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Tentative Season 4 fic....

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Tentative Season 4 fic....

Postby Divine Princess Fuchsia » Fri Jan 04, 2002 1:35 pm

Part 5

Note: A bit brief, and sadly the last part of my fic...Will probably do a sequal, based around the events in ''Family'', if anyone thinks it's worth it...? Once again, thanks for all the support, guys...Oh yes and...ANGST ALERT!


The dreams never left Tara, not even in the harsh light of day, not really. If she so much as closed her eyes, she was back there, bruised and bleeding. Her father's cruel smile, and Donny's leering, mocking gaze. Hands that grabbed her hair, leaving blonde strands within calloused fingers. Hands that struck her if she stuttered, when her fear made speech impossible. The heavy tread of Donny's boots outside her room, the creaking of her door and the look on her father's face the morning after, pretending not to know…The guilt, the shame, the dirt that wouldn't rub off no matter how hard she tried. Tainted. She avoided the company of others, fearing this sickness to be contagious. Believing that no-one could help her, and wouldn't want to if they were ale to. Why help this twisted thing, her evil all of her own making, all her own fault, just like they said. Because they were right, Donny and her father. Always right. She had to be kept in line for her own good, and if she made them do things…All my fault. I did this to them…Even with Willow, the thought always nagged at the back of her head, If she knew…if she knew…she'd HATE me. Willow's warmth and light soothed her, calmed her restless spirit and quieted the voices running around inside her skull. For the first time in so many, many years - too many - she felt loved, as though she could be good, underneath all this evil. But Goddess, just give me the chance. Don't make me tell her too soon…Despite all the wonder in her new-found friendship, the shadow still hung over her, never quite dispelled. Willow was a demon-fighter and Tara was…I'm disgusting. How could she love a thing like me? A thing so corrupt that I pretend to be what I'm not. The more time passed, the more Tara was afraid that her inner self would burst through, through all the peace and the love, all that was Tara Maclay, and destroy everything that she had so painstakingly, so timorously, built. I'm buying time. That's all I need, to make the wickedness go away.

Her heart thumped so loud in her chest that surely Willow must hear it, surely she would guess that all was not as it should be. Oh God, not now. Not so soon. Don't make me lose her. Oh Goddess, Momma, don't let me lose her now. Oh, Willow, forgive me. Forgive me for what I am about to do. I'm doing it for you, Willow, for us, for what we could have between us. Someday you'll understand…Understand that only you can save me…

Just a little more time…And, feeling sick with her sense of double betrayal, Tara tossed the shiny powder under the bed, so that only a mere film of residue was left on her hands.

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''We HAVE to kill some cooler people'' - Sunday the cute vampire

''Those of you who fall into my good graces will come to know me as Maggie. Those of you who don't will know me by the name my T.A's use and think I don't know about: The Evil Bitch Monster of Death''. - Maggie Walsh

Divine Princess Fuchsia
 


Tentative Season 4 fic....

Postby Jessie » Fri Jan 04, 2002 2:29 pm

That was such a powerful peice. I think it would be a crime (if not a sin) to leave it there. Sequel is necessary ... you hear me? Necessary.

Jessie
 


Tentative Season 4 fic....

Postby Pixie-Muso » Fri Jan 04, 2002 7:05 pm

I agree with Jessie - We need a sequel!!! Please???

Great work Divine Princess Fuchsia!!!

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"...the hardest thing in this world is to live in it..."
~Buffy, The Gift.

Pixie-Muso
 


Tentative Season 4 fic....

Postby littlekitty » Fri Jan 04, 2002 7:45 pm

quote:
Originally posted by Divine Princess Fuchsia:
[B]Part 5

Note: A bit brief, and sadly the last part of my fic...Will probably do a sequal, based around the events in ''Family'', if anyone thinks it's worth it...?



YES! more please! need more! good job so far-you write them very well.

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~Spread beneath my Willow tree-You make me complete~
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littlekitty
 


Tentative Season 4 fic....

Postby Jae » Fri Jan 04, 2002 8:56 pm

You can't stop there!!! Please? Pretty please? Keep going! I'm sure I'm not alone when I say I'm enjoying this far too much for you to stop. not that I have any actual say on whether you do or not, but you know what I mean. *nodnod*
Jae
 


Tentative Season 4 fic....

Postby tommo » Fri Jan 04, 2002 11:44 pm

Ugh; how well I remember those times, wondering what the hell Tara was doing; what her motives were...and all the time you bloody knew.

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"Bitter, party of one. Bitter, party of one." she muttered... ~ Four Months After by Capt. Murdock

tommo
 


Tentative Season 4 fic....

Postby aladdin » Sat Jan 05, 2002 1:55 am

Cool..although I think it was a little bit too fast but I'm sure you have your own and right rhythm for this and maybe, we'll see an evenly good sequel.
It was a pleasure for me to follow this fic.

Thanks, I received your e-mail and my answer should be waiting for you.

aladdin
 


Tentative Season 4 fic....

Postby Divine Princess Fuchsia » Mon Jan 07, 2002 5:08 am

Heehee - thanks guys! Just back at uni for a new term, once things have settled down, more (and longer) installments shall follow...

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''We HAVE to kill some cooler people'' - Sunday the cute vampire

''Those of you who fall into my good graces will come to know me as Maggie. Those of you who don't will know me by the name my T.A's use and think I don't know about: The Evil Bitch Monster of Death''. - Maggie Walsh

Divine Princess Fuchsia
 


Tentative Season 4 fic....

Postby Le_Tigre_Beat » Mon Jan 14, 2002 8:45 am

Hello Divine Princess Fuchsia. I'm not surprised in the least: you have been elevated to the status of Athena. The kingdom is rightfully yours. You shall be bestowed with the finest shrines and have all the extra flamey candles you want... and I mean EXTRA flamey candles.
So this is what you really do in Greek. And you had us fooled the whole time

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"Life is dull, life is gray / At its best, it's just OK / But I'm happy to report / Life is also short" Quasi, "California"

Le_Tigre_Beat
 

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