her cheek, she heard the door to the compartment side open. She discreetly dashed the tear away as she shoved the diary into the writing case at her feet.

“Reading?” Myles inquired a little too cheerfully, “I always find...”

He stopped abruptly when he noticed the tell-tale moisture on Willow’s cheek, while Myles Cavendish had no great understanding of women, he did know enough to know when he was intruding on a private moment. He took his seat on the opposite side of the compartment and fell asleep rather quickly.

Willow glanced across as the young man started snoring in a forced manner and she managed a smile. She herself found sleep rather impossible, there were far too many thoughts racing through her mind for her to be calm enough for sleep. Instead she settled for the scenery.

Before long the low farmland gave way to the outer suburbs of Paris and eventually their stop. Myles jerked awake as the train ground to a halt and Willow was already gathering their luggage from the racks overhead.

“We’re to meet our guide at five in the evening, at this hotel,” Myles said as he and Willow stepped off the train and onto the bustling platform, “I’ve got the name of the hotel somewhere.”

Willow turned and regarded him through narrow eyes, “Why is it that Giles trusted you with such an important piece of information?”

“Something about instilling a sense of responsibility,” Myles shrugged, “Should we just go to the hotel and wait?”

“I guess,” Willow mused glancing down at her attire, “Although I do think we should pay a little visit to a clothing store…Giles was right, I’m dressed for the library…not for the field.”

Myles grinned, “This will be fun, I’ve never seen you wear anything other than those boring old suits of yours…it’s high time you wore something a little more flattering.”

Willow cuffed the young man over the back of his head, “How the hell would you know anything about fashion?”

“I know enough to know that what you’re wearing…” Myles nodded in Willow’s direction, “Is not fashion.”

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Giles had seen fit to include the card of the store he mentioned that morning in Myles’ small collection of instructions and locations. While Willow had at first been hesitant to spend Museum funds on clothing, she had decided that it was a sensible course of action given their destination. So it was an hour later that Willow glanced down at herself and wondered if what she was now wearing was fashion. For some reason she decided that it definitely was not.

Willow stepped in front of the provided mirror and studied her reflection with a serious frown. She’d modelled her attire after Faith of course, being the only globe trotting adventurer that she knew, but for some reason she did not look like her dark-haired friend. Her feet were clad in high, sturdy brown leather boots of the type worn by military officers and serious explorers laced up to just below her knee. Willow then examined the leather trousers; she shifted a little uncomfortably as they were tight even on her decidedly non-curvy frame. Flicking up the back of her leather coat she turned her back to the mirror and glanced over her shoulder at the way the pants hugged her bottom rather scandalously. She sighed, for the most part her jacket would be covering the offending area and they would be out of civilised company for much of the trip. Although, as Willow studied this particular view of her reflection for a moment longer, she had to admit that it was not an unpleasant sight the way the leather hugged her flanks. Red creeping into her cheeks, she glanced at the changing room door to check that no one had been observing her at the moment. She then faced the mirror front on once more, adjusting the collar of her shirt and lamenting the lack of a bow tie…she was savvy enough to realise that a tie would not compliment her outfit. To complete the outfit, she wore a green heavy cotton jacket beneath her thick leather coat which brushed the tops of her boots and was sure to keep most of the travelling dust at bay. With a deep breath, Willow stepped out of the changing room to Myles’ enthusiastic approval. He saw fit to add a wide-brimmed leather hat as a last addition and Willow had to admit that it did serve to make her seem at least a little dashing.

When the two of them returned from their shopping expedition to the small, out of the way hotel in which they were spending the night, there was a man of around Willow’s age seated in the lobby. Once glance at him and Willow could tell he was a little ill at ease in his surroundings. He was perched awkwardly on the very edge of the plush chair as though it would swallow him up if he sat on it in the normal fashion. His clothes were clean but well worn and definitely the attire of a man of action as opposed to one who spent his time behind a desk. Willow could see the way his shirt hugged his rather large biceps and the curved corners of his lips which meant he was prone to smiling often. She supposed that a lady not of her inclinations would find him to be rather attractive and, given the way his grin was rapidly forming at the sight of her, the gentleman no doubt was fully aware of this. He practically leapt out of the chair as though grateful to be able to stand and took a few quick strides towards Willow and Myles. Despite Myles’ admiring stare, he only seemed to have eyes for Willow.

“Hey there little lady, I’m Alexander Harris…Alex to all the ladies, I believe I will be your guide for your journey into the dark and dangerous depths of Eastern Europe,” Alex placed his worn and weathered hat on his head and tipped it jauntily.

Willow eyed him suspiciously before replying in a rather rude tone, “I trust that you’ll have the good sense to avoid the dark and dangerous bits and just take us where were need to go.”

Alex’s smile slowly morphed into a confused frown, and he paused to scratch his head for at least a minute before replying. It was as though her were trying to figure out whether the ‘little lady’ was pulling his leg or being completely serious.

“But Ma’am, it’s the dark and dangerous bits that I’m being paid to take you to…” He looked her up and down, eyes roaming over her entire get up, from her un-scuffed leather boots to the smart jacket and hat, neither of which had never known rain or dust, “Say, just how much experience do you have in the field?”

“None,” Willow replied promptly, quite proud to admit that she had never sullied herself with such things, “I’m a researcher.”

Alex was staring at Willow in an expression of outright shock when Myles slipped between them and held out his hand with an enthused expression on his face. Still struck mute, Alex took the younger man’s hand in his own.

“Myles Cavendish at your service, Mr Harris!” Myles pumped Alex’s hand rather firmly in his enthusiasm.

With his gaze going back and forth between Willow and Myles (especially staring at the young man’s pith helmet), Alex could barely contain himself. His expression took on a rather worried turn when he realised that he would be escorting the two greenest expedition greenhorns in continental Europe. He tipped his hat again before backing away from them both slowly.

“Um, I’d best be turning in for the night…I’ll meet you both on the train tomorrow morning, right?” he turned, not waiting for an answer and walked away muttering something about having to find a new line of work.

Willow and Myles watched Alex take the stairs two at a time, soon disappearing from sight. Willow turned to Myles and shrugged, “I guess we should try and get some sleep as well…I think it might be a long day tomorrow.”

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While Willow managed to make it into bed with the covers tucked securely beneath her chin at a respectable hour, she could not bring on sleep. She kept telling herself that she was exhausted after their boat and train journey during which she had not slept a wink, indeed she had spent most of the boat journey hanging over the railings emptying the contents of her stomach.

After an hour of fruitless tossing and turning, Willow finally re-dressed herself and made her way back downstairs. The hotel lobby was mostly deserted, with just the front desk clerk looking extremely bored and impatient for his shift to be over, and two gentlemen talking over brandy and cigars near the bar. Not being particularly keen on the idea of drinking or smoking herself to sleep, Willow made towards the front door with the intention of popping out for a brisk walk in a well lit area. She was drawn up short of the door when she saw a figure standing at a nearby window, elbows propped up on the windowsill as he gazed longingly outdoors. It was Myles, clad in his bulky overcoat as though he were heading outside.

“Myles?” Willow asked, effectively announcing her presence lest she startle the young man. “It’s rather late, are you not tired?”

He spun away from the window with a slightly sheepish grin, “I really want to see Paris, even just a little…but being so late and all I was afraid to go out on my own…and I did not know if you would approve.”

“Well, given that I was about to head out on my own I can hardly be one to protest…how about we take a stroll together?” Willow offered, not entirely sure that company was what she sought but feeling sorry for the young man who so desperately wanted to get out on the town.

“Are you sure?” Myles leapt up from his leaning position with a broad smile, “You bet, thanks awfully, Miss Rosenberg.”

“Willow, please Myles,” Willow urged as they made their way out into the night air, Myles holding the door open for her. “You make me feel like a school teacher calling me ‘Miss Rosenberg’ all the time.”

“Sure…Willow,” Myles beamed, striking up a rather jaunty strut as he set out on the footpath.

Willow followed suit, pleased to find the streets around the hotel well lit with electric lighting, much the same as in London. People were still strolling about although most were hurrying home. To all outward appearances, Willow and Myles appeared to be two young Englishmen taking in their first sights of the city…which was very much the truth excepting of course that Willow was a woman. They were able to wander quite freely and at the brisk pace both had set they covered a great deal of ground. Myles was quite sure he was leading them in the direction of the Seine and Notre Dame but as they continued on doubts began to form in Willow’s mind about Myles’ sense of direction.

The two travellers found themselves in an area with fewer streetlamps and ominously dark alleyways that they both scurried past rather quickly. Someone whistled in a low tone and both Willow and Myles spun to see two women emerge from a nearby doorway.

“Here’s a handsome pair of young men, looking for a good time I’ll bet?” the nearest asked, she was clad in a particularly violent shade of yellow that did not compliment her pale, blotchy skin.

“Is that right, you boys looking for a good time?” her companion asked, she was almost pretty although wearing so much rouge on her cheeks it gave her the appearance of a doll.

Her red dress was cut so low that Willow glanced down and saw the dark areola surrounding her nipple, Willow felt heat rise in her cheeks. It was definitely the closest she had ever come to seeing breasts other than her own and not in a dream but all she felt was a cold terror.

“No…I mean yes we’re having a good time…but we’re fine thanks,” Willow stuttered, canvassing the best route of escape, unfortunately there was a dead end in front of them and the prostitutes moved to block their path.

The two approached, practically backing the unfortunate pair against a wall behind them. Willow cringed with her back pressed against the wall in effort to escape the red-frocked prostitute who was several times taller and heavier than her and drenched in a scent that Willow was quick to discover made her sneeze. Meanwhile her companion in the yellow dress was stroking Myles’ pink cheek, the young man staring rather raptly down at her bosom which was peering from the top of her dress.

Willow sneezed again as the prostitute placed one hand on the wall beside her, moving so close their bodies were almost touching,

“Sacre bleu! My but you are a pretty boy!” she exclaimed, pinching Willow’s cheek, “For you I will make a special offer, two francs for a knee trembler but for ten francs I will take you back to my room for a whole hour of love making…it is a good offer non?”

“Ah, it’s a very good offer…but I’m honestly not interested!” Willow squeaked, her back sliding along the wall as she inched further away.

“Oh, I bet you are,” she breathed.

Willow almost squealed aloud as the frisky prostitute made to reach for her crouch, in lieu of having a broom or some such object to fend off the unwanted attentions of the lady of the night, Willow had to make do with her own nimble feet. She darted out from beneath the woman’s outstretched arm and seized Myles by his sleeve.

“Ah, Myles, now would be one of those times that we should run!”

Still dragging the young man (who seemed to be digging his heels in for some reason), Willow tore out of the dead-end street and kept running as fast as she possibly could. She received an awful shock when she glanced back over her shoulder to see that the two prostitutes were not about to give up potential clients that easily. They had hitched up their skirts and were running after the pair, white legs flashing in the night. Willow increased the pace, as well as ducking down a side street that appeared to offer more potential for hiding places.

“I’ve got twenty francs in my pocket!” Myles called out to her as they ran, “Isn’t this what you’re supposed to do when you’re in Paris?”

Willow glanced across at the hopeful expression on his face with a furious one of her own, “If you’re a sailor…which you are not! Not to mention that’s museum money in your pocket!”

Myles shrugged; obviously he had the feeling that it was a valid travelling expense. Willow groaned in exasperation and glanced over her shoulder once more. They were still there. She rounded another corner up ahead, not caring where she was leading them and ducked down a rather darkened alleyway. Halfway down she dragged Myles into a doorway and the two of them pressed their backs against the door, melding into the shadows as much as possible.

Willow soon heard the heeled shoes of the prostitutes on the cobbles and she feared they would somehow hear her hoarse breathing. She tried to slow it down somewhat but exertion combined with anxiety meant that this was almost impossible. A few seconds later it became apparent that the prostitutes were going to run straight past them without pausing to check the alley. Willow exhaled loudly and beside her Myles sighed. She reached over and patted him on the shoulder.

“You’re a good-looking lad Myles, I’m sure you’ll meet a young lady worthy of your attentions,” Willow reassured him.

She saw Myles face turn towards her in the dim light, “Are you sure about that? I think I’m a bit skinny for the ladies.”

“Skinny or not, I have no doubt you’ll be successful in love,” Willow added, thinking perhaps she had gone a little tone far in her reassurance when she saw the beaming grin on Myles’ face.

They waited for at least a minute to emerge from their hiding place, just to be sure that the two prostitutes had gone. Willow and Myles found themselves quite alone in the alley, breathing a collective sigh of relief. Such sighs were short-lived however as two figures moved to block the entrance to the alley. Both men were wearing ragged, bulky clothing with hats low over their brows. Even in the darkness Willow could see the gleam of the knives they wielded. She reached out and dragged Myles behind her even as they approached confidently.

“Now we’ll be having all your property there lads, money, watches…” the nearest growled, running his thumb along the length of his blade.

“We don’t have anything!” Willow replied, wondering whether she could risk backing away slowly, she shifted her body slight and in doing so her jacket feel open, revealing her shirt beneath which hugged the curves of her breasts.

The second man stepped forward quickly and grabbed his partner’s arm with his excitement, “It’s a woman!”

They both leered at Willow, wide smiles spreading to reveal mouths full of missing teeth from a lifetime of drunken brawling.

“It’s our lucky night…looks like a sweet one too, beneath the men’s clothing…”

Willow kept a firm gaze on both of them, she was watching for any sudden movement towards her when Myles shoved her aside from behind.

“Don’t you dare lay a hand on her!”

Myles was between them in an instant, drawing out from beneath his coat a narrow sword which he proceeded to pull from its sheath a little awkwardly. In his haste and terror he fumbled and dropped the blade, it clattered to the cobbles below. Willow stared at it for a moment and then realised that the nearest cutthroat was about to make a move towards it. She dived forward and seized it by the handle.

“Back you devils!” Willow cried, brandishing the sword in the direction of the pair of cutthroats.

Both men were taken aback by the sudden appearance of the gleaming sword in Willow’s hand, sudden expressions of hesitation appearing on their faces, especially given the competent manner in which the sword was directed towards them. Willow stood poised, both hands on the grip of the katana as it was raised above her head, ready to strike at either of the men if they approached. She felt an urgent tug on her jacket.

“Ah Willow, it’s good that we have the sword and all but I think we should still run!” Myles insisted.

Willow found herself hesitating for a moment at Myles’ sensible suggestion, for the briefest of moments she felt as though she could take on both men and win easily, even with the knives in their hands.

The feeling was gone as quickly and she nodded urgently at Myles, “Yes!”

Despite having already exerted themselves to their fullest extent in fleeing the prostitutes, both Willow and Myles managed to set a cracking pace with their lives on the line rather than just merely their virginity.

When Willow glanced over her shoulder as they emerged back into a street lined with lamps, she was surprised to see no pursuers behind them. She did not stop to dwell on the reason for this and kept running, the sword still clutched in her hand.

In their frantic flight, Willow and Myles did not slow down in the slightest until they were sprinting up the steps of their hotel. Both were clearly exhausted and out of breath but relieved to be alive after the encounter with Paris’ seedy underbelly of crime…however brief it may have been.

“Myles, where in God’s name did you get this sword?” Willow eyed the katana in her hand as they re-entered the safe confines of their hotel, “I thought I left all our weapons behind on the dock?”

“Nicked it from Faith’s stash and hid it in my luggage,” Myles admitted shamelessly.

“Myles!” Willow gasped in horror.

Myles remained unapologetic. “Come on, she’s got dozens.”

Willow then shrugged as though Myles made good sense, “I’ll keep a hold of this…and I would suggest that we don’t mention a word of this little incident to our American guide, I suspect it would further erode our already tarnished image.”

“Agreed,” Myles nodded quickly, relinquishing his hold on the finely worked sheath of the katana into Willow’s waiting hand.

They both made a beeline for their respective hotel rooms, neither would think about emerging until the day had well and truly dawned. As Willow settled down to sleep that night she could not help but feel apprehensive, with the journey barely underway she had already narrowly escaped death…she was in for a very long haul indeed.

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The thugs in the alley were still trying to work out exactly what had just taken place; they were having difficulty in accepting the fact that they had just been thwarted in their work by a woman and a boy. Even as their prey disappeared out of sight they made up their minds to follow, surely their brute strength would make up for the initial surprise of the woman brandishing a sword in their direction.

They had no sooner picked themselves up than both felt a strong grip on the back of their clothing. One was thrown backwards with tremendous force and he hit the wall face first with a sickening thud. He fell into a heap at the base of the wall and did not move. The remaining man found himself being held at least a foot in the air, his feet kicking uselessly beneath him. He too was thrown back against a wall but the figure holding him was on him faster than the wind, he tried to scream but no sound emerged. With iron like fingers clamped fiercely around his jaw he was forced to stare straight at the creature that held him. Her face was terribly beautiful, piercing blue eyes boring through into his soul as her blonde hair fanned out behind her even though there was no wind. She bared her teeth, revealing abnormally pointed incisors that drove a knife of fear straight into his heart.

“Did William or Angelus put you up to this?” she growled, keeping her fangs visible. “Tell me now or you will know true pain!”

He tried to shake his head but her grip was too firm for him to move his head, “No, no, I do not know who those people are!”

The creature lifted him forward a few inches and then slammed him backwards, the back of his head cracked against the brick wall and he cried out in pain.

“No one put us up to anything, it was just us! They looked like easy meat! Posh clothes…obviously lost…easy pickings!” he gasped as he struggled futilely, his face growing redder by the second.

“You’re thieves,” she whispered.

“Yes, yes, just a thief!” he agreed, striving to appease her.

“You’re scum,” she added, “you attacked someone dear to me…and for that I do not feel sorry for your death.”

“My death?” he squealed, “No…”

His protest morphed into a scream. Just moments later the fangs which had held him so transfixed in his terror buried themselves in the white flesh of his neck. Minutes later his lifeless corpse was thrown to the ground and the dark-clad woman stepped over him as though he were a pile of trash, wiping the blood from her chin.

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The next morning Alex appeared to have set aside his apprehensions regarding his two abysmally inexperienced companions and he was in fine spirits as they boarded the train for the next leg of their journey. The leg would of course be much longer than the first short jaunt to Paris and they had reserved a large carriage complete with foldout sleeping berths. Willow wrinkled her nose, less than impressed as she stowed her luggage away. She struggled on tiptoes to stow her bag overhead and was about to have it come crashing back down on her head when a large arm shot up and shoved the bag firmly in place.

“I promise I don’t snore,” Alex lent over and whispered in her ear as he tightened the luggage straps.

Willow whirled around, surprised by being in such close proximity with a man…and a decidedly odd smelling one at that. She mumbled her thanks and claimed one of the spots by the window, thankfully Myles quickly claimed the other window seat directly opposite her so should would not be forced to stare at Alex for at least a while anyway. Myles beamed when Alex chose to sit next to him, puffing out his chest and trying to look as manly as possible rather than the skinny little boy he really was.

As Alex opened the days paper and Myles fished in a bag of sweets he had purchased a the station, Willow turned her attention to the platform outside the window. It was clearing now, most of the passengers having boarded the train already. There were just a few well-wishers awaiting the imminent departure. Scanning the crowd, Willow passed her eyes over porters lugging bags or pushing carts, the conductor ushering latecomers on board, as well as all the assorted well wishers from all walks of life. Working class men wearing their distinctive caps, hands jammed in the pockets of their overalls, middle class ladies perhaps saying goodbye to their husbands or fiancés and somewhat apart from the rest of the crowd, one exceedingly familiar blonde haired woman in dark attire. She was staring directly at Willow, meeting her gaze quite calmly as though it were natural for her to be there. No one else on the platform seemed to notice the woman; they all gave the location where she stood a wide berth. Willow’s lips parted in surprise, she wanted to call out or even get off the train but she heard the conductor calling out his last call. Moments later they were trundling along the track, barely moving at first and Willow continued to stare…then the train gathered speed and she passed out of sight.

“Willow?”

Willow turned to look down at Myles who was staring at up her with a disconcerted expression on his face. She realised that she had subconsciously risen to her feet while staring at the blonde woman and quickly sat down once again.

Willow shrugged in what she hoped was an offhand manner, “I thought I saw someone I knew…that’s all.”

Myles nodded as though this explanation satisfied him, he offered Willow a sweet but she declined, it was much too early in the morning for her to inject sugar into her body. She instead settled back against the seat and realised that it was actually quite comfortable. With the lulling movement of the train combined with her lack of sleep, Willow quickly drifted off to sleep, her dreams once again filled with the tortured love story of Tara Maclay and her W.

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I do so love this story. Everything is incredibly well-done and it's just a joy to read.

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“Paris…anywhere in Europe…even America!” W grasped both my hands in her own, squeezing them firmly and holding them to her breast, “Abraham will see us safely anywhere we wish to go…and you know there is the money for us to do this, he will deny us nothing. It is simple!”

I just wish Tara would have taken W up on that but since we know they didnt get their happy ending... hate Edward!
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While Myles Cavendish had no great understanding of women, he did know enough to know when he was intruding on a private moment.

That just changes my opinion of him completely!
Willow's clothes... my my! And "Xander" shows up! You made me so happy just now! :P He always was one of my fav characters.
The prostitutes... too funny, running after them like that.
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“Ah Willow, it’s good that we have the sword and all but I think we should still run!” Myles insisted.

Such a baby :P
So Tara attacks only bad people? Kinda sounds like it. Good for her.
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Okay you're right my excitement meter is about to go through the roof here. Are updates going to be this quick from now on? Because I would probably die happy if it were true.

Anyways, as always, top work. :) I loved the image of Willow brandishing the sword with such skill; I still don't know what to think of Vamp-Tara. She clearly cares about Willow, but at the same time she is as amoral as any other vampire.

I can't wait to hear her story.

Again, looking forward to the next one.

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With fire in her eyes she stepped towards us. Edward threw me to one side as Willow approached.


You wrote Willow instead of W, was that on purpose? :confused

Anyway, great update, i really love this fic :grin

I cant wait to see where this will end up.

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 13 Sept)
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(spits out nail bits) Oops, I never caught the Willow mention in the flashback, good eye.

But I tell you what, this update, as the story as a whole, is phenomonal. I try to visiualize as I read and I had a flash of Amber Benson in Supernatural when she attacked the simple thieves. Kinda hot. O.K. there I said it, it was hot.

Edward Walsh is a tool!!!!!

O.K. so you have made my tough day end enjoyably, thanks for that and keep up the awsome job on this amazing fic.
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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 13 Sept)
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Alcy – Damn. What a great update. I feel (or fear) that we are nearing the climax of the “ago” story. Am I reading right that the diary stops there? If so, how very curious. The first part is incredibly passionate and as beautiful as it is horrific. Two lines struck me as strange and I can’t tell if it’s intentional:

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At that point I began to entertain the thought that perhaps her folly would work,


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Even when he threatened to give her the beating she deserved she did not flinch once.
I had to read three times to really get that it is him saying that she deserves a beating rather than Tara thinking it. As I said, strange.

And how incredibly bold and untoward of Willow and Tara to take such a chance. Surely anyone come have come in, not just the despicable Edward Walsh. Horray again for Abraham.

The description of their shopping expedition and their meeting Alex is incredibly amusing as is Willow and Myles’s experiences with both the prostitutes and the thieves. And Tara… I believe this is the first time we’ve actually seen evidence of her being a vampire as far as her feeding. So far, it’s been a little vague and mysterious and magical but … Definitely a vampire. Or half one.

Now here’s a strange observation. It would seem that the heroines of your tales have a problem with their suitors. Willow in … what the hell is the name of that story? What’s your Tale Nightengale and the scum who wanted to marry her? Now Tara and Edward Walsh? Not good at all.

I’m so so so glad to see you writing so much.

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 13 Sept)
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Wow, even more excitement and even some answers. So, their guide happens to be Alexander Harris with the large biceps. Reminded me of Anya's comments about Xander in Pangs right before he acquired syphilis. Which, btw, also seems like a possibility for anyone wandering the alleys in Paris.

We know Tara is still following Willow and keeping an eye out for her safety, which of course, is of the good. But now we know for sure that Tara is at least some type of vampire, but what kind exactly, and how did this happen?

That last chapter she read in the diary was just heartbreaking. I was wishing that Tara would just have gone with W and just say "screw it" to her duty. It sounds like W was willing to help her and her family so they could just get away and be toghether. Damn that Edward and a big "way to go Abe" when he busted Edward's nose. I kind of understand what Tara did, and it was actually to protect W and Abe, but man, I was really wishing she would've done something differently. Poor W, and poor Tara, and ooh, I wish Abe could've at least punched Edward at least once more.

Great job once again. Can't wait to see what's next.


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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 13 Sept)
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Dear Alcy,

again, the next wonderful story from you. How do you get all these ideas? There are always some elements (Van Helsing in this one) we know but you manage to give them an all new unique storyline. And there is the way you describe your characters each with such care. I am very sorry for not leaving FB to this incredible story earlier.

I so love how you manage to give us more clues about the two storylines in every chapter and how the plots are combined. Second to last you give us an extraordinary insight into the different centuries the plots are taking place. And last but not least it's wonderful how you manage to bring our beloved Buffy-characters into this history plot. Willow is always Willow even if she is different from the TV-series – and furthermore different in both storylines. 18th century Willow is a hot headed child, born rich and with wonderful confidence. 19th century Willow is the shy bookish babble-head who comes to her powerful potential only in slow steps. 18th century Tara on the other hand is anxious and feels responsible for her family and their fortune. I have to admit I wanted to slap her in the face for the way she treated W. in the beginning of this chapter. But in the end I have to admit she is a woman of her time. And what choice did she really have without endangering the fortune of her family. To 19th century Tara we were not allowed to have a proper insight for now. If I remember rightly it's allowed to assume she is in one way the very same person than the 18th century Tara. Only changed. I'm really looking forward to see what you have in store for her.

Hehe, you even managed to get the bad wardrobe aspect of Willow into this story. Buying knew clothes with Willow in Paris that was fun. I so can imagine a dashing Willow in explorer clothes. Did I ever mention I'm the biggest Willow fan? Surely I would claim her mine if she ever crossed my road. Tara is sexy and fun, too. But Willow…? Can't help it. Now I just ruined my Willow induced trance with the image of Myles wearing a pith helmet. Okay, I don't like him, I admit. But what a nice surprise, Xander – sorry Alex – is the guide. I wonder if he and Willow will get along as well as we know from canon.

With the ongoing of the Paris chapter I changed my mind about Myles a bit. At least he is fun to read. And the encounter with the prostitutes? Priceless. Willow is cute beyond words. No wonder Tara is so drawn to her. I like Willow even more in the 19th century. But it's a pity (just a little bit) we never could experience the prostitute discovering Willow as a woman. I wonder if prostitutes in this time would have a serious thought about a woman as a customer. If Sarah Waters books are any indication, I think it might be possible.

Wooo, vampire Tara gives me the creeps. She is really one scary woman in this story. But I so like that. And I can imagine the beautiful image of her. The beautiful deathly creature she is. May I hope for a longer encounter between her and Willow soon?

The ancient story of Tara Maclay and W. really brought me on the verge of tears in this chapter. Can't anyone give Edward Walsh a serious bash on the head? Maybe several times? I don't like hitting people but this jock seems to deserve it. Poor W. she must be devasted and feeling betrayed by Tara.

Abe? I so love him. He is a wonderful brother and seems to be a decent man. Does he ever plan to marry someone for real? Otherwise couldn't he marry Tara as a disguise? So the girls could live together happy and so on... Okay, we know the ancient story didn't end well. At least we have seen W dying at a very young age. I hope she didn't die of a broken heart.

Oh, another wonderful aspect is how you manage to keep Willow as the main character in the 19th century plot and Tara in the 18th century.

Thanks for updating so regularly and the flow in the last weeks. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Even if I suspect the heartbreaking will go on further in the 18th century story.

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 13 Sept)
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Hello! :)

I have caught up with this fic some days ago and thought I should definitely feedback. But I can't feedback about the 9 chapters! So lets just say I love it.

I really like the way you start with the diary. And the century between the diary and the moment when the fic takes place. How you join the 2.
Of course it was clear since the beginning that W was a previous Willow.
But still I was surprised to read how you made them be the same. Some memories coming back but that's all. And the physical appearance that's it. Really well done.
Willow read the same diary than us right? Then she should know it was Abraham Van Helsing's sister! And thus since some chapter ago! ^^

I think it is useless to say I don't like Edward. But was it impossible for Abraham to ask Tara's father his daughter as a promiseD? Then no money issues, Tara would have been with Willow and the fic wouldn't have a point. Ok. But still it was easy and cool and no angsty.

So Tara is a vampire will magic abilities. Seems she is also a souled vampire grieving for having killed her love. And protecting her refound love.

Why is that that Paris is such horrible? Sex and violence? Are thieves and whore the only things in Paris? lol

Oh and to read "Alex" instead of Xander was... weird. I didn't read Alex in a while; It is his name in France. No Xander but Alex. So when I saw it, it was weird but.. refreshing?

The trip is giong to be fun! Two persons on their first field (without a Faith behind her, Willow is like on her first field), for Eastern Europe... which seems to be very dangerous. Poor Alex.

Thanks for this wonderful story!!

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 13 Sept)
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Alcy, Alcy, your stories are so damn good! Okay, I meant to reply two updates ago but time just ran away from me, so let me just share in broad brush strokes some of my fave parts.

Edward - ugh, it only took you something like two sentences to turn him into a repulsive and evil individual. It was one thing to dislike him in the abstract, you know, when we knew he was marrying Tara and taking her away from Willow, but quite another to see him be so ugly about the whole thing. Yuck, yuck, yuck.

Willow - the paragraph where she utters Tara's name for the very first time is so powerful and so well done. It read like a tidal wave hit her and washed over here and in the span of seconds cover the spectrum of emotions.

Tara - not a heck of a lot about our fave vampire but she's everywhere as the diary's narrator. I'm terribly curious about how it is that she joined the legion of the undead and what she's done since then. Giles' ominous 'what you've done' has me wondering what did she do? who did she kill? And in the last update you have her turning into judge and executioner of the thieves. Hmmmm.

Giles - my first thought when I read the exchange between Giles and Tara was, 'oh Giles, what have you done?' Giles has a way of having these really good intentions but they always blow up on his face and he hurts someone. I'm going to reserve judgment but I feel a hint anticipated betrayal on behalf of Willow. I hope to be wrong.

The camp and humor tone - you totally have me laughing out loud when I read some of the silly things that Willow says (e.g., 'providence really') and does (forgetting the weapons). The whole tone is just right and it's a nice respite from the tragic love story.

Diary structure - I must say that it served Kostova well in 'The Historian' and you have got it quite right as well. You are doing a great job of building the suspense and advancing the story while keeping us just step behind you. Very nice.

Thanks for sharing this fantastic story with us. I'm looking forward to the next bounty (two updates in a row). ;-)

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