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"Bitter, party of one. Bitter, party of one." she muttered... ~ Four Months After by Capt. Murdock
I recently started writing my very first W/T fic, and I am now finding myself in the middle of a sweeping, dark, intense fic that is overwhelming me. Help! I think that those characters are so close to me it is hard for me to write them, does that make sense?
Anyway, I was wondering if any of you lovely kittens would be willing to preview what I have written so far and lend me some opinions about direction, tone, and characterization. I need help. Guidance. A life...*grin*
A brief summary...It takes place a few months after the events of smashed and wrecked. Willow has gotten the magic part of the magic addiction under control, but is struggling with issues of guilt and shame about her actions while she was using. She does something outrageous and extreme to try and make ammends with herself and her loved ones.
Meanwhile, Tara is lonely and grieving what happened with Willow. The fic explores a lot of Tara's past, which I have always been intrigued by, and how it contributed to how she dealt with Willow's addiction and darkness.
So far, it's a pretty dark fic. Okay, very dark. It will all turn out alright in the end, I'm sure, but I have dug myself in so deep I'm not sure how to resolve it. Hmmmmm...sounds like Willow, eh?
Anyway, let me know if any of you talented kitties would be willing to read, edit and guide.
Thanks!
italiangirl1@earthlink.net
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"You're in my blood like Holy Wine
You taste so bitter, and so sweet
Darling, I could drink a case of you
And still be on my feet;
I would still be on my feet."
-Joni Mitchell
[This message has been edited by xita (edited January 21, 2002).]
[This message has been edited by xita (edited January 21, 2002).]
I'm currently working on a fic in which Tara's past figures prominently. Since we have only limited specific knowledge about her life pre-Willow, I found it helpful to construct my own mini-biography of her by inventing some pivotal incidents and relationships and writing about them in detail.
If you'd like to email me what you have so far caerfell@yahoo.com I'll be happy to give you some feedback and ideas. Maybe we could trade and you could take a look at what I'm in the middle of once you've resolved your story's direction.
(PS. If you use MS Word, send your writing as an attached file to preserve formatting.)
Hmm.... qualifications....
I've done it professionally for about seven years (mostly in script form.) I never..ever preach...I politely ask questions....
I like to think I'm polite, nice, and I love to read the fic on this board.
All you need do is ask.
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"Honey, I'm the original one-eyed chicklet in the kingdom of the blind." -Glory
I'm really big on characterization. I will edit for grammar and spelling as I go along (even if you don't want me to) because it's just how I am. I realize, however, that some grammatical errors are for the sake of the work, so I don't always correct EVERYTHING.
Anyway, send long or short. Any rating, just give me warning before hand. jdcioffi@msn.com
And if you get stuck, I tend to like to help people talk stories out of themselves. You can IM me at either CSpotGo on AIM or jdcioffi@msn.com on MSN Messenger.
JD
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"And how long have you known your girlfriend's Tinkerbell?"
Catch me at pixie_muso@hotmail.com.
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"...the hardest thing in this world is to live in it..."
~Buffy, The Gift.
[This message has been edited by Pixie-Muso (edited January 31, 2002).]
I am looking for someone to beta watch the music video I am working on. Preferably you have a high speed connection, since the current size is fairly large.
rallyv@yahoo.com if interested.
Thanks,
-R
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"Everyone's getting spanked but me."
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Sweetie...I'm a fag.
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You know I've been through hell...Joss can't you see, there'll be nothing left of me. You made me believe...
B
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Good, cause ... I want my room to be Willow-friendly.
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