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 Post subject: Re: Sidestep - Third Chronicle (new part 08/31/11)
PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 11:26 pm 
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your description of the voices gave me the wiggins, and it was wonderfull. can't wait for more, hope your weekend goes well :)

thanks katharyn and kajun. little steps can be the best.


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Let me state the obvious first.... Wet jeans suck...ass! If Willow's thighs were burning on the way down the stairs, how on earth will she be able to walk the 80 or so on the way back up? Again, How is she supposed to get Toni's dad out of the hall?....and is there any chance she may run into the sunlight challenged version of herself while she's down below? Enjoy your weekend!

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Hey Katharyn, Ditto edob's post on gettin' the wiggins.. That felt like a tiny taste of the kind of horror Tara must have endured after Glory. Whoa.. so much for Willow sneaking into the halls un-noticed. I'm surprised she was willing to draw attention to herself. Then again, to find Toni's dad in the chaos of noisy, floating dead things, she will probably need to make some noise of her own anyway. Unless.. location spell perhaps? And then when she.. Oh.. whoops.. more please.. :-p


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Hey all last check in before I leave...

Edob - To coin a phrase 'sometimes I surprise even myself' :) The voices thing turned out well. There's plenty of stuff I don't like about my style of writing (not sure it bothers other people as much as it does me) but sometimes something nice happens like that and just...works.

Thanks for the weekend wishes. Enjoy yours too.

SMGOVAN - Yup, I'd recently had a wet denim experience when i wrote that - though there wasn't water pouring into (any) crack... Also, there had been stairmaster at the gym that morning LOL We take our inspiration where we find it. Go figure! As for who she might meet down there... well, anyone who is 'already-dead' as I am calling them is fair game. But I'm avoiding a checklist of people to show just for the sake of it. Also, there are some rules involved. Thanks

Kajun - Another admission, I hadn't even thought of the Glory thing when I wrote the voices. Not seen that (or any) episode in 7 or 8 years now so if it was there it was subconscious!

Don't necessarily feel that Willow has been noticed. The voices should've come across as a kind of barrier, something to hold things that shouldn't be there back. The question is whether there was anyone/thing there to hear her? But by that point she was pretty desperate. By the way, damn you for keep coming up with things that a writer should have done and (probably) didn't! On the other maybe you make me look good for doing something else... (if indeed I did!)

More on Monday I expect. Enjoy the weekend all.

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 Post subject: Re: Sidestep - Third Chronicle (new part 08/31/11)
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Title: The Sidestep Chronicles: Third Chronicle (Part 13 (255))
Author: Katharyn Rosser
Feedback: Constructive criticism is always welcome. Flames just demonstrate you have a tiny mind.
Spoiler warning: I’m really not going to bother after all this time except to say that this fic will totally spoil my own Sidestep: First Chronicle and Second Chronicle which can be found in the Completed Fics archive (A-M)
Distribution: This story was written for Pens. Pens is its home. No archiving off Different Coloured Pens and the Kitten Board please. (This applies to all my stories, fics and particularly to Sidestep Chronicle as a whole.)
Summary: Tara seeks out help to get Willow back.
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the copyrights or anything else associated with BTVS. All rights lie with the production company, writers etc. I am making no money from this series of stories however all original characters and situations remain my property.
Rating: The earlier Chronicles of Sidestep were much darker and I slapped a blanket R rating on them for occasional content. This series is lighter in tone caution is only recommended for occasional scenes. However to understand absolutely everything that went before you’d have to have read the first two fully so…
Couples: Tara and Willow forever. Rupert and Jenny are also together. Nothing else referred to.
Text convention: We’re occasionally dealing with some deaf characters here and that has to be addressed. Speech inside asterisks is spoken in sign language only. Occasionally people responding to signed speech may do so inside speech marks, which indicates that they are also verbalising as well. Occasionally I might make a mistake and get this wrong but when dealing with a character that only signs, take it as read that they’re doing so when they “speak.”
Notes: There’s a part of this which is about checking in with other characters that I love (honestly Jenny is about the most ‘fun’ character to write though I didn’t get to indulge that too much here) but also because, hey, Willow went off alone. Don’t you think Tara should turn up with someone else, just to prove what the right thing to do would have been? Sometimes – I have learned from someone dear to me – actions speak louder than words in correcting mistakes. Sometimes…
Thanks to: A certain lady with a gift...


“And a very good afternoon to you too,” Rupert said without looking up from his book as Tara burst past him into his home. “Do come in and make yourself at home.”

“Where is everyone?” she asked, still a little breathless. Apart from that little diversion with the teleporting demon, she really hadn’t slowed down since she’d found Willow’s message and understood where she’d gone. What her wife had done in the time she’d wasted at Toni’s.

She knew she’d been tricked into giving her Willow a free pass.

Apart from that arrangements had been made for the school, the important things and that had taken a little while, but she certainly hadn’t slowed down. She’d just done things right.

Rupert finally looked up. “Ben’s making bread for a class at school, Jenny’s pretending to help him,” he said.

Domestic goddess Jenny wasn’t, for all that she’d raised a gaggle of kids with her husband.

“Don’t you even pick up your messages?” Tara asked, pushing his phone into his hands from where it’d been sat on the sideboard by the door. “I left you about ten.”

“Infernal contraptions. It buzzes and shakes, but…” Rupert commented, prodding several times at the screen with one – relatively - pudgy finger. “Drat.” It wasn’t that he’d got big, more that phones had gotten smaller and smaller to the point anyone not raised with them struggled.

Impatient and not in the mood to take him through how to do that – again - Tara simply took it back from him and opened up the messages before putting it back into his hand. It would’ve been easier just to tell him, but she wasn’t sure she could keep going. At some point… yeah, she needed to slow down now. They’d make her, she was sure.

And she’d have welcomed it, if not for the fact that…

“Willow’s gone?” he asked, unnecessarily.

“Yes. She is.”

“Where?”

“Keep reading.”

“Oh, that’s how I move on – The Halls of the Dead? What in the world is she doing in the Halls of the Dead?”

Tara looked at him, pleased – at least – that he hadn’t jumped to the terrifying conclusion that Willow had actually… passed away.

“Should I read on? Again?”

Tara sighed and then shook her head. “No, it was Toni. Toni and Holland Manners.”

“Holland Manners from… Wolfram and Hart, I thought he’d retired some time ago?” Rupert asked, paying no attention to the Toni part.

“Obviously not. Toni’s… Turns out she’s earned enough ‘credit’ with them that they’re willing to help her get her Dad back. Between them they sent a demon after me, just to slow me down but…”

“So where does Willow come into that? I mean, she’s dead – I mean she’s been dead, of course – which allows her to enter the Halls but why would she do that? She knows the hypothetical risks about as well as any of us can.”

“What risks? What halls?” Jenny asked, coming in from the kitchen, wiping her hands. “Hey, Tara and – don’t you usually call first? We could’ve been out.” Her look at her husband, still prodding the phone they made him have suggested she knew the answer to that question already.

“First, Willow’s done something stupid. Second, the Halls of the Dead and third, don’t you pick up your messages either?” Tara asked, allowing Jenny to draw her into a hug. It did actually help and made her feel a little better. She felt better for chiding her friend too, taking out a little of the frustration that had been building when she was getting no reply. She might as well just have sent something to their kids. They, at least, knew how to use their phones.

And none of them had gone to too much information about what you could do with an app that made it buzz… Unlike their mother.

“Halls of the Dead? Willow’s in the Halls of the Dead?”

“Willow’s in the Halls of the Dead,” Tara said and realised that her face must’ve more than flickered because Jenny hugged her again, tighter this time. A hug that meant even more than ‘we love you, we’re pleased to see you.’

“Oh, honey. We’ll get her back.”

“Actually,” her husband said. “We probably won’t.”

Yes, we will,” Jenny said.

“I just meant that Willow may have to dig herself out of her own hole. It’s just rather tricky, you see. Since none of us have, actually, died. It really does require death – and not the kind that you get up from after a Doctor zaps your chest with one of those dreadful machines – to gain admission. Hence the name, I suppose.”

“Tricky is what we do,” Jenny said, pulling Tara to a chair to sit beside her. “Isn’t it?”

There was a definite pointiness to that question.

Rupert looked at them both. “Well, yes. Absolutely. We’ll obviously explore every angle and possibility.”

“That’s what I need from you,” Tara said. “And quickly. It’s why I came. I need help finding a way into that place – but without dying.”

“We’ll get right on it,” Jenny said. “Absolutely. But you need to sit down, you need to de-stress or you’re not going to be any good to anyone.”

“My wife,” Tara said just as pointedly, “Is in the Halls of the Dead.” She’d known they’d insist but… some resistance was required. Besides, she did have things to do before she could stop – even for the few moments they’d demand.

“I know,” Jenny agreed. “But - ”

“Do you have any idea how many people and creatures she killed? Demons? If they’re there…”

“Actually, no matter how many there were, the chances of her meeting any of them are vanishingly small against the total numbers who’ve passed through there over countless aeons,” Rupert said.

“You don’t really think it’ll work that way, do you?” Jenny asked her husband.

Tara shared her scepticism. That really wasn’t the way that things worked out for them. When things like this happened they generally went as badly as they could, which – in this case – could mean Willow running into the worst of the worst. Only when they were facing the kinds of odds that he was talking about would they be guaranteed to roll a double six every, single time.

“Well, those are the odds,” Rupert said.

“And you know - ”

Tara didn’t have time for one of their arguments right now. “Guys, please. We’re on the clock here.”

“Actually, we might be fortunate in that time may be one thing in our favour,” Rupert said as he went over to the looked bookcase that represented his private collection of ‘dangerous’ books. Now the kids were old enough to understand the dangers – and he’d retired – he’d brought them back into the home but still kept them under lock and key. Better there than a cage in the school library. That was an arrangement she’d never been entirely happy about, agreed with her predecessor who… hadn’t understood, bless him.

“What do you mean?” Jenny asked.

Tara realised even as she asked the question. “Time usually works differently in those realms.”

“Yes, exactly. In some demon realms Willow might literally have just set foot over the threshold. Barely taken a step. In others time may be very similar, perhaps a twenty five hour day or a nineteen hour one. In yet another realm a few minutes here might represent days or years… Sorry.”

The idea that Willow might’ve been down there for years already – by her own internal clock at least – wasn’t a happy one. If Willow hadn’t managed to do what she needed to in that amount of subjective time then…

Then there was also the fact that her wife had already faced unknowable amounts of time in a limbo of nothingness after the vampire had taken her soul… Who knew what was down there now? If she was going through it again? It’d taken her months of care and attention to even start to put Willow back on the right path.

And while that was bad enough, there were worse things that could be happening to her than nothingness.

“No, you’re right,” Tara said, unwilling to accept an apology for the truth. “It might be that nothing we do can help her in time. It might be that nothing happened yet. But I can’t slow down. I can’t sit back and wait, especially not knowing that, because it could be that every minute I delay here means she faces months or years down there.”

“She’s alive though,” Jenny said, fully aware that Tara knew that – always knew that.

“Yes. She is.”

Otherwise I’d never have made it here. I’d have been curled up in a ball on the floor somewhere. Wondering how soon I could follow her.

“Then we do everything we can, as fast as we can,” Jenny said. “I just need - ” She pointed to the kitchen from where the smell of bread was wafting, reminding Tara that she hadn’t eaten for a while.

“Please, don’t say anything to the kids,” Tara said. “I… I don’t think I can be strong for them now.” It took something out of her to admit that, she didn’t… It wasn’t lying to them. It just wasn’t telling them. Like Willow had done to her.

“Okay. Okay.”

“We’ll get her,” Rupert said, glancing at his wife. “You know that, don’t you?”

“I do,” Tara confirmed. “But if something happens to her there… If something bad happens to her, then you have to keep Toni away from me. Do you understand?”

If something happened to Willow then he had to do that for her. Otherwise the lawyer she’d always thought of as a sister/daughter would probably wind up...

Dead.


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 Post subject: Re: Sidestep - Third Chronicle (new part 09/06/11)
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 3:13 pm 
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Wow...would Tara really go medieval on her ass? If Willow got hurt, probably so. Whats the what with the lack of reaction from the Giles' re: Toni's involvement? I'm glad Tara has Jenny to keep her spirits up.

ps. Ole ye?...that's the Ghetto/Ebonics version!

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Katharyn, Hope you had a nice mini-vacation!

At first, I thought Giles was reacting way too calm, even though he didn’t normally go overly bat-shit in the face of dire circumstances anyway, but then I remembered this is the alt-universe and.. many decades of fighting the good fight have passed. It’s cool that he didn’t jump to conclusions about Willow but at the same time, it makes me wonder if he and Jenny were already aware of exactly what was going on. Neither checking the phones, commenting on Holland but not Toni, etc.. WTF? I’m all with the conspiracy theories .. LOL. Anyhoo.. I thought of two ways Tara can get into the Halls without dying. Both keep Tara reasonably safe and it’s likely that neither idea is what you have planned. And that’s the fun.. discovering WWKD? I’m hoping Faith will find out despite Tara’s efforts to keep her out of the loop, and lend a hand. Great update.. keep ‘em comin’ :D


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katharyn, thank you for the update:)


kajun, do spill on how you think tara can get in. and yes everyone is to calm about willow being in the halls.


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Hmm, okay there's some themes in the feedback which means you guys see something I missed :)

Why is everyone so calm? Why is no one frantic about Toni's involvement? Well... no big conspiracy I'm afraid. The truth is that your writer just did it that way. That said... part of this is simply the fact that they don't know whether Willow's been there a split second, years or the same amount of time that has passed in the real world. It might already be far too late to help. It might be that they have ages to do it... So 'urgency' is more like 'panic'. You're right though, there should've been more.

Hey edob - thank you too :) I don't think Kajun likes to post theories because (if correct) they might spoil other people or 'force' me to comment... but I'm cool with it. I too am curious and I won't spoil anything I have to withhold by confirming or denying, though I will talk around ideas.

Kajun - yes, lovely time thanks.

You're right, see above, Giles is way too calm. Your other point about decades of fighting plus he's older now, retired are both relevant too. Those were in my head, but they should still have done more. However... you will see that actually there is some urgency in them considering what they will actually do to help Willow. You don't do this if you're taking it easy.

As for the phone thing... Okay, you want to know what the WORST invention in the world is for a writer? The mobile/cell phone. I am serious. This invention is sometimes useful for stories, but for this sort of thing you are always considering how to get rid of it. There's no tension with cell phones around. 'Where's Willow?' 'Oh, four square says she's in a lake, don't worry'. Awful!! So this time my solution was not answering rather than 'no coverage' And actually, I know plenty of people who just have them turned off unless they make a call, including more older people. I can see Giles seeing them as new-fangled.

I too would like to hear your thoughts on methods...

PS - you loved X-Files didn't you!?! (Note - I didn't say Gillian Anderson... cos duh)

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SMGOVAN - Once again about the lack of reaction. My bad! And yes, when I re-read the last few lines about Tara's 'keep her away from me'... well, I worried about it. I should clarify that I doubt Tara would ever actively go after her, no matter what. That wouldn't be Tara. But, I think she'd be very worried, given her background, about what would happen if Toni stumbled into her path after something had happened. She deals in magic, it's impacted by emotion and she's been raised fearing loss of control... However that's me justifying it now. I think I'd have removed the 'dead' part actually... or at least made it clearer what I really meant.

That said, if she DID lose control then Toni might well not survive it.

Not sure what your PS meant though?

Thanks all

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In a previous feedback I refered to you as "Ole ye of little faith". You asked me if "ole ye" was the English/Spanish version...

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HA! Sorry, yeah. I've slept since then. Once again the weakness of my memory is revealed.

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Hi edob, Katharyn is right.. I worry that if any of my speculations turn out correct, it may spoil readers. But.. the chances are pretty slim. Katharyn has been writing this story for years upon years and she knows every minute detail of character/plot history as well as where the tale is heading. I, on the other hand, am lucky to remember what day it is. If you really want to know.. read on..

Katharyn, I had such a good laugh with this line:

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'Where's Willow?' 'Oh, four square says she's in a lake, don't worry'. Awful!!


Agreed on the cell phone bit. Makes total sense for a writer and how many peeps use/don’t use them. Since you are okay with me posting a few whack ideas here they are. (I don’t expect any confirmation, denial or even comment – use your time to write!—we’ll know soon enough how far off base I am!)

1--Tara could use Astral Projection to find, and then help, Willow. Given her vast experience with Magic, she likely wouldn't need another witch to serve as an anchor but it would be safer to have Jenny and Giles anchor her in the living world. Once she locates Willow, communication would be possible since they are able to read each other’s thoughts and would be in the same universe AKA Halls of Death. Having her spirit in the same realm should also allow Tara to join her power with Willow's.

2-- (Which is much more appealing to me) is for Tara to find a nest of Vamps, cast a spell to control them, and then send them to the Halls to help Willow. Again, she would not literally, physically go to the Halls. She could possess one of the vamps and hitch a ride. If Willow (with a soul) can enter the Halls, Tara’s soul should be able to sneak in if masked within a vampire. The spell would allow Tara to use her magic, a bit of brute strength via vamps, mass distraction for Willow to get away or whatever is necessary to ensure both girls return home safely.

There ya go. Oh yes.. The Truth Is Out There.. no.. really it is.. dangit! :wink


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Hey Kajun - Umm, you think I know the character and plot history? Not actually so. I can't remember them! What I do have is a feeling about the characters (as previously stated these are effectively 'canon' to me now as characters and I struggle to write the girls in true canon mode...)

Cell phones though... Seems to me that most people nowadays either 1) embrace them and make them the centre of everything - which is realistic but VERY limiting - or 2) ignore them...

I'm a Giles though, I fear them! I know where work colleagues live because they check in at home and post it to twitter! Insane if you ask me. Why not just say 'I'm home'!?

What I love about you - and don't read confirm/deny into this - is that you always come up with great ideas. You should be writing these ideas... but who moderates the moderator???

More to the point its not just an idea, but its an idea with a reason and a consequence, which is even cooler. I suspect you know/remember canon way better than I do LOL

Idea 2 is especially cool and you might read something into that one... but yeah, wow.

What I will say though is one of those ideas is not a million miles away... but also that I have no intention of having the girls apart for the whole fic. They will be together... just because... at some point way before the end and from a writing point of view doing that 'in head' is a tricky and potentially unsatisfying thing unless written very well.

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Title: The Sidestep Chronicles: Third Chronicle (Part 14 (256))
Author: Katharyn Rosser
Feedback: Constructive criticism is always welcome. Flames just demonstrate you have a tiny mind.
Spoiler warning: I’m really not going to bother after all this time except to say that this fic will totally spoil my own Sidestep: First Chronicle and Second Chronicle which can be found in the Completed Fics archive (A-M)
Distribution: This story was written for Pens. Pens is its home. No archiving off Different Coloured Pens and the Kitten Board please. (This applies to all my stories, fics and particularly to Sidestep Chronicle as a whole.)
Summary: Willow advances into the Halls.
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the copyrights or anything else associated with BTVS. All rights lie with the production company, writers etc. I am making no money from this series of stories however all original characters and situations remain my property.
Rating: The earlier Chronicles of Sidestep were much darker and I slapped a blanket R rating on them for occasional content. This series is lighter in tone caution is only recommended for occasional scenes. However to understand absolutely everything that went before you’d have to have read the first two fully so…
Couples: Tara and Willow forever. Rupert and Jenny are also together. Nothing else referred to.
Text convention: We’re occasionally dealing with some deaf characters here and that has to be addressed. Speech inside asterisks is spoken in sign language only. Occasionally people responding to signed speech may do so inside speech marks, which indicates that they are also verbalising as well. Occasionally I might make a mistake and get this wrong but when dealing with a character that only signs, take it as read that they’re doing so when they “speak.”
Notes: Another short one. This is part of my new-found discipline. Some times you just need to tell the story and – to be perfectly honest – I prefer to write characters together. Lone characters off on their own – move the story along and get past it!
Thanks to: Peeps who show me when I’m sending entirely the wrong message!


Of course she’d been hasty – or just plain wrong - to assume that the slimy thing that covered the entrance at the bottom of the lake was the only barrier to this place.

Undoubtedly the whispers had been another one. When the force of them had literally brought her to a halt, unable to take another step against the barrage, she’d screamed at them.

And when she’d done that, they’d stopped.

Willow refused to believe it was that simple for anyone. Instead she chose to see them as another barrier between one world and another. Yes, she was a long way ‘underground’ – too far to believe that was really where she was - but aside from that slime, nothing had yet proven she was in another realm.

Until now…

The Halls of the Dead – at least the parts she could see – resembled nothing so much as a giant, vaulted cave that stretched for… well, it looked like forever. Laid out somewhat like a cathedral in that there were giant columns that seemed to have been carved out of the rock itself but the walls and the roof – when she’d still been able to see it – were still living rock.

Or perhaps it’d be more appropriate to call it the ‘dead rock.’

If it was a cathedral though, it would’ve the biggest one her world had ever seen by mile. Or more than just the one mile. Obviously the rules of architecture just didn’t apply.

The roof had only been visible for a little way from where she’d entered the chasm and then it had ascended into darkness above the - still uncertain - light source. It just seemed there was… light. It didn’t come from anywhere, it was just there. Which was freaky and weird.

As for the horizontal dimensions? Wow. Because you couldn’t see the end of this place either. Partly because of the pillars, probably, and partly because it was just so long.

And entirely empty in as much as she could tell from here.

The only sounds now that the whispers had been beaten back were her breathing and her footsteps, both of which seemed to echo around it. Once she’d learned to balance on them, Willow had always enjoyed the click of her heels on an expensive, marble floor while she was dressed to impress clients. It happened rarely enough, not many schools had marble floors, but this was the same audio effect writ large, even when her shoes weren’t actually heals.

And no one ever had a lobby this big.

The ‘floor’, such as it was, was neither dirty and rough nor polished. Flat and man (or demon) carved but not intended for presentation. This was a functional place that seemed to lack a function.

After all there were more dead than people currently in the world – and it wasn’t just people. No matter how large this place was, surely it couldn’t have held all of the dead? Or was she missing something?

Well, yeah. She was missing millions – billions – of the teeming dead. What was up with that? Where were they all?

Or was she in the wrong place entirely?

All at once though there was another sound. More like a slither. Certainly it wasn’t her breathing. Not her shoes on the ground either. Something… else.

“Hello?”

Her, slightly nervous, greeting echoes back at her fading only gradually at every repetition. She heard herself fifty, a hundred times before it was completely gone.

Okay, something to be very conscious of if it came to sneaking around. Her voice was going to carry in here. Put in an orchestra and a choir and the acoustics would probably be phenomenal, or overwhelming. Of course, it’d be a concert of the dead.

“Is anyone there?”

Another sound, less of a slither and more like softer shoes running across the floor now. Maybe bare feet. She hadn’t been imagining that. Oh, no she hadn’t.

Around here paranoia seemed like it was going to be a healthy trait.

Healthy? In the Halls of the Dead?

Contradiction much?

Was it real? Was it just like the whispers? A figment? Or many figments? A shadow of something that had happened here before?

“I don’t see dead people,” she murmured, just about softly enough that it didn’t echo all that much.

Seeing dead people was pretty much what she’d expected down here. In fact it was going to be kind of a problem – a wasted journey – if she didn’t see at least one dead person. Could it be because she was alive? She could get in here but not actually see anything now she was? Just the whispers and the shadows?

Or had she scared everything else by screaming at them as she had?

Maybe she wasn’t even there yet. Perhaps there was another gate, another type of barrier that she had to get through before she was truly in the Halls? Maybe, somehow, she was actually still in her world and the transition to another place hadn’t kicked in yet.

Because this wasn’t right.

The dead didn’t make their way here by going through the bottom of a lake and down a long flight of steps, she was pretty sure of that. So what was this? A reception for those who would have to?

And just who – or what – the hell was that behind her?

“I know you’re there,” she said, bolder than she felt. But years of experience had trained her. She was ready. If something jumped out at her it was going to get toasted, roasted and fried on the griddle.

Yeah. Bitch.

There was no reply, but then what had she expected? For it just to stick it’s head out, smile and say ‘hi’?

Definitely something here with her though.

Definitely.

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Title: The Sidestep Chronicles: Third Chronicle (Part 15 (257))
Author: Katharyn Rosser
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Spoiler warning: I’m really not going to bother after all this time except to say that this fic will totally spoil my own Sidestep: First Chronicle and Second Chronicle which can be found in the Completed Fics archive (A-M)
Distribution: This story was written for Pens. Pens is its home. No archiving off Different Coloured Pens and the Kitten Board please. (This applies to all my stories, fics and particularly to Sidestep Chronicle as a whole.)
Summary: Tara and the Giles’ come up with a plan
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the copyrights or anything else associated with BTVS. All rights lie with the production company, writers etc. I am making no money from this series of stories however all original characters and situations remain my property.
Rating: The earlier Chronicles of Sidestep were much darker and I slapped a blanket R rating on them for occasional content. This series is lighter in tone caution is only recommended for occasional scenes. However to understand absolutely everything that went before you’d have to have read the first two fully so…
Couples: Tara and Willow forever. Rupert and Jenny are also together. Nothing else referred to.
Text convention: We’re occasionally dealing with some deaf characters here and that has to be addressed. Speech inside asterisks is spoken in sign language only. Occasionally people responding to signed speech may do so inside speech marks, which indicates that they are also verbalising as well. Occasionally I might make a mistake and get this wrong but when dealing with a character that only signs, take it as read that they’re doing so when they “speak.”
Notes: I’m really disappointing myself with how long some of these parts are. I just normally don’t DO short… and now there’s so much that is. But this one is a bit more meaty than the last. Remember the note earlier about how it the writing works better when there’s interaction? Here, there’s interaction. And yes, I’ll put the girls – or as edob called them ‘the ladies’ – back together again.
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“Aha!”

“You found something?” Jenny asked, keeping her voice low.

Tara had been unceremoniously shuffled off to bed after dinner and some time with the kids. She hadn’t exactly been happy about the idea but as they’d pointed out ‘you came to us for help.’

And if Tara needed them to help her with the research and resources necessary to get Willow back then she had to let them do their thing. Or at least, from Jenny’s point of view, let her husband do his thing.

Rupert had the books and the background. Her own knowledge in this area was hearsay at best, which was funny because he’d suggested much the same thing.

But getting a meal into Tara and getting her some rest had been their main motivation. Without actually planning it – they knew each other far too well to need that sort of skulduggery – they’d packed Tara off and forced her to look after the kids who’d all played their parts nicely since they were far from needing a babysitter from outside their own ranks by now. Preparing their meals had encouraged Tara to eat something herself so… success for the Giles family.

And the argument ‘you’ll need some rest to be at your best’ had – curiously – been more effective with Tara than it ever had been with the kids. Not the ones already who’d moved out and not the ones who were still here with them.

She’d even heard her best friend laughing. Remarkable, in the circumstances. But then the kids hadn’t known what had really happened to Willow. She’d just been ‘called away unexpectedly.’

“Perhaps,” he replied. “Perhaps.”

Rupert had been pouring over a less than impressive book for the last half hour or so. While most of the rest were heavy leather – or even wooden - bound, this one looked rather like it might’ve been a fifties pulp novel, apart from the cover which was plain black.

“What is that?”

“A reprint of Chargoth’s Compendium that I picked up a few years ago.”

“Old is it?”

“Actually no, it only dates back to the nineteenth century. Chargoth actually is the nom-de-plume of an otherwise unremarkable young couple who - through their interest in science - fell into the grip of a rather unsavoury demon that inhabited them both. Rather unusual actually, dual possession.”

“You could’ve just said ‘ye olde nerds who got into trouble.’”

“I rather thought that nerds never got the girl?” he suggested.

“You did.”

“Point. Anyway, the demon was somewhat… ah, you might say ‘overstretched’ possessing both of them, which allowed a portion of each to continue to exist – though only at opposite ends of the day.”

“If you tell me that they turned into a hawk and a wolf and only met for an hour at sunset then I’m going to call bullshit,” Jenny said, remembering it from some movie that her kids would probably laugh at if they saw it today. Not enough animation.

“Nothing so gentle,” Rupert said. “While there was some overlap the grip of the demon was always on one of them. It lent itself to a rather violent relationship, a young death and a schizophrenic style of writing. The experiences they had were shared and from a single perspective at that – but the hand that wrote of what they discovered was very different. As such, most people ignored the content of the book and very few copies were printed.”

“But you have a reprint?”

“Yes, it’s not a valuable book but perhaps it should be because they had rather a wide ranging experience.”

“And this helps us how?”

“It helps us because they went to the Halls of the Dead,” Rupert said. “Here, see? They refer to it as the ‘Caverns of Mortality’ but isn’t that just the same thing? I tend to think so. Even in the demon realms there’s not much duplication – at least where there’s some sort of purpose. The old Gods who established these sort of places were more efficient than that.”

“Did you just use ‘Gods’ and ‘efficient’ in the same sentence?” Jenny asked.

“I’m merely drawing a conclusion. But see, what’s interesting here is that they – or I should say ‘she’ – visited the place in rather a similar manner to how Willow managed it. At least I should presume so.”

“Oh?”

“The young gentleman, Cuthbert, ended his torment by taking his own life while the demon wasn’t in control of him. That left his young paramour – Joanna - as the sole possession of the demon. We can’t be sure what sort it was – perhaps a Pregudace - but whatever it was, it was loathe to let him go and took her – by virtue of the sole fact that he was dead and the demon had been in symbiotic possession by both of them – to the Cavern’s of Mortality.”

That was his ‘aha’ moment?

“Willow’s not possessed.”

“But she had been – in a supernatural sense at least – dead. She quite likely carries the taint, if you like, of possession by the demon that once inhabited her other body. It’s not something you can define logically, but that would certainly appear to be how Willow got in there and why they chose her. Tara almost said as much, though she may simply have been drawing her own conclusion.”

He seemed very pleased with himself, but Tara wasn’t going to be. Jenny didn’t think she’d heard anything that would allow Tara to go after her wife, just how Willow had gotten there.

“And this helps us how?”

“We understand now the mechanism which allowed Willow to go there. More importantly the next passage in the book tells us that the possessed Joanna followed him to the Halls not by virtue of her own death, but by descent into the Mouth of Madness.”

“I see what you’re driving at,” Jenny said. “At least I think I do. But I could read that another way.”

“Yes, I suppose that the demon may have driven her insane, split her personality and she recovered him – in a way – by virtue of her own mental collapse. That is possible.”

“You don’t have to sound so cheerful about it,” Jenny told him with a flash of empathy for the young woman involved. Not only losing her lover, but also possessed by a demon and… well, she didn’t think it was likely that the demon had been doing that just to make sure they had a happy life together. It had been corrupting, hurting. That was what demons did, at least the ones that humans tended to label that way. Completely different value structures – if they had values at all.

“Yes, quite. But she descended into the Mouth of Madness. I suppose another translation of the word they used is Maelstrom. Still another would be… Hellmouth.

“We can get to Willow through the Hellmouth?”

“If this is accurate, yes. A Hellmouth is – after all – a convergence of the entrances to any number of demon realms. What makes the Sunnydale one – along with Cleveland and Walthamstow – special is that so many of them come together in the same place. One may well dominate – or demonate if you prefer - ”

She didn’t laugh and he looked crushed as usual at that failure.

“One portal may well dominate, but ultimately what makes the Hellmouth affect the surrounding area is the sheer amount of energy flowing from one reality to another. After all some writers would have you believe that – to the denizens of one of those other realms – this world is just another demon realm.”

“Not what we’re interested in right now, love. What can you say that can actually help us?”

“Yes,” Tara said from the doorway. “Tell us that, please.”

“Did you sleep, honey?” Jenny asked. It wasn’t that late but Tara had plainly been emotionally shattered and she’d at least tried to go to bed – which was telling anyway. And now the baddest witch in the country was stood in borrowed fluffy pink slippers and just as pink a night shirt. Curiously unthreatening, she imagined, to the demons that she’d be hoping to face sooner than later.

Fluffy. Pink. But Tara looked, at least, as if she’d slept.

“A little. You were right,” Tara said. “Sorry I was… off with you.”

“I’d have been off with me too,” Jenny replied, brushing the apology off. “Don’t worry about it.”

“You have news?” Tara said, coming over to look at the book Rupert was stood over.

“I was just telling Jenny that - ”

“None of that is relevant, English,” Jenny said. “Really, we can cover that further down the line. Tell us how to get to Willow?”

“Well,” Rupert said, slightly miffed by her nixing the fruits of his research. Some things never changed. “I was just saying that the Hellmouth – or actually whatever Hellmouth it was - should prove be just as an effective gateway as whichever Willow actually used.”

“But I can’t just step over the threshold?” Tara asked. “That’d be too simple.”

“Absolutely. There would seem to be a relevant qualification to enter the Halls of the Dead,” he said.

“Being dead.”

“Yes, but Willow isn’t. At least she isn’t now and this ‘body’ technically never has been. It was created anew from the ritual that was done around the ashes of the vampire version of her. So we can certainly conclude there’s something else going on.”

“And… you have a theory?”

“Absolutely,” he said. “Between what we know about Willow and what I’ve found in Chargoth, seeming to be confirmed by reading between the lines of a few other sources, I think we can quite confidently say that possession is the common factor assuming outright death isn’t possible. Or you might want to refer to it as ‘inhabitation’ or ‘infestation’.”

“No,” Tara said. “Toni’s been waiting for this for years. She couldn’t have been just waiting to hear that if she got possessed she could step into the Halls of the Dead.”

“Not quite that simple,” Rupert said. “But I do tend fear that her employers have charged her rather an expensive price for something that could’ve been done a lot more simply. That’s not to say that I approve of what she’s been trying to do – her father is simply dead – but they’ve quite likely maximised what she was worth to them.”

“They gave her the location of the entrance,” Jenny pointed out. “I doubt she went to a Hellmouth. Not one in the US.”

Tara nodded. “One’s under the control of the Government and the other’s… well, we know who’s in control of that. She wouldn’t have gone overseas, besides Willow’s passport is still at home.”

“So we know that they did give her the entrance,” Rupert said. “And they probably told Toni that Willow was the only one who could do this for her.”

“And that was a lie?” Tara didn’t sound like she was going to forgive their adopted daughter any time soon. That threat she’d made… if something happened to Willow and Toni crossed Tara’s path?

She chose to believe that Tara wouldn’t see Toni dead. She chose to believe Tara was just worried about what would happen. How she’d react.

Jenny wasn’t even sure just how that betrayal Toni was certainly guilty of made her feel right now. They were close, for a few years there Toni had been as much as her eldest daughter and… her job had split them apart, but they still tried to include her in the family activities. I still think of her that way. I do have to keep her away from Tara if something happens.

“There’s the matter of the debt you referred to,” Rupert said. “From Wolfram and Hart’s point of view there’s probably some bookkeeping involved.”

“I hate to be the one to say this,” Jenny said. “But what if there’s some other angle they’re playing?”

That kept them all quiet for a moment, if it was more complex than they knew then the consequences could be severe. But then… they had to deal with what was on their plate right now.

“The other thing with Willow,” Tara said, “is that she can more than defend herself. And of all the elements, fire is hers. An element that behaves like it’s alive, but doesn’t depend on life at all. She’s probably better able to defend herself – or take action – in the Halls than anyone else. Including me.”

It didn’t sound like wishful thinking when Tara said it.

“And she was – as you might say – readymade,” Rupert said. “Of the people Toni knows now, that she could persuade? Yes, Willow was the one who could just go and have a chance of pulling this off.”

Tara shook her head, but she wasn’t disagreeing. “It plays to her ego too, Willow’s always liked to believe that she can do whatever she sets her mind to and – usually – she can. When someone challenges her… her first reaction is to find a way to exceed their expectations.”

And who’d know that better than Tara?

“What does it say about what they found down there?” Jenny asked. “That possessed couple?”

“Ah. That would be death. Without a capital D. The final lines in the original version were in Chargoth’s own hand. Apparently it found some amusement in relating what happened to them.”

“Great.”

“Some good news though,” Rupert said.

“We could use some,” Jenny replied. “If this is the best we can do.”

“Time there, it seems – from a few references – to be similar enough to our own experience of time that Willow hasn’t been stuck there for years already. Nor, if we step through that portal would we find that time here had surged ahead while we were away.”

“We?” Tara asked, eyes narrowing.

“Surely you don’t expect we’d let you go alone,” Rupert said.

Jenny hadn’t really thought about it, but she saw what her husband was saying now. If time had been faster in the Halls of the Dead that would’ve been bad for Willow but not impacted them so much. They could’ve stepped away – done what they had to do there – and been back before breakfast. Even if it took days or weeks.

The reverse wasn’t so friendly… Slow time there, with this world experiencing days, weeks or years for every moment there would’ve meant that they couldn’t go there. How could they leave the kids for any of those amounts of time? How could they part? She wasn’t old by any means, but she wasn’t losing a good chunk of the years they had together to this. Not even for Willow.

Risking death, that was one thing. And not what she wanted. But it was a risk. The certainty of being losing years off their lives together – and with the kids – was something else entirely. In that case they’d have had to find another way. They wouldn’t have given up, but passing through to that other place wouldn’t have been on the agenda.

But now it appeared time was broadly in synch so… it did open up the possibility of going along to help.

“No,” Tara said. The tone suggested that she absolutely did expect to go alone. And she absolutely wouldn’t argue about it either.

“We’re not as young as we were, English,” Jenny pointed out.

Rupert looked at her, betrayed since it was obviously his intent to put his tweed back on get into the thick of it alongside Tara.

“No,” Tara said again. “You have children and this is not a place that… I don’t even know if I can look after you there.”

“And – if that’s the case - who’s going to look after you?” Rupert wondered.

“Love,” Jenny said. “Please. You’re in line for a hip replacement. You can’t walk far without a cane and a lot of pain. Be honest with yourself. And even if… even if that wasn’t the case, what are we going to do? Poke whatever’s down there with a sharp stick?”

Tara, at least, had access to the sort of power that could make a difference. At least here she did. But she and Willow, as a couple, had come into power that no one else had known in centuries. A matched couple, a pair of elemental wielding witches. You had to read back to the time of the most ancient texts even to find about anything like it. She knew because her husband had looked, analysing the threat that the two of them might pose if they’d gotten out of control.

By then they should’ve known better. Out of control wasn’t what Tara did – threat to Toni notwithstanding.

“You’re not going, Rupert,” Tara said. “I love you just for offering. More because I know you would. But you’re not going.”

Jenny’s husband looked over at her, stricken but accepting her judgement. Asking… He actually wanted her to go with Tara. She didn’t hold that against him, he loved these two girls like he loved his own kids and – probably – he knew that Tara would protect her with her own life. But… what was she supposed to do down there? Her own power was trifling compared to either of the girls and she didn’t have the sort of knowledge that he did.

“We haven’t discussed how we get you in there yet,” Rupert said, glancing at her again.

“That won’t change anything,” Tara replied. “But you have an idea, yeah?”

Her looked at her again and Jenny knew that she had a part to play.

She didn’t know the detail. Didn’t need to. More words from an old movie flashed through her mind as she psyched herself up for what he was going to suggest. ‘I’m too old for this shit.’

“You’re not going to like it,” he said. “I don’t like it, so I know you won’t.” He was telling both of them.

“Just tell me,” Tara said, sounding weary again despite the fact they were making progress.

“Eyghon.”


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Ok wow, 2 chapters at once woohoo! I tell ya, I sometimes read to fast for my own good.

So this is getting so interesting, Tara with Jenny and Rupert's help figuring out how to get to Willow, but still trying to find where the entrance is, as well as how to exactly find her. being able to protect herself will be a must if she is to find her wife, man this looks like a twisted hard journey. I know Tara can do it.

Now Willow already in the Halls of Death, not seeing anything or really hearing. That is just creepy in itself alone, but feeling like someone is there makes my skin crawl. You know someone is watching or something and you just want to see, but nothing. I cannot wait to see what happens next, and see how Tara actually gets there.

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two updates:)

kajun, astral projection is to cool.... don't edit out the time flux copacitar.

on a really late note katharyn. i think you might be the only author that has depicted the girls/ladies as not having all out great sex every time. kudos to you. willow blocking out a whole afternoonin in the earlier chronical and then this round having too much on her mind. yes i am rereading bits:) to me, makes it more real:) and the halls still give me the wiggins.

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Holy Shit-biscuits! Oh God.. surely Giles isn’t suggesting Tara allow herself to be possessed by Eyghon?? Will she have to get a tattoo? UGH! This is extremely dangerous.. and oddly very exciting. If anyone can pull this off though.. it is Tara. No doubt about that. Still scary though. Katharyn.. my heart literally stopped and I forgot to breath when I read the demon’s name! And I had to triple check the "Dark Ages" script to make sure I was remembering things right.

Ewww.. Willow has a creepy creeper.. ick. Hurry up Tara!

You should not feel unsatisfied with the length of these chapters. I’m fine with short or long chapters. You write what you need to move the story forward and it's a great read.

Thanks for the kind words re: ideas.. I’ve written one short story that I’m pretty proud of, but it’s not W/T (all original) sooo.. no posting here. Anyhoo.. I’m perfectly content reading authors like you, EasierSaid and the many others that have posted here throughout the years.

Really Excellent.. more please..

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Wow.....things are getting interesting. I agree with Ms. Fortune Teller Fantastico :grin , The plan to get Tara into the halls sounds dangerous, scary and risky. But, it's very exciting for us readers. Short chapters, long chapters... doesnt matter to me... Just give me more!!! Whatevers lurking in the dark down there with Willow is rather creepy :ghost . (The sounds of feet hitting the ground with nobody in sight kinda reminded me of those Chucky movies with the possesed doll killing people.) Is it friend or foe? Since she's in the halls, I'm leaning towards the latter. Can't she just hurl some fire balls at it? Kick ass now, take names later? I felt sorry for Giles. It's hard to accept the fact that his best days are past.

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SMGOVAN - As I think I mentioned, I am working to a perfect 300 chapters. Just putting the finishing touches to the first draft of that final chapter to make that happen (it was 299 so I just had to add something!) Where the chapter is short you'll get 2 of them...

Yeah, the plan to get into the Halls is going to get rough... especially with Tara's background.

Don't get the wrong idea about the Halls though. It's just (one of) the places that people go when they move from one state (life) to another (not-life). On the one hand I didn't want to overdo 'the rules' about that or write myself into a corner, but on the other I also didn't want it to 'heaven' or 'hell' (pick your religious belief here). It's too easy to see it as 'dead so toss a fireball' LOL. We'll see where that sort of thing can lead!

Truth be told, I never worked out how old Giles should be now. I never even worked out how old the girls were at this point. Part laziness, part not wanting to limit myself...You can infer it from Faith's age though... She's almost out of college and we saw her born in Sidestep 1...

Thanks

Kajun - That may, indeed, be what Giles is suggesting... Shall I tell you what I had to check? How to spell the name... Thank goodness for Find/Replace. There's a certain logic to it from Giles' POV but its not exactly a 'good' idea!

Re your short story... I thought this was why we had a original fic board? Unless you're saving it to get published somewhere... If not then try posting it! I can't do short fic (shocker huh?!)

Cheers

edob - Sex that isn't as great as it can be. I'm not going to say where that comes from specifically but... don't we all go through that and actually much of the time? Perfection isn't the norm! Which isn't to say that things are 'bad' at other times, but... I really need to shut up now. Aside from the fact that yes, conciously that was something I thought should be reflected.

And yes, I like to drop references without actually naming them :) Indeed, Ladyhawke was fun and... *swoon* Michelle Pfieffer.

Astronsoul - First in, last picked up :)

I just hope it will stay interesting LOL. The importance of help in the story is key... Despite the fact that Tara and Willow are both capable of being super-heroes, they work better with others (ideally as a pair!)

And yes, this is my idea of suspense. It's a cheat though because unlike a movie I get to hold you up for a few days between parts :kgeek

Next part later today or tomorrow.

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Title: The Sidestep Chronicles: Third Chronicle (Part 16 (258))
Author: Katharyn Rosser
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Spoiler warning: I’m really not going to bother after all this time except to say that this fic will totally spoil my own Sidestep: First Chronicle and Second Chronicle which can be found in the Completed Fics archive (A-M)
Distribution: This story was written for Pens. Pens is its home. No archiving off Different Coloured Pens and the Kitten Board please. (This applies to all my stories, fics and particularly to Sidestep Chronicle as a whole.)
Summary: Willow finds a familiar face. Or shirt…
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the copyrights or anything else associated with BTVS. All rights lie with the production company, writers etc. I am making no money from this series of stories however all original characters and situations remain my property.
Rating: The earlier Chronicles of Sidestep were much darker and I slapped a blanket R rating on them for occasional content. This series is lighter in tone caution is only recommended for occasional scenes. However to understand absolutely everything that went before you’d have to have read the first two fully so…
Couples: Tara and Willow forever. Rupert and Jenny are also together. Nothing else referred to.
Text convention: We’re occasionally dealing with some deaf characters here and that has to be addressed. Speech inside asterisks is spoken in sign language only. Occasionally people responding to signed speech may do so inside speech marks, which indicates that they are also verbalising as well. Occasionally I might make a mistake and get this wrong but when dealing with a character that only signs, take it as read that they’re doing so when they “speak.”
Notes: Well, there was a cliff-hanger at the end of the last part but one that is – slightly – related to what happens here with Willow. What? You thought she’d end up in the Halls and not meet anyone that she knew? There had to be at least one familiar face and again, it’s a character I enjoy writing.
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Willow had finally caught sight of the creature – though since it wasn’t from her world it was technically a ‘demon’ like everything else – that had been following her.

Unexpectedly though it was… kind of cute.

Kind of.

The little demon was only about half her height and if its species’ gender worked like they did on earth then evidence available from the lack of clothes suggested it was definitely male. Outside of those two qualities it had the skin of a snake, the ears of a those old movie Gremlins and eyes that were disturbingly like a cow’s. All big, brown and sympathetic…

And once it had plucked up its courage to approach her it chattered incessantly. As in it really didn’t shut up.

Didn’t look or act too bright either, but perhaps it was just young rather than dim. There was nothing about it that appeared dangerous or anything other than… cute. But that quality definitely came from the eyes and the chittering rather than its skin because… well, she’d always had trouble with conceptualising snake’s as cute and she was fairly sure it was nothing to do with her gender preferences either. But yeah, it was cute in its way…

Plus the fact that it seemed more wary of her than she was of it, which was a definite bonus.

The alternative, being hunted down by something big, scary – undoubtedly with teeth - and probably immune to anything she could throw at it wasn’t something she was interested in contemplating right now.

And after nearly an hour of wandering it – he – was the only thing she’d seen apart from rock. So instead of talking to herself she’d been talking to – or at – it instead. The chitters seemed to be coming in response too, so she actually felt like she was having a conversation, even if neither of them understood the other.

She wandered because there didn’t seem to be any hurry to go in any particular direction. Any one – or all - of them could be wrong so until she knew better it was probably better to save her energy.

What she was though was reassured by the fact that this creature even saw her. It reacted to her. It knew she was there. Ergo… there wasn’t anything about her condition – being alive – that was stopping the dead from seeing her and presumably vice versa.

Always assuming it was dead, but if it wasn’t then it was in the same boat as her and at least she wasn’t alone here. Either way it was a win. Small company was better than no company at all.

“Sorry, little fella. I told you, I don’t have anything for you to eat.”

She hadn’t gotten around to scratching it under the chin yet, mostly because it was definitely looking for her to give it something and she didn’t want it to take her fingers off instead. Or to find out if it was even equipped to do that.

That raised another question though, assuming it was – in her terms - dead then why did the dead have to eat anyway? Or was it just something automatic? A remembered behaviour? Or perhaps some sort of punishment… perpetual hunger and nothing to assuage it? Not a comforting thought since that would mean that there had to be some sort of higher power that was in control and interested in misery.

Down the line, that was something anyone would have to worry about.

And there she was, assuming this place was purgatory or something along those lines. Point of fact, she had no idea what it was.

Or even that she was in the right realm. All she knew was that she wasn’t in Kansas anymore. Which thought had led to a name for the little fella. “I’ll call you Toto, okay?”

Toto didn’t give any sign that was good or bad for him and just chittered at her some more. It seemed to be asking her to hurry up though. “I don’t know which way to go?” she said, gesturing in a motion she hoped conveyed that one way was pretty much as good as another.

Maybe she should’ve followed a wall around or something, but based on how long she’d been wandering Willow estimated that she was at least a mile from a wall that blocked her way now anyway and there was little sign of much changing ahead of her.

At her gesture though, instead of following her, Toto turned and scampered off in a different direction, about forty-five degrees around from where she’d been headed. Shrugging – because one way was as good as another – she set off in pursuit and Toto speeded up to a brisk walking pace once he was sure that she was following him.

All the while there was a cheery, ongoing commentary through chitter – which may or may not have been an obsolete demonic social network. Pleased with herself for finding a funny in the circumstances – even if it had been a decade since anyone actually used its namesake - Willow turned her attention to what she was going to do now that she was making progress.

Picking a direction was progress, but she was going to need a better guide than this. No offence to Toto, but she didn’t speak whatever language he was speaking – if it was a language at all – and the Halls of the Dead were full of… well, they should have been full of the dead.

The fact that the dead seemed to be curiously absent was one of those good news/bad news things. Bad news because there was one of them she needed to find and then figure out how she was going to get out of here and good news because hey, they were dead, there were a lot of them and a tiny – but significant – percentage of them had quite probably been killed by her.

“But what are the odds of meeting someone I killed?” she asked.

Toto stopped, looked back at her with a quizzical sound.

“Never mind,” she said, making a shooing gesture. “Keep going.”

And after a while they were making progress; some definition was coming to the cavern. It was narrowing and the roof had come into view again. If you’re in trouble, ask a friendly local.

Talking of which, after another twenty minutes walking, they were wherever Toto had led her. The little demon stopped and gestured at the dark opening. A dark, foreboding opening.

He seemed cheerful though, for a mini-demon who didn’t seem to do anything but chitter and wait for wanderers to pass by that he could bring to the deep, foreboding opening.

“I don’t want to go in there,” she said under her breath.

“You don’t want to go in there,” another voice said.

The owner of the voice stepped from behind a column and Toto hissed at it.

It was a voice that was familiar. So was the… shirt?

“Ethan Rayne?”

“In the flesh, so to speak.”

“What are you doing here?” Willow asked. He looked… younger. Younger than when she’d last known him and by now he must’ve been… He was dead. Yay, he was dead and she was in the right place!

“Yes,” he said, he must’ve understood her realisation. “I’m dead. As the proverbial dodo. But, like everything, here I am.”

“Everything?” she asked. “I’ve only seen you and him.”

“And you stand a very good chance of not seeing anything more, Miss Rosenberg,” he said. “Not if you go into there.” He pointed at the opening.

Toto was hissing, clearly agitated. More than once he bounded up to the – dead - warlock and punched him in the leg to very little effect before dashing away out of reach again. Ethan didn’t even react to the taunting.

“You’re not saying that Toto would kill me?” she asked, since the attacks on Ethan were about as effectual as it might’ve been had Toto been a five year old child.

“Toto?”

“Him. It. No, him. He’s definitely a boy demon.”

“Hmm, you really shouldn’t start naming things as soon as you find them,” Ethan said. “But that is exactly what I’m saying.” The demon was almost out of control now, its anger and frustration bubbling higher and higher. Threatening a tantrum which Willow felt she was well equipped to deal with. “Tell me, if he’s Toto, does that make you Dorothy? Or the Wicked Witch?”

“I’m not in the mood for you, Mister Rayne.”

“Whereas I’m quite in the mood for you,” he said as suavely as he could manage and – being somewhat younger in appearance than he had been – it might well have worked on some people. What with the accent, the handsome good looks and a shirt that wasn’t quite so bad as she remembered his worst being… “It’d be a shame to cut this short.”

“So what’s in there that’s so bad?” Willow asked. The extension of the cave – unlike the rest of this place that was lit but with no discernable light source – was absolutely black. Like something had sucked all the light out of it.

“As one of those dreadful movies that were your country’s chief cultural export suggested, ‘That isn’t a cave.’”

Ethan stood back, willing to let her go in there, she was sure. If he was right about the danger, even if she died in there, he’d shrug his shoulders and move on with whatever they were calling this instead of a ‘life.’

And that was exactly what Toto wanted. While she had little reason to follow him, she had even less to follow Toto apart from a demonic kind of cuteness.

“What do you mean?”

“Well, two and a half feet of Naranje demon only serves one purpose, really I’m surprised you’ve not run across them before. They’re quite distinctive.”

“We don’t do this anymore,” Willow said, feeling like she’d have to explain why she might know the term. Besides, she’d been more sort of action girl. They’d had an ex-Watcher to handle the knowledge and he’d retired.

“We? Oh yes, you were rather wasted on the lovely Miss Maclay. Now there was a woman who knew how to kill a demon. And how’s my old friend Ripper? I’ve not seen him around here, so he must still be in your world?”

“Yeah, he’s fine – look, what’s this Nerenje demon?”

“Naranje,” he corrected.

“Nerenje, Naranje, what is it?”

“Easier to show you, old girl.”

“Less of the old, please.”

“Quite. Now – if you’d be so good as to toss one of those balls of flame I remember you using, just into the entrance of that cave?”

“There?”

“Right there will be lovely.”

“What’ll happen?” she asked suspiciously. He didn’t do anything that wasn’t for his own personal gain, in the service of chaos or possibly both, but how was he going to gain from that?

“Well, we might want to take a few steps back out of general respect for your abilities, but your little friend will probably start to object once he realises that the game is up.”

“You know,” Willow said, “you’re just as infuriating as I remember you being.”

“This place doesn’t promote change,” Ethan told her. “It’s not really what it’s for. Now, if you please?”

Where was the harm? Well okay, in tossing fire around like a play thing there could be all sorts of harm… And it was a toss up as to who she should trust. There was the cute, mini demon she’d just met and hadn’t been anything but helpful – so far – and there was Ethan Rayne who’d never actually tried to kill her but had been more than willing to let it happen in the service of some very serious vampires.

So who to believe?

Insufferable he might be, but she tended to think she could trust Ethan at least this far. Whatever he wanted it wasn’t going to be her death – and how would that work down here anyway? Perhaps he knew, perhaps that was the thing?

“Okay, okay…” she stretched out her hand and manipulated the elements to send a jet of flame into the mouth of the cave.

Except it wasn’t a cave at all. Damn it, she hated it when the bad guys were right.

Over the fierce shriek of protest from Toto there was a deeper bellow from the ‘mouth’ and the air itself seemed to shake. She doubted what she was seeing but then realised that it was the blackness that was surging towards her.

It shivered, shimmered as it came for her. The entire ‘surface’ of what had appeared to be a cave entrance stretching out towards her, rolling over the ground and she could see it was… sticky.

Willow stumbled back two or three steps as she realised what it reminded her of. Those lizards, the ones that stuck out their tongue about the length of their body, lightning fast to catch a bug.

And if it was the lizard then she was the bug. Fire bug…

“A little further,” Ethan encouraged as she moved backwards, but it was already too late.

The wall of darkness, sticky darkness, slammed into her but seemed to have reached its limit. That was a relief. An icky, disgusting relief. But she’d been just far enough away -

Except it started to pull her back towards it, she was stuck to it.

“Some flame might help,” he said as she struggled not to be pulled back into its grasp.

No shit, Sherlock.

It was hard to focus though, it was like sinking into soft cushions with nothing solid to hold onto or push against. As it pulled her back, she was enfolded and caught up. He was right though, she had to make herself an unappealing meal. A very unappealing meal and not for the digestive effects. Too hot to swallow.

“Hope you don’t like Mexican,” she said and let loose with the flames Ethan had encouraged.

The new bellows of pain told her it was having an effect and – good news – the mucus or whatever it was that was coating her didn’t seem to be flammable. In fact it seemed to be helping to protect her because this was beyond point blank. This was tantamount to setting fire to herself and hoping it hurt enough for it to let her go.

When that didn’t happen right away, Willow found some sort of calm in desperation. Whether it was trying to take her somewhere or to eat her right away, she wasn’t in the mood and it wasn’t what she was here for. She’d come too far to get swallowed up by some cave sized gecko.

Her mind snapped into focus, pushing the very natural panic aside. That was a skill she’d had back from the old days and one she was pleased still worked for her.

Now that she was focused though… She ignored the fact that the target was right there, enfolding her, and worked the element of fire as if this was some sort of big bad she was standing off from. She sought out the most pain she could inflict, jets of flame, balls of it, simple ignition. She felt the heat as the explosions were right up against her but she was protected from the effects by her own thermal control and also by the disgusting stuff that she was getting coated with. After all this she was expecting to be at least singed, but the only thing she could smell burning was flesh.

Not hers, which was a plus.

What it was that finally made it spit her out she wasn’t sure, but eject her out it did. In the same way she’d been enfolded, she was rolled outwards – and at speed – by the force of the musculature and pushed away from it, sent rolling across the ground.

But if the ‘cave’ was done with her then Toto wasn’t. Before she’d even come to a stop, the mini-demon was on her, leaping from a long way away and landing right where she’d ended up – predators instincts. All at once teeth appeared - vicious, barbed and deadly sharp. Claws had grown and were caught up in her hair, scratching at her.

This was a five years olds tantrum that could really hurt her now.

“No,” Willow said and pushed back with the magic. She wasn’t as adept as Tara would’ve been, but a simple wall of air between her and the demon was enough of a shield, then she just expanded it and pushed it away – taking the demon with it.

“You might want to toast it,” Ethan said from somewhere near her.

But it was fleeing and she let it go. Not such an easy mark as it had thought, clearly.

“Thanks for the help,” she said as Ethan stepped up to stand by her head.

“I told you to stand back.”

“A little late!”

“I also stopped you just walking in there – and you would’ve.”

He was right about that. He might not have saved her life, but he’d saved her some trouble, that was true. And it was possible, in her panic if he hadn’t warned her, that the ‘cave’ might’ve succeeded in subduing and eating her.

Tara would’ve been so damned mad. She’d never have heard the end of it.

“Yeah, well… thanks for that too.” She held out a hand. “Help me up?”

“You’re mistaking me for someone who believes in chivalry,” he said.

“Such a gentleman.”

“Actually, I’m big believer in feminism. Not only do I find powerful women so very alluring but I also believe that a woman that’s covered in Naranje mucus has a perfect right to help herself up.”

And he was right, she was covered in… Yeah, they were calling it mucus. There was no getting away from that.

“Yuck.”

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Katharyn, Well this just keeps getting better! I sooo love Ethan. He is a great character and having him be the first of the dead Willow comes across is a nice tie in with the original episode relating to.. eek.. Eyghon. That demon really freaks me out. A lot of people think Toto was a Scottish Terrier. That drives me slightly insane coz he was actually a Cairn Terrier. Yes, I do know some things. LOL! Love the cuddly -til he’s not- tiny demon and the giant, gross snot demon. At first, I thought the mini-demon was from Fear Itself, then it was a Gremlin, then I was imagining that creepy thing with a zillion teeth from Trilogy of Terror. LOL. Willow is pretty much making it up as she goes, thankfully, successfully so far. I’m curious what Ethan is up to. It can’t be a coincidence that he runs into Willow shortly after she enters the Halls. Well.. it could be.. but I’m not going to assume anything. Holding on with both hands now and enjoying the wild ride!


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I never expected to see Ethan, though he was quite helpful, I never trust him as far as I can throw a whale. lol

Great update, though I guess hoping that lil demon was cute and nice is always far fetched. And that goopy stuff what exactly was that? Interesting I have to say,

Great Job!!

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Toto, Gizmo or whatever the little bugger's name was had me going there for awhile. I thought the ugly little guy was gonna turnout to be harmless. So, when Ethan showed up I had my doubts about Willow taking any advice from him. Then the little gremlin tried to feed Willow to the snot rocket monster from hell... I still have many doubts about Ethan's motives for being 'helpful'. I'm sure his reasons are very self serving...maybe he's thinking Willow can get him out of the land of the lost when she returns to the surface...or maybe he's leading her to something worse..

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katharyn, thanks for the update :)

ethan rayne, so love a villian with a sense of whimsy :clap

no net this weekend, i was in the country. hence the late thanks :blush


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Okay, so I mentioned mucus. That's my fault. And that is why I apparently created a snot monster... Yeah, the scary part of it was supposed to be the complete blackness it presented or something else... but no, y'all focus on the mucus.

C'est la vie. :)

edob - Ethan is fun to write and - like Giles - I don't have to pull back on my Britishness. My natural state of writing (as you will have noticed) is much more formal than my speech and often I lose characters voices that way. But with those two it's always easy :)

Thanks

SMOGOVAN - LOL, I'd never named him Gizmo, but yeah... might as well have done :) But then I'd have had to make the reference about feeding after midnight rather than not being in Kansas...

The lovely thing with Ethan is that while he'd rather Willow was uneaten, he really isn't all that bothered. Of course you can doubt his motives - and should - but don't fall into the trap of thinking that his motives are already in play :) You are assuming he knew she'd be there, which is by no means certain... He;d deny it, but then he lies.

Cheers

Astronsoul - See above for why Ethan is attractive me! However I'd also point out that the connection to Eyghon was what really sealed the deal. I could've picked someone else but... nah :) The goop? Well, it wasn't - technically - snot. More something sticky to help suck in the prey and stop it running. Apart from being icky there was no more meaning to it than that! Thanks.

Miss Conspiracy Theorist - Yeah, you spotted my thought process there :) Did I mention what sort of terrier Toto was? Didn't mean to! I'd have no idea... I'm more of a pussy girl myself *cough*

See... more snot. I'm not going to argue about that anymore LOL. You can go right on thinking that I am lifting stuff from episodes, but you presume my memory is up to it :) Again, let me say, I haven't watched an episode since 2002 and my memory is... imperfect by anyone's standards.

And then you get into your conspiracy theories... Okay, granted the chances of HIM being here when NO ONE else was are remarkably low, but you must've noticed (the girls have) that shit just keeps happening to them! When something can go in a certain direction it generally will. I feel justified in this purely because I used fate to put them back together and keep them that way. Once I did that, I get to say 'its fate' to just about anything :kdevil Of course, I may just be obfuscating...

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Title: The Sidestep Chronicles: Third Chronicle (Part 17 (259))
Author: Katharyn Rosser
Feedback: Constructive criticism is always welcome. Flames just demonstrate you have a tiny mind.
Spoiler warning: I’m really not going to bother after all this time except to say that this fic will totally spoil my own Sidestep: First Chronicle and Second Chronicle which can be found in the Completed Fics archive (A-M)
Distribution: This story was written for Pens. Pens is its home. No archiving off Different Coloured Pens and the Kitten Board please. (This applies to all my stories, fics and particularly to Sidestep Chronicle as a whole.)
Summary: Meanwhile, back in the real world…
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the copyrights or anything else associated with BTVS. All rights lie with the production company, writers etc. I am making no money from this series of stories however all original characters and situations remain my property.
Rating: The earlier Chronicles of Sidestep were much darker and I slapped a blanket R rating on them for occasional content. This series is lighter in tone caution is only recommended for occasional scenes. However to understand absolutely everything that went before you’d have to have read the first two fully so…
Couples: Tara and Willow forever. Rupert and Jenny are also together. Nothing else referred to.
Text convention: We’re occasionally dealing with some deaf characters here and that has to be addressed. Speech inside asterisks is spoken in sign language only. Occasionally people responding to signed speech may do so inside speech marks, which indicates that they are also verbalising as well. Occasionally I might make a mistake and get this wrong but when dealing with a character that only signs, take it as read that they’re doing so when they “speak.”
Notes: You get this part a day or so early as I will be busy during this week. Next part won't be until Friday at the earliest...
Funnily enough this was the big conceptual leap for me. Finding the method, one that wasn’t totally contrived and could be a part of the story and relevant to the characters was the biggest thing. I hate ‘technology/demon lore’ of the week type things which are made up and never referenced again just to facilitate one single story. Once I’d settled on this method a lot of notes and implications flowed from it.
I have a feeling that in previous chronicles I gave the girls perfect – instant - recall… well, now Tara doesn’t have it. If only for that one word…
Thanks to: Whoever it was I (finally) got the correct spelling from.


“Eyghon.”

“You’re right,” Jenny said firmly. “I don’t like it.”

Tara was wracking her brains for the detail of what he was suggesting. There was very little that she forgot, but that didn’t mean she was blessed with instant recall. Eyghon? It was a familiar word – but not one from English - and then it came to her…

She didn’t like it either.

“That was the demon that you messed around with at Cambridge?” she asked, recalling the stories of what had happened.

“Oxford,” Rupert said. “If you don’t mind – and I’d hardly call it ‘messing around’.”

“No,” his wife replied. “I wouldn’t call letting a demon possess you just to show that the nerds could take the sex, drugs and rock and roll to a whole new level, ‘messing around’. More like… stupidity.”

“At least I didn’t have bits of metal pushed through - ” he looked at Tara, “my ears.”

She knew very well where Jenny had – or at least used to have – bits of metal. It wasn’t her perfect idea of teenage rebellion either, but still better than demons.

“Can we focus?” she suggested. “What does Eyghon have to do with this? “I thought it was dead?”

“Ah, but that’s the point,” Rupert said. “Technically Eyghon has always been dead. It was one of those demons that didn’t start it’s existence actually as a demon.

“Legend has it that Eyghon was once a queen – or possibly a king – of a distant realm whose lust for power, death and destruction earned it special consideration by the demon realms. It won a sort of immortality, but only after it was dead already and those it possesses take on some of it’s features – it’s physical features. At least after long enough. It’s not permanent though.”

“And?”

“And possession by Eyghon would – might be enough to sway the balance between life and death in terms of being able to access the Halls of the Dead. Don’t you see? Those of us who’ve already been possessed by it might, and I stress might, be able to enter the halls.”

They both looked at Jenny.

“What?”

“You and I,” he said. “We’ve been possessed by the creature in question.”

“So we’re supposed to go to the Halls?” she asked. “Will you be bringing your stick or anticipating trouble and getting some crutches?”

“No,” Tara said. “Not happening. We discussed this already. I have to be the one to go. I’m the one who can find Willow and the one who can defend herself.”

“Don’t overestimate what you can do down there,” Rupert said. “Perhaps you’ll be just as puissant as you are here, perhaps more so. But equally you could be stripped of your powers, or some of them. There’s simply no way to know. And though I don’t believe you should go alone, that wasn’t what I was suggesting.”

“But one of you wants to go with me?”

“‘Wants’ is such a misleading word,” Jenny said. “I don’t ‘want’ any of us to go.”

“But recognising that you’ll go anyway, Tara,” Rupert said. “ At least one of us should be with you.”

“We’ve skipped over something here,” Tara said. “Even if you could go, I’ve never been possessed by Eyghon.”

And there was the truth of it. Everything Daddy had threatened her with. Everything she’d been told about herself and her mother… Oh, if it’d been the truth then it might actually have been useful now.

“Sorry, yes. I should’ve explained. I’m proposing that we should summon Eyghon and… well, not to put too fine a point on. Get you possessed too.”

“Excuse me?” Tara had to ask. She hadn’t considered that possibility, even for a moment. Not even once he’d started talking about Eyghon and it’s qualities. “Okay, so it’s always been dead but you did something to it and it went away. That’s what I thought anyway?”

“So did I,” Jenny said. “The words used, the words that you used, English, were something like ‘we gave it a good kicking.’ And it looked pretty dead to me.”

“You can’t technically destroy or kill a demon of that type,” her husband explained. “It was already dead as we’ve discussed. There’s not much more that you can do except inconvenience them, ideally for a prolonged period of time. Eyghon was simply… banished from its form at the time.”

“You are not doing that to Tara,” Jenny said.

“Desperate times require desperate measures, after all. I’m rather uncertain about what the alternative would be aside from letting a vampire bite you and then somehow bringing you back as Willow was brought back – but that would be more complex even than what Willow is attempting. As I said… this isn’t that complex. It needn’t be.”

“You think,” Tara pointed out. All of this was guesswork and saying something was better than thinking about what he was suggesting.

Perhaps, if prodded, he’d come up with another option. One that wasn’t about letting a demon inside her because… Just no.

“I ‘conclude’,” he said. “There is no instruction manual for this. Tara. You know that – you both know that.”

“But possession?” Jenny objected. “Possession by something we ‘gave a good kicking’ to? Those are your words. Something that has reason to hate both of us? You really think that’s a good idea?”

“I don’t know - ” Tara said.

“Well, we could always kill her,” Rupert said facetiously, interrupting her. “Look, if you doubt me then I’m quite happy to help anyone find an alternative but time is – as we’ve said – potentially of the essence. This should work.”

“I don’t know - ” Tara tried again, but again found herself being interrupted. This time by Jenny.

“I can’t believe you said that,” Jenny told her husband.

“That it ‘should work’? I’m sorry I can’t do bett - ”

“No, that we could kill Tara? That is not cool, Rupert.”

“I don’t know if I can do that,” Tara completed quickly before they could get into that any further. It wasn’t that she doubted him, more that she doubted herself.

You have a demon in you, Tara. Just like your momma did.

Except she didn’t.

It’d never been true. Not for her. Not for her Mom.

Mom had been… she’d been a victim – the last victim - of the paranoia and misogyny in the family over generations of fearing the natural magical aptitude of their daughters.

Something her father had bought into whole-heartedly when he’d joined the family. He’d loved Momma – and her – but he’d collaborated in locking his wife away for a good portion of every month just because…

Daddy would’ve done it to her too, if things hadn’t turned out the way they had. Probably married her off to someone so that there’d always be someone to take care of her, protect her from herself.

And to protect everyone else from me.

Except no one had needed that protection. Not for those reasons anyway. Later… It hadn’t been a demon that had made her allow bad things happen to good people.

Rupert gathered his thoughts, and both the Giles’ lapsed into a momentary silence, their own argument forgotten. “I admit that it’s not exactly desirable,” he said. “Especially considering the things that we’ve done over the years to fight demons of this very type, but it may - ”

“I’m not saying I don’t want to,” Tara said – although she really didn’t. “I’m saying I don’t know if I can.”

Willow was the only one who really knew just what had had happened to her mother. What would’ve happened to her. And then only because she’d seen the house, the room that Momma had been ‘secured’ in. Back when Rupert had been suspicious of her admitting that she’d been thought to have a demon in her had seemed like something best left unsaid and it wasn’t something she was likely to have brought up over dinner since then either.

It was something that they didn’t talk to anyone about really, because… Mom and Dad were both dead. Why would she bring that sort of thing up again? The upshot though was that their best friends just didn’t know…

“I don’t know if I can,” Tara repeated.

“Then I don’t know if I can get you into the Halls of the Dead,” he said after taking a moment. “Perhaps another demon, not Eyghon, but fundamentally it’d be no different.”

“It’s not Eyghon,” she confirmed his assumption. “I don’t even know that demon. It’s just… having it inside of me. In my thoughts, in my soul. Knowing is as bad as controlling… There are things that aren’t supposed to happen,” she said. “This is one of them.”

“Then I’ll keep looking,” he said agreeably. “We’ll find another way to help Willow.”

And he would. But how long would that take? Evidently he didn’t need to know her reasons. If she could say ‘no’ to the option he’d provided, when Willow was at stake, then that was good enough for him.

Maybe it shouldn’t have been good enough.

Damn it. No choice of hers was going to get Willow hurt, or leave her where she’d gone. Alone.

“No,” Tara said.

“No?”

“No. Tell me – tell me all of it.”

That was the best she could do. She’d take the time to listen. To understand what he was talking about. She didn’t want to, but she could listen and make an informed decision rather than just going with a knee-jerk reaction. She owed her wife much, much more than that.

“Well… We have to summon Eyghon. We can do that between us though it will mean… it will mean you taking the demons mark. I suppose that you can always have it removed later.”

A tattoo then? That was the least of her problems with this, even if she’d spent years telling the kids they couldn’t get them done, not while they were underage and at her school anyway.

“Go on.”

“Once summoned, we direct it into you. Then we banish it. Its mark will be on you, some part of its energy will remain – since once it’s been in you then it can always track you. Then its nature will be a part of you too, a tiny part. But that should – hopefully – be enough.”

“And what if it won’t leave?” Tara asked, not exactly happy to have any part of a demon’s nature lingering in her, small or large. But Willow evidently did and she wasn’t… it hadn’t done anything bad to her even if it had come from some other form of demon, some other process.

“Then I’ll offer it me,” he said. “It wants me, it won’t turn that chance down. That’s our safety net.”

“No, it’s not,” Jenny said firmly.

“There are still ways we can deal with it after that,” he said. “But we can’t delay Tara while Willow is at risk.”

Tara still didn’t want to do it but what choice did she really have? Like he said, Willow was at risk. Willow was… All she knew was that her wife wasn’t dead. And that wasn’t good enough. That wasn’t anywhere close to good enough.

“There’s just one other thing,” she said. They weren’t going to like it.

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 Post subject: Re: Sidestep - Third Chronicle (new part 09/13/11)
PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:59 am 
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Katharyn, No, you didn’t mention the Terrier breed. That’s just my first thought when someone mentions Toto. I raised Scotties for many years and still collect related items and often see listings for “Toto the Scottish Terrier”. GRRR!

The snot monster? In “A New Man” Ethan turned Giles into a demon whose superpower was poisonous snot! My memory isn’t that great either but right after Spike told Giles about that, Giles jumped from the car to scare the “snot” out of Professor Psycho. I rewind to watch that quite often.. Major hilarity there!

You said, "... that shit just keeps happening to them!" and I immediately think of an artist named McCartney who painted a sitting dog and underneath wrote “Sit Happens”. I took that idea and drew a cat sitting –coz I love cats too. Years later, Xita put my cat (sans the text) on the background here (Dirty Kitten) and in her avatar! What does any of this mean? That this story gets my brain kicking in on all three or four :wink cylinders so one thing leads to another and another in a strange loopy loop. And most importantly.. you are weaving an adventure that feels very much in tune, even with an unintentional lifting of canon, with a true W/T spinoff.

And.. Oops..I see an update so I will return later with more conspiracy theories :wink

Oh.. DIBS..

Ahhhhhh….

It didn’t occur to me to banish Eyghon right away. That would surely lessen the risk but Ick and double Ick to leaving a bit of himself inside Tara. One positive thing, besides the obvious, about this whole possession thing is that it will give Tara, at least partially, more insight into what Willow went through regarding VW. Tara’s initial fear of the idea is completely understandable given her whack family history and it shows just what she is willing to go through to get her soulmate back. Brave, noble Tara.. love it! But I think I know what the Giles’ aren’t gonna like and there’s no way they are gonna keep their word if it results in harm to Tara. Will Giles and Jenny ban together to do a bit of fibbing so Tara will go along with the plan? There is my conspiracy for this round :wink Still though, if she’s gonna get possessed anyway, having some of the demon power and strength while in the Halls would sure be useful. Especially if Giles is correct and she was stripped of her own magic. Do you take the option with less risk or go all out to raise the odds of success? Willow still has her power but she was also dead once. This all goes back to the question: What are the specific markers that allow or prevent entry into the Halls? Hmmm.. much to ponder here. Great update!


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katharyn,
thank you, great update :)

puissant, lets see how many times i can use that this week in conversation. with a texas accent, chooonnnnggggg!
i bet i will be asked what it is that smells bad :grin


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The fact that Tara is even considering this option is a testament to the depth of her love for Willow. After the years of suffering that she endured because of a false family legend that stated she would become a demon, she's gonna purposely allow herself to be possessed all in the name of love.... I think she deserves some sort of consolation prize..a new super power perhaps?

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