Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (UPDTED: 4/03/18)

[Promthea128]

Woo and hoo to you for surviving another apocolypse. When Willow was trying to get her morning "snugglies" I was worried that Shelia would come in and start screaming. But we have Nice Shelia, which is scarier than Evil Shelia. Sexy horseback riding sounds like fun.

[WR/TM]

okay I have to say that was sexy damn I so wish I had my horse now lol!!!

[wimpy0729]

Oh, so very nice all around, but this Sheila is downright creepy. What the hell is she up to? I'm hoping that even if she does have something a little devious up her sleeve, that Tara will win her over. We see a little glimmer of hope here when Tara is talking about her family. I can't wait to see what happens between those two.

Then, of course, the riding. Snuggled up together like that is just delicious. Perhaps they can defile the barn later. Oh yeah. And comparing getting on the saddle to a GYN exam had me laughing out loud.

More soon please. I really can't wait to see how this Sheila/Tara thing is going to play out.


Wimpy

[nightmask]

The part when they get on the horse and start flirting with each other is so amazing and adorable!!!
Willow is so lucky!! I wish I could ride with Tara
I'm really worried about what's going on with Sheila, is she really giving Tara a chance? Or is she working up to some evil plot to make Tara look bad?

I love Artemis's mannerisms you made him sound exactly like the horses I used to ride with! :]
I don't blame Tara for being a little nervous at first, as a child I always got pretty wigged out whenever the horse would start to get impatient and would stomp his feet and yank on the reins :]

Can't wait for more

[DaddyCatALSO]

Oh boy, the "making nice" plan of attack, devious Sheila.

And the scenes with the horse. . .set off too many free associations to bore you with the whole list.

[beautiful_love]

Yay an update! So I still totally don't trust Sheila. She's up to something... I know it. And it was nice to hear more about Tara and her past.

Sheila eyes seemed to soften a bit as she listened intently and learned more about Tara’s lack of family and what she went through with her mother.

So I'm wondering if this is genuine or not.

I'm totally loving that Willow is the one equiped to handle the horses. I feel like I'm actually learning from your writing. Very informative. But the moment between them on the horse was a very nice touch. As always great update!

[love_2003]

Great update. I don't know why Shelia is acting nice and polite but I hope she keeps it up and its not just a trick. If I ever ride a horse I want an introduction to riding like Tara is getting from Willow.

[jazhers]

Yaaaay Update!! <- I love that banana. Anyway great update just so very sweet and loving and yumm to the horse scene. All during the breakfast scene I was smiling with a cringe lurking on the side waiting for Sheila to bring out the mean. So, when breakfast was over I breath a sigh of relief. However I'm keeping a watchful eye out i know it's coming and I have to admit, I'm kinda scared. Can't wait for more. Write Write Write. Thanks.

[Laragh]

she began the arduous task of slipping out from under the sleeping redhead

I read that as 'amorous' first time round for some reason and got throughly confused.

Aww poor Willow, jumping to those conclusions. What is it you were saying before about classic W/T misunderstandings?

“Smart ass,” Willow replied, reaching for Tara’s hand, “Come on, time to face the Texas inquisition.”

“Yes, and I expect my woman to do the same! That’s why I asked you to come home with me, so you could learn how to serve me better.”

Hehehe. "Dammit, woman, where's my sandwich?!"

laughing inwardly and feeling as if she were living an episode of ‘The Waltons.

Bahahaha, no joke by the time Sheila said 'Good morning', I was thing 'G'night John-boy!'

Something had changed; Sheila seemed pleasant and happy, completely opposite from the previous night.

That can't be good.

there’s no s-seat belts

Another reason not to trust them.

“Please put your feet in the stirrups and slide down!”...“I feel like I’m getting instructions for a gynecological exam,” Tara joked.

Slide down!

I'm all for the defiling in the barn too

[willowtaralover]

Howdy Shel
I agree!! I love that episode and it ranks #1 on my W/T favorite episode list. I’ve probably watched it a dozen times…is my geek showing?? Lol I have 3 lists:
-Favorite Buffy: Hush
-Favorite Willow: Dopplegangland
-Favorite W/T: Family

Holy macaroni cheese Shel, these are three of my fave Buffy episodes too, along with the likes of ‘New Moon Rising’ ‘OMWF’ and ‘Triangle’. For me the best scene in ‘Family’ is the really cute bedroom one at the start where Tara is telling Willow the tail lol of Miss Kitty Fantastico.

W “Did they have dolphins at the pound?”

T “Yes they had dolphins.”

Just so darn cute it makes me wish I had a Willow or a Tara of my own.

“Shhh,” Tara whispered, “I’m fine. As long as I have you, I’m fine.”

I like this little piece of reassurance from Tara to Willow, helping her see that everything will be fine because they will be joined in unity.

“Willow glanced across the bed at Tara, “Jeez, I feel a bit underdressed.”
“It’s ok baby, I understand. If the tables were turned, I would feel the same way.”

Willow began to undress and re-dress in real clothes. Tara opened her mouth to protest, but in truth she appreciated the gesture and the

“Shhh,” Tara whispered, “I’m fine. As long as I have you, I’m fine.”

It’s nice to see the unity being shown here, this time from Willow to Tara. It adds to the whole united front the girls have.

“Oh baby,” Willow breathed completely taken with the shy, beautiful woman standing before her. She had been joking, but she knew that Tara was serious and her heart was overflowing with love, “I love you Tara Maclay.”

“I love you too, Willow Rosenberg.”

AWW, more cute moments

Ira looked up when he heard Willow and Tara enter the room, “Good morning ladies.”

“Morning Daddy!” Willow replied as she hugged her father and kissed him on the cheek, “Morning Hunt.”

“Mornin’ Will, Tara,” Hunter nodded.

“Good morning Mom.”

“Good Morning,” Sheila replied.

“Good morning everyone,” Tara said, laughing inwardly and feeling as if she were living an episode of ‘The Waltons.’ A small smile escaped her lips when she imagined them doing the good night routine as well.

I’ve actually seen this done as a sketch on a comedy show one time and it takes ‘The Walton’s so long to say good night to each other it ends up being early morning again.

“So Tara, Willow tells me that you’re quite the accomplished actress, such a wonderful profession.” Sheila said, causing Willow to choke on her juice and begin coughing.

Ok, you’re not telling me that there isn’t something suspicious going on here, Sheila is definitely up to something, most likely searching for dirt on Tara. And I think her almost referring to Tara as Willow’s girlfriend is a smokescreen to put her daughter off the scent. Though the moment where Tara is talking about her family seems to stall her slightly, as if she's thinking of giving more credence to Tara.

“I’m a California girl born and raised!” She said proudly, “I actually grew up in Culver City, about 15 miles southwest of Hollywood.”

Are there any studios or lots down in Culver City? I only ask as I’m a big Laurel and Hardy fan and a lot of stills of them refer to Culver City and I always thought that that was where the Hal Roach Studios were based.

“It’s not that I haven’t ever r-ridden, it’s just that I’ve n-never ridden without someone leading the horse in a circle. Well, n-not even a horse, more like a pony a-and it was a clown leading us around. Kinda scary when you think about it, because you know nothing scarier than a clown!” Tara laughed nervously.

Willow squeezed Tara’s hand, “Baby, don’t worry. It’s not like I’m gonna put you up there, slap her ass and send you off into the woods.”

“I know a-and I trust you, it’s just that horses are s-so big and there’s no s-seat belts and…we’re using a saddle, right?” Tara questioned.

I love this character reversal of Ariel’s ‘HIMYM’ where Tara is the one who is comfortable with horses and Willow is the fraidy cat. And in both stories Willow and Tara are willing to try to ride a horse.

“Oh sweetie, I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to scare you. You were really that worried about me?”

“Of course I was, you’re…you’re everything to me. Willow, If something ever happened to you…”
Tara simply nodded as Willow pulled her into a tight embrace, “All better?” Willow asked.

AWWW, more sweet cuteness, there’s so much here I’m getting high off it. Keep it coming Shel, this is the only drug I need.

Ok, how old is Artemis compared to Willow? Is it still an 11 year age gap?


Willow stepped up on the top of the mounting block, still laughing and imagining Tara with the crisp exam table paper stuck to her cute little ass.

And I’m imagining the same drool .

I really enjoyed the scene with Artemis and the girls atop her in the saddle. It makes me want to have a go at horse riding myself.

Something I’ve been wondering about for a while now, now that Tara has come out to the media about being gay, couldn’t Morgan go to the media and give them a BS story about how Tara broke up a (none existent) relationship between Morgan and Willow and stole Willow for herself.

Thanks for another awesome chapter Shel, you’re still writing one of the best stories on the board at present.

[JustSkipIt]

As usual I'm short of time and need to get ready for work. Hmmm. What's up with Sheila? She's suddenly more polite and asking questions. I have big doubts about her motivation. The waking up and making out is nice and so is the getting ready to ride. Nice job with some detail on riding without too much detail to make it a technical manual.

[wayland]

Finey,

Great chapter.

I admire the way you are writing your original characters and those barely described on the show – especially Sheila. The way she was not unmoved by Tara’s story is very credible. I can see her saying ‘I’ve absolutely nothing against the woman, but…’

I sometimes think that fanfiction is an easier genre to write because we are gifted with well-written, well-loved characters, (though it does present the challenge of staying true to the characters in the face of a very discerning readership), so creating new characters is a real test of a writer’s skill.

I just read a bestselling novel of popular fiction and the characters were so thin, I could only tell them apart by their names. Your writing is so much more engaging.

I’m intrigued by Sheila’s apparent change of heart, and looking forward to seeing where you’re going with it.

[Ariel]

Shelby,

Loved Tara waking up and the agonizing crawl to relieve bladder and leave her lover asleep – have made that painful journey a time or two myself. (not with Willow of course – damn!)

“I was going to say, that I’m uncomfortable in these pj’s. They keep bunching up underneath me. I guess I’ve gotten spoiled sleeping with you au’ natural.”

May I suggest a visit to a clothing optional resort? Seriously, I completely support Tara’s right NOT to wear pajamas to bed!

Willow smiled, her face growing hot and the familiar butterflies taking flight through her tummy. How on earth can my mother not see how wonderful this woman is. She leaned in and captured Tara’s lips in a deep and sensual kiss; pressing their bodies close.

Your write the tenderness, sensuality, love and hotness beautifully! Thank you!

Very tender moment with Tara’s offer to cook Willow breakfast every day. Touching and sweet.

Then nice Ira and SNEAKY SHEILA. Okay! What’s she UP to? Because she is up to something! I don’t trust her for one second!

“It’s not that I haven’t ever r-ridden, it’s just that I’ve n-never ridden without someone leading the horse in a circle. Well, n-not even a horse, more like a pony a-and it was a clown leading us around. Kinda scary when you think about it, because you know nothing scarier than a clown!” Tara laughed nervously.

Willow squeezed Tara’s hand, “Baby, don’t worry. It’s not like I’m gonna put you up there, slap her ass and send you off into the woods.”

“I know a-and I trust you, it’s just that horses are s-so big and there’s no s-seat belts and…we’re using a saddle, right?” Tara questioned.

Okay, just plain funny!
Then it turns sweet, Willow reassuring Tara that riding is not required, that Tara is loved whether she rides or not.

Tara placed her hands on Willow’s outstretched arms, “I wanna ride…I do and I trust you. I just, w-when I was watching you last night…it was exhilarating and scaring me to death at the same time. I mean, you were up there with nothing to hold on to, it was dark a-and you were going so fast.”

“Oh sweetie, I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to scare you. You were really that worried about me?”

“Of course I was, you’re…you’re everything to me. Willow, If something ever happened to you…”

Willow thought about it for a minute and imagined if the situation was reversed, then she felt her heart clinch. She realized that she had acted recklessly, scaring Tara into perhaps not wanting to ride with her at all. No one had ever questioned her riding ability before, “Tare, I’ve been riding since before I could walk. It’s like breathing for me and I’m not going anywhere. But, I get what you’re saying and I promise to be more careful, ok?”

Tara simply nodded as Willow pulled her into a tight embrace, “All better?” Willow asked.

Again Tara just smiled and nodded allowing Willow to retake her hand as they covered the remaining distance to the barn.

Shelby, this is fine, beautiful, writing. I feel like I’m right there, feeling their love for each other and seeing Willow’s understanding of Tara’s love for her and comforting her lover’s fears.

Tara moaned deeply and her initial nervousness melted away at the feeling of Willow’s warm body pressed firmly against her back. The redhead shifted to get comfortable allowing her breasts to graze Tara’s back. The intimacy of their current position was not lost on Willow as she rested her chin on Tara’s shoulder and reached around with both hands to take control of the reigns. She inhaled deeply, taking in the scent of Tara’s lavender shampoo and nuzzling the soft skin of the blonde’s neck. Willow placed both reigns in one hand as her now free hand snaked it’s way around Tara’s waist and under her shirt, gliding gently across the soft ivory flesh of Tara’s belly. Tara tilted her head, allowing Willow better access as the redhead left feather light kisses along the tantalizing sweet flesh that she found so irresistible.

Tara began to squirm under Willow’s touch; her arousal becoming more intense as Willow began caressing Tara’s ear with her tongue. The blonde shivered at Willow’s touch and felt her entire body begin to tingle and burn with desire. Tara finally gave in, releasing the saddle horn, she turned her head towards Willow; crushing their lips together in a heated kiss that lasted for several minutes.

Let’s make that a ‘giddyap’ for THAT riding action! So ride into that sexy sunset and THEN come back and defile the barn! Seriously, I highly recommend barn defiling!

As to this wildly long post – your fault for writing this story!

Keep writing – as always!!!

Ariel
How I Met Your Mother

[Gaga01]

Awww, they're going horseback riding!!

I love that, for once, Willow loves horses! Normally she's always the one scared of them so it is a nice change! I can't help but be highly suspicious about Sheila being so polite and nice to Tara all of a sudden...miracles do happen but I'm not sure it's the case here, the change was too brutal for that...I can't wait for the next update when Tara will be introduce to more of Willow's family!!

[Finey_McFine]

ContriQ aka Paow:
YAY DIBS!!

Horseriding can be scary, but it's awesome to ride.

Sometimes, but it’s mostly fun…especially when you have Willow teaching you!

She almost said girfriend and then changed. Stupid stubborn Sheila.

Indeed she is! Maybe she’ll come around…or not!!

Thanks for the feedback!



zampsa19752001

Sheila being nice to Tara is freaking me out

Everyone was upset when she was mean, so now she’s making an effort and everyone is freaking…love it!!! lol

Yay for Tara's first riding "lesson" with Willow...

Yay indeed!


Thanks for the feedback!!!


cyteach:

'I'm waiting for the train wreck and I shouldn't really watch, but I can't seem to look away'

Oh it’s coming and in a big way!

I loved that little exchange in looks between Hunter and Willow over Sheila's comment--it's the, " oh, snap, Mom's finally gone over the deep end" look

I have had many of those with my siblings, so I do know them well!

I've never had the pleasure to share a horseback riding situation with a partner, but I'm thinking, after that description, I'll have to definitely but it on my list of secy dates to try

Me neither, although we have gone riding together, but on separate horses. Still lot’s of fun!

I'm really enjoying the characterization of Artemis--I don't, nor have I ever, own a horse, but I'm thinking that, like most 'pets' they have a unique personality. She's almost like an impatient little sister/child here

I’ve never owned one either, but I did base Artemis on a real horse that I recently photographed. I had a high school senior bring her horse out to my studio and she (the horse) was hilarious! Every time I set up a shot and she was stopped from grazing, she would get pissed! She would stomp her foot and shake her head. Totally put out, lol.

Thanks for the feedback!


brave-little-toaster:

Can't wait to see how Shiela does or doesn't turn around as a character.

Well, at least we’ll know that she’ll one way or the other!
Thanks for the feedback!


Promthea128:

Woo and hoo to you for surviving another apocolypse.

LOL…Did you see that it’s pushed back now to Oct. 28th? My theory on this last one was that Buffy actually averted it.

When Willow was trying to get her morning "snugglies" I was worried that Shelia would come in and start screaming.

No, no big South of Nowhere bust in & pull some hair! At least not yet…………..

But we have Nice Shelia, which is scarier than Evil Shelia..

You’re probably right about this. At least with evil Sheila you knew exactly where she was coming from, black and white…no gray areas. But nice Sheila opens a whole new can of worms!


Thanks for the feedback!


WR/TM:

okay I have to say that was sexy damn I so wish I had my horse now lol!!!

I know, right? Me too!!!

Thanks for the feedback!!!


wimpy0729:

Sheila is downright creepy. What the hell is she up to?

She is most definitely up to something…

We see a little glimmer of hope here when Tara is talking about her family.

Just a teeny, tiny little bit…but was it genuine?? As a parent I would hope that she would feel some empathy. I don’t think she’s a monster, just misguided. Maybe, lol.

Snuggled up together like that is just delicious. Perhaps they can defile the barn later. Oh yeah. And comparing getting on the saddle to a GYN exam had me laughing out loud.

I’m all for defiling…see below! s I’m as bad as Bevis and Butthead, “Uh, she said stirrup. Uh huh huh.” It was the first place my mind went! Is that wrong? lol

Thanks for the feedback!


nightmask:

The part when they get on the horse and start flirting with each other is so amazing and adorable!!!

Thanks!! The next chapter is full of horsey fun as well!!

I'm really worried about what's going on with Sheila, is she really giving Tara a chance? Or is she working up to some evil plot to make Tara look bad?

Nice Sheila is most definitely scarier than evil Sheila.

love Artemis's mannerisms you made him sound exactly like the horses I used to ride with!

I was just telling Cyteach the story of the horse she is based on. See above!

I don't blame Tara for being a little nervous at first

They can most definitely be intimidating!


Thanks for the feedback!


DaddyCatAlso:

Oh boy, the "making nice" plan of attack, devious Sheila.

She is most definitely sinister!


Thanks for the feedback!!



beautiful_love:

And it was nice to hear more about Tara and her past.

As the Texas chapter go on, we’ll also get to learn more about Willow’s past as well!

So I'm wondering if this is genuine or not.

I think that it was, after all, she IS the mother of 5 kids. She’s gotta see how something like that would effect a child. But…it certainly does not have to change her overall view of things. We’ll just have to wait and see how it all works out.

'm totally loving that Willow is the one equiped to handle the horses. I feel like I'm actually learning from your writing. Very informative. But the moment between them on the horse was a very nice touch.

Thanks, but don’t take too much instruction from me…I can count on one hand the amount of times I’ve been riding…all hail the mighty internet! lol. More horsey sexy moments coming up!

And as for Sheila not approving of their "bumping shoulders" (how scandalous! LOL) and Willow's defiant reaction - Loved It! Game on, indeed.

I think Sheila made a huge mistake here. W/T probably would have respectful in the way of PDA’s, (you know how awkward it can be around someone’s parents anyway) but now…the gloves are off.


Thanks for the feedback!


love_2003:

I don't know why Shelia is acting nice and polite but I hope she keeps it up and its not just a trick.

I’m thinking it may just be the calm before the storm.

If I ever ride a horse I want an introduction to riding like Tara is getting from Willow.

Indeed…if we could all be so lucky!

Thanks for the feedback!!!



jazhers:
…me too!

when breakfast was over I breath a sigh of relief. However I'm keeping a watchful eye out i know it's coming and I have to admit, I'm kinda scared.

Lol, Tara doesn’t know any better, but Willow knows something is brewing and I’m sure she is waiting for the other shoe to fall. Nice Sheila is much scarier than evil Sheila!


Thanks for the feedback!!!!


Laragh:

I read that as 'amorous' first time round for some reason and got throughly confused.

Aww poor Willow, jumping to those conclusions. What is it you were saying before about classic W/T misunderstandings?

Lol, that they are abundant?

"Dammit, woman, where's my sandwich?!"

I say that to my wife daily, Dammit! Phew, thank goodness she’s not on this board!

Bahahaha, no joke by the time Sheila said 'Good morning', I was thing 'G'night John-boy!'

Elizabeth: Good night, John Boy.
John-Boy: Good night, Elizabeth. Good night, Daddy.
John: Good night, Son. Good night, Mary Ellen.
Mary Ellen: Good night, Daddy. Good night, Mama.
Olivia: Good night, Mary Ellen. Good night, Jim Bob.
Jim Bob: Good night, Mama. Good night, Erin.
Erin: Good night, Jim Bob. Good night, Ben.
Ben: Good night, Erin. Good night, everybody.

Another reason not to trust them.

You totally crack me up…Willow Jr! I can understand your fear though. I was riding my cousin’s horse once when she took off and I had no idea how to stop her…a little scary.

Slide down!

That was just for you, BTW.

Defiling: See below!


Thanks for the feedback!


willowtaralover:

these are three of my fave Buffy episodes too, along with the likes of ‘New Moon Rising’ ‘OMWF’ and ‘Triangle’.

I love, love OMWF and it was tough not to rank it #1, but Hush was just so dang creepy. It was really hard to pick an overall favorite, in fact we’re watching Tabula Rasa right now and aside from the W/T angst, I love all the memory loss stuff. Xander fainting, Anya with all the bunnies…great stuff!

It’s nice to see the unity being shown here

It’s always good to show a unified front!

I’ve actually seen this done as a sketch on a comedy show one time and it takes ‘The Walton’s so long to say good night to each other it ends up being early morning again.

Ok, you’re not telling me that there isn’t something suspicious going on here, Sheila is definitely up to something,

And it can’t be good!

Are there any studios or lots down in Culver City?

I’m super knowledgeable on all things California, but from what I can tell from my research, there used to be studios there, but they are all gone now.

I love this character reversal of Ariel’s ‘HIMYM’ where Tara is the one who is comfortable with horses and Willow is the fraidy cat.

No fraidy cats here!

W/T cuteness is all one should need!

Ok, how old is Artemis compared to Willow? Is it still an 11 year age gap?

Artemis is 10.

couldn’t Morgan go to the media and give them a BS story about how Tara broke up a (none existent) relationship between Morgan and Willow and stole Willow for herself.

I don’t think I’m gonna go that soap opera-ish.


As always…thanks for the great feedback!


JustSkipIt:
Sheila is up to something, that’s for sure. We’ll just have to wait and see what it is.

More riding fun below!

Thanks as always for the feedback!!


Wayland:

I admire the way you are writing your original characters and those barely described on the show – especially Sheila.

Thanks, since we only got to meet Sheila once and there wasn’t much character development…it made her an open book and super fun to write!

I sometimes think that fanfiction is an easier genre to write because we are gifted with well-written, well-loved characters,

It is and it isn’t. You are right about trying to stay true to the characters though. I think that you really have to study who you are writing about before you start. I read for a good year before I decided to write and there are so many fics out there that I had to fight to get through because W/T were so far off the mark.

I just read a bestselling novel of popular fiction and the characters were so thin, I could only tell them apart by their names. Your writing is so much more engaging.

Aww, thanks!!!


Thanks for the feedback!!


Ariel:

Loved Tara waking up and the agonizing crawl to relieve bladder and leave her lover asleep – have made that painful journey a time or two myself.

I make that journey nightly, lol!

May I suggest a visit to a clothing optional resort? Seriously, I completely support Tara’s right NOT to wear pajamas to bed!

I couldn’t agree more!

Your write the tenderness, sensuality, love and hotness beautifully!

More to come…see below!!

Then nice Ira and SNEAKY SHEILA. Okay! What’s she UP to? Because she is up to something!

Indeed she is! But we might have to wait a couple chapters to find out!!

Then it turns sweet, Willow reassuring Tara that riding is not required, that Tara is loved whether she rides or not.

Willow’s too sweet to make her do something that she really doesn’t want to do:)

I feel like I’m right there, feeling their love for each other and seeing Willow’s understanding of Tara’s love for her and comforting her lover’s fears.

Sometimes Willow has to be hit over the head to realize things, she actually came to her senses pretty quick in this instance.

Let’s make that a ‘giddyap’ for THAT riding action! So ride into that sexy sunset and THEN come back and defile the barn! Seriously, I highly recommend barn defiling!

I think you may just have the market cornere on barn defiling, lol. There is defiling below…just not in the barn! ;-p


Thanks for the feedback!!



Gaga01:

I love that, for once, Willow loves horses! Normally she's always the one scared of them so it is a nice change!

Me too! I love tom-boyish Willow!

I can't help but be highly suspicious about Sheila being so polite and nice to Tara all of a sudden...miracles do happen but I'm not sure it's the case here, the change was too brutal for that...I can't wait for the next update when Tara will be introduce to more of Willow's family!!

You should be concerned…Sheila is up to something! More family fun, I promise, but not in the next chapter…defiling below!

NEW CHAPTER DIRECTLY BELOW

[Finey_McFine]

TITLE: Racing The Rain

AUTHOR: Finey_McFine

RATING: NC17

DISCLAIMER: Willow, Tara and any other BtVS characters, as well as some random dialog, belong to Mutant Enemy.

SUMMARY: Totally AU, Willow and Tara Meet with not so surprising results! Set in LA with lots of W/T fluff and a little teeny tiny bit of angst, but no Hellmouthyness. Just good old regular day-to-day drama.



FEEDBACK: OK; Any glaring issues…please send me a PM!

AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hi Everyone! I hope all of you American Kittens are enjoying your holiday weekend. An early post this week as I am taking the young one fishing Sunday down on Galveston Island:) More ’riding’ lessons in this chapter and some NC17 fun! Enjoy!!

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Chapter 35: The Body Electric

The beautiful fall day was turning out to be sunny and humid, not at all uncommon for southern Texas, even in November. Had it not been for the cool, crisp breeze, there would have been no other indication that it was autumn at all. Willow and Tara had spent the last forty-five minutes walking Artemis at a steady pace. Willow was taking it slow, teaching Tara the basics and allowing her to get a feel for the horse beneath her. Tara seemed to take to riding like a fish to water and Willow was thrilled. She had given the reigns over to Tara some time ago and allowed the blonde to guide the mare slowly through out the grassy pasture; practicing turns and stops. Tara turned to Willow and asked if they could go faster and Willow suggested that they canter, faster than a trot, yet slower than a gallop. She explained to the blonde the importance of letting your body ebb and flow with the horse; moving rhythmically with the forward motion.

Taking over the reigns, Willow clicked her tongue and kicked her heels, signaling Artemis into a slow trot, before building up any real speed. Tara gripped the saddle horn as her body began to bounce in response to the mare. Willow again placed the reigns in one hand, while gripping tightly around Tara’s waist with the other.

Willow leaned over Tara’s shoulder and whispered in her ear, “Lock your feet in the stirrups and use your legs to keep your body in sync with mine.”

Willow pressed her chest tight against Tara’s back and held her close as Artemis increased her speed. Tara closed her eyes and smiled; she’d never felt safer. There was something about Willow, from the moment they’d met that gave Tara a sense of calm from just being in the redheads presence. A sense that, whenever Willow was around, that nothing bad could ever happen to her. At that moment, feeling the rush of speed and Willow’s strong arms keeping her safe…nothing else mattered. The world melted away and Tara relaxed into the comfort of her girlfriend’s embrace.

They made several wide loops through the pasture before Willow brought Artemis down to a slow trot, and then stopped her at a gate on the far north side of the field. Willow put the reigns in Tara’s hands, slid off the saddle and moved to open the gate. She fought for a moment with the rusty latch before finally freeing it and pushing the gate forward. Willow motioned for Tara to lead Artemis through and was filled with pride when the blonde did just that, without an ounce of trepidation. Tara held the reigns confidently, bringing Artemis to a stop just on the other side; allowing plenty of room for Willow to push it closed. Willow climbed on top of the fence as Tara brought Artemis close enough for Willow to remount.

“Where are we going?” Tara asked curiously.

“There’s something I want to show you,” Willow answered as she snuggled in close to Tara and handed her the reigns.

“You’re very trusting.”

“And you’re a very fast learner. I trust you, Tara.” Willow said softly as she turned and kissed Tara’s cheek.

Tara sighed, “Mmhmm, what a beautiful day.”

“Not as beautiful as you.”

“Sweet talker,” Tara giggled.

“I’m serious, the sky has nothing on your gorgeous blue eyes,” Willow flashed Tara a stunning smile; eliciting a shy lopsided smile from the blonde in return and a gentle kiss on the lips.

“Willow, how did Artemis get her name?” Tara asked.

Willow looked at Tara thoughtfully, “I’ve always loved Greek mythology and we were studying it in school when I got her, thus a horse-y Greek goddess was born. And since Artemis is the goddess of the hunt and wild animals…there you have it!”

Tara pondered Willow’s answer for a moment, “So, virginity and young girls had nothing to do with it then?” Tara smirked.

Willow blushed and ducked her head, “Well, I was young and a virgin at the time so, I guess it just fit.”

“Ummm, I wish I could have known sweet virgin Willow.”

Willow giggled, “Well, I’m still sweet, you know?”

“Um hmm, you most definitely are.” Tara smiled softly leaning her head back to rest on Willow’s shoulder.

They continued in silence, just enjoying the ride and the warmth of their embrace. Tara gripped the reigns loosely in her left hand while entwining her right with Willow’s and resting it on her thigh. In the distance Tara could see a line of trees and what looked to be a large wooded area.

“Is that where we’re going?” Tara asked.

“Um hmm, it looks thick, but there’s a trail opening just to the right. Wanna speed up a bit?”

Tara smiled, gripping the reigns and taking control of Artemis. She clicked her tongue, tapped her heels and away they went.

As they approached the tree line, she began bringing the mare to a slow trot, turning to the right as Willow indicated and coming upon the mouth of a trail. Tara turned Artemis and they entered the thicket. The woods were dense and fragrant; the sweet pine aroma hanging thick in the air awakened Tara’s senses and reminded her of Christmas. The grand oak trees mixed with the pines to create a thick canopy high above the forest floor. The trees danced in the breeze, allowing the sun’s rays to shine through catching the woodsy haze and casting a soft glow upon the trail. To Tara, the scene had all the qualities of a woodland fairytale and for the briefest of moments she felt like a princess atop her trusty steed. She half expected the forest animals to appear at any moment and burst into song.

They quietly meandered through the woods for a good twenty minutes before the underbrush began thinning and a stunningly beautiful lake appeared. The clear sparkling oasis was hidden amongst a throng of lush Mexican Ash, River Birch and various pines.

“Oh wow…” Tara breathed.

“I know, right?” Willow offered.

“It’s really beautiful. Are we still on the property?”

Willow nodded and smiled, “But just barely. It pretty much ends somewhere in the middle of the lake, I think. Come on, let’s walk from here, ok?” Tara nodded and Willow slid off Artemis and stretched momentarily before helping Tara dismount. Tara stumbled, unable to stop her legs from wobbling, but was steadied by Willow’s hands on her hips.

“Easy, I’ve got you.”

“Thanks,” Tara smiled, slightly embarrassed, “My legs feel like jelly.”

Willow returned the smile, “Wait until tomorrow, you’ll probably be sore in places you didn’t even think possible.”

Willow took the reigns, tossing them over Artemis’ head and began to lead her to the waters edge as Tara followed on her heels. There was a small clearing on the bank of the lake covered with lush green grass. On the edge of the bank was a dock that extended out across the water, about twenty-five feet, that was attached to a square platform. Tara glanced to her right and noticed a large oak tree whose branches spread out over the face of the lake; a long thick rope hung from a particularly expansive limb and swayed in the breeze. Tara squinted her eyes as the midday sun reflected brightly off of the lake’s surface. She imagined the Rosenberg children swinging from the rope and dropping into the cool of the lake on a hot Texas day. She envisioned a tiny redheaded little girl running down the dock and diving off the end to swim with her brothers, splashing her older sister that lay on a towel. If she closed her eyes, she could almost hear their laughter.

Tara shook her head to release her mind from it’s wandering and noticed that Willow was no longer standing next to her. After allowing Artemis to drink for several minutes, Willow crossed the clearing and tethered Artemis to a nearby tree. She reached into the saddlebag, retrieving the bottled water and was already making her way back to Tara. Willow handed a bottle to Tara, and then plopped down under an oak tree, taking a long satisfying glup of water, stretching she lied down in the grass. Tara followed her lead, lying on her side, and snuggling against Willow’s body.

Willow peered into the sky, “See that one baby?” She said pointing at an elongated cloud, “It looks like a shark.”

Tara snuggled closer, following the line in which the redhead pointed, “You’re right it does. Oh, how about that one? Kinda looks like a big pineapple.”

“Hmm, I don’t see it.” Willow said.

“See those three clouds right over there?”

“Yeah.”

“And see those clouds along there? That’s the bottom of the pineapple.”

“It’s big.”

“Hence the name,” Tara giggled.

“Ok ok…oh, right there,” Willow pointed, “It’s a moose getting a sponge bath.”

“I don’t know, kinda looks like a little pile o’crackers to me,” Tara offered, glancing over at a frowning Willow, “Uh, I guess that was a bit of a stretch.”

They both laughed, squirming in the grass, trying to get more comfortable. The game continued until a comfortable silence fell over them. After several long minutes, Willow finally spoke.

“Tara, can I go with you?” She asked quietly.

Tara looked at her quizzically, “Go where sweetie?”

“To New York, in December.”

Tara frowned and shook her head, “I’m a terrible girlfriend.”

“What? Why would you say that?” Willow asked shifting to prop herself up on her elbow.

“Because, I…I meant to talk to you about it, then all that stuff with Kelly happened and I totally forgot. I just…kind of assumed that you were already going.” Tara sighed, “I should have communicated better, I’m sorry. It’s been bothering you, hasn’t it?”

Willow looked down and absently played with a blade of grass, “A little, I guess.”

“Why didn’t you say something sooner?”

“I don’t know. I guess, I just didn’t want to…to be in your way? I know, it’s dumb. I just didn’t want to assume anything.”

Tara lifted Willow’s chin and cupped her cheek, “You thought you’d be getting in my way?”

“At first, maybe, but then…I don’t know. I told you, i-it’s dumb.”

“Will, you’re never ‘in my way,’ ok? Ever.”

Willow smiled, nodding as she lowered her head to Tara’s chest and relaxed as the blonde snuggled her close. “Have you ever been to New York?” Tara asked.

“Nope, I’ve been all the way to China, but I’ve never been to the Big Apple. Where will we be staying? At a hotel?”

Tara furrowed her brow and bit her bottom lip, “Well, n-not a hotel exactly. You see I m-may have also forgotten to tell you that I um, I own an apartment in the city.”

“Really? Tara, is there anything else I need to know? Like, do you have a yacht in the Greek Isles? Or maybe a Chateau in the south of France?” Willow asked playfully with a raised eyebrow.

Tara chuckled, “No, that’s it, I promise. Just the house in LA and the apartment in New York. But don’t get too excited, the New York apartment is nothing fancy, j-just a little two bedroom number hidden away in Greenwich Village. Well, m-maybe not totally hidden or unfancy…Julianne Moore kinda lives in the same building.”

“Really? And does the Queen of Sheba live in the penthouse across the hall? Oh, it’s nothing fancy,” Willow said in a mocking tone, smiling and sticking her tongue out between her teeth.

Tara turned swiftly and pounced on Willow, straddling her narrow hips and holding her hands above her head. She leaned in and started giving the redhead raspberries on her neck, tickling Willow and causing shrieks of laughter.

“Ok! Ok! I give!! I take it all back…I take it back!” Willow exclaimed, panting and out of breath.

Tara let go, smiling proudly and sat back on her heels. The redhead lay on the ground staring up at her, their eyes locking and both sharing a goofy grin. Willow finally sat up and eased her arms around Tara’s waist as she felt Tara’s hands slid through her hair, tucking several errant red strands behind her ears.

“You’re so beautiful, Willow. Sometimes I look at you and I can’t believe that…” Tara’s words trailed off as Willow swiftly kissed her without the slightest hesitation; becoming completely consumed with Tara’s full, soft lips.

They became lost in each other as the rest of the world fell away. Their connection was palpable as their lips moved in sync like a carefully orchestrated dance. Willow needed to feel more of Tara and tugged at the hem of her shirt, pulling it over her head and dropping it to the ground. She made quick work of the blonde’s bra. Tara’s nipples stiffened when the cool fall breeze brushed across them. Willow wasted no time at all and began kneading the soft flesh with both hands. Tara moaned into the kiss and began to divest Willow of her shirt and bra as well. She desperately needed more of her lover; her arousal deepening as Willow rolled Tara’s hardened nubs between her fingers.

Once Tara rid Willow of her shirt and bra, she pulled the redhead close, rubbing circles across her back. Willow finally broke the kiss and began to leave tiny kisses along Tara’s jaw, down the length of her throat and across her chest. Finally reaching her destination, Willow wrapped her lips around the exquisite peak and flicked it with her tongue. Tara moaned and instinctively arched her chest forward, pressing Willow tighter against her heated flesh. Willow shifted and kissed across Tara’s chest, lavishing an equal amount of attention between the two breasts.

They were still in a sitting position and Tara’s knees were beginning to ache. She pulled back from Willow and smiled, reaching for their shirts and spreading them flat across the grass, then gently lowered Willow to the ground. Tara reached down and began to unbutton Willow’s jeans, while never losing eye contact with the sparkling green eyes. She moved to sit between Willow’s legs, lifting one leg at a time and pulling off her boots and socks. Tara wanted to feel all of Willow with no barriers between them. Once the footwear was vanquished, she tugged at the tight fitting jeans and the cotton panties until her lover was completely revealed to her. Tara shifted her body and moved next to Willow, sitting flat, pulling off her own boots and socks.

As Tara rose up on her knees to remove her jeans she caught some movement out of the corner of her eye. Turning towards Willow she noticed that the redhead was rubbing the palms of her hands across her stiffened nipples, down to her belly and back again. Tara froze, taking in the erotic show that was unfolding before her. They locked eyes and Willow smiled seductively as she continued to pleasure herself, reveling in the look of sheer bliss splashed upon the blonde’s face. Tara’s eyes darkened with arousal; her breathing becoming more ragged by the second. Willow brought her right hand up to her breasts, tweaking the rosy nipples between her fingertips as her left hand ventured further south. Tara’s skin began to grow hot and flushed; she forced herself to look away momentarily, lest she spontaneously burst into flames right on the spot. She finished pulling her jeans and panties off, laying them between her and the sticky grass.

Tara stretched out next to Willow, resting on her elbow and biting her lower lip; it was taking all of her willpower to keep her hands to herself. Willow was taking full advantage of the naughty teasing, sliding her hand down her taught belly and into the glistening auburn curls. Moaning deeply and never taking her eyes off Tara, she began to gently massage her slick and swollen clit.

Tara gazed at Willow through half lidded eyes as she squeezed her thighs tight in an attempt to calm her aching center. She could feel the moisture seeping out and dripping down her leg. Her desire and longing to touch Willow finally won the battle as she turned her hand; running her fingers down Willow’s left arm. Tara lightly gripped Willow’s wrist, bringing the soaking fingers to her, taking each one into her mouth and cleansing them thoroughly.

Tara peered at Willow, “I believe that’s my job,” she purred as she replaced Willow’s hand with her own.

“Mmhmm baby…not…stopping you.” Willow panted as Tara slid her long fingers into her soaking center. She placed her hand on the nape of Tara’s neck and pulled her into a scorching kiss. As their tongues battled for supremacy, Willow could taste her essence in Tara’s mouth, becoming more turned on by the second.

Willow felt Tara break away from the kiss, she instantly missed the contact until she felt her lover’s full luscious lips making their way down her neck and latching on to her breast. Tara wrapped her lips around Willow’s nipple, feeling it harden and flicked her tongue rapidly; sending waves of pleasure through Willow’s entire body. Willow bucked her hips into Tara’s hand and turned slightly; just enough to comfortably slip her hand between Tara’s legs.

They were both moving against each other now, panting and moaning incoherently. The mounting tension drowned out all other audible sounds; the leaves shifting with the breeze, the birds, even Artemis’ movements were lost to them. They moved as one; connected on the most intimate of levels. The pace quickened and Willow could no longer hold back, groaning loudly as her entire body erupted in an earth shattering climax. Willow’s movements stilled momentarily, then she quickly turned her full attention to Tara. Willow kissed her hard on the lips and increased the friction between Tara’s legs. It only took a few seconds before Tara was right there with her, crying out in pleasure.

They held each other close, lingering in a state of quiet bliss, kissing lightly and showering each other with ‘I love you’s,’ as natures sounds returned and the world around them began to take shape again.

[BeMyDeputy]

Dibs

[wimpy0729]

Oh, the whole visual of their ride was just beautiful. I would absolutely love to get to do something like that with my gf someday.

And of course, the lovin by the lake ... I just ditto what I said above. Totally made my day.

Can't wait to see what else they get up to on their little vacation.


Wimpy

[Cyteach]

Wow... Such vivid imagery throughout here (including the lovin' scene )

Willow's insecurities pop in to say 'hi' for a quick minute, but I'm glad that's growing enough to come out and say what's bothering her than to just let it simmer and boil.

Great chapter... Hawt chapter! Looking forward to more!

C.

[zampsa19752001]

Yay for excellent update-y goodness... WOW! That was one awesome start to the riding trip... I hope the feeling from the lake helps them to deal with the evil things Sheila-monster throws at them...

[Laragh]

Right so I wrote a big long-ass reply about this awesome chapter, and now I see it didn't even show up. Rude, board, rude. So here's what I remember:

Horses still terrify the crap outta me, but I approve of Artemis and the intimate riding she provides. I also approve of sweet Willow.

That lake area sounds beautiful. I loved Tara's little wandering mind moment and wouldn't be surprised if it wasn't just little Willow she was imagining when she thought of the little redheaded girl laughing and playing.

Cloud-spotting: loved. Quiet and happy.

I'm extremely jealous of Tara. Just a little pad in Greenwich that Julianne Moore also lives in.

As for the rest of the chapter:

No seriously; sweet and sensual and pretty darn perfect.

Loved every word

[Ariel]

Hey, Shelby!

Liking this right from the title, “Body Electric” totally works.

She explained to the blonde the importance of letting your body ebb and flow with the horse; moving rhythmically with the forward motion.

Okay, I don’t care what anyone says, there is something beautiful about horseback riding and your phrasing is both great riding advice AND beautifully written!

And Willow telling Tara to move her body in sync – see note above!

“Willow, how did Artemis get her name?” Tara asked.

Willow looked at Tara thoughtfully, “I’ve always loved Greek mythology and we were studying it in school when I got her, thus a horse-y Greek goddess was born. And since Artemis is the goddess of the hunt and wild animals…there you have it!”

Tara pondered Willow’s answer for a moment, “So, virginity and young girls had nothing to do with it then?” Tara smirked.

Willow blushed and ducked her head, “Well, I was young and a virgin at the time so, I guess it just fit.”

Love this, it works as banter and as Willow trusting Tara to share a part of herself AND it offers just a little more of a peep at young Willow. This flows beautifully into Tara’s imagination of Willow playing; I loved that. When you’re totally in love, you want to know your lover completely, see their pictures and hear their stories. So this rang very true.

Tara turned Artemis and they entered the thicket. The woods were dense and fragrant; the sweet pine aroma hanging thick in the air awakened Tara’s senses and reminded her of Christmas. The grand oak trees mixed with the pines to create a thick canopy high above the forest floor. The trees danced in the breeze, allowing the sun’s rays to shine through catching the woodsy haze and casting a soft glow upon the trail. To Tara, the scene had all the qualities of a woodland fairytale and for the briefest of moments she felt like a princess atop her trusty steed. She half expected the forest animals to appear at any moment and burst into song.

They quietly meandered through the woods for a good twenty minutes before the underbrush began thinning and a stunningly beautiful lake appeared. The clear sparkling oasis was hidden amongst a throng of lush Mexican Ash, River Birch and various pines.

Okay, *sigh* moment . . . beautiful description. I’ve done my share of camping and backpacking so this worked, just enough detail on tree type to catch the air’s scent without being a guidebook. Then that touch of humor, a ‘disney beautiful forest’ idea with singing critters then heading back to the oasis which is a great word choice – their love being an oasis in Sheila-Land!

Finally, the beauty of their love in that incredibly gorgeous setting.

I’ve been looking forward to the Lone Star Tales of T/W for a long, long time and it’s even better than I imagined! Rock on, Shelby!

And . . . . keep writing!

Ariel
How I Met Your Mother

[JustSkipIt]

Yummy, yummy. I half-way expected Willow to tell Tara that she did know her when she was a virgin but my guess on that was obviously wrong. What a nice interlude to the Sheila ugliness. Very sex and hot with the Willow touching herself and I loved the take on the constellations/clouds conversation. Well done. I had wondered about the New York trip too. Awesome!

Ok, sorry I don't have more to say tonight.

[Promthea128]

To Tara, the scene had all the qualities of a woodland fairytale and for the briefest of moments she felt like a princess atop her trusty steed.

Love that Tara goes adventuring in her daydreams. I traveled to the "Golden Arches" in a quest to obtain sustenance just a little bit ago.

Other than that, one word, and that word is "Yummy."

[Promthea128]

To Tara, the scene had all the qualities of a woodland fairytale and for the briefest of moments she felt like a princess atop her trusty steed.

Love that Tara goes adventuring in her daydreams. I traveled to the "Golden Arches" in a quest to obtain sustenance just a little bit ago.

Other than that, one word, and that word is "Yummy."

[sapphoselene]

WOW ... I am needing a quick trip to the Arctic circle to cool down from that scene. I seriously have steam flowing from me. It was very sensuous and erotic.
I feel moved to give to a very talented writer. Please keep writing. This story is amazing.


sapphoselene (kathy)

[Vivienne]

Hi Finey!

I started reading 'Racing The Rain' yesterday with the intention of reading a few chapters a day until I was all caught up. Anyway, I've just finished Chapter 17 and I really must put it down and go and do some work. It's a delightful story, cleverly set and wonderfully characterised. Your prose rolls off the page straight into my brain. In other words I'm loving it. Back for more later!

[xlaurax1]

D'oh! I just lost all my feedback Here I go again.

So after a horrendous semester where I had three heavily weighted assignments due on the last day, I come bearing feedback.

I've been loving the visit with Willow's family so far. Love the family dynamics and how Willow interacts with her brothers and sister. I'm glad that while Willow has a beyond strained relationship with her mother, she is so close to her father. It makes me sad that Tara never really had anyone when she was growing up. If Sheila would only get over herself and see how wonderful Tara is, she could be part of the family.

Speaking of Sheila, what's her deal? Obviously I, nor anyone else here, do not believe she's had a sudden change of heart. What's the evil scheme she's been alluding to? And how much will it hurt the girls?

I love the horse riding, both the lead up to in the previous chapter, and the actual ride this chapter. I've never really been on a horse before (that I remember, anyway) but they are beautiful creatures. One of my friends has a horse that just recently had a foal and she is the most arorable thing ever!

Like many have already said, I love that you've switched around the horse/pony nervousness. It's highly amusing to see Tara anxious about riding, and great to see Willow so confident with a horse. It makes for a good change.

Apart from the hot, hot lovin', my favourite part of this was the star cloud gazing.

“And see those clouds along there? That’s the bottom of the pineapple.”

Wonderfully done!

Glad they got the New York stuff worked out. I'm looking forward to that now.

More please! Can't wait to see where this trip home goes next,

Laura.

[jazhers]

Yay update. Wow that was some wonderfully sexy outdoor lovin, yummm. Thanks can't wait for more. I'm nervous tho I hope no paparazzi are lurking to get picks of them while they are on their outing lol outing. Anyway. What a compromising position to be photographed rompin in the great wild yonder. Keep up the great work!!!

[DaddyCatALSO]

I have some fears on that score myself; it isn't really a public venue (I'd imagine private property of various owners all around the lake) but there's still a possibility. (One I can imagine your clever brain considering ....)

The scenes aren't all that super similar so I'm not imagining you were inspired by Adri and Tom's ride in Stirling's _COnquistador_(a book I have practically memorized) but I couldn't help thinking about it, and expecting the s*x part from the get -go.

Yes, soem types of grass can be quite sharp and sticky.

Assumptions can go a long way in relationships; too bad Willow wasn't sure about Tara's without being told.