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fanfic: FAMILY CONFLICT

Postby Hawk » Thu Feb 28, 2002 9:13 pm

I am really sorry for being such a shit and taking so long on this next part. I wanted to finish off my other story and had to put this one on the back burner for a few days. Here is the next part so I hope that you like it.

Part Twelve

Ian found himself once again pacing his room. This was one of the things that he hated doing most in the world. Pacing equaled the lose of one’s cool and a man of his stature could not show any type of weakness. Russell was his best assassin and had never failed on any job, but this wasn’t just any job. Tara had been able to deal with anything and everything that he had every sent at her, and he couldn’t afford to have another failure. It was eighteen hours until the council meeting and then everything that he had ever dreamed of would be his. The only person who could prevent his rise to godhood was Tara and that was not an option.

Three hours ago Russell kidnapped his sister little redhead and thirty minutes after that Tara had gone after them. If everything had gone as planned then Tara should have been dead an hour ago. Ian knew that Russell would play with Tara for a while and release all that rage festering inside of him over the years. He understood his friend’s obsession but this was taking too long.

The door opened and Russell stumbled into the room and fell to the ground. His clothing was scorched and to looked like his left arm was burned. “Help,” Russell whispered.

“What the hell happened?” Ian demanded. This was not a good sign.

Russell looked up at him; his eyes were the look of pure agony. “Tara…showed up and…so angry…barely made it out alive.” Russell panted slowly inching up so that he was sitting on his knees.

Ian looked around the room. There had to be a way around this. Tara might know that he was behind all of this but she had no way to prove it and that was all that really mattered. She could attack him verbally in the counsel but his status still made more reliable and the fact that she had turned her back on them was an added bonus.

Now the question was Russell. He knew that Russell would never turn against him but he could still be a problem. Ian wouldn’t kill him because the assassin was too good at getting out of sticky situations and then there would just be one more person that he would have to go up against which was not an option. He would graciously give his injured friend a vacation to nurse his wounds.

“Ok, you need to get out of the house as soon as possible. We don’t need Tara running and finishing what she started. I never knew she had this in her, but I guess her new friend brings out the wild cat out of her in more then one way,” Ian said as he helped his friend up. “Now I am going to give you access to my jet and in ten hours you will be sitting on a nice beach in the warm sun. Don’t worry I’ll take care of you.”

“Thank you, I knew that I could count on you.” Russell said, as he was lead out of the room through the secret tunnels that Ian installed a few years ago. What Ian didn’t notice was the fact that Russell was watching the way they were going the whole time, memorizing every twist and turn.

Tara sat on her bed next to Willow just enjoying the feel of the redhead in her arms. She had felt her heart die the whole way to the barn unsure if Willow had already been killed or not. She didn’t know how she would have survived. Willow meant so much to her.

They had spent the last hour talking to General Heley formulating the plan for tomorrow and how they were going to take down the shit that was her brother. Heley was overjoyed at the thought that Ian’s reign would soon be at an end. All they had to do was play it cool and let Ian put himself into his own little cage.

“So tomorrow is the big day?” Willow’s soft voice said as she enjoyed the feel of Tara’s finger’s playing with her hair.

Tara kissed Willow’s forehead and gave a little smile. “Yes tomorrow my brother will be unable to hurt anyone ever again. And then the counsel will be able to go back to the way it has always been.”

“Oh…” Willow whispered.

Tara didn’t like the sound of this. She knew when her lover was trying to be strong and keep her worries to herself. “Baby, what’s wrong?” Tara said as she moved so that she could look Willow in the eye.

Willow tried to turn away but Tara placed her hand on her cheek so that the redhead had to look her in the eye. “Its just that… if your brother is no longer going to be the leader of the council then won’t you have to be?”

Tara had never thought about that before. It was her family duty to do just that, but then she would have to leave the woman that she loves and that was just not an option. “No matter what ever happens we will always be together, I promise.”

Both ignored the fact that Tara hadn’t truly answered the answer that was placed before her. The rest of the night they laid in each other’s arms just reveling in the love that they had for one another.

The next morning Willow and Tara dressed quickly even though Willow wasn’t all that comfortable in the long flowing robes that were required for such an occasion. Tara gave her a half smile and implied that they might not be too high on the fashion scale but they add a bonus when it came to the amount of time it took to take them off. She accented the point by giving Willow a passionate kiss which ended with both of them on the bed almost gibing them proof to Tara’s words, but they were interrupted by a knock on the door. Both girls groaned and parted as they finished getting ready for the events of the day.

The Meeting Hall was an hour from the house but it seemed to take longer. Keth was sitting up with the driver not in the best of moods. Ever since her had returned from home he had been in guard mode non-stop. The idea that both of his charges lives were in danger and just barely survived solidified his determination. In the back seat Tara and Willow sat in silence. Both were lost in thought about what was going to happen today and if their plan would work. Unconsciously Willow reached for Tara’s hand and started to play with her fingers, it was a nervous habit that seemed to comfort both of the girls.

“Are you sure that everything is ready?” Willow asked for the hundredth time.

Tara smiled at her. “Yes, Caleb told me that Ian was going to use a backup group of assassins if I start to make to much of a problem. Don’t worry I know who they are and am ready. I have everything under control.”

Willow was soothed by Tara words and also by her confidence. Willow was use to being the vocal one among the Scoobies but it was nice to see this side of her lover. “You better, or you will have a very upset girlfriend. I like having my girl in one nice Tara shaped piece.”

“Your wish is my command.” Tara said with a small smile and just to make her point she gave the redhead a small kiss.

Finally the reached the Meeting Hall and were escorted in. Willow had never seen anything like it. The large room was filled with every kind of demon that she could ever think about and some creatures that she would never imagine existed. Though some looked a little too familiar to the point that she turned to her lover, “Baby, did you ever let Jim Henson visit one of these meetings?”

Tara smiled, “Sweetie, Jim Henson grew up working for my father. How did you think that he got all his ideas for the creatures in his movies?”

Willow couldn’t say anything as they were ushered through the main hall towards The Comsario sitting area. Tara was a little shocked to see her father already sitting in one of the chairs. No one thought that he would show up now that Ian had taken over. This might cause a major bump in their plan.

“Tara I was hoping that you would be coming today.” Tara’s father said as he stood up to great them. The blond witch hugged her father and as they parted he turned to look at Willow. “And I have a feeling that this is the amazing woman that has stolen my young girl’s heart. It is nice to meet you.”

“It is nice to met you too sir. I guess you are the one I should thank for giving me Tara.” Willow answered. She meant what she said but she had the added bonus of seeing Tara blush at her words.

And boy did Tara blush. She was use to Willow saying things like that but it still brought out the shy side of herself. Even in the Meeting Hall where she had always been able to put on a show, Willows effect on her overpowered everything else. “I think it is about time that we take a seat.” Tara said trying to change the subject. “I didn’t see Ian. I thought he would be her by now.”

“He is talking with some of the other council members. Though I am a little surprised. Ian is staying as far away from General Heley as possible and usually that is the first person that your brother tries to talk to.” Zahn said looking at the two women. He noticed that neither looked happy when he mentioned Ian’s name, but there was something else as well. Tara looked right at General Heley and made a slight nod and he did the same. Something was going on and he didn’t like it. When he looked at Willow’s face all he saw was concern, which made him feel even worse.

A loud gong was sounded and everyone started to move to their seats. Ian walked over toward his father but then changed directions going to the center of the room. Now was his time to shine and he was going to make it count. Everyone looked confused by his actions and quickly moved so that they could hear what their new leader had to say.

Once the room was quiet he began. “I know that this is a little unorthodox, but as this is my first meeting I thought I would start with something a little new. With the passing of power by my father, the great Zahn Comsario, we are going to start a new age. For millions of years the demon populations ruled over the world and there was order and control, but then it was decided that we should move into the shadows and let man rule over all. Since then they have polluted everything that they have touch and have pushed us farther and farther to the outskirts of this planet, I think that the time for man to control is over,” he stopped to let the idea sink in. He had already made strong allies that would fight vocally today on his side but he still had to keep a good show.

As planned Heley jumped up, “Are you crazy? You want us to make are presence know to the human population. That would cause mass hysteria and eventually lead to war. And I fear that war will be one that neither side has the ability to win. I will not support anything of this nature.”

Ian only smiled since he had this planned. Zahn just looked at what was unfolding in front of him. How could his son ever come up with this kind of plan, it was madness pure and simple. He was about to stand and say something even in his weakened condition, but Tara place her hand on his arm shaking her head no. Now the looks between Heley and his daughter were starting to make sense. They had known about Ian’s proposal and had a plan.

“General Heley, I understand you concern but this is not about the loss of life. This is about the dwindling essence of our kind. For thousands of years we have been reduced to nothing more then horror stories told to children. Honor is at stake don’t you understand this. I think that we should at least discuss this and put it to a vote.” Ian said in his best diplomatic voice.

“I don’t think that we need to do that. I challenge you to prove you honor since this is such an important issues for you.” Heley said with a smile.

Ian didn’t expect this. He thought that this would end in a debate and then he could use his men to easily win the battle. “You have no right to challenge my honor General Heley. Your motion is overruled and I am ashamed that you would use violence to win an issue. I thought that you were one of our great leaders not some heavy handed dictator?”

“He might not be able to challenge you but I can.” Tara said as she slowly stood up.

TBC…

Ok I am hoping to have the last part of this story up by Sunday or Monday so please forgive me for once again being such a shit for taking so long.

Hawk
 


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Postby ForeverPiper » Fri Mar 01, 2002 3:55 am

I was wondering what happened to this fic a couple days ago. I guess now I know.

I hope Tara beats the snot outta her brother. The next section should be interesting...very interesting......however, you are pure evil for making us wait until Sunday or Monday.

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Will? I'm...I'm glad you're doing better. -TARA

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fanfic: FAMILY CONFLICT

Postby Hawk » Sun Mar 03, 2002 6:45 pm

Part Thirteen

Ian watched his sister walk towards him until both stood in the center of the Meeting Hall. For a few moments they were locked in a stare down. The hall was completely silent as they watched the two siblings fight for dominence. Zahn watched his children and realized that he would only read his son’s sudtle movements, but Tara was completely bland to him. He turned to look at Willow and watched as she nervously rubbed her hands together, which didn’t make him feel any better.

“What the hell do you think you are doing Tara?” Ian whispered so that none of the council members could hear.

Keeping her voice just as low as his she answered, “I’m not going to let you start a war between demons and humans. The purpose of this council is to protect both so that a war never has to happen. You are going to have to go through me first, and if you think that your little friends will be a helping factor then I recommend you take a look to you left.”

Ian’s eyes flared, as he was ten of Heley’s men surrounding his assassins. His sister knew too much for this to be a simple slip of the tongue, which meant that she had a spy of her own. “Even when we were kids you always had all the answers, didn’t you? I am not backing down from this so I hope that you know what you are doing?” Tara only nodded. Ian increased his voice so that all could hear. “A challenge has been made and I accept it. Please raise the protection shield.”

“NO! I demand that this stop right now.” Zahn said standing. He was not going to sit by and watch his children fight in this manner. “I will not let the two of you fight to the death, no matter how honorable the two of you think you are.”

That got Willow’s attention as she jumped to her feet. No one had told her that this was a fight to the death. She knew that she would remember that detail. Yes Tara had a few things to explain when this was all said and done. She looked at the blond frowning, as Tara wouldn’t make eye contact. Yes this was going to definitely be something to talk about.

“I’m sorry father but the challenge has been made and unless one of use steps down then there is nothing left to be said. Now please raise the shield,” Ian said as a clear wall swooped over them leaving about thirty feet of moving room.

As Willow watched on something Anya said rang in her ears. ‘No one had ever been able to beat Ian. The only person that might have a chance was Tara but her powers were never tested publicly.’ She looked at the two circling figures and without taking her eyes off them asked Zahn, “Has Tara’s powers ever been tested? I know that they weren’t publicly, but have they been tested at all?”

“Tara didn’t care about how much power she had, because she never felt the need to show off like Ian. Her mother tested her once but never told anyone the results, even me. All I know is that Ian won’t hold back and most likely Tara will, so he has the advantage. I don’t think I could handle losing either of my children.” Zahn answered sadness in his voice. He knew that his son was obsessed for power, but would he kill his own sister to get it.

“I don’t want to kill you Ian. You just have to understand that what you are doing is wrong. Why can’t you see that? Is you lust to great to look at what it will cause?” Tara pleaded as she saw her brother’s concentration increase.

Ian just looked at her and sneered, “You were always holier then thou, Tara. Always had the people adoring you and saying that you were so perfect. This is my time to shine and be loved in the public’s eyes and you will have to remain in the shadows. You don’t even care what happens to the council. The first time I have a chance to show what I can really do as a leader and you come to ruin it.” With that said he threw a lightning bolt at her with all his strength.

Tara jumped out of the way just in time as the bolt grazed past her ear. She just looked at her brother with a pained expression. Not giving her a chance to take the advantage, he sent another bolt towards her, which was dissolved by an energy shield that she put up. Ian kept throwing more and more lightning bolt and a couple of fireballs for good measure just to show the council what kind of power he was truly capable of wielding.

His attacks were starting to weaken her shield as she felt some of her power draining. As he continued his assault she realized that he was combining is with a weakening spell. He thought this might have happened or something similar or else he wouldn’t have even thought of it.

Finally her shield spell failed and his attacks came through hitting her square in the shoulder. She fell to the ground as her skin started to burn and cloths set on fire. Before she even thought Tara mumbled a spell that dispel the flames. She looked up and saw that Ian was now standing above her looking down to enjoy a close look at her pain.

Now she knew that this wasn’t the same person she had grown up with as a child. Ian was no longer her brother in any sense of the word except blood. He had lost all the kindness that they had once shared and looking in his eyes she could tell that he could easily kill her. There wasn’t any option. She had hoped that it wouldn’t have to go this far and that everything would have a happy ending, but Tara knew that was no longer an option.

Ian raised his hand to strike the final blow. “NO!” Tara screamed as energy exploded throughout her entire body pushing towards the ends of the shielding. The force of his sister’s power knocked Ian back and his body slumped to the floor.

Tara finally regained some of her composure and looked around the shield. She saw Ian’s slumped body and ran to it as quickly as her clouded head would allow her to. There was blood flowing out of the corner of his mouth and she could tell that he was hardly breathing. Tara wouldn’t allow her brother to die as long as she had anything to say about it. Mumbling words over and over again for the strongest healing spell that she knew. After a moment she closed her eyes and her body started to glow. The power flowed through her and into her brother’s body.

The entire council watched in awe at what they were witnessing. Zahn stared in misbelieve that his daughter could control such energy but at the same time not be corrupted by it. He had learned long ago that Ian’s power was his greatest strength as well as weakness, but Tara never seemed to have had that problem.

Willow had finally started to breath again when she was sure that Tara would be fine, but seeing Tara glowing unsettled her stomach. Her lover always possess a great inner strength that shown so brightly Willow thought she would go blind at times. Willow could tell by her lover’s movements and the desperation in her eyes, Tara couldn’t stand the idea of her brother dying by her hands.

Finally the glowing stopped and the shield was taken down. As Willow ran towards the fallen siblings she watched, as if in slow motion, Tara’s body slowly crumbled towards that ground. Pulling Tara into her own body she started to cry. No, this wouldn’t happen they had gone through too much to let this end it. “Some back to me baby. I need you, please come back to me,” Willow crying into her lover’s damp hair.

“I’m…I’m still here sweetie.” Tara whispered even though it was as loud as her voice would get. Willow looked down at Tara’s face and started to cry again but this time they were tears of joy.

With Willow’s help she was able to stand. Tara looked around the Meeting Hall at the council member and knew that this wasn’t over yet. She still had one more part to play before she could finally be done with this part of her life. “Members of the council. The motion that my brother wished to pass is no longer an option. He will be retiring from the position that he has just been given. But I will not be taking his place as you might have thought. I will have an ambassador expressing my interests to you since I will not be here.”

The council was in total shock. Not only with the idea that Ian was no longer their leader but the idea that not even a Comsario would be in charge was farther then they could ever imagine. There was an uproar like a wave swallowing the entire room.

“QUIET NOW!” Tara screamed with all the power she had just shown moments ago. The entire room shut their mouths and even Willow looked at Tara with shock. Taking a deep breath she turned to Willow and gave her a small half smile and a quick kiss trying to tell her that everything would be alright. “I am the oldest Comsario and it is my right as the next in line. If anyone would like to contest my authority they can try. Keth will be my ambassador and that is the bottom line.”

She didn’t give anyone a chance to say anything as Willow helped her walk out of the room. “Can we go home now?” Tara almost whispered into Willow’s ear. She was so tired that she could barely think straight, but she was just happy to be in the redhead’s arms.

“Of course. As soon as you get some rest we will head straight home.” Willow answered never wanting to let go.

“I can’t wait to get back to Sunnydale, but as long as you are with me then I am home.” Tara said back with a smile that was only meant for Willow.

The End.


I hope that you liked the story. I will be working on the next one but I think that it might take a little while for me to get the next one up but I promise that it will be an interesting one.

Hawk
 


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Postby Kel » Tue Mar 05, 2002 2:57 am

the END??? but i like your story *sigh* i know all good things come to an end, but i wouldn't have minded if you wanted to keep going with this, i really loved it.

my thanks to Hawk

Kel

Kel
 


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Postby ForeverPiper » Tue Mar 05, 2002 4:06 am

That was excellent! I loved this story from the very begining! I, however, wouldn't mind if there was an epilouge. (hint, hint) My, my...I am a greedy little kitten, aren't I?

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There's a monkey problem? -Tara

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Postby 'lucy' moore » Tue Mar 05, 2002 1:11 pm

Sorry,Hawk...I'm another one who thinks you were in too much of a hurry to finish this story.Surely there's more to tell ? No pressure or anything...
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Really enjoyable.

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Caitlin,there are only 3 things that matter...
People you Love,
your Memories,
and Sadness.

fiat justitia,ruat caelum.

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Postby Hawk » Tue Mar 05, 2002 2:10 pm

I have to agree with the rushed feel of that last piece so here you go.

Epilogue (for all you greedy Kittens out there.)

It had been four months since the whole ordeal with Tara's past and family so
she was happy that things were just starting to get back to normal.

The sun was just rising on a wonderful Christmas morning and Willow was
overjoyed at what that meant. She had a couple presents that she had been
waiting for since they had gotten home. Tara made her promise that they
would spend some of the day with the Scoobies, Willow figured she just wanted
to see how they liked her presents, but after that the blonde was all hers
for at least fourty-eight hours.

As usual the redhead was up before her lover and spent those few peaceful
moments watching her sleep. Ever since Willow thought she might loose the
woman that she loved she had been spending more and more time treasuring
every moment that they have together.

Slowly Tara's eyes flutter open and gaze into intense green ones. "Hi," she
mumbled with a soft smile.

"Good morning baby. Merry Christmas." Willow said back and gave her a kiss.

Accepting the kiss Tara laced her hand into red hair increasing the passion
to the already heated kiss. Unconsiously Willow's hands went for the
blonde's nightgown, but with the will power of a god she stopped.

"What?" Tara asked confused. The whole point to waking up in the morning was
snuggles and if they were lucky even more.

Willow only smiled at the desire that she saw in the blue orbs that she loved
getting lost in. "We have to get dressed if you want us to get to Buffy's on
time. And don't give me that pouting look, this was your idea in the first
place. I was the one that wanted to ravish you all day long but you said
no." Willow was having too much fun with this. When she mentioned the
word ravished she made sure that her hand brushed across Tara's
breast and relished hearing her gasp in surprise and arousal.

"You are very mean, but so can I," was Tara's response. Willow looked at her confused.

Tara used that moment of confusion to her advantage and grapped her lovers waist to turn her over. Smiling as she looked down at Willow she kissed her at the same time as her hands went for the redhead's small breast. When she felt that Willow had finally weakened to her charms and started getting involved in their normal morning activity she stopped. "Your right we better get going." Tara was off the bed before Willow even had a chance to think much less react.

"Your going to pay for that!" Willow yelled as her brain finally started to work again.

"Thats true but not until after Buffy's party. Come on we don't have much time." Tara called already changing.

Willow turned and only got a small glimpse of Tara's exposed flesh as she was putting on her top. Willow know that wasn't going to help her libido. Moan one last time in frustration she got up and started to get dress.

Buffy's house was full of activity. Everyone was there and seemed to have various jobs. Willow's job was trying to carry in all the heavy presents they had brought back a few months ago. Though she did when everyone's eyes went wide at the amount and size of their presents. Tara and Willow had to agree that Giles were the largest. He had loved his books on the four other hellmouths and couldn't wait to see what type of books that Tara had brought for him this time. He knew that at least his were going to be books because he had overheard the two girls debating if they had given him the right set for her birthday or not.

The night had gone off without a hitch. Mrs. Summers had prepared a wondeful feast for everyone and for a least one night they were able to forget about the creepy crawlies that roamed the night. Soon Dawn was screaming presents and they decided that the poor teenager had been patient enough.

Tara asked that everyone open her's and Willow's presents last. So they exchanged the rest of the presents everyone overjoyed with what they had gotten. Now it was time for the mystery gifts.

Tara handed Dawn her present first and watched the young girls face brightened as she looked at the book. After a quick explanation of Mrs. Summers and Buffy that there wasn't anything dangerous within the pages. Dawn almost didn't want to take it when she read the inscroption within, but Tara said that she wanted her to have it.

Next was Mrs. Summers who was surprised that she was being included within the special gift giving. She slowly opened the gift and couldn't stop smiling at the book within. "Thank you so much. I have heard about this book but it is so rare that I couldn't order it anywhere," she said. Tara only nodded happy that she liked the gift.

Buffy was next in line and had a distict feeling that she was going to be getting books as well. "So I wonder what I will be reading over my break?" she asked as she opened the package. She almost feel of her sofa as she looked at the books. The entire history of the slayer was sitting in her lap.

"I hope that helps with the research you were doing on the slayers. It has all the biggest battle of each slayer and how they were defeated." Tara said still a little unsure.

Buffy got up and gave Tara and then Willow a hug. "Thank you so much. This will be great."

"Just make sure that Giles doesn't steal tehm from you." Willow joked.

"Speaking of Mr. Giles. Here you go." Tara said as she handed him the biggest present that they had brought.

When Giles got a good look at his present they were afraid that he was going to have a heartattack. His eyes bulged and he started having a hard time breathing. "Good Lord! This is the entire history of the Watcher's Council. I didn't even know that they had created such a thing." Buffy was at his side in seconds.

"They are only books Giles don't kill yourself. You can have them as long as you want since their yours, so would you please calm yourself down?" Buffy didn't move away until he started flipping throught the books ignoring everyone else in the room with the exception of a small thank you he mummbled to Tara and Willow.

"Alright I want to have it known that the present for Xander is from Tara only and not from me." Willow said as she handed the gift to her childhood friend.

"I'm starting to feel a little unloved her Will." he was going to say more but was cut off by Anya.

"Why?" Anya asked suspisiously. Her question was answered when she got a peak inside the box. "Your giving him a book on SEX DEMONS?"

Before she had a chance to say anything else Tara placed her gift on her lap. "I think you might want to open this." was all that Tara said.

Anya glared at her for a moment but her curiosity was getting the best of her and she opened the gift. At first it didn't mean anything to her, just a normal book on vengence demons like the ones they had in the store, until she noticed a book mark. Turning to the page her eyes started to mist.

Xander was at her side forgetting all about the lovely sex demons that he had been looking at. "What's wrong?"

"It's me." she said as she was smiling. He looked down at the page and saw that it was an entire chapter about his girlfriend as a vengence demon. He looked up at her and smiled giving her a soft kiss.

Tara looked around at her family and smiled. They all seemed to enjoy the gifts that she had picked out. Smiling she felt Willow's hand slide into hers and then she remembered there was still on person that she still hadn't given her present.

"Thank you so much. I just feel like the presents we got you are a little inatiquate now." Buffy said not releasing that she had just given Tara her prefect escape.

"Well, as you finally gift would be forgiving us because we have to be going." Tara said as Willow looked at her in confusion. She thought that they would be getting at least another thirty minutes of praise of their presents. "And we will I promised Willow that I would give her my present as soon as possible. I have a spell in mind but we will be busy for at least two days, so if you can forget about us for that amount of time then we can call it even."

Willow's face brightened as she looked at her lover. "Yeah sorry about having to leave but I left Tara's present at the dorm too. So we will see you later."

No one had a chance to say anything as the two witches were already out of the house. Neither thought they would have lasted as long as they had as they were able to keep their hands to themselves until they reached the front door. It took a few tries but they were finally able to get inside.

Tara release Willow from their kiss as she started to move towards the bed. "So did you have a wonderful Christmas?"

"Oh yes." Willow said as she started moving towards Tara looking like an animal stalking her prey.

Tara only smile. "Well I still have to give my girlfriend her present, even though she is Jewish and is now practicing Wicca."

"And it better be a pretty good present after what you did to her this morning." Willow said now only inches away from her lover's lips.

Tara gave an innocent look. "I have no idea what you are talking about."

"Are you sure about that?" Willow asked enjoy this little game.

"Yep, I'm sure. I guess you will have to remind me." Tara said keeping her poker face on.

Willow moved in the last few inches and kissed Tara with all the built up passion from this morning. Both the witches feel to the bed as the kiss increased. Willow moved her hand under the blonde's shirt continuing until she heard a familiar moan.

"Now do you remember?" Willow said in a husky voice.

"Still drawing a blank here." Tara responded and those where her last coherent words for the next two days.


I hoped that you like this little add on piece. It was fun to write, plus I needed a little happy moment with not just our girls but with the rest of the Scoobies as well.

Hawk
 


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Postby Kel » Wed Mar 06, 2002 2:12 am

GREEDY? US? what ever gave you that idea??

It really was a great story and i'm glad you added this extra part to it. so i guess that is really the end this time *sigh* it's been great!!!

Kel

Looking forward to your next story

Kel
 


fanfic: FAMILY CONFLICT

Postby ForeverPiper » Wed Mar 06, 2002 4:49 am

REALLY glad you decided to post this. It makes the story have a better ending...even though now it's really over. *sniff* I can't wait for your next fic!

[This message has been edited by ForeverPiper (edited March 06, 2002).]

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fanfic: FAMILY CONFLICT

Postby Garner » Wed Mar 06, 2002 2:05 pm

Hawk,
I am glad that you decided to add something on, because I definitely thought the regular end was a bit rushed. The defeat of Rack was fine, but I had thought that once Willow saw Tara the spell would be broken and the dark energy would go back to Willow. Otherwise the story ended well.
I am also confused with Joyce and Giles being present for Christmas while the rest of this seems to be 6th Season. Just thought that was odd.
Hope you come up with something else soon,
Garner
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fanfic: FAMILY CONFLICT

Postby Jessie » Wed Mar 06, 2002 3:03 pm

Dude, I just read this all at once.

So excellent! (This coming from the girl who doesn't normally do epics ...)

Right on.

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