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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Dec 28, 2002 2:29 pm



Aww... that was so sweet... seems like a night well spend, heh.



Liked this line from Willow:



"this better be mine since I just marked it."



Nothing more to add to the other responses really :D



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby JustSkipIt » Sat Dec 28, 2002 3:07 pm

Nick – He he. Remember, W&T would say “oh Goddess”, not “oh God” but we’ll let it go. Thanks. Glad you liked.



Mary - :rollin when I read that. “Evocative” huh? Glad to hear it. Two hands on the key board please :grin . Hope the gf liked the call. I have such a hard time remembering not everyone has a live-in. But glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading and waiting so patiently.



Sysnootles Woo Hoo for coming out of lurk land :clap :clap :clap . Welcome and congratulations. Glad you are liking it.



Stef – Yes, not first again. It’s a trend now. Hmmm time difference? I don’t even know what time it is here much of the time let alone somewhere else. I think that the time posted on the board is my time – 2 hours but not sure. Glad you liked the update and you have waited so patiently.



Cath – Ahhh, shucks. Thanks for your kind words the few you posted. I can understand though and thanks.



Xita - :clap :clap :clap . Hi Xita. Hey look at me, posting a reply this time as opposed to the last time that I missed your comment. Thanks for your appreciation and liking the taking time. At first, I really expected a lot of thrown tomatoes for their not making love on the Thanksgiving vacation. But honestly, the Kittens surprised me with their support for the going slow. And now everyone seems very genuinely appreciative of the finally getting here.



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I am really amazed at the ease the school as a whole is displaying with their relationship. Nice change from the nice freak out they'd usually have, which would probably involve calling parents.




Yes, well a few points about that. First, I’m pretty prejudiced against boarding schools or even private day schools. In my experience with people who have gone, in general, the schools tend not to contact parents for anything that isn’t life threatening or at least likely to threaten an endowment or large donation. The reason: parents who are busy enough to send their children off to boarding school don’t really want to be bothered. The school would just make trouble for itself by contacting parents. Especially in the case of these two. I mean like Sheila wants to hear anything about it? And Tara has enough trouble without the school trying to upset her remaining parent.



Also, the school apparently has some kind of awareness of the blanant homophobia that would be involved in any type of correspondence like that. Given that hetero couples at the school exist, how would they justify trying to get in the way of this one?



I’m not saying that every person at the school is jumping up and down for our girls. Just that, like in reality, there are perhaps 3 categories of people: those who actively support us, those who don’t care, and that small percentage who would act against us. But as long as we don’t encounter those much, it’s all good.



Wow, long ramble much deb?



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As much as I love the girl's school I am looking forward to the visit to Sunnydale. I'd like to see the scoobie's reactions.




Yes, I’m looking forward to it too. This entire story pretty much started with one scene for a visit to Sunnydale in my head so I can’t wait to write that. Getting close now and the sparks will fly :wink .



Thanks for reading.



littlecrazy80 – Thanks. More tomorrow probably.



Grimmy – Yes, a night well spent. They definitely enjoyed it. Did we ever doubt that Tara would be Willow’s? Never. And now she’s marked. Of course, you know how those marks go; you have to do it over and over…

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"War may be a necessary evil. But no matter how necessary, it is still evil." -- President Jimmy Carter after receiving the Nobel Peace Prize

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby Velaingie » Sat Dec 28, 2002 3:54 pm

I just read the last part. And it was just WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW, :thud and :heart and :love . But mostly very, very and very speechless.

I just love your great story,:heart :love :heart

And it's getting better and better.

Velaingie:wave

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby deixs » Sat Dec 28, 2002 5:06 pm

Hi Debra!



Well, I mean that I live in Europe and your probably somewhere in America and so I am at least 6 hours ahead...

Going to bed now...:yawn



Stef :p

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby Incitatua 8 » Sat Dec 28, 2002 6:11 pm

Enjoying your story...esp. the anniversary chapters! So pleased you resisted the urge to abruptly leap ahead in time after chapter 20[as you did on the TG trip and the meeting for dinner and a movie]. I hope you will even include a "morning after" chapter. Some of my favorite interactions between the two have taken place in the mornings as they awaken. Great story and thanks for the consistent updates ! I'm looking forward to their other interludes and of course their trip.

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby samiamiguess » Sun Dec 29, 2002 6:45 am

Ok, so I got up this morning and read your update. Then went back to bed again. Thankfully not alone. So I thank you for making mine a somewhat perfect sunday :grin



Lovely to see how everythings come together so well for our girls now that the wait is over. ahem ;)



Thanks for the update,

Sonya

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby JustSkipIt » Sun Dec 29, 2002 6:16 pm

Hi Everyone – Went over 20,000 views today! Yay and thanks to all the kittens who read whether you post a comment or not. :clap :clap :clap



Velaingie – Hey, what’s your screen name mean or is it your name? Just curious. Glad you liked the woo hoo! And that you think the story’s getting better and better. Aw shucks.



Stef – I’m in the good ol US of Texas. Right near W/T in this story. Like I said, 2 hours ahead of the time it lists on the post.



Incitatua 8 – Thanks and glad you liked the chapters. Good thought about the not skipping ahead. Sometimes it’s hard to know where to skip time and where to post continuous night/morning stuff. Morning after post coming up. :evil Thanks for reading and all your comments.



Sonya – Wow got up and read and back to bed and not alone. :smirk Go girl! It’s your birthday! You are very very welcome. What can I say, any joy I can bring to my fellow Kittens (and their SO’s) is a good joy. :bounce Yes, no more waiting.



I’ll post in a few minutes. Thanks for reading everyone!

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"War may be a necessary evil. But no matter how necessary, it is still evil." -- President Jimmy Carter after receiving the Nobel Peace Prize

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all part 22

Postby JustSkipIt » Sun Dec 29, 2002 6:27 pm

Title– W/T Season 3 Y’all – part 22 – Wish/Wash



Author– JustSkipit - Debra



Feedback – Yes please.



Spoilers–Season 3 through The Wish



Rating– Part 22 – PG



Disclaimer – Willow and Tara and any other character that appeared in the syndicated television show “Buffy the Vampire Slayer” is property of Joss and Mutant Enemy, I’m only borrowing them and am not making any money off them Thanks.



Thoughts in italics!



Note – Thanks to nohoGirl who hooked me up with a site for shooting scripts. That helped a lot. Also to Xita who looked over this part for approval and provided some feedback.





Tara pulled her girlfriend by the hand across the grass: “come on sweetie. It’s a b-b-beautiful day, too beautiful to spend the whole thing in bed.”



The smaller girl stopped without releasing her hold on Tara’s hand. Sticking out her bottom lip, she pouted, “but I like being in bed with you. All snuggly and warm. And it’s a special day.”



Hugging her girlfriend to her, Tara nodded, “yes very special. First day of break and everything, but come on let’s go enjoy this p-p-picnic lunch.”



Starting across the field again while swinging their hands together the younger girl teased, “ok, but since it’s a special day, can I ride Chestnut?”



“Nice try Chelle,” Tara laughed back, “maybe some day.”



The two girls worked quickly to saddle their horses for their ride. Emma and James were too busy packing for vacation to come so the girls had their picnic all to themselves. As they rode, Tara allowed her mind to wander. She smiled at the cute girl riding ahead of her. The junior was very playful and certainly confident.



When Michelle had stopped her after class to ask her to see Sleepless in Seattle, Tara didn’t quite know what to expect. She accepted, unsure if it was a date. But she had fun having ice cream and laughing with the younger girl and had enjoyed the movie. Even after walking Michelle back to her dorm room, Tara couldn’t figure out if it was a date.



But later that week, when Michelle had visited her at the stables, she’d been pretty clear as she asked her “if she wanted to go out again.” Oh yeah, Tara had been sure then that it was a date and had definitely agreed to go out again. That date ended with a light kiss.



The two girls halted their horses after the long ride and laid out the blanket near the creek. After enjoying their lunch, Tara leaned against the tree as Michelle leaned against her. The two held hands and snuggled close together as the sunlight lulled them to sleep.



Tara woke to the sun coming through the patio doors, her arms wrapped around Willow both women nestled in their love and nakedness. She looked down at the redhead to see the now familiar look of sleeping innocence--a look she loved and had loved from the first day she met her. Breathing in the morning, she absorbed the unmistakable scent of their love. Brushing a hair from the redhead’s face, she shifted her weight to slip from the bed for a moment.



Tara woke with a start, lost. She looked down at the face of the sweet girl sleeping peacefully against her. In the few months they had dated, she had become used to the sight of Michelle sleeping peacefully. They had napped together and occasionally spent the night in each other’s room. Tara enjoyed the feeling of sleeping with someone else and waking with someone else too and she felt comfortable with the younger girl.



But that dream…



In that dream she wasn’t with Michelle. She remembered someone else. A redhead that she knew had green eyes although she couldn’t see them in the dream vision. And that wasn’t all. She had the strangest feeling that she knew that woman or at least should know that woman. Especially with the intimacy she knew they shared in that dream world. Who is she? and why did I just dream of her? No, not just of her but of her and me.



Closing her eyes again, Tara raised her hand to her face as if that would allow to her smell the woman on her fingers. Oh Goddess, on my fingers. We just made love in that dream. Her fingers smelled of lunch and sweet sweat and horses and Michelle’s shampoo. But that wasn’t the smell in the dream. Glancing guiltily at her girlfriend Tara closed her eyes again Who is she? and willed herself to enter her dream world. The world of Willow. Willow!



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Willow ran her hand along Xander’s black leather. Sometimes it was just so boring to make these choices. She could play with him or they could play with this lovely thing in front of them. But he said that it was his turn to play so maybe she’d just let him. But…so nice and curvy. Brunette though, a blonde would be so much more fun. Maybe more curvy.



And unbelievably their prey was copping a major attitude to them: “No. No way! I wished us into bizarro land and You still get the girls? I can not win!”



Geez, all with the righteous indignation much chickie? Blah blah blah Buffy Blah blah blah Slayer blah blah blah



Bored now



But as he usually did, Xander allowed the girl to run. That would at least be fun. Her heart all pumping and the fear flowing through her veins would warm the blood. Give it spice. But now, she didn’t even put up much of a fight and “bored now.”



And now, the freaking White Hats show up to take her. Geez, these people need lives. Xander agreed: “those people need to find some hobbies.”



The two vampires went to the bronze. At least there should be something happening there. Or a snack at least. And the master gave Willow a snack-a pretty young thing that was still struggling. Oh, the feeling of feasting on that young flesh. So soft and fun to play.



But the master was cranky and sent his two favored vampires to take care of the girl. Oh this would be fun, and with the librarian in his big cage. As always, together they feasted on the sweet young flesh. Ohhh, how Willow loved sharing with Xander. Sure she had “other” interests. Softer interests. Sweeter interests. But there’s always Xander to share some moments.



The girl taken care of and the librarian locked up, Willow and Xander headed out. As they exited the library, Willow quickly licked a few drops of blood from her fingertips. The girl bled on her, how rude! But that taste, that sweet taste of thick rich blood. And the smell, fear and honeysuckle. No wait, honeysuckle. That’s not the smell of that blood. So where did that smell come from? And she detected another fainter smell. One she hadn’t been close to in weeks. Sure Xander was fun but he couldn’t really give her what she wanted. That smell. That taste. But in the blood?



Returning to the Bronze, Willow was pleased the master said she could play with the puppy. Love to play with the puppy. Mmmm. Not like her other kind of play but didn’t have one of those here now. Wish. No, don’t wish. Concentrate on this play. And Xander would watch and then later maybe he could show his appreciation for her skills.



And today is the big day. The plant is opening and the smell of fear will permeate the air. Although, blood from a glass? Yuck. It’s so much better from a young girl. So you can feel her squirming and moaning as you drink. Enjoy the closeness of her hot body, pulling her in to rub against you. Mmm. Maybe I can find a blonde in the pens. A young one with blue eyes. Oh yeah, that would be sooo nice.



But the Master wouldn’t let Willow take anyone from the pens. And his grand opening went off with the first meal giving him her sweet blood. Oh yeah, this would be so nice. Hey, there’s a blonde now. But not the right one.



Willow reacted quickly as she saw the blonde shoot a crossbow at the Master--a crossbow that Xander unselfishly took. Okay, maybe not unselfishly but he took it nonetheless. Maybe he deserves a little reward later. Maybe.



Suddenly she saw the puppy. Uh oh. Puppy got out. Sprinting, she joined in the fight, keeping Xander in her peripheral vision. no! she almost screamed as she sees him dust the puppy-her favorite plaything. Well, favorite except for any young blonde girl but besides that. And he can last so long. The girls never last that long for some reason.



and no! Again the redheaded vampires screamed out inside as she saw the blonde stake Xander. oh, that blonde is not going to have any fun. I’m gonna play but she’s not gonna have any fun.



Moving toward the blonde who was now fighting the Master, Willow barely felt the White Hat who gave her a shove into the side of the holding pen. As the wooden splinter entered her back, she exclaimed, “Fu..”.



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Note: Yes, I know that the days are slightly off. I’m close because The Wish is one episode before Amends which is the Christmas episode but we also know that Cordelia makes her Wish on a school day. But… here, it is Saturday. Well, what can I say? Willow’s not in Sunnydale and Xander slept with Faith, not kissed Willow. So things change. If a Butterfly flaps its wings in New York, does it cause a tidal wave in Brazil? Let’s just say that Willow’s absence causes The Wish to happen on a Saturday.

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"War may be a necessary evil. But no matter how necessary, it is still evil." -- President Jimmy Carter after receiving the Nobel Peace Prize

Edited by: JustSkipIt at: 3/26/03 7:16:14 pm
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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby Tawilove » Sun Dec 29, 2002 6:32 pm

JustSkipIt your fic totally rock:clap

I'm a terrible lurker:blush but today i finally won over my shyness:grin to tell you how much i love your fic!

So i'll go now, i have a lurker anonymous meeting:lol



The earth is blue like an orange
Paul Eluard

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all part 22

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Sun Dec 29, 2002 6:37 pm

*GRR*



hehe.. I just skipped the note and started reading and I was like... "what the frilly heck!!" LOL hehe



Teaches me to be greedy and skippin to the fic...LOL





~NICK~

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all part 22

Postby Grimlock72 » Sun Dec 29, 2002 7:02 pm

Found the smile that fits here: :confused , though "frilly heck" fits too :)



I re-read the first few lines a couple of times, still didn't make sense: Tara talking to her girlfriend... that would be Willow....who wants to ride on a horse ?? Doesn't fit :)



That was solved when it turned out to be Michelle, which posed another problem...



I kinda figured it out when Willow mentioned a leather-clad Xander. Good thing is that VampWillow won't be making a return visit, unless Anya does the spell alone. Heh, VampWillow's brain is still over-active I see... lots of thoughts centered on blond girls, hmm... wonder if thats a clue :)



Now I'm left wondering if either Tara or Willow will remember anything about the wishverse, probably not. Buffy wont mention it either, they only person that does know in NormalVerse is Anya and she probably isn't to keen on mentioning it, hehe.



Still.. weird update... definitly weird....:hmm :hmm



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby darkmagicwillow » Sun Dec 29, 2002 7:43 pm

I liked how you dropped us into the Wishverse with Tara's thoughts, leaving us confused and off balance, everything seeming out of focus, similar but different. Tara's interactions with her gf seemed so sweet at first, then there's the jarring request about riding Chestnut and we knew something was wrong but not quite what yet. Very nice.

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"Omnia mutantur, nihil interit." -- "Everything changes, but nothing is truly lost."

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby Incitatua 8 » Sun Dec 29, 2002 9:13 pm

WOW...feel like I'm tripping! What happened to the story I was reading through chapter 20 ? I need more than that note to figure out what happened and WHY? When you leap ahead you take it to the max. I hope further explanations are coming...this twist is not good! [ Ouch...you injured my ego cuz I don't get it !]

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Sun Dec 29, 2002 10:22 pm

WOW~~~Wow...wow. :hmm



I knew you were good but I guess I had NO idea how good. I've yet to respond to this fic even tho' I've thoroughly relished every single update. But this last bit?...wow.



The anniversary had my heart pounding...the "Wish" has my head spinning...I love it!!!:bounce :clap :bounce



I really enjoy fics that set my head a-thinkin'. (No surprise then why I like The Pens.) I'll be mulling this last chapter over a tad~no doubt. It was just so creatively handled.



Please keep it up...unexpectedness and all!:eek ~~~CLW



P.S. Being thick as I am: Did I get that Cordelia "wished" because of Xander/Faith? (Since I think you mentioned that Willow and Xander never kissed in "The Long Walk?") Just wonderin'. TY~Suse

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby deixs » Mon Dec 30, 2002 2:12 am

Hi Debra!



What is gooing on????:confused

Is it all a dream?

And again I hadn't been the first to post...:mad

I am so confused that I am going to read the fic again.



Stef :p

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby 4evaWill » Mon Dec 30, 2002 3:03 am

I was confuzzled at first but now I get it. Yup. Well, sort of. I'm a sort-of unconfuzzled gal. You kinda made me go :jaw when Tara was with Michelle, but I get it. Shut up, Cath.



Fantastic update! :heart So looking forwards to more (but I'll be patient, coz I'm a patient person, tee hee)

Cath :angel

Tara: No, I-I understand. You have to be with the person you l-love.

Willow: I am.

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Re: W/T Season 3 Y'all Part 21

Postby littlecrazy80 » Mon Dec 30, 2002 3:40 am

:confused

But I think I got it now. That was fantastic.



*lil´c*



Unter den Blinden ist der Einäugige König.

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Wierd Definitely Wierd

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon Dec 30, 2002 7:13 am

Tawilove – Totally cute sig and thanks for delurking. :clap I’ll take that as a compliment. Enjoy your meeting but anytime you can delurk here.



Nick – You grrrd me? I can’t believe that. :angel . What did I do? Oh, that. Well, I guess that was a little tricky. See I can be artistic and creative :) . Yes, too impatient you. But you got it so that works now too. (hey, how about a hope/doubt update?)



Grimmy – Ok, I’ll take
Quote:
Still.. weird update... definitly weird....
as a compliment. Ha ha, frilly heck the what alright. Yes, Tara’s gf and riding a horse. I wanted to take that farther but really couldn’t figure out a way to do it without being really ridiculous. Like having a gender-non-specific conversation with someone. After like the 3rd “they” it sounds just stupid.



I have no current plans to bring VampWillow here. For one thing, I can’t even imagine the train of events that would place her in Sunnydale at that time to do the spell with Anya. For another, I really think that in this story, with the guidance of Tara in her magic, she’s not so desperate to either do any magic with anyone that she was there or to prove herself as she was. But like in Cannon, no one seems to remember the WishVerse. See if you can find any strange references to it though…



dmw Thanks a ton. The dropping us in with Tara’s thoughts kind of came accidentally. I didn’t mean it that way originally but after I wrote it and then reread (and reread and reread and reread) I was like, hey look at that so I made it direct. So yes, Tara remembers Willow and then we’re in the WishVerse Sunnydale. Yes, starting out smooth and normal until can she ride Chestnut? Glad you liked.



Incitatua 8 – Sorry to confuse you so bad. The story you were reading will be back. Have you watched Buffy season 3? If not, you might want to do that: particularly the episode “The Wish.” This chapter is from that story (frequently called the WishVerse) on pens. We’ll be back on schedule with the story you are reading soon. Sorry to confuse.



Cindy Lou Who – Yeah another delurker! :clap . So glad to have you here and commenting. And you are saying great things about me, awesome. :bounce :bounce :bounce



Yeah for either head spinning or heart pounding. As long as you’re moving you’re doin ok. (and people say that using computers makes you not as active, what do they know?). Glad it tweaked you. I’ll definitely keep it up. I have a few more surprises planned in the future.



Yes, you got it exactly. Cordelia made that same wish because Xander slept with Faith and Xander and Willow never kissed since she’s not there.



Stef – Hey, not the first again. We’re going to take away your crown soon. :rollin . Seriously, not a dream. WishVerse. See the spoilers and ep title.



On the other hand, what is a dream and what is reality? Ala Matrix. Think about it.



Cath – Great job then if you are unconfused (is that a word?). Glad you liked and more coming maybe tomorrow? Soon.



littlecrazy80 – Glad you got it. Thanks for reading.

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"War may be a necessary evil. But no matter how necessary, it is still evil." -- President Jimmy Carter after receiving the Nobel Peace Prize

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Re:

Postby samiamiguess » Mon Dec 30, 2002 8:21 am

:clap :clap Excellent. I loved the twist Debra.



I was initially ill at ease reading Tara with Michelle but you brought in the dream of Willow pretty quickly so my heart didn't have to suffer too long. (thank you)



One of your feedbacks said you'd had this scene in your mind of Sunnydale that you were bringing the story to, but even though you've kept referring to Season 3 occurances I still didn't imagine you bringing the Wishverse into it. Well done, although I feel kinda stupid for not thiniking of it! But its brought a lovely edge to story just when it was hugs and puppies, on no wait, puppies are still here. :wink



By the way, loved the line maybe I can find a blonde in pens. Is that different colored pens? Wasn't sure if it was initentional or not but it amused me nonetheless.



Great stuff,

Sonya

Edited by: samiamiguess at: 12/30/02 6:27:58 am
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Re:

Postby deixs » Mon Dec 30, 2002 9:02 am

Hi Debra!



Now I get it! :bounce Now I get it! :bounce



And please don't take away my crown *goes down on her kness begging* :pray



Stef :p

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Re:

Postby TareBearRS » Mon Dec 30, 2002 9:23 am

OMG!!!



I just read the last few updates, their anniversary was amazing, i love what Tara arranged, it was so sweet.



And there first time was absolutely amazing too!!!



Then i get thrown from that hotness into what the frilly heck happened here.... i had to re-read the first few lines a couple of times before i understood.. but still the question is:



What happened!!!



R.

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Re:

Postby Incitatua 8 » Mon Dec 30, 2002 12:22 pm

Please disregard my prior reply...on reflection I have sadly decided that it would be futile of me to invest more of my precious time on your story. I realize that stories on the Pens are written for the most part by amateurs and due to the format are not always "published" pieces. The stories are chunked and so often written hurriedly and infrequently Therefore the writer must be extremely aware of this to minimize time leaps, sudden plot and setting changes. I think Urn of O does this well because ,up until recently ,she posted often and maintained a slow pace enriched with details and character development...much like soap opera writers do so they don't lose the audience. From my humble professional view, you started off well, but writers must remember to hold themselves to certain guidelines...and not just to the mechanics and the conventions of quality writing. The writer is the guide...the one with all the power. As a writer, you invade the reader's mind and a good writer makes the reader see, hear, feel, experience, and think the thoughts that YOU want them to. With that power comes obligations

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Re:

Postby Incitatua 8 » Mon Dec 30, 2002 12:39 pm

I went over my limit, so here's the rest. The foremost obligation is to be clear,ie. understandable. Under normal conditions the reader does not have the ability to ask for clarity[questions]. Tantamount to this is the obligation not to insult the reader. A plot twist or a surprise is a great story element, but the scaffolding and foundations must be incorporated it the story, even if only by inference. I am sorry, but I didn't think you had done this. When I read the chapter I felt catapulted into a deep quandary! I will end on a personal comment. I found your placing Tara in an intimate scene with Michelle EXTREMELY OFFENSIVE. To also insert it following the chapters describing W/T's first lovemaking was a very poor decision. I am a W/T purist, but I have read of Tara temporarilly with another on the Pens where it worked...this did not!

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Re:

Postby Grimaldi » Mon Dec 30, 2002 12:47 pm

the last couple of updates were really good :)



part 21 was amazing :grin and i like how you incorporated the Wishverse in part 22 :)

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!
I'm not stealing, I'm just taking things without paying for them. In what twisted dictionary is that stealing?

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Re:

Postby Grimlock72 » Mon Dec 30, 2002 1:23 pm

I'm still wondering what, if anything, Tara will remember of her dream. Guess I'll have to invest some more of my precious time in reading this story to find out, heh : -->>: .



The remembering part is also the reason why I liked _Doppelgangerland_ better then the _Wish_ on TV. I prefer the interaction with the 'normal' dimension. Besides Willow trying to be all impressive was neat :D



Anybody out here was hasn't seen DGL yet, try to do so.



One nitpick if I may, in this story Cordelia made her wish because Xander slept with Faith right ? How come she comments to VampXander and VampWillow "you're still together, I can't win" ?? (might have helped to spell-out the wish in that line btw. for people who have never seen _The Wish_)



Interesting that Tara didn't change much when Buffy didn't come to Sunnydale. Smart girl Tara, she stayed far away from that evil town :) . She did dream about Willow, even though they had never met... interesting. Kinda reminded me of _Sidestep Chronicles_ a bit.



Still waiting to see Willow ride on a horse with Tara though, patiently waiting here :whistle



Grimmy (pro-reader, not even close to amateur-writer:) )

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 12/30/02 11:24:34 am
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Re:

Postby Incitatua 8 » Mon Dec 30, 2002 1:47 pm

Thanks for the mention...I didn't sent an e-mail however . I can guess who you may be thinking of though. My favorite e-pal encouraged me with glowing endorsements to read your two fics...the praise was justified too. I think you have a new groupie in my friend, who is not a Kitten :ergo the e-mails.[Tardis Traveler is the culprit...a good one!] I think several people have been advised to read your completed piece...hey like you may even end up with a cult... :-J...:-] I'll pass on your comments !

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Postby jaycatt23 » Mon Dec 30, 2002 3:02 pm

ooh, ooh, ooh, might the trip to Sunnydale coincide with VampWillow in Doppelgangerland?



Because that could be much fun.



I thought the last update was a very interesting twist. It threw me at first, but, I like the idea.



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Postby Velaingie » Mon Dec 30, 2002 4:20 pm

Loved the last update, Debra.

At the beginning I was kinda lost. But then read a little bit further that there was a Willow Vamp, then I knew it was about the "Wish" episode. Then I found my way again. Very good idea, loved it.:heart :rollin

Can't wait the read the next part.:bounce :bounce :bounce



And my real name is Alexandra. I needed a name the give on Internet, and the name Alexandra was already taken. So I thought to give one of the names of my characters in the stories that I love to write.(my stories are not related with Willow and Tara, SORRY!!!. Plus I write in French).

One day I was searching for a special name my principal character. (all my character as special names, I like to invent names). So I took the name of Virginie, a good friend of mine and she likes Elaine from "Ally McBeal". So I mix the two names together and voilà, the name Velaingie was born. Now you know, you like it?



Bye:wave Until next time

Velaingie or Alexandra (you choose)



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Postby Tawilove » Mon Dec 30, 2002 5:04 pm

What i really liked in this new chapter is the way you showed, that even though Willow and Tara where going through "the wish" alternate universe experience (and in a world where they never met), they had still this incredible bond between them that is eternal beyond any demonic:devil or supernatural influence. So:party



:willow and :tara for ever





The earth is blue like an orange
Paul Eluard

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Part 22/The Wish

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon Dec 30, 2002 8:33 pm

Comments:



Hi everyone. Ok, sorry to confuse many readers. I guess I’m assuming a level of Buffy fanaticism equal to mine. So I’ll briefly explain/summarize.



In Season 3 of the show, Xander and Cordelia are dating. Xander and Willow kiss a few times and get caught by Cordelia who breaks up with Xander but is ridiculed by her cool friends. In the episode called The Wish Anya, the vengeance demon who performs vengeance for wronged women, comes to town and encourages Cordelia to make a wish. Cordelia wishes that Buffy Summers had never come to Sunnydale. This changes everything. Xander and Willow are vampires. The Master is alive. Angel is their prisoner. Giles, Oz, and Larry fight vampires to the best of their ability (which is not well).



Xander and Willow kill Cordelia but not before Giles finds out that she made a wish and he calls Buffy. Buffy arrives (looking very different). They attack the Bronze. Xander kills Angel, Buffy kills Xander, the Master kills Buffy, Oz kills Willow. But Giles breaks Anya’s necklace ending the Wish and stranding Anya in Sunnydale as a mortal.



Peggy – Sorry to confuse. Seems like quite a few people got confused here which wasn’t my intention. I tried to summarize above. This piece of this story is the “what if” for the Wish. In other words, Willow is in Sunnydale as a vampire and Tara is at school having never met her.



Sonya – Glad that you liked so much. The feedback for this part was definitely the most abundant and varied. People loved, hated, or confused much. Yes, didn’t want to go too far with Michelle and wanted to bring Tara to Willow quickly.



But… yes, I have a scene in Sunnydale in mind but not this one. This one popped into my head last week but wasn’t the one I was referring to. That one is still to come.



Ha ha about different colored pens, I didn’t think that but great thought. Ha ha.



Stef – Ok, your crown is restored. Glad you get it. :bounce :bounce :bounce



TareBearRS – Hi TareBear. Glad you loved the romantic and first time. I loved writing it too. If you are still confused, see the above note to clarify this episode.



Incitatua 8 – If you are reading, thanks for your feedback on how I can improve my writing. I’ll think about that. Sorry also to offend. For the record, I did have this episode approved by a board moderator to ensure that the way I presented the W/T w/Other was acceptable.



Grimaldi – Thanks a ton. Glad you liked both parts.



Grimlock72 - :rollin . Ok, that really cheered me up that you will invest your precious time. Yeah for your precious time :clap . Love the loyal readers. An answer/hint about the dream at the end of this note.



Yes, I like DGL better than the Wish too partially because it’s so heavily Willow and partially because it has some of the best lines ever like: “Hey, you all didn’t happen to do a bunch of drugs didya?” and “that’s me as vampire. I’m evil, and skanky, and I think I’m kind of gay.”



Your nitpick is great. I didn’t even think about it. I just loved that line so much. I changed it a little to make it work with this story and it’s not as cool but now it fits better. Thanks for noticing that.



Yeah, I guess a little SC. Sure, Tara’s the same Tara but without Willow here. Notice that she wasn’t in love with Michelle, not sleeping every night, not intimate. Because Willow is her lobster (blatant Friends reference).



Your patience will be rewarded about the horses but not soon. Thanks for everything.



Incitatua 8 - :confused Maybe two different people are using your sig? Ok, I guess you are saying that. Glad you like it and are passing it along.



Jaycatt23 – Don’t remember seeing your sig before. If not, thanks for delurking and adding comments. Love them. Love the readers :clap :clap :clap . But no to DGL. Not going to happen on the Sunnydale visit. No plans for DGL appearance at this time. Glad you liked the twist.



Velaingie – Glad you liked so much and caught on about the Wish. The next part will be up tomorrow sometime. Thanks for the name explanation. Howdy y’all to France I guess. :wave



Tawilove – Yes exactly! :bounce :bounce :bounce . No matter what, they go together. Even if they never meet, they belong together including in this episode. Thanks a ton.



Teaser – If you are impatient for the next posting, reread Tara’s dream.

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"War may be a necessary evil. But no matter how necessary, it is still evil." -- President Jimmy Carter after receiving the Nobel Peace Prize

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