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Re: Lamplight

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Sat Sep 22, 2007 6:42 am

Hello here.

God... God... I can't think of something to say actually.. I am only thinking "I need to know what is coming next!".

Please make it soon :-D

Thanks,

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Re: Lamplight

Postby WillowRulez » Sat Sep 22, 2007 3:13 pm

"Yep. I read this in a book."
That doesnt exactly inspire confidence ;)
The unmistakable hulk of Luke had Tara in an arm-lock and was manhandling her onto the speedboat.

It was to expected... though I thought they would rather catch Willow.
And then it happened. A slight swerve and it tilted on its starboard side. A sudden spin and water boiling at its stern as engines churned to keep the propellers moving. Then nothing. The bubbling stopped as the engines spluttered to a halt, leaving the yacht drifting uncontrollably.

At least it wasnt all for nothing!
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Re: Lamplight

Postby Zampsa1975 » Sat Sep 22, 2007 3:15 pm

Awesome update-y goodness....I hope the FBI people manage to arrest Wilkins and his goons without harming the hosteges... I hope Faith isn't onboard to "interrogate" Tara...
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Re: Lamplight

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Mon Sep 24, 2007 5:33 am

My dearest Lady of Watsonia~

The first update made me hungry, in all sorts of ways. It also made me long for the chance to travel more. (Not that central PA isn't the very epitome of a rich and varied life...)

I was really feeling for both our girls in the last 2 updates. Tara is obviously out of her head w/ worry, and has been for a while. That just takes such a toll, that protracted agony, and it's worse b/c she feels responsible. What an awful combination. Willow, meanwhile, knows that she's got to keep it together when Tara's at risk of going all Rashy McRashburn and just jumping into the sea and dog-paddling out there with her dinner knife.

I loved the rope-around-the-propellers idea and in fact I'm going to make up an excuse to use it myself. I have no idea how; don't ask. I'll come up with something. I think it's always interesting to observe the POV in such cases. Sometimes the action switches back and forth (when both parties are deeply invested/involved) and sometimes--like here--it stays with one character. While Willow was down there I was thinking, "Hmm...We haven't seen Tara for awhile..." And obviously Willow was the more active one in that scene but it did build a sense of anxiety--and sure enough, there she was, getting manhandled by that freak of nature Luke.

The Artina anagram was a clever touch, too. I'm a sucker for the "It was right there in front of us the whole time!" epiphanies.

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Re: Lamplight

Postby db » Mon Sep 24, 2007 8:52 pm

Watty!

Hello! I emerge from the murk of the lab to brush the dust off my computer and say hi! ...and also, I am absolutely in love with your last update! I mean, I knew *something* was around the corner, but this twist totally was amazing! I was riveted! Seriously. Each sentence was more and more anxiety provoking. Bravo! I am so anxious to read what happens next!

Go get 'em Willow! Save Tara! Save the day!

(Hero/brave Willow is soooooo endearing!)

I also really like how you are illustrating the ways that Tara is allowing herself to become vulnerable to Willow... especially with the "I trust you line".

Yay! You used the 'I trust you line'!

It seems like, as she lets herself fall in love, all these layers of defense are stripped away until I am finally starting to recognize *Tara* again, you know?

Sorry I missed the last update! School. Blah blah blah.

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Re: Lamplight

Postby SithLordWiccan » Tue Sep 25, 2007 8:27 pm

My dear, dear, watty, please forgive me. While I have been reading this story since you started work on it again, I have yet to leave anything in the form of feedback. Mostly it's because of school and the amount of homework I have, mostly it's because of my new job, which takes up most of my time and doesn't allow me to go indepth when it comes to leaving feedback.

But mostly its because updates like the last one make this a story that can't be described by me in simple words. I will say, however, that I enjoyed the last update, and Willow's little adventure underwater, very much, even if it ended with Tara getting captured.

And now that the Artina's been stopped in its tracks, it's time for Willow to do what she does best: put the big hurt on those who try to put the big hurt on Tara.

Eagerly awaiting the next update. :)
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Re: Lamplight

Postby watty » Fri Sep 28, 2007 7:33 pm

Julia -- hi there. Next is coming ... next.


WillowRulez -- lots of good ideas are from books actually. Thanks.


Zampsa1975 -- interesting observations. More next.


Mary -- well, I can attest to the fact that central PA is a nice place to drive through ... twice in a week. You're right, Tara's life has been turned completely upside down lately, and she is lucky to have Willow. It's not easy for Willow either, but she is one level detached, sort of. :lol at wanting to use the rope around propeller trick -- I have no point of reference in this, but I think it can work, thinking about it intellectually. I wish I thought of it, but it was from a book.

I think it's always interesting to observe the POV in such cases. Sometimes the action switches back and forth (when both parties are deeply invested/involved) and sometimes--like here--it stays with one character.

I think you'll like the next chapter then. Thanks, Miss Moneyfuckingpenny.


db -- hihi! Though there were twists, your magic 8-ball got a lot of predictions right. I think I've said it before, but the climax is building now.

Yay! You used the 'I trust you line'!

yeah, it's there ... you know? And it was the right time for that line.


Alex -- hi and thanks for stopping by. The tension is ramping up, you know I like to pile the angst on, heehee. Update next.

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Re: Lamplight

Postby watty » Fri Sep 28, 2007 7:34 pm

Title: Lamplight
Author: watty (hiddenwatson[at]gmail[dot]com)
Distribution: Chris and Susan have pre-approval. Anyone else please ask for my permission first.
Rating: R to NC-17
Disclaimer: BtVS characters, concepts and dialogue belong to Mutant Enemy, Fox, The WB, UPN and others.
Summary: Contemporary AU. Where demons wear human faces. Two lives drifted apart, can they find their missing half?
Notes: This will be long and angsty. It also changes direction more than once. I had planned for it to go in a certain direction, I didn't know it would go that far. Sometimes, stories have a mind of their own.


Part 39

Tara followed Willow's progress toward Artina by watching the stream of small air bubbles drifting up to the surface of the water, hardly disturbing the surf. When she couldn't see them anymore, however much she strained her eyes, she sighed and shifted in her seat. She turned her attention to the yacht, watching while trying not to seem like she was staring constantly at it.

The early spring weather was still cool in the Mediterranean but it was a nice day with cloudless blue skies. Perhaps it was her high anxiety level, but she couldn't feel the warmth of the sun. I need Willow to keep me warm. She thought of Willow in the dangerous cold water trying to be a hero and a fresh stab of worry clutched at her.

A painful pulse flashed through her arm and she realized she had been holding onto the thin cord so tightly that her shoulder was locked. She hadn't dared look at her watch, but finally relented to see that only five minutes had elapsed.

The waiting was torture.

She was numb. All her energy was focused on watching the yacht, trying to penetrate the dark waters to see below, and scanning the water surface for tell-tale bubbles. Black thoughts of doubt, and fear, and uncertainty welled up in her mind, she fought hard against the dark broodiness but the fear lingered.

Willow said it would only take a few minutes, but the task was probably more complicated than they imagined. She knew Willow had enough air in her tanks, so that was the least of her worries.

She was so cold.

The motorboat rocked as a speedboat zoomed passed far too closely. She frowned as the wake of the speedboat disturbed the flatness of the water surface. No chance of watching now. Where is she?

She didn't register when the same speedboat spun sharply and turned back toward her small motorboat. Not until it was alongside did she realize the extent of the threat and by then it was too late. The speedboat bumped the side of the motorboat, jerking the cord out of her hand, snagging one end on a hook at the side. Her other hand tried to start up the engine but a large hairy hand slapped her arm away.

For the second time in as many months she faced an assailant who was bigger and stronger than her. The specter of another assault flashed through her mind, at the raised hand coming at her, at the blood swimming in front of her eyes. She cowered and whimpered at the inevitable onslaught. She didn't care about the pain, the one thought in her mind was to protect Willow, that they ... whoever they were ... could not know where Willow was.

"What the hell are you doing here?" The gruff voice shouted in her ear. He didn't hit her, but strong hands snatched her up and pinned one arm behind her.

She said nothing.

"You bitch. Were you the one who ratted on the boss?" It was Luke. Her stomach dropped and she felt overwhelmed with vertigo.

She still said nothing.

He twisted her arm harder, but she gritted her teeth and absorbed the pain. He wouldn't be getting any pleasure from seeing her hurt.

"He'll deal with you," Luke warned.

He pushed her onto the speedboat and Tara tried every trick she could think of to escape his grip. "No!" she shouted, but to no avail.

The speedboat sped back to the yacht. Tara stole one last glance at the motorboat drifting aimlessly, dread filling her. She's gonna freak out.

*****

They tossed her into a small inside cabin. She didn't know what was worse, the finality of the loud clang as the door locked behind her, or nauseating feeling of the four solid walls closing in. She called out to Willow, willing her lover to be safe and to alert the police when she found her missing. Her aunt and Lily were probably also locked up in a cabin like this and her heart went out to them — having to endure a transatlantic voyage in such cramped conditions would have been extremely uncomfortable.

She sat motionless on the narrow single bunk, her knees drawn up to her chin and her back burrowing into the wall. She was shivering, her hands wouldn't stop trembling, her teeth chattered, her head pounded incessantly and her stomach felt like it was about to empty itself spontaneously. Every cell inside her felt like it was about to break apart. She didn't know where they were heading, what would become of her, and if they were even going to let her live. She didn't have any regrets in life. Except Willow. The thought of never seeing Willow again was unbearable, she could feel the physical pain in her heart. Be brave now. It won't do to be a slobbering mess when she bursts through that door to rescue you.

Footsteps sounded outside and the cabin door was unceremoniously flung open. She tried to keep her breathing even, waiting for the newcomer to act first. The medium-sized man walked right up to her position on the bunk. She flinched and pushed herself backwards. She kept her gaze at eye-level, not looking directly at the person standing menacing inches from her.

"Huh," he said, and stepped back. He sat at the foot of the bunk, leaving a large enough gap between them that Tara didn't feel physically threatened.

She raised her head and looked into the eyes of her ex-boss. The charming joviality was gone, replaced by the dull glint of pure villainy.

She swallowed hard, but said nothing.

His jaw clenched and he let out a dramatic sigh. "What am I supposed to do with you, Tara?"

"Let me go. And your other prisoners," she said shakily. She was still shaking all over but she repeated her mantra of keeping brave.

"You don't think I'm that stupid," he said evenly.

"You've done enough. Don't add kidnapping to the laundry list of charges the police are gonna throw at you."

He ignored her. "What are you doing here? And where's your little redhead?"

She debated internally how much to tell him. Would she be able to shake some information from him? "Chasing after you."

He snorted. "So you sit out there in a pathetic little boat that my yacht can run over in a second. Let me ask again, where is Willow?"

"I don't know," she said, truthfully.

He made an exasperated sound. "Oh Faith will find her. Unlike you, she's completely loyal and trustworthy."

"So she doesn't mind being used?"

He broke out in laughter. "Who's using who? You really don't know the rules of the game do you, little girl? And I've tried to teach you so much, give you everything. All wasted."

She felt her anger boiling. "I trusted you! And then I found out about the shell companies with my name on their deeds; and how you threatened Willow when she's only doing her job. And then," her voice broke. "Someone attacked me. Were you behind that?"

He said nothing.

She knew she had to push now, to get him on his back foot. "Deny it all you like. I know who did it," she paused to gauge his reaction, but finding none. "Tell me about your business, your real business," she asked suddenly.

"What? You want exposition now?" he sneered at her.

Her face was blank. "Why not?"

He paused for a second, then broke out in laughter again. "True. Tell you what? Ask me any question. I'll answer as much as I can, how about that for generosity?"

"What's going to happen to me?" she asked directly.

He pondered, genuinely trying to think. "Let's leave that one till last," he said with slow menace.

"Okay. Why do I have signatory rights over several legally dubious shell companies?"

He shrugged. "Contingency plan."

"I don't get it."

"It's strategic planning, have something put in place years ahead, in case it's needed. The companies aren't meant to function. Not meant to be activated. As for why you? You're a perfect front. Practically an orphan, no family, no ties. And so malleable."

She was quiet as she absorbed this. "Was it just me? How many innocent young girl's life did you appropriate?"

"I never mistreat any of my girls, you know that."

That brought her to her next question. "Where's Lily?"

"She's a, ah, guest here too."

"Can I see her?"

"Don't push it, Tara," he warned.

She looked back at him defiantly. "Who are you running from?"

He looked like he was about to deny it, but changed his mind. "Let's just say I had a business transaction that went sour. And the other parties jumped to the wrong conclusion and now they won't play nice."

"You mean how you tried to sell forged paintings to buyers who react violently to someone pulling them a fast one?" she smirked. For a moment, she forgot she was a prisoner in his yacht.

"How do you know about that?" he said sharply.

"Everything's out in the open. The FBI told us."

A muscle in his jaw ticked out of control. "These people are more dangerous than the FBI. Don't they know I have no choice?"

"There's always a choice," she said evenly.

"No there isn't! These people killed Balthazar. Sent me a finger and a photo. They're big on honor and revenge, they'll hunt me down ruthlessly," he sounded desperate.

"Mr Wilkins, turn yourself in. The FBI can protect you. Let us go, let Lily go, let Aunt Hal—" she gasped and clamped her hand over her mouth.

His eyes grew wide.

He sprang across the bunk with surprising agility and backhanded her.

"Aunt? Aunt Hallie?! You know that arrogant old bitch? It was you! You and your slut redhead. You set me up!"

Her face was stinging from where he hit her, and she felt herself trying to shrink into her skin.

He snarled and raised his hand again.

And like the last time he hurt her, all those years ago in the Suite, he stopped.

She had never found out why. A part of her, the part of her that still harbored hopes that he had some good in him, wanted to believe that he saw her as a surrogate daughter and didn't want to harm her. At least not physically. She would never know.

He made a choking sound and turned abruptly.

It was just as he slammed the door that all hell broke loose.

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Re: Lamplight

Postby SithLordWiccan » Fri Sep 28, 2007 8:46 pm

DIBS!

ETA: Nice to see Tara's POV during the last chapter. That's a technique I like to see in stories, as I believe it allows one to get to know more about a situation through different eyes, which is always good.

And I have to admit, I don't really know a lot about this story yet. Between work, school and everything else, I haven't had time to devote to sitting down and reading this story thoroughly (I know, I know. Feel free to beat this over my head), so I don't really know what the deal is with Wilkins, Luke, Faith and all the rest. All I know is that any situation wherein Tara is in peril is NOT GOOD.

Thankfully, it would appear that our dear little redhead called in the Spookys, which are about to deliver a couple hundred rounds to the metal scorpion. (OK, I'm hoping you've managed to see "Transformers" sometime this summer, otherwise what I just said made no sense), so thankfully Tara's gonna get rescued and then we can make with the makeup smootchies soon.

Please?

Oh, and one more thing:

watty wrote:The early spring weather was still cool in the Mediterranean but it was a nice day with cloudless blue skies. Perhaps it was her high anxiety level, but she couldn't feel the warmth of the sun. I need Willow to keep me warm.


Great line, watty. Great line.

Eagerly awaiting the next update.
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Re: Lamplight

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Sat Sep 29, 2007 2:28 am

Hello!

Once again... eeeeek!

I'll try to say more than last time lol

So of course I am very afraid... who wouldn't be?

I hope the FBI will be there soon because I can feel Tara being in great great danger... Which is normal, she is one of the main characters so the threat is bigger for her than for Hallie and Lily. Still... I don't get the need to be a hero! That's gonna coast her life! Wait... no.. There is no death for Tara and Willow here! *relieved sigh*

It was nice to have Willow's feelings over her mission and the Hell that happened next, and then Tara's... Rather than both mixed in one chapter.
I liked it ^^

Hopefully you're not going to harm the girls too much? ok I trust you.

Thanks for your update-y goodness ^^

Friendly,

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Re: Lamplight

Postby LittleBit » Sat Sep 29, 2007 8:37 am

Fabulous updates - and thank god the boat stopped! :D
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Re: Lamplight

Postby WillowRulez » Sat Sep 29, 2007 2:07 pm

Nice to see everything from Tara's point of view. I hope that Willow will contact the authorities or something because they are in way over their heads.
Too bad that Tara slipped up about Aunt Haillie.
She had never found out why. A part of her, the part of her that still harbored hopes that he had some good in him, wanted to believe that he saw her as a surrogate daughter and didn't want to harm her. At least not physically. She would never know.
Yeah, I always thought that she is like his daughter too. At least to him.
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Re: Lamplight

Postby Alcy » Sun Sep 30, 2007 6:55 pm

Oh watty, I’ve been absent from this story for far too long and I find myself with a kazillion updates to read, very pleasant but also frustrating on my part in trying to provide adequate feedback.

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I just have to point out this line from Faith; it made me chortle aloud at work. Priceless.

There are several stories unfolding here, each of course blending and flowing with the next. To read Willow and Tara trying to rebuild their relationship in the midst of the turmoil of Katrina’s murder investigation is pure angsty pleasure. There’s also a palpable sense of danger brewing, when Kate asks Tara to keep a watch on Wilkins…bad news, spying is never a safe line of work but things turn out to be even worse for Tara, with those dodgy papers and then being attacked, all written so superbly I felt it, great stuff watty. Ouch, damn it was Faith! I’m so used to writing her as one of the good guys that I have to be reminded that she was a complete bad arse through and through on the show.

Part 32 – it was hilarious with Tara teasing Willow about a threesome with Wesley…and then there was just hotness…very nice

I love it how Willow and Tara become international secret agents, jet-setting around the world and scuba diving and the like. Then Tara is in Wilkins clutches, hopefully the cavalry are along quick smart to rescue our damsel!

Sorry for the disjointed feedback but I had a lot to catch up on! Thanks for the great yarn watty and I look forward to the concluding chapters!
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Re: Lamplight

Postby db » Mon Oct 01, 2007 5:26 pm

Dear Watty,

This story kicks @ss.

Eeep... I had a feeling that Tara was going to let the whole Aunt Hallie thing slip... but all hell is about to break loose, and I have great confidence in the powers of one pissed off red-head and her international 007 spy techniques.

Now I am going away to try and unpack the heinous pig sty that is my new apartment. I hate unpacking. I hate packing too. Hrmmm.

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Re: Lamplight

Postby Zampsa1975 » Tue Oct 02, 2007 6:23 am

Excellent update-y goodness... I just hope that when the dust settles everybody is ok... well maybe not Faith...
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Re: Lamplight

Postby watty » Fri Oct 05, 2007 5:42 pm

Alex -- I'm glad you liked the switch to Tara's pov, time-wise we moved back and forth so I hope it wasn't too confusing. The crime is fairly complicated, but I will post a diagram at the end. Hee. Willow needs help from the authorities now, and they're coming. Thanks again.


Julia -- sorry for making you afraid, but Tara is strong and this is Pens so we are guaranteed a happy ending. Thanks for the trust and thank you for the comments. :)


LittleBit -- thanks. :)


WillowRulez -- glad you lik the Taracentricness of the chapter. The cavalry is definitely arriving! Nice observation about Tara and Wilkins' relationship, I wanted the subtle father-daughter-ness to come through. Thanks again. :)


Alcy -- hi there. I'm horribly behind on reading and feedback too. I must make time to tell you how much I enjoyed the latest R&R and van Rosenberg. I did :lol when I came up with Miss Moneyfuckingpenny, because that's sooooo Faith. And then I read that Lois Maxwell passed away recently, sad.

I'm glad you picked up on the multitude of story threads unfolding in this story, it's kinda like a tangled up cat's cradle. Wait till you see the diagram of the crime, I'm sure people will laugh. I notice that I have a tendency of including a wide cast of supporting players, and I like that because like seasons 1-3 it makes the environment so much more layered. And oh yes, the cavalry surely is arriving! :)


db -- lol@"@ss" my dear. All hell is about to break loose, keep a hold onto your hat!


Zampsa1975 -- thanks. :)

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Re: Lamplight

Postby watty » Fri Oct 05, 2007 5:44 pm

Title: Lamplight
Author: watty (hiddenwatson[at]gmail[dot]com)
Distribution: Chris and Susan have pre-approval. Anyone else please ask for my permission first.
Rating: R to NC-17
Disclaimer: BtVS characters, concepts and dialogue belong to Mutant Enemy, Fox, The WB, UPN and others.
Summary: Contemporary AU. Where demons wear human faces. Two lives drifted apart, can they find their missing half?
Notes: This will be long and angsty. It also changes direction more than once. I had planned for it to go in a certain direction, I didn't know it would go that far. Sometimes, stories have a mind of their own.


Part 40

Special Agent Winifred Burkle stepped off the Airbus A320 from Madrid briskly and made her way into the terminal with the single-mindedness of a woman on a mission.

"Will you please slow down?" her companion puffed as he tried to keep up with her, despite being a full head taller and with a longer stride.

She didn't look at him when she spoke. "Long haul flight too bumpy for you, Charles?" She didn't slow down.

Detective Charles Gunn gritted his teeth and tried to stretch his cramped calf muscles so he could walk in sync with his diminutive associate. "Ha ha ha. You didn't sit for 13 hours with your knees against your chest," he grumbled.

"I gave you the aisle seat."

"You're a real saint, Fred," he smirked.

She glanced at him sideways. "We're here on a case, Detective," she said solemnly, though one corner of her mouth twitched upwards in a private smile.

Gunn rolled his eyes. "Yeah, yeah. Don't mix business with pleasure. Well, it's kinda too late now, I have your number. I know you're not the ice queen you pretend to be."

Fred smiled gently. "You sneaked up on me. But we have to buckle up, there's work to be done."

They passed through security channels, with a little delay to process their weapons permits, and proceeded to the meeting area. They were expecting a car to be sent from the local police, but before they could get to their designated vehicle, they were accosted by a worried American.

"Oh thank god you finally got here. First the board said delayed and then it went blank and I thought the flight was canceled. I need your help, desperately." Gunn initially reacted to a hand gripping his arm the way he was trained — with force — but at the last moment held back as he saw who it was.

"Ms Rosenberg, what are you doing here?" he asked, falling one step back in amazement.

Willow continued as if she hadn't heard him. "We stopped the yacht from leaving. They would have gone ahead and be in the middle of the Mediterranean by now. And when they get to Albania ... they have Tara! You have to rescue her, Detective Gunn. I saw them take her, I couldn't do anything but watch," she sobbed.

Fred stepped in at that moment. "Ms Rosenberg —"

"Willow."

"Ah, Willow. Our car is here, why don't you come with us and tell us what happened?" she said, waving to their driver and ushering a clearly distraught and close-to-panic Willow inside.

The ride to their hotel was short, but those short minutes were filled with wonder as they heard how Willow and Tara watched the yacht all night and managed to disable it when it looked like it was about to get away. Though it was dangerous, and in the officers' opinion reckless, they were grateful for the assistance. What was extremely alarming was the news that Tara had been captured.

Fred immediately got on the phone with their local police liaison and diverted the car to the police headquarters. "Check-in can wait," she said, glancing quickly at Gunn who nodded his agreement. "I'm gonna check the progress with getting the search warrant. Working with a legal system we're familiar with is so much better. If they'd stopped somewhere in Africa ..." she shook her head.

"You think I was right? That they're heading for Albania?" Willow had recovered a little of her composure. Thoughts of Tara still filled her mind, but Agent Burkle's businesslike attitude and Detective Gunn's energy has given her hope.

"Yes," Fred smiled. "We may have deciphered the riddle at the same time. I was staring at a picture of Artina and Tirana jumped at me. It's one of those things that makes you go 'duh' once you figure it out."

"Great minds," Gunn smiled lightly.

"Good work," Fred added. "But promise me one thing, no more kamikaze stunts like the one you pulled with the rope. It's far too dangerous. Now I'm making you a temporary intern under my authority. You report to me and your personal safety is my concern."

Willow looked dazed and pleased. "Can you do that?"

Fred shrugged. "Let's worry about the legalese if we need to. You took the yacht out, that's brave enough for me. You didn't think you'd fail did you?"

"We didn't think about that. We saw it getting ready to leave and we had to do something," Willow said. Her thoughts turned to Tara, and how her lover looked when they parted. A small whimper escaped. "How soon can we get the warrant? I don't think I can stand it anymore. For all I know he's torturing her."

"We don't think he will do anything risky."

"But we pulled his whole life from under him, he may take it out on Tara. I think he'll blame her for betraying him."

Fred nodded in sympathy. "That may be true, but I need you to stay strong. You did most of our work for us, Willow. Now let us do our part. We'll get her out."

*****

Willow watched the officers readying themselves for the raid. Agent Burkle met up with the Commissioner of Police as well as the Commanding Officer of the Royal Navy Gibraltar Squadron stationed on the territory. She had services of the entire squad of 220 police officers and a navy patrol vessel at her disposal. "We don't take kindly to criminals abusing our hospitality. They'll be dealt with promptly," the Commissioner of Police declared.

The strike force was put together with stunning efficiency and before she knew it, she found herself in a briefing room at police headquarters. Agent Burkle requested her presence, and after hearing the tale of her single-handedly disabling the yacht, she earned nods of recognition from the officers.

The police chief conducted the briefing. Willow was impressed at the level of detail of his intelligence and briefly regretted not going to the local police directly that morning. Then she realized it was one thing acting on a request for assistance from the FBI and having a live eyewitness to an abduction; and another having two twenty-something tourists showing up at the police station with wild tales of evil deeds.

The operation was planned for dusk to take advantage of the changing light conditions. Willow cheered when the police chief told the group that the yacht had informed the harbormaster that its propeller shaft was broken and one of its engines had overheated. The yacht's captain was pushing for repairs to be conducted quickly and had filed for a departure time that afternoon. The shipyard in charge of repairs would be told by the police to delay completion of the work — it was a simple matter of claiming to need a part that needed to be ordered from the mainland.

"Special Branch will run this operation jointly with our navy colleagues. We assemble at 1800. At 1820, HMS Sabre will approach and dock alongside. Two assault teams will board and have the task of securing the yacht and incapacitating the suspects. Team Three will be responsible for hostage rescue. We don't expect the suspects to have time to mobilize a full-scale defense although we are expecting resistance. They are well armed. There is a risk that one of more of the hostages will be used as human shields, so shoot to disable only, troops," the commissioner's instructions were clear and concise.

He then introduced Fred and Gunn, turning the podium over to Fred to explain the layout of the yacht, present the latest satellite pictures and give a run-down of what to expect. The FBI had photos of most of Wilkins' staff — Faith, Luke and all the security people he had taken with him as well as the yacht's crew. The officers took their time to study the features of those they would have to apprehend. Most attention was placed on Wilkins himself.

"We suspect there are a number of stolen works of art onboard, so care should be taken not to flood or blow up the yacht," Fred scrolled through slides of the art that Wilkins had acquired through his scam. "Although in a situation where there is immediate threat, don't hesitate to act appropriately."

"We'll be careful where we toss our petro-bombs then," one of the officers joked, though not disrespectfully.

Fred smiled at the attempt to lighten up the atmosphere. "The hostages will thank you too, Officer."

"Yes, what about the hostages, Agent?" another officer asked.

"We have reason to believe he is holding three, possibly four hostages. Two we have identified through satellite photos and the third was abducted this morning. Ms Rosenberg over there," she nodded in Willow's direction. "witnessed the whole thing as well as disabled the vessel."

"You did well, Ms Rosenberg," the first officer said.

Willow acknowledged the praise with a slight nod, though hearing Tara being referred to as a 'hostage' made her heart run cold and she couldn't return the warmth shown by the officers.

Fred clicked on her remote control and brought up photos and descriptions of Lily, Hallie and Tara. She also showed a picture of Dawn Knudsen with a warning that they didn't know whether she was friend or foe. "We know she worked for Wilkins to forge a number of paintings. However, given her age and his treatment of two of his staff, we simply can't determine her status. Treat her as a hostile hostage for the time being. Detective Gunn and I will join Team Three, and we will take responsibility for her if necessary."

The briefing continued to logistics and technical aspects of the operation and Willow couldn't keep up. All of a sudden chairs were pushed back and the troops exited the briefing room en masse. She was left with Fred and Gunn.

While Fred was unplugging her laptop, Gunn came up to sit next to Willow. "How are you holding up, Willow?" he asked with genuine concern.

Willow remember the first time she met the detective, when Tara was in hospital, and how nice he was. Detective Lockley was reserved and impersonal, but Detective Gunn asked about Tara's health before launching a round of questioning. "I'm scared. But I trust the police to do their job. Are you going with them?"

"Yes, I'll be with Fr— Agent Burkle with the hostage retrieval team. Our focus is purely to get Tara and the others out," he said.

Willow shuddered. "Hostage retrieval, brrrrr, it sounds so harsh."

Gunn nodded in sympathy. "I know. Sometimes we police types have to distance ourselves from the case, but it doesn't mean we don't care," he said sincerely.

"I know. I trust you. Thanks for doing this." Willow was emotionally exhausted, and felt she was about to break apart. She knew she would lose her mind if the operation wasn't successful.

"It's my job," Gunn said. Fred was trying to catch his eye, and he pointed to the door to tell his associate that he would catch up. "Will you be okay for the next few hours? I know you'll want to be around when we set out on the patrol boat, and no one will deny you a spot at the dock. Try to get some rest? Should I call for a cab to take you back to the hotel?" he asked.

Willow paused. "Thanks. I'll be fine. I think I'll wander around the quayside for a little bit." At his warning look, "I know, stay out of sight of the yacht, don't risk being recognized."

"We'll make a junior FBI agent out of you yet, Willow," he smiled.

Willow watched him exit the room and sat there alone for a long interval. Her whole body ached, from the tension and from Tara's pointed absence. Her thoughts swung between physically painful ones of Tara suffering and faintly hopeful ones of being reunited with her lover. Recoiling from the turmoil, she fled the police station, desperate for air.

Please bring her back. I am nothing without her.

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Re: Lamplight

Postby SithLordWiccan » Fri Oct 05, 2007 5:47 pm

DIBS!

ETA: Hmm. I guess we took a little trip back in time, eh? Because this doesn't look like "all hell breaking loose." Just setting things up to have all hell break loose later on down the line. It's nice to know that our Willow's got friends out there that want to help her. God only knows what kind of emotional trouble she's in right now, and I really think that it's best for all concerned if everyone does their best to get them back together ASAP.

Since I'm on my "Transformers" kick ATM (what with the score to be released next week, a trio of comics having come out this week that I got, the movie itself coming out on DVD in two weeks, and with me going to see the IMAX release tomorrow), I want to make a comparsion with this scene and say it's like the scene near the start of the final act when all the good guys get together and headed out to do their thing, with the bad guys coming to get them all.

I should probably say that the last thirty minutes or so which follows that scene was the best action scene I've seen in a long time. If what follows in this fic is in any way similar, I'll be sure to give it the recognition it deserves when Fic Award season next comes round.

Congrats, watty. And keep it up. This is awesome.
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Re: Lamplight

Postby WillowRulez » Sat Oct 06, 2007 3:52 am

Ah, finally Willow isnt on her own anymore. I always liked Gunn so it's nice to see him being part of the story.
Detective Lockley was reserved and impersonal

Dead on hehe.
Can't wait for the rescue! Even though it probably means the end of this fic :(
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Re: Lamplight

Postby db » Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:28 pm

Fred and Gunn as the FBI agents is just too frikkin' perfect!

Heee... I hope they *do* recruit Willow. She's out of work, a great reasearcher and it might give her something to do.

This is so nerve wracking!

Can they save Tara now?

(please?)

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Re: Lamplight

Postby Chummy » Sun Oct 07, 2007 6:04 am

great update as always. Can't wait for some willowy action.
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Re: Lamplight

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Wed Oct 10, 2007 12:57 pm

Hello watty :)

Yay for Fred and Gun being here!
But I am pretty sure it will not be as simple as just acting. Otherwise you wouldn't have stopped there would you?

Plus it would mean that your fic is almost over... is it?

I suddenly want more angst so it will not be over >___<

But at the same time I don't want Tara to be an hostage anymore. How can you help me with that? lol

Thanks for your update... :)

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Re: Lamplight

Postby Tara the Phoenix » Wed Oct 10, 2007 1:06 pm

Greetings watty!

I am a newcomer to the KB and I have been furiously reading assorted works and working on my own. Your story struck me as being the most angst-filled story I've read yet (that would be more impressive if I'd read more than a dozen stories, but I'm working on it). It hurt my heart to see it take so long for Willow and Tara to get together, but what yummy awesomeness when they finally did!

Your story is compelling in the little details, the descriptions of Europe, the plot twists (rope around the propellers, indeed!), and, of course, the antics of our two leading ladies. Please keep the updates coming!

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Re: Lamplight

Postby watty » Fri Oct 12, 2007 10:15 pm

Alex -- yeah, we skipped backwards and forward in time to get all players to one point. Willow couldn't have done the rescuing by herself, she needed friends. Thanks, Alex.


WillowRulez -- yep, friends and professionals to the rescue. Yeah, we're at the end of the story. Thanks for your support throughout.


db -- you gotta admit Fred and Gunn are a good pairing. So yes, they save Tara now. Thanks dear.


chummy -- thanks!


Julia -- there's some action, some dialogue, some angst this chapter, don't worry. Thanks.


Tara the Phoenix -- hi and welcome to the KB! The most angst-filled story? Thanks. There are quite a few others, as you will probably discover. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks!

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Re: Lamplight

Postby watty » Fri Oct 12, 2007 10:16 pm

Title: Lamplight
Author: watty (hiddenwatson[at]gmail[dot]com)
Distribution: Chris and Susan have pre-approval. Anyone else please ask for my permission first.
Rating: R to NC-17
Disclaimer: BtVS characters, concepts and dialogue belong to Mutant Enemy, Fox, The WB, UPN and others.
Summary: Contemporary AU. Where demons wear human faces. Two lives drifted apart, can they find their missing half?
Notes: This will be long and angsty. It also changes direction more than once. I had planned for it to go in a certain direction, I didn't know it would go that far. Sometimes, stories have a mind of their own.


Part 41

Tara jumped when Wilkins slammed the door, feeling the bunk sway with the viciousness of the action. When the whole cabin lurched to one side and she almost fell off the bunk, she realized it was more than the door slamming.

She hadn't noticed the yacht moving off, so intent was her conversation with Wilkins. But now the yacht was rolling erratically from side to side, and she felt each stomach-turning roll inside her claustrophobic cell. The labored groans of the engines grew louder and she felt the vibrations stutter throughout the yacht.

It worked! I love you, Willow. You're a genius.

The engines gave a final sickening whine and stopped altogether. The silence buzzed around her, and she felt her emotions collide with elation and trepidation. She hoped that Willow didn't try anything impetuous. Like boarding the yacht herself. She pinned her hopes on Willow contacting either the police or waiting till Agent Burkle arrived. Now that the propellers and perhaps even the engine were damaged, there would be enough time for law enforcement to come up with a plan. She had to hold onto that hope.

The conversation with Wilkins scared her. He had given her proof of his wrongdoings, but the casual way he allowed her to question him suggested that he had no intention of allowing her to divulge that information to anyone. He had again stopped short of hitting her outright, but how long would his control last? She didn't want to be witness to his loss of temper.

She didn't know if he, or Luke or anyone would return. That was as frightening a thought as any. She searched the cabin for something that could be used to prop against the door, but all the furniture was bolted down. Every time footsteps came nearer her heart went to her throat and it was all she could do not to throw up. She was grateful she hadn't eaten for hours.

All she could do was wait.

The air grew stifling. Either due to the lack of air-conditioning, or the fact that she was in an enclosed space. She was also still wearing her wetsuit. She debated whether to remove it, but since all she had on underneath was her swimsuit, she decided not to. She didn't know what would happen in the next few hours but being in a swimsuit couldn't prepare her for any of the multitude of scenarios running rampant through her head.

She was so hot.

*****

Hours passed. She tried to sleep but every time she closed her eyes, she was overcome with the vertigo of fear. She was hot, drained and starving. Luckily the cabin had a small ensuite water closet but without adequate ventilation it was beginning to smell of soiled seawater.

She felt like she was drifting, suspended in some form of fugue limbo. She had long given up caring whether anyone would return to her cell. They could yell at her, hit her, prod her and she would not have felt a thing.

When it finally came it was a huge surprise. The yacht jerked, like it had run into an iceberg or been hit by a large rock. Then it was like a battalion of elephants was running through the yacht. Bangs and yells were followed by the rapid fire of gunshots.

They were either being rescued or invaded.

The shouting and stampeding grew near, and her mind was alert now. But she knew she couldn't relax. With her remaining strength she flipped the thin mattress and squeezed behind it in a make-shift shield.

Then she returned to waiting.

It was only minutes yet it felt like an eternity. The smoky smell of ammunition drifted through, and she absently wondered how her wetsuit would fare against bullets. Not very well, she thought.

She heard the crackle of a radio, then a clipped English voice. "Check each door carefully. There may be suspects on the loose."

She followed their progress closer and closer to her cell. And then they were outside hers. She could hear their breathing, she could smell their sweat. A rattle of the handle, then silence. A few seconds later a splintering sound as the door was kicked open.

Sounds of clothes rustling. Heavy footsteps. When a gloved hand turned over the mattress and all she could see was a sinister gas mask, she started screaming.

*****

Willow watched the police strike force file past her one by one and board the patrol boat silently. She turned and scrambled on the plank.

A firm hand landed on her shoulder. "Willow, we can't take you," Detective Gunn said.

She eyed his bulletproof vest and ammo pouch and assault rifle. "I'll stay on the navy boat. Please, I have to go," she pleaded.

His grip on her shoulder was unrelenting. "It's too dangerous," he explained.

"Why? The navy will protect me," she argued, trying to shrug him off.

She could see the flint in his eyes. "It's too close to the action. You'll be a distraction, I'm sorry."

Intellectually she knew he was right. But Tara was so close, she needed to be in place when they found her. Her shoulders slumped in defeat and she stepped back to the quay.

He jumped onto the patrol boat and it was on its way. He turned and gave her a thumbs up.

She watched as it moved off and quickly made its way across the bay toward its target. The darkening shadows of sunset gave it a modicum of cover, even though the officers weren't relying entirely on stealth.

She pulled her arms around her middle, and waited.

"Hell of a day."

She jumped as a vaguely familiar voice rang out by her side. "Faith! Shit!"

She tried to run but the girl seized her arm and held it strongly. "Nice and easy, Red. Just old friends running into each other while on vacation," Faith said sedately.

Willow was silent, her mind churning.

"Well, looks like you and blondie has it all wrapped up. I swear, I thought his veins would pop out," Faith continued conversationally.

"What do you want, Faith? It's over. Look over there, the police will be there in a minute," Willow said. It occurred to her that Faith might already have alerted to yacht, so she had to try to keep the girl occupied for as long as possible. "Even if you told them, they're no match for the law."

"What makes you think I called it in?"

Willow was taken aback, and finally managed to yank her arm out of Faith's grip. Faith made no effort to grab her again. "You mean you didn't? Your precious boss?"

Faith snorted. "He sent me up here to search for you, but I saw you walk out of the station house with the Terminator army. I never finished high school but I ain't stupid. I know when it's time to cut my losses."

Willow laughed. "He sure knows how to pick his staff. Talk about undying loyalty."

"Un-dying being the operative word. At least I know I can trust my own people."

"The Albanians?" Willow took a chance to ask. She had nothing to lose, and Faith didn't seem to see her as a threat.

Faith smirked. "I can see why blondie gets wet thinking about you. You're one smart cookie."

Willow didn't say anything.

"Well, my ride's here. I'd say goodbye but I don't mean it. Don't intend to see you or blondie ever again." And with that, Faith vaulted over the dockside fence and into a speedboat that had just pulled alongside. A roar later and she was gone.

*****

That conversation took only five minutes, and by the time Faith disappeared the patrol boat had reached the yacht and members of the strike force were jumping onto the larger boat. Willow was amazed at the difference in size, the yacht was almost three times the length of the patrol boat, although with guns and a Royal Navy emblem the patrol boat exuded its own power.

As expected there was resistance and Wilkins' men rushed on deck to meet their attackers. But the professionalism of the police force prevailed and Wilkins' men lost the fight very quickly. Officers from the navy helped guard the arrested while the three assault teams continued below deck.

A few minutes later scattered gunshots could be heard. Willow started praying that none of the hostage were caught in the fire. No. Don't go there.

All the action was inside now and she couldn't tell what was going on. A loud bang, hoarse shouts and even more gunshots rang out. A crowd had started to gather on the dock to witness the commotion.

Where are you?

Eventually all was quiet and shortly afterwards officers started appearing, escorting figures wrapped in gray blankets. She tried to see the faces underneath the blankets but the yacht was too far away to afford a clear view. Someone whose size suggested Luke. A small frail figure who needed to be helped onto the patrol boat, Aunt Hallie perhaps. More unknown shapes. Some being stretchered off. Several limping uniformed figures of the strike force. A medium-sized figure walking stiffly, with two officers either side and a third walking behind holding his weapon tightly. Must be Wilkins.

No sign of Tara.

"Come on, come on," she heard herself repeating.

And finally a tall officer emerged, carrying someone in his arms. The gray blanket obscured her view, but she knew. She knew. Why couldn't Tara walk by herself? Was she hurt? She wasn't moving. What was the matter with her?

It was a long, excruciating wait for the patrol boat to return, but it finally did.

The journey across the bay took only a few minutes and as the boat drew nearer, Willow had to stop herself from jumping into the water and swimming up. She couldn't see Tara, in the sea of faces lining the deck of the boat, an interesting alternation of blue uniforms and gray blankets.

She had to crane her neck to see the boat land, such was the crowd of onlookers who had gathered. Several officers made their way onto the quayside and started herding the crowd to make a passageway for the passengers.

She looked and looked.

And then they saw each other.

Tara looked so tired, but blue eyes lit up when they met hers.

"Tara!" she tried to shout, but no sound came out.

Like a beacon, Tara called out to her and she pushed her way through the crowd. Tara had by then been helped off the boat and she too was struggling through the solid wall of people.

One step closer. Two. Three.

Nothing, nobody would get in their way.

And then they were. With an unrestrained whoop of joy, Willow picked Tara up and spun her around in a tight circle. It didn't matter that they were squashed within an unforgiving sea of people, when lips crashed together it was the feel, the sight, the smell and the taste of home.

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Re: Lamplight

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Sat Oct 13, 2007 2:14 am

Awww! Dibs?

:-D

They are together and Wilkins has been arrested but! There is Faith on a run away.... Does it means it is not over?

This update was good ^^ ok I say this each times. But it was nice. And it ends so well ^^

Thanks :)

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Re: Lamplight

Postby WillowRulez » Sat Oct 13, 2007 5:10 am

Very good description of Tara in "despair".
Sounds of clothes rustling. Heavy footsteps. When a gloved hand turned over the mattress and all she could see was a sinister gas mask, she started screaming.

"Faith! Shit!"

I knew it was a bad idea to leave Willow fending for her own. Stupid agents. But of course Faith wouldnt dare trying anything.
And they are reunited! :pinky
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Re: Lamplight

Postby SithLordWiccan » Sat Oct 13, 2007 7:45 am

Damn. I really wanted to get Double Dibs.

watty wrote:She was so hot.


In any other sort of situation, that quote would elicit more than its fair share of innuendo, but all things considered, I was more concerned about Tara's emotional well being than I was about her overall hotness (in terms of looks, if not comfort). Having known from canon how much of an emotional wreck she can be when things go wrong, it was really painful to see her, and Willow to a slightly less degree, go through the ringer so to speak in this chapter, each going through so much in the hopes that they'll see each other again.

Thank all Gods, both real and ficitonal, that Fred, Gunn and their crew were able to rescue Tara and the others. Now hopefully we can make with the smootchies? Please?

Great job, watty. I get the feeling the next chapter is the last. If it is, sorry once again for coming onboard as late as I did. But at least I managed to get here in time for the good stuff.
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Re: Lamplight

Postby db » Sat Oct 13, 2007 9:12 am

Spectacular update! You get me so enthused for this story with your descriptive descriptiveness! Sweaty scared stifling-room captive Tara, Faith's menacing nonchalance, Willow's anxious agitation... and *sigh* the wonderful reuniting!

Ack - Tara on the boat with the gas mask. Don't like to think of her as so scared :-(.

Now I want to know if Lily and Aunt Hallie are ok? Will they get a reward and be able to live without working and be rich philanthropists? What about Faith and Albania? Someone needs to track that cocky b*tch down and arrest her. She broke Tara's arm and must be punished! Plus, I don't like her thinking about Tara being wet. Those thoughts are for Willow only (ok,and maybe me :blush ).
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Re: Lamplight

Postby sacinema » Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:17 am

Hi Watty,

sorry, sorry, for never leaving FB on the last chapters. I'm really behind with my comments. But I did enjoy everyone of them very much.

This is a ride for our girls. Coming from a small town in California they made it over New York, to Switzerland and Gibraltar. Were are they going next to Kuala Lumpur? I really loved the closeness and the healing aspect of Switzerland. They needed that. And they are a real couple now. The walls - especially Tara's - have fallen down in the end. That's nice and a wonderful way your story has been told.

I'm glad in the end everything turned to be okay for them and everybody envolved. But I wasn't sure from the beginning if the whole we interfere and mess with the bad guys was such a good idea. It could have come with a bigger prize for them. It was dangerous and risky to even contact Wesley. It was dangerous and risky for Aunt Hallie to help. And the stunt with the rope was definitely dangerous and risky. But in the end it work and this is all what matters. I hope everyone else is ok too.

What will happen to Tara now? She has her signature under a lot of documents. I hope this will not coming back to her. Maybe smart ass Willow has to do something again?

Willow is one fine woman. We seldom see her in action like we saw her in your fic for instance pulling the robe. Action Willow is definitely a picture I do like a lot. Okay I admit I'm a Willow addict.

My sence of justice and revenge wasn't satisfied with Faith not being punished for violating Tara. But I loved the short discussion between her and Willow and I loved the fact that she didn't warn her boss. The albanian reference was hilarious. So is she going back there?

Thanks for this wonderful story, the wonderful updates I didn't leave a comment and thanks for the wonderful update yesterday. I can't wait for the next one.

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