
Yay for Willow & Tara getting to enjoy atleast some making out action...
Can't wait for the party...
I love the BAD TIMING comment and from BUFFY!!! Unbelievable!![]()
![]()
![]()
![]()
You nail their dialogue and I appreciate how you took them to a deeper place, being there for Faith. And Willow's excitement at seeing Tara and Tara's 'amusement' when Tara is just as excited to see Willow - funny!
Those damn Summers girls!!!! Buffy has alot of nerve commenting on Dawn's bad timing.
Tara is such a sweetie for sending Willow flowers. It's such a small thing, yet it totally made the sun shine bright on Willow's day.
Can't wait till the party... I can't even imagine what Anya is gonna say when she meets Buffy! I hope her whip purchase is a topic of discussion...
I love the fact Tara sent Willow flowers, so damn sweet! They connect in so many different ways, it really is adorable. The date was of course going extremely well, till' Dawn walks in.
Can't wait for the party!
I love that Tara sent Willow flowers and it totally changed her mindset about her day, funny how a kind gesture from a loved one can do that.
Also, I love how Dawn totally calls Willow out for the coffee shop 'stalking' and her reaction to it. Hilarious.
BOO for the early end to their date. I wouldn't think a little thing like 'typical' Summers bad timing would send Tara home early though. Couldn't they have just retired up to Willow's room or something for some privacy?
I love that Tara sent flowers; that was a really sweet gesture. I've been sent flowers before and it definitely brightens up the rest of your day. Buffy and Dawn both have the worst timing when it comes to Willow's love life.
They are so damn cute together and you do such a great job of conveying their mutual attraction.
Then there's Dawn...ok, when you live with other people and you tell them you're not coming home...DON'T COME HOME! Lol
I loved Buffy making the comment about timing...boy is she ever clueless! Should be fun when she meets Anya at the party!! Can't wait!
“Damn it,” she grumbled as she reached for her phone to stop the incessant ringing of the alarm she’d forgot to shut off. “I don’t even have to be up yet!”
“Ew!” she whispered, making a break for the staircase flying down them and out of the house, grabbing her keys from the hook by the door on her way out. She quickly climbed into her car and made her way down Revello Drive.
Willow smiled at the sight, watching as Tara tipped her head back, her eyes closed, relishing in the feeling of the sun caressing her face. With her hair pulled back in a ponytail, Willow was able to take in all of the blonde’s stunning features and she couldn’t keep the smile off her lips.
“Well we can do something else,” the redhead said with a sly grin as she stood up and pulled the blonde with her out of the coffee shop.
“So… I believe you were… saying something about… taking me against the door,” Tara said in between kisses. Willow just smiled into the kiss and trailed her lips down the blonde’s neck, pulling at the drawstring in Tara’s shorts.
“Yeah, I didn’t want to just barge into your room or interrupt anything,” the brunette said. “Can you come out to the living room for a second though if you’re not too busy?”
“As much as I’d love to spend more time with you, I’m pretty sure I’ll reach by Anya quota tonight,” she answered as pulled the blonde in and kissed her once.
“I totally understand,” Tara said, running her fingers down the redhead’s smooth back.
“The kind that tear down signs. Now just hang the damn thing higher!” she said as she stomped back down the stairs.
“That girl from the sex toy store! She’s standing there with Faith and Tara talking to them! What the hell is going on? How does she know Faith!”



and gay love that I am entitled to as a faithful reader!
!

God, this house is like a minefield of naughty make-out sessions just begging to be broken up, she thought.
The house of debauchery!
You do a very good of conveying the mutual want through their dialog. That is sometimes hard to do without coming right out and just saying it. Now, however, I'm concerned about the "creepy neighbor". Hopefully this guy is not really dangerous.
Just somewhat of a bummer that Tara had to leave to go help Anya. Hmmm, let me think about this...naked in bed with Willow or getting yelled at by Anya? Tough, tough decisions, lol. Poor Willow, being so close even in a dream and the damn alarm goes off early! I hate when that happens.
getting caught or not, seeing Tara like that is HOT!
Perfectly Anya!! Oh so funny, poor faith they just don't get along that well. At least Tara is there to keep Faith from killing her.
Oh snap! HAHAHA Poor Buffy, she will definitely have an interesting time tonight!!
great job, can't wait for the next chapter and to see the party in full swing!!
This is SEXY hot!
Full of their tenderness and humor and sweetness together PLUS the potential of a Faith/Anya free-for-all (I can only fantasize!)
You make these characters true to their roots but completely your own, GREAT work and you never fail to deliver the goods.
DYING FOR THE PARTY, maybe they'll have a few drinks and see =>![]()
![]()
![]()
I thought I was gonna have to call you a big ole dirty tease! I wanted to yell 'Sonofabitch' after reading that little dream sequence at the beginning of the chapter. Alas, you mended your evil ways and gave me theand gay love that I am entitled to as a faithful reader!
Buffy and Anya in the same place at the same time.....let the games begin !![]()
While I normally love Anya's craziness, I'm with Faith on the party decorations. I would be ready to strangle her myself after that.
I can't wait to see what happens with Buffy and Anya. I know there is going to be some initial freaking out followed by some awkard conversation. Oooo, will Faith overhear any of it and find out what Buffy has been shopping for? It's going to be so freaking awesome. I can't wait.
Big yay for Tara being there to keep the peace between Faith & Anya... Can't wait for Buffy meeting Anya officially... I guess Tara's peacemaker abilities are needed during the party between Anya & Faith and Buffy...
Both parts were really cute
But I can't believe you left us hanging like this, I am really looking forward to the next installment
God, this house is like a minefield of naughty make-out sessions just begging to be broken up, she thought.
The house of debauchery!
Loved that she ran into Tara at the coffee shop and that Tara was apparently also having naughty thoughts.You do a very good of conveying the mutual want through their dialog. That is sometimes hard to do without coming right out and just saying it.
Now, however, I'm concerned about the "creepy neighbor". Hopefully this guy is not really dangerous.
Anyway, loved Buffy's reaction at the end and looking forward to the party!
Maybe I should have warned Buffy, Willow thought suddenly feeling a little uncomfortable with the situation. I mean if the roles were reversed I’d be so mad at her for not telling me.
“Willow!” Buffy cried before lowering her voice when a few of the bar's other patrons looked at her. “I bought a whip from her store! For my girlfriend!”
“What about your girlfriend?” Faith asked as she reappeared with two bottled waters.
Wow, that skirt is just the right length.
She was enjoying the view so much that her foot caught on a step halfway up and she had to quickly grab onto the railing with her free hand to keep from toppling over. Tara, who had reached the top step, looked back to see what the commotion was about and giggled when she saw the redhead trying to gather herself together like nothing had happened.
“Um… No. No I don’t think so,” Buffy said, her eyes leaving Anya’s and refocusing on the tabletop.
“I’m sure we have. I never forget a face.”
“It’s true, she doesn’t,” Tara said, unable to help herself. Willow looked over at her girlfriend, wondering what was going on and missed the smile that Anya almost cracked at Tara’s contribution.
“Well… Maybe you’ve seen me… somewhere,” Buffy stumbled. Faith looked back and forth between the two , almost like watching a tennis match, getting the distinct feeling she was missing something.
“Oh! I know why I know you!” Anya exclaimed, a broad smile coming to her face. “I own that toy store over on Madison, Anya’s Orgasm Hut…”
Oh here it comes, Tara thought, watching as Buffy’s eyes grew wide and her mouth opened almost as if she was waiting to deny any accusation thrown at her.
“I’ve seen you at the coffee shop next door!” Anya continued.
“Yeah. That’s right. Now I remember you. You always get it with extra whipped cream,” Anya said, still casually smiling as she placed extra emphasis on that one word. Buffy immediately stiffened back up and Faith cocked her had questioningly at Anya.
“So, ladies…” she said, her arms still around the two left at the table. She gave them a simultaneous squeeze and then returned to her own seat, staring them down as she sat, her hands folded in front of her, her face completely serious. With one of the bar lights hanging directly over their table Willow suddenly felt like she was sitting across from an interrogator at a police station. “Tell me, what do you think of my girls?” she asked, motioning her head in the direction that Tara and Faith had disappeared to.
I feel it’s my job to give this particular ‘speech.’ I’m not going to air their business but Faith’s never felt about any girl the way she feels about you Buffy. And Willow, Tara’s falling for you fast. I love them both very much and if either of you breaks their heart, I’ll break your legs. Ok?”
Willow and Buffy looked and her for a long moment, seeing she was completely serious and nodded slowly.
“Good,” she said, breaking out in a genuine smile. “Now we can have some fun. So, Buffy, how’d that whip work out for you?”
“So are either of you ever going to tell me what Buffy bought at Anya’s store?” Faith asked as they climbed the stairs to the balcony.
“No way,” Tara said with a smile. “Buffy will show you when she’s ready.”
“Well will I at least enjoy it?” Tara stopped at the top of the staircase, turning to look at Faith, her smirk growing even wider.
“You’re going to love it,” she said, catching the appreciative smile of Faith lips before turning away and heading back towards their table.
“I hate to interrupt this little banter here but I think we should probably get out to the dance floor stat,” Xander said. “It looks like Anya might have pissed off someone out there.”
The three girls turned and immediately spotted their friend standing toe to toe with a much larger brunette, a group of the brunette’s friends surrounding her as backup. Buffy stood behind Anya, looking absolutely petrified as the blonde inched closer to the larger girl.
“Damn it,” Faith said as she quickly made her way onto the dance floor with Tara and Xander hot on her heels and Willow a few steps behind them. Faith was the first to reach the group, Tara only half a step behind her, and she was the relief wash over Buffy’s face as they quickly stepped between Anya and her current nemesis.
“Oh it’s on now, bitch!” Anya said, not registering as her friends pulled her away towards Xander. “These two are going to kick your ass!”
“Whoa, wait a minute. No one’s kicking anyone’s ass,” Xander interjected as he hauled Anya away to the far side of the bar, the blonde kicking and screaming obscenities the whole time.
“Well she better watch her skinny ass,” the other girls said, taking a step towards the duo. “She can’t just go around flirting with other girls' boyfriends.”
“Look, I’m sure she didn’t mean it,” Faith said, preparing to square off if the other girl didn’t back down. “So let’s just call it a draw. You go back to your party and we’ll go back to ours.”
Tara again stepped up beside her friend, hopping that the group would walk away but preparing for the opposite. Willow and Buffy stood side by side behind their girlfriends, both slightly astounded that the two boldly stood their ground. The other girl rolled her eyes after a moment and turned and walked away, her friends following her.
“Have you ever gotten hurt?” Willow asked as she pulled Tara towards one of the empty booths in the back corner of the bar.
“Eager or something?” Willow teased as she wrapped her arms around Tara, running her hands beneath the blonde’s shirt.
“Something like that,” Tara said, kissing the redhead once more. “Let’s grab a cab and get the hell out of here.”
Wow, that skirt is just the right length.
She was enjoying the view so much that her foot caught on a step halfway up and she had to quickly grab onto the railing with her free hand to keep from toppling over. Tara, who had reached the top step, looked back to see what the commotion was about and giggled when she saw the redhead trying to gather herself together like nothing had happened.
“Willow! So glad you could make it,” Anya said, taking a sip from the giant, pink alcoholic beverage in front of her, shaped like a fishbowl. The redhead cringed when she saw the straw had a penis at the end that the blonde was sucking from.
“Hi Anya,” Willow said, cautiously sitting at the seat furthest from the blonde.
Tribute to Anya’s drink:

“Oh please,” Anya said, taking another long sip from her drink. “It’s not like I purposely go around trying to find ways to embarrass people. People are just way too uptight and sensitive. Like you for instance. You’re obviously having sex…” This statement actually forced Willow to spit out the sip of water she’d just taken in a fine mist over the table but Anya didn’t seem to notice. “But if someone were to come up to you and say ‘excuse me, what type of material do you prefer your strap on to be made of,’ you would be left a stuttering, mortified mess. And I don’t understand why. You’d probably be helping the person asking if you’d just answer the question.”

Willow stared wide eyed as Anya just took another drink and turned to Tara, sure the blonde would be sporting a similar face to hers if she wasn’t hiding behind a curtain of hair. She was surprised when she saw a small smirk on the blonde’s lips, her eyes filled with mirth.
“Oh! I know why I know you!” Anya exclaimed, a broad smile coming to her face. “I own that toy store over on Madison, Anya’s Orgasm Hut…”
Oh here it comes, Tara thought, watching as Buffy’s eyes grew wide and her mouth opened almost as if she was waiting to deny any accusation thrown at her.
“I’ve seen you at the coffee shop next door!” Anya continued.


... I'm glad that Faith & Tara stood up for Anya when she got into trouble... I hope Willow & Tara now have some really uninterrupted naked time together...
. I laughed my ass off
. I loved the sexxxy teasing between our girls at the club. Can't wait to see how they spend their interruption free sleep over together
.
of the clueless Buffy. I also love that I have a reason to use this particular emoticon.
Too bad there's no sound effects to go along with it, lol.Wow, that skirt is just the right length.
She was enjoying the view so much that her foot caught on a step halfway up and she had to quickly grab onto the railing with her free hand to keep from toppling over. Tara, who had reached the top step, looked back to see what the commotion was about and giggled when she saw the redhead trying to gather herself together like nothing had happened.
Lol I love how Willow gets distracted by the 'view' hell I would be distracted.
Hehehehhe Tara can't help but join in and tease, at least Anya was somewhat nice when saying it was the coffee shop next door, at least for now...
Haha Buffy + whipped = Hilarity with Anya, man can't wait till Faith finds out about her purchase.
I am proud of both Faith and Tara, standing their ground. I'm sure that impressed their girl's too!
I really really REALLY hope we get to see this play out at the house. ~points to myself~ Love's W/T smut!
Great job, I am still laughing!!! Can't wait for more!!
Oh God, girl! This was rock the house hilarious!
Mmmmm. Tara-watching it should be an Olympic Sport and I’d be a gold medal winner!
Love bizarre straw and Willow sitting as far away as she can.Tribute to Anya’s drink:
![]()
![]()
![]()
Okay, Anya’s whole cat and mouse game with Buffy is brilliant and I love Tara watching and admiring Anya’s style – so funny! Seriously, one of the funniest party scenes I’ve ever read. And the ‘whipped’ cream – oh, girlfriend, you’re killing me!![]()
You did such a great job with Anya in this update. Her characterization was dead on and it was hilarious. I am with you, other than W/T, Anya was my favorite part of watching the show. I just couldn't wait to see what she would say/do next. There were so many great moments and I think AS and Ariel captured most the ones I would mention in their above feedback. The best compliment I can think to say is, Joss would have been proud.![]()
![]()
![]()
I hope Willow & Tara now have some really uninterrupted naked time together...
That was abso-fricking-lutely perfect! You totally nailed Anya's teasing of Buffy. I laughed my ass off
.
I loved the sexxxy teasing between our girls at the club. Can't wait to see how they spend their interruption free sleep over together.
Your Tara is spunky! I enjoyed her story of the fight and worried Willow was adorable.
Great job with the sexy talk and their little teasing session in the booth. Glad to see them finally get some uninterrupted naked snuggle time together.
I love that Faith is clueless about the inside joke between Anya and Tara. Tara may seem shy and quite but when it comes to her friends she will definitely do what it takes to protect them; love that about her. Looking forward to the next update.
Anya was quite under control in not totally embarrassing Buffy. Yay for Anya.
It seems that Faith and Willow need to change places eventually (living situations I mean). This is so nice to read. Very fun and lovely.
Return to Different Colored Pens
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 9 guests