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Very Short Fan Fic - "Gone"

Postby Hanki » Sun Nov 25, 2001 6:37 am

"Gone"
Rating: A three year old could read it, lol.
Spoliers: There are spoliers for the events after the musical i think... not too sure since i haven't seen these eps but i'm just going off what my friend accidentily told me.


"Ugh, where's my shoe?" Willow muttered to herself, she got down on her hands an knees and peered under the bed. "I think there really is a clog eating monster under here."

"Nah, that was a Dawn-monster remember?" asked a voice from the doorway.

"Tara?" Willow asked, she looked up and the hope in her voice broke Tara's heart.

Tara nodded, "I'm only here to get my CD's then I'm going." Her voice was flat, she was trying not to show any of the conflicting emotions she felt on being back here.

"Going?" the hope in Willow's eyes faded, "Going where?"

Tara avoided looking at her ex-lover as she replied "Out of Sunnydale."

"What? NO! You c-can't!" Willow stammered brokenly, she sprung to her feet and rushed to Tara. She grabbed Tara's hands and and stared deep into her eyes, "Please. I love you." Up until now she always figured that they'd get back together again and as long as Tara was in Sunnydale she had a chance but now she was leaving? Her hope was gone.

"I love you too, I just... don't know if i can trust you." Tara's eyes showed how much it hurt her to say that.

Willow visibly deflated, "I'm sorry," she whispered.

"I know I am too," Tara replied, she cupped Willow's face in her hands and kissed her forehead then crossed the room to the dresser, picked up her stuff and left without another word.

Willow didn't do a thing to stop her, she just slid to the floor and sobbed. She'd blown it, she knew it was her fault for putting the spell on Tara but she'd never thought it would amount to this.

Tara was gone, she'd really gone.


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I might do another part or two but i'm not sure, it depends if you guys like this or not.

[This message has been edited by Hanki (edited November 25, 2001).]

Hanki
 


Very Short Fan Fic - "Gone"

Postby Nat » Sun Nov 25, 2001 10:18 am

This short fanfic is great!
I think its very hard to write your first one but this one is excellent!
You've got the characters down great!

Nat

Nat
 


Very Short Fan Fic - "Gone"

Postby aladdin » Sun Nov 25, 2001 10:20 am

I liked this..I can SO see this happen.
The goodbye reminded me a bit of Oz's but hey, that's not bad!
Keep it going, it's really good.

aladdin
 


Very Short Fan Fic - "Gone"

Postby Wiccagrrl » Sun Nov 25, 2001 10:32 am

Nice job, and yeah- more please
Wiccagrrl
 


Very Short Fan Fic - "Gone"

Postby Rane » Sun Nov 25, 2001 12:05 pm

defintiely a good start. need angst warnings though. and careful with the kitties! they always ask for more, which is a good thing cause it makes you write more fanfic which is always good! so, MORE! please. thanks

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TARA- We're forgetting about the troll. Let's pay attention to the troll.

Rane
 


Very Short Fan Fic - "Gone"

Postby emily 'first' » Sun Nov 25, 2001 12:41 pm

Hanki...
Another part or two ???
That only means 3 !!
Not enough to satisfy anybody here...
Especially me !!
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More as good as this piece please...We can't wait long...

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vive,valeque.

emily 'first'
 


Very Short Fan Fic - "Gone"

Postby Hanki » Tue Nov 27, 2001 1:40 pm

Aww thanks guys, hopefully the second part will be posted tomorrow or thursday (friday is the latest i promise) it's half written just needs some adjustments, i got an actual story now and some of you will be pleased to here that it's a longish one, lol

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Me: And before you say anything i is not drinking!
My friend:You is not is you? ;)
Me: You know my grammer does not resemble Earth grammer.
My Friend: Right, cuz on Earth it's spelt 'grammar.'

Hanki
 


Very Short Fan Fic - "Gone"

Postby kpmuse » Tue Nov 27, 2001 1:46 pm

Yeah Hanki! Keep it coming please!
kpmuse
 


Very Short Fan Fic - "Gone"

Postby SweediePie4eva » Tue Nov 27, 2001 2:01 pm

I didn't know you could write hanki!!! and no movey keyz either well done. Hannah you must write more or i will harm you!!!(in the nicest possible way of course)
Well done on your first fic (it is 1st isn't it??!!) Hanki a genousous
Thats it i need help with spelling Scientists say kissin good 4 your brain!! explains lots n-e-offers??? lol
SweediePie4eva
 


Very Short Fan Fic - "Gone"

Postby Hanki » Wed Nov 28, 2001 10:20 am

First fic? nah wrote another one before, i'm always writing you should know that woman, honestly call yourself an ex-gf

kidding.

ok second part coming up:

The sunlight streamed down on Tara as she hitched her backpack further up on to her back. She'd only taken a few essential items, she had left the rest of her stuff with Anya and Xander, she would ask them to forward it to her as soon as she had a place to stay. The only things she had with her were a couple of shirts and skirts, some herbs so she could whip up a protection spell if need be and her CD player. She'd only taken her walkman because she didn't want to be bored on the bus.

Speaking Off... Tara watched as her bus pulled up, she'd decided to go to LA. She had always wanted to and now she had her chance.

She climbed on board and handed over her ticket. She took a seat and rumanged around in her bag. Her walkman had a CD in it so she just pushed play and stuck the headphones in her ear. "Can't Take My Eyes Off You..." She hit stop immediately and pulled the headphones out of her ears, it was the song she and Willow had danced to that night on her birthday at the Bronze. She could remeber it as if it was yesterday and not nearly a year ago...

"You always make me feel special, how do you do that?"

"Magic"

Magic Again, Tara thought bitterly.

Everything was magic. Tara couldn't believe this had happened, Willow the person she trusted more than anyone in the world had put a spell on her. It went against everything she believed in and to make it worse she had one thought going around in her head: How did she know it was only once?

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Me: And before you say anything i is not drinking!
My friend:You is not is you? ;)
Me: You know my grammer does not resemble Earth grammer.
My Friend: Right, cuz on Earth it's spelt 'grammar.'

Hanki
 


Very Short Fan Fic - "Gone"

Postby SweediePie4eva » Wed Nov 28, 2001 11:30 am

opps sorry *hides behind computer chair*
Yet again brilliant fanfic by the great hanki *claps*
How was school if ya went at all!!!
First fic? nah wrote another one before, i'm always writing you should know that woman, honestly call yourself an ex-gf

I do call myself an ex girlfreind and i call you a tease Evil Little Hanki
HaHa you'll be all dressed up in brownies clothes at Grease on Sunday hahaha *relises about her skirt she must wear* erm i'll e quiet now
WELL DONE HANNAH
Loves Yaz Hayley xxx
SweediePie4eva
 


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