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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 13 Sept)
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dlline: Why thank you very much, it’s a joy to write!

WillowRulez: You’re not alone there, Tara wishes she had taken Willow up on her offer too but you are indeed right, they will get their happy ending eventually!
I’m glad you enjoy the addition of Xander…although I have to point out that he was never my favourite character and he doesn’t come across in a very favourable light in this fic!

diamondforever: Well, the updates aren’t always going to be that quick but now that I only have one fic to worry about they should be coming quite regularly. I can’t remember the last time I was only writing one fic at a time!
VampTara is a paradox is every sense of the word, she’s such a fun character to write and we’ll unravel more of her story as the story progresses.

ceridwen: That was very unintentional, thank you for pointing it out but it’s not too much of a worry as everyone should know it’s Willow by now! I will go and change it though.

myfamiliar2824: Amped up Amber Benson would be hot by any stretch of the imagination! Glad I managed to give you some good images to think about there. I hope when the next update is posted that I will make another day enjoyable for you!

JustSkipIt: Hey Debra, Yes, you would be quite correct in thinking that we are nearing the end of Tara’s diary entries…while Tara’s entries obviously stop there, there are further entries in the diary that Willow can’t read (see chapter 3 I think, and also the coming chapter)
Re the two sentences you point out, sorry, probably just clumsy wording on my part I think.
That was the first evidence of Tara as a vampire other than the fact that she did not show up in the photo Willow took in Chapter 1, further clues are providing in the coming chapter. Of course, I’m unravelling the story bit by bit!
Well, those suitors are trouble, I haven’t doubled checked but I think the name of Willow’s suitor in What’s Your Tale Nightingale was Hugh…and he is almost as bad as Edward. I think Edward pips him slightly in the nastiest suitor contest though.
Yes, I seem to be on a writing roll, which is a good thing even if it keeps me from doing other important things at time…like work!

wimpy0729: Yes, a few answers…I’m drip feeding them.
Tara is definitely keeping an eye over Willow, and you’ll see in the next chapter just how close an eye she is keeping, although I won’t be giving too many more details away about her past for some chapters yet.
The diary entry was pretty heartbreaking and the one in the next post will be more of the same I guarantee it! Thanks very much!

sacinema: Welcome to Van Rosenberg, well, I’m not sure exactly where all the detail comes from but I think it’s because I have an over-active imagination!
I enjoy the way in which you describe the two different Willows, it is exactly how I intended them to come across, they are both two very different people…even if they are versions of one another. You are right that while we know what kind of woman Tara was, we have very little idea of who she has become other than that she likes to wear black and eat thieves in dark alleys…and still has feelings for Willow of course. She’s supposed to be scary and I’m glad she comes across that way.
You don’t like Myles? Well, perhaps future chapters will change your opinion somewhat, I have written him as a very likeable young chap, perhaps he is coming across as rather annoying. He will soon prove that he is a good friend to Willow, almost like a younger version of her brother Abraham who was definitely a ‘decent man’ as you call him.
I will try to limit the amount of heartbreaking and perhaps even provide a few moments of sweetness in the next chapter…

JujuDeRoussie: hi Julia, I’m glad you could catch up with this fic and I’m pleased that you’re enjoying it so far. I don’t expect you to leave feedback for all 9 chapters; just saying that you love it is more than enough.
Willow did read the same diary entries as I have been posting, although to make the story work she has been reading them slightly behind us, you’ll see that we had a head start as she did not start reading the diary until several chapters had passed. But I think that this Willow would have needed the physical proof of the church birth and death register before she believed what the diary was telling her.
Haha! I have not been to Paris so I cannot say that there are only thieves and whores that live in Paris! But I think any city in the 18th century would have had its fair share of disreputable inhabitants, even glorious Paris.
Thanks for your feedback!

Safuega: Welcome to the party and thanks for noting your favourite parts so far.
It didn’t take me long to turn Edward into a thoroughly evil character, especially at the Kitten where every character that even thinks bad thoughts about one of our girls earns a bad reputation that is hard to remove!
You are right in stating that Tara is everywhere in this story, but while she’s everywhere we know little about some key facts in her life. How she became a vampire is of course one of the most important details that I have not let you in on. I’m revealing information about her slowly and I hope the suspense is worth the wait.
Thanks for your comments about the tone, while there are some heavy hitting themes and dark elements in this fic, I still wanted to keep it fairly light and definitely funny when I can make it work.
Next update coming soon!

Zampsa1975: Updatey goodness is the best kind, glad you enjoy Xander’s appearance although as I noted above, he’s not exactly the Xander we love from canon.

Just editing the last chapter folks, should be posted very soon!
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CHAPTER TEN

Diary Entry – 15th September 1778

To say that today was one of the most difficult and awful days of my life is the cruellest irony one could possibly devise. There are no words to express the despair I feel at this moment…and have felt for each of the months that have passed since I last saw W.

As of this morning I am Mrs Edward Walsh. The wedding ceremony was the most cheerless event I have ever witnessed in my life…and that includes every funeral I have ever attended.

For all intensive purposes it was a funeral…my own.

I do feel as though I witnessed it, I was never a participant. Instead I stood apart as though I watched another woman who looked very much like me wed Edward. As a witness I cried…I cried for the bride who dared not shed a tear herself.

As I write this, my last entry in the diary, I’m shivering in my nightgown in a room that is supposed to be my own…it will never be my own, it belongs to my husband, everything belongs to Edward…including my body. The only small measure of consolation I have is while I may belong to him in name, I will never truly belong to him. In my mind I belong to W and no matter what he does to me; I will never let him take that away from me. My memories of my beautiful redhead are mine and mine alone, especially the tender moments we shared. I will always remember the feel of her naked body pressed against my own, both straining in the act of making love and more simply just lying, belonging next to each other like the pages of a book…put those two pages anywhere else, and they will be out of order, meaningless.

Tomorrow Edward and I leave for Austria on our honeymoon with a grand tour of cities along the way. Although I can think of nothing worse than travelling with him, I do so long to see the continent. Perhaps there may even be enough sights and marvels for me to lose myself and forget that I am not sharing them with the person I love. I wish to God I could stop feeling so wretched for myself, my situation is almost entirely self-created and I do not deserve the pity, there has been too much of that already in the pages I have written. If anyone deserves pity it is dear, brave W who was willing to risk all for us to be together. Nay, not pity…for she would not wish to be pitied and certainly not by me. As soon as I finish this entry I will bind this diary securely and dispatch it to her at first light. I cannot safely keep it and nor can I bring myself to destroy it. In its pages I have been honest to a fault and I can only hope that she will accept it as a token reminder of what she and I shared. A token reminder only for I believe that she would feel the same way I do, these are just words and the real reminders are etched onto our skin, into every pore of our bodies…a reminder that we should have belonged together forever. I have committed murder in tearing apart two souls who were destined to be together. It is in this respect that I am dead.

I can her footsteps approaching. Edward is here…I do not pray often but I will pray tonight for Him to give me the strength to endure what must be endured.


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Willow’s heart felt leaden as she finished Tara Maclay’s last entry in the diary. It was not only the words that sent Willow spiralling downwards into an abject state of melancholia, it was also something else, an emotion that she could not quite define and yet it plucked at her heart strings with all the grace of a violist playing with his toes. She turned the page of the diary to find that although the September 15th entry was Tara’s last, she had gone on to write something else. It was just a single word…but that one word filled an entire page.

Willow

Willow gently touched the pads of her fingers to the paper as though she could feel the emotion with which the name was written over and over. Throughout the diary Tara had only ever written ‘W’, despite the fact that it would have done little to conceal the identity of her beloved. While Willow did not understand why she had resorted to such poorly concealed subterfuge, she did understand the sudden need for the repetition, especially considering what was about to happen to her at the hands of her husband.

Gripped by a sudden anger, Willow fiercely turned the page even though she knew she would find no answers there. There was text there in abundance…all written in the heavy, almost perfect script that Willow had also found in the inside cover, but she could decipher not a word. It was torture; Willow knew that the answers she sought, the rest of Tara’s story lay hidden within the text. She scanned the first few pages in the vain hope that some sort of pattern would emerge, one that would give her clues to deciphering it but she possessed neither the patience nor the clarity of mind required for such a task. Instead she leapt from the bed in a state of agitation. Her footfalls sounded hard and fast on the floorboards as she paced the short width of her hotel room. Before she could give herself over to anger and tear the diary in two, Willow threw it to the floor where it landed with a thud and skidded beneath the bed.

Turning her back on the book Willow dashed a measure of water from the porcelain pitcher into the wash basin and hunched over it, staring into her own blurred reflection. A single tear slid over her nose, hung on the end of it for a second and dropped into the water with a tiny splash. A second tear followed in due course and before Willow knew quite what had overcome her she was weeping uncontrollably. Sobs racked her small frame and she found herself having to kneel down before she fell over on her weak knees. Willow crumpled into a small ball and tucked herself up in the tiny space between the heavy wooden dresser and the wall. She was so consumed with grief and pain, she didn’t care that her body quickly became chilled pressed up against the bare boards. All she could dwell on was the overwhelming sense of loss she felt, as though something or someone very precious had been stolen from her.

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Faith cried out, flinging her hands out behind her to firmly grasp the headboard of the bed upon which her naked body was currently writhing in agonising ecstasy. She thrust her hips repeatedly and insistently against the warm mouth that was fastened over her sex, straining for more pressure.

Lara responded by increasing the pace with which her tongue flicked over Faith’s clit. She sensed that the lithe woman bucking against her lips was nearing her release as her movements became more intense, her breath sounding hoarse coupled with the increasingly loud words issuing from her throat. Without interrupting the work of her tongue, Lara shifted slightly so she could force one finger upwards, burying it in the warmth of Faith’s cunt.

Faith slapped her hand against the headboard as she felt the penetration, thrusting against Lara’s hand as well as her mouth.

“For the love of god! Are you trying to make me pull my stitches apart?”

Lara moved her mouth for a brief moment even as she kept thrusting with her finger, “You want me to stop?”

“Oh god, don’t stop now!” was Faith’s immediate reply.

Lara resumed her ministrations with her tongue, trying her best to keep her movements gentle but Faith’s responses clearly showed that she was beyond feeling pain from her wound and concentrating solely on the pleasure.

Faith came a few moments later amidst a guttural howl of undecipherable words. Lara kept moving between Faith’s trembling thighs, continuing to stroke her pulsing cunt with her tongue even as a command came for her to stop. She savoured a last taste before pulling back to admire the sight of her lover spread wide in front of her, glistening moisture coating the inside of her thighs and her sex. Lara licked her lips like a cat before crawling up Faith’s body, warming her before the coat of sweat that covered her body could start cooling. She absently traced a small pattern between Faith’s breasts as their bodies folded together, gradually moving her fingers downwards over the scars that dotted Faith’s otherwise perfect skin, she stopped when she came to the thick bandage that concealed the still unhealed wound in her side.

“I’m sure this is not what the doctor would prescribe,” Faith commented as she felt Lara’s fingers brush over her skin.

“Was the activity a little too boisterous for you?” Lara teased in reply.

“Perhaps,” Faith shifted slightly and felt the wound protest, “But what is a little pain compared to the pleasure of having your mouth between my legs…that and the fact that I was positively aching for your touch…or any touch for that matter. One should not go more than two weeks without fulfilling one’s needs.”

“Any touch?” Lara repeated archly, “I should hardly think that just any touch would suffice.”

Faith smirked, “Yours is indeed pleasurable…and a more adequate way to pass the time I could not think of.”

“Well, we have all evening…” Lara began.

Faith paused before replying in an apologetic tone, “About that, I was going to pay Willow a visit…it’s quite odd actually, she hasn’t been to see me and I stopped by her office today but she wasn’t in, I could not find Giles and no one else seemed to know where she was…if she were ill she would have to be very sick indeed to keep her away from work.”

“Yes…about Willow,” Lara began, her voice betraying an element of discomfort.

“You know where she is?” Faith twisted her neck so she could look at Lara, “I’m missing her sorely although I would never admit that to her.”

“I’m not expecting her back from Klausenburg for at least another three weeks,” Lara replied simply, she cocked her head to one side as though she were mulling over dates in her head, “Perhaps a month if the information turns out to be of worthwhile interest and she can follow it up while she’s there.”

Faith immediately extracted herself from within Lara’s warm embrace, trying to ignore the stabbing pain shooting through her torso as she moved too fast for her wound. She could hardly hide the grimace on her face and Lara predictably rose from her own reclining position to go to her lover’s aid. Faith halted her movement with a raised hand blocking her path. Lara remained sitting on the bed while Faith swung her feet onto the floor and stood, her naked body glowing in the candlelight. She turned to face Lara without bothering to put any clothes on.

“I am to understand that you sent Willow to Eastern Europe…alone?” Faith demanded, clutching at the dressing covering the wound in her side.

Lara shook her head, finding it difficult to deny that a naked, angry Faith was a beautiful sight, “No, she’s with Cavendish…and I engaged Alexander Harris to be their guide.”

Faith let out a flabbergasted snort, “Myles is about as much use as a wooden sword…what is he there to do? Make cups of tea?”

“Cavendish is loyal to a fault and I believe we’re all underestimating him…and he needs the field time as much as Rosenberg,” Lara admitted with a shrug, she went on to add, “That debate aside, I’m sure you’ll agree that Harris was the most appropriate guide, you yourself have used him on more than one occasion and pronounced him to be adequate…I figured that was high praise coming from you.”

“It was high praise!” Faith agreed in exasperation, “He’s a fine shot and a quick with his fists, there’s no one I would rather have guarding my back in a tight situation than Alex Harris…but that’s the thing, I don’t want Willow in the type of situation where she would need a fine shot and quick fists!”

Faith forgot the pain in her side; instead she was consumed by anger and feat at the thought of her best friend in a completely unknown environment, much too far out of her element. She knew exactly what Willow was headed for and the thought unsettled her. While Klausenburg was hardly a dark and dangerous backwater, one still had to remain alert at every moment; the dark forces that they worked to combat had an uncanny ability to sense out employees of the British Museum and make life as uncomfortable for them as they possibly could. Too many times Faith had run into sticky situations, even in relatively secure environments and had been forced to use all of her experience and skill to escape. The thought of Willow having to do the same would have been laughable if not for the fact that it wasn’t a joke, Willow was actually traipsing around Eastern Europe with her youthful assistant and Alexander Harris...when that thought ticked over in her head Faith groaned aloud.

“And Harris is a walking cock! He would fuck anything with two breasts and a cunt,” Faith could testify to having seen him in action and she was willing to bet that the ‘two breasts’ criteria could be waived on occasion, “He stays professional with me because he knows I’d slice his balls off without a second thought…but is he really the type of man to whom you would entrust the care of someone like Willow, someone who has absolutely no experience in fending off unwanted male attentions!”

Lara gave a dismissive shrug, “You never know, she might want those attentions…she could certainly do with it….”

Faith took that last comment as a cue to find her clothes, she was pulling on her leather pants as she continued the conversation, trying to steer it away from the direction it was taking, “She could not do with the attentions of Alex Harris thank you very much!” The thought of that hopeless scoundrel trying to seduce Willow made Faith’s blood boil.

“This banter is pointless, Rosenberg is an employee!” Lara threw up her hands in annoyance as Faith dragged on a shirt over her bare breasts, “I care about the job…not her personal life…”

“Bollocks, Lara!” Faith growled immediately, trying to find her missing leather boot beneath the bed, she dragged it out and popped her head back up to glare at her lover, “I distinctly remembering you telling me a month ago to keep a special eye on Willow…and now you’re sending her off to chase a lead that I should be following up with just her assistant and a womanising American?”

Lara now had the grace to look somewhat guilty, although it was still not enough for Faith. She turned her back on the naked woman lying in her bed as she hopped around the room tugging her boots on, various curses coming from her lips as her wound smarted with each movement.

“Things…things weren’t moving fast enough,” Lara admitted quietly, her tone however indicated that was all she would admit.

Faith whirled on her, “What things? You’re not going to tell me are you? I’m good enough to do what I’m told and share you bed when you feel like it but for some reason I can’t be let in on your little plan…a plan which involves the safety of someone I care about deeply!”

“Maybe you should be fucking Willow,” Lara said on impulse, immediately regretting the words as soon as they had left her lips.

“Enough!” Faith announced with finality, seizing her jacket from where she had tossed it earlier over the back of a chair, “I’m taking a holiday…I’ll be back when I feel like it.”

Lara started to rise, swinging her legs over the edge of the bed, “Faith, I’m sorry, I should come with you…”

“Even if you weren’t crippled I wouldn’t want you to come with me,” Faith interrupted cruelly; “You can stay behind the desk where you belong.”

Faith did not stay in the room long enough to see the crestfallen expression on Lara Croft’s face. Faith’s words had cut deep; hitting a vital artery but what hurt more was the fact that her lover’s anger was futile because she did not have the complete picture. It had been essential to send Willow to Eastern Europe in a desperate attempt to unlock the secret of her past and in turn the information contained within her memories. Of course if Faith had not been so badly injured she would have dispatched them together but could not afford to wait for her to recover from her injuries. Lara also knew Faith’s reaction to finding out Willow’s destination, which was precisely why she had told Willow that she was not to bid Faith farewell before she left. Faith would have followed Willow no matter her condition…as she was set to do now.

In carrying out her duty, Lara had alienated a woman she had come to care for, perhaps even love…but they were all running out of time. Love was not important in the face of the horrors that could be unleashed if Willow failed.

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Fierce hunger pains eventually drove Willow from her hotel room late the same evening but she did not leave her room before thoroughly scrubbing the tearstains from her face. She made her way downstairs towards the hotel bar where she had seen meals being served on her way up earlier that afternoon, huge hearty meals of bread and meat which Willow thought would suit her fine. However, she had no sooner entered the dimly lit room with its low ceiling than a broad shouldered man moved to block her path. Upon glancing upwards she found it to be Alex Harris, a cocky grin on his face as he tipped his cowboy hat.

“Well howdy little Miss, how about you let me buy you a drink and I’ll tell you about the time I single-handedly stopped a stampeding herd of buffalo from crushing a wagon train full of womenfolk and little ‘uns…”

Willow smiled politely and shrugged, “That sounds fascinating but I am actually famished…”

“I love a lady that knows how to eat!” Alex announced, slapping Willow on the back with more familiarity than she was comfortable with, “How’s about we pull up a stool at the bar and have them bring us something with some meat?”

He left his hand resting against her back and chuckled as though he were enjoying a private joke of his own. Willow was rather helpless to resist as Alex steered her a path through the small crowd to two available seats at the bar. His hand left her back as he climbed on a stool and Willow took the opportunity to discreetly shift her own stool a few paces away from his.

“What are you drinking?” Alex slapped some coins down on the bar and the bearded old fellow behind the bar couldn’t move to take their order fast enough, “My shout.”

“I can buy my own drinks, Mr Harris,” Willow began uncomfortably, “I do not think it appropriate…”

“Nonsense…my man, we will have both have doubles of your finest vodka, followed by a pitcher of beer apiece!”

Willow stared at the alcohol in the rather dirty vessels that were dumped unceremoniously in front of her a minute or so later, Alex downed his vodka in one quick gulp and chased it with a great swill of beer. With alcohol lining his stomach, he quite happily launched into his tale about the wagon load of women folk as he had promised. Willow sighed tried to block out most of his blustering speech by simply ignoring him. Naturally, her mind drifted back to her reaction to the diary, even now she found her fists clenching at just the thought of Tara Maclay having to marry that awful man. It was awful…or rather it had been awful…but Willow couldn’t understand being overwhelmed by sadness to the point of collapsing into tears. She didn’t cry over anything…well, at least not since her brother, Alexander, had passed away when she was just five years old. She listened to the man who shared his name drone on in his animated voice and wondered what kind of man her brother would have grown up to be.

After staring at the glass in front of her for a few minutes, Willow finally ventured a small sip. Alex noticed her dainty movements and grimace of disgust and shook his head.

“You’ve got to down it in one, not sip at it like some lily-livered chicken!”

To shut him up, Willow tossed her head back and immediately felt the horrible burning sensation of the liquid as it passed down her throat. She slammed the glass back on the bar and Alex slapped her heartily on the back one again, driving her forward with the impact.

“That’s the way! Barman…the same again!”

Less than half an hour later Willow had not had the meal she had originally been craving, yet she had had more than enough liquor to fill her belly. Willow was also relieved to find that she didn’t feel quite so sad any longer. Also, her hunger pains had subsided to be replaced by a rather pleasant glow and she sat smiling stupidly in response to Alex’s increasingly far-fetched stories, usually involving rescuing good-looking womenfolk from some calamity that was about to befall them.

One of the side effects of the large quantity of alcohol was a rather full bladder; she was in sore need of a chamber pot or an outhouse when she slipped from her stool. She found the floor a little unsteady beneath her feet and decided that the whole thing was uneven, definitely a poor standard of workmanship. A shaky step followed and she lurched rather alarmingly.

“Woah there Miss Rosenberg!” Alex moved quickly from his stool and reached out with two hands to prevent Willow from stumbling forward, placing one hand on her hip and the other around her waist. He steadied Willow and then drew her backwards into his body, “How’s about we head for your room…you sure look as though you could do with a lie down.”

“Capital idea, Mr Harris!” Willow announced loudly, her full bladder forgotten at the thought of lying down, “Please take me straight to bed!”

Several other patrons in the bar sniggered at her announcement; Willow didn’t see the broad grin on Alex’s face as he helped her eagerly from the room, his hands securely wrapped around her waist. They had no sooner left the room and headed towards the stairs than Myles Cavendish appeared at the top of the landing above. He bounded quickly down the stairs and straightened up to his full height in front of Alex and Willow.

“Myles!” Willow grinned when she glanced up and recognised her assistant. “You’ve just missed having a beer with us! Mr Harris, back to the bar, let’s go have another one with Myles!”

Alex smiled a little awkwardly in Myles’s direction, “Er, I think Ms Rosenberg was fixing to go to bed…I was just helping her along there, see.”

“I’ll escort Miss Rosenberg to her room if you don’t mind, Mr Harris,” Myles announced confidently.

“Nonsense my man!” Alex placed a hand on Myles’s shoulder and gave him a friendly but firm shove out of his path, “Why don’t you pay a visit to the bar and find your own woman!”

Alex had only helped Willow a few more steps before Myles was back in front of him, “I think that ought to be your course of action Mr Harris….if you don’t release Miss Rosenberg then you can be assured that I will inform Director Croft of your lack of professionalism, and you will never ever be hired by our organisation again.”

“There’s no need for that!” Alex spluttered, sizing up Myles to see just how serious his intentions were. The stern expression on the young man’s face did not waiver and Alex was forced to concede, “Okay…don’t see what harm I was doing anyway, I was just helping her into bed.”

“And intending on climbing in along with her,” Myles muttered under his breath as Alex Harris relinquished his hold on the swaying Willow.

The only one seemingly unconcerned by the whole encounter was Willow; she shifted from Alex’s arms to Myles’s with no complaint and a broad grin on her face. Matters were complicated somewhat a few steps later when they paused at the bottom of the stairs, for some reason Willow found her feet would not lift high enough to take even the first step.

“I’m afraid I might be leaning on you a little heavily,” Willow mumbled as she tried to lift her feet again, “My feet feel like they’re set in stone.”

“Nonsense…I’m a strong lad and you’re as light as a feather,” Myles was quick to reply.

Despite his bold statement, Myles was of rather small stature and had some difficulty in supporting Willow up the stairs of the hotel and down the corridor to her room. However, he gamely tried not to show any signs of faltering as the two of them made their slow and perilous progression up the rickety flight of stairs. A fellow hotel patron squeezed past them as they were half way up and gave Myles a conspiratorial wink even though the young man had no the slightest intentions of taking advantage of a drunken woman. Myles had to wonder just how many men would stoop that low.

A good ten minutes later, he pushed open the door to Willow’s room. The curtains were open and the light of a bright full moon streamed through the panes, illuminating the surfaces in the room.

“Are you sure you’ll be alright?” Myles seemed reluctant to leave Willow in her state of inebriation.

“I’ll be fine, thank you very much Myles," Willow was already making a rather unsteady beeline for her bed.

"Well, I deduced Mr Harris had unsavoury intentions," Myles replied, his cheeks tinged with red at the praise.

“Well then…I think I am lucky that I travel with at least one gentleman,” Willow replied in all honesty, despite his shortfalls, Myles was a genuinely nice young chap, “If you wouldn’t mind leaving the basin by the bed…just in case my stomach disagrees with me during the night.”

Myles fetched the basin as requested and placed it on the floor beside the bed. From the green-grey tinge to Willow’s face, he did not think that it was there for a ‘just in case’ moment. He also fetched the pitcher of water and set it on the table just within her grasp. When he looked back at Willow, she was slumped into the depths of her feather pillow with her eyes closed, snoring softly.

“Ah, Willow?” he prodded her firmly with the tip of his finger. She didn’t stir except to utter a half snore/half snort and roll over to face the other direction. Myles glanced down at her boots which were still firmly on her feet and the covers which were all trapped beneath her body. “Shall I take your boots off?”

Myles didn’t expect an answer, it was clear Willow had already fallen into a deep sleep and would not be roused by anything short of a blast of icy water in the face…even then he expected that would have no effect. He debated whether he should take it upon himself to remove her boots and perhaps her jacket but just the thought of touching her while she was asleep was enough to send him into a fit of panicked breathing.

“I’ll just be next door if you…” Myles began as he backed out of the room, he then realised that talking to her was pointless and made his exit gratefully. Although he did pause for a few moments just outside the door and wonder if he had made the right decision. He decided that he had and closed the door quietly behind him.

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Perched just outside the window to Willow’s hotel room, Tara heard the gentle tap as the young man closed the door behind him. She waited for a further minute before passing through the slight gap between the window and the sill as a gentle cloud of mist. When her body reformed she was standing in the middle of the room, not a sound had been made. The moonlight clearly revealed Willow lying on her back in the middle of her bed; her soft snores filled the room. Tara smiled, she didn’t recall Willow ever snoring…and yet she also could not recall Willow ever drinking to excess. As Tara approached she knew she should not be getting this close, she was supposed to be watching over Willow, not interfering directly. Still, she had kept her distance for so long and could no longer resist keeping Willow at arm’s length. She needed to be closer to her.

Tara stood over the bed, Willow was fully clothed, boots, jacket and all. Gently, she reached down and tugged Willow’s jacket down, lifting her arms so she could pull them free of the sleeves. Willow jerked suddenly, her snoring stopped and she woke, her eyelids fluttering slightly but not opening fully.

“Sorry, got a bit carried away with the old drink,” Willow mumbled as she lifted her arms to help Tara get her out of the jacket, “Thanks awfully for this, Myles.”

“I’m not Myles,” Tara said softly as she hung the jacket on a peg protruding from the wall, she turned to find Willow’s eyes completely open, she was staring directly at her.

She watched Willow’s expression transform from one of immediate shock to something akin to recognition. Tara moved back to Willow’s bed side even as the other woman propped herself up on her elbows. Her head cocked slightly to one side as she studied Tara’s face.

“You…you’re the one that’s in my dreams,” Willow whispered softly, as she gazed up at Tara’s face directly above her, “For so long I couldn’t see the woman’s face…but it was you all along, you’re Tara Maclay.”

Tara couldn’t reply, just the sound of her own name rolling from Willow’s lips after all these years was enough to make her heart soar. She knew it was foolish to reveal herself to Willow in this manner but she had tortured herself for too long, surely she had earned just these few moments? Moments Willow probably would not even remember in the morning. She continued undressing Willow who was able to help her slightly by lifting her hands over her head when she tugged her shirt off. Tara’s fingers brushed ever so lightly against Willow’s breast as she did so and she snatched them away as though she had felt fire.

Despite the lack of response to her statement and her half-dreamy state, Willow remembered reading something about a marriage and a love that couldn’t be. Her mind couldn’t quite process the fact that the writer of the diary seemed to be alive and sitting in her hotel room…it was further evidence pointing towards what Willow had already suspected…but she couldn’t quite remember what she had suspected in the first place. Something unnatural was afoot as the writer of the diary would have been well over a hundred years old. Still, Willow was not about to pass up the opportunity to have her questions answered in the flesh even though her body was screaming at her to go to sleep.

“So many questions for you,” Willow continued, like any researcher she desperately wanted the answers…even when drunk, “You married Edward…”

Tara’s breath caught in her throat at the simple statement, those few words stirred memories which she had suppressed in the deepest corner of her mind for over a century. Just the mention of that man’s name, even though he was long dead, was enough to stir the worst kind of fear and coming from Willow’s lips, it was especially potent. Her hands were trembling as she folded Willow’s shirt and placed it on the end of the bed.

“I-I did,” Tara struggled to force the simple words between her lips; it was almost as bad as saying ‘I do’ all over again. She had to sit down, and the only place she could find to sit was the edge of Willow’s bed.

“To protect her,” a sleepy Willow mumbled, subconsciously rolling over and moving closer to Tara’s weight on the bed next to her.

Tara felt her heart twinge at Willow’s simple statement. She had been waiting for over a hundred years to explain to Willow the reasons behind her decision to marry Edward, in person and not through the pages of her diary. Now that it had finally come about Tara felt something of an anti-climax, it no longer mattered now that Edward Walsh and Willow Van Helsing were dead and she had…changed. However, as she sat on the edge of the bed in that tiny hotel room in the middle of continental Europe staring down at the dopey redhead, she felt close to being human once again.

“To protect you,” Tara whispered, brushing a stray strand of Willow’s hair from her forehead.

Willow did not pick up on the whispered statement and Tara rose from the bed to untie Willow’s heavy boots. Once the boots were off she turned her attention to Willow’s pants, she gently undid the waist and hooked both her thumbs beneath the band so she could slide them downwards.

“Lift your hips…Willow,” Tara commanded quietly, her heart hammering as though it were going to burst from her chest.

Willow obliged raising them just enough so Tara could slip the garment down over her hips and her thighs. Tara felt the smooth skin of Willow’s thighs beneath her thin underwear and she remembered back to another time when that flesh had been hers to explore. This time however, she did not, could not linger and concentrated on just removing her pants. She folded them and placed them next to the shirt at the end of Willow’s bed. When she turned back to face Willow she caught her breath. The redhead was lying on the bed, clad in just her woollen underwear. The skintight garment left little to the imagination even though it covered her from wrists to ankles.

“Beneath the covers,” Tara ordered quickly, needing to remove the tempting sight as soon as possible.

However, as she reached out to peel back the blankets Willow’s hand shot out with surprising speed and her fingers fastened around Tara’s wrist. Tara froze at the contact. Willow’s touch was firm on the bare skin of her wrist. Tara found herself drawn closer to Willow, fixated on the longing within her emerald eyes.

“Touch me…please?” Willow asked, knowing only that she needed the blonde woman’s hands directly on her skin.

With the hand that wasn’t holding Tara’s, Willow began clumsily undoing the neck buttons on her underwear.

Tara could not take her eyes away from the increasingly area of smooth white skin that Willow revealed with each button she managed to undo. She was so transfixed that she did not blink until Willow had finished her task and was peeling the undergarment away from her chest. With awkward fingers she tugged it down over her shoulder to completely bare one breast.

“Oh god…” Tara’s breath caught in her throat, she had not been struck so helpless just at the sight of a woman’s body for a long time…not since she had last seen Willow naked, “Will…Willow…dearest…you have no idea what you’re doing.”

“No…but you can show me,” Willow pleaded, moving the hand she held across to her breast.

Tara closed her eyes as her fingers touched the mound of flesh with the taught nipple nudging the palm of her hand. She knew she could not possibly give into Willow and yet the almost forgotten but still familiar urges were flooding her body.

“Can vampires make love?”

Tara eyes snapped open at the sound of Willow’s innocent sounding question, she jerked her hand away, “How did you…”

“The photo I took of you in the park…and yet you were there in the middle of the day and you’re also not trying to drink my blood…,” Willow shrugged, seeming to forget that just a moment ago she was asking Tara to touch her and that her breast was still bared, “Which is a good thing for me…but it doesn’t make any sense.”

No it doesn’t, Tara thought with a gut-wrenching twist, but then again everything stopped making sense the day I refused to run away with my love…

Tara reached out quickly and drew Willow’s underwear closed once more, taking the time to redo each button. She then folded back the blankets and was relieved when the redhead shifted without further attempts to remove her clothing.

“What happened to you? You should be dead after all this time,” Willow burrowed contentedly beneath the covers and stifled a yawn as she regarded Tara with half-closed eyes, “But instead of being dead you’re a vampire…which is just like being dead anyway isn’t it, the walking undead, a demon in a human body.”

“I am not a demon!” Tara replied more vehemently than she had intended, But I did die, in every sense of the word, Now was not the time for such a conversation or a debate about exactly what category of unfortunate creature she could be defined as, especially when Willow was in no fit state to process the information and would barely even remember the answers when she woke. “It is of no consequence…what does matter is you getting some sleep…you have another long day on the road tomorrow, another day closer to your destiny…” Tara paused, a slip of the tongue, “Your destination.”

Willow did not reply, nor did she seek answers to further questions. The redhead had slipped once more into the deep sleep of someone who had had far too much to drink. Tara almost felt like wakening her up, wanting to her that soft voice a few more times but she knew it was pointless, what she did dare to do however was lean over and place a gentle kiss on Willow’s cheek. Her lips pressed against the smooth skin and her entire body tingled with shock at the contact. She drew away after just a split second, not daring to linger lest she loose control again, crossing quickly to the window.

As Tara cast one last look over her shoulder at the young woman she felt an intense desire to return to her side and simply curl up with her on that narrow bed. She allowed herself to entertain the thought for mere seconds. It simply could not be…just as she could not come out and explain everything to Willow, there were some things that took time to be done correctly. Even though their time was running out and the Covasna Resurrection was fast approaching, they could not afford to rush Willow. The girl had to find her own answers.

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As Willow’s eyelids fluttered open, she felt cold air on her upper body. She lifted her heavy arms to find that she was clad in just her woollen vest. She immediately drew the blankets up over her chest, wriggling slightly to confirm that she was also just wearing her knickers. Something had definitely gone a miss between her alcohol binge the previous night and climbing into bed. Willow lifted her head from the pillow and glanced around the room to confirm there was no one else present watching her sleep in her underwear or worse yet, sleeping in the bed beside her. She was sitting up scanning the room when she felt a massive rush of nausea to her head and she was forced to slump back against the pillow with an agonized groan. Her body was clearly not going to let her get off lightly after pouring a disgusting amount of beer and spirits into her gullet.

Self-inflicted Rosenberg…the pain is all self-inflicted

As she lay with her head pressed back against the pillow, trying to make her eyes work properly in the dim morning light, foggy memories of the previous evening began to float slowly back into her mind. She very clearly remembered her initial drinking binge with Alex Harris being chiefly responsible for the purchasing of the large quantity of drink.

“He was deliberately trying to get me drunk!” Willow was rather appalled by the realisation and the subsequent memories of Mr Harris trying to escort her back to her room before Myles stepped in.

She was still spluttering indignantly even as she went through the rest of her memories from the evening. They became rather hazy as soon as Myles brought her through the door to her hotel room. What followed may very well have been a dream.

Still, Willow lifted the covers to double check, someone had removed all her clothes and she was almost certain that it had not been Myles. There had been an intoxicating scent, Willow was sure of it; even as she lay awake she was certain she could still smell the faintest tang lingering in the room. The scent…and long blonde hair leaning over her body…definitely not Myles. She remembered the smooth hands moving against her body as they peeled away each layer of her clothing. There had definitely been a hand on her breast and something stirred pleasantly in her loins.

Willow pressed her hand to her cheek as though it burned at the memory of the kiss planted there. She remembered speaking and being spoken to, something exceptionally significant…but the exact words would not come for all her trying. Even though she couldn’t remember everything, a small smile crossed her lips. She wasn’t sure whether she should be more worried about the fact that she may have been taken advantage of in her drunken state…or the fact that she intended to savour every aspect of her hazy memories of the night.

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Dibs! my first!

huzzah! an update. i relish these so.

can i just say how achingly beautiful this was:
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to each other like the pages of a book…put those two pages anywhere else, and they will be out of order, meaningless.

aah, that THAT is exactly what they are. In each story, no matter how different, like two pages of a book the fit together. I don't think anything I've read has put it quite so...perfectly. I literally had to stop and take a breath when i read that. wonderful.

also, SUCH a good update at that. i've been dying for a longer interaction between willow and tara, and this was quite satisfying(if not all the more tempting now :P). more clues to the puzzle. tara a vampire, yes, but not a demon.
which begs the question: does tara proclaim this as her belief that although she is a vampire she is no demon
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is she indeed a vampire with a soul

ooooh, juicy juicy juicy.

and drunk willow was oh so silly
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Oh wow, that last diary entry was so gut wrenching. I was just devastated reading poor Tara's final words, and angry too (again) at Edward and what she had to endure because of him. I totally understand her already feeling dead inside. My words don't do it justice, but you described that incredibly well. Perhaps her already feeling dead had something to do with how she ended up in her current state of undeadness, but not demon-ness. Oh, so many questions still whirling in my mind.

And damn that Xander, what an asshole, but at least Myles came to her rescue. I'm glad he's there.

Once again, Tara is there, but I think she always is, whether Willow sees her or not. Poor Tara having to be so close, yet so far away. But this was sweet the way she took care of Willow, even if she probably won't remember much with her alcohol-muddled brain. I was just wishing Tara would just lay there with her for a little while. Again, poor Tara. Now we know Willow has some kind of destiny ahead of her, so of course, you leave us with the nagging questions.

Amazing update. Thanks for sharing this with us. More answers to more questions soon I hope.


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Hi NZ Alcy

How womderful is the story and how special was this chapter you so lovingly describe. The contrast between Lara's and Faith's love making and the subduded description of Tara's and Willow's 'encounter' is remarkable. One relationship is sex the other is complete love even tho a copulation doesn't happen. I guess if Alex had had his way with the tippsy Willow his depth of personal involvement would have been on the par with Faith's feelings toward Lara.

I kind of feel bad for Lara because Faith was so uncaring. Still, she has been a selfish woman, hasn't she?

Do you know Myles is a mystery to me in that he reminds me of that male character in Xena, Joxer. How I hated his entry into that series. A male whipping boy. Myles is striking a better chord to me, so far. He certainly was knight in this chapter.

Excellent excellent excellent, that's the sum of my humble review.

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Excellent update-y goodness... Xander definately deserves a good smack on the head.

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Nice Faith & Lara smut. Trying to tie us over till we get the "real deal"? :P
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“Things…things weren’t moving fast enough,” Lara admitted quietly, her tone however indicated that was all she would admit.

She knows as well?! Well, I should have expected that since she is the boss and all but still.
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Alex had only helped Willow a few more steps before Myles was back in front of him, “I think that ought to be your course of action Mr Harris….if you don’t release Miss Rosenberg then you can be assured that I will inform Director Croft of your lack of professionalism, and you will never ever be hired by our organisation again.”
Wow, didnt expect Myles to step up!
Resurrection huh? But since Tara is involved (or not?) I hope it's a good thing.
Really curious as to how Tara became a vampire or whatever it is she is. Willow's question, if vampires can make love, almost broke my heart. Poor Willow. She only knows what she read in the diary and no one will tell her anything. :smash I have a theory about what happened to Tara but I dont wanna embarrass myself blurting it out.
Can't wait for more!

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Oh God, this whole chapter was so painful to read. There was so much longing packed into practically every sentence (I'll tastefully exclude scenes involving on Xander Harris).

Vamp-Tara's story is really interesting, and I have a feeling you haven't even begun to delve into it yet. And also what happened to past Willow!

Only one story at a time is quite rare these days. I hope you take advantage of it. I say this selfishly as I mainly just want more updates. :P

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Oh Alcy,

what a wonderful chapter. With every chapter you give us more details but you leave a lot more unrevealed. So we try to picture what's behind all this. What has Willow to discover despite her past? Is she resurrected? What happened to Tara? And so on. I know when time comes you give answers to all our questions. But it's simultaneously hilarious, thrilling and unnerving to wait.

Okay I have to admit I backtrack. Myles is a very nice young man. The way he saved Willow from Xander's advances perfect gentleman like. I will try never to say again a word against him.

Even if Lara wasn't honest with Faith. The latter went way beyond what could be called acceptable behaviour. Refering to Lara's disability was low. I hope she appologizes for that soon. She cares for Willow. But this was way out of line.

The interaction between Tara and Willow was brilliant. Tara's struggle with not giving in and Willow's forwardness. A hint of W. showing there. The ending of the diary and Willow's reaction to it just hearwrenching. I wonder wheather the steps really belonged to Edward. We will see. Hopefully soon.

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come to think of it, in the beginning of this story i thought that Myles was Buffyverses Xander. Then you threw in this whole Alex Harris-slimeball extraodrinaire and i don't know what to think of it. Maybe Willow's dead brother Alex would have been the admirable Xander we all know and love.

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Alcy,

Great update, but I say that every time.

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I do feel as though I witnessed it, I was never a participant. Instead I stood apart as though I watched another woman who looked very much like me wed Edward. As a witness I cried…I cried for the bride who dared not shed a tear herself.

What a heart-wrenching, painful image. You paint it so well.
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All she could dwell on was the overwhelming sense of loss she felt, as though something or someone very precious had been stolen from her.

Again with the gut-wrenching images. I’m really enjoying how Willow is experiencing the pain that is so eloquently spelled out in the diary (well, that sounded kinda mean, but I hope you understand what I’m trying to say). It serves to cement the idea that she was actually involved, rather than just reading about the events.

Nice smut. ‘nuf said.

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It had been essential to send Willow to Eastern Europe in a desperate attempt to unlock the secret of her past and in turn the information contained within her memories.
Love was not important in the face of the horrors that could be unleashed if Willow failed.

There it is again! Willow’s connection to all of this stuff just fascinates me. I can’t wait to see how it turns out.

I love your version of Xander. He’s always such a nice guy, but I like him this way. He’s definitely an asshole, but he’s the kind of asshole that makes for a really colorful character.
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She waited for a further minute before passing through the slight gap between the window and the sill as a gentle cloud of mist.

I had to mention this simply because I loved the image. It very much reminds me of the Stoker-esque images of vampires turning into mists and bats, and whatever else they turned into to get where they needed to go.
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Tara commanded quietly, her heart hammering as though it were going to burst from her chest.

Vampire? Or perhaps something else? Hmm…

Again, Alcy, I love this story. I’ve always been fascinated with the original tales of vampires as told by the dwellers of the Carpathian Mountains. I even took a Slavic literature class in college just to get a little closer to it. I love what you’ve got going here, and I can’t wait for more.

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Alcy - I'm behind on my fb once again. I've read and loved R&R but haven't gotten over there yet. Sorry about that.

But here. Really the only way to describe this uniformly is to talk about the emotional intensity of this update. The first part is just absolutely heartwrenching and then Willow is left curling up in a little ball crying. How intensely sad. Did Tara watch that from the window too? I don't think that's answered but I was wondering at the time.

The transition to the F/L smut is so great just because it's so shocking. I mean Willow's crying and suddenly Faith is writing... Wow and also wow. I don't find myself invested in their relationship but it's nice to have the break from heartbreak. Faith rocks! Going off to find Willow and help out. I hope neither gets hurt but I would hope that anyway.

Harris is a jerk, quite obviously. Pig. Myles a stand-up guy. Yay for him. I'm so glad that Willow confronted Tara. She seemed to know the things to say to really challenge her. How very poinant.

Sorry it's short; I have to get ready for work.

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I don’t have much time so I’ll strip this down to what touched me the deepest. It comes down to the eloquent mix of pain and beauty that’s laced through the entire story, but made even more potent with each new update.

And with that! I go and wait for another installment :D

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The diary segments are really heartwrenching - there's this tragedy there, which feels like it's now lurking beneath Willow, even though in her and Tara's presence in the present, there's the seeds of finally making things right, after they'd been wrong for so long. Of course, I doubt things will go that smoothly - someone's a vampire, after all, and Willow's only just starting to come to terms with the fact that this other life is her life, not just something tragic in a book.

I like the Faith/Lara story, too, especially the latest instalment - not going so smoothly, but I liked the feel that neither of them were really sure how to talk about what they wanted to talk about, and both of them were carrying extra burdens - Faith worrying about Willow, Lara being stuck between being Faith's lover, and her and Willow's 'commander', essentially, and not really being able to balance those. (Though angst aside, Lara Croft as an authority figure is extra-hot :blush )

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Zooeys Bridge: Well done on the dibs, you have to be fast around here to catch one!
Thanks for your comment about the ‘pages of a book‘ line, I can’t quite remember what I was thinking about at the time I wrote it, it probably just popped out!
I hadn’t quite intended the W/T interaction to become quite so long but you know how our girls are, I just had to write more and more.
You make an interesting point about whether it is just Tara’s own belief that she is not a demon but she is anyway or whether she really isn’t, I’ll leave that question open to scrutiny for a wee bit longer!
Drunk Willow was indeed silly, perhaps I should have put a little more of her in as I don’t think I’ve ever written drunk Willow before. Thanks very much!
Additional comment: Myles was never intended to be the Buffyverses’ Xander, I had always intended to introduce Xander as himself, although showing him in a different light as I kinda don’t really like him. Actually he reminds me of Joxer in Xena whom I also disliked (see my fb to Cathy below)
I think that Willow’s dead brother Alex would have grown up to be much like Abraham who was immensely kind and good, rather than Myles who is his own little character unrelated to Buffy canon.

Wimpy: I’m glad you’re angry at Edward, that was just how I intended it to come across. I also wanted to convey a sense of the powerlessness of women of the time, they had so few options available to them and I have no doubt that it would have been hell for a 18th Century woman wed to a bastard like Edward.
Tara’s backstory is coming up very soon, we’re delving back into the past to explore that but not via the means of the diary, I’ve got another method all cooked up!
Yep, Xander’s an arsehole, he redeems himself slightly in the next chapter but we all know leopards can’t change their spots.
This chapter did add to the feeling that I’ve been building up throughout the fic, Tara is always there watching Willow and I’ll explain more of this eventually too and it’s related to Willow’s destiny and what she needs to do. Answers will come, but slowly!

cathynorth: Hi there Cathy,
You’ve summed up the difference between Faith and Lara’s and Willow and Tara’s relationship quite nicely, even though we have seen far more physical contact between F/L it still comes across as being more for the sex rather than our of love. I wouldn’t quite describe Faith’s feelings for Lara as the same as Alex’s animal instinct towards Willow, I think there are feelings there, they’re just repressed as a result of the characters of the two women. Faith did react harshly but that’s just Faith, she’s a woman of passion and not one to be polite with her words.
I’m very sorry Myles reminds you of Joxer, I hated him as well, he ruined many a good episode of Xena. I think Myles is different in the way that he doesn’t (and won’t) get in the way of our two heroines finding each other. I always thought that Joxer got in the way of good Xena/Gabrielle interaction, I can assure you that Myles won’t do anything of the sort!

Zampsa1975: Thanks very much

WillowRulez: Given that I can’t write W/T smut other than in retrospect, it is nice to be able to play around with F/L smut and I’m glad the kittens seem to be enjoying it!
Yes, Lara knows things, but you are very right, as Director of the British Museum we can expect her to know things!
Yeah, I was actually surprised to re-read how Myles came across when he stood up to Alex but I think it works given the depth of his familial feelings for Willow. I’m trying to move through the next chapters as quickly as possible so I can get you all to the point of explaining Tara’s backstory and how Willow Van Helsing died, let’s just say I’ve started writing those chapters and I’m very pleased with how things are going so far. Once that happens, Willow’s not going to be in the dark any longer.
We’ll see if your theory is right soon!
Cheers very much!

diamondforever: Yes, this chapter was about regret and longing, regret in terms of Tara’s last diary entry and longing from Willow as she was crying over what she lost…and yet later in the chapter she finds Tara, but doesn’t realise that she is actually what she had lost.
Yeah, there’s a whole Vamp-Tara backstory there waiting to be delved into. You know, I haven’t written either Vamp-Tara or Vamp-Willow before, I’ve done plenty of Dark-Willow but no Vamps, I’m definitely enjoying the challenge.
Yeah, although I’ll start writing my next fanfic, I won’t post it until Van Rosenberg is finished, I think I have difficultly in making regular updates with two stories!


sacinema: You’ve stumbled onto my ploy, reveal a little…ask a whole lot more questions and keep the kittens on their toes trying to work out what’s going on!
Thank you for agreeing that Myles is a very nice young man, although you can make whatever opinions you want to about the characters, they’re all open to interpretation and I love how different readers can view the characters in different lights.
Faith definitely overstepped the bounds of civility with her remark and I intended it to come across as cruel to illustrate not only her intense passions and emotions but also the fact that she knows where her priorities are, Lara has kept her in the dark and she’s not impressed at all.
There was a small hint of W showing through when Willow was drunk, although the two different versions are still poles apart in terms of personality.

dlline: Hi Diane, I’m glad you enjoyed the diary entry, I kinda felt sad when I was writing it! As I said above, I intended to convey the complete helplessness of Tara’s situation.
I had always intended for the diary to start intruding into Willow’s life to the point that she begins to experience the emotions depicted within and you’re allowed to enjoy Willow’s pain! She’s definitely connected to the past in ways that she can’t understand yet.
I love my version of Xander too, it’s great fun writing a scoundrel that’s still a good guy, I write bad men all the time who are evil so this was fun.
We got to see a lot more of Tara in this chapter. I thought the mist thing was pretty cool too, and very handy for sneaking into the rooms of hot redheads! Nice to see you pointed out Tara’s beating heart…that line was intentional is all I cay say!
Well, I haven’t taken any Slavic literature courses but I do love a good gothic story so I hope this does the genre justice!

JustSkipIt: Behind on feedback…shame on you Deb! Just kidding, aren’t we all like that at some stage? But I do appreciate you dropping on in as always!
Willow’s response to the diary was heart-wrenching and it’s interesting that you ask whether Tara was watching her because I honestly don’t have an answer for that, I’ll leave that open but I will note that as a result of reading that entry and feeling the emotions as she did, Willow has to deal with Tara’s death twice.
Glad you enjoyed the transition to the F/L smut, I originally opened that section with Faith screaming ‘Oh fuck!’ but upon doing some research I concluded that 19th century people only used fuck in reference to the actual sex act, rather than as an exclamation as we tend to use it today so I dropped it.
Yep, Alex is a jerk and I love Myles!
I’m not sure how aware of her challenging questions Willow actually was but they were the right ones to throw in and we definitely saw how difficult it was for Tara to respond. The real questions will come eventually!

BelliBear: I’m exceptionally glad that you picked out those two aspects of the story, there’s pain absolutely everywhere in this fic, awful things happened over a hundred years ago and every bit of that pain is being transferred to the present via the connections that our heroines share with the past. But you’re right that there’s beauty there too, it’s sometimes hard to find but often its just the simple images. Thanks very much!

Artemis: You know how much I like tragedy Chris! Van Rosenberg is definitely rolling in the old tragedy and I’m enjoying every moment of it! Not in a horrible way of course, more just in terms of the writing challenges that I face in trying to portray it all! You’re right in assuming that things won’t go smoothly on the road to being made right.
I’m glad you’re enjoying the F/L plotline and you’re right that neither of them can truly express what they feel, the extra burdens are there in abundance and it’s going to be interesting resolving their storyline as a little added extra to the W/T relationship. And yes, Lara Croft as the Big Cheese is hot hot hot and a nice mental image to have while writing!


Thanks very much for all your feedback everyone, the next chapter is coming along nicely and should be up reasonably soon, maybe in a couple of days depending on how busy I get at work.

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This is happening much too slowly!

I know how much work it is to write, and honestly, it really is beautiful. The incorporation of all of the different worlds, Faith and Willow and Angelus and Tara... really, the whole thing is pitch perfect and fascinating.

I'm so excited to see what Tara's backstory is.

I'm incredibly excited to read the rest of it. I should really just lurk in the completed fics archive, but I'm a fast reader so I go through everything too fast...

So I know how much work it is, but please update everyday, all day. Really, it would be a wonderful thing to happen in my life.


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Hello Alcy :)

It was a good update with some answers... Only they made me having more questions. I suppose that was what was wanted?

Bad Xander! Trying to get Willow drunk to have his way with her! I am very disappointed... Lol *makes a tsk tsk sound at Xander*

mmm Tara... mysterious and beautiful Tara... I feel very bad for her... Or sad. Well not a positive feeling anyway.

Now that the readable part of the Journal is over, how are you gonna do? And I want to know what it is said! Is it a sort of secret code from W? Because she is the one who had it after right?

Please tell us what is written?

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Haha! I have not been to Paris so I cannot say that there are only thieves and whores that live in Paris! But I think any city in the 18th century would have had its fair share of disreputable inhabitants, even glorious Paris.

Actually I am not sure why but Paris has a bad reputation about whores and all... And I do believe the reputation isn't entirely false... lol

Thanks for the update,

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chance: I’m probably just as impatient as you are to get on with the story but then I remember that I actually have to write it and that takes time….lots of time. The best thing ever would be if someone paid me to sit and write fan-fiction everyday, then I could deliver daily updates!
I’m thrilled you’ve decided to venture out of the completed fics archive and give Van Rosenberg a try, I do try to update as often as I can so you should never be left waiting for a new chapter for too long.

Julia: Yes, it was exactly what I wanted. And I will do the same in the next chapter…answer some questions but raise more!
I think you should definitely feel sad for Tara, even though she’s able to be close to Willow, she’s unable to really be with her in the way she wants, for a number of reasons, and that’s like torture for her.
I will definitely tell you want the journal says, although you won’t actually get to read it in the way you did with Tara’s portion of the journal…don’t worry if that sounds strange, there’s only a few chapters to go until I get to that part.
Thanks very much for reading along Julia!

Well, Chapter 11 is just about finished, it’s in the final editing process now which means it will be up very shortly.

I’m in a very buoyant mood today because my team won our work quiz last night. I work at a museum so naturally there are some very intelligent people here which made for tough competition but we won in the end…I’ll try not to brag too much at work on Monday morning! (although there were certain people I was very pleased to beat)
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CHAPTER 11

“Willow.”

Willow squeezed her eyes tighter as though the simple action would somehow send her back to sleep and block out whoever was trying to wake her. However, the insistent voice would not go away and whoever was speaking even resorted to shaking her gently by the shoulder. With a small growling yawn Willow stretched on the hard seat beneath her as though it were a feather bed and peered hesitantly from one eye to see a the outline of a man standing in front of her. At first she thought it was Myles but the man’s arms were bulky where Myles was like a rake. Her eyes jerked open and she pressed her entire body back against the seat in an effort to get as far away as possible from the man hunched over in front of her.

“What do you want, Mr Harris?” Willow asked quickly, as though the faster she managed to get the words out the faster he would be out of her sight.

For the past week of their journey she had managed quite successfully to either avoid Alex Harris or ensure that she had Myles with her. She made it a point to request a hotel room as far away from his as possible and never shared his carriage on trains. Myles alone was a particularly effective foil for any of Harris’ antics as he had perfected his ‘stay away’ glare to the point where it scared small children.

“We’ve just arrived in Klausenburg, I think you’ll be wanting to get off the train before it departs,” he straightened up and moved back a pace, sensing her discomfort.

“Ah, thank you,” Willow replied, wondering why Myles had not come to wake her instead of Alex Harris.

It was as though Alex had sensed her thoughts and he went on to add, “I wanted to have a moment with you alone…”

Willow immediately raised her eyebrows in fright. ‘Alone’ with Alex Harris was definitely the last place she wanted to be.

“No, no,” Alex quickly waved his hands in front of him as though that were enough to dispel her fears, “I wanted to apologise to you…and as I don’t make too many apologies I did not exactly want an audience.”

“The fact that you don’t make apologies often can hardly be put down to the fact that you seldom offend people,” Willow retorted quickly, still pressed hard against the seat.

“Well forgive me for trying, Miss Rosenberg,” Alex actually managed to appear offended as though he did not think that there was a grain of truth in Willow’s observation, “I know I riled you up some and I aim to set things right between us.”

“You riled me up?” Willow answered, thinking that this was quite possibly the worst apology she had ever received, “You plied me with drink and then tried to take advantage of me…I would say I have every right to be riled up!”

“It is partially your fault!” Alex retorted, pointing an accusatory finger at Willow.

“Mr Harris, your apology is not going at all well,” Willow said coldly, her eyes narrowing as they stared at his finger.

Alex immediately lowered his finger and appeared flustered as he tried to put the little thoughts ticking over in his brain into comprehensible words, “Well, you’re not making this any easier, what I was fixing to say was girls like you, they don’t ordinarily give guys like me a second glance.”

“What do you mean ‘girls like me’?” Willow’s eyes remained narrowed, her tone of voice suspicious.

“Nice girls!” Alex seemed pleased that he had found a way to sum her up, “You know, nice, well-mannered, beautiful gentlewomen…you see, I tend to attract the ones with big breasts, too much make up and no class whatsoever.”

“That’s understandable,” Willow replied quickly, however she was mulling over the rest of his sentence in her mind and it brought slight warmth to her cheeks, “but I would hardly apply the rest of those descriptors to me…well, perhaps nice, but not well-mannered and certainly not beautiful.”

“No, you are!” he insisted fervently.

Willow drew in a deep breath, rendered even more uncomfortable in the presence of Alexander Harris by his latest statement. Unused to being paid such compliments about her physical appearance she could not decide whether he was speaking the truth or it was merely another ruse to lure her into a sexual situation. She decided to stop cowering against the seat and straightened herself up, even leaning towards Alex Harris in order to prove to herself that she was capable of protecting her own honour.

“I thank you for your apology Mr Harris, just make sure you’re very clear on the fact that I’m not interested in you in any way…not now, not tomorrow and nor any time before Hell freezes over,” Willow kept her words low and firm, hoping that even if he did not pick up on the content, he would at least pick up on her tone…much like a dog, “Are we both reading the same page on this issue?”

Alex nodded, a small smile of relief crossing his face, “Why yes we are, Miss Rosenberg.”

Alex turned at the sound of footsteps behind him and he bristled openly at the sight of Myles Cavendish. The young man hardly came up to his chin and yet he still stepped right up to face him, the fact that he had to look up at Alex did not detract from the force of his stare.

“Do you need any help here, Miss Rosenberg?” Myles asked, not breaking his stare.

“No thank you Myles,” Willow could see Myles’s small fists clenched at his side and she admired his pluck, if it did come to blows between the plucky little office boy and the field hardened guide, there would be no doubt as to who would come off second best, “Mr Harris and I were just resolving a few issues between us”

It was Myles’s turn to raise his eyebrows as he looked towards Willow for confirmation, she nodded and he appeared appeased for the moment. He stepped around Alex Harris and moved to collect their luggage from the overhead racks.

“So, where are we meeting this guy?” Myles asked moments later as the trio stepped from the train and moved onto the platform, his voice was fairly oozing with curiosity.

“The rendezvous is scheduled for this evening, just after dusk,” Willow removed a small piece of paper from the pocket of her jacket and glanced down at the instructions Lara had written regarding their contact, she turned to look at Myles, “but you will be staying at the hotel.”

Myles’s jaw dropped and his cheeks flushed red. Just before he was about to say something he quickly closed his mouth and bit his tongue. His disappointment however was manifested in the sullen slump of his shoulders and the fact that he was obviously dragging Willow’s bag along the platform.

Willow ignored the young man’s reaction and instead turned to Alex to seek his expertise, “Is that unusual, Mr Harris, a meeting after dark?”

“You’ll soon learn that nothing is unusual around here,” Alex replied, patting the bulge beneath his jacket where his revolver was concealed.

~~~~~~

As Willow and Alex made their way out into the night just prior to the scheduled time to meet Faith’s contact, Willow was surprised to find that the well lit streets of Klausenburg were actually far less intimidating than she had first imagined. Although she had not forgotten the harrowing narrow escape in Paris, she had to admit to herself the she felt confident with Alex Harris at her side. The man may have been a low down womanising scoundrel most of the time, but come time for business, he was oozing professionalism. She’d seen him add a small arsenal of weaponry to the revolver beneath his coat including a small collapsible crossbow loaded with silver bolts strapped to his back and several stakes tucked into the lining of his jacket.

Willow had just one small silver dagger tucked in her boot, she’d wanted to take the sword but realised it was rather wishful thinking given she did not have the slightest clue as to how to wield it, despite her surprising display with Giles in the practice room. She’d tried…spending time in front of the mirrors of various hotel rooms throughout their journey but she could not manage anything resembling competency. She supposed that if they did run into any trouble, she would have to rely on Alex to do anything involving stabbing with pointy things while she did the one thing she could manage with reasonable skill…running.

“So, you good friends with Faith?” Alex asked, eager to break up the monotony of hearing nothing but their boots sounding on the cobbles and the occasional clatter of a carriage.

Willow nodded, also relieved to have conversation to occupy her busy mind, “

“Faith and I, we’ve had our moments,” Alex began enthusiastically, “Why there was this one time when she…”

“Don’t try to insinuate anything Mr Harris, I’ll know that you’re lying,” Willow knew Faith too well to believe anything that Alex Harris would claim had happened between the two of them.

Alex turned to face Willow as they walked with an affronted expression on his face, “I was meaning moments in terms of run-ins with demons, vampires the like…do you have to judge me so harshly after that one little misunderstanding between us?”

Willow raised her eyebrows, “I would hardly call it a ‘little misunderstanding’ but I apologise for jumping to conclusions. I just couldn’t imagine your little routine working with Faith that’s all.”

“Hell no…that woman is scary!” Alex was quick to reply, “I’d sooner try to woo a Russian farmer’s wife.”

Willow grinned, “She is particularly intimidating yes…but I know what you mean, I’ve seen her in action and she is impressive to say the least…although there was this one time where I had to save her from the clutches of an Atramen demon.”

“Now you’re pulling my leg!” Alex replied in disbelief.

Willow drew herself up to her full height, “I would never! If not for my quick thinking in throwing that lamp Faith would have been rendered into a rather unpleasant pile of mushy stuff.”

“Because Atramen are particularly vulnerable to fire,” Alex nodded knowingly.

“Yes, they are,” Willow was slightly impressed; she glanced at the nearest street sign and back to the small map in her hand, “I think we take a right here.”

“You’re right, stay close to me…and keep your eyes peeled in all directions…but don’t look like you’re keeping too much of a look out or you’ll advertise the fact that you’re nervous,” Alex cautioned in a serious tone, “These streets we’re now entering are home to dark magick practitioners and the like, who’s stores you would not want to browse for souvenirs lest you pick up something that should not be touched.”

Although his warning was well meant, it only served to make Willow even more nervous, her eyes darting left and right into every dark nook and cranny. Alex’s rather cursory description of the area of Klausenburg they were entering did not even begin to describe their surroundings. The streets were far narrower here, the higher floors of the buildings seeming to jut out over the streets, giving the place a claustrophobic atmosphere with only a narrow strip of night sky visible above. The buildings themselves were ancient, stone with sharply tiled roofs and dark gables. Incomprehensible signs jutted out into the street, many were so faded that the image could no longer be discerned. Of the few that Willow could see, the image immediately put her off visiting…what looked like bodily organs on one and a baby’s skull on another. Willow nudged closer to Alex, wondering if he would take it the wrong way if she held onto his jacket.

Unlike the well lit, reasonably recognisable areas of the city through which they had just passed, these darker, narrower streets were teeming with pedestrians and loiterers, as though it came alive after dark. Willow shivered when she realised that her assumption was in fact more than that, it was probably true. Many figures wore deep hooded cowls that shrouded their features in darkness. Many of those that did not featured some sort of facial disfigurement or other oddity that led Willow to stare in fascination.

They continued through the maze of narrow streets until they had passed entirely through the throng of people and into an even darker neighbourhood where they were the only things moving on two legs. Willow had to suppress a scream as a cat-sized rat ran over the toe of her boot. Almost every single building was boarded up and looked as though they had been that way for the last hundred years.

“Well, we’re in the right place,” Willow glanced up at a derelict house with scepticism written plainly on her face, “Do you think the address was recorded incorrectly?”

Alex gamely tried the door but it barely moved on its hinges despite his best efforts. He shifted to have one booted foot placed on the door frame for leverage and tried once more.

“Well, well, well,” a low voice rumbled in the darkness behind the pair and they spun about to see a dark shape emerging from the shadows, “Now there’s a sight I never would have thought I would be witnessing again.”

Alex ceased his struggles with the door and turned, Willow was already facing the stranger. She found herself edging close to Alex as the cloaked figure approached. It was a tall, broad-shouldered man, striding towards then with a confident, proud swagger. His face was all strong angles and exceptionally pale. Willow was instantly reminded of the mysterious blonde woman who haunted her steps and she inched so close to Alex she was almost holding his hand. His hair was dark and close cropped, when he was close enough Willow could see that his eyes were almost black, they seemed to be stripping away all her defences. As his gaze pierced her soul Willow felt as though she had been struck by an invisible wall moving towards her. She stumbled slightly, overwhelmed by a succession of fleeting images, all too fast for her to see with any clarity. Thankfully Alex Harris, at her side, was staring too intently at their guest to notice her discomfort.

He came to a halt a scant metre away from Alex and Willow, a small smile curving his rather thin lips. Still looking directly at Willow, he cocked his head to one side as though sizing her up.

“You’re looking lovely this evening, Miss…” he paused as though he were about to say something before re-thinking his words, “Miss Rosenberg…I have to say this evening light becomes you very nicely indeed.”

“Thank you,” Willow whispered, “How do you know…”

“Your name?” he interrupted brusquely, “Faith of course, she can’t possibly know more than one red-haired woman named Willow…and your friend is?”

“Mr Harris,” Alex replied for himself, “You have a message for us?”

He shook his head slowly, making a chiding sound as he did so, “Not for you…for Willow.”

As he made to reach inside his coat pocket, Alex’s hand immediately leapt inside his own jacket. Willow knew his fingers were wrapped around the hilt of his revolver. However, before he could draw it, the place stranger had withdrawn a small, folded piece of paper and was offering it to Willow.

With some hesitation, Willow reached out and accepted the paper. She was careful to avoid touching his fingers as she did so. The paper felt old and leathery to her touch as she unfolded it and looked at it in the dim light.

“It’s a map,” Willow whispered, glancing back up at their contact.

Her voice must have betrayed her surprise as he asked, “You were expecting information perhaps?”

“Perhaps…I wasn’t sure what to expect,” Willow glanced back down at the sketchily drawn lines that could have been almost anywhere in the world.

“This,” he announced pointing down at the map, “This is all the information you need.”

“All the information I need for what?”

Willow couldn’t bring herself to look up at the man once more, just the sight of him made her flesh crawl for some unknown reason. He looked at her as though he knew her…and not as a long lost friend.

She did however study the map intently and was further unnerved by the thought that she had seen a winding path high above a river, much like the one that was depicted on the map. It was impossible, the map depicted no place in England and yet she had never before been to the continent. Eventually the map disturbed her to the point that she was forced to face the contact again. He was smiling at her.

“It’s all the information you need to find what it is you’ve been searching for,” was his cryptic answer to her question.

With the unsettling smile still fixed on his face, he turned to retrace his steps in the direction he had come. Apparently that was all the information he had to offer. Willow glanced back at the map, still unable to shake the feeling of intense familiarity that had her in its icy grip.

“Well that was odd,” Alex commented as the man’s back disappeared into the darkness ahead, he turned and stared at Willow with a thoughtful expression that almost made him look intelligent.

“How was it odd?” Willow’s tone was furtive, as though she was worried of being accused of a crime she didn’t commit, “I mean, how was it not supposed to be odd? He’s a shady Eastern European informant and we’re agents of the British Museum…it’s not like these meetings are going to be normal. Although this was my first one so I don’t have any prior experience to go by.”

Alex patiently waited until Willow have finished her babble and replied quietly, “It was odd…it seemed as though he knew you from some other place…a long time ago.”

If Alex scared himself with his own deep speculation, he scared Willow more. She was forced to readdress the emotions and images that had been dredged up at the sight of their informant. It scared her to think that Alex might in fact be right.

“You’re being ridiculous Alex,” Willow clutched the small piece of paper in her hand, “In what world would someone like me ever mingle with someone like him?”

“Err…” Alex paused, “Weren’t we mingling just now?”

Willow rounded on him, “Don’t try and get all dicey semantics on me, Mr Harris, I don’t know that man…and I’ve never seen him before tonight, is that clear enough for you?”

“Yes,” Alex squeaked, unnerved by the sudden appearance of Willow’s sharp defences.

“Good,” Willow nodded resolutely as though that were the end of the matter, she turned their combined attentions back to the task at hand, “Where to from here?”

“Well, I’d say we set about buying ourselves some horses in the morning and setting out…if you’re set on following that there map?” Alex nodded towards the scrap of paper in Willow’s hand.

Willow tucked it carefully in her pocket, “I am.” Her confident expression then slowly morphed into one of trepidation, she swallowed awkwardly, “Did you say…horses?”

~~~~~~

The fire had long since died down to a mere pile of smouldering embers, throwing only the dimmest of outlines around the blanketed forms huddled around it. In the darkness beyond the fire a single presence was watching from her perch on the branch of a large tree.

Tara had remained crouched in the same position she had held since settling on the branch almost four hours earlier when Willow’s small party had made camp for the evening. Her only movement was that which was stirred by the gentle wind, the swaying of her hair about her face and the tail of her coat as it hung behind her. Although her pose appeared relaxed, settled back on her haunches with her arms resting lightly across her knees, her eyes were alert and focused on the camp, her ears attuned to every sound the forest made at night. She had watched the party eat and fold themselves into their blankets, all weary after a hard day’s riding. Tara had smiled at Willow’s vehement protestations that her horse had it in for her…some things never changed. While Willow and the boy were sleeping, their guide was supposed to be keeping watch but Tara had seen him fall asleep not long ago, his snores were now filling the small clearing and managing to irritate Tara who usually considered herself to be impervious to small irritants.

Even with her sharp vision, she could only make out Willow’s blanketed form several metres away. She longed to move closer if just to watch her sleep. Tara knew she could move closer without awakening their idiot guide but she also knew that being in closer proximity to Willow would distract her from her vigil. She remained crouched on the branch, torturing herself with memories of watching Willow’s face as she slept…memories long faded by the passage of time.

Dawn was still at least two hours away when Tara’s ears pricked up; she cocked her head to one side and listened intently. Seconds later she dropped from the tree, her boots hitting the ground without a sound. No sooner had she landed, she was moving across the ground, not running but gliding. Her feet made no sound with each step despite the speed at which she moved. The black coat she wore fanned out behind her as she wove through trees, ducking branches and avoiding low bushes. She could see them now, three shadowy figures approaching the clearing. They moved confidently, not making any attempts to conceal their presence. All three faces turned to face Tara who burst through the trees to bar their path to the clearing. Simultaneously the three bared their fangs, vampires all.

“I knew I smelt dinner!” the nearest growled, his pale face flabby and waxen.

His companions moved to stand near him and one pushed past, a tall heavily built man who had been young at the time of turning. Long black hair framed his face with its sharp jaw line. The confident stance he struck betrayed him as a leader of sorts. As he approached Tara he opened his coat with a flick of his hand to reveal the hilt of a sword, his fingers closed around the hilt.

“Who are you?” he demanded with narrowed eyes.

“That is none of your concern,” Tara assumed a casual posture, her arms loosely at her side, “What you should be concerned with is turning around.”

“We’ve been hunting all night and I’m starving!” the third, a stocky woman lifted her fist and shook it at Tara as she moved towards her, “You step aside and we might spare you if your friends satisfy us.”

The leader halted her movement with a curt movement of his hand, still keeping his gaze fixed on the strange woman standing so nonchalantly in front of them.

“I cannot allow you any closer, find your meal elsewhere!” Tara’s voice was firmer, more threatening.

“I should think a better question should be what are you?” he sneered, his nose twitching as though he were trying to pick up a scent, “You are not of the blood and yet you are not human.”

“Enough warnings have been given…I am on our lord’s business and that is all you need to know!” Tara was growing impatient, even the scant information she revealed was far more than she intended, more than these lowlifes needed to know.

“You lie!” the long-haired vampire growled, in one swift movement he drew the blade he had been gripping since Tara’s appearance.

There was no further warning as he plunged the sword into Tara’s stomach with all the incredible strength of the undead.

Tara heard the blade slide into her gut with a dull rasping sound as it grazed skin and clothing. She glanced down to see it buried to the hilt and then up to see the vampire’s face twisted into a cruel smile. He drew his foot upwards and placed it next to the sword, with one savage push he shoved her body backwards away from the sword and sent her spinning to the ground.

Tara hit the ground and immediately crumpled into a heap, a dark unmoving shape to the on-looking vampires. She could hear their furtive steps as they moved to encircle her.

“What if she was telling the truth!” Tara heard the flabby vampire whine, “What if she really is on…his business?”

“Cuza, you fat pig…she’s not of the blood!” the woman snarled in response, “Now we’ll have four instead of three!”

“I don’t know,” Cuza was obviously unconvinced by his companion’s logic, “Why wasn’t she terrified of us like most humans?”

They were still bickering amongst themselves when their ‘meal’ sprang directly to her feet. Tara adopted an aggressive posture, snarling fiercely to give all three vampires a clear view of her fangs.

“You fools, stay out of matters about which you know naught!” Tara hissed, thoroughly enjoying the sight of their shocked expressions.

She had absolutely no mercy for fools and darted forward, the female vampire did not even realise what was happening amidst the swirl of Tara’s coat and hair until she was screaming and stumbling with her arms flailing wildly…her eyes had been ripped out.

The bloody eyeballs fell from Tara’s fingers as she spun, to face the other vampires. Before they could recover from their horror at the sight of their blinded companion, Tara relieved the long-haired one of his sword with a quick darting movement of her hand. Her bloody fingers curled around the hilt before he even realised he was weapon-less. He glanced down at his empty hand, it was frozen as though he were still clutching the sword. With one last glance up at Tara’s smiling face he spun on his heels and bolted from the scene in terror.

Tara glanced across to the fat vampire, Cuza, whose expression suggested that he too wanted nothing more than to flee. She shrugged as if leaving the decision up to him and then whirled in the direction of the running vampire. He had just passed into the trees but was clearly in view. Tara lunged forward, her left hand outstretched. A searing fireball burst from her palm and in seconds the figure in the distance was engulfed. He burned for a split second before exploding into nothing but burning embers.

Torn between the decision to run and become a conflagration himself, Cuza remained frozen to the same spot. He stared in horror at his companions, all that remained of one was a few burning twigs in the undergrowth and the other was still stumbling like a lunatic, tracks of blood from her eyeless sockets running down her face. As the terrible woman rounded on him he made a desperate attempt to defend himself with an attack of his own. His movements were clumsy, inhibited by his bulk and his fear. Tara easily avoided his swinging fists with mere steps, moving with a fluidity and effortlessness that made her almost impossible to touch. She did not feel the slightest remorse when she lifted the sword to shoulder level and brought it across in an arc. The sword sang as it severed Cuza’s head, Tara’s stroke barely faltering as the blade passed through flesh and bone. Both the head and body were nothing but dust before they could fall to the ground. What was left was scattered by the wind.

Tara turned her attention to the lone vampire remaining. Her frantic stumbling had ceased, replaced by a primal anger at the loss of her eyes. She had smelt Tara out and was facing in her direction, fingers extended like claws as she prepared to make a desperate strike. As Tara circled her, she kept moving to continue facing her even though she could not see.

“You kill your own kind!” she accused with a snarl, making a wild slash with her fingers that missed as Tara deftly stepped out of reach.

Tara darted forward, standing right beside the blinded vampire as she spoke into her ear, “I am not of your kind, demon!”

The vampire spun, visibly disturbed by Tara’s proximity. She made another sweeping slash but only grazed Tara’s coat as she moved out of reach. Before she could sense Tara again, she found vice-like fingers wrapped around her neck and in one swift movement she was jerked from the ground.

Tara lifted her prey with inhuman strength. Holding it at arm’s length in front of her, she strode forward towards the nearest tree. No sooner had she slammed the struggling vampire back against the trunk, she burst into dust in her hand. More dust blew off the jagged branch upon which it had been impaled. Tara watched for a few moments and then turned her back, walking back towards the clearing where her charges hopefully still slept soundly, unaware of the dangers which had stalked them.

As she walked she lifted her hand and saw bloody coating her fingertips and running over her palm. Tara took a tentative lick but spat it out almost immediately, it tasted like mud.

When she returned to the clearing, Tara found the three humans still sleeping soundly. She glanced up at the tree branch above her head and a few moments later her misty self was reforming atop the branch once more. She settled again into her crouching position and saw out the reminder of the night in her silent vigil.

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“Are you alright, Willow?”

Willow felt her whole body jerk in surprise as though she had suddenly been woken…except that she had never been asleep. The horrible beast beneath her danced in protest at her sudden and unwelcome movement, it snorted and pawed with its hooves and generally behaved like the devil incarnate. Willow squawked in an undignified fashion and tightened her already white-knuckled grip on the reins. The horse eventually settled back into a brisk walk (much too fast for Willow’s liking of course).

She glanced across with a scowl to see that it had been Myles interrupting her reverie. The young man appeared not to notice that he had had almost been responsible for Willow falling to her death from the back of the great beast on which she rode, instead he smiled at her in his affable manner.

Willow was incapable of remaining mad with Myles and she returned a small smile.

“I…I didn’t sleep very well last night,” Willow managed after a moment’s hesitation, certainly not about to tell Myles that her mind had been pre-occupied with thoughts of the pale man she and Alex had met the previous evening.

“Yes,” Myles nodded with mock solemnity, “I’ve heard that one does not sleep well on the dirt with a root digging into your back.”

Willow failed to pick up on the tone of Myles conversation and shook her head absently, “No, it wasn’t that…I felt as though someone were watching us, all night I felt as though there were a pair of eyes firmly fixed on me…which is silly of me I know…”

“It’s not that silly,” Myles sympathised, “We are in the middle of nowhere with no one but him to keep us safe.”

He nodded pointedly at Alex who was leading the way several horse-lengths ahead of Willow and Myles. The American turned his head slightly as if to indicate that he had heard Myles before resuming his attention on the map balanced on his saddle horn. Given that he was the only one that knew the country and Willow’s inexperience with using maps in the field, he had been tasked with following the route inked out on the small piece of parchment. Throughout much of the journey Willow and Myles had to listen to the map being called various foul epithets as though it were a person in its own right…a particularly disagreeable, capricious person. Apparently it was not a straight forward map to follow.

Every additional day they spent on horseback was an additional day that Willow felt as though she were being pummelled by each jolt her animal made. Each evening she would dismount gratefully only to find her bow-legged stance had not improved. Willow soon realised that no matter how much time she spent on the back of a horse, she would never grow accustomed to it as a mode of transport.

The terrain gradually became more mountainous several days into their journey and the sense of déjà vu lurking at the back of Willow’s brain came to the forefront. This particular morning had dawned ugly and grey with the distinct threat of rain hanging in the air. Gone was the dense forest on either side of the road, it was replaced by a high canopy of evergreen pines that lined a rocky route. It was a route that seemed to be leading them even higher. In the distance Willow could hear the rushing of a substantial amount water and she remembered the route on the map eventually joined a river.

When Alex took a fork in the path that led them away from the nearby river Willow did not hesitate in spurring her horse forwards, continuing up the path she knew to be leading them in the right direction. She surprised herself with her own decisiveness but knew that stranger things had happened to her over the past few months.

Just behind her, Myles paused at the fork and glanced at each of his two companions wondering which had taken the right route. Although Alex had the map, he had still not managed to forgive the American and distrusted him with all the passion he could muster.

“I say!” he called out to the lone figure disappearing around a bend, “I think you’ll find you’ve gone the way.”

With that confident assertion, he too spurred his horse in the same direction Willow had taken, falling in place just behind her. She glanced over her shoulder at the sound of his horses’ steps and smiled gratefully.

“Do tell me you are going in the right direction, Willow,” he asked with just a hint of trepidation in his voice, “Otherwise I’ll look like a complete arse in front of that idiot.”

“I can’t make any promises, Myles old chap,” Willow drew in a discreet breath, “But we’re supposed to be going this way…I’m sure of it.”

By the time Alex had turned around and made his way back to the path Willow and Myles had taken, he was some distance behind them. He was swearing profusely and trying to read the map as he rode.

“Where in the bloody hell do you two think you’re going?” Alex yelled out after them but was resolutely ignored as the two figures disappeared ahead of him.

The promised rain had startled to fall later that afternoon, a soft blanket of moisture that managed to find its way beneath layers of clothes and directly into the rider’s eyes despite the fact that they were all wearing broad brimmed hats. They rode on in some discomfort, a sullen Alex bringing up the rear of the party, quite sure that Willow was leading them all into disaster.

As Willow wiped her face yet again, unable to remove the stubborn film of moisture, a queasy sensation had begun to develop in her gut. If she had not been convinced earlier that they were going in the right direction then she certainly was now.

After another hour of riding along the steep narrow trail, with Willow keeping her gaze determinedly fixed ahead instead of staring down into the river below them, the rain ceased falling. Eventually the trail even moved away from the river and they were back beneath the pines. Willow’s queasy sensation had escalated to the point where she felt she was going to vomit, that was until she broke out of the trees and emerged onto a vast plain. The uncomfortable feeling in her gut was instantly gone and she felt nothing but awe. Behind her Myles gaped and Alex Harris whistled as they too emerged from beneath the trees and onto the very edge of what was an extremely large expanse.

Having spent the greater part of a week riding along narrow trails beneath trees which blocked out the sky above, Willow suddenly felt as though she wanted to turn around and return to those confined spaces…what was laid out in front of her was just too overwhelming.

Willow, Myles and Alex were all struck speechless as they stared out over the wide expanse of the flat plain which stretched miles into the distance that was laid out before them. It was a sheltered valley, bordered by sharply rising rock faces on three sides and forest on the fourth. Save for several large trees, it was almost completely flat and bare…or at least it would have been if not for thousands upon thousands of dark lumps puncturing the surface at irregular intervals.

Willow dismounted, shortly followed suit by both Alex and Myles. While the two men remained holding the reins of their horses, she left her horse and hesitantly started towards the nearest lump. Although she had suspicions as to what the shapes lying in the dirt were, she continued walking; knowing that what she saw would almost certainly terrify her. It was as though she was compelled to venture further out onto the plain.

She stopped walking, gripped by an unexplainable mix of fear and excitement as she stood over what could most simply be explained as a dead body…a very, very long dead body. All trace of flesh was gone from the skeleton, its hollow eye sockets stared up at her mockingly. A cap-like helmet had fallen backwards from the hairless skull and lay in the dirt, the rest of the body was clad in severely rusted armour, partially chain mail and partially plate mail. A mace was still clutched in the bony fingers of its outstretched arm. The cause of the man’s death was also plainly obvious; a rusted sword was driven straight through his chest.

Still looking at the impaled body, she stumbled past it and onwards to the next bodies. Willow drew her gaze away from the first and onto the next, a headless corpse, the skull lying a good metre away. As Willow continued onwards through the skeletons she saw just about every form of death imaginable. Skulls were crushed into barely recognisable lumps of bone, some with the instrument of death still embedded in them. Limbs had been hacked and severed rendering the bodies into several pieces. Some corpses were riddled with arrows, still protruding from the bodies as though they had been just embedded the day before.

All were in the same condition as the first, mere skeletons clad in rusty armour, some with tattered remnants of fabric that had once been clothes still clinging to the bones.

It was a pattern which was replicated over and over again across the entire area of the battlefield. It was a graveyard with no graves, a field of death and blood with the blood having long since worn away with the passage of time. Willow imagined it as it must have been; with so many men dying, the plain would have been running rivers of the stuff.

“Willow?”

Willow heard Myles just at her back, his voice trembling with the power of the place.

“What in heck is this place?” Alex’s tone was harsher in an attempt to conceal the fear he felt.

“It’s Covasna,” Willow replied in a breathless voice, a chill ran down her spine as she said the words.

“Covasna?” Myles and Alex asked as one combined voice, both managing to mangle its syllables into an almost unrecognisable word. .

“It cannot possible be anything else.”

Willow was still in awe as she turned back to face Myles and Alex, Myles held the reins of her horse as well as his and had led the animals out onto the plain. Both horses were growing slightly skittish, prancing tentatively and pawing at the ground. Alex tied his animal to a nearby stump and had almost the same rapt expression on his face as Willow…although where she was seeing knowledge he was seeing booty for the taking.

“We are standing on the field where Vlad Tepes…Dracula to you uncultured types, fought his last battle. This was the last place any human actually saw him,“ Willow could hardly contain her excitement, for a scholar in her field, it was like standing on sacred ground, her voice was animated as she spoke, “For almost a decade his legendary bloodthirsty army ravaged the land…you know, impaling their victims and the like…no one could or would confront them until a German Prince from the Black Forest amassed his own army of brave men determined to put an end to the murdering horde led by the spawn of hell – the vampire Dracula. It was said that the prince had enlisted the aid of a powerful warlock to aid him in the fight. While the warlock’s existence has never been confirmed, in 1476 the Prince and his army did face Vlad’s army and manage to drive them back into the mountains were they harassed and harried them until Vlad, having had his fill of running, decided to make his stand at Covasna for reasons unknown to anyone but him. Eyewitness accounts have the battle lasting three days…three days of men hacking and slashing each other to pieces until the ground beneath their feet was turned to mud with the amount of blood spilled…”

“So the prince defeated Dracula,” Myles nodded as though Willow’s tale was immensely entertaining.

“Essentially yes,” Willow conceded, “My scholarly opinion would be that the Prince’s army eventually slew every single warrior in Dracula’s army…”

“Your scholarly opinion?” Myles seized on Willow’s words, “Is it not fact?”

Willow shrugged, “There are few accounts that survive, if there ever was am official history set down it was lost shortly afterwards, those we have are poorly written, contradictory…and it is very difficult to deduce exactly what happened, much of what did happen was eventually clouded in superstition and myth. Basically, it was popularly held that the reason Dracula’s army remained undefeated was that it couldn’t be defeated and no one would face him because they believed this to be true.”

Alex let out a low whistle and Myles was riveted on Willow’s every word, he had since dropped the reins of the horses and was listening intently. The animals had gratefully retreated to the edge of the field.

“Was there a reason why the army could not be defeated?” Myles asked eagerly, “I mean, even if they were all vampires they could still be killed with stakes…beheading, fire…and daylight…”

Myles paused, obviously trying to work out how vampires could fight throughout three whole days with combusting as they were prone to do in the face of the sun’s rays.

“There’s your problem, Myles,” Willow quickly added in an authoritative tone, “His army weren’t vampires at all…they were just men…evil, evil men but just men nevertheless. It was said they could not be killed so long as their captain lived…the Prince’s army could wound them with ordinarily fatal blows and they would continue to fight, severed limbs grew back, men fought without heads…it’s all the stuff of nightmares really.”

Alex chuckled appreciatively, “Damn!”

“So someone had to kill this captain?” Myles was growing slightly pale.

“Legend has it the Prince did; he severed the captain’s head after an epic duel. Once the captain dropped dead, Vlad Tepes fled the battlefield and his warriors were slaughtered with swords, arrows...in the normal fashion I suppose. The prince claimed the captain’s head as a prize and took it back with him to Germany. I think that is where the stories and myths started, the Prince no doubt did keep the severed head of one of Vlad’s generals, probably on display for his populace to see. One of the most stubborn legends throughout the literature has to do with the skull, it is purported that if the body of the captain were ever made whole, the army would arise renewed from the dust of the battlefield to resume its reign of terror and blood. Naturally it is believed that this is why Vlad has kept a low profile…he has been searching for the skull ever since.”

“To resurrect his army?” Myles took a hasty step backwards from the nearest dead warrior and swallowed quickly, “There must be tens of thousands of soldiers here…”

“Probably closer to a hundred thousand,” Willow remarked casually.

Myles squeaked, “So if Dracula ever finds the skull we’re going to have a hundred thousand blood thirsty medieval soldiers running all over Europe!”

“Don’t be ridiculous, the battle occurred of course, but the rest…the un-dead captain and the resurrection of the entire army, is all a load of piffle,” Willow announced resolutely, she turned to see Myles still looking apprehensive and she continued, “You can’t possibly resurrect an entire army, no one can…why, it’s hard enough to resurrect….”

Willow found herself tongue tied, unable to finish the rest of her simple sentence. She found herself looking down at the back of her hand…at her own flesh and wondered if this really was the first body that had encased her soul…her essence.

“It’s hard enough to resurrect just one person,” she finished quietly.

“But Dracula’s looking for the skull?” Alex ventured, interrupting Willow’s thoughts.

“Well, he’s obviously pretty damned incompetent if it has taken him over 400 years to not find it,” Willow snorted mockingly, doing her best to forget the uncomfortable speculations playing havoc with her mind.

Myles squeaked again, “But you just said it was all a load of…piffle!”

“Please Myles, you’re embarrassing me.” Willow turned her back on the trembling young man and resumed staring out over the expanse in front of them, “Dracula, if he’s even still out there after all this time, is just another vampire more concerned with avoiding agents like Faith than finding non-existent skulls, trust me, he’s nothing to fear.”

“Faith isn’t here,” Myles whispered.

“But Alex is,” Willow reminded him of their guide’s self-proclaimed prowess…even though she had yet to see him in action.

Her already shaky confidence in their guide was further eroded when she noticed that Alex was staring at the body at his feet as though trying to work out exactly what he could safely remove as a souvenir….or to cart away from the battlefield and sell. Willow almost hoped that there was some curse laid on the bodies so that if Alex did indeed remove their weapons or armour something awful would befall him. She sighed, knowing from her extensive readings on the subjects that curses always seemed to attach themselves to an entire party…regardless of exactly which individual was to blame.

“That’s right, sonny boy,” Alex momentarily drew his attention away from the souvenirs when he saw Willow’s angry glare. Instead he reached out and tousled Myles hair in a patronising manner.

Myles scowled, his fear forgotten as he moved away from Alex. He squared his shoulders manfully, determined to show the same amount of backbone in front of the dead warriors as he had standing up to Alex in Willow’s defence.

While both men were still glaring at each other, they had not noticed Willow moving out further onto the field of battle. She was digging around in her bag and triumphantly pulled out a pad of note paper and a well worn pencil.

“No, we’ve come all this way so I’m going to take a look around,” Willow announced decisively, stepping directly over yet another skeleton, “I feel as though there are answers to be found here...and I love answers!”

Myles and Alex watched as the intrepid researcher set off into the heart of the battlefield with a dreamy expression on her face, writing pad in hand, already madly scribbling notes with her pencil. Both men wore identical expressions of disbelief mingled with apprehension. Disbelief at the sight of Willow marching off alone into one of the most depressing and horrifying places they could imagine and apprehension at the thought of actually having to follow her.

“You know, I would have never taken this job on if Croft was honest about one thing,” Alex muttered.

“And what’s that?” Myles asked still staring at Willow’s back, his dislike of Alex momentarily forgotten.

“That Miss Rosenberg is as mad as a hatter.”

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Diiiiiibs.

Seriosuly. How much further could the mystery unfold? It's unravelling like a freaking fruit roll-up. I can't handle it much longer.

mrff.

this whole tara-demon-unhuman-notdemon thing is getting stranger and stranger. not to mention the "hi! my name is Willow Rosenberg. I mean Van Helsing. I mean Rosenberg.....Tara? Little help here, baby? Who the hell am I? And while we're at it, who the hell are you?"

hopefully, these answers and more in Van Rosenberg Chapter 12!

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Well, it must nearly seem a little bit boring to you, I’m always writing the same comment: Brilliant update.

The way Willow managed to make her point clear to Alex was really nice. And Alex actually apologised. Better for both of them and the mission. I like it how you always manage to give everybody a second chance. Myles seemed like a spoiled little brat, now he is acting like a perfect little gentleman. Alex at least tried to come to terms with Willow. And hopefully he will be helpful in the future.

Tara? You did it again. We for sure know now she is neather human nor vampire. But what is she? A mix between both? And I’m really dying to know what happened to her after the diary ended. Was it Edward at her doorstep? Anyway she is a creepy person nowadays. The way she got rid of the vampires? Not a nice way to act. She is another of your two faced characters. Sometimes I tend to think the only one who is just a plain person, easy to look through is Willow. Former and nowadays.

You give us so many pictures by writing the way you do. Klausenburg creepy place, too. And I have a suspicion who this map person could have been. Maybe I’m totally wrong but the way he looked at Willow? Wonder if we’ll see him again.

I’m so dying to read more. And I hope chapter 12 will reveal a bit more. Also we need some more interaction between Tara and Willow soon. No pressure here.

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Nice that Alex apologized to Willow, didn't see that one coming.
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“Enough warnings have been given…I am on our lord’s business and that is all you need to know!”

That doesn't sound too good! But I doubt that when Tara said "Our" that she referred to the vampires' Lord... let's hope not. Because that would mean Dracula right?
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"One of the most stubborn legends throughout the literature has to do with the skull, it is purported that if the body of the captain were ever made whole, the army would arise renewed from the dust of the battlefield to resume its reign of terror and blood. Naturally it is believed that this is why Vlad has kept a low profile…he has been searching for the skull ever since.”

That's just creepy.
Really enjoyed your descriptions of Klausenberg and the dark quarter. I wonder if the same thing that happened to Tara happened to Willow's brother too? Who else would be the person that gave them the map?
Picture me intrigued. Again or still :D
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Hey, Alcy!

Great update (again), but you probably knew I would say that, basically because I always do. I love this story, but again I find myself with a lot of questions, and while speculation is fun, I think that I'd rather just wait and see what happens next. I love a surprise!

I did have to mention Tara the whatever-she-is and her mad ninja skills. I really enjoyed her "treatment" of the trespassing vamps. The removal of someone's eyeballs is usually not an idle threat. Plus, she was misting around again, and you know I love that.

Well done (again) and thank you.

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You've got my eyebrows knitted in major expectation. This is such a luscious - for lack of any better word to describe it - tale. I love how you're combining so much myth and lore into such a coherent plot (much better than the actual Van Helsing movie).

I'll keep this short since I'm tired, but know that you've got my full attention, and my very very impatient foot-tapping. :)

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wha..*stops* no.. you'll never tell me.. but.. i really wanna know.. *stomps her foot* gaaaaarh oh what the hell i might as well.. what is Tara? :|

*twitches* gah

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Wow, what a journey this is. Willow is starting to feel/remember some things from her past. Who was the eerie man who gave her the map? And she knows which fork in the road to take, and it's giving her the heebie-jeebies. Then she finds this field of dead warriors. But what does this have to do with her destiny??? Arrgh! More and more and even more questions and you're only giving us tiny little tid bits. Oh, what beautiful torture.

I'm still with the gang not knowing exactly what Tara is, and I'm sure you'll keep us guessing a while. I keep thinking it's something she did so she could be with Willow again since in her last entry she said something about the two of them should be together forever. Oh, please give us more info soon. It was nice seeing her little cameo appearance here, and still protecting Willow. I think she's not so much of the evil, but that her one major focus is protecting her, whatever it takes. She's such a poor, tortured soul, that is, if she still has one. I'm going to be optimistic and keep hoping she does.

Great job again, but can I please request more W/T soonish.

Loving it!


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Hey Alcy,

I just finished reading all of your other wonderful fics at Through The Looking Glass. I really think you're quite talented at mixing genres and creating an altogether new world.

I'm thoroughly enjoying this, as much as I've enjoyed your others. Can't wait to see where it goes.

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Alcy - Well, you've got me pretty flumoxed. Don't take that wrong. It's all brilliant but I just don't know how it will go or where it will end up. Willow seems to be growing into... into something but I don't know what. She seems to be maturing into being more assertive as well as taking charge (maybe that's the same thing). The myth about the field of warriors is quite scary and I'm assuming has quite a bit to do with this entire adventure.

WTF is Tara? Not a vampire exactly obviously. Wow. This is so awesome and confusing too.

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Zooey’s Bridge: I love your analogy of the fruit roll up, it works very nicely for my twisted vision, I think from the next chapter onwards you’ll start getting a whole lot of answers…which will be nice won’t it!

While I’m not going to answer too much about the identities of Willow and Tara in the next chapter, there are some little tidbits in there to tide you over. Thanks very much for hanging in there!

sacinema: You can write brilliant update as many times as you like, I don’t think I’ll get tired of reading it!
Well, the good guys get second chances in my fics, the bad guys never do though! And as much as I don’t like Alex, I do kind of need him there, even if he’s just a fall boy!
I will definitely take you through what happened to Tara after the diary ended, but you are right, she is creepy first and foremost she is a vampire and nice or not, there’s all that darkness inside of her that needs an outlet.
We’ll definitely see the map person again…and you’ve already met him too!
Chapter 12 will be up pretty soon!

Willow Rulez: Yeah, I wasn’t sure that I should have Alex apologise but I did want to get across Willow’s attractiveness, Myles is clearly in love with her in a fraternal sort of manner and now Alex is too.

I won’t give away anything about the ‘our lord’ part, suffice to say you’ll find out eventually!

Glad you think the myth is creepy…creepy is good, and it’s also a lot of fun.
Who gave Willow the map is answered in the next chapter, although just a note that it couldn’t have been Abraham as he lived a long and fruitful life as Founding Director of the British Museum (the job Lara now has).

dlline: Like I said above, people can say great update or words to that effect as often as they like, definitely helps the writing process! I think if I didn’t know what was going to happen in this fic I would love the speculating as well, although of course I would get everything wrong…it really helps when you know whats going to happen.
I’ll try and include some more misting around for you in future updates, we definitely haven’t see the last of bad arse ninja Tara. Thanks Diane!

diamondforever: I do hope you can untangle your eyebrows! Thank you for your kind words, very nice praise indeed. Hopefully your impatient toe tapping will be stopped, at least momentarily, when I get chapter 12 posted shortly.

Belli bear: I’m sorry for causing all the twitching and foot stomping but I can’t tell you what Tara is just yet!

wimpy0729: This fic is definitely like a journey, both metaphorically and literally in the sense that we are slowly moving towards getting some answers. I don’t torture kittens on purpose…but I suppose I must enjoy it if I keep managing to do it all the time!
I promise you more W/T in the next chapter, even if its not quite in the way that everyone wants (me too!) but it should make for interesting reading.

chance: Thanks for reading up on all my fics, I tell you what, that’s an awful lot of reading to have done so congratulations to you! I’m glad you enjoyed them and I hope you enjoy future updates of Van Rosenberg.

JustSkipIt: Alcy – Hi Debra, flummoxed is a great word, I should use it in a fic one day and don’t take me wrong but I’m exceptionally glad that you don’t know how this will go or where it will end up.
Willow is definitely undertaking a change and in Chapter 13 you will see this change take more of a hold as something dramatic happens in terms of her journey, so that’s a chapter to watch out for in more ways than one.
You’re definitely right about the field of warriors being key to the rest of the story…
Thanks for being confused but still keeping on going anyway!

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