by nika » Sun Jan 20, 2002 10:03 pm
2)Kitty whipped willow *snicker-snort-chortle*
3) Dawn and Buffy tag teaming Willow, good idea, hope you work it in sometime a blushing red head is always cute.
4)Embryanna better than cletus but not by much.
5)Where can I get me some of them
sand-witches?
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by aladdin » Sun Jan 20, 2002 10:12 pm
by Lisa of Nine » Sun Jan 20, 2002 11:39 pm
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katydid:
with all those allergies...I'd spent all my time taking you to the ER.
Umm... how about a spicy Tara sandwich? LOL
don't worry, only a few more cliffhangers ahead.
Thanks,
L
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Jae:
I am evil, but I don't know about those other things. *G*
I've had proffs like you described. Ugh!
Thanks for replying.
L
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kittyko:
It's best to listen to those voices in your head. 
As for spicy Tara...well, that's how I imagine her... and that's my story and I'm sticking to it! *G*
Thanks,
L
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mariacomet:
Amy & Rack do know her buttons. Look for more pushing ahead!
Willow's rage... yep...I see Achilles heel written all over that one. *EG*
Sandwiches? LOL Why would a snack food require fans?
Thanks,
Lisa
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Willow_rocks:
you poor brit! I'd offer to sing you to sleep, but my voice is not up to Amber B's caliber...mine sounds more like coyotes being stuffed into a blender... and let's just pretend that little image was never shown the light of day...
Thanks,
L
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Pixie:
No laughing...just stressing over the chapters I'm working on right now.
I like spicy.
Ah, Amy... she looks so innocent and needy, and the Scoobies rescue people for a living... it's what they do... how could THAT ever bite them in the butt? *EG*
Still, Amy might have some non-evil left...maybe...or not.
The "Passion" ep was a heart breaker. I miss Jenny.
Thanks for replying. I don't think anyone will guess what I have planned for Amy... I've never seen it done before...
L
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Kiwiccan:
Paula, not evil... just well, okay evil.
Suck it up and read the cliffhangers...you know you want to.
Lisa
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Scoobiedoo:
Glad you like the cliffhangers..they are good to get the heart pumping.
Well, the co-op and meat... We've got a vegetarian co-op market here my area that has a deli...WITH meat. It freaks me out, confuses me, but hey, it works for them. The sell soy, TVP, and vegan TV dinners on one side...and the best Pastrami sandwiches in town on the other. Viva la capitolism!
Thanks for point it out though!
L
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Kalita:
LOL
See above!
Those cows are hard to fit too. And they take two pairs per cow.
L
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Sassette:
Hiakus?
Wow, my torturous cliffhanger have inspired you.
My work here is done, ma'am.
L
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Puff:
You can be my number one groupie! Of course...you're also my only groupie. It might get lonely.
Yes... Assume crash positions!!
Thanks for replying,
L
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Bobo'sMom:
Yes, Tara is two months along. I can't say how long she'll stay pregnant without handing out spoilers. *EG*
I think I'm gonna' just have one a day...like vitamins...until it's done. Thanks for understanding.
L
PS... Glad you like spicy Tara... and the restroom!
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kpmuse:
I'm glad you like the way things are shaping up for our witches.
I've always been a spicy romantic.
I also can't read break up fiction...it's too sad.
There is indeed great angst ahead. Assume crash positions... but as always, our witches will be together and in love at the end. I really do like all the characters...even Rack.
Thanks,
L
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Kendahl897:
Thanks...I fixed the link.
Enjoy your fix!
L
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CARO:
Well, I misspell stuff all the time. Hope it didn't offend you.
The link is fixed... *sigh* darn infernal machines!
Glad you like the new chapter. Curiously... what made this one easier to read? DO you mean stylistically? Plot? Angst? I want all the chapters to flow and to be approachable. Any suggestions are welcome.
Yeah, learning the spell makes the danger real... assume crash positions.
Poor Amy...everyone wants to throttle her...hmmm...who might be up to that task? You'll have to wait and see. LOL
Thanks for replying,
L
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Puff:
the angst is in the forefront form here on in. Set aside your pacifist ways and help poor Tara!
I couldn't resist a Xander/Tito joke...I added it in honor of the kitties!
As I said above...learning the spell would make the danger real. Diana is really still a stranger, and Tara is reacting. Tune in tomorrow to see what happens. *G*
BTW... I've talked with my editor I might be adding a part 20... maybe.
Thanks for replying,
L
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kittyko:
Poor Xander... everyone's butt monkey. (I LOVE that saying. It makes me giggle every time.)
Sleep well tonight...the ride is about to get rough.
*Evil laughter ensues*
Thanks,
L
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Jae:
You know, there is so much angst ahead... I've had to take writing breaks to eat chocolate. This does not look good.
Thanks for writing,
L
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Scout:
I'm glad you like the way I am shaping the story. I love complex and classic stories. I try to find redemption for the heroes, but to make them pay for their mistakes.
Thanks for replying,
L
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Katydid:
Hey! No laughing...I researched Diana's advice about sex while pregnant. (Yes, you CAN finds anything on the Internet!)
I promise W&T will be a happy couple at the end.
Thanks,
L
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Jenny Scott:
Thanks. I've always wondered what made Tara so unhinged by her father's presence. So...I made up my own theory. yay fan fic!
Thanks for the comments,
L
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kissystarcowboy:
That is a sweet offer. Sadly, I don't have that AIM deal. I used to go to the Willtara chat, but no one stops by anymore.
More chapters soon.
L
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Nika:
1) Because it is great fun!
2) She is so whipped. Two words...bruised juice.
3) I love blushing redheads. I think if they double teamed WIllow...she would just die or run screaming for Tara to save her.
4) It's okay, but, in their defense, at this stage...the child is an embryo, not a fetus yet. *G*
5) If I reveal that... I could get arrested
Thanks for replying!
L
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alladin:
Thank you. I did a ton of OB/GYN research...sadly, not hands on. *sigh*
Glad you liked all the deli elements. It was fun to write. BTW, images are good...
Thanks for being patient,
L
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Thanks for all the wonderful feedback!
Lisa
by xita » Mon Jan 21, 2002 1:00 am
by Web Warlock » Mon Jan 21, 2002 7:19 am
Loved this. But I have to admit I have always viewed Amy as much of a victim of Rack as Willow, maybe moreso.
She was younger when she started using Dark Magic, hell her mom probablly offered her to Rack so she could get high herself.
I know junkies will do just about anything for that next high but Willow and Amy had been friends once.
I am just uncertain who I want to see kick the crap outta Rack more, Tara, Willow, Buffy or even Anya!
Warlock.
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by katydid » Mon Jan 21, 2002 8:34 am
quote:
Umm... how about a spicy Tara sandwich? *****Hey! No laughing...I researched Diana's advice about sex while pregnant. (Yes, you CAN finds anything on the Internet!)
Glad to see you are so detailed when writing your stories. I still think the Tara blush was hilarious!
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The whole arc about Tara getting stronger than anybody realizes is great, and the threat to her pregnancy and connection to her family history, all very dramatic.
I totally love Cassie and Diana. It's good that you give them their own scenes. The vision about Tara's mom and the baby added a lot of suspense. Scenes with other characters add a change of pace as well as a chance to see what other characters, like Dawn and Buffy f'rinstance, are feeling.
Since i'm already in advice-gal mode from beta-ing someone else's fic i may as well be completely obnoxious...
I would have shown rack and his minion plotting so the reader would be anticipating that something bad could happen any time while the scoobies were blithely munching their lunch.
When writing the crisis scenes, like the attack for instance, don't be afraid to pour on the details and bring your readers right into the scene. These are, after all, the climactic moments for the suspense that's been building, the payoff. Writers often use shorter sentences to change the rhythm and strong adjectives and similes for more vivid imagery.
While most people have never been in an actual deadly fight, the reaction is similar to being in a serious accident- time slows, insignificant details leap out, you're suddenly aware of your heartbeat and of how things smell. Suddenly everything matters, there's a rush of intense emotions. I guess it's a lot like sex, too. Anyway, you don't want to leave your readers less than satisfied, so you need to give it your all and pour your heart into that moment.
It's one of the incongrous things about writing- that it can take much longer to read the description of a critical moment than the event would take to happen. But the reason movies, which can show an action in real time, haven't replaced books is that the written description is often so much richer and more rewarding, allowing the reader to savor the moment.
Your narrative pov isn't centered in one character, most of the time it's omniscient which keeps the reader equidistant from each character. This is fine, but for a change of pace at a crisis moment, like when Tara freaks out at the ob/gyn's, you could shift completely into one person's pov. This brings the reader right into the scene. Often writers will depict a scene from one person's pov then switch and replay the same events from another's.
My apologies for rambling on and on. I sometimes suffer from an excess of enthusiasm and this time it's all your fault. I'm totally loving your story!
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That'll put marzipan in your pie-plate, bingo!
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I will post replies as an edit to this post. You can all read while I type.
Thanks for all the support.
L
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Nifty to see the notes from her Mom; I hope the Refero spell isn't necessary, but with the way you've set this up....
Well, keep it coming. The best cure for cliffhangeritis is always the next chapter...
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PS Great writing as usual.
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Oh my comment about chapter 17 being easier to read than chapter 16?? I felt I was in a rollercoaster ride whilst I was reading chapter 16. I meant it was easier on me poor heart.
Ooh kick ass Anya.
This is an excellent installment, Lisa.
~Caro
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posted January 21, 2002 11:02 With the rollercoaster of emotions I felt reading the latest sections - happiness and optimisim at Willow and Tara's future, loathing of Amy and Rack - its like I've got the hormonal mood swings Tara's experiencing . . . except I ain't preggers!Lisa, you are a true storyteller!
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Too many reasons to list here, I think I am just gonna send an email.
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posted January 21, 2002 12:19 Okay, you know what...this is a great story.Too many reasons to list here, I think I am just gonna send an email.
IP: LoggedfellSassy Eggs The whole arc about Tara getting stronger than anybody realizes is great, and the threat to her pregnancy and connection to her family history, all very dramatic.
I totally love Cassie and Diana. It's good that you give them their own scenes. The vision about Tara's mom and the baby added a lot of suspense. Scenes with other characters add a change of pace as well as a chance to see what other characters, like Dawn and Buffy f'rinstance, are feeling.
Since i'm already in advice-gal mode from beta-ing someone else's fic i may as well be completely obnoxious...
I would have shown rack and his minion plotting so the reader would be anticipating that something bad could happen any time while the scoobies were blithely munching their lunch.
When writing the crisis scenes, like the attack for instance, don't be afraid to pour on the details and bring your readers right into the scene. These are, after all, the climactic moments for the suspense that's been building, the payoff. Writers often use shorter sentences to change the rhythm and strong adjectives and similes for more vivid imagery.
While most people have never been in an actual deadly fight, the reaction is similar to being in a serious accident- time slows, insignificant details leap out, you're suddenly aware of your heartbeat and of how things smell. Suddenly everything matters, there's a rush of intense emotions. I guess it's a lot like sex, too. Anyway, you don't want to leave your readers less than satisfied, so you need to give it your all and pour your heart into that moment.
It's one of the incongrous things about writing- that it can take much longer to read the description of a critical moment than the event would take to happen. But the reason movies, which can show an action in real time, haven't replaced books is that the written description is often so much richer and more rewarding, allowing the reader to savor the moment.
Your narrative pov isn't centered in one character, most of the time it's omniscient which keeps the reader equidistant from each character. This is fine, but for a change of pace at a crisis moment, like when Tara freaks out at the ob/gyn's, you could shift completely into one person's pov. This brings the reader right into the scene. Often writers will depict a scene from one person's pov then switch and replay the same events from another's.
My apologies for rambling on and on. I sometimes suffer from an excess of enthusiasm and this time it's all your fault. I'm totally loving your story!
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posted January 21, 2002 12:38 A-A-A-A-A-A-A-A-A-A-A-A-A!!!The whole arc about Tara getting stronger than anybody realizes is great, and the threat to her pregnancy and connection to her family history, all very dramatic.
I totally love Cassie and Diana. It's good that you give them their own scenes. The vision about Tara's mom and the baby added a lot of suspense. Scenes with other characters add a change of pace as well as a chance to see what other characters, like Dawn and Buffy f'rinstance, are feeling.
Since i'm already in advice-gal mode from beta-ing someone else's fic i may as well be completely obnoxious...
I would have shown rack and his minion plotting so the reader would be anticipating that something bad could happen any time while the scoobies were blithely munching their lunch.
When writing the crisis scenes, like the attack for instance, don't be afraid to pour on the details and bring your readers right into the scene. These are, after all, the climactic moments for the suspense that's been building, the payoff. Writers often use shorter sentences to change the rhythm and strong adjectives and similes for more vivid imagery.
While most people have never been in an actual deadly fight, the reaction is similar to being in a serious accident- time slows, insignificant details leap out, you're suddenly aware of your heartbeat and of how things smell. Suddenly everything matters, there's a rush of intense emotions. I guess it's a lot like sex, too. Anyway, you don't want to leave your readers less than satisfied, so you need to give it your all and pour your heart into that moment.
It's one of the incongrous things about writing- that it can take much longer to read the description of a critical moment than the event would take to happen. But the reason movies, which can show an action in real time, haven't replaced books is that the written description is often so much richer and more rewarding, allowing the reader to savor the moment.
Your narrative pov isn't centered in one character, most of the time it's omniscient which keeps the reader equidistant from each character. This is fine, but for a change of pace at a crisis moment, like when Tara freaks out at the ob/gyn's, you could shift completely into one person's pov. This brings the reader right into the scene. Often writers will depict a scene from one person's pov then switch and replay the same events from another's.
My apologies for rambling on and on. I sometimes suffer from an excess of enthusiasm and this time it's all your fault. I'm totally loving your story!
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That'll put marzipan in your pie-plate, bingo!
I will post replies as an edit to this post. You can all read while I type.
Thanks for all the support.
L
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posted January 21, 2002 20:52 Okay, here is tonight's chapter.I will post replies as an edit to this post. You can all read while I type.
Thanks for all the support.
L
Nifty to see the notes from her Mom; I hope the Refero spell isn't necessary, but with the way you've set this up....
Well, keep it coming. The best cure for cliffhangeritis is always the next chapter...
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posted January 21, 2002 21:17 Ouch! Tara gets back just a minute too late.Nifty to see the notes from her Mom; I hope the Refero spell isn't necessary, but with the way you've set this up....
Well, keep it coming. The best cure for cliffhangeritis is always the next chapter...
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posted January 21, 2002 21:17 Noooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(that's all I have to say about chapter 18.....)
IP: LoggedjomarchCool Monster Fighter PS Great writing as usual.
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posted January 21, 2002 21:33 Oh my God!! So much angst and I'm at work. Am now going back to read your other fic so I can get a happy ending today :-).PS Great writing as usual.
IP: Loggedwillow_thebadasswitchDoll's Eye Crystal Oh my comment about chapter 17 being easier to read than chapter 16?? I felt I was in a rollercoaster ride whilst I was reading chapter 16. I meant it was easier on me poor heart.
Ooh kick ass Anya.
This is an excellent installment, Lisa.
~Caro
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posted January 21, 2002 21:57 I assumed crash position... now I'm pacing w/ worry. Biting my nails even. So Tara now has the refero in her book of shadows. But can she use it while the binding spell is still in effect? *sigh* Being tossed around like that isn't gonna be good for the baby.Oh my comment about chapter 17 being easier to read than chapter 16?? I felt I was in a rollercoaster ride whilst I was reading chapter 16. I meant it was easier on me poor heart.
Ooh kick ass Anya.
This is an excellent installment, Lisa.
~Caro
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posted January 21, 2002 22:10 Oh, that was cruel and unusual. I'm too stunned to write a haiku expressing my-Sass
by mollyig » Mon Jan 21, 2002 9:02 am
Lisa, you are a true storyteller!
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The new Indigo Girls album, "Become You," is in stores Feb. 26, 2002. For
more info, check out Indigo Girls web site at: http://www.indigogirls.com
by mariacomet » Mon Jan 21, 2002 10:19 am
Too many reasons to list here, I think I am just gonna send an email.
by fell » Mon Jan 21, 2002 10:38 am
The whole arc about Tara getting stronger than anybody realizes is great, and the threat to her pregnancy and connection to her family history, all very dramatic.
I totally love Cassie and Diana. It's good that you give them their own scenes. The vision about Tara's mom and the baby added a lot of suspense. Scenes with other characters add a change of pace as well as a chance to see what other characters, like Dawn and Buffy f'rinstance, are feeling.
Since i'm already in advice-gal mode from beta-ing someone else's fic i may as well be completely obnoxious...
I would have shown rack and his minion plotting so the reader would be anticipating that something bad could happen any time while the scoobies were blithely munching their lunch.
When writing the crisis scenes, like the attack for instance, don't be afraid to pour on the details and bring your readers right into the scene. These are, after all, the climactic moments for the suspense that's been building, the payoff. Writers often use shorter sentences to change the rhythm and strong adjectives and similes for more vivid imagery.
While most people have never been in an actual deadly fight, the reaction is similar to being in a serious accident- time slows, insignificant details leap out, you're suddenly aware of your heartbeat and of how things smell. Suddenly everything matters, there's a rush of intense emotions. I guess it's a lot like sex, too. Anyway, you don't want to leave your readers less than satisfied, so you need to give it your all and pour your heart into that moment.
It's one of the incongrous things about writing- that it can take much longer to read the description of a critical moment than the event would take to happen. But the reason movies, which can show an action in real time, haven't replaced books is that the written description is often so much richer and more rewarding, allowing the reader to savor the moment.
Your narrative pov isn't centered in one character, most of the time it's omniscient which keeps the reader equidistant from each character. This is fine, but for a change of pace at a crisis moment, like when Tara freaks out at the ob/gyn's, you could shift completely into one person's pov. This brings the reader right into the scene. Often writers will depict a scene from one person's pov then switch and replay the same events from another's.
My apologies for rambling on and on. I sometimes suffer from an excess of enthusiasm and this time it's all your fault. I'm totally loving your story!
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That'll put marzipan in your pie-plate, bingo!
by Lisa of Nine » Mon Jan 21, 2002 6:52 pm
I will post replies as an edit to this post. You can all read while I type.
Thanks for all the support.
L
by Kalita » Mon Jan 21, 2002 7:17 pm
Nifty to see the notes from her Mom; I hope the Refero spell isn't necessary, but with the way you've set this up....
Well, keep it coming. The best cure for cliffhangeritis is always the next chapter...
by Kilopto » Mon Jan 21, 2002 7:17 pm
(that's all I have to say about chapter 18.....)
by jomarch » Mon Jan 21, 2002 7:33 pm
PS Great writing as usual.
by willow_thebadasswitch » Mon Jan 21, 2002 7:57 pm
Oh my comment about chapter 17 being easier to read than chapter 16?? I felt I was in a rollercoaster ride whilst I was reading chapter 16. I meant it was easier on me poor heart.
Ooh kick ass Anya.
This is an excellent installment, Lisa.
~Caro
by Sassette » Mon Jan 21, 2002 8:10 pm
-Sass
by Kiwiccan » Mon Jan 21, 2002 8:13 pm
quote:
Originally posted by Kalita:
The best cure for cliffhangeritis is always the next chapter...
Kalita, can you please tell me what the symptoms of Cliffhangeritis are? I think I may have it?
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by Puff » Mon Jan 21, 2002 8:16 pm
Please let the next part be posted soon, although I worry it won't be a happy ending.
And as for being your only groupie. I think you are too modest and have more groupies than you think
Oh and finally saw the picture of the new horse, very nice Makes me miss all the riding I used to do.
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by Pixie » Mon Jan 21, 2002 8:38 pm
I'd like to join Puff in the groupie group. *holds up sign "will work for fic"*
by Rally » Mon Jan 21, 2002 8:46 pm
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by Lisa of Nine » Mon Jan 21, 2002 10:51 pm
Okay, it's not that bad... but it's bad.now for the detailed stuff... *rubs hands together*
I try to use the other characters to break things up. Plus, I like letting others shine.
Interesting suggestion to show Rack's plan during lunch, but I wasn't going for suspense. I wanted it to come out of nowhere. I think it was important to show the scoobies being happy, not expecting trouble. I do let reader know some stuff for the tension aspect, but I wanted the surprise for the readers and characters there. I've used the other technique before...BTW.
I do use slowed time in actions scenes, but not always. Sometimes I like to just have them flash by so readers feel as shocked as the characters. I have a few scenes coming up with the suspended reality... slowed times... noticing insignificant details, but I like to use them as the characters deal with emotion, not action. Just my take. *G*
I prefer the omniscient POV exclusively. My writing professors have pounded me with the 'don't swap POV' so many times, I swear I get hives when I try to write in 1st person!
I try to write the narrative in each character's paragraphs to reflect that person to adjust for that. For example, I use British expressions when describing Giles, even though I, as the story teller, am not British. Hope this makes some sense.
I appreciate all the input, and I will keep it in mind as I finish the story. I am always open to suggestions.
Thanks,
L
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kalita:
I'm all about the 'one minute too late.' LOL It's so fun and adds to tension.
Well, now would I put in a spell that wasn't necessary? *Batting eyelashes*
I'll try to help with that cliffhangeritis. I will warn that tomorrow's chapter is by far my worst cliffhanger...ever. (I love doing that... the warning is like it's own mini-cliffhanger!)
Thanks,
L
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kilopto:
yeeeeeeeeesssssssssssss!
L
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jomarch:
should I include 'work-warnings?'
Hope my other fic put a smile on your face.
Thanks,
L
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caro:
Yeah, she has the spell, but as you pointed out, she can't do magic while bound. Oh the humanity!
In all seriousness, writing the Tara -vs- Caedo scene was extremely difficult. In the next chapter I had to balance showing things for dramatic reasons and not showing too much because I couldn't stomach writing it. I hope it works. I will be adding a severe warning.
Your poor heart won't like 19. I know my heart didn't.
Ah, kick ass Anya. You'll see more of her. Go, Anya!
Thanks for the reply,
L
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sassette:
another haiku? Good to see you've been inspired.
Thanks,
L
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kiwiccan:
The symptoms?
Please let me know. I'd hate to be a carrier and not know it.
;-)
L
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Puff:
I did warn this would be dark. I do guarantee that W&T will be together at the end. How's that?
But will my groupies love me after this story is over? *G*
The new horse is very sweet. She's smooth as glass and she canters like a dream. Plus, I think she's flashy!
Thanks,
L
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Pixie:
I'll send hugs. It'll get worse before it gets better, but it will end on an up note.
Glad you're enjoying the ride,
L
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Rally:
I'm posting an extreme cliffhanger warning for tomorrow's chapter... that's the one you might want to hold off on for a day. Shh, don't tell anyone.
Thanks,
L
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Thank you once again to everyone.
Lisa
by xita » Mon Jan 21, 2002 11:03 pm
by Lisa of Nine » Mon Jan 21, 2002 11:10 pm
quote:quote:
Originally posted by xita:
Oh but lisa, I thought you always gave us happy endings
by nika » Mon Jan 21, 2002 11:23 pm
by kpmuse » Mon Jan 21, 2002 11:34 pm
Evil Lisa
by xita » Mon Jan 21, 2002 11:39 pm
by scylla » Tue Jan 22, 2002 7:53 am
by Pixie » Tue Jan 22, 2002 9:36 am
by katydid » Tue Jan 22, 2002 9:40 am
quote:
we should market spicy Tara sand-witches! They'd be a billion seller.
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by kpmuse » Tue Jan 22, 2002 12:10 pm
Lisa, another great chapter full of funny, touching, loving and truly disturbing events. Great story! Thanks for saving me last night! Very thoughtful of you.
kris
by Mini-ALF » Tue Jan 22, 2002 12:42 pm
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