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painfully revealed..my first fic!!

Postby darksweetie21 » Fri Dec 28, 2001 12:18 pm

This is my first fic on this bored so i dont know if its any good but you guyys can decide for your-selves
p.s the spelling may not be great.

titleainfully revealed
authorarksweetie21
disclaimer: everyone belongs to joss
pairing: B/R X/A W/T
ratingG
summary: the scoobies find out about willow and tara the hard way

painfully revealed

"Come on sweetie we're going to be late and you know buffy wil never let us live it down if we are" willow watched as her girlfriend rubbed lotion on her arms. she noted who smooth and gental tara's movements were. she supresed the urge to go over and kiss her. But she new they'd never leave if she did."w-willow, would it be ok i-if we still kept our relationship in the dark?" she searched in her lovers eyes for an answer."for you anything."she wrapped her arms around the tall girls waist even if it means limited hugs." tara grinned which made willow give in and kissed tara passiontly. tara eventully pulled away, and started pulling her towards the door."come on if we dont leave now we never will"

sry everyone but i have to go right more later.

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painfully revealed..my first fic!!

Postby Katharyn » Fri Dec 28, 2001 12:35 pm

Oooh lotion fun*S*

You do know, Darksweetie that you can paste into the reply boxes? I only say that as you commented on having to leave so I thought you might be writing it live and in person and feel that you have to do that. You can write in word or notepad or any other program and copy and paste.

Apologies if that seems obvious!

Katharyn

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She's my always

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painfully revealed..my first fic!!

Postby xita » Fri Dec 28, 2001 12:45 pm

Oh, I think you have a very interesting beginning there, it's a good premise. I would however recommend that you get a more sizeable piece before posting the next part. It makes for easier reading if the fic is not disjointed by being read in tiny little incriments! Hope that helps
xita
 


painfully revealed..my first fic!!

Postby darksweetie21 » Fri Dec 28, 2001 1:10 pm

im back thanks for the input im working on finshing the rest of it now
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painfully revealed..my first fic!!

Postby darksweetie21 » Fri Dec 28, 2001 1:39 pm

painfully revealed- i added the first part onto this one so it wouldnt be broken up so much.
"Come on sweetie we're going to be late and you know buffy wil never let us live it down if we are" willow watched as her girlfriend rubbed lotion on her arms. she noted who smooth and gental tara's movements were. she supresed the urge to go over and kiss her. But she new they'd never leave if she did."w-willow, would it be ok i-if we still kept our relationship in the dark?" she searched in her lovers eyes for an answer."for you anything."she wrapped her arms around the tall girls waist even if it means limited hugs." tara grinned which made willow give in and kissed tara passiontly. tara eventully pulled away, and started pulling her towards the door."come on if we dont leave now we never will"

when they finally reached the bronze. they saw buffy and riley cuddled at the table, they usuaslly sit at. tara looked around for anya and xander and finally spotted them on the dance floor. she thoguth how good they looked together. she was abrubtly brought back from her thought when she heard buffy calling them over.willow and tara took their seats across from buffy and riley "so hows my to favorite wiccans?" tara was surprised at riley's question since she had never had a full conversasion wtih him.she was about to say soemthing but decided against it when willow spoke up."we're fine and hows my favorite vampire slaying couple?" more than fine as always.buffy finally said as she leaned into rileys welcoming arms. "heya will,tara." tara jumped a bit as xander spoke obiusly tried from dancing. "h-hi xander, hi anya." tara trid to be asurtive but she ended up lowering her head as she spoke. "having fun?"willow said glancing at tara then at xander and anya."yes we are. i plan to get me and xander drunk so we can have wild sex later, somethings we like to make beleive..." thats enough an." xander quickly cut her off seeing everyone disgusted since they knew what she was going to say. tara gathered up her courage"anyone want anything to drink?" xander and i will have a beer" xander nodded in agrement with anya. "ill have a soda want anything riley?" "nope im fine." i-i'll go help" willow had a grin on her face that had to make tara restain a giggle.

willow was walking a bit behind tara watching her girlfriend walk thinkig how much she admired her.she couldnt take not touching tara any longer. willow almost skipped up behind her and wrapped her arm around tara's waist. tara grinned and pulled willow behind a wall where they were out of site frrom the other scobbies. willow slid her hand to hold up atara head while caressing her cheek with her thumb. Tara leaned forward and softly kissed willow on the lips. willow started kissing her harder and slid her tounge past willow lips to explore every coner of her mouth.

anya wndered what was taking them so long so she decided to go hurry them up because she want to go home and have sex with xander. when anya couldnt find them at the bar she started looking else where. when she turned to where willow and tara were she stopped unable to speak.after a minute she turn and almost ran back to the others.

i know this isnt very long either but i get pulled off the comeputer when my borhters a computer addict.

darksweetie21
 


painfully revealed..my first fic!!

Postby Pixie-Muso » Sat Dec 29, 2001 7:13 pm

I love what you're doing with the story Darksweetie! Keep it up!

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"...the hardest thing in this world is to live in it..."
~Buffy, The Gift.

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painfully revealed..my first fic!!

Postby boo » Sat Dec 29, 2001 8:46 pm

this is cool. i can't wait to see what anya says.
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painfully revealed..my first fic!!

Postby Pixie-Muso » Sat Dec 29, 2001 8:59 pm

Me too, boo. Me too!

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"...the hardest thing in this world is to live in it..."
~Buffy, The Gift.

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painfully revealed..my first fic!!

Postby darksweetie21 » Sat Dec 29, 2001 9:46 pm

" i just saw something very disturbing."buffy now had her full atention on anya " i just saw willow with tara up against a wall with her tounge in taras mouth." "haha verry funny an" xander luagh akwardly half beleiving her. "your kidding right im mean she went out with oz for a long time it cant be its not right" buffy kept babbling till riley stopped her. "ill go see if this is really true in the first place.
riley walked over to where anya said they would be. he almost smiled when he saw them. he had to admit they looked good together. he continued to walk up to them and cleared his throat.
tara jumped almost shoving willow away. ' oh no,no' was all that was going through taras head."sorry to inturupted but anya caught you two so you might want to head back before buffy faints from babbling.""ok thanks" then he turned and walked away. "tara im so sorry i should have been more carefull..." she was hushed by taras finger on her lips. "its not all your fault..besides riley was cool about it so im sure the rest of them are." tara grinned and the moment she removed her finger from taras lips willow kissed her deeply "i love you so much" tara kissed her girlfrriend back.

just then an exdemon saw them and was distugsted he was obvusioly already mad frrom losing a bet and decided to take it out on one of them even if he didnt have any power. he ran at them decinding to hit the blonde at the last minute.

tara was almost not out by the impact.before she could get her baring a tall man kicked her in the face. she could taste blood in her mouth.willow ran to get buffy. by the time buffy got across the dance floor to tara. she was trying to chant something but blood was dripping frfom her mouth and a huge cut across her face. buffy beat the crap out of the exdemon untill he ran. by then tara was in willows arms and the rest of the scoobies and joined them."shh baby its ok your safe now"" we better get her to a hospital. before xander could finish riley picked her up and headed out the door.


sry everyone but once again im being kicked off the computer man i hate my brother. sry i tried to write as much as i could

[This message has been edited by WillTara (edited December 29, 2001).]

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