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FF: Unexpected Consequences

Postby Lisa of Nine » Mon Jan 14, 2002 12:55 pm

Good morning kittens!
Well, I usally make myself reply to every piece of feedback before I post the next chapters. I hope you don't mind if I switch that today. I have a doctor's appointment today and I didn't want to leave you all hanging. I'll post the chapters now, and then I will reply to each post when I get home.
Hopefully, my appointment will go better than Tara's!
Thanks for all the sweet comments!
enjoy!
Lisa

WARNING! Major cliffhanger at the end of chapter 8/ Don't read it until tommorrow if you don't want to squirm.
http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon07.html http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon08.html

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Postby 'lucy' moore » Mon Jan 14, 2002 1:37 pm

I'm the one who got peas' for breakfast.Thanks btw...
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Wow!! I ignored your advice and read anyway.What a humdinger!!! Great!

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fiat justitia,ruat caelum.

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Postby Enigmatic » Mon Jan 14, 2002 1:43 pm

Stupid, Stupid me!

Why didn't I read your warning? I was just so happy, that the new chapter had come, and I just clicked and read it! I forgot all about the warnings! Stupid! But I wasn't disappointed, it was brilliant...as usual

I don't like this Tara and Baby in danger. And I know that Willow was bad, but does she has to be reminded all the time? I feel so bad for her

And a small thing...I really liked the harem-comment! It was so funny...why do I suddenly want to be a part of Tara's harem...hmm!

Well, I just have to wait for a new chapter, I can manage that...I can...I can...

Please hurry!

-Enigmatic

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Postby Rally » Mon Jan 14, 2002 1:54 pm

Continued great work Lisa, can't wait for the next update.

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-R

"Everyone's getting spanked but me."

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Postby Kilopto » Mon Jan 14, 2002 2:00 pm

Amazing. Simply amazing.

That's all I really have to say

(oh and the only thing making that cliffhanger bearable is knowing you will update again soon)

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Postby willow_thebadasswitch » Mon Jan 14, 2002 3:22 pm

oh boy! I knew I should've heeded that warning! I'll be waiting (im)patiently for the next one.
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Postby katydid » Mon Jan 14, 2002 3:22 pm

Note to self: When Lisa warns you not to read something if you dont like cliffhangers....DONT READ IT!

I still love you though... I strongly believe that as long as there is a happy ending, what happens in the middle really doesnt matter. Well, it DOES matter...but not so much as long as the end result is good. Excellent! I love the story....and the mood swings in pregnant Tara...lol. You have a gift.

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Postby ShaggyKat » Mon Jan 14, 2002 3:54 pm

Oh I so shouldn't have read those.

I think i have to stop coming here. All these beautiful yet painfully unfinished fics.

ShaggyKat
 


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Postby Willow Rocks » Mon Jan 14, 2002 4:01 pm

Why do i never take warnings!
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Postby TashaR » Mon Jan 14, 2002 4:05 pm

Hey, Kitties...me gots problem...I can only get the page to load up to "Tara smiled and dipped" during the visit at Diana's...can someone cut and paste or e-mail me the rest!?!? Gerbil_Girl15@hotmail.com

THANK YOU!!!


Now, Lisa...I haven't read the horrible cliffhanger yet, but I can't wait. I LOVE your characterazation, you stay so true to the characters...esp Tara and Anya!

can't wait for more!

TashaR
 


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Postby Zippy_uk » Mon Jan 14, 2002 4:27 pm

This just gets better and better!

Zip

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Postby AutumnT » Mon Jan 14, 2002 4:31 pm

OK, now she's just taunting us.

You just know that the next chapter is sitting out there somewhere on her hard drive all unread and unloved. It would just be so easy to give that chapter the tingly "just been read" feel instead of punishing it until tomorrow...

AutumnT
 


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Postby sparrow » Mon Jan 14, 2002 4:53 pm

When will I learn to listen to what the lovely writer says but no I have to be all greaddy and read everything and now I'm in hell. This is bad, bad, bad, very bad.

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"I may be loves bitch but at least I'm (wo)man enough to admit it"

"Yea baby, I'm back"

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Postby Puff » Mon Jan 14, 2002 5:42 pm

Cliffhanger? You call that a cliffhanger You know I read all your stories so I should be used to them by now, but as always you have me here needing to know what will happen next. And what makes this worse is the fact that you said this fic was the darkest you have written. I read 'Retribution and reward' I know what dark is. So now I worry...exactly how bad this is going to get?
But I have hope for Willow/Tara and even the baby *gulp* please don't destroy my hope too much.

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Bloody hell, sodding, limey, shagging, knickers, bollocks...oh God...I'm English

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Postby Charlie » Mon Jan 14, 2002 7:23 pm

WOW... just wow! I've never read any of your stuff before but I'm now off to find some more! This is so amazingly wonderful... and dammit, when you said cliffhanger, you meant CLIFFHANGER! I seriously couldn't pick anything about this story that I haven't liked and that's a serious compliment. I'm like an ULTRA critical reader, I tear everything to shreds, but this is just brilliant.

Update please... soon!!!!!!!!

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‘When she lowers her eyes she seems to hold all the beauty in the world between her eyelids; when she raises them I see only myself in her gaze.’
- Natalie Clifford Barney

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Postby silverangel » Mon Jan 14, 2002 7:42 pm

Hey Lisa. First of all, may I say, WOW! I love this story! Can't wait for chapter 9. I tried to write you through Yahoo! group Willtara but maybe you didnt get it. I'm starting a fanfic page on my Willow and Tara's Love website and I'd love to add this story to it. Basically I'd sing your praises and put up the links to the chapters. Please let me know if this is okay. Site address is listed below. Thanks!
P.S. I hope everything went okay for you at the doctors appointment

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Jennifer, Site Mom at Willow and Tara's Love/ http://clix.to/willowandtaraslove

Willow: Maybe, maybe that way.
Tara: We looked that way. And this way, and the other way. She's not out here.
Willow: Where would you go? If you felt lost and alone? Where would you go?
Tara: To you.
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Postby kissystarcowboy » Tue Jan 15, 2002 12:27 am

okay, i hope this doesn't sound too sycophantic... but god! this is the best fic i've ever read... erghhh,w hy didn't i listen and not read chapter 8??? now i'm hopping around waiting for the next set. so unfair!

i think you're writing everyone brilliantly. the peas for breakfast, heehee! even my btvs hating gf likes this fic, i made her read it. it's been making me all weepy and wanting us to have a baby!

lisa, you're awesome. i'm off to read all your other fics tonight... the suspense is making me all wonky. your anya is excellent! and pregnant tara is making me sooo jealous.

-Colette

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Postby xita » Tue Jan 15, 2002 12:37 am

Well, I hate that I have to wait till tomorrow evening to read the next part. I want that baby to be of the good and I want it to be made from love between them and I want them all to be together forever and I .. . better be quiet now! MOre, thanks
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Postby Pixie » Tue Jan 15, 2002 2:33 am

quote:
Originally posted by xita:
I want that baby to be of the good and I want it to be made from love between them and I want them all to be together forever and I .. . better be quiet now! MOre, thanks

Xita - nice Willowbabble. Teehee.

quote:

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Postby mollyig » Tue Jan 15, 2002 7:23 am

Oh, I'm all worried about our girls and their girl now.

But I trust you, you'll make everything good . . . won't you?

A truly excellent tale, me-deary-o.

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The new Indigo Girls album, "Become You," is in stores Feb. 26, 2002. For
more info, check out Indigo Girls web site at: http://www.indigogirls.com

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Postby Anja17 » Tue Jan 15, 2002 7:44 am

Normally I just lurk around but I have to say that I love all of your stories and especially this.... A baby...this is sooo sweet. I was always looking forward to read a story with a pregnant Tara. And now I’m really happy to read yours
Anja17
 


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Postby KittyKo » Tue Jan 15, 2002 8:32 am

*walks around stressfuly*
ok, loving this, but cliffhanger...ohhh.. bad, evil!
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Postby Jessie » Tue Jan 15, 2002 10:38 am

I have been reading this on the willtara list and just wanted to post some feedback.

I don't know how you do it, but you always suck me into your stories right away. (You're one of my favorite fic'rs!) I'm loving this story ... which is no surprise to me.

More more more!

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"And how long have you known your girlfriend's Tinkerbell?"

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Postby Quill » Tue Jan 15, 2002 2:37 pm

*whimpers* Why do I have such an issue with not listening when I'm warned? I should know better by now.
Wonderful Lisa. I love Grandpa Giles...such a sweet addition. Are the next chapters ready yet? Please?
Quill
 


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Postby RomanceJunky » Tue Jan 15, 2002 3:05 pm

You know one of the great joys I find as a member of the kitten community is playing catch-up on all the stories here on the Pens board. This one has been a major find! Thanks Lisa! I've never read your stories before...I'll make a point to now. Most Excellent!

RJ

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Postby Robin » Tue Jan 15, 2002 4:45 pm

Argh! I want the new chapters! Hello?
No seriously, story's great! I'm impressed how accurate you catch the characters, for example Anya: Everytime she says something, I start laughing, so I'm almost falling out of my chair, just like on TV!
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Postby Lisa of Nine » Tue Jan 15, 2002 5:08 pm

Well, greetings all!
Sorry for the late post. I was gone all day yesterday and was so tired I just fell into bed when I did get home. Thank you so much for all the wonderful words about the story.
Okay... same format as usually... first the chapters (which is what y'all want anyway) and then my replies to feedback. (Which I totally appreciate!)

http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon09.html http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon10.html

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AutumT:
'Reward and Reprisal' was fun. It really left me wanting to write pregnant Tara. After seeing OMWF, I saw that song/love scene, and thought..."Ah ha!" And well, this story was born...so to speak. *G*
I try to put a Joss 'oh shit" end to each chapter. Glad you recognized it.
Thanks again,
L
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Puff:
Hey, I am always thrilled to leave a woman pleased.
I should hire you as my publicist. The hugs for the last chapters will be offered to all, but maybe you can start a support group for other readers. (Cue scary music) I'm dropping tons of hints about the end so people won't kill me. *G*
The peas... everyone likes the peas. Who knew small round veggies could be so funny?
Thanks for all the support and feedback.
L
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Willowrocks:
Have no fear...the wait is up!
Glad I'm keeping you on the edge of your seat.
Thanks,
L
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katydid:
There is some non-smutty goodness coming soon... ahem...so to speak.
There will be barefeet... I promise! I've gone to the chatroom on a few nights...and it's always empty.
We should organize a chat night.We can all go barefoot! *G*
Thanks,
L
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kilopto:
You are welcome...you are welcome. I try to post at least two chapters a day. I pace my stories so that if you read two, you get some good plot advancement and some character development. Plus, it's a manageable size for me to put out. *G* Did I just say I put out? Never mind...LOL
Great to hear you liked my other stories.
Thanks again,
L
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Enigmatic:
The peas? You know, I put that in there, and I wasn't even sure anyone else would think it was funny. It seems to be the hit of the story so far. Yay peas. Go peas! ;-)
Thank you for the kind words. Bound had dark moments, but I think this story will surpass it. *G*
All this feedback is just incredible.
Thanks again,
L
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Emily_first:
As I told Enigmatic, the peas really are popular. Can't wait until you all see the food based fun that is coming soon.
Tell Lucy I am SO sorry!
Thanks,
L
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willow_thebadasswicca:
I may have to put peas in every story!
Tell your brother to get out of bed and read fan fic. *G*
There is more Anya to come.
Thanks again,
L
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kittyko:
Thank you. The peas...again the peas. ;-)
Maybe I should post a picture of peas with this fic?
Rack and Amy are certainly up to no good.
It's nice to hear that people like T&W going slow. I can't honestly see Tara just taking her back without a second thought.
Buffy has been fun to write. I hoping the Buffy/Tara bonding is in line with the spoilers I've heard for the series.
Thanks again,
L
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Quill:
Thank you so much. I sometimes worry that my complex plots leave readers wanting me to just get to the bedroom scenes. ;-) But, I love to weave plots so you can go back see all the little clues I left along the way. Hope this story is working so far.
There will be more Anya, have to fear. And... much more "take-charge Tara." LOL... I actually have a character use that exact description. Have you been peeking at my hard drive?
Thanks for the feedback,
L
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kalita:
And I just have to say... you haven't seen anything yet!
Thanks,
L
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Tempest819:
I replied to every onelist feedback, but I really do not trust the reply button on the list. I really do not want to sign up for daily emails because as it is, I just crashed my email for about the 8th time. Could have something to do with the fact that I let over 1,300 emails stack up in the inbox, another 900 in the sent, and...good god...almost 2,000 in the delete file. The whole thing just gave up and I had to reload.

It's good to know the first chapter grabbed you. I had that last line of chapter one picked out when I started this novel. *G*
I try to get at least one new bit of plot stuff to make the readers cringe and/or sigh each chapter. Hopefully it works.
Again, I adore Anya.
I've tried to develop Tara/Buffy. I think Buffy needs a calming influence like Tara. ;-)
Thank you so much for sending feedback...again!
L
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TashaR:
Me a goddess? No, that's Tara (as played by Amber Benson)
Can you tell that character makes me swoon?
When I wrote "Retribution and Reward" and "Reward and Reprisal," I set up the plotline so I could write one story set around each year they get their tattoos. I don't know if I will be writing fan fic that long. I've tried to make each novel stand alone so there are not strings hanging. Sorry if that doesn't answer you question. I guess the answer is... I'm not sure. (End Willowbabble.)
Keep batting those eyelashes...I am hurrying!
L
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Xita:
I'm thrilled to give you reading for the week.
I also love Large with the butch Tara, but then I love strong women. I think Tara's decision at the end of Tabula Rosa took great courage. It was brilliantly played by Amber B.
Thanks for the feedback,
L
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willow420:
Glad you like it so far!
Thanks,
L
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Bobo's mom:
thank you! It's good to know that you enjoy my writing in both genres. I often wonder if fans of one like the other. Maybe someday I will get the courage to post my Westwing fan fic. ;-)
Oh... someday please explain your nickname! *G*
Thanks,
L
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kiwiccan:
miss muse... you have been derelict in your duties. Vamp Willow needs to have a little talk with you. BTW, my minion already found the RO. Now I can show up anytime! Bwhahahaha!
L
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delany:
you're gonna' wait? cliffhanger whimp! *G*
I'll ask the list minions to only dole out a few chapters at a time... so you have to suffer!
Cliffhanger are good for the heart.
Seriously, I'm just glad you like the story.
Thanks,
L
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nika:
Wow. Thank you. Don't lay down your pen. Pick it up and write some fan fic.
It's really good to know that the characters are on the mark. Panic Willow is fun, so is kick butt Tara, and Anya is always a riot to write. Maybe Anya needs some peas...hmmm.
Thanks again,
L
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mollygig:
Thanks for writing.
Hopefully the new chapters will make your Tuesday.
L
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Pixie:
Well, I am so glad you found my webpage via old posts. It's nice to know the stories are still being discovered.
I'd live to write a sequel to TOTG with lots of Kate/Maggie. NO! That's not a preview of things to come. LOL
I HAD to write the Jenny returns... I really miss her. Robin M was incredible. I would have a huge crush on her if I were Willow.
I try to show W&T growing. The hardest part is starting over each new novel. *G* I have to remember to start where they are Now, in the show...and not where I left them in another novel.
Ah...the infamous interruptions. ;-) What can I say? I love to write scenes of embarrassment. I've got a new twist on it this story.
A sequel to R&R? Sigh... I will have to reiterate... I just don't know. Sorry.
This current story is separate from all my others. I've tried to tie it into the show's timeline...right down to calculating Tara's conception date with the OMWF airing.
Thanks for all the sweet comments,
L
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'lucy'moore:
dear lord...sorry about that! I tried to make it CLEAR that peas are NOT a breakfast food.
Glad you liked the latest chapter.
L
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Enigmatic:
I warned you. Didn't I warn you? LOL
Tara and the baby have to be in peril...because..well, I love angst. *EG*
As for Willow, she tampered with the dark forces. She had a major debt still to pay. Bad Willow, no cookies.
I think Tara is accepting applications for the harem. You have to provide your own paper gown. ;-)
Enjoy the new chapters.
Thanks,
L
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Rally:
Thanks. Hope you like it when it's finished.
L
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kilopto:
Just know that most chapters end in cliffhangers, but the end is always tied in a neat lil' Willow/Tara bow. :-) Be strong like and Amazon.
Thanks,
L
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willow_thebadasswicca:
See above... I warned you! You people should know...I love cliffhangers...so if I add a warning...it's not nice. (Kidding!)
Thanks for writing,
L
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katydid:
LOL...again...see above. I DID warn y'all!
Hope you enjoy the middle as well as the end. I'm having fun with pregnant Tara. She has more suffering to come.
Thanks,
L
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shaggykat:
Hey, I did give a strong warning! LOL
There are tons of good fics on this board. Try Rane's Camp Flutie. That the only one I am letting myself read right now. I don't like to read other W/T stuff while working on a story. I made an exception since it's an Alt Universe,a nd I am addicted to Rane's stuff. :-)
Thanks,
L
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Willow Rocks:
Why? Because you are a kitty and kitties never listen...they must be free and do as they wish!
Hope you liked the cliffhanger.
L
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TashaR:
Did you ever get that pages? I can email you it if you still need it.
Try deleting your cache... you may have partially loaded the page...and then it will aaonly come up partially from then on.
It's funny, Tara and Anya are my favorites to write, and they are both underused on the show. Hmm, maybe I'm just partial to them. :-)
Thanks,
L
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Zippy uk:
Thanks! I hope you still feel that way when it's finished.
BTW... We had a pony named Zip when I was little. *G* Those, not in that vamp Willow... ride people like ponies way.
Thanks again,
L
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Autumn,
I would never taunt!
I gave that warning out of the kindness of my heart! (Plus to see who would actually listen to me. LOL)
As for those chapters... they'd rather wait to be posted without messy errors! Otherwise they'd die of embarrassment.
enjoy the new stuff,
L
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Sparrow:
As I said above...I DID warn y'all! LOL
Hope you like the two new chapters and think they are good, good, good.
Thanks,
L
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Puff:
I like to keep the suspense up, but when a section I post has such a huge bomb, I give a warning.
As for the darkness? It's gonna' be worse than R&R. I had to actually change a scene (cut it out) because it made ME cry writing it.
I won't destroy your hope. Live in ignorant bliss as long as you can.
Thanks again,
L
PS..Okay, I know that last bit was just evil...but I couldn't help myself! *G*
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Charile:
If you're looking for my stuff, here's the willow/Tara page. http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/tarawill.html

I did give a warning about the cliffhangers... sadly...*sigh* no one listens! ;-)
It's good to know you will point out errors. That's the only way for writers to improve.
Enjoy the new chapters, and thanks,
L
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silverangel:
Man... I swear that yahoo sucks!
I'm gonna' have to break down and change my list settings so I get emails in my overloaded box.
As for my stuff and your site... I don't mind people linking to my stuff as long as they don't have hard-core/ nasty/porn stuff at their site. I checked you site and it's very nice. Feel free to link!
Thanks for asking about the doc. Things are okay.
L
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kissystarcowboy:
I had to laugh when I read your post. Tell your gf thanks for being brave and trying the story. Does she like star trek? I have trek stuff linked to my W&T page.
I hope I don't cause a lesbian baby boom with the pregnant Tara story.
Enjoy the Anya bits to come...and don't envy Pregnant Tara... all I can say is... morning sickness of the non-morning variety!
Thanks,
L
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Xita:
LOL...that was a world class Willowbabble!
More is on the way.
Thanks so much,
L
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Pixie:
My thoughts exactly on the xitababble!
LOL
L
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molligig:
you're supposed to worry. ;-)
I promise to have W&T together at the end. How's that?
Thanks for the kind words,
L
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Anya17:
I'm glad you're liking my take on pregnant Tara. she is so wonderful with Dawn on the show. She'd make a great mama. *G*
Thanks,
L
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kittyko:
Psssssst...I think 'someone' posted a cliffhanger warning. *snicker*
Sorry...I couldn't resist...what with you pacing like panic willow.
Enjoy the new chapters,
Thanks.
L
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Jessie:
I am so happy to hear that I truly to suck... err... I mean suck you in!
Thanks for the feedback here. I think the willtara reply button eats my responses.
L
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Quill:
Geez, why did I even put the warning in there. LOL... okay... I guess I knew some of you would try to test me...to see if I was serious..well, I was. *G*
I think Giles would make a cute grandpa...
Thanks for writing. enjoy the new chapters,
L
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Romance Junky:
Thank you. Drop by my Willow/Tara page and look around. Plenty of angst for all. http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/tarawill.html
Enjoy,
L
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Robin:
I was typing replies when you posted! Here are the new chapters...
Glad you like Anya. She makes me laugh too. I think Emma C is a great actress.
Thank,
L
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Okay, I think that is everyone!
Thank you all so much. I hope you enjoy today's chapters!
Lisa

Lisa of Nine
 


FF: Unexpected Consequences

Postby Puff » Tue Jan 15, 2002 5:47 pm

As much as I love you Lisa I may have to hurt you for the ending of that chapter No warning, nothing. I guess this is the start of the bad, I need a hug As much as I understand why Tara did what she did, I just hate to see Willow hurt.

Oh and your publicist? I can't imagine you need one with your stories

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Bloody hell, sodding, limey, shagging, knickers, bollocks...oh God...I'm English

Puff
 


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Postby Halcyon » Tue Jan 15, 2002 5:51 pm

You are kinda evil, with the no warning and all. Wait, you are evil ...*sigh* Anya's radar needs to be re-calibrated when you're messing around.

edited cos i didn't wanna spoil the surprise.

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Postby mariacomet » Tue Jan 15, 2002 5:56 pm

Okay, the thing with the bears is quite possibly the cutest and in a strange way 'tension building' things I have ever read.

I love the way you have done Xander - sweet and even charming. And there are days I don't even like Xander. But I do in your world. I keep feeling all defendy of Willow....she is trying so hard and I'm really proud of her.

You are doing a great job slowly building the unresolved sexual tension (UST) with a nice mix of suspense. I love this piece. Please keep going.

By the way, I am fairly certain that two cliff hangers in a row qualifies as EVIL. Evil, I tell ya.

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