FF: Unexpected Consequences

[Willow Rocks]

She can't loose the baby! I don't know about anyone else but i can't live with out good old Willow and tara and baby blue eyes (cause we all know she'll have them!) and a happy ending

[Jenny Scott]

Evilness, thy name is lisa.

(meaning this in the nicest possible way...honest...GIVE US THE NEXT BLOODY CHAPTER...ahem...)

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"The worlds about to be destroyed and i'm stuck in a traffic jam!"

[sparrow]

You are a writing genius.

Need more info now, I can't handle all this angst. There is too much on the show now this wonderful piece has my stomic all acidy.

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"I may be loves bitch but at least I'm (wo)man enough to admit it"

"Yea baby, I'm back"

[Lisa of Nine]

Hi all,
There will be two more chapters, for a total of 21. (barring another change in my mind, but that should be all.)

This upcoming chapter is the darkest chapter of the story. It's all heading back toward sunshine from here. PLEASE read the disclaimers on the next chapter before deciding wether or not to read it. I've never given this severe of warnings before, and I don't want anyone upset.
Lisa
http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon19.html

[This message has been edited by Lisa of Nine (edited January 22, 2002).]

[Kilopto]

Oh dear god...do I dare read this??

Ack....I have to....I'll edit this message afterwards with my most likely weepy and waily comments....

Okay....Just read the chapter. Wow. Hard to read, kind of draining...and now I'm kind of numb...But...wow. Lisa, this is amazing. It reads just like an actual episode, it's all there, I could see it all, and feel it. It may be dark, it may be painful as hell, but dammit this is amazing writing. And I admire that you've stuck by your original story, no matter how sad and dark it became...

Now...I guess I wait for more,
Ashley

[This message has been edited by Kilopto (edited January 22, 2002).]

[Rally]

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Originally posted by Lisa of Nine:
PLEASE read the disclaimers on the next chapter before deciding wether or not to read it. I've never given this severe of warnings before, and I don't want anyone upset.
Lisa[/B]

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It's not that we would be upset, we just like to whine and carry on in the hopes of getting the updates that much more quickly.

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"Everyone's getting spanked but me."quote:

[Jenny Scott]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, dear god, nooooooooooooooo. (Crying hysterically)

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"The worlds about to be destroyed and i'm stuck in a traffic jam!"

[katydid]

Oh my god! Lisa....*sobs* No..no...no.

I do trust you though...you will make a happy ending. And I still love you.

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"She practically has 'genuine molded plastic' stamped on her ass.

[Puff]

I knew you'd break our hearts At least we have 2 more chapters of this wonderful story to go.

Lisa I'm sure all your groupies will still love you even after this. But agh that was a nasty chapter too read. I need a hug now, you should hand them out with the tissues.

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Bloody hell, sodding, limey, shagging, knickers, bollocks...oh God...I'm English

[Web Warlock]

Oh. I get it. You hate us. That explains everything.

Glad Willow didn't turn back to dark magics, even if I did want to see her make a cinder out of Rack.

I'm thinking Amy knows she's screwed. I am putting my cash on Anya getting to her first.

Warlock

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Author, the Netbooks of Witches and Warlocks
The Other Side: http://www.xtreme-gaming.com/~theotherside/

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"Nobody gets me baby. I'm the wind!" - Tom Servo, MST3k

[Pixie]

Lisa, you've brought me to tears. So sad, and so well done. I'm so proud of Willow, and touched that Buffy is publicly turning to Spike to comfort and be comforted.

I think we should have a kitten group hug now. *sniff*

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[xita]

Ok that's done, we'd seen it coming now on to better things, she got to do the spell and Willow didn't do dark magicks, this hopefully earned Willow all the points she'll ever need.

[Bobo's Mom]

Alas Lisa,

You break my heart, and yet I will keep coming back for more. You are setting up another 22 chapter one year later epic, aren't you?? I'm keeping my fingers crossed.

One slightly critical comment, however. I could tell that you were holding back on the Tara stuff. The flow of the chapter seemed off to me because of this. Would you consider restoring any and all edits from this latest chapter when posting the final story to your home page? While the events of this latest update are sad, I think you would achieve something more tragic in tone.

Again, thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us,

BM

[Mini-ALF]

Ahh...I'm so nervous. Tara can't die. I guess I should've listened to the warnings and waited until the next chapter...oh well. Keep up the amazing work Lisa.

Michelle

[ShaggyKat]

You made me cry. I was hoping that Cassie was wrong but it didn't work out that way I guess.

I still don't think Amy is evil though. I know what she did, but she didn't want Tara and Brianna to die. And she did the right thing in the end. If Rack survives I think Amy is going to be in trouble.

You were right about this being your darkest W/T stuff.
Looking forward to seeing how you end this.

[aladdin]

Lisa, I think you did a great job on this chapter although it WAS scary and it somehow bothered me- in a good way. In exactly the right way.

Sidenote: I was sitting in French class today (innocently as ever), when suddenly my teacher exclaimed: Je n'aime pas les sandwichs (I don't like sandwichs). This remark caught me totally off-guard...to make a long story short: I choked on my ice-tea (not a pretzel, but still dangerous) and snorted it through my nose all over my extra-credit sheet. See what you did to me??
I thought I'd share this gross story with you since you are the one that is responsible for this!

Hugs,
Aladdin

[Kalita]

Well, at least we were forewarned.

Excellently done, Lisa. I don't think you skimped on anything, and you struck a nice balance.

Spike, of all people, seemed a calming presence. I'm not sure what that means, but it's interesting.

Looking forward to the end. I want to see this through.

[Rane]

wow, lisa. emotionally i'm all over the place with this fic. i have so much to say but i cant right now. i'll email you real soon. *hugs*

[BytrSuite]

I don't mind reading piece by piece, but I'd much rather read it all in one shot. Especially with all this angst I know is coming. So I stopped reading after chapter 17.

I think I'm just spoiled, cause when I first stumbled upon Lisa's site, I read all the W/T stuff in about 2 days. That was, like, in December.

Staying away from this thread and the story parts is almost as hard as trying to stay away from Buffy spoilers.

So, good job, Lisa. I really love the stuff you write.

(And yes, it was weird posting to a thread I haven't read in two days, so I apologize if this comes off as a little non sequitur.)

[AutumnT]

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Originally posted by BytrSuite:
I don't mind reading piece by piece, but I'd much rather read it all in one shot. Especially with all this angst I know is coming. So I stopped reading after chapter 17.

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That's willpower. You probably don't even know the lure of the haiku. Me I'm just sitting here going "arrrrrrggg".

Autumn
arrrrrrrggg
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[Kiwiccan]

I have chapter 19 sitting in front of me in brilliant black and white. I'm fighting the urge to read it until Lisa gives us Ch 21. Will I win the battle or will I give in? Only time will tell. Bwhahahahaha

Whatever happened to the 2 chapter a day policy?

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Paula
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May the Amber Force be with you.
Keeper of my own insanity

[This message has been edited by Kiwiccan (edited January 23, 2002).]

[fell]

Great job, Lisa. This is, imho, getting better as it goes along. The action scenes are gripping and there's lots of suspense and drama. It's great having all the scoobies involved. For a story set as this one is you either have to include all of them (because they would insist on being there) or give them something else to do to get rid of them.

About the narration- anything that doesn't draw attention to itself works, and your approach certainly works just fine.

I don't find this excessivly dark or angsty- it has about the same level of intensity as the show, so bring it on! You've done a great job of increasing the jeopardy and emotional cost as the story progresses.

Looking forward to the rest. Thanks for making the effort to bring this to us.

[mollyig]

You know in "After life" when the demon as Buffy throws the crystal and Tara keeps saying "oh my god, oh my god", and then later in the episode its Willow who says it.

That's the kind of panic I was reduced to when I read the latest instalment.

Excellent work Lisa

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[nika]

I'm crying and raising my fists in the air going why,oh why? Also clapping cause you're an amazing writer and deserve a standing ovation. Please don't make us wait long for the next part *sniff*

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"Eat lot's of applesauce, preferably fed to you by attractive young lesbians." Amber Benson

[kpmuse]

Brilliant Lisa!
I cried while reading this and I kept crying for Tara, Willow and Embryanna.
Willow finally "gets" what her uncontrolled anger cost her. Wow! What a powerful realization for her while facing Rack. How brave, strong and full of love they all are for each other.
Thanks Lisa!

kris

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[Thanatopsis]

[QUOTE]Originally posted by AutumnT:
You probably don't even know the lure of the haiku.

That's so sad. The haiku is part of the reason I'm reading this piece. Well, that and Lisa's amazing ability to tell a story. But I think that goes without saying.

T

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"Oh trusty soda machine, I push you for rootbeer, you give me Coke."

[sparrow]

I wish I knew latin right now. Could Tara possibly transfer cletus to Willow. I know it sounds weird but Tara did the latin spell and Willow was still fighting Rack, the amulet was still in full force and since it only works with pregnant woman. But this is only a theory maybe wishfull thinking.

Only 2 chapeters left but there is so much more story. I await on baited breathe and bended knee for the next episode and please let everything work out, I can't handle this stress.

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"I may be loves bitch but at least I'm (wo)man enough to admit it"

"Yea baby, I'm back"

[Sassette]

*winces* Oh, that was ... ow. Of course, we knew that was coming ... but I'm feeling so bad for all the Scoobies right now.

This is an extremely excellent fic, Lisa. I have now read ALL your stuff (even the Voyager ones *g*), and I think by the time this is done, it will be my favorite.

-Sass
"Stands with Kittens"

[AutumnT]

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Originally posted by sparrow:
I wish I knew latin right now

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I tried a latin translation freeware program called quicklatin and it did not really help.

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[Rane]

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Originally posted by AutumnT:
I tried a latin translation freeware program called quicklatin and it did not really help.

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maybe cause the spell wasn't latin. lol, autumn. i think it was portuguese.quote: