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Re: Lamplight

Postby watty » Sat Oct 20, 2007 8:13 am

Julia -- bonjour Julia! Thanks for the comments, but sadly it is the end. I hope you enjoyed the story. Thanks again.


WillowRulez -- there was a fair bit of desperation on Tara's part because she didn't know what was happening, was hot, scared and claustrophobic. They are united at the end, finally. I hope you've enjoyed this story and many thanks for the encouraging comments throughout.


Alex -- great pickup on the description of Tara being "so hot" -- physically, having been closed up in a windowless cabin for hours, it's not the usual hotness we're used to. I did put them through a lot of angst didn't I? :P

I get the feeling the next chapter is the last.

Yep, you're right. Thanks for chiming in with the comments for the last few updates, I hope you enjoyed reading.


db -- :lol @ descriptive descriptiveness. That's my right brain working. :P I think both of them were really scared, and I don't blame them.

Now I want to know if Lily and Aunt Hallie are ok? Will they get a reward and be able to live without working and be rich philanthropists? What about Faith and Albania?

well, the next chapter is the wrap-up. Some of your questions may be answered, some may not. Thanks, dear.


sacinema -- hi there! no worries about feedback, I've been bad with other people's fics too. Thank you for the very apt short summary:

This is a ride for our girls. Coming from a small town in California they made it over New York, to Switzerland and Gibraltar.

The confused 14 year olds at the beginning of the story would never have predicted how their lives would end up! It was a big risk to get personally involved in solving the crime, but it ended up well. Thanks for your comments and support.

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Re: Lamplight

Postby watty » Sat Oct 20, 2007 8:15 am

Title: Lamplight
Author: watty (hiddenwatson[at]gmail[dot]com)
Distribution: Chris and Susan have pre-approval. Anyone else please ask for my permission first.
Rating: R to NC-17
Disclaimer: BtVS characters, concepts and dialogue belong to Mutant Enemy, Fox, The WB, UPN and others.
Summary: Contemporary AU. Where demons wear human faces. Two lives drifted apart, can they find their missing half?
Notes: This will be long and angsty. It also changes direction more than once. I had planned for it to go in a certain direction, I didn't know it would go that far. Sometimes, stories have a mind of their own.


Notes 2: wrap-up, in drabble format. Thanks for reading.
Notes 3: for the confused, or those wanting to be even more confused, here is a diagram of the crime.



Part 42

"Did you know that food tastes better barefoot?"

"Barefoot food?"

"Don't be pedantic."

"I'm teasing."

"I know, you minx."

"Anyway, it's not only food that tastes better barefoot."

"What else tastes — oh my god, is that all you think about?"

Small pause.

"Yep."

"Are you saying this because we're lying naked in bed?"

Another small pause.

"May be. Do you want to lay naked somewhere else?"

"We don't have any other furniture."

"That's true."

"Stoic today are we?"

"Preoccupied."

"What with?"

A sly grin.

"What? Tell me."

Instead of using words, she used her lips, tongue, teeth and fingers.

*****

They returned to California. Willow found a job at a boutique venture capital fund as investment specialist, with an option after one year of buying into the partnership. They were very keen to have her, and even agreed to her delaying her start date until after summer.

Tara, who had taken an unconventional route through the college system, partly due to Wilkins' influence, managed to transfer to the full-time program at UCS Law School.

They had time.

Time for house-hunting, and to leave behind trading floors, noisy clubs and solving international art theft cases.

Most importantly, time to be together.

*****

They attended Buffy's graduation while they were still on the East Coast. Their friend graduated in the top third of her class but was slightly disappointed to have gotten the Cleveland field office as her first assignment.

Agent Burkle was in Washington for meetings and attended the ceremony with a very suave-looking Detective Gunn. His protestations that he was only there because he was "in the area" was met with dubious smirks from all.

For their part in solving the crime, Fred was promoted to Special Agent in Charge; Gunn made detective second grade and Lockley received a commendation also.

*****

Richard Wilkins was currently enjoying the trappings of a maximum security prison facility while waiting for a trial date. Despite calling in numerous favors, he was unable to persuade the judge to waive bail.

It took detectives more effort to wrestle a confession from him, he protested his innocence with the fervency he put into his every endeavor. When confronted with statements from his former associates and employees, he dismissed them with the observation that they were clearly all delusional.

His cellmates crowned him "Mayor of Suckville" and he found out the hard way what sucking really entailed in prison.

*****

Tara didn't want to leave the car.

Willow gave her hand a reassuring squeeze. "Don't worry, you'll be fine."

"Why does it look like half of Sunnydale is here?" Tara asked.

"It's only Xander, Anya, and, um, people Xander invited."

"Exactly."

"It is his baby."

"I know, I know," Tara sighed. "Why does Sunnydale need another car dealership again?"

"You're more bothered about meeting my parents later aren't you?"

Tara's pained look said it all.

"It's not as if you hadn't met them before."

"We weren't sleeping together then."

"Yes we were."

"Not like that, though I wish ..."

"Will!"

****

Ira called her his long lost other daughter, and kept wanting to pat her on the back like a new pet pony. Instead he kept her wine glass constantly topped up.

Sheila couldn't stop interrogating them on when they first "started" and seemed to be obsessed about their relationship when they were in high school. Not until Willow slapped on the table and declared that no, she and Tara weren't having sex as teenagers that she huffed and flustered. Willow refused to engage in further "academic" discussion with her mother.

"Your parents haven't changed," Tara remarked when they got home.

*****

There were advantages to only having one piece of furniture.

"I don't want to leave the bed, ever," Willow said as she curled up further into the contours of Tara's embrace.

"I don't want you to leave the bed either," Tara added, feeling Willow's warm skin turning her body into an aroused furnace.

"May be we should explore whether we can live our lives completely in bed."

Tara leaned in to kiss the nearest Willow-softness, which happened to be luscious, full lips. "We'll only be doing one thing."

Willow returned the open-mouthed kiss, which was turning heated. "That's the idea."

*****

"Hello Lily. It's Tara."

"Hi! Oh, I go by Anne now."

"Okay, Anne. How is Europe?"

"Amazing. I love Mrs George. And your Aunt ... I swear, I wouldn't have gotten better so quickly if it wasn't for her. I can walk without a stick now."

"That's awesome!"

"Did you get the invitation?"

"Yes, Will and I will definitely be there."

"Who would've thought, girl from nowhere. I want to give something back to the community."

"A shelter for homeless kids is a wonderful idea."

"I have so many people to thank, including you."

"I'm so proud of you, Anne."

*****

Tara closed the front door as quietly as she could, slipping off her shoes so she didn't make any sound on the hardwood floor. She checked each room, finding them still empty. Creeping upstairs, she almost dropped the bouquet she held behind her back.

She expected to find Willow in the bedroom, and was puzzled when she found the bed empty.

A faint scent of citrus wafted through the still atmosphere, and when she turned her head toward the bathroom, she was taken by the chorus of candlelight flickering at her.

"Bubble bath, my love?" a gloriously naked Willow beckoned.

*****

They strolled through Sunnydale. Tara had her arm around Willow's shoulders and Willow had one hand in Tara's back pocket.

"Town seems more peaceful than I remembered," Tara remarked.

"May be it's because we're contented," Willow murmured.

"Are we?"

"Yes, I think we are."

"Funny. I always thought 'contented' was for old people," Tara laughed.

Willow nuzzled into the crook of Tara's arm. "I don't mind being old, as long as we grow old together."

Tara didn't need to say anything.

They stopped underneath a street lamp, and their kiss seemed to brighten the dim glow of the lamp light.

*****



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Re: Lamplight

Postby Zampsa1975 » Sat Oct 20, 2007 8:26 am

Great ending to a great story.
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Re: Lamplight

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Sat Oct 20, 2007 8:54 am

Bonjour Watty :)

Snif it's finished. What am I gonna read on Saturdays morning? lol

The end was nice. I always like that kind of writing ^^

Thanks for this fic :)

Amicalement,

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Re: Lamplight

Postby SithLordWiccan » Sat Oct 20, 2007 9:05 am

Well, at least I can now say that some good has come from me missing the bus this morning.

Nice wrap up of the story, watts. Nothing too big and dramatic. Just short and to the point. Kinda fitting.

Awesome job. And maybe now that's it's finished, I'll finally find the time to sit down and read it all in one sitting. Yeah, right. :P
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Re: Lamplight

Postby WillowRulez » Sat Oct 20, 2007 12:37 pm

Hi again,
I'm a little sad to see this story ending but thank you nevertheless for this beautiful story. It was really nice to see a different approach of them getting together, having a past, and that there are "demons" in real life too.
For their part in solving the crime, Fred was promoted to Special Agent in Charge; Gunn made detective second grade and Lockley received a commendation also.

Haha, loved the "a commendation also".
Neat how you summarized what everything was up to after the arresting. Kinda movie-like.
They stopped underneath a street lamp, and their kiss seemed to brighten the dim glow of the lamp light.

A perfect end!
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Re: Lamplight

Postby Tara the Phoenix » Sat Oct 20, 2007 4:44 pm

watty,

I want to thank you so much for sharing your gift and your story. It was truly remarkable for the depth you gave, for describing clubbing and insider trading so even a know-nothing layperson like me can understand it. Also, Willow and Tara's slow denouement was delicious and angsty,and I enjoyed every minute of it. I only wish it could go on.

Thank you for sharing.

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Re: Lamplight

Postby db » Sat Oct 20, 2007 5:01 pm

Bravo, Ms. Watty-pants!

Bravo.

Wonderful ending to a twisty turn-y amazing story that took turns breaking and swelling my heart.

Bravo.

Who hearts Watty and her stories?

Pick me! Pick me!

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Re: Lamplight

Postby LittleBit » Sat Oct 20, 2007 6:21 pm

Fabulous story and loved the ending - so sweet! :D
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Re: Lamplight

Postby Kaia » Sun Oct 21, 2007 9:34 am

Watty, you are a goddess.

I am so glad to finally see this story reach its conclusion and at the same time sad that I won't get up every saturday knowing there was a new update.
I loved the way you re-created the story inside the story after the long hiatus, and I love how you brought your characters alive and made them people the reader can relate to.
Kudos to you, my friend...
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Re: Lamplight

Postby Alcy » Tue Oct 23, 2007 1:18 am

Hiya Watty, what a great end to what has been a great ride, thanks for all the angst you've shared with us, you know how much we kittens just love that angst...and as a fitting end to the angst we've got a happily ever after for our favourite crime solving duo.

Many, many bravos for you, we should seriously start handing out trophies for completed fics, I know just how much work it is to bring a work like this to fulfillment and it's a sense of achievement when you finish, a well deserved sense of achievement in this case.

What is going to be the next Watty offering I wonder?

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Re: Lamplight

Postby Artemis » Fri Nov 02, 2007 5:33 am

Feedback at last :blush Great finale to the story - I especially liked the Mayor's final fate, that's definitely worth a chuckle, and it seems fitting that he got such a mundane end, if you get what I mean - no going out in a final blaze of villainy, getting killed fighting off the police, or blowing up the boat, or whatever. He was a very mundane villain, after all - I don't mean uninteresting, just as I think I said in an earlier feedback post, his evil was a very human kind, greedy and justifying what he did as necessary for his survival, mentally passing the blame on to others higher up the food chain so he could regard himself as not really responsible.

I liked how Faith went out too - that too seemed fitting, that she'd never really cared much either way, so she had no need to be involved in the conclusion to the story, and could just walk away when it suited her. Interesting how that kind of inverted the Mayor/Faith relationship from canon - here it was more that she was above him, using him rather than the other way around, and once he wasn't useful any more, off she goes.

I liked the series of vignettes for the final chapter, to touch on all the aspects of how Willow and Tara's reunion and adventure played out for them, and others. As well as the witty dialogue scenes, there was a feeling, with the frequent scene breaks, of time passing, and the pace slowing and the story settling into a softer, warmer place.
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Re: Lamplight

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Fri Nov 02, 2007 6:27 am

Watsylvania!

First of all, as a native of the Buckeye state, I don't understand why Buffy wouldn't be THRILLED to be placed in Cleveland. Really.

You crafted a very nice climax for us, Watty, and on behalf of all satisfied Kittens, allow me to just say thanks. But seriously, folks--we were all geared up to deal with Willow in danger, and suddenly it's TARA who's in danger. Turns out Willow was in better shape. You did a nice job of conveying the awful dread of knowing that a loved one is in danger and having absolutely no way to help or even find out what's happening. I can't imagine anything worse, quite frankly, unless it's waking up with Dick Cheney in your bed.

I always had a special place in my heart for Fred. (Didja notice how Joss killed her and Tara off in basically identical fashions? Good girl finds true love; her lover ends up with her blood on his/her shirt. Way to push yourself, JW.) So it was fun to read her being all large with the hetero butch here.

Faith was an interesting wild card--I was wondering what you were going to do w/ her. I know she vowed never to see either of them again, but her exit does lend itself to a return visit in any sequels that might be forthcoming...

Thanks so much for this story, Watty. And the diagram--girl, if there's ever an epic fight involving us and computers gone awry, I want to be in a squad with you and Car.

Great job, and thanks again!
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Re: Lamplight

Postby watty » Wed Nov 07, 2007 9:38 am

Zampsa1975 -- thanks.

Julia -- thank you for your support, my dear. It's been great to see your name in the comments every week.

Alex -- thanks, I'm glad you liked the drabble format. It gives it a whimsical feel, I think. Thanks again.

WillowRulez -- thank you for your comments. I thought it would have been tough for the readers to empathize with such flawed versions of W/T, but then I wanted them to be real people, who make mistakes too. The demons are very much real life ones, not the fairy tale ones. Glad you liked the ending. :)

Phoenix -- thank you very much! I'm glad you found the club and finance world understandable. Angst, ha! oh yes, I'm the angst person around here.

db -- so, your 8BoM did a pretty good job at prediction. Love your description of twisty turn-y. Thanks my dear.

LittleBit -- sweet, eh? Thank you!

Karinna -- thanks for your constant support, doc. I'm glad the hiatus didn't sully the story. It is a relief to have finally finished posting. Thanks again. :)

Alcy -- it has been a ride, hasn't it? In a twisted way I've enjoyed writing the angst (heehee) and I'm glad the crime-fighting part wasn't too OTT. You're absolutely right-on about the feeling of completeness at a finished fic. Looking forward to more on van Rosenberg. :P

What is going to be the next Watty offering I wonder?

I have plenty of ideas and plans, honest. But work, lack of confidence in writing and the feeling of indifference re: posting isn't helping. I've set a target of one more long fic next year, let's see.

Chris -- thanks! As usual, you pick the best and poignant details in your feedback. The Mayor surely has it coming to him hasn't he? Suck an apt description, that his is a mundane fate, which is pretty much how real life is. There is no blazing glory, no villain-y grand soliloquy, just ... jail. Faith, on the other hand, rode off in her version of sunset. Yes, it's unfair that she gets away with what she did and receives no punishment. Again, it's pretty realistic I hope.

I'm so happy that readers liked the drabble format for the ending. There were loose ends but I wanted a "swinging spotlight" effect, because it's like all the characters are continuing with their lives and we catch a 100-word glimpse before we the readers fade out. I really like the way you described the ending:

there was a feeling, with the frequent scene breaks, of time passing, and the pace slowing and the story settling into a softer, warmer place.

So despite all the angst and the fear, they are in a better happier place.

Mary -- my dear Mary, I really appreciate your stopping by to give your lovely support. I wanted this to be a multi-layered yet realistic story, and I hope I have achieved it. Yes it may have been unrealistic to put them in this type of danger but there was real fear when Tara was in danger; and vice versa. Glad you liked Fred, sometimes I think of her with head tight in a bun, glasses and a clipboard -- she has a serious side that threatens to crack, doesn't she? As for Faith, I deliberately left her as fate unknown -- she has gotten away with her bad deeds, and my point is that this happens. Criminals escape justice all the time.

I can't imagine anything worse, quite frankly, unless it's waking up with Dick Cheney in your bed.

Not being as well versed as I'd like with my American politics, may I venture waking up with Dick Cheney and a hunting rifle in your bed?

And the diagram--girl, if there's ever an epic fight involving us and computers gone awry, I want to be in a squad with you and Car.

:lmao I think you and Car will be in the same squad doing some serious eye-rolling at me. I'm a dork and I'm proud of it. Thank you again! :)



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Re: Lamplight

Postby bytrsuite » Sat Nov 24, 2007 1:54 am

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Re: Lamplight

Postby na71684 » Sat Nov 24, 2007 9:51 pm

This was a really cool fic. Are you going to make a sequel out of it?
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Re: Lamplight

Postby Renatecs » Fri Jan 25, 2008 9:38 am

Thanks for the great story. I really liked the way you wrote is. The crime was very well written, i liked how you elleborated on all the details and different charachters and their stories.

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Re: Lamplight

Postby ophelia11 » Sun Mar 30, 2008 6:32 pm

Hey there.

I've been away from the board for well...a really long time. I was jonesing for a W/T fix this weekend and this definitely fit the bill. I read the whole thing in a couple days. I loved the balance you maintained between action and romance. As an angst junky I loved how you wove that through the story as well. I can't say anything better than what others have already posted, but I just really, really enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing!

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