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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Rane » Fri Jun 08, 2001 11:23 pm

since i've decided to continue the story i figured a new thread for the first chapter and the rest should be started. if i am wrong, miss/ter moderators fantasticos can just edit it into my collected fic thread.

hope you like

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chapter 1
Spoilers for season 5.
feedback welcome....

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Angel- Its Buffy.

Willow starts to cry.

Willow- She’s dead.
Cordy- What?
Gunn- (to Wesley) This is his Slayer she’s talking about, right?
Wes- (to Gunn) Yes.
Angel- (in shock, doesn’t move) How?

Willow breaks down crying. Can’t speak. Cordelia runs up to her and holds her.
Cordelia- (to them, dotingly) We need to do something.

Tara comes in from outside carrying a bag filled with food.
Tara- (seeing what is going on) Willow?
Gunn- Who are you?
Tara- (a bit frightened by him) Uh… (runs to Willow) Baby…

Cordy sees Tara wrap Willow in her arms. She realizes who this is.

Cordelia- (mouths to Wesley while pointing at the girls) Girlfriend.
Gunn- (to Wes) What?
Wesley- I don’t understand either.

They see Tara reach for Willow’s face and kiss her lips. She’s keeping her calm.

Gunn- Oh.
Wesley- (understanding) Yes. (sounds wrong) I mean, right. I get it.

Next scene.

Tara slowly and quietly walks out of a room. Fred is there.
Fred- How is she?
Tara- Sleeping. We’ve been up for days.
Fred- Aren’t you tired?
Tara- I have to take care of her.

With the rest. Angel is present but not talking.

Wes- I cant believe this.
Tara- None of us do. Dawn is destroyed. She’s with Giles but- Everybody’s a mess. No one knows what to do.
Cordy - There’s nothing to do.
Gunn- Will another Slayer be called? I mean- (he looks over to Angel, he’s not even flinched)
Wes- I’m not sure. Kendra was called, then Faith. Faith is still the Slayer. I think.
Angel- Get out.
Wes- What?
Angel- GET OUT!

Everyone scampers off.

Cordy- (pointing a finger at Wesley) If he goes insane-
Wes- He’s mourning.
Cordy- Remember what happened last time he mourned a loved one?
Gunn- We were fired.
Tara- What?
Cordy- (to T) Nothing.
Fred- Can I go get a taco now?
Cordy- Hello, Fred. A friend of ours just died. (suddenly it hits her) Oh my god. Buffy’s dead? Wes- She cant- We… (breaks down crying, Wesley comforts her)
Tara- (is starting to tear up) But everyone else is fine… Dawn is still alive and things are ok in Sunnydale. Xander and Anya are engaged.
Cordy- What? Xander? He’s getting married?
Tara- (oops) I mean-
Cordy- To Anya? That demon?! (cries more)
Fred- (to Tara) Honey, maybe you should stop talking.
Tara nods.

Next.

Willow slowly wakes up. The room is a bit dark but she knows someone is there.
Willow- Angel?
Angel- (he’s lurking by the window) Yeah... Did I ever tell you I was sorry for killing your fish?
Willow- What?
Angel- I’m sorry. About your fish.
Willow- (about to tear up again) I don’t remember. But thank you. I got new ones.
Angel- That’s how it goes doesn’t it? When something dies you just get a new one.
Willow- I didn’t mean-
Angel- Life is like that. You love, you lose, you love again. You die, you come back, you live again.
Willow- Angel.
Angel- But she’s not coming back, is she?
Willow- (starts to cry) No.

The rest are sitting about. Wes and Gunn are around Cordy. She’s a bit better from earlier. Tara and Fred are sitting off talking, the outsiders.

Tara- You were in this Pylea for five years?
Fred- Yeah.
Tara- That must have been horrible.
Fred- I felt like I had lost my mind.
Tara- I know the feeling.

Wes- How are you feeling?
Cordy- At least I’m not getting a vision.

At that, duh, she gets a vision.

Cordy- AHHHHH!!!

The gather around her. Tara and Fred run up.

Gunn- I got you.
Fred- (awed) Is the princess having a vision?
Tara- Princess?
Wes- Are you all right?
Cordy- Obvioulsy not. Eww!
Wes- What?
Cordy- Not another sewer demon.
Gunn- What’s it look like?
Cordy- Like- Alf?
Wes- What?
Gunn- I don’t know.
Tara- The alien? From TV?
Cordy- Jackpot for Willow’s girlfriend.
Tara- Um, Tara is just fine.
Cordy- (screams again) AHHHHH!
Wes- What?!

Angel and Willow run down.

Angel- What is going on?
Willow- Is Cordy all right?
Angel- She has visions.
Willow- Visions?
Angel- Long story. (to them) What?
Wes- Demon in the sewer.
Angel- What’s it look like?
Wes- Alf.
Angel- Alf?
Willow- The alien from TV?
Fred- (to Willow) Can you guys read each others mind? (she points back and forth from Willow and Tara)
Willow- (looks to Tara) What? (tara shakes her head and smirks)
Angel- What does this thing look like? You know what, it doesn’t matter. I’ll go look for it.
Wes- Angel, the sun will be up in a few. Let Gunn take it.
Angel- It’s in the sewer. No sunlight.

He takes off. The rest look at each other uncomfortable.

Gunn- I’d want to kill something too if I was him.

Later.

Willow and Tara in the room. Tara walks up to Willow who’s on her side staring off into nothing. Tara sits by her.

Tara- How are you? (willow sighs, keeps staring off) Oh, darling. (starts to stroke her hair) Is there anything I can do?
Willow- (sniffles and looks at her) Make love to me.
Tara- Willow…
Willow- I feel like a part of me is dead.
Tara- (kisses her) No, honey, no.

Fred and Cordy.
Fred- So, you grew up with these girls?
Cordy- (with an ice pack at her head) With the redhead. She was in love with *my* boyfriend, well until he cheated on me with *her*, and now he’s getting married to a vengeance demon *I* summoned. I can’t do anything right except have these blinding visions.
Fred- But, she and Tara seem-
Cordy- Yeah, well, you never know. My best friend Harmony turned into a vampire and tried to kill me. People from Sunnydale are weird.
Fred- You’re from Sunnydale.
Cordy- Yeah and I got visions, baby.

Wesley knocks on a door but doesn’t wait for an answer. He enters. Tara jumps off Willow, and falls to the floor with a loud thump.

Wes- AHH!!!
Willow- Wesley!
Tara- Ow…
Wes- (covers his eyes with his hand) Dreadfully sorry. Didn’t see a thing. Sorry. (backs out)

Wesley sighs after shutting the door. Gunn is outside smiling.

Gunn- Not even a little peek?

Wes rolls his eyes.

Willow reaches down to Tara.
Willow- Are you ok?
Tara- Rug burn. (Willow starts to laugh re: her smile and laughter) I love that. I love you.
Willow- (tearing up again) I love you, Tara. In this world and beyond.

Gunn and Wesley. Walking down the stairs.
Wes- I guess I’ll have to go talk to Faith alone.
Gunn- Faith? The other Slayer? Isn’t she in jail?
Wes- Yes.
Gunn- Then why talk to her?
Wes- She’s the final Slayer.

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chapter 2
notes: waring! cliffhanger. as usal... hehe... i’m a weevil faerie otter princess and i do what i wish.
Dedicated to Ruth. I don’t know ya that well but I know you love Faith. so here ya go, just a taste of what's to come....


At the prison.

Faith enters the cubicle. Sees Wesley and Gunn standing stoically behind him.

Faith- (grabs phone) Way to go, Wes. Finally got a boyfriend, huh?
Wesley- Faith...
Faith- Sorry. Just a little nervous. Mid-night rondevouz. Must be important.
Wesley- I’m afraid it is.
Faith- So, spill. (worried) Is it Angel?
Wesley- No, its not.
Faith- So? Come man I’m growing old here.
Wesley- I don’t know how to say this-
Faith- (sternly) Just say it.
Wesley- Buffy... (he can’t finish, can’t look at her either)
Faith- (beat, takes this in) No. You’re lying.
Wesley- I wish I were.
Faith- (drops the phone and suddenly stands up, punches the bulletproof glass. it rips but doesn’t break) No! No! (keeps punching the glass as the guard tries to restrain her) Liar! (Faith starts to cry as she struggles with the guard. a second one tries to hold her back) No! Wesley!

Wesley places his hand on the glass, he’s reaching out to her. But they drag her off.

Gunn- So, that’s Faith huh? I thought Angel said she was doing better.
Wesley- This is better. She didn’t beat up the guards.
Gunn- (looking at the glass) One more punch and this thing is just about ready to shatter. (at that the window shatters) Or not.
Wesley- We need to speak to Angel at once.
Gunn- He’s with the tv alien demon thing.
Wesley- Let’s go find him.

At the hotel. Willow goes to Cordy. Cordy is by the front desk, at the computer station.

Willow- Cordelia?
Cordy- Willow.
W- How are you feeling?
Cordy- A little better. Thank you... How are you? (Willow shrugs her shoulders) I just want you to know that even though I hated all of you in high school, I really didn’t. (Willow nods and looks as if she’s about to cry) I didn’t take what you people were doing seriously and now that I fight the good fight- let’s just say I have a new respect for you Scoobies. And I’m really sorry for the hell I put you through. Let me just tell you all that bad karma is kicking me in the butt right now.
Willow- (smirks) How’d you get your visions?
C- Doyle. He was a half demon. Worked with us for a while and then... (gets lost in her memories)
W- Why are you dressed like Princess Leia?
C- Long, long story. Where’s Fred?
W- She and Tara went to get tacos. That Fred girl seems a bit obsessed with them.
C- I hope they don’t go to joint two blocks down.
W- Why not?
C- I didn’t see Gunn or Wesley for hours after they ate there once.
W- Oh.

Angel, Wesley and Gunn enter the hotel.

Wesley- That is impossible, Angel. Buffy was reinstated to the Watchers Council. Faith has not. She is not an official Slayer anymore.
Angel- She is the only Slayer they’ve got.
Wesley- Wrong. You know very well there are others in training right now. One is being called to her destiny as we speak.
Angel- The only way for a new Slayer to be called is if the last one dies. Faith is the last one.
C- Stop all the shouting! I haven’t fully recovered from my vision yet.
Wesley- Angel, I was a Watcher with the Council. I know the rules. Faith needs to be taken out.
Willow- (shocked) You cant kill her!
Wesley- (just as shocked) What?! (explaining) Out of prison, Willow.
W- Oh.
Angel- (concerned he doesn’t see Fred) Where’s Fred?
W- She’s with Tara.
Angel- Oh. Ok.
C- So, is anyone going to tell me what happened? What did she say?
Wesley- Well-
Gunn- Not much. Just punched out a bulletproof panel.
C- Wow. Guessing the Slayer strength still there.
W- But- What else?
Wesley- She didn’t believe me.
W- Maybe- I don’t know. Should I?
Angel- No. Definitely not. She’ll need a couple of days to digest.
Gunn- She’ll probably want to kill somethings too.
Wesley- She is ticking time bomb in there, Angel. You know that. We need to help her now.
Angel- Well, then maybe someone shouldn’t have told her just yet.
Wesley- Hey-
W- Stop! (separates them off like Xander and Spike)
C- (impressed) Go, Willow!
W- None of this is helping anyone.
Wesley- (a bit upset) Well what is it you suppose we do, Willow?
Gunn- Hey, man, don’t piss her off. She can probably turn you into a cockroach or something.
Willow- I think we all need to rest, Welsey. We’ll think of something in the morning.
Cordelia- (screams) No! (another vision grips her)
Gunn- (runs to her) Another one?
Angel- It’s too soon!
Cordy- (crying in pain) Willow!
Wesley- What? What is it?
Cordy- Tara and Fred.

TBC....

[This message has been edited by Rane (edited June 09, 2001).]

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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Catwoman » Fri Jun 08, 2001 11:57 pm

Oh no! What happens next, i *need* to know now!!! Great fic by the way
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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby xita » Sat Jun 09, 2001 12:35 am

Oh god, you tease Geez, I love cliff hangers Don't take long please.
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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby karenk » Sat Jun 09, 2001 1:04 am

I should really learn to control myself and stop reading stuff that has a cliffhanger warning... arghhhh...

I hope there's gonna be more soon... please?

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posted June 09, 2001 10:46            
Nice to see chapter 2. Now I have to see chapter 3 pronto!

"Bad karma's kicking me in the butt!"

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posted June 09, 2001 11:06               
Great story Rane.

Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

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posted June 09, 2001 11:49               
Rane you are amazing. Love the story
Now...when is the next part...it's killing me!

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posted June 09, 2001 13:40               
it will be posted either today or tomorrow! i will not leave the cliffhanger for too long. i'm including sunnydale things so it's a bit hard. but i promise this will not be left like my velvet web series. i'm really just stumped there. hugs!

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posted June 09, 2001 13:53               
*Jumps around room like an idiot*

Thanks Rane!!!!
{{{HUGS}}}

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posted June 09, 2001 15:06               

Rane. You rule. And you've left me hanging, so I'm gonna have to wait for the next part, huh? I kept catching myself tearing up . . . *sniffle*

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posted June 09, 2001 15:45               
ok, just had to post this before going to the beach. it's part three and very short but i didn't want to keep the cliffhanger dangling like that. i hope you all like the twist cause i think it's funny. not funny haha but funny like you think one thing is going to happen and then something else completely. i hope you dont think it sucks.

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Chapter 3

Sunnydale:

Xander and Anya arrive at their apt. Anya is wearing a cast and a bandage over her forehead. She sits on the couch as Xander settles the overnight bag by the kitchen.

Xander- Are you comfortable? Need anything?
Anya- Yes, and no.
Xander- Good.

Xander goes over and sits with her.

Anya- Tara. Where’s Tara.
Xander- Huh? She went to LA with Willow.
Anya- How is she doing?
Xander- (sighs) Will is Will. She’s a strong little toaster.
Anya- I meant Tara.
Xander- Oh. Fine, I guess. At least she’s back. I don’t know, Ahn. I didn’t really ask her at the funeral.
Anya- I’m thinking she should be my Maid of Honor. She’s kinda my only friend here. Or anywhere for that matter. When I was reading those books about children I read about the wedding traditions humans have. A Maid of Honor is one of them.
Xander- Wow. Um, yeah.
Anya- I figure Willow will be your Best Man.
Xander- Will’s a girl.
Anya- So what? We can break tradition. Giles can even perform the ceremony.
Xander- Ahn, I really don’t think this is the time to be-
Anya- Well if I don’t think about that I think of Buffy. And I don’t want to think of Buffy. I mean I do, but not- I’m sorry she died. Like Dawn said she saved the world a lot. And I like this world and I’m glad she saved it again cause now you and I can get married and grow old together and have lots of babies. Well, babies first and then grow old. But then I think I’m being selfish because-
Xander- She was the selfish one.
Anya- (eyes wide) How can you say that? She sacrificed herself for her sister. For all of us.
Xander- She didn’t have to.

Spike in his crypt. He’s got the Buffy bot and a bunch of books sprawled around his *living* room. He’s trying to re-attach her head.

Spike- And what bloody wire would that be? Frikkin’ book might as well be written in Chinese for all I understand. Wait, I know Chinese.
Dawn- (by the door) Chinese is not a language. It’s actually a bunch of different dialects.
Spike- (surprised, stands in front of the bot body) Nibblet.
Dawn- What are you doing?
Spike- What are *you* doing?
Dawn- I needed to get out of there... Why do you have the bot?
Spike- I’m trying to fix her up. For you.
Dawn- Isn’t that a little incestuous?
Spike- (smirks) Red deprogrammed that. I mean, no. I meant... I’m trying to bring her back.
Dawn- Buffy’s dead. There is no coming back. I learned that with mom.
Spike- Dawn...
Dawn- My father is coming to pick me up next week. Can you believe that? Someone actually got in touch with him. It only took two deaths. And not that he’s my father anyway.
Spike- (is speechless) Maybe it’s for the better. You should leave this Hellhole.
Dawn- Why haven’t you?
Spike- Maybe I will.

Back in LA.

Willow- What about Tara?! What’s going on?
C- Down the street. Fred’s puking. Ugh! I can smell it!
Gunn- Why would you get a vision about that?
C- Big, yucky demon behind them.
Angel- I’m on it.
Wesley- Me too.
Gunn- Three.
Willow- Four.

Wesley and Gunn go ahead. Angel turns to Willow.

Angel- Willow, stay here.
Willow- No! My life is out there.
C- (not hearing her properly) Your wife?!
Willow- Life! She’s my life! Angel!
Angel- No.
C- Trust him Willow and get me another ice pack. Please.

Willow relents and does as she is told.

Later.

Tara, Willow, Angel, Wesley are sitting around. Gunn is with Cordy and Fred upstairs.

Tara- A demon?
Wesley- It must have seen us and ran away.
Angel- It doesn’t make sense. What were you two doing?
Tara- Just talking. Fred ate a taco on the walk over and then it hit her.
Willow- A demon?
Tara- No, the food poisoning.
Willow- So where was the demon?
Tara- There was no demon.
Wesley- (feeling like he’s being ignored) Like I said, it must have seen us coming.
Willow- (to Angel) Could Cordy be wrong? Maybe it’s something in the future.
Angel- That is what the visions are.
Willow- Oh.
Wesley- She’s getting worse, Angel. We need to do something.
Willow- What do you mean?
Angel- Those visions are too powerful for a human body to endure. Cordy's been getting weaker and her hangovers are lasting longer.
Willow- Maybe we can help.
Wesley- How?
Willow- Magick.
Tara- Willow, no.
Willow- Why not? I’m sure I can find a spell that’ll help Cordelia.
Tara- No. No more magick.
Willow- What? Magick is what brought you back to me.
Tara- Magick is what almost killed you.
Angel- Ok. Obviously this is a private conversation that doesn’t require us. I’m going to go check up on the girls. (he gets up and begins to walk away)
Wes- (very interested) What level of magick are you at, Willow?
Angel- Wesley...
Wesley- (stands up) Right. Lets go.

Willow turns to Tara.

Willow- What was all that about?
Tara- (cant look at her) I-I dont want you doing any s-spells for a while.
Willow- What?! Why? Tara. (gently hold her face up to her)
Tara- (about to cry) When Dawn- When she mentioned what you did to Glory after- It broke my heart. I can’t lose you, Willow. I can’t.
Willow- How would you lose me, baby? Besides, I told you I’ll always find you.
Tara- No. You need to control yourself. The quickest way for you to fix things is through magick. Thats not right. You know the rules, Willow.
Willow- You would have rather I left you like that? You’re insane. (realizes what she’s said) I mean-
Tara- I know what you mean. And I’m not talking about me. I’m talking about what you did to Glory. In her apartment.
Willow- (small) I had to make her suffer.
Tara- I know. But I would rather live in a thousand black holes than- (starts to cry) Willow.
Willow- (holds her) Oh, baby. We’ll be ok. I promise.

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posted June 09, 2001 16:02               
Oooooh. Rane! You posted!!! More, I mean! You posted more!!!

I do like the twist, and I love what you're doing with the integration of Fred. Glad to see you're having Tara address Willow's use of magick lately, love the Spike/Dawn interaction, happy that you're dealing with the recent repercussions of Cordy's visions.

It's sweet to see Anya acknowledge Tara as a friend, and I love that you brought the suggestion of Willow as Xander's best man into it! The conversation between Xander and Anya is poignant, and it's kind of nice (in a sad way) to see at least one of them confronting the notion that Buffy's death might have been considered selfish. Worried about Dawn now--is she really going to go away with Hank?

And some good old W/T talking and snuggling to end the section . . . thank you, Rane. Good stuff.

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posted June 09, 2001 18:47            
This is getting better and better for the better... more please!

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posted June 09, 2001 19:53               
aw, all you kittens make me purr!

shanie, i suck at action so i simply cut it out. glad you liked the non-demon attacking twist.

i'll post more as soon as i write more.

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posted June 09, 2001 22:36               
Rane, I suck at action as well. But I loved this tiny part. I can't wait to see where this goes. I like that Willow and Tara are having the magick conversation, they have to deal with that.

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posted June 10, 2001 01:06               
Chapter 4. for ed wood. =)
feedback welcome cause i'm writing for new characters i've never written for.

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Next day. Morning. Wesley and Gunn are out. Angel is sleeping and Tara and Cordy are making coffee downstairs.

Tara- H-how are you feeling?
Cordy- Like a Mac truck ran me over. No, actually, it just ran over my head.
Tara- I’m- I’m sorry. Did you take a Tylenol?
Cordy- If I take one more it may be considered attempted suicide. (typical Cordelia) How long have you and Willow been going out?

Fred knocks on Willow’s door. She’s wearing Cordelias Sunnydale High sweater and a skirt that doesn’t match.

Fred- Hi.
Willow- Hey. Good morning, Fred.
Fred- Morning. They’re going to make some breakfast. You coming? (Willow nods as she brushes her hair) You know, this reality for only having one sun it’s pretty bright in the morning. Or maybe it’s just ‘cause I’m used to waking up in my cave.
Willow- (confused) What?
Fred- (giggles uncontrollably) Your face is funny.
Willow- I do not have a funny face.

Willow and Fred go downstairs. Tara is giggling at a story Cordy is telling her.

Cordy- And then Willow had- (sees Willow) Uh. Hey! Good morning.
Willow- (knows something is up) Hi. (kisses Tara) What’s going on?
Tara- (giggling) She was just telling me about the time that time Xander put gum in your hair and Cordy said she’d cut it out for you except she- um, it was funny when you w-weren’t in the room.
Willow- (not too amused) Really?
Cordy- I’m showing her our yearbook pictures next. They are about the only thing no one bought at the auction.
Willow- Don’t you dare, Cordelia!
Fred- (looking at the stove) Can we make enchiladas for breakfast? But not with bark. Those don’t taste too good.
Cordelia- Oh my god! Haven’t you had enough Mexican for at least a year? Maybe two?
Tara- (to Will) I’d like to see you in elementary school.
Willow- I’ve shown you pictures.
Tara- Yeah but yearbooks are different. They catch you at your worst time.
Willow- Tare Bear, no. (whining) Please.
Cordy- Tare Bear?
Willow- Only I can call her that.
Cordy- Whatever. As if.
Fred- Care Bears! I remember Care Bears and cloud cars! I remember! And the lion bear and the sun bear and... Some other bears...
Cordy- Uh, ok? Did you puke your brain out last night?
Willow- Well, duh.
Cordy- I was literally speaking. (rolls her eyes) I mean, speaking literally. I need another Tylenol.
Willow- You haven’t changed a bit have you, Cordelia?
Cordy- Oh I so have missy! You’re not the only one that’s changed since high school.
Willow- Oh, you’re gay now too?

Cordy is about to say something but another voice interrupts.

Lorne- (walking in) Since when did this hotel become a brothel full of cackling chicks? Hot ones too I might add.
Cordy- (to Lorne) Oh, shut up!
Tara- (jumps behind Willow) Demon!
Fred- Oh, that’s no demon. That’s just Lorne. He’s from the Deathwok Clan.
Willow- Sounds friendly.
Lorne- (walks over to Willow and Tara) And who might you be beautiful?
Willow- Willow.
Lorne- I know who you are, Red. (reaches out for Tara) I meant this one.
Tara- T-Tara.
Lorne- Is that with one T or two? (kisses her hand) The pleasure is all mine.

Fred giggles.

Willow- Hey, this is my girlfriend you are flirting with. And how do you know who I am?
Lorne- I saw you when Angel sang once. You were Buffy’s best friend.
Willow- (both hurt by the mentioning of Buffy’s name and not understanding) What?
Cordy- He reads your soul and tells you your destiny when you sing kareoki at his bar. That’s his demonic power.
Willow- (not believing her) And Angel sang kareoki?
Cordy- (duh) Yeah. We all did.
Willow- Maybe, you have changed.
Lorne- I know this is a little early for his grumpyness but have him swing by the club tonight. I may have some information for him. (he’s about to leave but stops) And you my precious blonde goddess are certainly welcome to come. I’ll sing a medley just for you.

Tara is blushing so hard she just nods while biting her lower lip trying to hide her smile.

Willow- (bitter)We’re leaving today. Sorry.
Lorne- Sunnydale doesn’t need you right now, darling. Come by tonight and we’ll chat. Ta-ta.

end for now....

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posted June 10, 2001 01:14               
Whaaaaaaaaaaagh! *sobs* This was so good! Write more.

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posted June 10, 2001 01:42               
"Rane", more please your fics are sooo good, Its really funny how you made Lorne flirt with Tara and Willow got all jealous, LOL very funny.

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posted June 10, 2001 02:29               
Oh geez this is great! Darn you Rane.. write faster Lorne is great. Who will sing!! oooh yes

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posted June 10, 2001 02:53               
hey, rane~

this is both funny and touching. i esp like the interaction between fred and willow- they're both so quirky it gave me giggles. (gee, i wish i had a sense of humor! snif.) i like your lorne/tara scene, too.

it's interesting that i'm going in a totally different direction starting from exactly the same point. i haven't brought willow back in yet...but soon. i can't get that look out of my mind.

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posted June 10, 2001 03:27               
quote:
Originally posted by Rane:
Cordy- Oh I so have missy! You’re not the only one that’s changed since high school.
Willow- Oh, you’re gay now too?

Cordy- Yes. I've got 1000 posts at a website called 'the kitten board'.

I'm loving this fic Rane

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posted June 10, 2001 03:38               
Wow, two in one day . . . I feel so spoiled now.

Loving all the character interaction, Rane, I think you're doing a fantastic job.

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posted June 10, 2001 08:02               
OMG -This is sooo incredibly good!
I love your fics.
Am anxiously awaiting more!!
Please????

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posted June 10, 2001 12:22               
Rane this is great...(ok that sounded to tony the tiger-y for my own good)

i dont watch angel so i dont really know those characters (i just started watching buffy to so...) and you write them good. i mean not like id notice if anything were to be wrong...dont know the characters besides what ive read about em, and the few shots of angel ive seen...(ive watched the crossovers)

yeah write more please this is going great!?

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posted June 10, 2001 12:44               
Cool. Really, really cool.

And I like how you catch the off-beatedness (is that a word?) of the characters.

Looking forward to more.

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posted June 09, 2001 10:46            
Nice to see chapter 2. Now I have to see chapter 3 pronto!

"Bad karma's kicking me in the butt!"

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Great story Rane.

Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

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Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

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Rane you are amazing. Love the story
Now...when is the next part...it's killing me!

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Now...when is the next part...it's killing me!
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posted June 09, 2001 13:40               
it will be posted either today or tomorrow! i will not leave the cliffhanger for too long. i'm including sunnydale things so it's a bit hard. but i promise this will not be left like my velvet web series. i'm really just stumped there. hugs!

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posted June 09, 2001 13:53               
*Jumps around room like an idiot*

Thanks Rane!!!!
{{{HUGS}}}

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Thanks Rane!!!!
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Rane. You rule. And you've left me hanging, so I'm gonna have to wait for the next part, huh? I kept catching myself tearing up . . . *sniffle*

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Rane. You rule. And you've left me hanging, so I'm gonna have to wait for the next part, huh? I kept catching myself tearing up . . . *sniffle*
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ok, just had to post this before going to the beach. it's part three and very short but i didn't want to keep the cliffhanger dangling like that. i hope you all like the twist cause i think it's funny. not funny haha but funny like you think one thing is going to happen and then something else completely. i hope you dont think it sucks.

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Chapter 3

Sunnydale:

Xander and Anya arrive at their apt. Anya is wearing a cast and a bandage over her forehead. She sits on the couch as Xander settles the overnight bag by the kitchen.

Xander- Are you comfortable? Need anything?
Anya- Yes, and no.
Xander- Good.

Xander goes over and sits with her.

Anya- Tara. Where’s Tara.
Xander- Huh? She went to LA with Willow.
Anya- How is she doing?
Xander- (sighs) Will is Will. She’s a strong little toaster.
Anya- I meant Tara.
Xander- Oh. Fine, I guess. At least she’s back. I don’t know, Ahn. I didn’t really ask her at the funeral.
Anya- I’m thinking she should be my Maid of Honor. She’s kinda my only friend here. Or anywhere for that matter. When I was reading those books about children I read about the wedding traditions humans have. A Maid of Honor is one of them.
Xander- Wow. Um, yeah.
Anya- I figure Willow will be your Best Man.
Xander- Will’s a girl.
Anya- So what? We can break tradition. Giles can even perform the ceremony.
Xander- Ahn, I really don’t think this is the time to be-
Anya- Well if I don’t think about that I think of Buffy. And I don’t want to think of Buffy. I mean I do, but not- I’m sorry she died. Like Dawn said she saved the world a lot. And I like this world and I’m glad she saved it again cause now you and I can get married and grow old together and have lots of babies. Well, babies first and then grow old. But then I think I’m being selfish because-
Xander- She was the selfish one.
Anya- (eyes wide) How can you say that? She sacrificed herself for her sister. For all of us.
Xander- She didn’t have to.

Spike in his crypt. He’s got the Buffy bot and a bunch of books sprawled around his *living* room. He’s trying to re-attach her head.

Spike- And what bloody wire would that be? Frikkin’ book might as well be written in Chinese for all I understand. Wait, I know Chinese.
Dawn- (by the door) Chinese is not a language. It’s actually a bunch of different dialects.
Spike- (surprised, stands in front of the bot body) Nibblet.
Dawn- What are you doing?
Spike- What are *you* doing?
Dawn- I needed to get out of there... Why do you have the bot?
Spike- I’m trying to fix her up. For you.
Dawn- Isn’t that a little incestuous?
Spike- (smirks) Red deprogrammed that. I mean, no. I meant... I’m trying to bring her back.
Dawn- Buffy’s dead. There is no coming back. I learned that with mom.
Spike- Dawn...
Dawn- My father is coming to pick me up next week. Can you believe that? Someone actually got in touch with him. It only took two deaths. And not that he’s my father anyway.
Spike- (is speechless) Maybe it’s for the better. You should leave this Hellhole.
Dawn- Why haven’t you?
Spike- Maybe I will.

Back in LA.

Willow- What about Tara?! What’s going on?
C- Down the street. Fred’s puking. Ugh! I can smell it!
Gunn- Why would you get a vision about that?
C- Big, yucky demon behind them.
Angel- I’m on it.
Wesley- Me too.
Gunn- Three.
Willow- Four.

Wesley and Gunn go ahead. Angel turns to Willow.

Angel- Willow, stay here.
Willow- No! My life is out there.
C- (not hearing her properly) Your wife?!
Willow- Life! She’s my life! Angel!
Angel- No.
C- Trust him Willow and get me another ice pack. Please.

Willow relents and does as she is told.

Later.

Tara, Willow, Angel, Wesley are sitting around. Gunn is with Cordy and Fred upstairs.

Tara- A demon?
Wesley- It must have seen us and ran away.
Angel- It doesn’t make sense. What were you two doing?
Tara- Just talking. Fred ate a taco on the walk over and then it hit her.
Willow- A demon?
Tara- No, the food poisoning.
Willow- So where was the demon?
Tara- There was no demon.
Wesley- (feeling like he’s being ignored) Like I said, it must have seen us coming.
Willow- (to Angel) Could Cordy be wrong? Maybe it’s something in the future.
Angel- That is what the visions are.
Willow- Oh.
Wesley- She’s getting worse, Angel. We need to do something.
Willow- What do you mean?
Angel- Those visions are too powerful for a human body to endure. Cordy's been getting weaker and her hangovers are lasting longer.
Willow- Maybe we can help.
Wesley- How?
Willow- Magick.
Tara- Willow, no.
Willow- Why not? I’m sure I can find a spell that’ll help Cordelia.
Tara- No. No more magick.
Willow- What? Magick is what brought you back to me.
Tara- Magick is what almost killed you.
Angel- Ok. Obviously this is a private conversation that doesn’t require us. I’m going to go check up on the girls. (he gets up and begins to walk away)
Wes- (very interested) What level of magick are you at, Willow?
Angel- Wesley...
Wesley- (stands up) Right. Lets go.

Willow turns to Tara.

Willow- What was all that about?
Tara- (cant look at her) I-I dont want you doing any s-spells for a while.
Willow- What?! Why? Tara. (gently hold her face up to her)
Tara- (about to cry) When Dawn- When she mentioned what you did to Glory after- It broke my heart. I can’t lose you, Willow. I can’t.
Willow- How would you lose me, baby? Besides, I told you I’ll always find you.
Tara- No. You need to control yourself. The quickest way for you to fix things is through magick. Thats not right. You know the rules, Willow.
Willow- You would have rather I left you like that? You’re insane. (realizes what she’s said) I mean-
Tara- I know what you mean. And I’m not talking about me. I’m talking about what you did to Glory. In her apartment.
Willow- (small) I had to make her suffer.
Tara- I know. But I would rather live in a thousand black holes than- (starts to cry) Willow.
Willow- (holds her) Oh, baby. We’ll be ok. I promise.

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Chapter 3

Sunnydale:

Xander and Anya arrive at their apt. Anya is wearing a cast and a bandage over her forehead. She sits on the couch as Xander settles the overnight bag by the kitchen.

Xander- Are you comfortable? Need anything?
Anya- Yes, and no.
Xander- Good.

Xander goes over and sits with her.

Anya- Tara. Where’s Tara.
Xander- Huh? She went to LA with Willow.
Anya- How is she doing?
Xander- (sighs) Will is Will. She’s a strong little toaster.
Anya- I meant Tara.
Xander- Oh. Fine, I guess. At least she’s back. I don’t know, Ahn. I didn’t really ask her at the funeral.
Anya- I’m thinking she should be my Maid of Honor. She’s kinda my only friend here. Or anywhere for that matter. When I was reading those books about children I read about the wedding traditions humans have. A Maid of Honor is one of them.
Xander- Wow. Um, yeah.
Anya- I figure Willow will be your Best Man.
Xander- Will’s a girl.
Anya- So what? We can break tradition. Giles can even perform the ceremony.
Xander- Ahn, I really don’t think this is the time to be-
Anya- Well if I don’t think about that I think of Buffy. And I don’t want to think of Buffy. I mean I do, but not- I’m sorry she died. Like Dawn said she saved the world a lot. And I like this world and I’m glad she saved it again cause now you and I can get married and grow old together and have lots of babies. Well, babies first and then grow old. But then I think I’m being selfish because-
Xander- She was the selfish one.
Anya- (eyes wide) How can you say that? She sacrificed herself for her sister. For all of us.
Xander- She didn’t have to.

Spike in his crypt. He’s got the Buffy bot and a bunch of books sprawled around his *living* room. He’s trying to re-attach her head.

Spike- And what bloody wire would that be? Frikkin’ book might as well be written in Chinese for all I understand. Wait, I know Chinese.
Dawn- (by the door) Chinese is not a language. It’s actually a bunch of different dialects.
Spike- (surprised, stands in front of the bot body) Nibblet.
Dawn- What are you doing?
Spike- What are *you* doing?
Dawn- I needed to get out of there... Why do you have the bot?
Spike- I’m trying to fix her up. For you.
Dawn- Isn’t that a little incestuous?
Spike- (smirks) Red deprogrammed that. I mean, no. I meant... I’m trying to bring her back.
Dawn- Buffy’s dead. There is no coming back. I learned that with mom.
Spike- Dawn...
Dawn- My father is coming to pick me up next week. Can you believe that? Someone actually got in touch with him. It only took two deaths. And not that he’s my father anyway.
Spike- (is speechless) Maybe it’s for the better. You should leave this Hellhole.
Dawn- Why haven’t you?
Spike- Maybe I will.

Back in LA.

Willow- What about Tara?! What’s going on?
C- Down the street. Fred’s puking. Ugh! I can smell it!
Gunn- Why would you get a vision about that?
C- Big, yucky demon behind them.
Angel- I’m on it.
Wesley- Me too.
Gunn- Three.
Willow- Four.

Wesley and Gunn go ahead. Angel turns to Willow.

Angel- Willow, stay here.
Willow- No! My life is out there.
C- (not hearing her properly) Your wife?!
Willow- Life! She’s my life! Angel!
Angel- No.
C- Trust him Willow and get me another ice pack. Please.

Willow relents and does as she is told.

Later.

Tara, Willow, Angel, Wesley are sitting around. Gunn is with Cordy and Fred upstairs.

Tara- A demon?
Wesley- It must have seen us and ran away.
Angel- It doesn’t make sense. What were you two doing?
Tara- Just talking. Fred ate a taco on the walk over and then it hit her.
Willow- A demon?
Tara- No, the food poisoning.
Willow- So where was the demon?
Tara- There was no demon.
Wesley- (feeling like he’s being ignored) Like I said, it must have seen us coming.
Willow- (to Angel) Could Cordy be wrong? Maybe it’s something in the future.
Angel- That is what the visions are.
Willow- Oh.
Wesley- She’s getting worse, Angel. We need to do something.
Willow- What do you mean?
Angel- Those visions are too powerful for a human body to endure. Cordy's been getting weaker and her hangovers are lasting longer.
Willow- Maybe we can help.
Wesley- How?
Willow- Magick.
Tara- Willow, no.
Willow- Why not? I’m sure I can find a spell that’ll help Cordelia.
Tara- No. No more magick.
Willow- What? Magick is what brought you back to me.
Tara- Magick is what almost killed you.
Angel- Ok. Obviously this is a private conversation that doesn’t require us. I’m going to go check up on the girls. (he gets up and begins to walk away)
Wes- (very interested) What level of magick are you at, Willow?
Angel- Wesley...
Wesley- (stands up) Right. Lets go.

Willow turns to Tara.

Willow- What was all that about?
Tara- (cant look at her) I-I dont want you doing any s-spells for a while.
Willow- What?! Why? Tara. (gently hold her face up to her)
Tara- (about to cry) When Dawn- When she mentioned what you did to Glory after- It broke my heart. I can’t lose you, Willow. I can’t.
Willow- How would you lose me, baby? Besides, I told you I’ll always find you.
Tara- No. You need to control yourself. The quickest way for you to fix things is through magick. Thats not right. You know the rules, Willow.
Willow- You would have rather I left you like that? You’re insane. (realizes what she’s said) I mean-
Tara- I know what you mean. And I’m not talking about me. I’m talking about what you did to Glory. In her apartment.
Willow- (small) I had to make her suffer.
Tara- I know. But I would rather live in a thousand black holes than- (starts to cry) Willow.
Willow- (holds her) Oh, baby. We’ll be ok. I promise.

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Oooooh. Rane! You posted!!! More, I mean! You posted more!!!

I do like the twist, and I love what you're doing with the integration of Fred. Glad to see you're having Tara address Willow's use of magick lately, love the Spike/Dawn interaction, happy that you're dealing with the recent repercussions of Cordy's visions.

It's sweet to see Anya acknowledge Tara as a friend, and I love that you brought the suggestion of Willow as Xander's best man into it! The conversation between Xander and Anya is poignant, and it's kind of nice (in a sad way) to see at least one of them confronting the notion that Buffy's death might have been considered selfish. Worried about Dawn now--is she really going to go away with Hank?

And some good old W/T talking and snuggling to end the section . . . thank you, Rane. Good stuff.

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posted June 09, 2001 16:02                Oooooh. Rane! You posted!!! More, I mean! You posted more!!!

I do like the twist, and I love what you're doing with the integration of Fred. Glad to see you're having Tara address Willow's use of magick lately, love the Spike/Dawn interaction, happy that you're dealing with the recent repercussions of Cordy's visions.

It's sweet to see Anya acknowledge Tara as a friend, and I love that you brought the suggestion of Willow as Xander's best man into it! The conversation between Xander and Anya is poignant, and it's kind of nice (in a sad way) to see at least one of them confronting the notion that Buffy's death might have been considered selfish. Worried about Dawn now--is she really going to go away with Hank?

And some good old W/T talking and snuggling to end the section . . . thank you, Rane. Good stuff.
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This is getting better and better for the better... more please!

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posted June 09, 2001 19:53               
aw, all you kittens make me purr!

shanie, i suck at action so i simply cut it out. glad you liked the non-demon attacking twist.

i'll post more as soon as i write more.

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shanie, i suck at action so i simply cut it out. glad you liked the non-demon attacking twist.

i'll post more as soon as i write more.
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Rane, I suck at action as well. But I loved this tiny part. I can't wait to see where this goes. I like that Willow and Tara are having the magick conversation, they have to deal with that.

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Chapter 4. for ed wood. =)
feedback welcome cause i'm writing for new characters i've never written for.

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Next day. Morning. Wesley and Gunn are out. Angel is sleeping and Tara and Cordy are making coffee downstairs.

Tara- H-how are you feeling?
Cordy- Like a Mac truck ran me over. No, actually, it just ran over my head.
Tara- I’m- I’m sorry. Did you take a Tylenol?
Cordy- If I take one more it may be considered attempted suicide. (typical Cordelia) How long have you and Willow been going out?

Fred knocks on Willow’s door. She’s wearing Cordelias Sunnydale High sweater and a skirt that doesn’t match.

Fred- Hi.
Willow- Hey. Good morning, Fred.
Fred- Morning. They’re going to make some breakfast. You coming? (Willow nods as she brushes her hair) You know, this reality for only having one sun it’s pretty bright in the morning. Or maybe it’s just ‘cause I’m used to waking up in my cave.
Willow- (confused) What?
Fred- (giggles uncontrollably) Your face is funny.
Willow- I do not have a funny face.

Willow and Fred go downstairs. Tara is giggling at a story Cordy is telling her.

Cordy- And then Willow had- (sees Willow) Uh. Hey! Good morning.
Willow- (knows something is up) Hi. (kisses Tara) What’s going on?
Tara- (giggling) She was just telling me about the time that time Xander put gum in your hair and Cordy said she’d cut it out for you except she- um, it was funny when you w-weren’t in the room.
Willow- (not too amused) Really?
Cordy- I’m showing her our yearbook pictures next. They are about the only thing no one bought at the auction.
Willow- Don’t you dare, Cordelia!
Fred- (looking at the stove) Can we make enchiladas for breakfast? But not with bark. Those don’t taste too good.
Cordelia- Oh my god! Haven’t you had enough Mexican for at least a year? Maybe two?
Tara- (to Will) I’d like to see you in elementary school.
Willow- I’ve shown you pictures.
Tara- Yeah but yearbooks are different. They catch you at your worst time.
Willow- Tare Bear, no. (whining) Please.
Cordy- Tare Bear?
Willow- Only I can call her that.
Cordy- Whatever. As if.
Fred- Care Bears! I remember Care Bears and cloud cars! I remember! And the lion bear and the sun bear and... Some other bears...
Cordy- Uh, ok? Did you puke your brain out last night?
Willow- Well, duh.
Cordy- I was literally speaking. (rolls her eyes) I mean, speaking literally. I need another Tylenol.
Willow- You haven’t changed a bit have you, Cordelia?
Cordy- Oh I so have missy! You’re not the only one that’s changed since high school.
Willow- Oh, you’re gay now too?

Cordy is about to say something but another voice interrupts.

Lorne- (walking in) Since when did this hotel become a brothel full of cackling chicks? Hot ones too I might add.
Cordy- (to Lorne) Oh, shut up!
Tara- (jumps behind Willow) Demon!
Fred- Oh, that’s no demon. That’s just Lorne. He’s from the Deathwok Clan.
Willow- Sounds friendly.
Lorne- (walks over to Willow and Tara) And who might you be beautiful?
Willow- Willow.
Lorne- I know who you are, Red. (reaches out for Tara) I meant this one.
Tara- T-Tara.
Lorne- Is that with one T or two? (kisses her hand) The pleasure is all mine.

Fred giggles.

Willow- Hey, this is my girlfriend you are flirting with. And how do you know who I am?
Lorne- I saw you when Angel sang once. You were Buffy’s best friend.
Willow- (both hurt by the mentioning of Buffy’s name and not understanding) What?
Cordy- He reads your soul and tells you your destiny when you sing kareoki at his bar. That’s his demonic power.
Willow- (not believing her) And Angel sang kareoki?
Cordy- (duh) Yeah. We all did.
Willow- Maybe, you have changed.
Lorne- I know this is a little early for his grumpyness but have him swing by the club tonight. I may have some information for him. (he’s about to leave but stops) And you my precious blonde goddess are certainly welcome to come. I’ll sing a medley just for you.

Tara is blushing so hard she just nods while biting her lower lip trying to hide her smile.

Willow- (bitter)We’re leaving today. Sorry.
Lorne- Sunnydale doesn’t need you right now, darling. Come by tonight and we’ll chat. Ta-ta.

end for now....

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Next day. Morning. Wesley and Gunn are out. Angel is sleeping and Tara and Cordy are making coffee downstairs.

Tara- H-how are you feeling?
Cordy- Like a Mac truck ran me over. No, actually, it just ran over my head.
Tara- I’m- I’m sorry. Did you take a Tylenol?
Cordy- If I take one more it may be considered attempted suicide. (typical Cordelia) How long have you and Willow been going out?

Fred knocks on Willow’s door. She’s wearing Cordelias Sunnydale High sweater and a skirt that doesn’t match.

Fred- Hi.
Willow- Hey. Good morning, Fred.
Fred- Morning. They’re going to make some breakfast. You coming? (Willow nods as she brushes her hair) You know, this reality for only having one sun it’s pretty bright in the morning. Or maybe it’s just ‘cause I’m used to waking up in my cave.
Willow- (confused) What?
Fred- (giggles uncontrollably) Your face is funny.
Willow- I do not have a funny face.

Willow and Fred go downstairs. Tara is giggling at a story Cordy is telling her.

Cordy- And then Willow had- (sees Willow) Uh. Hey! Good morning.
Willow- (knows something is up) Hi. (kisses Tara) What’s going on?
Tara- (giggling) She was just telling me about the time that time Xander put gum in your hair and Cordy said she’d cut it out for you except she- um, it was funny when you w-weren’t in the room.
Willow- (not too amused) Really?
Cordy- I’m showing her our yearbook pictures next. They are about the only thing no one bought at the auction.
Willow- Don’t you dare, Cordelia!
Fred- (looking at the stove) Can we make enchiladas for breakfast? But not with bark. Those don’t taste too good.
Cordelia- Oh my god! Haven’t you had enough Mexican for at least a year? Maybe two?
Tara- (to Will) I’d like to see you in elementary school.
Willow- I’ve shown you pictures.
Tara- Yeah but yearbooks are different. They catch you at your worst time.
Willow- Tare Bear, no. (whining) Please.
Cordy- Tare Bear?
Willow- Only I can call her that.
Cordy- Whatever. As if.
Fred- Care Bears! I remember Care Bears and cloud cars! I remember! And the lion bear and the sun bear and... Some other bears...
Cordy- Uh, ok? Did you puke your brain out last night?
Willow- Well, duh.
Cordy- I was literally speaking. (rolls her eyes) I mean, speaking literally. I need another Tylenol.
Willow- You haven’t changed a bit have you, Cordelia?
Cordy- Oh I so have missy! You’re not the only one that’s changed since high school.
Willow- Oh, you’re gay now too?

Cordy is about to say something but another voice interrupts.

Lorne- (walking in) Since when did this hotel become a brothel full of cackling chicks? Hot ones too I might add.
Cordy- (to Lorne) Oh, shut up!
Tara- (jumps behind Willow) Demon!
Fred- Oh, that’s no demon. That’s just Lorne. He’s from the Deathwok Clan.
Willow- Sounds friendly.
Lorne- (walks over to Willow and Tara) And who might you be beautiful?
Willow- Willow.
Lorne- I know who you are, Red. (reaches out for Tara) I meant this one.
Tara- T-Tara.
Lorne- Is that with one T or two? (kisses her hand) The pleasure is all mine.

Fred giggles.

Willow- Hey, this is my girlfriend you are flirting with. And how do you know who I am?
Lorne- I saw you when Angel sang once. You were Buffy’s best friend.
Willow- (both hurt by the mentioning of Buffy’s name and not understanding) What?
Cordy- He reads your soul and tells you your destiny when you sing kareoki at his bar. That’s his demonic power.
Willow- (not believing her) And Angel sang kareoki?
Cordy- (duh) Yeah. We all did.
Willow- Maybe, you have changed.
Lorne- I know this is a little early for his grumpyness but have him swing by the club tonight. I may have some information for him. (he’s about to leave but stops) And you my precious blonde goddess are certainly welcome to come. I’ll sing a medley just for you.

Tara is blushing so hard she just nods while biting her lower lip trying to hide her smile.

Willow- (bitter)We’re leaving today. Sorry.
Lorne- Sunnydale doesn’t need you right now, darling. Come by tonight and we’ll chat. Ta-ta.

end for now....

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posted June 10, 2001 01:14               


Whaaaaaaaaaaagh! *sobs* This was so good! Write more.

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posted June 10, 2001 01:42               


"Rane", more please your fics are sooo good, Its really funny how you made Lorne flirt with Tara and Willow got all jealous, LOL very funny.

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posted June 10, 2001 01:42                "Rane", more please your fics are sooo good, Its really funny how you made Lorne flirt with Tara and Willow got all jealous, LOL very funny.

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Oh geez this is great! Darn you Rane.. write faster Lorne is great. Who will sing!! oooh yes

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posted June 10, 2001 02:53               
hey, rane~

this is both funny and touching. i esp like the interaction between fred and willow- they're both so quirky it gave me giggles. (gee, i wish i had a sense of humor! snif.) i like your lorne/tara scene, too.

it's interesting that i'm going in a totally different direction starting from exactly the same point. i haven't brought willow back in yet...but soon. i can't get that look out of my mind.

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posted June 10, 2001 02:53                hey, rane~

this is both funny and touching. i esp like the interaction between fred and willow- they're both so quirky it gave me giggles. (gee, i wish i had a sense of humor! snif.) i like your lorne/tara scene, too.

it's interesting that i'm going in a totally different direction starting from exactly the same point. i haven't brought willow back in yet...but soon. i can't get that look out of my mind.
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quote:
Originally posted by Rane:
Cordy- Oh I so have missy! You’re not the only one that’s changed since high school.
Willow- Oh, you’re gay now too?

Cordy- Yes. I've got 1000 posts at a website called 'the kitten board'.

I'm loving this fic Rane

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quote:
Originally posted by Rane:
Cordy- Oh I so have missy! You’re not the only one that’s changed since high school.
Willow- Oh, you’re gay now too?

Cordy- Yes. I've got 1000 posts at a website called 'the kitten board'.

I'm loving this fic Rane
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Wow, two in one day . . . I feel so spoiled now.

Loving all the character interaction, Rane, I think you're doing a fantastic job.

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posted June 10, 2001 03:38                Wow, two in one day . . . I feel so spoiled now.

Loving all the character interaction, Rane, I think you're doing a fantastic job.
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posted June 10, 2001 08:02               


OMG -This is sooo incredibly good!
I love your fics.
Am anxiously awaiting more!!
Please????

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posted June 10, 2001 08:02                OMG -This is sooo incredibly good!
I love your fics.
Am anxiously awaiting more!!
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posted June 10, 2001 12:22               
Rane this is great...(ok that sounded to tony the tiger-y for my own good)

i dont watch angel so i dont really know those characters (i just started watching buffy to so...) and you write them good. i mean not like id notice if anything were to be wrong...dont know the characters besides what ive read about em, and the few shots of angel ive seen...(ive watched the crossovers)

yeah write more please this is going great!?

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posted June 10, 2001 12:22                Rane this is great...(ok that sounded to tony the tiger-y for my own good)

i dont watch angel so i dont really know those characters (i just started watching buffy to so...) and you write them good. i mean not like id notice if anything were to be wrong...dont know the characters besides what ive read about em, and the few shots of angel ive seen...(ive watched the crossovers)

yeah write more please this is going great!?

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posted June 10, 2001 12:44               


Cool. Really, really cool.

And I like how you catch the off-beatedness (is that a word?) of the characters.

Looking forward to more.

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And I like how you catch the off-beatedness (is that a word?) of the characters.

Looking forward to more.

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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby CaptMurdock » Sat Jun 09, 2001 7:46 am

Nice to see chapter 2. Now I have to see chapter 3 pronto!

"Bad karma's kicking me in the butt!"

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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby AngelusUK » Sat Jun 09, 2001 8:06 am

Great story Rane.

Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Ginner » Sat Jun 09, 2001 8:49 am

Rane you are amazing. Love the story
Now...when is the next part...it's killing me!
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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Rane » Sat Jun 09, 2001 10:40 am

it will be posted either today or tomorrow! i will not leave the cliffhanger for too long. i'm including sunnydale things so it's a bit hard. but i promise this will not be left like my velvet web series. i'm really just stumped there. hugs!
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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Ginner » Sat Jun 09, 2001 10:53 am

*Jumps around room like an idiot*

Thanks Rane!!!!
{{{HUGS}}}

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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Shaniezak » Sat Jun 09, 2001 12:06 pm

Rane. You rule. And you've left me hanging, so I'm gonna have to wait for the next part, huh? I kept catching myself tearing up . . . *sniffle*

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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Rane » Sat Jun 09, 2001 12:45 pm

ok, just had to post this before going to the beach. it's part three and very short but i didn't want to keep the cliffhanger dangling like that. i hope you all like the twist cause i think it's funny. not funny haha but funny like you think one thing is going to happen and then something else completely. i hope you dont think it sucks.

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Chapter 3

Sunnydale:

Xander and Anya arrive at their apt. Anya is wearing a cast and a bandage over her forehead. She sits on the couch as Xander settles the overnight bag by the kitchen.

Xander- Are you comfortable? Need anything?
Anya- Yes, and no.
Xander- Good.

Xander goes over and sits with her.

Anya- Tara. Where’s Tara.
Xander- Huh? She went to LA with Willow.
Anya- How is she doing?
Xander- (sighs) Will is Will. She’s a strong little toaster.
Anya- I meant Tara.
Xander- Oh. Fine, I guess. At least she’s back. I don’t know, Ahn. I didn’t really ask her at the funeral.
Anya- I’m thinking she should be my Maid of Honor. She’s kinda my only friend here. Or anywhere for that matter. When I was reading those books about children I read about the wedding traditions humans have. A Maid of Honor is one of them.
Xander- Wow. Um, yeah.
Anya- I figure Willow will be your Best Man.
Xander- Will’s a girl.
Anya- So what? We can break tradition. Giles can even perform the ceremony.
Xander- Ahn, I really don’t think this is the time to be-
Anya- Well if I don’t think about that I think of Buffy. And I don’t want to think of Buffy. I mean I do, but not- I’m sorry she died. Like Dawn said she saved the world a lot. And I like this world and I’m glad she saved it again cause now you and I can get married and grow old together and have lots of babies. Well, babies first and then grow old. But then I think I’m being selfish because-
Xander- She was the selfish one.
Anya- (eyes wide) How can you say that? She sacrificed herself for her sister. For all of us.
Xander- She didn’t have to.

Spike in his crypt. He’s got the Buffy bot and a bunch of books sprawled around his *living* room. He’s trying to re-attach her head.

Spike- And what bloody wire would that be? Frikkin’ book might as well be written in Chinese for all I understand. Wait, I know Chinese.
Dawn- (by the door) Chinese is not a language. It’s actually a bunch of different dialects.
Spike- (surprised, stands in front of the bot body) Nibblet.
Dawn- What are you doing?
Spike- What are *you* doing?
Dawn- I needed to get out of there... Why do you have the bot?
Spike- I’m trying to fix her up. For you.
Dawn- Isn’t that a little incestuous?
Spike- (smirks) Red deprogrammed that. I mean, no. I meant... I’m trying to bring her back.
Dawn- Buffy’s dead. There is no coming back. I learned that with mom.
Spike- Dawn...
Dawn- My father is coming to pick me up next week. Can you believe that? Someone actually got in touch with him. It only took two deaths. And not that he’s my father anyway.
Spike- (is speechless) Maybe it’s for the better. You should leave this Hellhole.
Dawn- Why haven’t you?
Spike- Maybe I will.

Back in LA.

Willow- What about Tara?! What’s going on?
C- Down the street. Fred’s puking. Ugh! I can smell it!
Gunn- Why would you get a vision about that?
C- Big, yucky demon behind them.
Angel- I’m on it.
Wesley- Me too.
Gunn- Three.
Willow- Four.

Wesley and Gunn go ahead. Angel turns to Willow.

Angel- Willow, stay here.
Willow- No! My life is out there.
C- (not hearing her properly) Your wife?!
Willow- Life! She’s my life! Angel!
Angel- No.
C- Trust him Willow and get me another ice pack. Please.

Willow relents and does as she is told.

Later.

Tara, Willow, Angel, Wesley are sitting around. Gunn is with Cordy and Fred upstairs.

Tara- A demon?
Wesley- It must have seen us and ran away.
Angel- It doesn’t make sense. What were you two doing?
Tara- Just talking. Fred ate a taco on the walk over and then it hit her.
Willow- A demon?
Tara- No, the food poisoning.
Willow- So where was the demon?
Tara- There was no demon.
Wesley- (feeling like he’s being ignored) Like I said, it must have seen us coming.
Willow- (to Angel) Could Cordy be wrong? Maybe it’s something in the future.
Angel- That is what the visions are.
Willow- Oh.
Wesley- She’s getting worse, Angel. We need to do something.
Willow- What do you mean?
Angel- Those visions are too powerful for a human body to endure. Cordy's been getting weaker and her hangovers are lasting longer.
Willow- Maybe we can help.
Wesley- How?
Willow- Magick.
Tara- Willow, no.
Willow- Why not? I’m sure I can find a spell that’ll help Cordelia.
Tara- No. No more magick.
Willow- What? Magick is what brought you back to me.
Tara- Magick is what almost killed you.
Angel- Ok. Obviously this is a private conversation that doesn’t require us. I’m going to go check up on the girls. (he gets up and begins to walk away)
Wes- (very interested) What level of magick are you at, Willow?
Angel- Wesley...
Wesley- (stands up) Right. Lets go.

Willow turns to Tara.

Willow- What was all that about?
Tara- (cant look at her) I-I dont want you doing any s-spells for a while.
Willow- What?! Why? Tara. (gently hold her face up to her)
Tara- (about to cry) When Dawn- When she mentioned what you did to Glory after- It broke my heart. I can’t lose you, Willow. I can’t.
Willow- How would you lose me, baby? Besides, I told you I’ll always find you.
Tara- No. You need to control yourself. The quickest way for you to fix things is through magick. Thats not right. You know the rules, Willow.
Willow- You would have rather I left you like that? You’re insane. (realizes what she’s said) I mean-
Tara- I know what you mean. And I’m not talking about me. I’m talking about what you did to Glory. In her apartment.
Willow- (small) I had to make her suffer.
Tara- I know. But I would rather live in a thousand black holes than- (starts to cry) Willow.
Willow- (holds her) Oh, baby. We’ll be ok. I promise.

end... for now...


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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Shaniezak » Sat Jun 09, 2001 1:02 pm

Oooooh. Rane! You posted!!! More, I mean! You posted more!!!

I do like the twist, and I love what you're doing with the integration of Fred. Glad to see you're having Tara address Willow's use of magick lately, love the Spike/Dawn interaction, happy that you're dealing with the recent repercussions of Cordy's visions.

It's sweet to see Anya acknowledge Tara as a friend, and I love that you brought the suggestion of Willow as Xander's best man into it! The conversation between Xander and Anya is poignant, and it's kind of nice (in a sad way) to see at least one of them confronting the notion that Buffy's death might have been considered selfish. Worried about Dawn now--is she really going to go away with Hank?

And some good old W/T talking and snuggling to end the section . . . thank you, Rane. Good stuff.

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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Ed Wood » Sat Jun 09, 2001 3:47 pm

This is getting better and better for the better... more please!
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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Rane » Sat Jun 09, 2001 4:53 pm

aw, all you kittens make me purr!

shanie, i suck at action so i simply cut it out. glad you liked the non-demon attacking twist.

i'll post more as soon as i write more.

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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby xita » Sat Jun 09, 2001 7:36 pm

Rane, I suck at action as well. But I loved this tiny part. I can't wait to see where this goes. I like that Willow and Tara are having the magick conversation, they have to deal with that.
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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Rane » Sat Jun 09, 2001 10:06 pm

Chapter 4. for ed wood. =)
feedback welcome cause i'm writing for new characters i've never written for.

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Next day. Morning. Wesley and Gunn are out. Angel is sleeping and Tara and Cordy are making coffee downstairs.

Tara- H-how are you feeling?
Cordy- Like a Mac truck ran me over. No, actually, it just ran over my head.
Tara- I’m- I’m sorry. Did you take a Tylenol?
Cordy- If I take one more it may be considered attempted suicide. (typical Cordelia) How long have you and Willow been going out?

Fred knocks on Willow’s door. She’s wearing Cordelias Sunnydale High sweater and a skirt that doesn’t match.

Fred- Hi.
Willow- Hey. Good morning, Fred.
Fred- Morning. They’re going to make some breakfast. You coming? (Willow nods as she brushes her hair) You know, this reality for only having one sun it’s pretty bright in the morning. Or maybe it’s just ‘cause I’m used to waking up in my cave.
Willow- (confused) What?
Fred- (giggles uncontrollably) Your face is funny.
Willow- I do not have a funny face.

Willow and Fred go downstairs. Tara is giggling at a story Cordy is telling her.

Cordy- And then Willow had- (sees Willow) Uh. Hey! Good morning.
Willow- (knows something is up) Hi. (kisses Tara) What’s going on?
Tara- (giggling) She was just telling me about the time that time Xander put gum in your hair and Cordy said she’d cut it out for you except she- um, it was funny when you w-weren’t in the room.
Willow- (not too amused) Really?
Cordy- I’m showing her our yearbook pictures next. They are about the only thing no one bought at the auction.
Willow- Don’t you dare, Cordelia!
Fred- (looking at the stove) Can we make enchiladas for breakfast? But not with bark. Those don’t taste too good.
Cordelia- Oh my god! Haven’t you had enough Mexican for at least a year? Maybe two?
Tara- (to Will) I’d like to see you in elementary school.
Willow- I’ve shown you pictures.
Tara- Yeah but yearbooks are different. They catch you at your worst time.
Willow- Tare Bear, no. (whining) Please.
Cordy- Tare Bear?
Willow- Only I can call her that.
Cordy- Whatever. As if.
Fred- Care Bears! I remember Care Bears and cloud cars! I remember! And the lion bear and the sun bear and... Some other bears...
Cordy- Uh, ok? Did you puke your brain out last night?
Willow- Well, duh.
Cordy- I was literally speaking. (rolls her eyes) I mean, speaking literally. I need another Tylenol.
Willow- You haven’t changed a bit have you, Cordelia?
Cordy- Oh I so have missy! You’re not the only one that’s changed since high school.
Willow- Oh, you’re gay now too?

Cordy is about to say something but another voice interrupts.

Lorne- (walking in) Since when did this hotel become a brothel full of cackling chicks? Hot ones too I might add.
Cordy- (to Lorne) Oh, shut up!
Tara- (jumps behind Willow) Demon!
Fred- Oh, that’s no demon. That’s just Lorne. He’s from the Deathwok Clan.
Willow- Sounds friendly.
Lorne- (walks over to Willow and Tara) And who might you be beautiful?
Willow- Willow.
Lorne- I know who you are, Red. (reaches out for Tara) I meant this one.
Tara- T-Tara.
Lorne- Is that with one T or two? (kisses her hand) The pleasure is all mine.

Fred giggles.

Willow- Hey, this is my girlfriend you are flirting with. And how do you know who I am?
Lorne- I saw you when Angel sang once. You were Buffy’s best friend.
Willow- (both hurt by the mentioning of Buffy’s name and not understanding) What?
Cordy- He reads your soul and tells you your destiny when you sing kareoki at his bar. That’s his demonic power.
Willow- (not believing her) And Angel sang kareoki?
Cordy- (duh) Yeah. We all did.
Willow- Maybe, you have changed.
Lorne- I know this is a little early for his grumpyness but have him swing by the club tonight. I may have some information for him. (he’s about to leave but stops) And you my precious blonde goddess are certainly welcome to come. I’ll sing a medley just for you.

Tara is blushing so hard she just nods while biting her lower lip trying to hide her smile.

Willow- (bitter)We’re leaving today. Sorry.
Lorne- Sunnydale doesn’t need you right now, darling. Come by tonight and we’ll chat. Ta-ta.

end for now....

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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Shadowcat » Sat Jun 09, 2001 10:14 pm

Whaaaaaaaaaaagh! *sobs* This was so good! Write more.

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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Lonewolf » Sat Jun 09, 2001 10:42 pm

"Rane", more please your fics are sooo good, Its really funny how you made Lorne flirt with Tara and Willow got all jealous, LOL very funny.

Lonewolf

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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby xita » Sat Jun 09, 2001 11:29 pm

Oh geez this is great! Darn you Rane.. write faster Lorne is great. Who will sing!! oooh yes
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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby fell » Sat Jun 09, 2001 11:53 pm

hey, rane~

this is both funny and touching. i esp like the interaction between fred and willow- they're both so quirky it gave me giggles. (gee, i wish i had a sense of humor! snif.) i like your lorne/tara scene, too.

it's interesting that i'm going in a totally different direction starting from exactly the same point. i haven't brought willow back in yet...but soon. i can't get that look out of my mind.

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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Catwoman » Sun Jun 10, 2001 12:27 am

quote:
Originally posted by Rane:
Cordy- Oh I so have missy! You’re not the only one that’s changed since high school.
Willow- Oh, you’re gay now too?

Cordy- Yes. I've got 1000 posts at a website called 'the kitten board'.

I'm loving this fic Rane
quote:

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P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Shaniezak » Sun Jun 10, 2001 12:38 am

Wow, two in one day . . . I feel so spoiled now.

Loving all the character interaction, Rane, I think you're doing a fantastic job.

Shaniezak
 


P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby legend » Sun Jun 10, 2001 5:02 am

OMG -This is sooo incredibly good!
I love your fics.
Am anxiously awaiting more!!
Please????
legend
 


P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Sneaky Kitty » Sun Jun 10, 2001 9:22 am

Rane this is great...(ok that sounded to tony the tiger-y for my own good)

i dont watch angel so i dont really know those characters (i just started watching buffy to so...) and you write them good. i mean not like id notice if anything were to be wrong...dont know the characters besides what ive read about em, and the few shots of angel ive seen...(ive watched the crossovers)

yeah write more please this is going great!?

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"And we could make kitty go bonkers with catnip and stuff?" -Will BTVS
- To be great is to be misunderstood - Emerson

Sneaky Kitty
 


P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Zahir » Sun Jun 10, 2001 9:44 am

Cool. Really, really cool.

And I like how you catch the off-beatedness (is that a word?) of the characters.

Looking forward to more.

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"O let my name be in the Book of Love.
If it be there, I care not of
That other book Above...
Strike it out! Or write it in anew.
But let it be in the Book of Love!"
--Omar Kyam

Zahir
 


P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Ginner » Sun Jun 10, 2001 9:45 am

Rane you are a fic writing God!!!
This had me in stitches...

Cordy- Oh I so have missy! You’re not the only one that’s changed since high school.
Willow- Oh, you’re gay now too?

ROFLMAO!!!

But, your fic's are addictive and i'm finding meself needing more...


Ginner
 


P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby tommo » Sun Jun 10, 2001 9:49 am

Love Lorne and Tara together. Especially with the whole Amber/Andy chemistry they could put into it.

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"Say hello to the kitten board and give them my love." ~ Amber Benson

tommo
 


P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Ed Wood » Sun Jun 10, 2001 11:38 am

for me? Well... thank you

BTW that was really good Rane, and I mean REALLY good.

Oh please oh please oh please MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!

Ed Wood
 


P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby knike74 » Sun Jun 10, 2001 2:34 pm

Hey, this is a great fic, please keep going, I definately need some closure after the season finale.....
knike74
 


P0st Finale Fic (updated)

Postby Rane » Sun Jun 10, 2001 3:14 pm

aw, thank yea all. i'll post some more tonight...
Rane
 

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