The Kitten, the Witches and the Bad Wardrobe Willow & Tara Forever

by **willow420** » Thu Jan 17, 2002 5:39 pm

I wrote this poem with Willow and Tara in mind and I welcome any advice or comments you have. This is my first time so be gentle.

My heart sings life's song.
No words will ever do.
Though they say its wrong,
I want only you.

When I'm with you,
there's nothing to fear.
The world seems anew,
with your body near.

As hours turn to days,
and days to forever.
I'll love you always.
My soulmate, my lover.

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A.K.A. Liz

"Did you try looking in the sofa in hell?" Willow in Dopplegangland.

by **Pixie-Muso** » Thu Jan 17, 2002 5:52 pm

Oh! I thought that was absolutely lovely. Thankyou for sharing, Liz.

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"...the hardest thing in this world is to live in it..."
~Buffy, The Gift.

by **tiger17** » Thu Jan 17, 2002 6:29 pm

What a wonderful poem, very sweet

by **Quill** » Fri Jan 18, 2002 2:04 am

Very nice. Fuel to my giddy fire...*grin*...thank you for sharing this with us.

by **willow's girl** » Fri Jan 18, 2002 3:14 am

Very sweet. I liked it.

by **TheWombat** » Fri Jan 18, 2002 6:34 am

That was an extremely sweet piece. Nice one Liz

Wombat

by **Hanki** » Fri Jan 18, 2002 1:37 pm

thats lovely, i really liked it. more please

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Hannah's Home

Are you getting the whole actress eats food thing?? Cuz most of them don't ~ Amber

by **willow420** » Fri Jan 18, 2002 2:44 pm

Thanks for all the great replies. I'm working on getting a fanfic up but I'm sure I'll get some more poems up between now and then.

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A.K.A. Liz

"Did you try looking in the sofa in hell?" Willow in Dopplegangland.

by **willow420** » Mon Jan 21, 2002 10:02 pm

I wrote a new poem and its kinda personal but I needed to get it out.

Heartbroken

I tell you I love you,
but you don't care.
I tell you I need you,
but all I get's an empty stare.

I thought what we had,
would last for all time.
You left me broken and sad,
with no reason or rhyme.

We were friends first,
thought we'd be lovers to the end.
But I didn't fill your thirst.
You had needs I couldn't tend.

You once gave me all
your heart knew to give.
I was at your beck and call.
It was for you that I lived.

But that time has gone.
You're promised to another.
I know that it's wrong,
but I'll love you forever.

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A.K.A. Liz

"Did you try looking in the sofa in hell?" Willow in Dopplegangland.

by **Pixie-Muso** » Mon Jan 21, 2002 10:12 pm

Aww... Liz, that was beautiful. You said it was personal... so I'm sorry if that was a situation you've been in.

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"...the hardest thing in this world is to live in it..."
~Buffy, The Gift.

by **Kez** » Tue Jan 22, 2002 3:01 pm

That really was beautiful, it really brought a tear to my eye.

A Simple Poem