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Re: ~PART 7~

Postby vix84 » Tue Oct 08, 2002 12:45 am

Yay, I'm lovin' this fic! Two updates...*happy dance*



Willow and Hadley are just too cute together! I loved how Will plays I-spy; continuing to play until she guesses, no matter how long that takes. Ooh I hope for more W/T kissage soon!



Thanks :D

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After the moon went
down...

Tara, 'Seeing Red'

vix84
 


Re: ~PART 7~

Postby barnabasvamp » Tue Oct 08, 2002 12:57 am

Great updates...Our girls are finally getting closer :clap .



Dawn and Tori...Awww Young love :grin

BV

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

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Re: ~PART 7~

Postby The Rose24 » Tue Oct 08, 2002 4:07 am

Very cute.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

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Re: ~PART 7~

Postby no birthday cake » Tue Oct 08, 2002 5:12 am

this is THE cutest.

EVER.

no birthday cake
 


Update! Part 8a!

Postby Taras Shadow » Tue Oct 08, 2002 6:57 am

Kind of running a little behind on my English, so I hope this holds you over until tomorrow…hopefully :D



Title: Never A Night Like This

Author: Taras Shadow

Disclaimer: All characters belong to Joss Whedon, ME, UPN…except for Tori, Hadley, Jessica Paris, and Orlando-they belong to me ;)

Feedback: Yes please, everything is welcome

Pairings: W/T, X/A, B/?, D/?

Rating: PG :grin

Summary: Willow is one of the hottest models in the world. When she comes home for her holiday, she meets a nice family that is new to Sunnydale. Can she find love, and continue her much loved career? This is an AU fic. There will be a little angst between some characters, but nothing big for I want to keep the angst issue light. Thoughts are in < > Flashbacks are in **

And...as promised...some smoochies. This Part 8a mostly focuses on Tara and Willow... EnJoY! :wink

~Part 8a~

~*~*~*~*~*~



The week went by fast. Willow hadn’t really seen Tara that often since she dropped her and Hadley off that first day of school.



Tara has been extra busy with a teenage sister and a little girl just starting school, trying to make sure they’re comfortable and that their days were good. She’s seen a lot of Dawn, but no Willow. Dawn was over everyday after school, doing homework with Tori. She loved Dawn’s company, and it seemed that the young Summer’s was having a great influence on Tori.



Now…it was Hadley’s fifth birthday. And a very tired out Tara was busy chasing her daughter around, trying to calm her down from her excitement. Hadley couldn’t wait until Willow got there, and she couldn’t wait until her new little friends Lily and Mikey arrived.



Lily had welcomed Hadley into the classroom when she first arrived. And they automatically clicked. Then Danny joined their playtime group. Lily and Mikey were Hadley’s first official school friends.



“Hadley…did you take my lotion?” Tara asked as she came out of the bathroom, looking on her dresser, thinking maybe she misplaced it.



“Would you be mad if I did?” Hadley asked in a small voice, holding something behind her back.



“No, just tell me where you put it.”



Hadley looked at her mother and put down her head. She brought a not so neat wrapped up box. “It’s for Willow.”



“Oh honey, why?” Tara sat down next to her daughter on her bedroom floor.



“Because she’s coming. And she’ll probly bring a present, so I wanted to give one back.” Hadley smiled.



“Sweetie, I think that defeats the purpose of having a birthday party and getting presents.” Tara played with Hadley’s blonde curls.



“I know. It’s just that Willow, she’s…different…special. I want her around more.” The young girl looked up into her mother’s. “Don’t you?”



“Of course I do sweetie.”



“I miss her and Brady…I hope she brings Brady with her. That’d be a cool birthday present.” Hadley bounced up and down. “You miss her too?”



“Yes, I do miss her. Now come down stairs, we’ll help Dawn and Tori with the rest of the presents and decorations.”

~*~*~*~*~*~



Hadley was playing outside when Lily and Mikey arrived. They were playing hopscotch, Tori and Dawn played with them while Tara was inside getting the cake and little party games together.



A soft knock on the door brought Tara out of her thoughts about Willow. She wiped her hands of that were full of homemade icing, and answered the door. “Willow…”



“Hey…sorry I’m a little late, I kinda lost track of time. I was at home, making Hadley’s present, and then when I looked at the clock and Bham! Five thirty…hey wait…don’t you have a night class?” Willow stepped inside as Tara opened the door further.



“And miss my daughter’s birthday?” Tara laughed, she took the two gifts that were wrapped and inspected them. “So…you made something?”



“Uh, yeah. Actually I kinda have a gift for you but I wasn’t going to bring it because well, that would be the wrong Maclay birthday.” Willow looked around the place realizing this ws the first time she’s actually been inside the house. She’s dropped Tori and Hadley off, and picked Tara and Hadley up. “Wow Tara…this place is so…cute.”



“Thanks. I try.” Tara put the gifts on the side table in the hallway. “So, what are the gifts? If you don’t mind me asking.”



“Well, one is a doll I made…it took me all week. The other is a small journal. She can use it to draw pictures and stuff. It also comes with a package of different coloured marker pens.” Willow smiled when she saw Tara beam. “What…you want one too?” She joked.



“Um…” < I’d rather have you. > “Say, would you like to help me?”



“Of course, but first, I thought maybe Hadley would like to see Brady. I wasn’t sure if I could bring her in, so I tied her up just outside the door.”



“Brady is welcomed inside.” Tara smiled. “But Hadley’s outside in the back with her friends and the girls…you can bring her out there if you’d like.” Tara opened the door and untied Brady, leading her through the house and out the back door.



Brady was excited to see new people to play with, she ran straight towards Hadley, knocking her over and licking her small face. Hadley let a shriek of giggles and began to hug the puppy. “Willow’s here isn’t she?” She asked the dog, expecting an answer.



“Looks like Willow didn’t disappoint hey Had?” Tori asked her niece.



“She sure didn’t.”



Tara went back inside to find Willow practically caked in icing. It was on her nose and fingers. “Had a fight with the bowl?” She raised her eyebrow and grinned.



“Kind of…I can cook, but then I went to whip some of the tiny lumps out, I almost dropped…” Willow noticed Tara moving closer to her, “uh, then when I went to grab the bowl, my fingers turned to butter…and uh…” Tara was face to face with Willow.



“You want help cleaning that off? It could get kinda sticky if you leave it on.” Tara smiled innocently. < Alright Maclay, just go in for the kill…> Slowly, Tara leaned in and captured Willow’s lips. It was slow at first, but it intensified. Mouths moved against one another softly, catching a small moan here and there. Then, like a blink of an eye, Tara pulled back, breathing heavily. She saw the dark emerald eyes in front of her. “I see you also decided to taste test the icing as well?” The blonde whispered, smirking, licking her own lips.



“Yeah, well if I could have another kiss like that, I’d do it again if that were my punishment.” Willow wanted to place her hands around Tara…on Tara, but they were sticky.



Tara lifted one of Willow’s hands and brought the fingers to her mouth, one by one she licked them clean before switching to the next.



“Uh…Tara…” Willow began.



“What? Am I m…making you uncomfortable?” Tara asked with horror in her face.



“Oh no no. It’s just that you’ve got icing all around your nose…probably from mine.” Willow blushed.



“Really?” Tara looked into the reflected toaster and noticed the small patches of icing. When she turned around to face Willow, she found herself backed up against the counter, lips on hers, and hands lacing through her own. Tara smiled into the kiss and decided she should make the next move. Her tongue peeked out, and licked the red heads bottom lip. Willow sighed and accepted the invitation, opening her mouth, she felt Tara’s warm tongue inside her mouth, exploring. < Could this get any better? > The red head’s mind was spinning.



“Willow…” Tara whispered. Before pulling the red head tighter against her.



Willow’s hands released Tara’s as they travelled slowly up the blonde’s arms, to her shoulders, the base of her neck, then finally holding her face. Slowing the pace of the kiss down, reaching the emotion of her mood. Pulling back, she searched the blue eyes, looking for any regret, and found none. She smiled and placed a kiss on Tara’s nose, her tongue peeked out to lick of the sweetness. “I’ve wanted to kiss you from the moment I saw you.” Willow confessed.



“Me too.” Tara grinned. “You are a great, amazing kisser.”



“Who me? I try.” Willow shivered as she felt the ruby lips of Tara’s against her ear.



“You don’t have to try Will…that was, you were amazing.” Tara whispered, and kissed the peach fuzzed earlobe.



Happy and content, Willow pulled Tara’s body tighter, if that’s possible, closer to hers and sighed when Tara rested her head on her shoulder. “Thank you.” Willow simply said before three kids, two teenagers, and a puppy, came running through the door laughing.



Tara kissed Willow’s neck before pulling back, “Who wants homemade cake?” She smiled widely turning around to face five pair of eyes. “What?”



Tori pointed to Willow and her sister, “You kind of have icing all over your shirts and faces…”



The room burst into laughter as Willow and Tara looked at each other, blushing and smiling uncontrollably.

~*~*~*~*~



~Holly~



Show me where to touch you- Tara-It Ain’t Fickle

Taras Shadow
 


Re: Update! Part 8a!

Postby fairydust » Tue Oct 08, 2002 7:16 am

awww:grin Finally a ton of smoochies. Frosting is very fun for kissies...uh...ahem....not that i uh...would know or anything... *looks around room and blushes profusely*

Very cute:D

*****Faye*****

fairydust
 


Re: Update! Part 8a!

Postby vix84 » Tue Oct 08, 2002 7:26 am

Yay, an update! Hadley was so cute, wanting to give Will a pressie for her own birthday!



Hehehe, I really liked the icing being spread by smoochies. That's the best way... :drool Yeah, great kissage...can't wait for more :D



Thanks, Holly!





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After the moon went
down...

Tara, 'Seeing Red'

vix84
 


Re: Update! Part 8a!

Postby saphire tear » Tue Oct 08, 2002 9:44 am

Very cute story!

saphire tear
 


Re: Update! Part 8a!

Postby Cindipitude » Tue Oct 08, 2002 9:56 am

Ok, can I just say how much I'm loving Hadley? :)

She is just so damn cute!

Cindi

Cindipitude
 


Re: Update! Part 8a!

Postby snuggle79 » Tue Oct 08, 2002 10:19 am

this is getting better and better and sweeter! :)

Yay for the smoochies!

great update!

Tara:"Maybe we dreamed it."

Willow:"Right. Right. Wrong! (points at her head ) Different Brains." Tara:"Oh yeah."



"You could at least say sorry, rude-o!"

snuggle79
 


Re: Update! Part 8a!

Postby barnabasvamp » Tue Oct 08, 2002 11:22 am

Holly;

Your a doll to keep us occupied with these wonderful updates. :clap

They are just too cute, and it just keeps getting better! The kissing was just so sensual, can't wait for more. :grin

BV

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

barnabasvamp
 


Re: Update! Part 8a!

Postby pikescoob » Tue Oct 08, 2002 12:33 pm

Hadley is just so adorable wanting to give Willow a present cuz she'd be bringing her one :) and wow some major smoochin' :D gotta love that. Thanks for the great update :grin



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: Update! Part 8a!

Postby allyson12 » Tue Oct 08, 2002 12:37 pm

Hmm. I really liked this. I couldn't sleep so I propped my apple laptop on my lap in bed and read this one. Loved the major smoochies!



-Allyson

"After one take, Joss did say, 'Can we have one that's less like you're going to sleep together in about five minutes?'" - Alyson Hannigan

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Re: Update! Part 8a!

Postby singgirl » Tue Oct 08, 2002 4:40 pm

oooh icing everywhere lucky icing...

singgirl
 


Re: New Fic- Never A Night Like This (AU)

Postby LostSoul » Tue Oct 08, 2002 6:21 pm

Taras Shadow - I like the story ver much, but I have difficulty with the tense shifts and typos. If you need a beta, I'd be happy to help out. I have an English degree :)



LostSoul


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Re: New Fic- Never A Night Like This (AU)

Postby Puff » Tue Oct 08, 2002 6:44 pm

Oh I just read through the whole thing so far and this story is just so sweet. Thanks you, it's just what I need.

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Re: New Fic- Never A Night Like This (AU)

Postby littlecrazy80 » Tue Oct 08, 2002 7:01 pm

I just got home from work and what do I find? 2 Updates!!!!!!

:bounce

Willow and Tara are so sweet!!!

Where can I get my own little Hadley?



*lil´c*



Unter den Blinden ist der Einäugige König.

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Re: New Fic- Never A Night Like This (AU)

Postby Darn Salem Judges » Tue Oct 08, 2002 7:50 pm

All I gotta say now is... YEY! SMOOCHIES & FROSTING! Hehehe ;)

This story truely is amazing and I gotta agree with everyone....I want my own Hadley!!



:willow & :tara smoochies = :drool



Love to all Kitties!

Em xxXXXxx

AMBER: It's been really interesting because, you know, I've never stuck my tongue in a girl's mouth before!

Darn Salem Judges
 


Part 8b

Postby Taras Shadow » Tue Oct 08, 2002 8:17 pm

Hey everyone...just putting up Part 8b. :D



fairydust: I know what you mean abot the frosting... :wink . Thank you!



vix84: I'm trying to fit the kissage in there as much as I can, because I'm getting a little impatient myself :lol So more smoochies will be one the way. In Part 9!



saphire tear: Thank You!! And might I add...cute name! :D



Cindipitude: Hadley must be addictive! She's so cute, and I'm glad people are seeing her the way I do.



snuggle79: Sweeter...no pun intended right? ;) Thank you for reading and enjoying!



barnabasvamp: I try to keep things up to date. And as for the kiss... :blush I'm glad you found it sensual... I wouldn't want it any other way...



pikescoob: Hadley loves Willow, she's scared she'll leave. And she's trying harder and harder to get her mama and Willow together. I have great plans for Hadley in the next couple of parts, so stay tuned. :)



allyson12: You read this as like a bedtime story... thank you. I feel special:D I'm glad you're enjoying it!



singgirl: Lucky icing indeed! Makes you wish you were like...something sticky, just so you can stick to those witches huh? :wink !



LostSoul: I am glad you like the story so far. And it is very kind of you to be honest with me. Can I just ask you by what you mean by tense shifts? And I agree with the typos...still working on that. Thanks!! :D :D :D



Puff: No no, Thank you!! I'm glad it helped you in one way or another, and I am especially glad you like this. :)



littlecrazy80: First of all...a couple updates back, you mentioned it was your first official post...Thank you for letting my story be the first. I am glad you're enjoying this. I have a lot more coming up. As for getting your own Hadley...not sure where...but I'll get back to you if I find out where ok? :grin



Darn Salem Judges: Yes...smoochies finally. And I had to add the frosting...don't you think it was a wee bit 'sweeter'? :grin Thank you!



I’m back with Part 8b. Hope you enjoy!



Title: Never A Night Like This

Author: Taras Shadow

Disclaimer: All characters belong to Joss Whedon, ME, UPN…except for Tori, Hadley, Jessica Paris, and Orlando-they belong to me ;)

Feedback: Yes please, everything is welcome

Pairings: W/T, X/A, B/?, D/?

Rating: PG :grin

Summary: Willow is one of the hottest models in the world. When she comes home for her holiday, she meets a nice family that is new to Sunnydale. Can she find love, and continue her much loved career? This is an AU fic. There will be a little angst between some characters, but nothing big for I want to keep the angst issue light. Thoughts are in < > Flashbacks are in **



~Part 8b~



Hadley was sitting, and waiting patiently at the kitchen table. Her friends Lily and Mikey were making small jokes, as the grown-ups got the cake, ice cream, plates, forks, and drinks in order.



“Hadley, where’s your daddy?” Lily asked, noticing that there was no male in sight.



“My daddy?” Hadley questioned. She never really thought about it, her mama always told her that her daddy just couldn’t be a part of her life, because he never wanted to make time. Although the truth was that Jason could care-less about it. In fact, when he first saw the baby, he figured that she wasn’t his because she never even looked like him. And that’s the way Tara wanted it.



“Yeah, I’ve never met him before. Did he and your mama got brokened up?” Lily was curious.



“I don’t have a daddy Lily, I only have a mommy.” Hadley said cheerily. “She’s all I’ll ever need.”



“Is Willow your other mother?” Mikey asked, giggling.



“Not yet.” Hadley whispered to them.



“So what are you kiddies talking about?” Dawn sat down at the table with the three small bodies.



“Mama…and Willow.” Hadley answered honestly.



“I see….how about you three go wash up before cake and ice cream ok? You don’t want to sick from the germs and stuff all over your hands.” Dawn smiled.



“If we wash…you and Aunt Tori wash…” Hadley held out her small hand for Dawn to grab. Tori caught that, and she grabbed Dawn’s other hand, smiling as she followed this small group to the bathroom.



“Children and their curious minds.” Willow smiled as she stood next to Tara putting the candles in the cake. “Mind you…when I was their age, I was always so curious.”



“Really…what kinds of things were you curious about?” Tara smirked, sorting out the small plates.



“Science stuff mostly.” Willow responded. “It’s something about science…I don’t know, it always gets everybody curious at one point.”



“I know, this one time, when I was younger, I heard a blonde joke.” Tara began, “It was about the sun and planets.”



“Don’t think I’ve ever heard that one.” Willow looked at Tara, urging her to continue.



“OK, well, there’s this blonde, red head, and brunette. A guy goes up to each one, and asks them a question, ‘if you could visit any planet, what one, and why?’, so the brunette answers him, ‘I’d choose Mars, just to see the red planet.’ So the guy nods his head in agreement, he goes to the brunette, and she answers, ‘I’d definitely go to Saturn so I can run laps around the ring.’ Again the guy nods in agreement. Finally he reaches the blonde and asks her the same question, ‘if you could visit any planet, what one and why?’ the blonde thinks for moment, then her eyes lit up, ‘Oh, I’d go to the sun.’ The guy looks at her confused, ‘miss…if you were to ever step anywhere near the sun, you’d burn to the crisp and lose your eyesight quickly.’ The blonde laughs like he’s crazy, ‘Of course, that’s why I’d turn it off.’” Tara bent her head down. “When I heard that joke, I told my mother I’d turn off the sun too. I never realized I’d actually fall for it.”



Willow laughed and looked at Tara, “You actually thought you could turn off the sun by a light switch?”



“Hey, I was curious, and I was persistent to see the universe from the Sun’s view.” Tara defended herself.



“Aww, I’m sorry baby.” Willow hugged Tara tightly, but she was still grinning.



Tara’s heart leapt when Willow called her baby, she was Willow’s baby. “It’s ok, I’m over it now.”



Dawn and Tori came bouncing down the stairs with three kids following them. “Ok, we’re cleaned up and ready to dig in.” Tori sat on the counter.



“Impatient much?” Hadley smirked at her mama’s grumble, as she took her previous seat. “Beside Tor, I think Hadley’s been waiting for the cake more then you have.”



“So not true. Just upstairs, Hadley said that she could wait for the cake until later. Right now she wanted to spy on you and Willo…oops.” Tori looked at her niece who glared at her.



“I have no clue what you’re talking about Aunt Tori, I think maybe you’re hearing things.” Hadley giggled. She knew she was caught, but she didn’t want to give up so easily.



“And why, may I ask, did you want to spy on us?” Willow asked playfully.



“Tattler!” Hadley stuck her tongue out at her auntie, and then looked at the amused faces on her mother and Willow. “Beeeeecause I wanted to…play ‘I spy’?” Her smile was so innocent that everyone let it slide.



After cake and ice cream, everyone gathered in the living room to watch Hadley open her presents. “Open mine first.” Lily said clapping her hands in excitement. Hadley opened up the small gift bag, and found a small teddy bear holding a lollipop.



“Wow…thanks Lily.” Hadley smiled, and passed the gift to her mother. Next she opened Mikey’s, it was a small pony figure, with tiny rainbow clovers. “I love it, mama? Can I put it beside my jewellery box?” Tara nodded her head grinning ever so happily. Hadley saw out of the corner of her eye, her mama reach behind her and entwine her fingers with Willow’s. Hadley jumped up from where she was seated, in the middle of the floor, and flew herself around Willow’s legs.



“Whoa!” Willow laughed, and looked down at Hadley then kneeled taking the small figure into her arms squeezing gently. “Are you ok?”



“Better, thank you Willow…I love you.” Hadley squeezed tighter.



“I love you too baby girl…but you didn’t even open my present yet.” Willow looked up at Tara in confusion but smiled because she seriously loved all of them.



“Yes you did, member what we talked about last week? You did that Willow, you did it.” Hadley pulled back slowly, tiny tears starting to form. “The windows to your soul Will…you did it.”



Willow smiled with love as she drew Hadley back in. “I promise Had,” she whispered into the tiny ear, “that whatever happens, I’ll always be here to make you and your family happy. Now, scoot back over there, and open up the rest of your presents.”



Hadley smiled and kissed Willow on the cheek, she looked at her mama and winked. Tara let out a small giggle, trying to find answers of what just happened in her daughter’s eyes. The child continued to unwrap until she reached the last three. One from her mama, and the other two from Willow. She decided to open up Willow’s first. Slowly, with her tongue peeking out between her teeth, she unwrapped the first box. Inside, there, rested a small blonde doll, dressed in a baby blue dress with pretty white shoes, and a tiny label reading ‘Baby Girl’. With wide blue eyes she looked up at Willow, “Thank you so much Willow.”



“You’re welcome.” Willow smiled; Tara looked at her and grinned.



“Had, Willow made that just for you.” Tara said still grinning.



“I know…it’s beautiful…just like you mama.” Hadley cradled the doll as if it were real. “Lily, you want to hold her while I open up the rest?” Lily bobbed her head up and down as she took the doll away from the owner. Hadley opened the next one, “A journal? A real journal?”



“Yeah, complete with a coloured kit.” Willow bent down and started to sort out the colours. “Hope you like it.”



“I love it…but I told you, you didn’t have too.” Hadley had the exact same grinned plastered to her face as her mother did.



“What can I say, you spoil Brady, I spoil you.” Willow returned the grin. “Now what did mama get you?”



Hadley tore off the paper, and found a very crystal clear like, jewellery box. “Oh wow…” Hadley breathed. “Mama…it’s beautiful.”



Tara sat down next to her daughter, and took the crystal box in her hands. “It’s a dream box, you write or draw your dream, and place it inside. Then, on a sunny day, you let the goddess of light reach in, and place a blessing on your dream.”



“Can I do my dream right now?” Hadley asked anxiously.



“Sure, let’s clean up a bit before Lily and Mikey’s parents come to pick them up.” Tara started to clean but was stopped by a warm hand on hers.



“Go, I’ll clean this up.” Willow smiled sweetly. “I can stay later too, if you wanted help cleaning up.”



“That…thanks. Um…you could even spend the night.” Tara slipped in. “I don’t have an extra bedroom like you…but, you know, I could crawl in with Hadley, and you could take my bed.”



“Or…I could take the couch…but I really should go home…Brady needs her food.” Willow, at this point, regretted bringing her dog.



“Well, when you drop Dawn off…you can take Brady home.” Tara suggested. Her voice was kind of pleading.



“Hmmm…how about we have a slumber party instead. I sleep on the floor in your room, that way we can talk.” Willow smiled at Tara lovingly.



“Or…we could share my bed…”



“Or…you two can stop with the flirting already.” Tori laughed, she looked at Dawn and grabbed her hand walking into the kitchen before Tara could say anything back.

~*~*~*~*~*~



Dawn fought to with her sister on the phone to spend the night at Tori’s. “God Buffy, it’s not like we’re partying and having guys over.”



“Dawn, it’s just that I don’t want you over staying your welcome there.” Buffy calmly said. “That’s what mom would say.”



“Yes I know, but you’re not mom. Buff…please? You’re like the coolest sister, I promise we can spend tomorrow night doing anything you want.”



“Cool huh? OK, just for that you can. But if Tara says it’s time to go or whatever, listen to her.”



“I will, I always do. But she’s not to concerned with Tori and I…to busy flirting with Willow, who, by the way is staying here too.” Dawn made a face to herself.



“Really? Go Will!” Buffy rooted for her best friend. “Not that they can do anything…I mean, with little Hadley.”



“Hadley is totally aware of the surroundings. She’s so…observant. Can she live with us?” Dawn asked.



“No, I think Tara would miss her to death.” Buffy laughed. “I should go out and patrol. Did you need anything from the house?”



“Ah…no. Tori has the clothes that I let her burrow. They’re clean, so I’m good to go. But Willow might need a favour.”



“What’s that?” Buffy knew full well what it was.



“Brady…”



“I’ll be over in a while. Behave.” Buffy and Dawn said bye and hung up the phone.



“So, it’s cool with your sister?” Tori asked looking at the brunette.



“Yeah…I love spending the night with you.” Dawn said as she sat close to Tori.



“Me too.” Tori replied. “Dawn…”



“Yeah?”



“Have you ever had a boyfriend?” Tori asked fidgeting a bit with her blanket.



“No.”



“No? What guy in their right mind, wouldn’t go out with you?” Tori asked taken aback.



“Have you?” Dawn blushed.



“Well…no. Never was curious in them. But I did have this one guy who practically stalked me.” Tori laughed.



Dawn leaned back, so her head rested on the headboard of the bed. < Attracted…yes, definitely attracted. But…what would mom say? Or Buffy? I never liked guys…not really. I always had this tiny crush on Willow…but now that doesn’t exist. I have these feelings for Tori…and no matter how much I fight them, not that I want too, it never strays. So what am I going to do about it? >



Tori noticed the deep thought look on Dawn’s face. “Hey, are you ok?”



“Wha…oh, yeah, I’m fine.” Dawn sat up, and took Tori’s hands into hers, and smiled. “I wanna show this place…”

~*~*~*~*~*~*

Part 9 will be up soon. Just need to fix it up. :D



~Holly~



Show me where to touch you- Tara-It Ain’t Fickle

Taras Shadow
 


Re: Part 8b

Postby XWickedXWiccan » Tue Oct 08, 2002 8:41 pm

Like every other update I love it!! Completely and utterly love it!! More :bounce More :bounce More :bounce



-Trinity-



P.S. Have I ever told you, you are one of my favorite writers?? If I didn't then now you know. Just don't tell anyone cause I usually don't favor someone more than the other :grin



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Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love, the clarity of hatred, and the ecstacy of grief. It hurts sometimes more than we can bare. If we can live without passion maybe we'd know some peace. But we'd be hollow, empty rooms, shuttered, and dank, With out passion we'd truly be dead. ANGEL in "Passion"

XWickedXWiccan
 


Re: Part 8b

Postby Puff » Tue Oct 08, 2002 8:52 pm

Ah that was sweet, I'm ill at home with a cold today so this was nice to read and it made me smile. Hadley is a cutie :)

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You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

Puff
 


Re: Part 8b

Postby LostSoul » Tue Oct 08, 2002 9:13 pm

Taras Shadow - By tense shift, I mean that sometimes you write in the past tense and sometimes in the present tense. Generally, unless there is a specific purpose, writer's keep their work in the past tense.



So, my suggestion would be to just glance through what you've written and make sure that it's in the past tense.



I'm glad you took my comment constructively because I don't want to make you feel bad. I just want to help you be the best writer that you can be.



And I hope when I post the first chapters of my fan fic people will do the same :)



Keep it up the story is great.

LostSoul


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"I remember you." - Amber Benson

LostSoul
 


Re: Part 8b

Postby snuggle79 » Tue Oct 08, 2002 9:29 pm

Awww, how many times did i call this story sweet?? lol

Well, i'm going to say it again and again... :)

Very sweet update!



Tara:"Maybe we dreamed it."

Willow:"Right. Right. Wrong! (points at her head ) Different Brains." Tara:"Oh yeah."



"You could at least say sorry, rude-o!"

snuggle79
 


Re: Part 8b

Postby saphire tear » Tue Oct 08, 2002 9:36 pm

The names cute? It would be if I could have spelled it correctly..Sapphire Tear was taken so I had to go with Saphire... Most people assume That I just cant spell. Ah well whatcha gonna do?

Great fic I am loving it! Actually its really cool that you update so fast. I logged on in college this morning and there was a new part to the story and again this evening! Two updates in one day? You have us spoiled!

saphire tear
 


Re: Part 8b

Postby Ginner WTluv » Tue Oct 08, 2002 9:42 pm

This fic just keeps getting better and better!! Dawn has feelings for Tori... i knew it;) And Willow and Tara with all the smoochies, woohoo!! :D Can't wait for the next update!! This fic rocks.



~ Jen :peace



“Sleep well baby?” Willow asked, a little more pep in her voice now that she had a dose of morning caffeine.



“Like a log until my pillow got up and left.” Tara smirked and playfully slapped Willow across the shoulder. ~ All You Wanted - Nath


Ginner WTluv
 


Re: Part 8b

Postby TesniStryngefyre » Tue Oct 08, 2002 9:53 pm

This should be rated OMG for Oh My God This Is So Sweet.



I am so loving this beautiful sweet loving fic... and thanks so much for being so prolific with the updates. I check for updates to this fic more then I check my email.



AJ

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TARA: Every time I... even when I'm at my worst ... you always make me feel special. How do you do that?

WILLOW: Magic.

TesniStryngefyre
 


Re: Part 8b

Postby the slayers girl » Tue Oct 08, 2002 9:55 pm

I absolutely love this story....i cant think of anything to say except how wonderful it is.

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Rage more

the slayers girl
 


Re: Part 8b

Postby MissQuirky » Tue Oct 08, 2002 10:02 pm

Just caught up w/ the last 2 updates and again w/ the awwww! I totally can't get enough of this fic! Its sooo cute! The party was great! And the heavy cake icing smoochies were good too! :D Lookin 4ward to hearin the rest f Dawn's sentence and Willow and Tara's sleep over goodness! :)



~Ashley~

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

MissQuirky
 


Re: Part 8b

Postby BFR from Paris » Tue Oct 08, 2002 11:09 pm

I've been away for two weeks and I just found this fic and I LOVE IT!!!!! :bounce



Cuteness all over the place! :)

BFR from Paris
 


Re: Part 8b

Postby Grimaldi » Tue Oct 08, 2002 11:35 pm

cool story, just got caught up :) Hadley reminds me of my cousin when she was that age.

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

2nd place??? That's just a fancy term for loser!

Screw you triangle thief!

Grimaldi
 

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