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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 24 Oct)

Postby Alcy » Thu Oct 25, 2007 2:15 pm

JustSkipIt: Wow Deb, when you’re not sure when you can find the time to leave feedback…you sure leave an awful lot of it!
Although I’m sometimes impatient enough to think ‘how can I get from here to there believably and as quickly as possible,’ it never seems to play out like that, I tend to get carried away fleshing things out and delivering too much detail (It’s why I can never write short stories!)
Both the descriptions of Tara’s abuse at the hands of Edward Walsh have been brief and reveal little but it’s enough that our minds can imagine what happened to her and feel the revulsion and hatred that goes along with this.
I don’t think Faith herself knows who she is more hurt by, her lover or her best friend, but I think their combined betrayals (or in Willow’s case supposed betrayal) creates a deeper bitterness within her mind.
I’m glad you noticed the difference in tone between Tara’s entries and Willow’s, while Tara’s did get darker towards the end, Willow’s start off with her pouring all her hate and pain out onto the pages, she can’t commit suicide, so this is her outlet. In later chapters we will see her find her real outlet, one which grants her the satisfaction that perhaps writing never could.
You know, of all the things that I worry about happening if I were hit by a bus or something, leaving an unfinished fic is one of the main ones! There is a complete outline of the story and I’m sure Mrs Alcy would be able to overcome her forum posting inhibitions to be able to put you all at ease! But I’m very vigilant and I watch carefully for buses!
You do earn the title for understatement of the day with ‘strange happenings,’ but I’m pleased to say that as little as you know about Willow Van Helsing at this point in the story, you’ll know much more with the coming chapters, leading up to why she was at Covasna.
Thanks so much for your thoughtful and inspiring comments

dlline: Yes! *Grins triumphantly* I did stop there, I’m mean and nasty but of course I was going to stop there! It’s a rule…when someone gets sucked into an enchanted mirror; it means the end of the chapter!
Yeah, Faith’s response was pretty heated, but I think it comes from being a passionate person who’s so used to being in control. Now she has very little control, and almost no knowledge, her best friend almost died and her lover isn’t trusting her…I think that might explain her bitter outburst, if not justify it.
Yup, Willow’s gone and it’s all very cool…if you can’t tell, I’m having a lot of fun writing this fic…and the fun just keeps on coming! Thanks as always for your comments!

Zooey’s Bridge: I’m all for evil cliffhangers, in fact, I love them! You are very right in that the next chapter will be difficult for Willow for many reasons.
Yup, Edward Walsh is a bastard, even though we have seen very little of him throughout the story, the little glimpses that are given are usually traumatic and involve him hurting Tara and taking her away from Willow…so yes, I’m not surprised such a horrible picture of him has been built up in relatively few words.

Wimpy0729: I hope you’ve still got some nails left! Glad you enjoyed the opening, it was fun to write and it’s great that no one cares that she lied to Angelus and turned him into BBQ’ed vamp.
Yup, Tara’s entries weren’t the last in the diary, we’ll getto see Willow Van Helsing’s perspective next…but not in quite the same way as we saw Tara’s story, I hope it works out okay.

Belli Bear: Hi there belli, I was somewhat worried that you would pass out from over exertion but I hope your questions will be answered in the next update, thanks for your enthusiasm!

JuJuDeRoussie: hi there Julia, I’m glad you enjoyed the return of the diary, it was great fun for me to write in the first person again.
I’m sure we would have all liked Angelus to get tortured just a little bit, because he was rather nasty, but I liked the surprise of killing him quickly as Tara broke her promise.
I agree, why is it that people in scary movies always go where they shouldn’t, into the dark places etc, they should know that something always jumps out from the shadows! In Willow’s case it was very necessary for her to get taken through the mirror, I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

WolfDragonGod: Hi there, thanks very much, hopefully what happens next is just as exciting

WillowRulez: Yes, we’re all still confused by what Tara is! Angelus was indeed unlikeable and his ending was most satisfactory.
The extent of Faith’s feelings for Willow is unclear but suffice to say they run deep and as much I hope her emotional involvement with everything that is going on around Willow is believable.
I’m glad that you commented on the point that Tara would also have had suicidal feelings, I think it is in her desire to keep living that we see her real strength. Even though Willow is apparently the stronger of the two, it is Tara who made the vital decision to keep Willow safe even if it meant an awful cost to herself.
You’ll find out what happens inside the mirror in the next chapter!

Zampsa1975: Yes, I wasn’t surprised that I didn’t hear any cries of outrage for killing off Angelus, he was a nasty piece of work.

So now Willow Rosenberg truly is Willow Van Helsing


Very nicely and succinctly put!

diamondforever: Glad to see you’re excited about where this is going, I really hope that readers will enjoy the next part of the story as it will answer some questions and give you a chance to meet a main character that you know so little about. I’m pleased that things are going well enough for me to deliver regular updates, I hope to keep them coming!

LittleBit: It was a very good place to stop! But I do of course realise that it was very evil of me and I hope to have the next chapter posted as soon as possible to save everyone from tearing their hair out in suspense and so you can find out where Willow is.

Stay tuned shortly for Chapter 14 - Black Paint
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 24 Oct)

Postby db » Thu Oct 25, 2007 5:24 pm

Well. Crapola.

I have gone and missed loooooooooots of updates. Not sure where I was. Things are a bit crazy for me...

Anyway... I must be brief, but I am so *glad* to see that you are writing a current story that I had to wave hello and give you two thumbs up.

Loved the drunk Willow and Tara's big-hearted and gallant refusal to take advantage... and the interaction on the fields of Cosav-awassis with Angel smacking Willow onto the rusty blade and Tara bursting into tears and all the angst. Whoa. I really thought Willow wasn't going to make it for a bit there and was thinking that Tara would have to turn her in order to save her (thanks for pulling her through). Speaking of pulling through -- magic mirror indeed! Eeep! Where oh where has our Willow gone? Where or when can she be?

Also - I am intrigued by Tara's still beating heart. What is she? Who is she?

Oh, yeah, and Tara totally kicked Angel's arrogant self serving ass! Whee to that.

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 24 Oct)

Postby what_we_do_is_secret » Fri Oct 26, 2007 5:08 pm

hey, kinda new to this whole thing but just wanted to say this a frakin wicked fic and i want more! i love willow having two diferent lives and am totaly engrossed by the whole myth thing with vlad and willow dyin in that field, it just aches of romatiscism and wtf is going on with tara, i just can't figure some stuff out which is fucking great i tell ya. now i'm just impatient for more updates cus i read the first 6 pages so fast
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 24 Oct)

Postby Alcy » Sun Oct 28, 2007 11:56 am

db: Things being crazy is definitely understandable, I think we all get a bit like that but thanks for finding the time to stop by and catch up!
Yep, things are getting a little exciting in the fic at the moment, there’s lots going on and we’re about to move into a different part of the story which should give you some more answers!

what we do is secret: Hi there, a very warm welcome to the Kitten and thanks so much for stopping by to read Van Rosenberg and letting me know that you’re enjoying the mystery, I hope you don’t mind having to wait for the updates but I do update pretty fast so it’s not too long to wait.

Chapter 14 is just about ready to roll Kittens, I’ll post it shortly!
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 24 Oct)

Postby Alcy » Sun Oct 28, 2007 11:59 am

CHAPTER 14 – Black Paint


August 1779…

Willow sat staring at the easel standing in front of her; she looked back and forth between the black-dipped paintbrush in her own hand and the single piece of thick paper taped to the surface of the easel. She moved as though in slow motion, replacing the brush on the lip of the easel and studying the half-completed painting sitting in front of her. Thick lines of black paint criss-crossed the surface and formed no discernable image nor followed any set pattern. A small frown marred her features as stared at the painting, there was something not right…not about the painting, but about everything. Willow glanced down at her hands, turning them over as though studying them but they seemed to be her hands. She smoothed her palms over the fabric that covered her legs and gripped it as though to confirm what she touched was real. Even as she was trying to put her finger on what was out of place, she heard heavy footsteps echoing on the wooden floorboards behind her, she swivelled on her ottoman to see a tall red-haired young man, handsomely attired in full military dress, stride into the room. She felt her entire body relax at the mere sight of him…Abraham.

Abraham smiled at the sight of his sister painting, a lonely figure in an almost bare room. Besides Willow’s easel and ottoman, there was just one other chair and a small table. This made the room seem large, and his sister exceptionally small and fragile indeed. He was however pleased to see that she was finally wearing a colour besides black. Today she was wearing one of her favourites; a handsome light green day dress with embroidered sleeves. A patterned shawl rested on her elbows despite the warm sun filtering through the window panes. He crossed the room to where she sat next to the window in just a few powerful steps and stopped to press a tender kiss to the top of her head. He then placed a hand on her shoulder and stepped back to admire her masterpiece.

“If I might be forthright, I would say that this is not your finest work,” he commented, trying to inject an element of humour into his voice,

“Looking for an insight into my tortured mind, dear brother?” Willow replied in a voice that would brook no nonsense.

Abraham did not press the issue with any further comment about her artwork as Willow made it clear that she would not be baited by his taunts. He turned to drag the unoccupied chair behind him a little closer so he could sit at Willow’s side, his knee resting lightly against her own.

“Where are my manners,” Willow chided herself as set the brush down and swivelled in her chair, she reached out and briefly laid her hand on his thigh, “Welcome…home…”

“Thank you…although it doesn’t really seem like home yet does it?” Abraham glanced around at the depressingly bare room, “Still, Hagley Park is empty of our things and ready for its new occupants…I should imagine that the new furniture I have ordered from in town will be arriving within the month.”

“We’ll have some new artwork for the walls at least,” Willow commented with a nod towards her painting, finally allowing Abraham’s infectious good humour to win her over slightly.

Abraham raised his eyebrows, “Please do not hang that, Willow.”

Willow nodded seriously rather than take offence, “Yes, it is rather depressing isn’t it?”

“Depressing? It’s downright dull,” Abraham noted bluntly.

Willow glanced down in her lap, absently stroking the dried black paint that covered her fingers and hands. When she returned her gaze to Abraham’s face, any trace of amusement was gone once more. He sighed and reached out to cup her cheek with his sword-calloused hand. She leaned into the touch, closing her eyes.

“I wish you to smile again, Willow, “he whispered tenderly, “I have very little memory of mother, but when you smile I can see her as if she were alive just yesterday.”

Willow endeavoured to do her best for her brother but the awkward twitch of her lips could not be labelled a smile by any stretch of the imagination. With another quick squeeze of his knee, she faced her painting once more. She retrieved her brush, scooped up a liberal amount of black paint, and resumed applying it studiously onto the canvas as though there was a great deal of thought behind each stroke.

Abraham was content to watch Willow paint and brother and sister sat companionably in silence for several minutes. However, he had hurried home with the express intent of passing on a vital piece of news…news he knew Willow would want to hear but at the same time, it was news he never wanted to have to give her. He had managed to conceal the grief he felt from her throughout their initial greeting but as the time passed, he knew he could delay no longer or risk her hearing a choked sob burst forth from his lips. Such an outburst would no doubt make his task more difficult than it already was.

He waited for a pause in her painting efforts; it came as she leant back slightly to study her work with a thoughtful expression. However, after cocking her head to one side and sticking out the tip of her pink tongue she made such an adorable picture that Abraham could not bring himself to tell her. He dragged a trembling hand through his hair. Just a moment later, Willow spun around as though she were about to ask him something. She paused as though seeing something in his expression and her adorable expression was ruined by a frown.

“You look decidedly ill…whatever is the matter, Abraham?”

Willow was scared, in all her nineteen years she had never seen her brother as close to tears as he was now. Abraham was her rock, the one person in her life whom she could always count upon no matter what. She quickly replaced her brush on the lip of easel and turned to face him, trembling with the thought of what he would tell her…whatever it was that had rendered him so upset, it was grim news.

“A-Abraham,” Willow prodded hesitantly.

He looked away as though he could not face her gaze, his strong shoulders stooping beneath a tremendous weight. Moments later he felt a slight pressure on his knee and he looked back once more to see Willow’s small hand resting there, her skin white. With a pained smile he reached out and picked it up, squeezing the trembling fingers between his own.

“I have just come from the Tovey’s…Mrs Tovey as you well know is a confidant of Amelia Walsh, Edward’s mother,” Abraham breathed in deeply and exhaled shakily, “Apparently Edward returned from his wedding tour yesterday evening…”

“The Walsh’s are back?” Willow was quick to interrupt, instantly forgetting her vow to avoid Tara at all costs when faced with the prospect of being able to see her again, “Abraham, dear brother, please do not hold back, did she say anything at all about her?”

All Willow’s vows and admonitions to herself counted for naught in the face of news about Tara. She had scooted forward on her ottoman, close enough to Abraham to reach out and seize both his hands in her own.

“As a matter of fact…” he began, trying to keep himself steady as he stared into his sister’s searching, longing gaze, “She did.”

Willow’s first instinct was to feel an inkling of hope at the prospect of news about Tara, good or bad, however her hope quickly faded to anguish as she saw Abraham’s struggle to control himself. She knew at that moment that the news went beyond just reporting that the married couple had returned, which in itself was enough to upset her, and into the realm of heartbreak.

Abraham shifted his hands so it was he who was holding her delicate fingers, he squeezed them firmly, “My dearest sister, I do not begin to know any of the details…but something horrible happened in Austria…people are saying it was a tragedy…all I know is…”

Abraham’s composure finally broke and a single sob escaped his lips. It was smothered almost as quickly as it emerged but to hear it coming from her ordinarily unflappable brother was more than enough for Willow, she found herself choking back tears of her own.

“All I know is, Tara is dead,” Abraham managed to finish quickly, his words tumbling over one another in his haste to get them out.

Despite the haste at which he said them, Willow clearly heard Abraham’s words, especially the last three…

Tara is dead, Willow rolled the words over and over within her mind as though she were trying to make sense of them, Tara is dead…Tara is dead… Her thoughts then immediately ran to the complete lack of information as the main reason for her inability to comprehend those words, Tara is dead…how is Tara dead? Tara was killed in an accident? Tara died of an illness, Tara was murdered…? No…Tara’s not dead, it’s impossible…

“No,” Willow heard herself whisper the word unconsciously, as if saying the word itself would somehow negate the validity of Abraham’s information.

“I know how immensely dreadful this must be for you, dear sister,” Abraham continued to hold her hands, gripping so tightly her fingers were beginning to turn white, “and I want nothing more than to find out more information for you. It is imperative that I attend to some affairs with the bank before it closes…but as soon as I am done we will go together to the Walsh’s. Willow, please promise me you will wait until I have returned and we might call upon Edward …to offer our sympathies?”

He was immensely distressed by the awful pallor to her cheeks and blank stare. Her reply to his plea distressed him even further, she did not rant or rave or protest against his decision, she merely nodded with her lips set into a tight line. He knew that he should not leave her in such a state, but he could not avoid his business. Abraham stood and deposited a gentle kiss on the top of his sister’s head. She did not respond in any way, even when he left the room.

Willow glanced towards the door only when Abraham had stepped out. She sat on the edge of her ottoman, still struggling to comprehend the meaning behind the news. Even though she knew it was relatively straightforward, a myriad of questions were demanding answers in her mind. In her confusion, she could not find the space inside her head to be upset, all she could do was sit and stare as she waited for the information to process.

Less than a minute after Abraham had departed, one of the parlour maids stepped quietly into the room and remained standing just to the right of the door. Willow wondered whether she was on suicide watch or merely there to make sure she did not try and leave the room. As her confusion slowly gave way to anger, Willow’s nostrils flared with her indignation at being dictated to by her brother. She was not a child; she did not require a nursemaid every second of every day.

Seething inwardly, Willow turned her back on the door and instead stared at her unfinished painting. She lost herself in the swirl of black lines that went nowhere and everywhere at the same time. It was as though she had created a maze for which there was no solution, a perfect analogy for her tortured mind.

Willow could not tell how long she sat staring at the painting, she could only tell that she had lost track of time as the sunlight moved across the bare floorboards. However, she had not been idling wasting her time, she had been thinking and now she knew exactly what it was she had to do. Willow stood, feeling her muscles protest at the abruptness of her movement. She stared at the painting one last time and all of a sudden realised that she hated it. With an angry swipe, she knocked her jar of black paint from the table. It hit the ground with a glassy clatter and the thick liquid erupted out across the floorboards in a great black wave. Impassively, Willow watched the black paint spread outwards, it was exactly how she felt with the darkness of hate and anger spreading throughout her body. She was ruined and stained.

When Willow turned around the parlour maid was standing directly behind her. The startled young girl had been staring at the spilled paint but now she ducked her head in a quick curtsey.

“Can I make you some tea, Miss Van Helsing?” the girl offered quickly, her cheeks reddening as a result of Willow’s uncomfortable stare.

“Do you enjoy working in this house, Nancy?” Willow asked coldly, ignoring the offer.

Nancy glanced up with a puzzled expression on her face at the usual behaviour of her mistress, “Y-yes Miss Van Helsing, of course.”

“Then I suggest if you want to keep your job, you will let me walk out that door and you will not breathe a word to anyone else that I intend to go out,” Willow continued, surprising herself with her iron-like tone.

The poor girl was obviously terrified; she could not open her mouth to form a reply and managed only a hasty nod. Barely waiting for her answer, Willow glided from the room, her steps firm with purpose.

Several minutes later, Willow was entering her carriage. The coachman, obviously having missed any message from Abraham to keep her in the house, could not agree to the curt demands of his young mistress fast enough. He was already spurring his horses forward before she had even closed the door behind her.

~~~~~~

The decanter shook violently against the rim of the glass, sending most of the liquid sloshing onto the lace cloth beneath it. Even before he set down the decanter with a heavy thud, his fingers were already wrapping around the glass. With quick movements he lifted the glass to his lips, threw back his head and drained it in one gulp. The burning he felt in his throat and the warmth in his gut did nothing to dull the raw panic he felt coursing throughout his body. He poured a second measure, even larger than the first and sent this in the same direction. He was struggling to pour his third when he heard footsteps echo on the floorboards at his back, he slammed down the decanter and gripped the edge of the buffet table with both hands.

“How many times have I told you, mother!” he growled, slamming one clenched fist down so hard his glass jumped and fell to the floor, smashing instantly, “Leave me alone…there was nothing I could have done!”

“I’m not your mother,” was the cold reply, “And I have no intention of leaving you alone until I have some answers.”

He immediately straightened at the sound of a familiar voice but he remained facing the wall until he had smoothed his dishevelled clothing with his sweaty palms. When he did turn around he snorted back an inappropriate laugh at the sight of the small woman standing in front of him.

“Edward Walsh,” she breathed in a monotone.

“Willow Van Helsing,” his reply was high-pitched, almost nervous.

Edward had to admit that the past few months had not been kind to the young woman. She still had a beauty all of her own but her skin was taut over her bones, devoid of any colour save for the smattering of freckles over the bridge of her nose. Deep shadows hung beneath her dull green eyes, lending her a haunted air. What little skin he could see beneath her dress was also of a pale hue and her usually vibrant red hair was bound into a taut knot at the nape of her neck. She was the last person he wanted to lay eyes on. He knew exactly what she wanted, he would have to explain to her what had happened, someone who actually gave a damn about his dead wife as opposed to what everyone else seemed to care about, the family’s reputation.

“How did you get in here?” Edward licked his dry lips, he desperately needed at least one more drink to deal with this woman.

“I shot the butler,” Willow replied simply.

Edward launched into an uncontrolled cackle so violent his entire body shook, he could not imagine the tiny woman in front of him holding a gun, let alone loosing one off…and he had heard no shot ring throughout the house.

With a smooth, almost practised motion, Willow withdrew a pistol she had ‘borrowed’ from Abraham from the pocket in her skirt. Her arm was steady as she levelled the weapon directly at Edward Walsh’s head, still shaking with laughter. He stopped almost immediately and his beady dark eyes widened in fear. Willow’s own eyes were steely with her resolve.

“Make no mistake Mr Walsh,” Willow said in a slow, dangerous tone. “I have no qualms whatsoever about rendering your ugly face even uglier…and from this range I cannot possibly miss. You will tell me the truth of what happened to Tara…minus any lies you may be tempted to tell.”

“I always thought you were insane,” he replied, not at all impressed at being forced to stare down the barrel of a pistol, especially wielded by a woman.

“Are you trying to anger me?” Willow said as she slowly pulled back the lever on the pistol with her thumb; after it locked into the firing position, there no other sound in the room save for Edward’s hoarse breathing.

The fully cocked pistol was starting to have its intended effect, his eyes remained wide, his lip trembling uncontrollably,” You’re serious in this madness?”

“I’m deadly serious you arrogant bastard.”

“It’s simple!” he spluttered desperately, “She was a poor rider, she fell from her horse and broke her neck…it was all over very quickly.”

“I said no lies, Mr Walsh!” Willow bellowed, her voice echoing throughout the room, “Tara was an accomplished rider…I know it was not an accident, now tell the truth, my finger is growing tired.”

Even in her fury, Willow could still watch the play of emotions across Edward’s face. Behind his own fear lay a definite anger, anger at being intruded upon in his own home by a woman he hated and forced to explain something he was trying to forget. Willow couldn’t care less about how he was feeling, all she wanted was the truth and she was willing to go to any lengths to get it.

“If you lower that pistol I promise I’ll tell you everything…just get it out of my face!” Edward’s fear was beginning to dissipate; he spoke in a low tone that belied just how dangerous he was.

Willow lowered the pistol but keep it at her side in a firm grip, “Speak.”

Edward did not reply immediately, instead he turned his back on Willow and crossed back to the alcohol sitting on the table behind him. He stared down at the pieces of glass lying in a pool of liquid on the floor; it was as if he just remembered smashing the glass.

“It was two months into our wedding tour…we were in Austria, a remote lakeside resort, Tara and I had a…disagreement,” Edward paused and kicked at the largest piece of broken glass with the toe of his boot, “If I have to say one thing about her, I would say she was spirited…”

Willow’s mouth was set into a tight line, she had to fight to keep the pistol at her side and not level at his head. She could read into his pithy words and deduce exactly what had happened, she knew the layers of meaning hidden beneath the word ‘disagreement’ and felt both sick and furious. By the tone of his voice, the set of his shoulders and his cruel disposition, she knew the disagreement had been far more than mere words. It almost broke her then and there to imagine the hell Tara had gone through…and all to keep her safe. With tremendous willpower, Willow regained the control she needed to see herself through.

Edward continued, “Tara left our hotel room and ran out into the night, I gave her a few moments to cool off before my footman and I went after her…by the time we found her it was already too late.”

“Too late for what?” Willow asked, her voice tight, her knuckles white as she gripped the pistol.

When he turned around to face Willow his face was as pale as marble, his lips almost as white as his teeth as he bared them in an awful smile, “What do you think…she ran off alone into the night in a foreign country! We found her lying face down in a small copse of trees, when my footman touched her to roll her over he found her as cold as ice, he turned her over, I’ll never forget those sightless eyes staring up at me, lips parted as though she had been screaming when she died…and indeed she had, a terrified shepherd heard her screams but when questioned all he would say was the word ‘vampyre,’ over and over again.”

The word obviously meant nothing to Edward, dismissing It as some local dialect. Willow could only hear the violence in Edward’s tale and her heart ached for what Tara must have suffered.

“She was…” Willow had to pause and draw a deep breath lest she faint, “She was attacked?”

Edward shrugged, “In a manner of speaking I suppose, there were no marks on her save two puncture marks on her neck…the sight of them terrified the locals when they came to retrieve her body and they buried her almost as fast as a priest could be found to speak over her grave.”

A cold shiver ran throughout Willow’s entire body at the thought of Tara being shoved hastily and unceremoniously into a plain wooden box before being covered over with the cold earth of a country so far away. She closed her eyes, squeezing them tightly to combat the tears that threatened to slide down her cheeks. She immediately heard Edward’s feet shuffle across the floor towards her but a split second later her eyes shot open and she lifted the pistol. He stopped a mere few feet away from her, his hands going into the air as if in surrender. Willow itched to pull the trigger and blow the smug smile from his face.

“Look at you, the little lover…it’s disgusting and immoral that’s what it is, you corrupted her beyond the point of redemption,” Edward snarled, taunting her with his words, “She died violently and her rest was short…the next day her grave was torn open and her body gone, that’s what happens to whores who flout the natural order of things by fucking other women…she was punished even in death!”

It took every ounce of control Willow possessed to hold herself together, on the outside she was as impassive as marble with only the firm set of her lip betraying the utter turmoil that lay within. She could feel herself falling apart, about to explode into a thousand pieces…inside she was screaming.

“How do I know this isn’t some story you concocted?” Willow demanded, even though somehow she could sense that he was telling the truth she knew he was the type of man capable of anything, “How do I know you didn’t kill her?”

Edward snorted, “What do you take me for, Miss Van Helsing? I am a gentleman, not a murderer. I never wanted Tara dead; you forget I loved her once…before you took her away from me she was destined to be mine! I still wanted her, even after what passed between the two of you, but I wanted to possess her, to make her spend an entire lifetime as my woman…no, killing Tara would be the last thing I would ever do, I wanted to prolong her suffering!”

“You wanted to prolong her suffering?” Willow repeated in a dangerous voice, the pistol suddenly grew very heavy in her hand and Edward’s forehead was right in front of her, “You wanted to make her suffer...and you call me disgusting?”

Willow felt all the rage inside her body bubble to the surface; she felt absolutely no sense of remorse as she squeezed the trigger. At precisely the same moment that the gun discharged in her hand, Willow felt a solid shape shove her to one side. When the smoke cleared from her eyes she saw Edward Walsh still standing in front of her but looking over his shoulder at a jagged hole in the wall. Willow growled in frustration and tried to spring forward only to find her arms pinned behind her back.

When Edward spun around he saw Abraham Van Helsing restraining his struggling sister. Willow had dropped the gun but there was still murder in her eyes.

“You’re insane!” Edward squealed, stabbing his finger in Willow’s direction, “You could have blown my head off!”

“That was my intention!” Willow growled, trying to yank her arms out of her brother’s grip.

“Willow, for heaven’s sake…let us leave,” Abraham pleaded.

“Get that bitch out of my house!” Edward demanded, taking several stumbling steps backwards and further away from the Van Helsings.

“We’re leaving, Walsh,” Abraham barely acknowledged Edward, instead concentrating on keeping Willow’s arms from flailing in all directions and inadvertently hitting him in the eye.

He eventually gave up trying to help her out on her own two feet and picked up her entire body. Willow buried her face in Abraham’s chest and allowed herself to be carried out of the Walsh house.

Edward watched them leave with an expression torn between relief and disgust, fervently hoping that he had seen the last of Willow Van Helsing. He turned back to the decanter behind him, now standing amidst fragments of plaster fallen from the wall. The glass forgotten, he seized the entire decanter and poured the remaining alcohol down his throat as fast as he could.

The sunlight outside was too bright; Willow had to squint to avoid its painful glare. Everything was spinning around her, the footpath, the cobbled streets, the people. All the carriages rushing past seemed to be coming directly at her, the horses towering high, snorting as though they were ferocious beasts. Willow cringed back against the nearest wall, wanting desperately to be able to sink straight through and be somewhere else…preferably dead.

Abraham was talking but Willow couldn’t hear him, all she could see was his lips moving, his eyes wet with concern. He finally seized her by both shoulders, forcing her to stay still and stare right back at him.

“Willow!”

Willow’s eyes focused on Abraham, at the sight of her brother’s concerned expression she was forced to face the reality of her situation. The woman she loved was not merely married to another man…she was dead. Her anger and confusion finally gave way to grief; she sagged against her brother’s chest as the tears fell.

Abraham gently cradled his sobbing sister as her entire body heaved. He glanced up to see passers-by giving them strange glances and a width berth on the street.

“Willow dearest, you must come into the carriage with me, people are staring,” Abraham urged gently.

“What care I for anything in this world?” Willow sobbed brokenly into her brother’s chest, “Tara is not just gone Abraham…she’s dead, Tara’s dead!”


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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby dlline » Sun Oct 28, 2007 12:23 pm

Ooh, dibs.

Be back soon! (after the football game).

Okay, that game was a total mess, but I'm back.

Alcy, another great update. I love this roll that you’re on now. Please keep going, okay?
A small frown marred her features as stared at the painting, there was something not right…not about the painting, but about everything.

Even without knowing, Willow already knows that something is wrong. I love that her connection to Tara is that strong
It was as though she had created a maze for which there was no solution, a perfect analogy for her tortured mind.

And you’ve created a perfect image right here. Nicely done.
“I shot the butler,” Willow replied simply.

That was just a great retort. I love Willow van Helsing. She’s just cool.
I still wanted her, even after what passed between the two of you, but I wanted to possess her, to make her spend an entire lifetime as my woman…no, killing Tara would be the last thing I would ever do, I wanted to prolong her suffering!”

Yeah, I would have to use the word “disgusting” too. I find, as much as it’s not a very nice thing to say, that I wish Willow hadn’t missed. What a bastard!

I do enjoy the new POV of 18th century Willow, and we have at least an answer to one huge question, although it was vague, and that was what happened to Tara. Since you’ve only really scratched a couple of surfaces with this update, I will, again, sit back and patiently wait to see what happens.

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby Tara the Phoenix » Sun Oct 28, 2007 2:04 pm

Dear, dear Alcy,

That was incredible. Your story seems to age perfectly, and I swear your writing gets better with every update. There are so many little moments that add up to a mesmerizing experience, and as I have almost-dibs (hah!), I'm going to share them...
“I wish you to smile again, Willow, “he whispered tenderly, “I have very little memory of mother, but when you smile I can see her as if she were alive just yesterday.”
My heart melted when Abraham said this. His love for Willow is obvious, and that is what grieves him so much at his news. When he finally tells Willow that Tara is dead, I nearly cried myself, even though I know that Tara lives. Willow's grief is palpable, and her leaving the house to confront Walsh inevitable.

She could read into his pithy words and deduce exactly what had happened, she knew the layers of meaning hidden beneath the word ‘disagreement’ and felt both sick and furious. By the tone of his voice, the set of his shoulders and his cruel disposition, she knew the disagreement had been far more than mere words. It almost broke her then and there to imagine the hell Tara had gone through…and all to keep her safe.
Wow. The level of agony Willow is feeling is appalling, and yet you write it so heartbreakingly, helping us feel it, too. Oh, how horrible it was, to love so deeply, so secretly, to have that love torn away for your own safety, and then suddenly gone. For Willow, there would be no more light. The comment on the vampires later on certainly justifies her change in vocation. Indeed, 'What care I for this world? Tara is dead.'

Excellent update, Alcy. Keep them coming!

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby Zooeys_Bridge » Sun Oct 28, 2007 2:23 pm

ooooh snap.
the beginning of the story, it seems, has truly begun. i suppose we'll get too see who "Willow Van Helsing" is, now. Monster fighters, beware.

although i think it's safe to say 'the beginning of the story' could have happened in like ten different places by now. who cares, it's so good.

i love abrahams unyeilding love towards his sister, no matter how broken she may seem.

willow and the black paint, augh.

i'm terribly sad she missed edward. good for abraham, though. he knows his sister well.

thank you, this was lovely. per usual. :)
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby diamondforever » Sun Oct 28, 2007 2:42 pm

That was heartbreaking to see Willow so distraught. And of course, you've delivered exactly what you said you would. That definitely answered a lot of questions.

Excellent update.
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby wimpy0729 » Sun Oct 28, 2007 8:37 pm

Oh Alcy, I get soo excited when I see that you've updated. I'm literally glued to the screen with my emotions running wild. More with biting what nails I have left and now my heart beating wildly in my chest. This was difficult to read -- what actually happened to Tara and how Willow had to find out. Her reaction was so well written, first with the denial, then with the anger and of course she needed to hear for herself what exactly happened. I loved the way she confronted Edward, and from the nasty way he still talked about her and Tara, I'm surprised she managed to hold off pulling the trigger as long as she did. That damn bastard! I really hope we found out later that he died a horribly painful death with much suffering.

Poor Tara (again). Such a painful ending to her life, to die alone in a strange country and to be buried in that way. Every word of Edward's description was like another blow to Willow (and us) over and over. Oh, what that woman must have been through. Your writing again, simply amazing. My words never do it justice.

Thank you for giving us more answers. Of course, we still need more, so I can't wait til the next update!


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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby WolfDragonGod » Mon Oct 29, 2007 5:23 am

oh so sad Tara is Dead.....makes me feel like crying i feel such painn for willow but i know that the well get together soon...i hope...anyway great update.
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Mon Oct 29, 2007 9:08 am

Hello Alcy :)

That was a sad update... snif.

I loved it. I love for us to live directly what is actually (I think, I hope I am not wrong?) in the diary.

Willow was wearing black... Well she is going to wear it again. :(

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Thanks,

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon Oct 29, 2007 6:34 pm

Alcy - Seriously, I can't believe how fast you write and how well you write fast. I mean you could write crap this fast but to write this well? That's pretty amazing.

Again, I have only a few minutes: Willow's depression and pain are palpable. Abraham's decision to leave her after telling her of Tara's death? I hope his banking was of the "sign this paper today or lose your entire fortune" or he's the world's largest moron. Seriously, he has his sister on suicide watch and he tells her that her lover is dead before leaving for the bank? Or solicitor or whatever? Stupid.

Her visit to Edward is predictable in that he's still an asshole. Again, I will offer that much as I abhor violence, I hope VampireTara will cause him some pain and suffering before ridding the world of him.

Sorry - I have to go. I'll try to return and add more.
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby Safuega » Mon Oct 29, 2007 8:29 pm

Hi Alcy,

First, really sorry for the sporadic feedback, but work really sucks in the last quarter of the year.

Second, I gotta hand it to you on building suspense with the giving us some answers that only raise more questions! Mind you, I've read the Historian and I've watched Van Helsing but I can't tell where you are taking the story next. When I think I've recognized a thread of the many stories and maybe just maybe can anticipate what's next you deliver a couple of words that throw everything out whack again. Case in point, an update ago you had Tara casually mention that Abraham had inprisoned her. You are maddening woman, which is to say you are brilliant.

Third, I must correct the misuse of the word 'join' to describe Tara's presence among the undead. I was thoroughly wrong about having abscribed agency to her circumstance. In this latest update it seems that Tara not only had little or no choice in the matter, but also suffered greatly.

Fourth, the black paint imagery, was it meant to allude to the rage and pain in canon that made Willow turn into dark magic Willow? I totally thought so, but I've been known to be wrong before... a lot.

Fifth, nice distraction taking us to that awful day when Willow finds out what happened to Tara, but what happened to Willow Rosenberg?? She's been swallowed by a mirror!

Finally, you've got me thoroughly and completely intrigued. I can't wait for the next update. Will do my best to pop in then and tell you how great I think you are.

Thanks for sharing,
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby Zampsa1975 » Tue Oct 30, 2007 7:05 am

Excellent update-y goodness... so that how Tara "died"...
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby WillowRulez » Tue Oct 30, 2007 12:58 pm

Willow was an artist? Did we know that yet?
“All I know is, Tara is dead.”

Even though I knew it was coming, it's a shock. I dont know why I assumed she was married for a longer time before dying. Unlikely too because then they probably would have had kids. Just ignore me! :D
Pretty brave of Willow to go to Edward. I wonder if the killing of Tara was purely accidental or if there was a reason that it had to be her.
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby Alcy » Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:25 pm

dlline: Congrats on the dibs and I’m sorry your football game was a completely mess, hopefully the chapter wasn’t.

Yes, I’m on a wee roll here, probably because I’m having so much fun writing this story at the moment.
Willow Van Helsing is very cool and I’m pleased I have the opportunity to finally introduce you all to her and to flesh out other supporting characters as well such as Edward, Abraham and a few others as we will see in the next chapter. With this change in POV the answers are coming a little more frequently and I hope the picture is building up into something resembling a cohesive plot…although sometimes I do have difficulty keeping track of everything.

Tara the Phoenix: Thank you very, very much for your kind praise and sharing the moments you enjoyed, I’m glad readers can pick out portions they find memorable and it’s also great to see everyone picking up on different aspects of the story.
I do love Abraham and I enjoy writing him more than any other male character I’ve ever written. I hope I’ve managed to convey just how much he and Willow mean to each other.
It was very difficult to convey the extent of Willow’s heartbreak I think it seems to have come across as intended, the most soul-shattering thing that could ever happen to someone, a life-changing catalyst for Willow Van Helsing for hereafter she will never again be that carefree girl seducing another woman beneath the stairs. I think in future updates you will be able to see her throw herself into her new occupation.
The updates will certainly keep coming…as long as I continue to watch out for buses!

Zooey’s bridge: I guess we are back at the beginning of the story and it’s a good place to finally arrive at because we all badly need some back story to make sense of everything.
I agree, I love Abraham too; he’s one very cool brother. I think we’re all a little sad that Willow missed Edward but if you remember back to an earlier chapter when Willow was researching Giles told her that Edward had a long career as a politician, but there’s a lot of detail in this story to keep up with!

diamond forever: You can trust me, I always try and deliver what I promise!

wimpy0729: Dear wimpy, I hope you still have some nails left after all the tension throughout this story, it is definitely running high with emotions in each chapter. Tara’s death was indeed horrible and she was the last person that would ever deserve dying like that, still, I wonder if she would have preferred death to a life spent with Edward Walsh? There’s a nifty little question for you!
Your praise always does my work justice! Thanks for being such a staunch reader!

WolfDragonGod: Yes, Tara is dead but we should all be comforted with the fact that there will still be a happily ever after for our girls.

JujuDeRoussie: Hi Julia, yes it was a sad update indeed but I’m glad you are enjoying Willow living out the diary, you are not wrong in that at all. I will try and post the next chapter as soon as possible.

Just SkipIt: I have a definite problem with keeping things short and succinct, I tend to get carried away and before I know it I’ve written several thousand words. You know what, half way through the next chapter the story reaches 100,000 words. When I think about the longest I’ve written previously which was about 120,000, VR is going to be the longest story I’ve ever written given that we’re only about half way (then there’s the sequel!) I think that’s just a result of the passion I have for this particular tale and the fun I’m having with it.
Yes, Abraham should be given a stern talking to for leaving Willow alone at her hour of need and I’d love to say that I have a good reason for him to do so…but we’ll have to put it down to his misplaced faith in Nancy the parlour maid to keep Willow in the house! (You’re right, very stupid)
I agree that the world needs to be rid of Edward Walsh and possibly his ending will keep us all satisfied! Thanks for stopping by at this busy time Deb!

Safuega: Well, work does have a tendency to suck at all times of the year so I can sympathise with you on that one.
I can honestly say that watching Van Helsing and reading the Historian will not give you a single clue as to how this story progresses, aside from a few characters in terms of Van Helsing…and the elements of the plot structure in the Historian, nothing else is borrowed from either and this story has emerged from my twisted little brain!
Glad to see you spotted Tara’s reference to her imprisonment, you can be rest assured that I will pick up that topic in a future chapter.
I don’t think I will be giving anything away to clarify that Tara had absolutely no choice in her turning, I think she would have resisted becoming a creature which could possibly hurt Willow.
Good analogy between the black paint and dark magic Willow…
Yes, Willow Rosenberg has been swallowed by the mirror…she’s now living out Willow Van Helsing’s life, it’s my way of completing the story in the diary without making you read more diary excerpts. (Even though everyone did seem to like the diary!)
I love being told how great I am…however overly generous it is, it’s very flattering. Thank you.

Zampsa1975: Yes, Tara’s death has finally been revealed after your patient waiting!

WillowRulez: If you remember right back to our very first chapter when Willow Rosenberg is late for work, her room is described as having pictures on the walls, and again just before Faith comes to visit her after returning from Eastern Europe Willow is contemplating her artwork. I think however, from the way Abraham describes Willow Van Helsing’s painting that we can safely assume that her artwork is a hobby rather than her occupation.
I think you may have thought Tara was married for longer due to her traumatic memories of her marriage, but those memories were built up over a relatively short period of time…and yes, if they had remained married for longer then we would have had children and I couldn’t stomach that thought.
I’ll leave kittens to wonder whether Tara’s death was an accident! Thanks for reading as always!
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby db » Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:26 pm

F@cking Edward Walsh.

I want to jack my car up about four feet, with his testicles pinched between the jack and the vehicle... and possibly taunt him with fire and honey and maybe bees while I do it.

Ugh. Creepy pieceofsh*tmotherf*cker.

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I love Abraham. In my mind he kind of looks like a mixture between the Where's Waldo guy and Hugh Grant... but with red hair. Not sure why I got such a vivid mental picture, but I did. I blame you.

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I knew Tara became a vampire but it still was gut wrenching to 'witness' Willow learning about it. I suspect she has a heck of a lot more grieving to do. Wish she had grazed Edward Walsh's boy parts with the bullet though. Is there any chance that Vamp Tara might be able to track him down for a wee bit of vengance. He deserves it. B@stard.

'disagreement'

ugh.

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby LittleBit » Tue Oct 30, 2007 7:29 pm

Thank you for providing some answers to my questions -- you are so good to me at times! :D lol

Cannot wait till the next update! :D
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby Alcy » Thu Nov 01, 2007 11:43 am

db: I agree entirely with your assesement of Edward Walsh as a creepy pieceofsh*tmotherf*cker and perhaps if cars had been invented at the time that this story is set then I could have used your suggestion for punishment! However, I will do my best to come up with something equally worthy.
Yeah, Abraham’s great, I kinda didn’t really want to say what he looks like so Kittens can just keep on imaging whoever they want in the role…although my choice is a certain Australian actor usually known for playing a character with pointy things coming out of his hands…just make him a bit taller and a redhead and you’ve got it.
I’m sure there is every chance that Tara will be able to track Edward Walsh down for a little bit of vengeance, just for you db! Thanks very much for sharing your feelings!

Next chapter will be up very shortly everyone, stay tuned...
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 29 Oct)

Postby Alcy » Thu Nov 01, 2007 12:12 pm

CHAPTER 15
The Mentor



“Willow for god’s sake stop a moment! Are you sure this is such a good idea?”

Abraham found that even with his lanky legs he had to take the steps two at a time in order to keep up with his much smaller sister. He glanced up at the stately building that towered above them and to the sign next to the front door that proclaimed, Montagu House.

He was grateful that Willow paused when she reached the heavy oak door and turned to actually acknowledge his existence, “Why would it not be a good idea?”

“Because Willow…gentlewoman of your breeding do not go around reading books of the sort I know you want to read, and what makes you think that they will have what you require here anyway?” he nodded towards the door.

“Montagu House is home to one of the largest collection of written works in London…where else would I go?” Willow fired back, clearly impatient to be inside.

“How about nowhere at all?” Abraham suggested archly.

“You would rather I was still at home locked in my room?” was Willow’s acerbic reply, at Abraham’s frustrated expression she continued, “And it has been two days and no one has come to fix my door after you smashed it down!”

Abraham growled in frustration, he felt very much like picking Willow up, throwing her over his shoulder and carting her straight back to Gordon Square. If he had not been so glad to see her outdoors then he would have only been too happy to do so.

“You locked yourself in your room for three straight days; I thought you’d killed yourself!”

“Why would I do that? I would miss the pleasure of your company for the next forty odd years of my life?” Willow’s sarcasm was blatant but underneath was the barely concealed fear created by Tara’s death. For all the love she felt for her brother, she could not imagine spending the rest of her life desperately longing for the sort of love and fulfilment she had experienced with Tara.

“Willow, please…you’ll meet someone…” Abraham began awkwardly.

Willow held up her hand as a signal for him to stop, “We both know the answer to that, Abraham…” she paused and drew a deep breath, “Look, I’m sorry about that business and for scaring you so…”

“You do not need to apologise…”

“I do, I’ve been a complete arse…”

“True but understandable,” Abraham accepted her apology with a curt nod.

“So I am allowed to inquire about vampires without ruining the family reputation?”

He sighed in a resigned manner that was not without a small element of humour, “The family reputation has been already well and truly ruined…and I care not for what the town gossips might say about the eccentric Van Helsing siblings.”

As Willow entered the library she glanced back over her shoulder, “They are calling us eccentric?”

“The politer ones anyway,” Abraham replied simply.

The siblings moved into the rather ostentatious lobby of Montagu House. Having been originally conceived as one of the grandest private residences in London, the house had been constructed during the last century; it was now home to the museum collections of the physician and scientist Sir Hans Sloane. In the years since Sloane’s death, its holdings had expanded to include a library of almost a hundred thousand volumes.

As Willow moved from the lobby through to the library proper, her jaw dropped in awe. While she had never overly concerned herself with books, she had to admit the sight of thousands upon thousands of them stacked into row after row of heavy mahogany bookcases was rather impressive.

Abraham too was enraptured, almost to the point where he did not notice Willow determinedly marching up to the only other individual that he could see in the library. It was a rather tall gentleman who had his back turned towards them. He was obviously engaged in some form of gainful employment within the library as he was busily re-shelving books.

Willow tapped him rather purposefully on the shoulder, he spun around to reveal a rather distinguished, wise face, etched with the lines of experience that came with middle age. A pair of eyeglasses balanced on the tip of his nose.

“Er, hello,” he looked a little startled to actually find people in the library besides himself, especially a rather determined looking young lady and an officer in uniform, “How can I help you, young lady?

“Can you point me in the direction of your books about vampires?”

“V-vampires?” he stammered as though quite shocked, “Well, t-there are several volumes in our foreign folklore section that might suit your needs…just over there.”

“Folklore?” Willow interrupted in an annoyed voice, “I’m not looking for fairytales!”

Abraham moved forward to take Willow’s elbow in a gentle grip; he could immediately see that his sister was losing her patience and would soon be involved in the kind of public display that was not seemly for a lady of her good breeding. Although Willow had never been overly concerned about her public appearances he did worry that their peers were starting to ‘talk’ about her having suffering a breakdown. While none outside of those directly involved knew the precise nature of this breakdown, Abraham was determined to save Willow any additional stress through this difficult period in her life. She had lost her lover twice, and did not need the kind of public scrutiny and judgement that went hand in hand with a scandal. As he watched her stare down the poor librarian with her disconcertingly fierce gaze, he was beginning to regret that he had given in to her wishes to come to the library in the first place.

Willow responded to her brother’s touch by yanking her elbow away with one swift tug. She did however take note of the caution and concern directed towards her in his gaze and she managed to calm herself, enough at least to stop the librarian from backing away from her any further.

“Please forgive my outburst,” Willow began, “I recently lost someone very dear to me…and I do not believe she was killed by a fairytale.”

The librarian’s expression changed at the heartbroken tone in Willow’s voice, shifting from one of mild fright to sincere sympathy.

“Well, perhaps we might be able to talk…um, but not out here, we’ll talk in my office over a cup of tea,” he offered, nodding towards a door that led off from the main library.

“Tea would be lovely,” Abraham smiled graciously as he took his sister’s arm.

As the librarian led the way forward, he gave Willow’s arm a firm squeeze as though warning her to be on her best behaviour. She glanced up at him and managed a small shrug as if to say she’d try.

A few minutes later, seated in worn but comfortable chairs and sipping warm cups of tea, Willow and Abraham waited patiently for the librarian to begin an explanation. His lanky frame was perched on the edge of his desk as he polished his eyeglasses with a fervour not normally associated with such an activity.

“I think we all started off on the wrong foot,” it was Abraham who broke the silence while Willow gulped back her tea, he stood and crossed the short distance to the desk and extended his hand towards the librarian’s for an overdue greeting, “I am Abraham Van Helsing…and this is my sister Willow.”

The librarian replaced his glasses and smiled warmly, “Pleased to meet you, Rupert Giles…but most people just call me Giles and I invite you both to do the same.”

Abraham returned to his seat and his tea and Giles remained sitting on his desk, although with his eye glasses now sitting on the tip of his nose, he studied Willow. She met his scrutinising gaze confidently, almost defiantly.

“Tell me what you know,” Giles directed the question towards Willow rather than Abraham.

Willow absently set down her empty tea cup on the arm of her chair, it was balanced precariously and threatened to slide off before Abraham rescued it and set it safely down on a side table.

“We know very little,” Willow admitted, “A…friend was attacked and killed while in Austria…”

“Were you present?” Giles interrupted quietly, he noticed the strange way in which Willow seemed to struggle over the word ‘friend,’ “Did you see the attack?”

Willow shook her head, “No…her…her h-husband told me, it was night, I’m not sure what time exactly but she was outside alone…”

“Her husband let her go outside alone after dark?” Giles sounded as though this little fact angered him immensely.

“Yes, well, he wasn’t exactly the ideal husband,” Willow replied bitterly, “They fought and she ran…when he eventually went to look for her she was found dead with the only marks on her being two puncture wounds on her neck…a terrified local would only say the word ‘vampire’ and they then buried her quickly.”

“And she remained entombed in her coffin?” Giles prodded.

Willow shook her head awkwardly, “Apparently not…her husband said the grave had been…torn open…I don’t understand, something attacks her and then tears open her grave?”

“Not exactly,” Giles shook his head, “The grave would have been torn open from within.”

“From within?” Willow whispered, having difficulty in comprehending exactly what it was Giles was saying to her, “Are you implying that Tara tore open her own grave?”

As she struggled to retain composure, Willow ducked her head. She did not want either her brother or Rupert Giles to see the tears that were glistening in her eyes. She did not hear Giles reply immediately, and when she glanced up she saw he had turned to face the heavily laden bookshelves that filled the wall behind his desk. He went straight for a particular volume, an extremely large tomb that required both Giles’ hands to lift it. When he placed it on the desk and opened the heavy metal clasp, Willow found herself rising from her chair and crossing the floor. She stared at the exquisitely tooled leather cover and the single word embossed there…Vampyre. Without further ado Giles opened the book in front of Willow, he deftly passed the first several pages of text before coming to an illustration. Willow’s mouth fell open with awe. In dark, heavily drawn lines was depicted a recently filled grave with an awful, clawed hand emerging from the earth.

“Strictly speaking, Tara did not tear open the grave my dear Miss Van Helsing, but rather the demon that now inhabits her body,” Giles explained.

“They are real,” Willow whispered, as unlikely as it was her instincts had been correct, Edward had told her the truth about what had happened to Tara…and the truth was more frightening than she could possibly have imagined.

“You are indeed correct Willow Van Helsing,” Giles replied solemnly, “They are not myths or folklore…they are real and they stalk the shadows of this world…from the Ramanga in Madagascar to the Kyūketuki of Japan, Vrkolakas in Greece and the Strigoi or Moroi of Eastern Europe…they have many names and there are many local superstitions but they are essentially all the same.”

Willow’s blood ran cold, “They are…monsters?”

“Demons to be precise, demons that feed on the blood of living creatures…sometimes animals but they always prefer people,” Giles continued to turn the pages of the text, showing Willow more gruesome illustrations of dark figures with their fangs pressed to the throats of terrified people, Willow had to eventually avert her eyes even as he continued, “Although unlike most demons they do not have their own form but rather inhabit the body of a human, with a few changes, they retain the form of the person they once were but inside they are pure demon…through and through, corrupt and evil to the core.”

Giles paused on a particularly detailed illustration which depicted a vampire of apparently immense size. His face was shrouded beneath a dark cowl that only revealed a pointed chin, dripping with blood. The ground at his feet was littered with dozens of corpses. Beneath the illustration was written one word…

“Dracula,” Willow read slowly, tracing her finger over the bottom of the page.

“Otherwise known as Vlad Tepes…Vlad the Impaler…a Wallachian Prince of the fifteenth century who through unknown means rose to become Lord of all Vampires, the Prince of Darkness…one of the most terrifying and dangerous demons to stalk the earth…not exactly someone you would want to bump into for a spot of friendly conversation.”

“And he’s real…he’s out there somewhere?” Willow reached out and turned the page of her own accord, away from the Dracula illustration.

“Yes…although he has not been seen by mortal eyes for some centuries, I do believe he is still ‘out there’ as you put it,” Giles answered in an ominous tone.

Abraham finally stood, moving to stand behind Willow. He put his arm securely around her shoulders as a measure of comfort. It was appreciated, Willow reached up and took his hand in her own, she was struggling to accept what had happened to Tara…in seeking more information she had found it to be far worse than she ever could have imagined.

Willow closed her eyes to shut out the images in the book but instead she saw them flood her mind, although she replaced the unknown victims in the illustrations with Tara and was forced to watch over and over again as a savage being bit cruelly into the tender flesh of her pale neck. Willow remembered how the skin felt and tasted there; in that area below her strong jaw-line…it was smooth and sweet. A shudder ran through her entire body, a shudder which developed into a tremble which would not cease. Abraham held her even more firmly, both arms wrapping tightly around her body but she still could not stop the uncontrollable spasms which held her in their thrall.

“Sister, we should leave,” Abraham whispered gently, he looked up to Giles’, “Mr Giles…thank you so much for your time but I should really get Willow home…”

“No,” Willow opened her eyes, they glistened with unshed tears but her voice was firm, “Tell me what would have happened to her…and spare me no details.”

‘Willow, no,” Abraham began, knowing it would only serve to upset Willow further “There are some things you are better off not knowing.”

Willow tried to wrestle free from her brother’s embrace, after a few moments of futile struggling; he gave up and let her go. She turned to face him with a defiant expression, “I will be the judge of that…I need to know what happened to her!”

“Mr Giles, do not indulge her in this whim!” Abraham implored the librarian, seeing as Willow was beyond all hope of reason, “She has been through enough already!”

Giles appeared as though he wanted to have nothing to do with the familial squabble and he raised his hands to indicate this. Willow was not to be persuaded otherwise and she stared him down, her fierce gaze burning right through him.

“Mr Giles, think whatever you may of me…but her name was Tara Maclay, and I loved her more than life itself,” Willow admitted, hardly caring that Giles was far more likely to react to her ‘perversion’ as Edward did rather than in the same, accepting manner as Abraham, she continued, “For my own sanity I need to know what happened to her…for the sake of closure…I have no grave to mourn at, please grant me this?”

Giles merely sighed and nodded, seemingly unconcerned at Willow’s admission of her love for the dead woman, if anything his gaze was even more sympathetic, “I can only tell you the raw elements of a turning, in each case it varies…in some cases vampires enjoy torturing their victims before they feed but not always, sometimes it is done in haste lest they are startled in the midst of their meal, but whether it was over quickly or not, it would have eventually drank Tara’s blood…most probably while she was still alive as they prefer it warm and flowing, she would have eventually died from a massive loss of blood and possibly the trauma of the wound. I…I think that it would have been slow and painful, if she had not fainted initially, then perhaps she would have struggled…”

“She would have,” Willow interrupted in a tight, controlled voice, “She was strong…tell me what would have happened following her death?

“Well, according to your brief account, she would have been found by her husband and interred hastily…sometimes local people have the experience and knowledge to cut the hearts out of the dead…although there is no safeguard…sometime later, the demon that was once Tara would have woken in its coffin and immediately fought its way free, vampires have an inhuman and unholy strength you see. The demon that would have emerged from the grave is not your Tara, Willow, it will look like Tara and may even have some of her memories, but the woman you once loved is dead…this creature is a blood-sucking monster that is incapable of thinking anything other than evil thoughts…”

“She’s trapped inside her body then?” Willow asked brokenly.

Giles shook his head firmly, “No, her soul would have departed the corrupted form…you can be rest assured that the Tara you know is safely in heaven as she should be.”

Willow breathed a sigh of relief at her mind being put to rest on that account but there was one other thought on her mind, Is there a way to bring her back…restore her soul and have her be Tara once more?”

“No, Willow,” Giles replied, once more turning through the pages of the book, “You mustn’t ever hold out the hope that Tara can ever be saved, if you ever see the demon that was once Tara then there is only one thing that you can do…only one thing that you must do.”

“What is that?” Willow asked in a mere whisper, already knowing the answer.

“Kill it,” Giles found the page he was looking for which showed a handsomely attired knight driving a wooden stake through the chest of a vampire, “Stake it through the heart with wood or silver, decapitate it, burn it…or expose it to sunlight in the case of most vampires.”

“Most?” Abraham interrupted with a puzzled expression, he had been pouring over the page with some level of enthusiasm.

“Some older, more powerful vampires are not constrained to walk the earth during the night…some are immune to the sun’s rays and can walk anywhere at will.”

“You seem to know a great deal about vampires for a librarian,” Abraham commented with a wry smile, “One would say that you almost know too much about them…why is that?”

At that point Giles straightened somewhat and both Abraham and Willow no longer saw the middle-aged, bespectacled librarian they had first met, instead he seemed to be something much more, an imposing, powerful presence, “I am no mere librarian my friends…I am a vampire hunter.”

“Perfect!” Willow added immediately, her eyes shining with unrestrained fervour, “Can I be one too?”

~~~~~~

Sticking out her bottom lip, Willow directed a jet of air upwards, aimed at shifting a wayward strand of hair out of her eyes. The hair fluttered away immediately but stubbornly floated straight back into the same place a second later. Willow continued puffing out bursts of air several more times in a concentrated effort to put the red locks in their place once and for all. Each time they moved only to fall right back into her eyes again. Her efforts to blow the hair out of her face was not due to any inability to use her hands, both appendages were poised holding open the pages of the massive book in front of her and could have decently been spared for the second or two it would have taken her to tuck the hair behind her ear. Willow was bored…and in her boredom she had discovered that even the smallest amusements could keep her occupied more effectively than the text which Giles had assigned her to read.

Willow finally gave up her huffing and puffing and seized the lock between her fingers. She tucked it securely back behind her ear. Rather than return to reading she slumped forward with a groan, her cheek coming to rest on the page she was supposed to be reading. She had been under the distinct impression that vampire-hunting would be exceptionally exciting and would involve the use of many sharp, pointy objects. However, for the past two weeks all Giles had allowed her to do was read…and read she did, hundreds and hundred of texts. All were equally fascinating of course, dealing with every known aspect of vampire lore and then the wider subject of demonology but the novelty had worn off for Willow a few thousands pages ago. She was a woman of action, not books and her perpetual diet of words was starting to bore her to tears.

Abraham joined her in the evenings as he was going through the motions of resigning his commission in the 18th Regiment of Light Dragoons, although those were periods where they managed very little study as Willow was far too bored to do anything but try and distract her overly studious brother.

On this particular afternoon she was just nodding off to sleep in the main reading room at Montagu house when she heard footsteps behind her. Thinking it was Giles she bolted upright and feigned fascination with the text she was reading on the mating habits of demons.

“I am not Giles, you don’t have to pretend to read, Will.”

Willow turned to see Abraham striding towards her; she immediately noticed his attire. So used to seeing him in uniform, Willow thought he cut a decidedly odd picture wearing a green cutaway tailored coat over a satin waistcoat and black breeches. She was pleased to see that he still refused to adopt the fashion of wearing a powdered wig atop his mane of red hair, today however it was tied back at the nape of his neck with a black ribbon.

“You make me feel decidedly under-dressed,” Willow glanced down at her own simple white muslin trimmed only with a green pastel sash.

“Compared to most of the women in England, you are under-dressed,” Abraham smiled, straightening the lapels of his coat as he stood just slightly behind Willow’s chair.

“You know me, never much for frippery, “ Willow commented, reaching out to take his hand, “You’re all un-soldiered?”

“I have officially resigned my commission and have been granted an honourable discharge,” Abraham was smiling but Willow could tell that there was some measure of regret there as well, up until the events of the past month, the army had been an integral part of his life, it had to have affected him greatly to sever all ties with the regiment in which he had served for ten years, “Although I think many of my friends may have thought it should be a dishonourable discharge.”

“They were not impressed with your decision?” Willow asked, folding her book shut as she turned to face him properly.

“Not impressed would be putting it mildly…I would use words like outraged, miserable…mostly I think they just do not understand,” Abraham feigned a measure of gaiety in his voice, “Still, I do not blame them, if you had told me just last month that I would be resigning my hard earned commission in a fine cavalry regiment in order to spend my time hunting down and destroying demons then I would have told you that you were two steps shy of the insane asylum,”

His sister emitted a small snort of disgust, “Your ‘hard-earned’ commission was purchased for a large sum of money…I’m sure if you don’t like demon hunting then you can buy another one.”

Abraham smirked, “Not that I told them demon-hunting was my new profession of course…given that I will be spending a great deal of my time here, I told them I was going to be a librarian…imagine that, Abraham Van Helsing resigning his commission in the 18th Dragoons to become a librarian…I do not think they will take me back even for a small fortune.”

“Will telling you how much I love you help with the pain?” Willow suggested cheekily.

Abraham stooped to deposit a quick kiss on the top of Willow’s head, “That and a very thorough foot rub.”

“Okay, I love you but there’s no bloody way I’m touching your disgustingly smelly feet!” Willow said firmly, wrinkling up her delicate little nose as though she could smell the offending appendages already.

Abraham’s eyebrows lifted slightly at her casual use of foul language, “Willow, since when did you start talking like a sailor?”

Willow shrugged nonchalantly, “Well, since I’m a demon hunter now I thought it rather silly that I would say ‘oops a daisy’ or ‘oh no’ or something equally as pathetic while engaged in a life or death struggle with a demon that wants to rip my throat out…I figure that ‘bloody’, ‘damn,’ and ‘cocksucker’ are far more effective…although my vocabulary is rather limited and I would appreciate it if you could teach me some more, equally appropriate epithets.”

“Good lord!” the siblings were interrupted by the appearance of Giles, as always he was in the act of cleaning his glasses, he replaced them and implored Abraham, “Please don’t teach her a thing…yesterday she used a very unsavoury term when I suggested she might want to re-read ‘Demonology in the Ancient World.’”

“I read it once already!” Willow protested in her own defence.

“You could not answer a single question related to your reading!” Giles snapped back.

“Well it was boring enough the first time around!” Willow growled defiantly.

“And besides…neither of you are demon hunters yet…you’re in training,” Giles added with an air of a satisfaction.

“I would hardly call reading enough bloody books to sink a bloody battleship, ‘training’,” Willow muttered, folding her arms across her chest.

Giles dumped something on the desk in front of her with a loud thud, Willow jumped in fright. However, when her heart stopped racing she saw that it was a massive battleaxe, its broad blade shining in the weak light filtering through into the library. An eager smile crossed Willow’s face as she stood in order to take in its splendour more effectively. She wrapped her fingers around the haft in a firm grip and made to lift it in one impressive flourish. Her grand effort was short-lived however as she found it much too heavy to lift with one hand. Even with two hands she struggled to raise it to chest height. Abraham crossed the floor and took it from her, stepping back so he could swing it freely.

“These will be more appropriate for you, Willow,” Giles threw down several much smaller objects that made far less impressive sounds as they hit the table.

Willow picked up one of the foot long objects and held it up for closer examination. Unlike her reaction to the battleaxe, she was not impressed and glanced up to Giles with her feelings written plainly on her face.

“It’s a twig!” Willow protested.

“It is a stake,” Giles replied in a tight voice, obviously offended, he snatched the one out of Willow’s hands and deftly twirled it over the back of his palm, catching it once more in his fist. He glanced up and was rather pleased to see the surprised expression on Willow’s face, “In the hands of a hunter it is far more effective than any cumbersome battleaxe.”

He set down the last weapon he carried on the table and this too took Willow’s fascination, although after her embarrassment with the battle axe she made no move to pick it up. It was a small crossbow that looked light and manoeuvrable, perfect for wielding in tight alleyways. She was still studying it with great enthusiasm when she suddenly felt a strong pair of arms wrap around her neck, in a split second she had her own hands up beneath her attacker’s arms to stop whoever it was from choking her. She then drove the heel of her boot downwards as hard as she was able. Her attacker yelped in pain in a masculine voice and Willow was able to wriggle free in order to snatch up the crossbow which Giles had left on the table, in seconds she had spun on her heels and had the weapon levelled directly at a young man’s forehead. He very quickly lifted his hands in surrender.

“Ah Willow,” Giles coughed politely, “You might want to lower your crossbow.”

Willow turned her head slightly but kept the crossbow pointed just in case. When she saw the small grin that was slowly spreading across Giles’s face she grudgingly lowered the weapon and turned back to study the young man she had almost impaled with a crossbow bolt. He was as tall as Abraham, but where her brother was pale; he was swarthy and dark with flashing brown eyes. From head to toe he was clad in black, black breeches, high-collared black shirt and a long black leather coat which swirled about the tops of his highly polished boots. He shifted slightly to assume a more relaxed posture and his coat gaped slightly to reveal a sword with an elaborate silver hilt.

Before any further words were said his full lips parted and he flashed a pair of white teeth in a rakish grin. If he had hoped Willow to respond with a blush he was to be disappointed, she merely narrowed her eyes suspiciously and kept a firm grip on the stock of her crossbow.

“New recruits, Rupert?” he asked without taking his eyes off Willow.

“Ah, yes,” Giles strode forward and made a pointed gesture of plucking the crossbow from Willow’s firm grip before she could do any damage with it, “Although I would be quick to point out that they are largely untrained…Willow, that crossbow is not loaded”

Willow looked at the weapon and her lip tweaked in annoyance; she then set it back down on the table. When she faced the newcomer once more, her expression was still as defiant despite the amused laugh that burst from her brother’s lips.

“Untrained perhaps, but spirited all the same,” his voice was deep and polished in tone; each sentence departed his lips as though it were some grand and important statement.

Willow was highly unimpressed, “Who the hell are you?”

“Willow, your manners!” Abraham chided under his breath.

Apparently unaffected by Willow’s rather rude question, the dark man crossed the short distance that separated them and extended his hand in friendship, “My apologies, I am Christopher Croft, an associate of Rupert’s…and I am very pleased indeed to meet you, Miss…?”

“What do you mean by ‘associate’?” was her rather curt reply.

“I am sorry, I am so used to meeting people who are not involved in our line of work…you might say ‘fellow demon hunter’ for the initiated,” Christopher replied easily, still untroubled by Willow’s complete lack of manners.

Abraham pushed past his little sister, purposefully giving her a firm elbow as he passed. He held out his own hand to the newcomer in order to give him a more polite welcome.

“Abraham Van Helsing,” the two men shook, both retaining a firm grip for longer than was necessary as they sized each other up.

“Pleased to meet you, Abe,” Christopher flashed another smile, although not half as warm as that which he had obviously marked for the other man’s sister.

“Abraham,” Abraham corrected quickly and not at all pompously, “I do not go by anything else but I’ll forgive you just this once. This rude but usually lovely young lady is my sister Willow.”

Abraham gave Willow another sharp poke in the ribs with his elbow and she obediently proffered a hand in Christopher’s direction. He took it with a gentle touch, although Willow immediately felt the rough calluses on his palm and fingers. She knew from touching Abraham’s hands that this was a result of many hours spent with a sword in one’s hand. While she guessed that his appearance was probably not all for show and he was probably quite capable with the sword he wore, she still grimaced when he pressed his lips firmly to the back of her hand. When he straightened once more he was smiling as though the two of them had just shared an intimate moment.

Christopher sighed theatrically. “Usually lovely? I would say she is permanently lovely.”

While Willow averted her gaze uncomfortably, Abraham snickered at what he considered to be an extremely amusing comment, “You’ll never see her first thing in the morning with her hair still up in rags…she’s foul tempered and not at all pretty.”

Willow showed Abraham precisely what a foul-tempered expression was and he was distinctly thankful that she could not lift the battleaxe.

Christopher’s reply was quick and delivered with a wink in Willow’s direction, “Well, one can only hope.”

Giles read into the situation clearly, glancing quickly between the adoring expressing on Christopher’s face to the stormy one on Willow’s and the confused one on Abraham’s. He stepped in between all three of them and immediately eased the tension in the room,

“What do you all say to a spot of tea?” Giles kept his tone light, “And then we can talk about getting down to the much anticipated business of weapon training for our new recruits.”

Giles glanced to Willow and saw that her eyes were sparkling with anticipation; any trace of hostility towards Christopher had been vanquished. He congratulated himself for this little victory but fervently hoped that this would not be a longstanding issue between his three associates. As he watched the three of them start to move in the direction of the sitting room, with Abraham keeping a close hold on his sister, he made a mental note to drop Christopher some barely concealed hints as to Willow’s sexual penchant for her own sex.

~~~~~~

Willow swung her arms experimentally, testing the confines of the specially tailored man’s coat that she wore. Although she had worn men’s clothing previously during training, being outside albeit at night, was another thing altogether.

“Will, you look fine…positively dashing even,” Abraham commented.

Willow turned to look at her brother, he was wearing exactly the same clothes as she, the same black coat, worn open of course to allow easy access to the sword belted at his waist, a black woollen waistcoat and black breeches and riding boots. The sibling’s had both concealed their red hair with unadorned black tricorne hats.

“That’s easy for you to say,” Willow stretched her legs and bent slightly so she could run her palms over the thick breeches that covered her legs, “I’ve never felt so constrained.”

Christopher rolled his eyes at their light banter, obviously feeling that they were not showing sufficient gravity for the situation. He was of course wearing black with his trademark leather coat. His dark hair meant he had no need for a hat but for some strange reason he did not have it clubbed back but rather had it worn out, framing his dark face.

“Are you sure you’re ready for this, Willow?” Christopher asked the young woman, his voice heavy with concern.

“Surely you jest…I’ve been waiting for this night for months,” Willow replied, lifting her head to meet his worried frown with a calm gaze of her own.

It was indeed true, although Giles had refused to let Willow and Abraham give up their book research completely; most of their time for the past few months had been filled with all manner of weapon training. Willow’s boredom had been completely alleviated and she had thrown herself into learning as much as possible from Giles and her brother in terms of swordsmanship and hand to hand fighting techniques. She tended to avoid prolonged contact with Christopher as he had a penchant for using far more bodily contact with her than was strictly necessary when it came to training. Even after Giles had a little talk with their new associate, he still had difficulty accepting the fact that Willow was not interested in him…as though he was at the point of refusing to believe that she could possibly prefer women over men.

Still, for all his faults and unnecessary pomposity, he was a highly skilled and daring hunter. Although his exploits were recounted with additional embellishments, Giles assured the Van Helsing’s that much of what he said was indeed true. Willow would have been impressed if only half of it was true and as such she paid attention to what he said…while still avoiding his hands.

Now, with Giles having deemed the sibling’s ready, they stood in a particularly unlit part of town in which neither Willow nor Abraham had ever thought to venture, nor even knew it existed. It was on the outskirts of the poorest section of town, Christopher explained, a popular haunt for recently turned vampires, still coming to grips with the fact that they were now bloodsucking demons preying on the blood of humans. Few people actually ventured into the area of their own accord, those that did were mostly drunks or people that would not be missed by anyone…all easy prey for the newer creatures of the night.

“I do not seek to disappoint you, but we may not even lay our eyes on a scion of Dracula this evening, they know I often stalk these streets. Although…” Christopher stopped speaking for a moment as he glanced skyward at the dark night sky, “…no moon, no stars, a heavy foreboding air…it is a good night for hunting.”

Willow hefted the crossbow she carried into a more suitable position beneath her arm. Holding it in both hands she could very quickly raise it level to fire the silver tipped bolt. Beneath her coat she carried both a silver sword and dagger and several additional bolts. The night was cold, but it was so dark she could not see her breath misting in front of her eyes. As she walked forward, with Christopher’s back barely visible ahead and Abraham silently following behind, she tried to remember Giles’s training. His calm voice merely repeated the same information over and over in her head, ‘watch the shadows’…Willow tensed her lip, everything was in shadow!

When it finally did come, Willow needn’t have bothered struggling to remember every scrap of information she had gleaned from her mentor. As soon as the trio of vampires made their appearance, something triggered inside Willow’s head and she allowed herself to be guided by her instincts, instincts which rendered her a vampire’s worst nightmare.

Two solid shapes dropped down into the alley just in front of her, heavily cloaked shapes that almost melded with the darkness around them. Both went straight for Christopher, one seizing him around his neck in a chokehold while the other went for his arms. A third set of footsteps came running from the darkness behind; a muffled grunt meant that it had run straight into Abraham.

Despite the situation, Willow found herself grinning. The vampire’s had obviously picked out the stronger targets first…it was their first mistake. Willow brought the crossbow up quickly and taking barely a second to find her target in the darkness, she loosened the bolt. There was a dull thud followed a split second later by a piercing scream and a small explosion. Tiny particles of dust spread outwards and were swallowed by the night…all that remained of one vampire.

Rather than reload, Willow tossed aside her crossbow and withdrew a small bottle from the inside of her jacket. Without fumbling, she struck a match on the nearest brick wall and lit the fuse protruding from the bottle. She could not risk throwing it at either vampire as they were grappling with her companions at close quarters; instead she dashed it to the ground. The glass bottle smashed and the liquid within burst into bright flames as it spread. Having created a burning puddle, Willow drew both her sword and dagger and was able to survey the scene in the alley. Behind her, Abraham had lost his hat and his red hair hung about his face as he duelled with a scruffy vampire who was no mean swordsman. He appeared to be holding his own but Christopher however was pinned to the ground beneath an abnormally large vampire, desperately trying to keep his neck protected.

Willow darted forward, at the last possible moment before her dagger plunged downward; the demon sensed her presence and spun, slogging a huge fist in her direction. Although the blow would have removed her head from her shoulders had it made contact, he was too slow and Willow was able to duck beneath the swing. She darted around the clumsy vampire, over Christopher’s prone form and leapt in the air. While it was over in about a second, Willow could see each of her actions as clearly as if they had already been planned and executed in her mind. Her right foot hit the nearest alley wall and she sprung backwards, as she did she spun in the air and brought the same foot around in an arc. It came into full contact with barrel-like chest of the demon, the force enough to send him stumbling backwards. His heavy body came crashing down directly atop Willow’s puddle of fire and within seconds he was engulfed. Still writhing, his body exploded into dust, this time looking like tiny sparkling embers which floated around her like fire flies.

Breathing heavily with the thrill of the moment, Willow turned to see the last remaining vampire had noticed his companions were no longer with him and had decided that fleeing was his only option. Abraham had turned to pursue his quarry but Willow was faster, hurling her dagger directly into the demon’s back even as he was scaling the a side wall of the alley. The flying dagger narrowly missed Abraham’s ear and plunged into the creature before he was half way up the wall. Before its body could hit the ground, it was nothing but a floating cloud of dust, drifting down to the alley floor at Abraham’s feet.

Eyes wide with appreciative shock, Abraham spun around and confirmed his ear was indeed still attached to the side of his head. Still regarding Willow with a funny expression on his face, he crossed to where Christopher was still lying on his back. Their dark-haired companion appeared ruffled, but in perfectly fine health despite being decisively flattened by the hefty vampire.

“You and I needn’t have bothered coming out at all,” Abraham chuckled as he helped the other man to his feet with one swift tug, “In future we can remain in bed while Willow single-handedly rids the dark places of London of all manner of nasty creatures.”

This little comment did not amuse Christopher in the slightest as he shot Willow a look before attending to his attire. His leather coat was scuffed and slashed in several places with one sleeve almost torn completely off. Abraham could only smirk at his expression, knowing full well just how he felt for he was feeling the same way, although any feeling of jealousy was far outweighed by his amazement at his sister’s extraordinary prowess with a sword.

He slapped Christopher heartily across his back, “I know it’s scary but just accept it as a good thing.”

“Bah! The three were all recently turned…and I was caught off guard by that one’s size,” Christopher explained with a nod towards the still burning embers at his feet, he lifted his chin defiantly as though challenging Abraham to mock him.

Abraham was too much of a gentleman to do nothing of the sort and he merely smiled as he looked towards Willow who was eagerly scanning their environs as though there were more vampires waiting patiently to be slain.

“I have no doubt that the three were weak…I do not expect all nights will be quite this straightforward…but even so, you have to admit that she is impressive,” Abraham continued.

“But she is just a woman!” Christopher spluttered indignantly.

Willow turned to regard both of them with a wry smile on her face. She completely ignored Christopher’s shocked expression and incredulous comments and re-sheathed her sword in one swift movement as she crossed the alley to join her brother. He reached out and playfully tousled her hair just to ensure she did not fly too high and remembered her place in the world as his baby sister.

“I don’t know about you, Abraham,” Willow commented as she brushed the dust off the front of her jacket with a few quick strokes, “But I could get used to this.”


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Postby Zooeys_Bridge » Thu Nov 01, 2007 12:32 pm

dibs.

HA! this is kick. ass. it seems that Miss Van Helsing shares no fondness for books and learning as her counterpart. Not to mention the clearly inborn combat skills that poor Miss Rosenberg lacks. How interesting.

Get used to this indeed....

delicious and delightful. Wonderful Giles and I like this Christopher. His gruffness at being beat by Willow in the streets reminds me a little of Wesleys pansied fluttering that he believes counts as fighting. Clearly Mr. Croft posesses more skill and experiance, but it was amusing nonetheless.
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 2 Nov)

Postby WillowRulez » Thu Nov 01, 2007 1:29 pm

I think however, from the way Abraham describes Willow Van Helsing’s painting that we can safely assume that her artwork is a hobby rather than her occupation.

That is what I assumed :D
Oh hey, Hans Sloane! Nice allusion to the founding of the British Museum!
Hm... Giles? How is that even possible? His dad? Did I miss something again? If so, sorry. I really need to reread this story to get my details right :pinky
“Perfect!” Willow added immediately, her eyes shining with unrestrained fervour, “Can I be one too?”
Aha! That's why she was at the battlefield. Now we know for sure. Willow as a cool monster fighter is pretty... cool :smash
And, Lara's dad. I love how you entwine everyone with each other.
Thanks for the quick update(s)!
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 2 Nov)

Postby Tara the Phoenix » Thu Nov 01, 2007 2:19 pm

AHA! Excellent update, and I'm impressed with the quickness. We readers are all getting spoiled with fabulous fics lately.

I knew there was something trippy about Giles. Remember how he spoke with Tara earlier when Willow Rosenberg (not VH) was practicing with weapons for the first time? He alluded that he remembered the first incarnation of Willow Van Helsing. So what does that make him? He's a vampire hunter, not a vampire himself, is he? Or does British tea hold the secrets to eternal youth?

"Is there a way to bring her back…restore her soul and have her be Tara once more?”
Apparently this edition of Giles does not realize Willow's extraordinary talent for thinking creatively. He tells her it is impossible, but we all know that Willow can overcome nearly every obstacle when she wants something. I can only hope that something similar will occur here. Seriously, if Willow wants Tara's soul, she'll find it.

“It’s a twig!” Willow protested.
That's our girl! Breaking out the big guns (figuratively speaking) and all she gets is a sliver of a tree trunk. Poor girl.

And may I say woo? And a big hoo? That was one spectacular action sequence, Alcy. I could just see it, Willow throwing down the fire-bottle, whipping across walls, ducking hamfisted vampires and dusting all three of them! Wow! You've got a gift, Alcy, for keeping the action tight, and giving it just enough detail, yet not overburdening us with information. Well done!

She is just a woman, indeed.

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 2 Nov)

Postby dlline » Thu Nov 01, 2007 6:46 pm

Hey Alcy!

Sorry for the short feedback, but the travel and lack of sleep is catching up with me.

I had to laugh with this update. You should have entitled it "Scoobies of the Enlightenment." The research into demonology and the training and weapons and all of those other Scooby-esque elements plunked down right in the middle of the late 18th century. That is a fabulous image. I'm wondering about Giles, but I know you'll tell us the answer, so I'll just wait.

I must say that I never entertained the idea of Willow in breeches and a tricornered hat, but I have it now and I thank you for that.

Well done and thank you.

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 2 Nov)

Postby diamondforever » Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:04 pm

Wonderfully done. I'll echo a previous message in that I find it awesome that Willow Van Helsing and Willow Rosenberg are so different. Except that I think Willow Rosenberg will be even more efficient than her ancestor. ^^

That again answered a lot of questions -- and also posed a new one. Rupert Giles....immortal? Old man? Reincarnate? I trust that you will answer it, of course. :)

Looking forward to the next one!
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 2 Nov)

Postby WolfDragonGod » Fri Nov 02, 2007 6:12 am

nice update
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 2 Nov)

Postby wimpy0729 » Fri Nov 02, 2007 9:35 am

Wow again, Alcy. Seems things are finally starting to come together. Christopoher Croft and Lara, and Giles, who seems to be some earlier century's version of Dick Clark, still rockin after all these years. I loved, and totally understood Willow's thirst for knowledge, but I also get her, should I say "blood lust" to get out there and kill those demons who were responsible for Tara's death. It seems she's got some mad skills too, combined with an inner fury that should make any demon wet their pants, and if they were smart, to run very far away. Well, that is if demons pee...do they pee? That's just another one of my questions for you. lol

And yes, the question you posed to me, about Tara perhaps choosing death over marriage to Edward, has totally crossed my mind before. There was an entry in the diary where she said that she already felt dead. Perhaps she went out in the dark alone that night with that thought exactly on her mind. What a horrible thought, how empty she was probably feeling anyway, that that would be her only way out of her hellish life with Edward.

Thanks so much for giving us more answers and moving this great story along, even though I have no more nails and all I can do is gnaw at my nubs. ;-)

Awesome job again!


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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 2 Nov)

Postby ellisande » Fri Nov 02, 2007 12:03 pm

Alcy,

I think this may be my new favorite of your stories. It would take me far too long to mention all of the bits that I've enjoyed so far, although I have to say that your action scenes are excellent and that last chapter left me with a big smile on my face. I'm greatly looking forward to the next chapter and have been delighted with the quick updates of late.
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 2 Nov)

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Fri Nov 02, 2007 1:32 pm

Hello Alcy :)

Once again nice update. Once again it raised many questions in me. And didn't answer any previous.

This was exciting! Willow as a demon huntress, how well she slay the vampires... She's good that kid! ^^

Willow's pain is so palpable. I feel for her. I wonder when both are going to see each other once again. But for what I understood so far, I should not be impatient, because next time should be pretty violent for Willow? Well I'll see.

Thanks for your update :)

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