Another poem

[willow's girl]

I was going to go to sleep, I swear, but then inspiration struck. This poem came out a little angry though. Sad poem, angry poem . . . I'll try to make the next one happy. A celebration of the fabulous T/W love perhaps? Let me know what you think of this one though:

So she’s a girl!
What’s that to you?
Do I ever complain
of the guys that you do?

Yet you say I’m wrong,
perverted, a freak
You open your mouth
but you don’t really think

It’s only love,
who’s getting hurt?
If it’s me or my lover
that’s not your concern

There are many truths
you have only one
You love a gender
I love a person

[Pixie-Muso]

Oh gosh! You've captured something there, willow's girl. I guess that's how I feel a lot of the time - kinda like a feeling in anticipation.

Thank you.

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"...the hardest thing in this world is to live in it..."
~Buffy, The Gift.

[Wiccagrrl]

Wow. Just...wow. Very intense. I like.

[tommo]

It's very stridently gay.

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"Bitter, party of one. Bitter, party of one." she muttered... ~ Four Months After by Capt. Murdock

[willow's girl]

Thanks for responding you guys! I was beginning to wonder if anyone was going to read it. Your feedback has been greatly appreciated! I'll write some more poems when I get the chance.

[Divine Princess Fuchsia]

Wow, cool! Feel like carving it in stone and hitting Buffy over the head with it during that scene in ''New Moon Rising''. Aww, poor thing, she was just in denial about Faith...

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''We HAVE to kill some cooler people'' - Sunday the cute vampire

''Those of you who fall into my good graces will come to know me as Maggie. Those of you who don't will know me by the name my T.A's use and think I don't know about: The Evil Bitch Monster of Death''. - Maggie Walsh

[Kath]

Wonderful poetry. Very well put.

['lucy' moore]

That is insightful...And good!
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Why don't you start a thread and collect all your Poems together so that we can read them again and again?

Edited to:Re-Spell one word...A small Freudian slip.
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fiat justitia,ruat caelum.

[This message has been edited by 'lucy' moore (edited January 03, 2002).]

[nika]

Well hip-hip horray I say!

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"Eat lot's of applesauce, preferably fed to you by attractive young lesbians." Amber Benson