First Night

[tommo]

Yeah Sara, you're exploring style a bit more now and integrating narration into your piece. That's so great. Keep it up.

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You know I've been through hell...Joss can't you see, there'll be nothing left of me. You made me believe...

[Sara Poe]

thankx Tommo it was soooo hard to write this chapter cause i really tried to feel Tara's pain and i think i over did it cause i kept crying i'm glad you liked it.

[tommo]

Well, empathy with the characters you write is never totally bad. Just remember, they're not real and you are, so don't overdo the crying too much eh?

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You know I've been through hell...Joss can't you see, there'll be nothing left of me. You made me believe...

[willntlover]

Tara's feelings were described perfectly I really felt for her.
-Will

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"Hear that, baby? You're my always."

[The Rose]

Poor Tara. I really want things to work out for her. She deserves it more than anyone.

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Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.

Tara: Nobody messes with my girl!

Willow: Hi, um Tara. How are you? I was wondering maybe you want to go out sometime for coffee? food? kisses and gay love?

[Pixie]

Great chapter, Sara. I also like the narration and hearing what Tara is thinking and feeling. Nice tie-in with the show. And I'm all with the "Poor Tara". But, look! It's Willow....

[Sara Poe]

i just wanted to say thankx to Tommo for all the advice. it really helps coming from someone who's work is so respected on the board, and thankx to everyone that said such nice things bout my story. your words make me want to write and to a writer there's nothing more important. (well, love is, of course) and, as a shameless self promotion, this is my little message board, http://pub78.ezboard.com/bsarasstuff it doesn't have a lot of visitors but if anyone want to see it you're all more than welcome. the spinning tri-moons are the new topic and new poll buttons. and thankx again. the next chapter will be up soon and i have 3 more (unless plans change) after that.

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Willow: I still can't believe you didn't tell me about your family and all that.
Tara: I was just afraid if you saw the kind of people I came from, you wouldn't want to be near me.
Willow: See, that's where you're a dummy. I think about what you grew up with and then I look at what you are... it makes me proud... it makes me love you more.
Tara: Everytime I... even at my worst, you always make me feel special. How do you do that?
Willow: Magic!