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Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (UPDTED: 4/03/18)

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (07/30/11)

Postby Legolise » Tue Aug 02, 2011 11:45 am

That was a very sweet chapter with many cute moments. I especially liked the cheer of the Mighty Mice, the whole practice was really adorable =)

And then the problems arise. I hope they are going to be able to deal with the press. I can't stop thinking about "The Lost Honour of Katharina Blum". I just need to have faith that neither Willow nor Tara are the type of person to shoot a journalist ;)

And I totally forgot to mention how much I like the way you structure the story. There are often... small episodes that describe a certain situation and they could stand alone, out of context and be great, like small pictures, for example the swing moment in the beginning. They radiate calmness, a point of time that stands outside of the story and isn't really relevant for its ongoing. But it captures little things, like the nature of people's relationships, feelings, a certain atmosphere. And then, just as in real life, the moment passes and the story goes on. It makes everything feel a lot more realistic, which is often a problem I noticed in some things I read. In a normal person's life, there is never happening one exciting thing after the other, there are those moments when life just flows along or time even seems to stand still. I think you have found a good way to put those things into written form.

To cut a long story short, I just wanted to say I like this structure. And I hope it made at least a little sense what I wrote *frowns*
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (07/30/11)

Postby willowtaralover » Wed Aug 03, 2011 7:35 am

YAY updatey goodness, I’ve been missing this story so much. :applause :eatme :banana :applause :clap :bounce

Tara was sitting crossed legged on the swing with her arms resting on her knees and the late morning sun was casting a radiant glow across her blonde locks. Willow was completely enraptured with her girlfriend. Sometimes Willow felt overwhelmed with her love for the girl and this, apparently, was one of those moments.
I’ve had moments like that too with family and friends, they’re usually pretty awesome.

Please tell me there’s a version of WiIlow’s raptor tee that says 'cleaver boy'????

“It’s adorable Will, just like you,” Tara smiled sweetly,
Awww, there’s just so much sweetness in this chapter.

I was just reading the part in the café where Tara spots Willow’s photo and I wondered if you had set out to make them both famous in some way yet unknown at the same time.

Did you see her last night, when she got up and left? That was a whole pouty ‘pay attention to me’ thing. She hates it when Eli’s attention is on anyone else; even their own son.
After reading about Stella I have to ask is it just me or are most of Willow’s family screwed up????

I loved the scene where Willow leads the Mighty Mice in their cheer. It’s one of those rare moments when I want to enter a story and witness the moment for myself.

Tara peered down at the magazine that featured a photo of Tara and an inset of Willow looking sweaty on the ball field, Shocking GAY Revelation: Tara Maclay Likes her Women Rough and Tough!

Umm, stupid question here but what does a sweaty Willow on a softball field prove. Any sports star just coming off a track or field is going to be covered in sweat and unless they have some info that we don’t have like Willow is secretly an underground cage fighter doesn’t prove a thing about her being rough and tough. We only know that Willow is able to kick ass cos we’ve watched Buffy.

Another awesome chapter Shel, keep it up cos I’m truly loving this story.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (07/30/11)

Postby AstronSoul » Wed Aug 03, 2011 7:36 pm

OMG I love this!!!! I am so captured and can't wait.

Please please add more soon! :eatme

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (07/30/11)

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Thu Aug 04, 2011 5:17 am

Truly captures the odd view of things tabloid stories so often take.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (07/30/11)

Postby Silent_X » Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:15 pm

I must admit seeing a chapter titled 'cat and mouse' made me afraid there would be a lot of trouble, but it was a sweet little chapter, especially the beginning.

She wondered if she should go change into shorts and a tank. It was late November, but apparently, Texas had not gotten the memo.

Ah, the constant mood swings of Texas weather. At least Willow didn't bring her home in early August. This heat is enough to drive anyone out of state for good.

I want Willow's velociraptor shirt. Does this make me a nerd?

I like the way you've constructed Willow's family. In a lot of fanfiction (indeed, a fair amount of writing in general) when family members are included in the story they are little more than a few standardized cardboard cutouts that stand by and wait to move the plot a little when needed. Willow's family members have their own personalities and stories, which makes them seem more like actual people who have influenced Willow's life thoughout the years. It's nice that they're fleshed out- I hope you keep doing that.

Willow taking charge of practice was really cute.

Tabloids are stupid. Not only do they go probing into people's lives in an annoying manner, but they also write headlines that just sound dumb when said out loud (or even in one's head). I think the next update is gonna be pretty interesting.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (07/30/11)

Postby Ariel » Sat Aug 06, 2011 9:14 pm

Shelby,

A lot to love. First, in the previous post - Willow waking up and leaving not only a well organized Willow type note but also an origami flower; the quirky loving ways of our redhead! Nice. Next the beautiful description of "the warm undertones" with your description of the morning mist hovering. I felt it, beauty I could almost touch.

Tara's internal questions about Ira's apparent lack of support; she took the words right out of my mouth. I'm eager to see more.

Then in this post, the picture of Willow in the cafe - small town sweet and I loved it. Then the ball practice, just fun and wonderful! Love seeing Willow with kids! And love seeing Tara getting pulled into the fun and getting to be a kid and a woman and not just a star. Thanks for creating this fresh and lovely take on our two lovers - love it! :clap :applause :clap

I'm at my mom's and can't fb using a word doc like I usually do, so just let me end with my usual: keep writing! :kgeek :kgeek :kgeek

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (07/30/11)

Postby JustSkipIt » Sun Aug 07, 2011 7:54 am

Hey Shel,
I owe you fb and am rushed. I like this update because we get to see the girls just having fun. Fun. Kid ball is so awesome. I'm glad that Will was able to inspire the kids and coach. Re: tabloid - it had to be expected. I hope no one goes all nutso about it but we had to know it was coming.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (07/30/11)

Postby davislm » Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:23 pm

I'm new to this board, so this is basically my first post, but I've been reading WT fanfics like they're going out of style for months now... I just wanted to post a note to tell you I love this story! I absolutely adore these two versions of W/T. It's fun to read something that has such a great balance of genuine conflict without angst. It's inspiring to read how they have so much faith in each other that they constantly turn in ward during disaster instead of constantly battling insecurities and doubt. It doesn't feel as flightingly simple and one dimensional as some stories but its not overwraught with constant conflict (don't get me wrong, sometimes its fun to yell at the screen or have your heart cry out a little). Anyway, I find myself constantly smiling thinking of these two in your story and wanted to drop a reply telling you how much I've enjoyed it! Looking forward to your future posts!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (07/30/11)

Postby nightmask » Sat Aug 13, 2011 5:20 pm

Hey! So I finally caught up with the chapters I missed since I was gone. I'm really enjoying where the story is going and that Willow and Tara were able to get away from Sheila for awhile. I think Sheila's whole Jekkyl and Hyde routine was possibly from meds or mental issues. She's starting to seem a little bi-polar to me.
I can't wait for your next update :]
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (07/30/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Aug 14, 2011 9:22 am

Gaga01:
DIBS!

I dislike tabloids so much, all they do is spreading crap on celebrities while printing cheap pictures
I know, they’re really awful.

The practice with the kids was so freaking sweet!!!
Yay, I’m glad you liked it!

Milo is so adorable, he reminds me of my niece and nephew (my niece talks all the time and my nephew babbles a lot in some sort of foreign language, loll)
Ha ha! My kid started incoherent babble at about 3 months and 12 years later…not much has changed, lol.

It' always fun to see Willow and Tara so in love and happy, they are simply perfect together!
They most certainly are! See more good lovin’ below!!

Thanks for the feedback!

SMGOVAN:
It was bound to happen sooner or later. Nothing good can come of this. I'm sure this will upgrade tropical storm Shelia into full hurricane status.
LOL…hopefully the aftermath won’t be too devastating. It may only end up being a Cat 1 or 2 storm.

p.s. after all these years the "your shirt" line still makes me cringe!
I agree…that’s just me still trying to work out my anxiety.


Thanks for the feedback!

zampsa19752001
I really loved Tara's swing moment
Indeed…

Maybe Willow & Tara could take Milo to Cali-foamy with them so that his parents could work out their differences
I doubt that Stella would approve, plus with school and work…our girls wouldn’t have the time:(

Maybe Sheila won’t see any of the rag-mags???? We can only hope!

Thanks for the feedback!!!

willowtarabuffyfaith:
Ohhh! That's mean leaving it there!
Awww, it wasn’t TOO bad, lol!

Thanks for the feedback!!

wimpy0729:
Well this was such a breath of fresh air after all the Sheila drama. It was nice that they got a day away from all that drama. They sure needed it.
Yes they certainly did and will there’s more fun to come!

I'm really glad Milo has Willow around at least every once in a while. Poor guy must have a pretty stressful life most of the time.
I don’t think he’s super stressed all the time, but as we know, little kids react to what’s going on with their parents and Milo is no stranger to angst.

I absolutely loved the ball practice -- too cute. I wish I really could have seen Willow out there with them. My imagination, I'm sure, isn't doing it justice.
My daughter’s coaches used to play all sorts of games with the girls to teach the basics. Only they weren’t as yummy as Willow, lol:)

Wonder who just "happened" to have a pic of Willow all sweaty in a game. Hmmm...
Hmm, I wonder… :hmm


Thanks for the feedback!


legolise:
I especially liked the cheer of the Mighty Mice, the whole practice was really adorable
Thanks! It was fun to write too:)

I hope they are going to be able to deal with the press.
I’m sure they’ll manage, they both have a lot of experience dealing with the press. And no, no shooting! lol

To cut a long story short, I just wanted to say I like this structure. And I hope it made at least a little sense what I wrote
You made tons of sense and I’m glad that you like it! I also agree with what you said about one thing after another happening in some stories vs RL. Sometimes I read these types of stories and I get exhausted; because there has to be some sort of downtime, yet there never is. To me, it’s always the little things that make or break a relationship. Sometimes you just need to stop and enjoy the moment.; just as Willow did:)


Thanks for the feedback!


willowtaralover:
YAY updatey goodness, I’ve been missing this story so much.
I know…me too!! If only there were only more time in the day…

I’ve had moments like that too with family and friends, they’re usually pretty awesome.
Yes, they are wonderful moments, aren’t they??

**The T-Shirt…that line is from the first Jurassic Park so, sorry…no ‘cleaver boy.’:-(

I wondered if you had set out to make them both famous in some way yet unknown at the same time.
Well, I actually set out to only have Tara famous, but then it morphed into something more. One of my favorite movies is Nottinghill and I really didn’t want to copy it, so I made Willow a little famous…in her own little world.
After reading about Stella I have to ask is it just me or are most of Willow’s family screwed up????
Hahaha…I really believe this to be typical of most large families. I’m the oldest of 5 and we all contribute our own little brand of drama in some way shape or form, lol. One of my best friends is an identical twin plus she has an older brother, a younger brother and a younger sister. Her Dad has been married 4x and is about to divorce yet again. Trust me when I tell you that there is ALWAYS something going on!!

Umm, stupid question here but what does a sweaty Willow on a softball field prove.
The only thing it proves without a doubt is that tabloids are stupid, lol.

Thanks for the feedback!!!


Astronsoul:
OMG I love this!!!! I am so captured and can't wait.
Aww, thanks!!! Update directly below…

I bow to the greatness of you as a writer. Amazing job!
I deem thee official president of my fan club!! lol

Thanks for the feedback!


DaddyCatAlso:
Truly captures the odd view of things tabloid stories so often take.
Indeed. My favorite rag-mag is The Weekly World News…their headlines and accompanying photo’s are fantastically ridiculous!

Some of my all time fav’s…
'SANTA'S ELVES REALLY SLAVES FROM THE PLANET MARS!'

'WEREWOLVES SUNK THE TITANIC!'

'CONDI AND HILARY BELONG TO THE SAME COVEN!’

'PACK OF WILD COCKER SPANIELS TERRORIZES WYOMING!’

OK, that last one…could totally be true. :p

Thanks for the feedback!

Silent_X:
Ah, the constant mood swings of Texas weather. At least Willow didn't bring her home in early August. This heat is enough to drive anyone out of state for good.
I lived in Vegas for 3 years in the early ‘90’s and was never as miserable as I have been this summer.

I want Willow's velociraptor shirt. Does this make me a nerd?
You can get it online…I order from this site all the time:) http://www.snorgtees.com/clever-girl

I like the way you've constructed Willow's family. Willow's family members have their own personalities and stories, which makes them seem more like actual people who have influenced Willow's life though out the years.
Yes, I agree. It bothers me when I read stories like that as well. I mean, here the author has a great opportunity to explore characters and give them whatever personality they want and then nothing. So, I’m glad that you are liking Willow’s family…I do too:)

Tabloids are stupid. Not only do they go probing into people's lives in an annoying manner, but they also write headlines that just sound dumb when said out loud (or even in one's head).
Scroll back up, read my reply to DaddyCatAlso and enjoy! lol

Thanks for the feedback and glad you’re back!

Ariel:
Next the beautiful description of "the warm undertones" with your description of the morning mist hovering. I felt it, beauty I could almost touch.
OK, so here’s the funny part…I hardly EVER get up before 8 or 9am unless I absolutely have to and during my off season…it’s even later. Anyway, I had to force myself outta bed early to get some imagery so I could write that scene…it was pure torture!!

Tara's internal questions about Ira's apparent lack of support; she took the words right out of my mouth.
I think that thought is on a lot of people’s minds and the answer will come eventually.

And love seeing Tara getting pulled into the fun and getting to be a kid and a woman and not just a star.
It’s good for her to come back down to earth and be human:) LA is SO phoney that it’s no wonder that the celebs whose relationships last are the ones that move away and have a “normal” life.

Thanks for the feedback!!!

JustSkipIt:
I like this update because we get to see the girls just having fun. Fun.
Yeah, all of Sheila’s drama was getting to me as well!

Re: tabloid - it had to be expected. I hope no one goes all nutso about it but we had to know it was coming.
Yes, we did know and it’s something that cannot be avoided.

Davislm:
HI!! :bigwave and welcome to the KB!!! :grin

I'm new to this board, so this is basically my first post, but I've been reading WT fanfics like they're going out of style for months now... I just wanted to post a note to tell you I love this story!
Woo Hoo! I was your first!! Lol I’m glad you’re liking my fic:)

It's fun to read something that has such a great balance of genuine conflict without angst.
I can’t write true life or death angst, so on the bright side…you’ll never see that from me. Conflict and drama…yes.

It doesn't feel as flightingly simple and one dimensional as some stories but its not overwraught with constant conflict (don't get me wrong, sometimes its fun to yell at the screen or have your heart cry out a little).
Thanks! I’m not an uber fan of constant disaster in W/T fan fic, unless it’s done right, even then I prefer fluffier pieces:) I sometimes get really tied in knots with all the indecision and self doubt, especially with Willow. If she and Tara were ever as indecisive as they are written in fandom, they NEVER would have gotten together, lol.

Thank you for the kind words…you made my day!!


nightmask:
I think Sheila's whole Jekkyl and Hyde routine was possibly from meds or mental issues. She's starting to seem a little bi-polar to me.
If only it were that simple, lol.

I can’t wait for your next update either!!!


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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Aug 14, 2011 9:27 am

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TITLE: Racing The Rain

AUTHOR: Finey_McFine

RATING: NC-17

DISCLAIMER: Willow, Tara and any other BtVS characters, as well as some random dialog, belong to Mutant Enemy. ALL other original characters belong to me! This includes: Willow’s siblings and teammates, plus Tara’s friends and co-workers. Mention of any ‘real’ people in this fic is brief and pure fantasy.

SUMMARY: Totally AU! Set in LA with lots of W/T fluff and some angst, but no Hellmouthyness; just good old regular day-to-day drama. Willow is attending college on an athletic scholarship and Tara is Hollywood royalty. They meet and fall in love, of course, but will they be able to survive the pitfalls of a public romance? Well, you’ll just have to read and find out! ;-)



FEEDBACK: Yes! Any glaring issues…please send me a PM!

AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hi Everyone and Happy Sunday! This chapter includes the song that was the initial inspiration for this fic, so I hope you enjoy it. On a side note…will someone please do a rain dance for us???? Enjoy!

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Chapter 42: Small Town Girl


The ride back with Milo was quiet. The little ball of energy was worn out from his practice and unsuccessfully fighting sleep in the back seat, while things in the front seat were a bit on the awkward side. Willow noticed that Tara was uncharacteristically quiet and wasn’t holding her hand; to date, this had never happened before and Willow was thrown. She kept glancing over at Tara, who wore a pensive look on her face. Willow kept trying to make eye contact, but the blonde was in her own world. The redhead had been on somewhat of an endorphin high from running around with the boys for the last hour, except now that high was beginning to morph into something more akin to sheer panic.

She pulled into the apartment complex and parked, noticing that Milo was out cold she turned to Tara. “Baby?” She said, desperately trying to keep her voice from cracking, but failing miserably, “Are you ok? Did I do something o-or say something to upset you? If I did, then please tell me because I’ll probably say it again…and often.”

The trepidation and worry in Willow’s voice seemed to snap Tara out of her stupor, “What? Oh, no sweetie, you didn’t do anything. I-I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to make you think…” The hurt and confusion reflected in Willow’s eyes nearly broke Tara’s heart. She unbuckled her seat belt and leaned across the center console, “Come here,” She said as she pulled Willow towards her and kissed her gently. “I’m sorry,” Tara repeated, knowing that this was all her fault, “I just didn’t want to say anything in front of Milo.”

Willow cocked her head, “Did someone make you feel uncomfortable or-or make a move on you? Was it that guy in the red shirt? Don’t think I didn’t notice how he was looking at you, because I totally did and…”

“Shhh honey, no moves; I didn’t even notice the guy in red. It’s um, it’s about this,” Tara said, hoping that her words gave her girlfriend some comfort as she reached down between her feet and pulled out a magazine.

“What’s this?” Willow asked.

Tara sighed deeply and handed it over to Willow, who took a few seconds to scan over the cover, then flip to the article, “Well that’s a big load of horse hooey. A-And what’s with these pictures? There’s gotta be better ones of me out there somewhere,” She said incredulously.

“S-S-So you’re not mad?”

Willow was taken aback and looked at Tara questionably, “Why would I be mad? I mean it’s not like you gave them these pictures or wrote this completely untrue article. Did you?”

“What? No, of course not!” Tara practically shouted, a look of horror on her face.

“Tare, I was just kidding,” Willow replied softly.

“Oh…sorry.”

“It’s ok, but why are you so upset? Weren’t you the one that warned me about this kind of nonsense?”

“I know Will, it’s just that…well, your Mom’s going to see this. It’s probably going to embarrass her and my current position in the dog house will probably become permanent.”

“Tara, if you’re permanently banished to the dog house, then I’m right there with you, besides it could be fun.” Willow grinned with a playful tone on her voice.

Tara’s eyes met Willow’s as her lopsided smile began to spread across her face. The redhead had an innate way of easing her worries, “Oh really, and how’s that?”

Willow leaned forward and lightly brushed her lips across Tara’s, “Well you see, dog houses are small, confined spaces with lots and lots of privacy.”

The mischievous glint in Willow’s eyes sent Tara’s hormones into overdrive; her body responding immediately as naughty thoughts began to take over her mind. “That dog house is starting to look better and better,” The blonde mumbled; their lips just centimeters apart when they heard Milo begin to stir behind them. “Mmhmm…raincheck?”

“Um hmm, absolutely,” Willow responded, giving Tara a quick peck on the lips before getting to the task of waking her sleeping nephew.

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After dropping Milo off at home, the girls returned to Willow’s to get cleaned up for their double date with Hunter and his girlfriend, Molly. On the ride back, Tara had prayed to every deity she could think of in hopes that a) Sheila wasn’t home or b) at a minimum, had not seen any tabloids. Their day together had been perfect, and knowing how excited Willow was about their date, the blonde did not want anything to ruin their evening out. The truth of the matter was that Tara was just as excited about their impending double date. She couldn’t remember the last time she had a relaxing evening out with no pesky Paparazzi.

They arrived back at the ranch and Tara was relieved to find out that Sheila and Ira had gone out for the evening. The only person home was Hunter, and he was preoccupied preparing for their date. The girls made their way through the house and up to Willow’s room, laughing and chatting the entire time. Once in the safety of Willow’s room, Tara pulled Willow close and they soon began to lose themselves in each other. Some time had passed before they finally pulled apart, flushed and panting.

“Hey,” Willow breathed.

“Hey yourself,” Tara replied as she ran her hand up and down Willow’s back.

Willow looked around, “How did we end up in bed and half naked?”

Tara giggled and lightly brushed her lips across Willow’s, “I’m not sure. First we were over there,” She gestured towards the door, “About twenty minutes ago and now we’re here, oh and our shirts and bras are over there.”

“Must have been magic,” Willow quipped as she kissed across Tara’s jaw and down towards her neck.

“Ummmm,” Tara moaned, “Will, sweetie…oh God that feels good…but we have to get up, shower and get ready to go. It’s getting late.”

Willow groaned in acceptance; defeated, she laid her head on her girlfriend’s shoulder, “You wanna take the first shower?” She mumbled into Tara’s supple neck.

Sensing Willow’s sudden sleepiness, Tara suggested that the redhead go first; instinctually knowing that if Willow didn’t get up right away, that she wouldn’t be getting up at all. They reluctantly parted with several small pecks as Willow stripped, threw on her robe and headed down to shower. While Willow was showering, Tara took the time to power up her laptop and check her email. She hadn’t paid much attention to it since arriving in Texas and thought she’d better see what has going on back home.

Just as she’d suspected, there was a ton of mail. Mostly from friends voicing their congratulations at her coming out. There were a few from her agent, a couple from the TV studio, but the one she was most interested in was from Cyndi. She opted to open that one first.

Tara Darling…Just as we discussed, the tabs are printing whatever will sell. Don’t worry about it! You girls keep your heads up…its all bullshit and can be dealt with later.

How’s the trip going? Settling into the ‘cowgirl’ life? I hope you are getting some rest, although knowing Willow……. :-)~

Anyway, on to the good news! I received a call from Vanity Fair and they want you for the February cover!!! A full spread…The Real Tara Maclay! A sort of Valentines/love story type thing. They also want you photographed by
Annie L…this is exciting!!! They know that you will be in NY in a few weeks and would like to do it then. Thoughts?? Also…The Advocate, Out, Curve, US Weekly, People, OK, etc. are hounding me to death…all fighting for the first ‘official’ cover w/interview. My humble advice…go with the Advocate. Two things: 1st- If you don’t go with a gay publication, you will lose gay support. 2nd- They are more mainstream news and less tabloidish…know what I’m getting at here??

BTW…not to rush you but…I need an answer on ‘Meridian’ by the time you get back. They STILL want you for the lead and have upped their price $$$. They want Ron Howard for this movie and HE wants you!! I spoke with him yesterday and he’d like to speak with you. I doubt he’ll make this movie w/o you, so there is a lot riding on your answer, but no pressure…haha. Let me know when is a good time to take a call from him…VERY important that you arrange to take this call!!! DO NOT commit yourself to the movie with him…not even off the record. I think if you hold out a little longer, you can get more $$ and when I say more…I mean MORE. They’re offer is up to 6, but I think we can get them closer to 10 plus royalties.

Ok sweetie, I’m off to Conn. for a visit with Mumsy, I’ll have my phone, computer, etc. so, please get back to me on the RH call…try to arrange before Thursday. Happy Thanksgiving!

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A wide grin formed on the blonde’s face as she read through the email. She couldn’t help but feel a deep sense of relief knowing that, despite the shaky press, she was still a highly sought after actress. Coming to the end of the email, Tara shook her head in amusement at Cyndi’s ramblings; knowing that the publicist would not rest until she confirmed the phone call with the Hollywood icon. Tara thought about it for a minute, deciding to take the call the next day and began her reply to the publicist. Taking into consideration the time difference and the fact that they may want to sleep in, she decided on a time frame between 11am and 12pm. This way, it gave them a nice window and neither was tied to a specific time. Tara sent the email, closed her laptop and then went about readying her clothes for their date.

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Twenty minutes later it was Tara’s turn to shower as she meandered down the stairs and into the second floor bathroom. She turned on the water then removed her robe to place it on the door hook, but not before examining her nude form in the full-length mirror that hung just below the hook. She stared at her front, over her shoulder at her backside and now a side view. Tara twisted her face in a grimace as she placed a hand on her stomach, sucking in her stomach and allowing it to extend several times. The blonde wasn’t overweight by any means, however, she was curvy and unfortunately the camera was not always kind to curvy women. For Tara, it was a constant battle. Shaking her head and ridding herself of negative thoughts, she hung her robe and hopped in the shower.

Tara took about as much time as Willow did and was now on her way back up the stairs when she noticed the music coming from Willow’s room was not only getting louder, but the artist was being accompanied by her girlfriend. Tara crept up the stairs, as not to alert the redhead of her presence and slowly opened the door. She was immediately rewarded by the sight of her bra and panty clad girl belting out a rocking version of Small Town by John Mellencamp …into her hair brush. Willow had the volume turned up on her radio, as she was blow-drying her hair with her left hand and using her round brush in her right as a makeshift microphone.

Well I was born in a small town
And I live in a small town
Prob'ly die in a small town
Oh, those small communities


Tara did her best to keep out of sight, but Willow had caught her peeking through the cracked door out of the corner of her eye. She continued singing and was now dancing her way over to the door, pulling it open to reveal her girlfriend. Not missing a beat, Willow pulled Tara into the room and continued to sing.

All my friends are so small town
My parents live in the same small town
My job is so small town
Provides little opportunity…HEY!

Educated in a small town
Taught to fear Jesus in a small town


Willow looked at Tara and mouthed ‘no;’ shaking her head vigorously, but continuing to sing.

Used to daydream in that small town
Another born romantic that's me


The redhead was having fun singing and acting out the lyrics of her favorite song…especially the last two lines that she sang proudly; raising her thumbs and motioning towards herself.

But I've seen it all in a small town
Had myself a ball in a small town
Married an L.A. doll and brought her to this small town
Now she's small town just like me


Tara was now getting into it as well, as she pointed to the ring finger on her left hand and shook her head, quirking up her lips and raising her eyebrows, eliciting loud giggles from the singing redhead.

No I cannot forget where it is that I come from
I cannot forget the people who love me
Yeah, I can be myself here in this small town
And people let me be just what I want to be


Willow spun Tara around and sang the next verse directly to her; grinning from ear to ear.

Got nothing against a big town
Still havn’t seen enough to say
Look who's in the big town
But my baby is in a small town
Oh, and that's good enough for me

Well I was born in a small town
And I can breathe in a small town
Gonna die in this small town
And that's prob'ly where they'll bury me


As the song played out, Willow had long since abandoned her hair brush and was dancing full on with Tara, as they finished the song together; finally collapsing in a heap onto her bed. They lay side by side for several long moments laughing and panting, trying to catch their breath. Tara finally sat up, pulling the redhead up with her. She turned, bringing both hands up to Willow’s face and caressing her cheeks with her thumbs, “You’re adorable,” Tara said as she pulled Willow into a passionate kiss.

When they broke for some air, Willow finally replied, “You’re not so bad yourself,” as she craned her neck to look down the front of Tara’s robe. With all their jumping around during the song, Tara’s robe tie had loosened and Willow was taking advantage of her bird’s eye view. Tara tilted her head and gave her girlfriend a ‘look.’

“What?” Willow said in her most innocent of voices, “I’m a breast gal,” She finished, shrugging her shoulders and looping a finger in the robe; opening it a little wider.

“Tell me something I don’t know already,” Tara replied with a lopsided smirk.

“Ok, the square root of 841 is 29,” Willow grinned proudly.

Tara’s head popped up and she raised her eyebrows quizzically, “Seriously?”

“Umm hmm,” Willow answered, still peering into the open robe and entirely preoccupied with Tara’s chest.

“1296,” Tara threw at her.

“36,” Willow answered instantly.

“10,404.”

“102.”

Tara thought for a second, “105,692.”

“325, well it’s more like 325.10 blah, blah or something. That one’s not exact.”

Tara simply sat staring at Willow with her mouth agape.

Noticing the silence, Willow finally tore her eyes from Tara’s voluptuous breasts; a sheepish look in her eyes, “Oh, sorry, you think this is bad? You should have seen me at fifteen…hello spaz.”

“You? No way,” Tara grinned.

“Yeah, hard to believe such a hot mama-yama came from humble, geek infested roots.”

“Uhmm, infested roots, trying to turn me on?”

Willow smiled widely at the blonde, “I have to try now?”

“Well, maybe just a little,” Tara said in a teasing voice.

“Oh really?” Willow replied as she leaned forward and captured Tara’s lips. Willow’s mouth moved slowly, opening ever so slightly; allowing her tongue to peek out and brush across Tara’s soft, full lips. Tara took the hint and opened her mouth to accept the sweet offering. In the back of Tara’s mind a little voice warned her against proceeding any further as time was against them, but the wonderfully warm lips pressed against hers were overriding all rational thought. Tara never thought that the simple act of kissing someone could be this exhilarating; causing her entire body to tremble and shake with arousal. She was completely in love with Willow and could deny her nothing.

Several minutes had passed and Willow was rapidly losing her battle with self-control as she slid her hand into the open robe and grazed Tara’s already hardened nipples with the palm of her hand. Tara’s low guttural moan only encouraged Willow on and her hand automatically began massaging Tara’s breast. Tara instinctually arched her chest forward and increased her grip on Willow’s neck, pulling her backwards onto the bed and half on top of her. Willow continued kneading Tara’s breasts and kissing her deeply as the blonde slid a muscular thigh upwards into Willow’s warm center. Tara’s hands drifted of their own accord around Willow’s back, deftly unsnapping her bra, and giving her easy access to the redhead’s pert breasts. When Willow raised up a bit to rid herself of her bra, Tara took advantage of the position; leaning forward and attaching her lips to Willow’s left breast.

The sensation of Tara’s mouth on her breast sent shockwaves of pleasure through the redhead; sliding her fingers through the blonde tresses, Willow pulled Tara tighter against her chest. The sensation of Tara’s tongue rapidly caressing her nipple was causing Willow’s essence to soak through her panties and onto Tara’s thigh. Willow desperately needed to feel movement and ease the ache between her legs; her body took over and she unconsciously began rocking her hips and pressing harder into Tara’s thigh.

Tara couldn’t help but enjoy the way Willow was reacting, her entire body trembling at Tara’s touch. Tara loved the feeling of skin-to-skin contact, and the robe, even thought it was open, was preventing her from feeling all of her girlfriend. She pulled back, struggling to divest herself of the offending item and trying not to break contact with Willow’s breast. Looking down, Willow noticed Tara’s battle and reached to help her, causing them to fall back again on the mattress.

“Wait,” Tara panted as she managed to free an arm, “Ok, I think…no…”

Willow snorted with laughter, pushing up on her hands to give Tara more wiggling room. Finally winning the battle, she slumped back and sighed deeply. Tara gazed up at Willow, who was hovering over her with an amused look on her face, “C’mere you,” Tara breathed, running her hands up Willow’s bare arms and locking her fingers around her neck.

The redhead lowered herself fully on top of Tara and buried her face in Tara’s neck; kissing her way to the blonde’s delicate earlobe. Willow ran her tongue around Tara’s ear eliciting a deep moan from her girlfriend. They’d been together enough times that Willow knew how the soft teasing with her tongue all around her ear drove the blonde insane. Willow whispered, “I love you Tara.” The blonde responded instantly, sucking hard on Willow’s collarbone. Hearing Willow say those three little words was more sexually arousing to Tara than even the most erotic of touches.

Releasing Willow’s shoulder with her mouth, Tara was panting heavily, “Baby, panties…off. Need you…now. Please...”

The urgency and primal need in Tara’s voice spurred Willow into action, quickly ridding herself of the soaking panties and positioning herself off to one side. Willow slid her lips roughly against Tara’s; they opened and closed their mouths together, as if their lives depended on this one kiss. Willow’s tongue worked its way into Tara’s mouth as her hand slid deftly down her stomach and into the pooling wetness between Tara’s legs. Feeling the slickness on her fingers caused Willow’s entire body to burn with desire. She slowly stroked through the downy curls, edging ever closer to her girlfriends most intimate spot.

Tara drew a sharp breath and thrust her hips upwards into Willow’s palm, her whole body trembling with anticipation. Tara could feel Willow squirming awkwardly next to her and squeezing her thighs together. Not wanting her to feel uncomfortable, Tara ran her hand down Willow’s side, nudging her legs apart and slipping easily into Willow’s moist center. They both adjusted themselves for better access and began to rhythmically stroke each other until they were audibly moaning.

The radio was still blaring in the background; somewhat drowning out their lovemaking, but neither girl was conscious of what song was actually playing. The magnitude of the moment was so strong, that they no longer possessed the ability to focus on anything except where their hands were, as they pressed their foreheads tightly together.

Tara’s breath was becoming ragged and her hips began rocking faster as her body began to shudder uncontrollably. Her inner muscles were clenched tightly around Willow’s fingers and the closer she got to her peak, the harder Willow pressed her palm into Tara’s clit. Their actions had become instinctively synchronized and their movements more and more frenzied. Tara’s grunting became louder and her grip on Willow tighter as her whole body stiffened and she came hard against Willow’s hand. Tara’s release was all Willow needed to push her over the edge; she thrust her hips forward as her climax engulfed her entire body.

They lay together on the bed, their bodies still entangled and their lips softly pressed together as they reveled in the after glow of their lovemaking. Tara pulled back, just enough to look deeply into Willow’s eyes, “I’m so in love with you Willow,” she whispered, blinking back tears of joy.

Willow’s breath caught in her throat at the intense level of conviction in Tara’s voice; never in her young life had she ever felt anything like what she felt for Tara. The blue eyed beauty had awakened something in her that she never even knew existed, and at that very moment, Willow knew that there would never be anyone else for her, except Tara. “I love you too Tara, so very much,” she replied with all the love in the world shining in her eyes.

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End Chapter 42 TBC…
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby brave-little-toaster » Sun Aug 14, 2011 10:14 am

DIVS! Again, you have a great knack of posting when I'm having a bad day...
This was a great chapter and I look forward to the next!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby zampsa19752001 » Sun Aug 14, 2011 11:12 am

Yay for great update-goodness... I love how Willow's geek-infested roots turned Tara on... Can't wait for the double date...
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby AstronSoul » Sun Aug 14, 2011 4:17 pm

Yay update! Bare with me I'm on my phone lol

Interesting how they seem to always get dide trcked, and the singing and dancing seemed to really relax them
Are they ever going to get to the double date?

Lol great job"

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby Gaga01 » Mon Aug 15, 2011 5:56 am

Awww, smart Willow is so hot!! And of course, things just get incredibly hot after :sheep

Willow's freakout at the beginning made me nervous since I had forgot about the tabloid Tara was given in the previous update...I really can't wait for Tara to do the 'real' magazines! Ooh, that'd be kind of awesome if Willow tagged along and took part of one of them, so there would at least be one good article/gorgeous pics of them rather than creepy paparazzi shots to show her off...

Can't wait for next update!! :applause
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby MmmTaraSoSmexy13 » Mon Aug 15, 2011 10:32 am

Aww. I love how Tara was so concern for Willow, but she was all like,“Well that’s a big load of horse hooey. A-And what’s with these pictures? There’s gotta be better ones of me out there somewhere.” I love the chemistry that these two have. You write extremely well and I can't wait for more. Loving the snuggles much, me wants more lol :wtkiss
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby True_Love » Mon Aug 15, 2011 5:42 pm

Great story! This update made my day although, I thought it was a little shorter than your previous posts. Maybe it just feels that way because I love the reading this and didn't want it to end. My wife is from a small town in Texas and my first meeting with her family was actually kind of similar to this. So, I can't wait to see how it turns out and if they make it all the way through the week before either Tara or both of them leave to go back to LA. I know there is going to be some angst between the two of them in here somewhere and I am just preparing myself for the ride.

Keep up the great work and thanks for updating regularly. Much less anxiety on my part.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby willowtaralover » Tue Aug 16, 2011 8:12 am

YAY Updatey goodness. :applause :bounce :banana :eatme

It's good to see Willow being equally horrified by the magazine article and photo as Tara is, though if Sheila sees it it will be interesting to see her reaction. They are being unkind about Willow after all who is still her daughter, plus she knows that Tara is up for an Oscar which seems to have moved her up a notch in Sheila's eyes so she could be supportive, though I doubt it lol.

Really good to see Tara's publicist, Cyndi, supporting her and helping her 100% suggesting the best magazine to go to be interviewed by and how much she could make in money from the film.

I know that I know zilch about Hollywood but I know that even if Tara is curvy she's still way sexier than most of the big stars, and I saw a video piece from the saucy photoshoot Amber did :drool and during the lunch break she said that guys love girls with curves and I happen to love curvy Amber, and Tara. :blush

"Tell me something I don’t know already,” Tara replied with a lopsided smirk.

“Ok, the square root of 829 is 41,” Willow grinned proudly.


YAY, the return of brainy Willow :)

A nice piece of smut there but I think I can top it :smug


Tara pulled back, just enough to look deeply into Willow’s eyes, “I’m so in love with you Willow,” she whispered, blinking back tears of joy.

Willow’s breath caught in her throat at the intense level of conviction in Tara’s voice; never in her young life had she ever felt anything like what she felt for Tara. The blue eyed beauty had awakened something in her that she never even knew existed, and at that very moment, Willow knew that there would never be anyone else for her, except Tara. “I love you too Tara, so very much,” she replied with all the love in the world shining in her eyes.


Awww, sweet. When are they going to marry? Are they going to marry? it won't be a Willow/Tara story if they don't wed at the end.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Tue Aug 16, 2011 12:27 pm

A nice piece of smut there but I think I can top it
Please do! And IT"S ABOUT TIME!!!!!!! :p
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby Grimm » Tue Aug 16, 2011 3:57 pm

Whooooooooooooooa, I was praying that this wasnt a "R/L is overwhelming blah, blah, blah..taking a break from updating" post (paranoid much?) Anywhoo's, loved the way you use dialog from the show in your story. Its very subtle and always used approriately (I hate it when people use it and it seems forced). Very happy to see that Tara's career won't suffer because she came out....and kisses and gay love are always welcome!!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby love_2003 » Tue Aug 16, 2011 11:21 pm

Glad to see that Tara's career doesn't seem to be suffering because she came out. Loved the update.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby JustSkipIt » Wed Aug 17, 2011 4:20 pm

Hey Shel,
Wow. You got this posted with like 80 hour work weeks, shopping for back to school, and trying not to melt in the heat. I'm impressed. Nice chapter. I kept expecting Hunter to interrupt them but I guess he knows better. That's good. I'm glad to read Cyndie's note to Tara. You've mentioned the Meridian story before. I sounds terrible but I guess that's why they call it acting. Wow. 6 - 10 million dollars. Incredible. Very nice smut and very nice dialog.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby vampyregurl73 » Sun Aug 21, 2011 4:14 pm

Shel,

You busy, busy girl!

I have been horrible about leaving feedback, the new job has been time consuming as well as a trip back to Virginia (kinda surreal really, she died in North Carolina where she was with my Aunt, so a funeral precession back home was... interesting) to lay my paternal grandmother to rest have made things awkward for me. I am sooo many chapters behind to be specific about every one, so I just mention the things that have stuck out for me.

I love "Sweet Baby Milo", that was so sweet, and unfortunately (in my opinion) it makes me wonder if initially his mother getting pregnant wasn't just another way to keep his dad around. When a parent is actually jealous of their child it never bodes well.

I'd really like to beat Sheila with a stick, but I know it really wouldn't do any good. It was funny, that until Tara mentioned something (or someone I should say) that really got her interest piqued she had no use for her at all. (The Harrison Ford bit)

Willow and the kids playing was also too cute, the enthusiasm you write her with is very endearing. Her John Cougar Mellencamp aka John Cougar aka John Mellencamp - he's as bad as Prince! (I had that album as an album, lol. I think I was like 14 or so) sing along - and especially the song - was fitting. :)

I also like Cyndi's support of the whole coming out and they way it's being handled, as for the tabloid - well, what did ya expect? Looking forward to her report on the visit with "mumsie" too.

Just good stuff all the way around. ;)
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby wimpy0729 » Mon Aug 22, 2011 6:17 am

Hey Shel! Another wonderful update. I loved it all. You write their passion and love amazingly well in the love scenes. While I loved the smut, I think I even loved Willow's reaction to the tabloid even more. She let Tara know that she wasn't going to let it bother her no matter what, and they can get through this. I also loved Cyndi's email. Tara is still in high demand in the industry, so that's a huge relief. Now we just have to see what Sheila says about all this. Oh my.


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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby BuffyFan4ever » Sat Aug 27, 2011 3:24 pm

Great Update.

Glad Tara's career isn't negatively affected by the stupid tabloids.

“Ok, the square root of 829 is 41,” Willow grinned proudly.

Actually, 41 squared is 1681. The square root of 829 is 28.19... :geek :p

Can't wait for Shelia to see the tabloid. Is it wrong for me to hope that she goes too far (as if she hasn't already) and forces Willow to cut her mom out of her life forever? Ira and the other family members need to stand up to her. As long as everybody tolerates Shelia's behavior, it will continue to happen.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sat Aug 27, 2011 4:23 pm

Hahahahahahahaha...it was supposed to be the square root of 841 is 29 not 829 = 41!!! I see my dyslexia kicked into full gear on that one. I even took that directly from canon, I can't remember which episode, but it was somewhere in the HS years. I fixed it:)

BTW...thanks for pointing that out to EVERYONE, lol.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby bouncer73 » Sat Aug 27, 2011 7:43 pm

lol OMG..I thought this was an update and wow...but the last update was awesome..Can't wait for the next one..keep it up
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sat Aug 27, 2011 9:29 pm

Brave-Little-Toaster:
DIBS!

Glad I could brighten your day!!

zampsa19752001
I love Willow’s “geek infested roots” as well:)

Thanks for the feedback!


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the singing and dancing seemed to really relax them
Among other things… :p

Are they ever going to get to the double date?
See below!!


Thanks for the feedback!

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Awww, smart Willow is so hot!!
Yes! I second that!!

I really can't wait for Tara to do the 'real' magazines! Ooh, that'd be kind of awesome if Willow tagged along and took part of one of them
Well, she is going with her to NY….you never know. :p


Thanks for the feedback!

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I love how Tara was so concern for Willow
I think Tara sometimes forgets that Willow is kind of a celebrity in her own right and can handle it pretty well. Plus, they were expecting it after all.

I love the chemistry that these two have. You write extremely well and I can't wait for more. Loving the snuggles much, me wants more
Aww, thanks!! I’m very glad that you like it. :grin

Thanks for the feedback!!!

True_Love:
I thought it was a little shorter than your previous posts. Maybe it just feels that way because I love the reading this and didn't want it to end.
So, you got me wondering and actually…the last 3 updates were almost exactly the same; word count-wise that is, give or take 100. Funny, when I first started writing this fic I thought, “Oh, I’ll shoot for 2000 words per chapter,” and it seemed daunting at the time. Now, 2000 words seem too short! Lol

My wife is from a small town in Texas
I’m actually from Miami originally, but have lived in a small town/suburb northwest of Houston for just over 12 years and small towns are so nutty!

I doubt it’ll get bad enough for either to leave, but they may need some downtime away from the family before it’s all over, lol.

The angst is a comin’!! But I promise it won’t be too bad and I think you may actually enjoy it:)

Keep up the great work and thanks for updating regularly. Much less anxiety on my part.
I wish I could get back to weekly updates, but bi-weekly is working so much better for me right now. So, no anxiety!

Thanks for the feedback!!

willowtaralover:
It's good to see Willow being equally horrified by the magazine article and photo as Tara is, though if Sheila sees it it will be interesting to see her reaction.
Yes, it will be and I would imagine that she will eventually see it. I’m not really sure what Sheila thinks she will accomplish being so nasty to both girls…only time will tell.

I'm really glad Milo has Willow around at least every once in a while. Poor guy must have a pretty stressful life most of the time.
I don’t think he’s super stressed all the time, but as we know, little kids react to what’s going on with their parents and Milo is no stranger to angst.

I absolutely loved the ball practice -- too cute. I wish I really could have seen Willow out there with them. My imagination, I'm sure, isn't doing it justice.
My daughter’s coaches used to play all sorts of games with the girls to teach the basics. Only they weren’t as yummy as Willow, lol:)

Wonder who just "happened" to have a pic of Willow all sweaty in a game. Hmmm...
Hmm, I wonder… :hmm

Awww, sweet. When are they going to marry?
:hmm


Thanks for the feedback!


SMGOVAN:
Whooooooooooooooa, I was praying that this wasnt a "R/L is overwhelming blah, blah, blah..taking a break from updating" post (paranoid much?)
Not yet! Haha, just kidding. I’m actually pretty bummed out that I had to go to updating every two weeks instead of weekly. There’s just not enough damn time in the day!

Anywhoo's, loved the way you use dialog from the show in your story. Its very subtle and always used approriately (I hate it when people use it and it seems forced).
Thanks! I love slipping it in; it keeps them true to their canon roots, but still AU. Willow had so much great dialog over the 7 seasons; sometimes when I rewatch pre-Tara episodes, I take notes…nerd alert!!! lol


Thanks for the feedback!


love_2003:
Glad to see that Tara's career doesn't seem to be suffering because she came out.
Not yet…at least! I doubt it’ll suffer negatively, in fact, she’ll probably be even more in demand.

Thanks for the feedback!!!


JustSkipIt:
Wow. You got this posted with like 80 hour work weeks, shopping for back to school, and trying not to melt in the heat. I'm impressed.
Well, don’t be too impressed, that chapter had been written for several weeks and it took me that long to find time to answer feedback.

Nice chapter. I kept expecting Hunter to interrupt them but I guess he knows better.
Hunter, well…see the next chapter, lol.

Wow. 6 - 10 million dollars. Incredible.
According to Forbes, Angelina and Sarah Jessica Parker topped the list of highest paid female actresses LY at $30m. Tara falls somewhere in the middle between Cameron Diaz and Kristen Stewart…which is around $18m. I’m not sure that Willow really gets exactly how much $$ Tara actually makes.

Thanks for the feedback!


Vampyregurl73:
I have been horrible about leaving feedback
Yes you have!! :whip

***On a serious note…I’m sorry to hear about your grandmother.***


…it makes me wonder if initially his mother getting pregnant wasn't just another way to keep his dad around.
Could be why Sheila gives Stella and Eli so much shit.

It was funny, that until Tara mentioned something (or someone I should say) that really got her interest piqued she had no use for her at all.
She’s nothing if not shallow, lol.

Willow and the kids playing was also too cute, the enthusiasm you write her with is very endearing.
Thanks! I find it easy to write kids, because well, it’s basically my life, lol. My daughter has always had lot’s of friends around and they are a daily source of entertainment:)

Her John Cougar Mellencamp aka John Cougar aka John Mellencamp - he's as bad as Prince! (I had that album as an album, lol. I think I was like 14 or so) sing along - and especially the song - was fitting.
* Sighs * What can I say, I love him…all three of him, lol. I had the albums, tapes, cd’s etc. I think I was 15 or 16 when Jack and Diane came out because I remember buying the tape for my Walkman. At least he’s not a weird symbol and “The artist formerly known as…”

BTW…Dry Heat?????????? PLEASE!!!

Thanks for the feedback!

wimpy0729:
You write their passion and love amazingly well in the love scenes.
Thank you!!

I even loved Willow's reaction to the tabloid even more.
Willow always seems to let it roll off, because I really don’t think she cares. She figures that she has nothing to hide, not even sweat, lol.

Now we just have to see what Sheila says about all this.
Tara is the only one that seems to be genuinely worried about Sheila’s reaction. This is where Willow’s laid back attitude becomes a bit of a problem. She probably needs to be worried about it, but she’s just too blinded by love to really care. The tension builds!!


Thanks for the feedback and glad you’re back!

BuffyFan4ever:
Can't wait for Shelia to see the tabloid. Is it wrong for me to hope that she goes too far (as if she hasn't already) and forces Willow to cut her mom out of her life forever? Ira and the other family members need to stand up to her. As long as everybody tolerates Shelia's behavior, it will continue to happen.
Haha…not bad at all. I believe that’s what most people are thinking.
I don’t want to give too much away, but I promise you won’t be disappointed with the outcome.

Seriously…thanks for pointing out the sq root thing. I hate it when I make dumb mistakes. Grr!

Thanks for the feedback!!!

Bouncer73:
Sorry for the update fake out! The real update is below:)


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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/27/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sat Aug 27, 2011 9:33 pm

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TITLE: Racing The Rain

AUTHOR: Finey_McFine

RATING: PG-13ish

DISCLAIMER: Willow, Tara and any other BtVS characters, as well as some random dialog, belong to Mutant Enemy. ALL other original characters belong to me! This includes: Willow’s siblings and teammates, plus Tara’s friends and co-workers. Mention of any ‘real’ people in this fic is brief and pure fantasy.

SUMMARY: Totally AU! Set in LA with lots of W/T fluff and some angst, but no Hellmouthyness; just good old regular day-to-day drama. Willow is attending college on an athletic scholarship and Tara is Hollywood royalty. They meet and fall in love, of course, but will they be able to survive the pitfalls of a public romance? Well, you’ll just have to read and find out! ;-)



FEEDBACK: Yes! Any glaring issues…please send me a PM!

AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hi Everyone and Happy almost Sunday! Early post, because we’re celebrating my little monkey’s 12th birthday tomorrow:) So, on my last post I asked for a rain dance and we got some rain. Yay! So this time I ask, will some please turn off the heat? Enjoy!

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Chapter 43: My Tara

“Willow, sweetie?” Tara said softly; her fingers gliding wistfully across the length of Willow’s sweat covered back, “We need to get up before Hunter comes looking for us.”

“Nuh uh, don’t wanna,” Willow mumbled as she buried her face deeper into her girlfriend’s chest; squeezing her tightly.

Tara smiled and pressed a kiss to the top of Willow’s head, “As much as I’d love for you to stay there forever, we have a date tonight.”

Willow grumbled incoherently, finally rising up on her elbow, “Ummm, Tara boobs,” She breathed as she ran her fingertips upwards across the silky skin of Tara’s stomach to gently massage her left breast.

“Oh God Willow,” Tara gasped as Willow’s lips descended on her right breast. “Baaaabyyyyy…” Tara whined.

Willow placed several light kisses on her girlfriends erect nipple, then her chest, her neck and finally her lips; kissing her deeply. Eventually breaking the kiss, Willow sighed, “I think we need to shower again. How about we take a quick one together?”

Tara glanced at Willow coyly, “You. Me. Naked and wet? Does not equal quick.”

“Hmmm,” Willow pondered Tara’s words, “You do have a valid point. Well, maybe we can just go together and take turns? I promise to be good and at least it’ll be a little quicker.” Tara finally acquiesced as they reluctantly untangled and went downstairs for a quick shower.

Some thirty minutes later, they happily skipped down the stairs hand in hand. Turning the corner they found Hunter sitting on the couch in the family room flipping channels on the TV.

“We’re here and ready for action – uh, dinner action that is,” Willow blurted out nervously.

Hunter eyed them with a knowing smirk. Earlier he had ventured upstairs to get an update on their departure time, when about half way up he heard music and some noises that a brother should never hear coming from his little sister. Doing an abrupt about face, that would make any drill sergeant proud, he made a hasty exit and decided to just wait it out downstairs with the TV turned up…really, really loud.

“Everything ok?” He asked.

“Yeah, we’re good,” Willow replied grinning goofily at Tara.

“We’re better than good,” Tara added, giving Willow a shy sexy smile.

“Great,” Hunter said, awkwardly.

Willow mumbled, “Super…” Not really listening to Hunter at all and completely focused on Tara. Willow kissed her girlfriend quickly, but went back for seconds, which quickly segued into something deeper.

Hunter coughed, “Well, ok then…shall we? Oh for the love of puppies, please?” He begged.

The girls pulled apart, completely flushed, “Ok, ok…we’ll stop.” Willow said and mouthed an ’I love you to Tara as she took her hand and they followed Hunter out to his truck.

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“So, how come we didn’t pick up Molly?” Willow asked her brother as the pulled into the restaurant parking lot.

“Her sister is dropping her off. They were at the mall and it was just easier,” He answered.

Willow turned to Tara in the backseat and smiled, “The mall is just across the street, so it’s pretty close.”

Tara nodded her head and returned the smile. She had taken the back seat to give the siblings a little time up front to talk. Inherently, Tara knew that if she and Willow were left to their own devices in the back, it would have made for a very uncomfortable situation for Hunter; even though she would have loved nothing more. It was fine with her as she sat back, taking in the scenery and listening to the chat up front. She loved watching the two of them interact; they were incredibly comfortable and at ease around each other. Tara could tell that their bond ran deep and she couldn’t help but notice how cute Willow was. The redhead spoke excitedly and gestured wildly with her hands as she caught Hunter up on all the goings on over the last couple weeks.

Arriving at the restaurant, Willow leapt from the truck so she could open the door for her date. Smiling sappily at Tara, she held out a hand to help her out and as soon as Tara’s feet hit the ground, Willow pulled her into a passionate kiss. Initially, Tara was surprised by the intensity of Willow’s kiss, but she responded quickly, wrapping her arms around Willow’s neck and pressing their mouths tightly together. As the kiss continued, Hunter did his best to avert his eyes, not wanting to intrude on their private moment. He stood on the other side of the truck waiting and wondering if they were going to come up for air anytime soon. Lucky for Hunter, he spotted Molly waiting on a bench just outside the front door of Pappasito’s and headed across the parking lot.

“Ummm, wow…” Tara breathed, “Will, you are an amazing kisser.”

“So are you baby, amazing…” Willow answered as she leaned in for a few quick pecks.

“Love you sweetie.”

“Love you too Tare, I guess we’d better go.”

“Umm hmm, hopefully we didn’t break your brother.”

Willow took Tara’s hand and they started across the parking lot, “Doubtful, but he might just break me,” Willow said and gestured towards her brother; who was sitting with Molly and rubbing their noses together.

“It must be contagious,” Tara offered.

“Yeah,” Willow smiled to herself, extremely happy for her brother.

They skipped up the steps to where Hunter and Molly were sitting on a bench, with their backs to a lush tropical garden. The outdoor waiting area was in fact beautiful. Styled to reflect an authentic Mexican Hacienda, the gardens surrounded a small stream with a waterfall and a hand crafted tile fountain as the centerpiece. Several children had gathered around, tossing coins and making wishes. The atmosphere was relaxed and Tara noted that it very much fit Willow’s laid back personality.

“Hey guys!” Willow shouted as they approached the couple.

“Hey,” Hunter replied, “Molly, this is my sister, Willow.” He said proudly.

“Hi Molly, it’s nice to meet you.” Willow replied.

“Y-You too Willow, Hunter talks about you all the time.” Molly was visibly nervous meeting Willow, she stammered and her hand trembled a bit when she reached out to shake Willow’s hand. Not only was Willow the first family member she was to meet, but also Hunter’s best friend, and Molly was feeling the pressure.

“Hmm, all good I hope!” Willow made eye contact and smiled warmly. Willow had a way with people and immediately put the girl at ease as she went about introducing Tara, and soon the four of them settled into a comfortable conversation.

After about 30 minutes the foursome relocated to a tall round table near the bar. They ordered strawberry margaritas and munched on homemade chips and salsa. They all seemed to get along well as they got to know each other a little better.

Tara glanced around as she sipped her drink, taking in the eclectic ambience of the restaurant. The main room was large and jammed packed with patrons. It was loud and with the addition of traditional Mexican music booming through the speakers, it made it hard to keep up with the conversation. She continued her scan of the room, noticing that the walls were adorned with a hodge-podge of colorful items and signs. There were also large multi colored Christmas lights draped across the ceiling throughout the entire restaurant, giving it a fun and festive atmosphere. Her eyes finally landed on Willow, who was regaling Molly with a ‘Hunter-centric’ childhood story. Willow had the girl laughing hysterically and swatting her boyfriend on the arm. Tara never got tired of watching Willow and it was quickly becoming her favorite pastime.

Unfortunately, the longer they sat out in the open, the more attention Tara received and soon a small crowd had gathered. Finally, noticing the commotion, the manager stopped by and quickly found them a private table in the back of the restaurant. They had waited nearly an hour to be seated and Tara couldn’t help but laugh to herself. Not once in her life did she ever have to wait for a table; this was most definitely a first. It was a humbling experience as she realized exactly how spoiled she really was.

Hunter sighed, “Wow, that was pretty…”

“Normal?” Both Willow and Tara answered simultaneously, then looked at each other and laughed; bumping shoulders.

“Gosh Tara, I don’t know how you deal with it, I mean it’s such an intrusion into your personal space,” Molly commented.

“The fans seldom get to me and they’re usually polite, but sometimes the Paparazzi does. I try not to evade them; I just live my life and try to stay away from controversy.”

“Oh yeah,” Hunter interjected, “Ya’ll are doing a bang up job at that!” Causing the four of them all laughed heartily.

The waiter came by, dropping off fresh chips and salsa and taking their drink order. The three women ordered a second round of margaritas and Hunter ordered a Coke. Tara’s brow furrowed and she bit her bottom lip as she pondered the menu. It was loaded with the usual Mexican fair and several items that Tara had never seen before. It all looked good and Tara had no idea what to order.

Willow noticed the perplexed look on Tara’s face and leaned closer, “You ok baby? You look a little lost.”

Tara smiled sweetly, “Umm hmm, I’m just not sure what I want. What’s good?”

“Well, pretty much everything. No matter what I get, it’s always excellent! What exactly are you hungry for?” Just as the words left Willow’s mouth she knew she was in trouble, as Tara gave her the most seductive look she’d ever seen.

Willow turned about ten different shades of red at the look she was getting from her girlfriend. She attempted to respond, but the blue eyes that were locked on her effectively rendered her speechless. Willow glanced up at Hunter and Molly; relieved to see that they weren’t paying them any attention.

“So umm, what are you planning on eating, Willow?” Tara whispered.

Willow swallowed hard attempting to calm her hormones; the mixture of vixeny Tara and the buzz from the alcohol, had Willow’s libido in overdrive. The effect Tara had on her, never ceased to amaze her; just one simple look and it was all over.

Once Willow realized that her brother and his girlfriend were in their own world, she decided to have a little fun and began to rub her hand across Tara’s jean clad thigh; causing Tara to squirm beneath her touch. Then, in one quick motion, Willow slipped her hand between Tara’s legs and pressed snugly against her warm center. The move was completely unexpected and caused Tara to respond with a sharp intake of breath, nearly knocking over her drink.

“Woah, hey Tara…everything ok?” Hunter asked as he reached out and steadied Tara’s glass.

“Oh, yeah fine…” Tara breathed nervously; gritting her teeth and turning to the grinning redhead sitting next to her, “…I’m finey-mcfine-fine.

“Okaaay,” Hunter replied skeptically, “So, what are you two getting? I think I’m gonna order the Camarones Diablo!”

Tara exhaled deeply, still pondering the menu, “Baby?” She said sweetly, glancing at Willow.

Willow returned the smile and covertly removed her hand from between Tara’s legs, but left it resting on her thigh, “I usually order the fajita’s, they’re excellent and once you’ve had them here, you’ll never be able to eat them anywhere else. You can get beef, chicken or shrimp.”

“No shrimp!” They said simultaneously, giggling yet again.

“How about we get a beef-chicken combo and split it?” Willow offered.

“Sounds perfect,” Tara replied, winking at Willow.

The waiter returned and the group ordered their food. A few minutes later a young lady arrived at their table with a large cart and began to make their guacamole with fresh chunks of avocado, tomato, roasted jalapenos, onion, cilantro and limejuice. She placed the large wooden bowl on the table and the four of them began to dig in.

“Ummmm, oh my God this is good,” the blonde moaned.

“See, I told you everything here is excellent!” Willow beamed proudly.

“Do you have a favorite restaurant in LA, Tara?” Molly asked.

“Well, while I do love Spago, it’s not someplace you go to relax and have a quiet meal. My favorite restaurant is this little out of the way place in Culver City, where I grew up, called Celeste’s. They specialize in Caribbean food and it’s wonderful.”

Willow listened intently; she loved learning new things about her girlfriend. Tara laid her hand on Willow’s, which was still resting on her thigh. She turned to face her girlfriend, “I’d love to take you there sometime and show you where I grew up,” Tara stated shyly.

“I’d love to go,” Willow replied.

“So, I hate to bring this up-” Hunter said.

“-then don’t!” Willow interrupted; giggling and nudging him under the table.

“Ha ha, anyway…did ya’ll happen to see the tabloids?”

Willow rolled her eyes, “Yeah, Tara got cornered at Milo’s game by Clara Bose, the queen of all things gossipy.” Hunter and Molly scrunched their faces in unison. “She never changes, she was all with the grandmotherly sweetness and then wham! Right to the jugular; it reminded me of what happened to Rachael.”

“Oh yeah…I totally forgot all about that. She practically had her married off to old man Wheatley when she was 17.”

“Oh, this sounds interesting…do tell.” Molly said as she took a long sip of her margarita.

Hunter straightened up and began his story; “When Rachael was 17 she started helping old man Wheatley around his farm. He was getting up there in years and she needed volunteer hours for her college resume. Anyway, he’d kinda gotten a bad rap after his wife died,” Hunter glanced around the table and noticed that Tara and Molly were giving him their full attention, “See, he was in his late 70’s and started dating a younger woman.” Willow snorted and almost spit her drink across the table.

“How much younger?” Tara asked glancing at the choking redhead and patting her lightly on the back.

Willow smirked, “Oh, she was practically jail bait,” she paused dramatically and whispering, “The woman was 52.” Eliciting a round of giggles.

“So, anyway,” Hunter continued, “People started talking and thus his reputation of being a cradle robber was born.”

“And my sister’s penchant for older men was also launched,” Willow added, giggling sarcastically.

Hunter continued, “He dated the widow Pulliam for about six months and then another woman in her 60’s. Then poor Rachael unwittingly fell into his evil web of debauchery. She ran errands for him, cooked him dinner and drove him to appointments in town; that’s when the rumors started. Mrs. Bose had a field day.”

“So what happened next?” Molly asked.

“Well, Mom and I were at the grocery store and she overheard two women gossiping and pointing. Well, she came unglued; I’ve never seen her so mad. She left her cart, grabbed me by the shirt and tore out of there; straight over to Clara Bose’s house.”

Tara glanced at Willow, who shrugged her shoulders, “I was only 7, so my memory is sketchy.”

“The only reason I even knew about it was because I was with Mom at the time. Anyway, when we got to Mrs. Bose’s she made me wait in the car, and to this day, I have no idea what transpired, but she never even so much as uttered Rachael’s name again. I’m guessing she threatened her to within about an inch of her life; I don’t know, the rumors not only stopped, but went in reverse at about a hundred miles an hour.”

Everyone got a kick out of Hunter’s story and Tara began to see exactly how protective Sheila was when it came to her kids. Maybe she thinks I’m going to hurt Willow; that this is just a fling? She doesn’t trust me and Willow is her baby. I get that but, God…I love Willow so much. Doesn’t she see it? How the hell am I going to convince her with all this tabloid crap, and now the town gossip is getting revved up; probably looking for revenge for the ‘Rachael’ incident. Shit…I’m doomed.

Just as Tara’s thoughts were spiraling out of control, she was saved from herself as the sizzling hot plates of food arrived at the table. She was incredibly thankful that Willow had not noticed her distance as she struggled with her inner monologue. She brushed the intrusive thoughts aside and focused on the task at hand, eating this delicious food.

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“Wow, that was the most delicious Mexican food I’ve ever eaten; you were right,” Tara proclaimed, about 45 minutes later.

Willow simply nodded in agreement as she practically inhaled a large spoon full of charro beans; opting to give Tara an enthusiastic thumbs up instead.

“My God Willow, don’t they feed you out in California or do you just get tofu and salads?” Hunter playfully asked his sister.

“Hey, I eat plenty!” Willow exclaimed, “I just can’t get any decent charro beans, that’s for sure. Nothing but that refried crap.” She mumbled the last sentence to herself as she pouted and took in another mouth full of the bean soup.

Tara smiled sympathetically and placed a hand on Willow’s back, showing her support. Willow’s over zealous eating habits never ceased to amuse Tara.

“Hey Tare, did you save room for dessert?” Willow asked.

“D-Dessert? Sweetie, are you trying to kill me?” Tara replied, raising her eyebrows.

“Of course not baby, but the Cajetas are ‘to die for.”

“That’s the second time today you told me a dessert was ‘to die for’ and convinced me to eat it.”

“And was I wrong?” Willow asked, still picking at the fajita meat on her plate.

“No, you were most definitely not wrong. What is a Cajeta anyway?”

“It’s kinda like fried ice cream with chocolate syrup and cajeta sauce; which is this creamy sugary goodness.”

“Why don’t we get four spoons and share?” Molly suggested, but wished she hadn’t when she saw the redhead frown immediately. “Um, sorry. Was that not a good idea?” Molly said sheepishly, looking to Hunter for help.

“It’s a fine idea,” Hunter answered and looked towards his sister; scolding her with his eyes, “My sister is just very possessive when it comes to chocolaty desserts.”

“I’ll have you know big brother, that I willingly shared a slice of chocolate pie from The Blu Moon with Tara earlier today,” the redhead said, clearly proud of herself.

“Wow, you must really love Tara!” Hunter added.

“Hey, I can’t help it that I had four older siblings that were constantly stealing dessert-y goodness from me! It tends to make me very protective over my chocolate.”

Molly caught Tara’s eye and the two shared a knowing smile, both enjoying the banter between the two siblings. Tara could imagine little Willow with a bag of chocolate looking for the perfect hiding place; returning later, only to find her bag empty.

Finally, after some coaxing from Tara, Willow reluctantly agreed to share with Molly and Hunter. A little while later the four were felicitously digging into the coconut-pecan crusted, chocolate syrup covered, vanilla ice cream with gusto. The dessert was decadent and Willow wasted little time devouring her portion and the remainder of everyone else’s as well.

“Ugh, I feel like I might barf,” Hunter moaned.

“How are you doing there Willow, are you in the vomit club too?” Molly asked.

Willow groaned, “I had too much creamy goodness.”

Tara looked sympathetically towards her girlfriend, “Oh, baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I…” Tara paused, seeing the look she was getting from Willow and quietly continued, “…stop explaining things.”

Hunter giggled softly, waving to the waiter, “Can we get the check, please?”

The waiter shook his head, “It’s on the house sir.”

Hunter was taken aback, “What? Why?”

The waiter simply smiled and gestured towards his manager, “Per my manager.”

Seeing the interaction with his waiter, the manager quickly hustled over. “Is there a problem?” He asked.

“No, no problem. We were just wondering why the meal was comped?” Hunter asked.

Tara cringed; she could feel the heat begin to rise in her cheeks. This was nothing new for her; seldom did she ever have to pay for a meal when dining out, and it never got less embarrassing for her. She also never failed to see the irony of it all; she could afford the bill ten times over and yet they insisted on comping her meal.

“Well,” The manager started, “Miss Maclay is one of my favorite actresses and it would be an honor to buy her and all ya’ll dinner,” the man said almost shyly.

“That’s very sweet, but it’s really not necessary. Please, let us pay you; I-I insist.” Tara interjected.

The man was now blushing almost as deeply as Tara, “Well, how about we trade? Maybe a few pictures and autographs for me and my crew?”

Tara smiled sweetly and nodded her head; knowing that there was no way the man would take their money. They left the waiter a large tip as the manager ushered them towards the back of the restaurant for his photo op. Willow, Hunter and Molly stood off to the side while Tara charmed the small group of employees.

Hunter leaned in and whispered in his sister’s ear, “She’s the real deal, isn’t she?”

Willow smiled proudly and nodded towards her brother. “Yeah…she sure is.”

As soon as Tara finished, the foursome made their way out of the restaurant and realized that they’d missed the start of their movie; deciding to call it a night. By the time they pulled into an empty parking spot at Molly’s apartment complex, Willow was sound asleep, her head resting on Tara’s shoulder. Molly said her goodbyes and Hunter walked her to the door. Tara took advantage of the time and gently moved Willow so that her head was resting in Tara’s lap. Willow curled up in a ball and snuggled against her lover’s leg, “My Tara,” she mumbled sleepily. Tara couldn’t help but smile adoringly at her sleeping beauty; her heart surging with emotion at the way Willow laid claim to her. Even in sleep, the redhead was thinking of her and Tara could not have been happier.

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End Chapter 43 TBC…
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (08/14/11)

Postby AstronSoul » Sat Aug 27, 2011 9:33 pm

DIBS! :banana :eatme :banana :eatme

YAY A UPDATE! BEEN WAITING LIKE FOREVER!!! (ok maybe a few days but felt like forever)

A great double date, Mexican food yummers, and Willow very much taking a risk groping Tara. Hehe too bad the drink didn't spill, would make Willow babble even more and Molly & Hunter would have wised up to them lol.

I have to give it to Willow though, going around and opening the door for her love, and then just laying a kiss on her right there. Shows the world she doesn't care what people think. WOOHOO! :wtkiss

As always great job, and i can't wait for more!!!!

:kgeek AstronSoul :kdevil
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