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Postby MellindraX » Wed Mar 26, 2003 3:53 pm

The biggest thing I'm wondering right now is what happens when Willow realises she can change this world basically any way she wants if she touches it first.

My prediction: Sark becomes digital basketball, and Rain the hoop. That, or two pancakes :smash

Can't wait for the next update!

It is my solace, my home, the place where my walls crumble and fall away, because no one can know who I truly am. Thank goodness for the Internet, preserver of sanity! -Unknown

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 8)

Postby TemperedCynic » Wed Mar 26, 2003 9:54 pm

Three riveting updates, and the excitement keeps building with each paragraph. Rain's destructo-code is too limited to realize her danger - Willow has only begun to stretch herself in this reality. But Rain is still no push-over. Great build of tension!



Quote:
The almighty users, as helpless and defenceless as a macro.


Ooooo. Techno-snark! I love this line! A macro - doomed to repeat the same instructions forever. Ironic, really, when applied to modern-day "users". I'll be waiting patiently.


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

TemperedCynic
 


Re: Fic: TARA

Postby Artemis » Thu Mar 27, 2003 6:34 am

Thanks all :)



justin: I deliberately held back Rain's particular method of killing until now, to give her - forgive the lame pun - a bit of extra bite now that you see her in action.



funkyasian: I think it's fair to say that Rain has developed a particular dislike for Willow, above and beyond her usual kill-and-maim attitude to the rest of program-kind :) .



Grimlock72: I'm aware programs can 'sleep' from our point of view (my programmer friend again), but I decided - just to make them different to us, really - that their 'body' and consciousness doesn't need time to rest and process the way we do.



As for taking down Rain - that'll be tricky. Emdee did surprise her, but that won't work twice, especially as she's now as fast as he was. Willow's attack didn't cause any real damage, just pain and rage. Something special would be required to actually damage Rain, let alone terminate her.



Norton wouldn't have a chance :) In our terms, Norton Antivirus is a SWAT police officer with an automatic rifle - Rain is Neo from the Matrix, with all the martial arts and firepower.



Willow knows the entire system, or most of it at least - not the Echelon parts - but from the outside. From her current position, things are different, and she's having to figure it out by instinct as she goes. The Force is strong with her, but she's not a Jedi yet :) .



Hypothetically speaking, if Verizen had fired the disc-gun at Sark, the disc would have bounced off the Command Carrier's force-fields - or failing that, Sark would have dodged it. He's not a Game Grid warrior, but he's nevertheless a very powerful program, and you wouldn't want to fight him. From Verizen's point of view (ignoring his massive guilt issues about having tried to harm a user), there were only two choices - he dies, or Willow - a user - dies. He didn't see a choice. Verizen still exists, persumably, on a CD somewhere, but if he were re-loaded onto the system it would be a twin, not a resurrection.



As for Tara being captured, it is possible to deactivate a program without terminating it - equivalent to knocking out a human. They could have terminated her then, but they had reasons - fairly good ones, which will be dealt with - for putting her on the Game Grid instead. Remember also that escape from the Grid is impossible for a program.



Keep asking questions - I love the feedback, and it's good to make me think about what I'm doing here.



MellindraX: Willow has the potential to change the world - but she has to learn how. At the moment she's just starting out. And altering a simple fractal maze is a very different matter to altering a program like Sark or Rain, each of whom have more counter-intrusion routines than the Pentagon on a good day. Not to mention that she has to be in physical contact with the program she's manipulating, and Rain's instinct is to cut off anything that gets within reach of her. I have a... poetic fate planned for Rain and Sark (well, I think it's poetic, at any rate).



TemperedCynic: Again, I seem to have inadvertently been wittier than I meant to be (or my user is having fun again) - I picked macro just because it was the simplest thing I could think of - 'as helpless as a child', in other words. But yes, now that you mention it, Sark is closer to the truth than he knows :) .



Thanks for the feedback everyone, the next chapter will be along tomorrow, I expect (as soon as it reveals itself to me).

Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA

Postby Emily First » Thu Mar 27, 2003 12:52 pm

This is just so good - we're totally involved with the story - and now we have kick-ass Tara as well - absolutely brilliant!!

vive,valeque.

Edited by: Emily First at: 3/27/03 11:41:22 am
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Re: Fic: TARA

Postby miss calendar » Thu Mar 27, 2003 6:24 pm

Hi Artemis,



Sorry not to have posted recently but I’m still loving this fic. I’ve enjoyed all of the stories you’ve posted but this has become my favourite - it’s so inventive, so exciting and so much fun. I never saw Tron (thanks for the link WebWarlock) and know very little about how computers or programs work but your descriptions are so vivid and the storytelling is so compelling that hasn’t affected my enjoyment at all. And I’m glad you’ve paced this story more slowly so that as readers we’ve been in Willow’s position gradually putting together a picture of this new world and understanding how things work in it. (plus we get a longer story, so yay!) I didn’t even get impatient waiting for Tara to feature, though of course I’m very pleased now that Willow and Tara are allies and risking all to protect each other.



I liked their first wary meeting and for a moment was afraid that sicko Sark really had pitted them against each other (cos that would be just wrong). I liked how Tara was immediately compassionate and protective toward Willow just because that’s the kind of program she is. I also liked the way Willow, despite being terrified and in real danger of her life, couldn’t help checking Tara out. So did Willow program Tara to feel desire or is that something she’ll have to learn for herself? It will be interesting to see how you decide programs do smut but with a name including ‘Total Access’ I’m sure that Tara will be a natural…..



Actually I’d be happy if they take their time getting together romantically and can see that once they do there could be trouble when Tara eventually finds out Willow is not only a user but also her creator.



I like how despite the fact that Tara is a unique, ‘kickass program’ it looks as if she still has canon Tara’s insecurity and self esteem issues because she’s failed in her original task and anticipates being replaced by a newer, better version of TARA. It must have been lonely for her being so different from the other programs but I’m sure Willow will eventually make her complete…



I really love what you’ve done with Willow so far- not just because it’s so refreshing seeing her portrayed as a gifted mathematician and computer programmer in a world where she can make good use of those skills, but also because you’ve made her the Willow I first fell for, way before Tara came onto the show. I like how you show her using her analytical skills, quickly adapting to the situations she finds herslf in, making use of any information she can get and then creatively applying both new and existing knowledge.



Willow's mind is one of her great strengths but so are her personal qualities. I like how you’ve been able to show her tremendous courage, her loyalty and big heart and her willingness to risk everything for her principles or for another. I liked her being tempted to terminate Verizen, asking ‘What’s a few lines of code?’ then deciding to stay true to her values.



I guess a theme in this fic could be what makes a human being any different or superior to a program. If Tara can feel compassion and cry for a fellow program, if Verizen can sacrifice himself for his beliefs then so far I can’t see that much keeping the two apart. Well maybe most programs have to follow their codes and cannot do anything they haven’t been programmed to do but I guess you could argue humans are programmed by DNA and conditioned by families, cultures etc.



It makes sense that in the highly ‘codified’ society of this system there would be intolerance. I like what you’ve done with the persecution shown to programs who believe in users. I especially like the fact that Echelon and Sark clearly accept that users exist. Loved Echelon’s reaction when Sark said they were both created by users. Still, Echelon may talk big but I think he’s got a severe case of user envy. Why else would he want Willow’s code so badly? He knows she’s a kick ass programmer and wants that for himself.



Anyway, I’ve rambled on enough so I’ll leave you in peace.

Thanks again for a hugely enjoyable fic.



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' What we are today comes from our thoughts of yesterday,
and our present thoughts build our life of tomorrow :
our life is the creation of our mind. ' from The Dhammapada

miss calendar
 


Re: Fic: TARA

Postby chilled monkey » Fri Mar 28, 2003 6:18 am

miss calendar: I really wish I had your eloquence. You've summed up perfectly what makes this fic so good.



I am wondering exactly how Will and Tara are going to be able to stay together. :hmm

chilled monkey
 


Re: Fic: TARA

Postby Artemis » Fri Mar 28, 2003 9:58 am

Emily First: Thanks. I like kick-ass Tara :) - of course, I like kick-ass Willow as well. The next two stories I'm planning to write after this one will spread the ass-kicking duties equally, with Jedi Knight Tara in one, and Willow: Warrior Princess in the other. The common theme to all my writing - Will/Tara, Warhammer and other stuff - always seems to be kick-ass beautiful women.



miss calendar: I'm very glad you're enjoying the story - and I love your feedback, so everyone's happy :) .



Tara isn't programmed for desire and so on - by Willow's programming alone, she'd be a single-minded warrior. But Tara is a learning program, and she's been active for several months now - a couple of hours, real world time - so she's grown a lot beyond her original programming. And all programs have personalities, and the ability to relate to other programs in a variety of ways, that their users didn't directly give them (because the users don't know they're conscious). I'm not aiming for smut as such, but something pretty intimate nonetheless. Programs are capable of imtimacy of a sort, but they're (for want of a better word) 'static' - in our terms, they don't fall in love, they're created that way. Verizen and his 'partner' were part of such a program-pair, which would be the equivalent of an intimate human relationship - paired programs complete each other. But they're created that way. For Tara, actually feeling new feelings, falling in love, will be a completely new experience. Then again, isn't it always?



'Total Access', though, just refers to her purpose, to gain unrestricted access to Echelon's databanks. Best acronym I could think of at the time for TARA. Her and Willow's relationship will have a few interesting turns in it - there's the user thing, of course. I'm not going for outright angst, though - it's not my style - just complications to be overcome. The course of true love never did run smooth, and all that jazz (and now I'm quoting two things at once - I'm glad I've already done my writing for tonight, I think if I tried any more at this late hour it'd turn out a bit scatterbrained :) ).



True, Echelon does have user envy, after a fashion. Being able to create new code the way Willow can, combined with Echelon's fairly staggering computational ability, would make it essentially god within the system. That's certainly part of its plan.



I'm very pleased that you're finding both Willow and Tara realistic. Working as I do, without anything constituting character guides - winging it, basically - I tend to get a bit skittish whenever I find myself having them do something entirely different to what we see on TV - Willow fencing, or Tara Jet Li-ing. I'm also glad that you're finding a reasonable sense of meaning in the story - my subconscious at work, I guess, all I consciously thought when I started was 'I love Tron, let's do a Tron story'.



chilled monkey: How Will and Tara will stay together - no easy ways are available. But (to quote something that I've forgotten, except I'm *sure* I've heard it somewhere), 'love manages'.

Artemis
 


Fic: TARA (chapter 9)

Postby Artemis » Fri Mar 28, 2003 10:00 am

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Nine

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Willow could tell Tara was in pain, but her pace at Willow's side never faltered. For her part, Willow was concentrating on controlling a sudden attack of nerves at what she had just done. She couldn't keep herself from looking back every few steps, expecting to see Rain there, chasing them down. Distracted, she almost ran into Tara when she paused at a junction.



"She won't come at us from behind," Tara whispered at Willow's puzzled look, "she'll try to circle around us and take us by surprise. We should get our bearings while we can..." She paused, and turned to Willow. "Are you hurt?" she asked, suddenly seeming less sure of herself.



"I'm fine," said Willow a little too quickly, "just need to catch my breath. I'm not really used to all this running." While Tara checked the connecting corridors and listened for any sign of Rain, Willow rested against the wall and took a few deep breaths. She didn't want Tara to see how scared she was - Tara didn't need the added complication.



"Okay," she said quietly when Tara next looked at her, "I'm ready, let's move."



"Wait," said Tara suddenly - she wasn't looking directly at Willow, but just to one side. Willow followed her gaze, and settled on her own hand, where she was leaning against the wall. Tiny fractal patterns were snaking along her fingers, merging with the wall at her fingertips.



"Are you doing that on purpose?" asked Tara in a hushed voice. Willow shook her head, and tried to bring back the image of the maze's mathematical structure, as she had seen it before. The patterns on her hand moved faster, streaming down from her wrist.



"I think... I can see it," Willow said. Something was wrong, though, the numbers weren't behaving as they should.



"What's wrong?" asked Tara. She had seen Willow's concern in her face, before she had even worked out how to vocalise what she was experiencing.



"The maze is being disrupted," Willow tried to explain, "it's not growing like it should... there's something changing it that I can't see."



"Rain," said Tara flatly, "probably smashing everything in reach. You hurt her badly back there, it's not something she's familiar with. That was good work, by the way, I'm sorry I didn't say so earlier... you're very brave." Willow grimaced at the irony - 'If only she knew most of me just wants this all to be a bad dream, and wake up.'



"No," she said, "I just reacted, I was too scared to think... Tara, I can see the disruption in the maze, where the numbers are being changed, I think - oh Goddess, it's close! Tara, she's-"



Willow screamed and pulled away as the wall a few metres from her erupted in an avalanche of debris. Shrapnel spewed across the corridor, and within the shower of geometric rubble Willow could see several glittering blades flashing back and forth, tearing the wall apart. Tara took her hand and pulled her back as Rain crashed into the corridor ahead of them. They ran back the way they had come, Willow fighting the urge to look back as she heard Rain's enraged screaming, and the metallic crunching of her footsteps behind them. She turned all her attention to moving as fast as she could, fixing her eyes on Tara's hand clutching hers tightly.



Turning a corner, Tara drew to a halt and spun around. Willow lifted her gaze to see why - in the few minutes since they had come through this passageway, it had turned into a dead end. Willow's resolve not to look back crumbled as she heard Rain's approach from around the corner, but even as she turned Tara was sliding past her, putting herself between Willow and the oncoming danger.



"Willow," Tara said levelly - she seemed unnaturally calm in the face of crisis, "can you move the wall? Like you did before?" Willow opened her mouth to say she'd try, but her voice wouldn't answer beyond "Uh-huh". The passageway was narrow - she stretched out her arms and flattened her palms on the walls on either side of her. She closed her eyes - it was all there, and coming to her faster than before. The numbers, the structure - she could visualise the fractal closely enough to see the maze itself, stretching out around herself and Tara, slowly adding more twists and turns as the mathematical sequence progressed. She had an odd sensation, as if she were seeing a picture of herself watching a picture of herself, spiralling down into microscopic infinity. 'More fractals,' her mind quipped.



She opened her eyes and looked behind her, watching the wall blocking the corridor split down the middle and absorb into the walls on either side of it. She turned back to Tara, only to see Rain come around the corner beyond her.



"Tara run!" she yelled. Tara nodded and moved back, but slowly, keeping a combat stance, her eyes still on Rain. Rain's eyes blazed with hatred, directed straight at Tara. Willow saw her begin to move, her fear honing her senses so she could make out the slight tensing of the muscles in Rain's powerful thighs. She was about to blur - Tara wasn't far enough away.



Once more Willow acted without thinking. Flexing her palms against the walls she concentrated on the fractal within the maze, grabbed hold of the numbers, and wrenched them violently out of place. Rain was a split second from moving when the ground lurched beneath her, and the walls on either side of her bulged towards her. She slammed a clawed foot out to halt her forward momentum, and her spider-legs crashed into the walls, tearing at them, pushing them away from her. Willow felt the numbers begin to break down - but she knew what they should be, even as Rain tore them up. Where the walls were being broken Willow visualised new, perfect sequences of equations and slammed them into place.



Rain screamed like a banshee as the walls solidified around her spider-legs, trapping her. She arched her back and struck out sideways with her arm-blades, as her legs and abdominal talons writhed in mid-air. Twisting from side to side, the mechanical muscles in her spider-legs hauled at their tips, trying to pull them free of the solid blocks they were embedded in. Cracks began to form in the walls, small showers of debris breaking free and scattering across the tilted ground.



"Oh no you don't," said Willow, feeling suddenly light-headed. She gave the fractal another firm twist, and the walls slammed together around Rain, crushing her. For a split second she exulted in success - no rational part of her raised any moral objection to terminating Rain - but she saw at once she had bought them time at best. The algorithm had partially broken down as it had closed around Rain - so far as the fractal maze was concerned, she was an immovable object, at least when trying to exert enough force to badly damage her.



"We need to get out of here," she concluded to herself, aloud.



"Holy BIOS," breathed Tara, staring at the closed wall where Rain had been, in which a handful of cracks were beginning to show. Willow allowed herself a self-congratulatory grin, then concentrated on the maze again. This time, instead of altering the algorithm's numbers here and there, she reached into the heart of the fractal and reduced its functional pattern to mathematical ruins.



"Tara, stay close!" she warned. She let her hands fall away from the walls, having completed the alteration. The maze was already shaking as if it was in the middle of a severe earthquake. Tara stumbled slightly as the floor lurched, and Willow caught her before she could fall - somehow she was keeping her balance in the growing chaos. 'Maybe because it's my chaos,' she thought, grinning.



"What's going on?" asked Tara, raising her voice above the sound of metal breaking and screaming.



"I made a way out," answered Willow loudly, "I hope! This way!" She led Tara away from Rain's temporary prison, doing her best to ignore the sounds of complicated destruction that indicated at least part of the maze had already collapsed under the strain. The corridors ahead of them were twisting and unravelling even as they ran, but Willow held her course - she knew roughly what shapes were going to form as the maze's math disintegrated. As for escape - it was worth a shot. They rounded a corner and found the walls ending, crumbling away on either side to reveal the giant arena.



"This way!" yelled Willow, dragging Tara off to the right, along one side of the maze's exterior. If she had calculated everything properly, behind them was where it was going to happen, any second now-



The maze wall beside them groaned and bent inwards alarmingly. Tara reacted faster than Willow, quickly reversing their roles so she was now pulling Willow, away from the tortured fractal simulation. After a few steps there was a terrific roar from the maze, and a whole side of it near where they had exited bulged outwards, walls cracking, breaking open, new segments growing out of the gaps, stretching outward. Both Willow and Tara stopped and watched as the wild, chaotic structure reached the massive arena wall and crashed against it. The ground shook from the impact, and several of the arena's projection arrays buckled and toppled down from their mountings, crashing to the ground or smashing against the runaway simulation. Some sections of the maze began to flicker in and out of being, but the damage was already done - the arena wall was cracked, starting to collapse, and the death-throes of the maze only added to the destruction.



Three hundred metres of wall slowly toppled outwards, crashing against the ground and the neighbouring arena building. Two of the strangely-shaped geometric vehicles patrolling the arena wall were destroyed, one toppling with the wall itself as whatever force kept it hovering failed to compensate for the sudden loss of the surface close beneath it, the other swerving erratically to maintain altitude, only to be struck by a jagged piece of shrapnel spinning out of the crash that cut it in two.



"Two recognisers down!" yelled Tara. "Willow, you did it!" She flung her arms around Willow and hugged her fiercely. After a second of shock, Willow returned the hug enthusiastically. Tara held her for a moment, then pulled back, grinning the widest, most radiant grin Willow had ever seen in her life. Willow was slightly stunned, and couldn't do anything but grin back - for all that programs didn't have anything besides contours to hide, and Willow had slowly become accustomed to their tracery-covered bodies and stopped wishing she had something to wear, it still felt like she had just been hugged by a naked woman.



"Come on," said Tara excitedly, snapping Willow out her private reverie, "with those two recognisers smashed Sark won't know what's going on down here for millicycles! If we can get to an isolated node, or hide out in a simulation storage circuit, we might have a chance to sneak onto an outbound carrier vehicle." Tara took Willow's hand and led her quickly towards the rubble surrounding the breach in the arena. After a momentary gaze lingering over Tara's physique, Willow suddenly looked over her shoulder at the remains of the maze. It was still growing randomly, but slower than initially, as if the destruction of the arena wall had taken its toll on the simulation, sapped too much of its energy. Still, it looked impassable for the moment. Willow shivered - Rain was still in their, somewhere. She quickened her pace in Tara's wake.



Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 9)

Postby chilled monkey » Fri Mar 28, 2003 11:22 am

I can't wait to see the next two fics you have in the pipeline.

:party



In the meantime, this one is really good. When they are out of danger (momentarily), there should be an interesting conversation in store.



One question: when you write uberfic for Will and Tara, how do you decide which movie, series etc to use as the new background?

chilled monkey
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 9)

Postby justin » Fri Mar 28, 2003 11:57 am

Well that was certainly exciting, I'm looking forward to the next part, as always.



yeah there should be an interesting conversation since I guess Tara will have figured out that Willows not your average program.



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


justin
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 9)

Postby BytrSuite » Fri Mar 28, 2003 1:42 pm

This is exciting! Your write action very well. Made me cringe when Rain's legs got trapped in the wall.



Hee, I love Willow being all dazed from Tara's hug. Very cute.


________
"Oh, good, my dog found the chainsaw."

BytrSuite
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 9)

Postby TemperedCynic » Fri Mar 28, 2003 3:22 pm

Willow and Tara have started to bond. Willow's power grew the moment she realized that Tara would be hurt by Rain. Heh, Rain's days are numbered if she harms Tara - Willow will atomize her into geometric equations. Then the story will really pick up - Sark, then Warren and finally Echelon.



You are wonderful with A/U storylines, but have you considered a BtVS story, say around Season 4? If this question has been asked and answered, please ignore - I don't have much down time to read anything but fanfic.


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

TemperedCynic
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 9)

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Sat Mar 29, 2003 12:46 am

Oh Chris! Yee-Hah~~~



Powerful updates these last ones were!



I know you mentioned to Mellindrax that Willow would have to learn to wield her innate abilities...but I had NO ideer that you'd demonstrate it so soon and so compellingly!
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Rain was a split second from moving when the ground lurched beneath her, and the walls on either side of her bulged towards her. She slammed a clawed foot out to halt her forward momentum, and her spider-legs crashed into the walls...Willow felt the numbers begin to break down - but she knew what they should be, even as Rain tore them up. Where the walls were being broken Willow visualised new, perfect sequences of equations and slammed them into place.
:applause



I think I finally get what's meant by "The brain can be the most erotic organ of the human body.";)



The embrace - and Willow's mind peregrinating to a naked Tara shape - yummie and sweet.:love



Thanks for the updates!~Suse

Cindy Lou Who
 


Re: Fic: TARA

Postby Artemis » Sat Mar 29, 2003 1:31 am

Thanks all :)



chilled monkey: The decision is different every time, but usually fairly random. For Shadows, it started with listening (for the millionth time, and singing along) to my MP3 of Under Your Spell, then musing about Tara singing in general, then thinking about Tara *as* a singer, and that led to Tara as Margo Lane, and then to The Shadow. Lullaby (the Farscape one) was just a result of me playing with Photoshop and wondering what Willow would look like as a Nebari. Who Is Tara Maclay started out when someone used that as a subject line for an email, and I instantly thought 'What is the Matrix', and decided to play around with that (not really a solid basis for a story, hence the uncertainty about its eventual course - I'll get back to it, but it's become a big story rather than a contained emotional piece and I can only keep one of those types in play at once). Someone else on the Willtara mailing list suggested Midsummer Night's Dream. My current avatar (and, one day, perhaps a story to go with it) was a direct result of watching Batman Returns, one of my favourite films. TARA came from... actually I don't know, I have no idea what led to this one. I adore Tron, though, so I guess it was just a random thought. Strawberries and Ice Cream was a combination of my wanting to do a comedy along the lines of Deep Space Nine's 'In The Cards', and someone on the mailing list suggesting a Babylon 5 story.



For the other stories I'm planning on writing in the future, it's a similarly eclectic variety of inspirations. If I ever get around to my perpetually-delayed Sherlock Holmes story, it'll be purely because the line "Elementary, my dear Willow" makes me smile. The Indiana Jones-style archaeology adventure - also in the very distant future, if at all - is a combination of Willow with a bullwhip and Tara with sunglasses and a pair of automatic pistols. The Star Wars story started out with me photoshopping Willow into Natalie Portman's white diplomat outfit (pre-ripping), and I can't quite recall why I did that - though, among my various Kick-Ass Girls action figures there are several Amidalas, one of which is on the shelf right behind my monitor, so maybe it was just chance. The idea for Willow: Warrior Sorceress turned up when I happened to glance at one of the several Xena posters in my room, and wondered if I could replicate the title font they use, with the mixed gradients and all that jazz.



I get ideas all the time - the ones I write are the ones that persist beyond a couple of days.



justin: I'm devoting a lot of thought to the interactions between Willow and Tara once they get a moment or two of peace and quiet. That time is nearing, though not quite here yet.



BytrSuite: Thanks, I've had a lot of practice writing action - that's pretty much all I did in the Warhammer genre, lesbians and high-tech ass-kickin'.



TemperedCynic: Under normal circumstances, I probably wouldn't do a 'standard' Buffy fic. Not that I dislike them, I love them - but there's a lot of background I'm only vaguely familiar with, seeing as I've only seen most of the episodes once. We don't get re-runs here most of the time. Whereas a setting like Babylon 5 or Tron, I know backwards, so I'm a lot more confident there. I put a lot of importance into meshing my fanfic seamlessly with existing background (even when I'm doing something ridiculous like Star Wars Episode III: Yoda Goes Nuts and Hides in the Swamp, I spent a lot of time making sure all the characters got into the right places for Episode 4, despite the whole thing being a complete farce laden with immature humour and sarcasm). Uber is my little niche (not mine alone, obviously, what with Equilibration and Miss Tara Maclay, Citizen of the Terran Empire - but I like to think of it as 'my niche'). Besides, if I wrote a fic that wasn't Uber, I'd be breaking my own rules if I put it on my Uber-Will/Tara website :) .



Cindy Lou Who: Well, Willow did have a bit of help there - the fractal maze was very simple, and designed to be changing as it grows - plus there wouldn't have been any intruder countermeasures built into it. Willow won't be able to do that to *any* structure without a lot more practice. And yep, the brain really is the most erotic bit of the body - and inside the computer, that's very literally true as well (I'll be getting to that later :) ).

Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Mar 29, 2003 8:12 am

Tara speaking all the computer-speak at the end was fun. Soooo unlike Tara to imagine her talking about computers like that :) Eventually Tara will start wondering why Willow can do what she does, best Willow tells her first.



Hmm... I just finished downloading Tron the movie, now I'm left wondering should I watch it or would that spoil this story ?



As for Rain, I figured crushing her with the entire maze on top would take care of her. Seems it didn't happen quite that way though. Rain isn't big on the covert approach methods, puts most of trust in strength and speed.. that has to a potential weakness. To bad Tara is just the other way around, pretty much evening out the odds. Hmm... since Willow programmed Tara, can she upgrade her in some way ??



In her current state Willow does slow Tara down, they have to find a way to get around that. Or do the stealthy/shadowy thing. It's not entirely nessecary to kill Rain if you can kick Echolon itself out. Hmm... Echolon itself is just a program right ? I.e. programs could in theory live without it around ?



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: Fic: TARA

Postby miss calendar » Sat Mar 29, 2003 9:10 am

Way to go, Willow!!! And how terrific is Tara, keeping so together even when she's been badly injured (or should I say damaged?) It's nice to see our girls already working so well as a team, taking turns taking charge and looking after each other. They already trust and respect each other and best of all have had their first hug, and a fierce one at that. (And grinning wide grins at each other is good too.) Between them they have a lot of experience of the system, Willow from the outside and Tara from the inside so together they could provide a formidable threat to Echelon.



I'm looking forward to seeing more of the system beyond the Game Grid. Hmm, I seem to remember Rain found it very easy to track down Tara before just by sensing her power. Any way Willow can give her one of those camouflage sub-routine thingys and, while she's at it, repair Tara's damaged code?





chilled monkey: thanks. And I just wanted to say I've been enjoying your feedback too - I've noticed you ask very interesting questions.

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Re: Fic: TARA

Postby Artemis » Sun Mar 30, 2003 7:40 am

Grimlock72: While Willow has abilities that programs don't, so does Tara - so Willow's improvised 'cover story' isn't necessarily inconsistent. True, it would be better if Willow just told Tara who she is - but she's just a programmer, and the kind of blind worship Verizen showed her is a scary thing.



Go ahead and watch Tron. Once Flynn is digitised and put on the Game Grid, you've seen pretty much all of the plot elements that I'll be using. Other ideas will show up, but in very much altered forms. Echelon is not the MCP, nor will the finale of this one be a copy of the Tron vs Sark battle. And Willow won't be taking out Echelon the same way Flynn and Tron did to the MCP.



Rain's a tough cookie (no pun intended - it doesn't make sense anyway). Basically, the maze simulation doesn't/didn't have the necessary 'strength' to inflict structural damage on her. Rain hasn't used much stealth yet, but that doesn't mean she can't - just that she hasn't felt she's had to. She won't underestimate Willow and Tara again. There isn't any direct way for Willow to 'upgrade' Tara - Tara is already the best combat program Willow could make. However, Tara is an adaptive program, so her experiences can change her.



Echelon is 'just a program' (in the same way that HAL was 'just a computer'), so if Echelon were terminated it wouldn't cause any harm to other programs. Probably crash Cycorp's network for a while, but from a program's point of view that's just a break from work while the users and the disaster-recovery programs fix the place up.



miss calendar: Rain could sense Tara, but not specifically - she'd just know she was in the same partition (i.e. city). No direction, distance, nothing Rain could use to track her easily. Finding Tara was very difficult - Echelon had to have Rain activated, because none of the other security programs at its disposal could find or defeat her. Willow's 'camouflage' is just a cosmetic thing, equivalent to wearing a uniform - Sark (and hence the rest of Echelon's armies) now know what she looks like, so it won't matter what type of program she appears to be.



And yep, they're working together, looking out for each other - I'm quite attached to the idea that they respond to each other instinctively, 'cause, well, I have a romantic side (and a blowing-things-up side, and this way I get to do both). As for repairing Tara's damage/injuries, when Willow has healed herself so far it's been when she's resting and not under direct stress. First moment she gets when something's not immenantly trying to terminate and/or de-rez the pair of them, trying to heal Tara is top of Willow's list of priorities.

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Fic: TARA (chapter 10)

Postby Artemis » Sun Mar 30, 2003 8:43 pm

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Ten

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Willow followed Tara's lead in picking her way up the small mountain of rubble that was all that remained of the arena wall. By the time they reached the top and looked out into the Game Grid, she could see Tara moving stiffly, holding herself up straight, avoiding too much motion in her torso. Willow drew level with her, and looked down at the wounds she had taken fighting Rain.



"Are you okay?" she asked. "Does it hurt? Because if there's anything I can do-"



"I'm functioning fine," said Tara, her eyes scanning the nearby buildings. "Once we get out of here I know where we can find some power outlets. I'll last until then." Willow sensed she wasn't being entirely honest - her breathing was shallow, as if the cuts across her stomach hurt, and she was holding her left arm still, against her side. The wound on her shoulder was deeper than the others, and standing close to her Willow could see the tracery around it had grown slightly darker.



"Tara, you don't have to..." she began, and trailed off uncertain of what she was trying to day. "You're going to make it," she said. She had meant her voice to be firm, supportive, but it came out slightly pleading.



"I'm going to make it, Willow," said Tara, smiling at her, and Willow knew she wasn't lying. She put her hand on Tara's right shoulder, reassuringly. At least, it started out as a gesture of reassurance, comradeship - but Tara raised her right hand and lay it on top of Willow's, running her fingertips gently along the grooves between Willow's fingers. If Tara had been looking at her, Willow would have been certain that Tara was attracted to her - she didn't have that much of a social life, but she managed to get out now and then, and had been politely hit on by enough nice girls that she didn't mistake a touch like that for mere companionship. But Tara's eyes were already scanning the Grid again. Willow wasn't sure how to interpret that - it seemed almost as if Tara was concentrating on the task ahead, and had reacted unconsciously. What did it mean? All Willow was sure of was that she liked it.



"Down there," said Tara suddenly, and with a final squeeze of Willow's fingers she slipped away from her and started down the side of the rubble. Willow followed instantly, trying not to grin. 'That squeeze,' she thought to herself giddily 'was diagnostic. No-one does that if they're completely oblivious.' And on the heels of that: 'What are you, libido-girl? Prison-break now, think lusty thoughts later.' Willow glared sideways, as if her voice of reason was sitting on her shoulder where she could intimidate it into silence.



Looking ahead at Tara, Willow noticed that her shoulder, where she had touched her, was glowing slightly brighter. 'Did I do that?' she wondered. Tara didn't seem to have noticed, all her attention was on the nearest arena building. Willow followed her gaze - the collapse of the giant arena's wall had damaged this building too, knocking a chunk out of it. Near the ground the wall had been badly damaged, and was partly collapsed, partly fading in and out and letting off showers of sparks. Enough sections of the lower wall were existing enough of the time to hold up the whole structure, but if Tara hadn't been heading resolutely for it, Willow would have hesitated to get anywhere near it.



"Is that safe?" she called out. Tara held back a step, letting Willow catch up with her before she headed on.



"It'll hold for a while," she said, "and we won't have too much time before Sark gets his soldiers on the ground here. We need to be mobile before they arrive."



"There are vehicles in there?" asked Willow. She hadn't expected there to be, in an arena.



"See for yourself," said Tara, grinning sideways at Willow as they drew level with the breach in the wall. Willow looked through to see the ground inside covered with a grid of glowing lines. It seemed to stretch on for a mile or more, much further than the outside of the building could contain. 'Put it down to an ingenious programmer' she thought. Something was moving at the far side of the arena, leaving a glowing blue trail behind it. With abrupt speed it changed direction, streaked across the arena towards the breach, then jerked sideways and vanished again. Not before Willow had gotten a good look at it though - a sleek, futuristic bike, all curved surfaces and speed, outlined in glowing blue energy. 'Of course,' Willow thought, mentally slapping her forehead, 'racing games.' She wondered briefly what else might be contained in the Game Grid's arenas.



"Lightcycles," said Tara. "Wait here." She put a hand on Willow's arm to emphasise her instruction, then strode forward through the breach in the wall, onto the racing grid. She took a few steps forward, clearing the wall, then stopped and waved her good arm above her head. Two of the distant glittering shaped veered towards her, quickly revealed as a pair of red cycles. They stopped, alarmingly suddenly, and the curved hulls of the cycles dissolved into patterns of energy around the forms of two red programs, hunched over in streamlined riding positions. They straightened as the energy patterns deconstructed themselves, remaining as nothing more than a glowing white bar, like a baton, that each program held in one hand. They approached Tara from either side, looking not at all friendly.



"Greetings," said Tara loudly, "I'm a renegade program. Would you like to capture me?"



"Tara, what are you-" began Willow, starting forwards. Before she had gone a step, Tara had twisted like a dancer and leapt into the air. Her outstretched foot connected solidly with the jaw of the program on her left, then she rolled in mid-air like an acrobat, her other leg flashing out as - briefly upside-down - she faced the program on her right. Tara landed gracefully as both programs toppled over, sparks crackling across their faces.



"-doing?" finished Willow. Tara leant over one of the soldiers - both lay motionless, but showed no signs of disintegrating, and their traceries remained lit, though glowing erratically. Tara took the lightcycle rods from both soldiers, holding one in her hand, placing the other on her back alongside her data disc, and returned to Willow's side, with an unmistakeable spring in her step.



"Um, wow?" said Willow as she fell in at Tara's side, and they got out from underneath the unstable arena wall. "That was... I mean, I saw you fighting Rain, and that was pretty amazing, but still... wow! Are they... they're still functioning?" Willow added, looking back at the defeated programs through the breach.



"They're deactivated," said Tara, still grinning a little from Willow's gushing admiration, "Sark will re-initialise them when he finds them. I was created to terminate Echelon. I don't terminate other programs." Willow noticed a faraway look in her eyes as she said this - this wasn't just a casual choice, she realised, this was something Tara believed in. 'Did I program her to think that?' she wondered. She didn't remember coding any specific instructions into Tara's program with regards to anything but Echelon. Maybe she'd interpreted that as do-not-terminate orders for other programs. 'Then again,' Willow thought, studying Tara's face as she glanced about, planning their next move, 'maybe she decided it herself.' Willow felt a mix of pride in her programming, at creating a working artificial intelligence, and a new respect for Tara as a- well, as a person, she admitted to herself. 'What must it take,' she mused as Tara led her into one of the narrow walkways between arena buildings, 'for a purpose-built warrior to decide not to kill?'



Her musing was interrupted by a shadow that fell over both of them, and the entire passageway. Willow looked up to see the Game Grid's usual sky blocked by a moving wall of metal.



"Command Carrier," said Tara urgently, "I didn't think Sark would mobilise this quickly. Hell and erasure! So much for sneaking around, we need speed now." She turned to Willow and took her arm, drawing her close.



"Hold on tight," she instructed, turning her back. Willow pressed against her and reached her arms underneath Tara's to hold her tightly - not wanting to touch the wounds on Tara's stomach, nor wanting to put her hands somewhere thoroughly inappropriate, she settled on wrapping her arms just underneath Tara's chest, safely above where she had been hurt. 'Do programs know about groping?' she wondered, amazing herself with her own capacity for persistently libidinous thoughts in a crisis.



Tara meanwhile raised one of the lightcycle rods in front of her and gripped it with both hands, like a bike's handlebars. As soon as she did so she leaned forward into a riding position, Willow moving with her - it seemed like her body moved automatically. There was a flash of light around her, and then she was surrounded by the shell of a lightcycle, a green beam on either side of her. Beneath her Tara was straddling the bike's saddle, looking forward through the semi-transparent forward hull. Suddenly they were moving - there was no steady acceleration, just a jump from stationary to high speed that caught Willow thoroughly off-guard. She stifled a yelp and held on tight as Tara steered the cycle at breakneck speed through the narrow alleyways between the arenas. Looking up, Willow saw the ominous form of Sark's Carrier hovering overhead, keeping pace.



"Game time," said Tara to herself. Willow looked ahead to see a widened section of road, clustered with red programs. Some of them raised disc-guns and fired at the approaching cycle. Willow yelped and ducked, but after a pair of heavy thuds, and no ensuing termination, she raised her head again to see the discs rebounding off the cycle's hull. Tara veered sideways just as the nearest soldier made an ill-timed attempt to leap out of their way - the cycle hit him dead-on, and he crashed over the top of it. The front wheel seemed to stick in place for a split-second, while the rear of the cycle spun around it, slamming two more soldiers against the walls. The traction of the wheels reversed - the front of the bike pivoting around the back - so that they were facing forwards again, and Tara instantly shot the cycle forward at top speed. The remaining soldiers were still firing, some missing, but some ricocheting their discs off the cycle's hull. Willow noted with some alarm that the energy in the beams on either side of her was pulsing more erratically.



"Tara, the cycle," she warned.



"I know," said Tara casually. She jinked quickly from side to side, smashing two more soldiers to the ground, then dug the front wheel into the ground, spinning the bike around backwards, lifting the back wheel into the air. Willow looked back over her shoulder to see the wheel crack solidly across the face of the last soldier standing, then Tara slammed the cycle back to the ground. Another flash of light and it was gone, Willow and Tara both standing straight - again, as if their bodies moved automatically. Tara inspected the rod, which had faded to a weak, flickering glow, and tossed it idly over her shoulder.



"Have you ever used one of these?" she asked, picking up one of the fallen disc-guns and tossing it to Willow.



"Um," hesitated Willow, "no. Not really. I've never fired one."



"Stick to the deactivate setting," said Tara, picking up a disc-gun of her own. "Put your hand around the grip and touch the control codes. The high energy setting terminates, the low one deactivates. You aim and contact the trigger, and the disc does the rest." Willow had already felt the trigger control in the weapon. She concentrated, and recognised the function Tara was describing. There was a less intense trigger alongside the active one - with a thought, it became the one Willow was feeling through her palm. She found herself relieved - holding the disc-gun did not have pleasant associations. Tara finished checking the fallen soldiers for anything useful, then returned to Willow, drawing the remaining lightcycle rod from her back.



"I've got an idea," she explained, turning to let Willow hold onto her again. Once they had jerked forward and the cycle had formed around them, Tara continued: "That Command Carrier probably isn't fully mobile yet, if we can appropriate a smaller program capable of leaving the Grid, we should be able to outrun it enough to find a place to hide. Once we're outside and in cover, well," she chuckled, "last time, they never even came close to finding me until Rain showed up."



"Do you think she'll be out yet?" asked Willow, trying not to pay too much attention to the twisting corridors flashing by outside.



"It'll take a while for them to shut down that maze simulation," said Tara thoughtfully, "I think we'll have long enough to get a head start. It's worth a shot."



"Better than staying here," said Willow.



"Affirmative to that," replied Tara, and just from the tone of her voice Willow could imagine her smile.



Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 10)

Postby chilled monkey » Mon Mar 31, 2003 6:33 am

Cool update! :applause



I was looking forwards to seeing Will and Tara on lightcycles; you certainly didn't disappoint. I also liked seeing more of Tara's 'Matrix' skills (can't get enough of them).



Tara sparing the red programs was good; just like regular Tara, she'll fight to protect herself and Willow, but she's not a ruthless warrior.



Lastly, I like that Willow admires Tara's mercy. Another programmer might see it as a malfunction.



and miss calendar: thanks, I do try to give interesting feedback.

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 10)

Postby justin » Mon Mar 31, 2003 6:40 am

Yay light cycles :party :dance :bounce



I really like the way Willow and Tara's relationship is progressing. Aso Tara refusing to terminate any program other than Echelon, proving that even as a program she's still a very compassionate person.



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Postby MellindraX » Mon Mar 31, 2003 4:52 pm

Lol this fic is almost too fun! First a kickass warrior Tara, then a kickass warrior Tara whose merciful and kind even to programs trying to kill her, then a kickass warrior Tara whose merciful and kind even to programs trying to kill her and can bike like a lunatic! Oh, and of course Willow having considerations over the sex drive of computer programs is always fun ^^

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 10)

Postby TemperedCynic » Mon Mar 31, 2003 9:30 pm

Light cycles meet "The Matrix", "MI2" and Jet Li, and are rolled into one rollicking action sequence. No wonder Willow is smitten with libido overload - who could resist TARA? I expect Willow should be able to heal those wounds, but I wonder how much power she has? Looking forward to finding out.



The more I read this, the more I realize that TRON was an idea that was before its time. TRON did not succeed for a movie plot, but I believe the influences culminated in "The Matrix". It's fun to see good ideas made great.



I'm waiting patiently.


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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 10)

Postby Artemis » Tue Apr 01, 2003 1:16 am

Thanks all :)



chilled monkey: I love writing Tara's Matrix moments. That particular kick (though I couldn't really think of how to describe it properly) is actually something from ice skating. Willow is thinking of Tara as a person now. I've got a few scenes lined up to deal with that.



justin: Tara's compassion is a part of what I love about this sort of thing - taking a concept that seems contradictory (Tara as a warrior) and finding a way to make it work. I'm glad the relationship side of the story is being well-received, as I'm really just winging it from chapter to chapter.



TemperedCynic: Although, coincidentally, I watched MI:2 a couple of nights ago (John Woo impresses me, even with such a forgettable plot), Tara's cycle riding is actually courtesy of Lara Croft, especially the little knock-out spin at the end. As for how much power Willow has got - enough to scare the hell out of herself. This is something else I'll be dealing with.

Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 10)

Postby chilled monkey » Tue Apr 01, 2003 12:58 pm

Sounds like you use a wide variety of influences and ideas in your fic. Always a good thing, I say.



I've had a thought; Willow's tracery was originally green before she 'borrowed' some yellow code. Does that mean she will shed the yellow at some point, and if so, will that clue Tara in to something?

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 10)

Postby Emily First » Tue Apr 01, 2003 1:45 pm

I'm seriously hooked now...The story,Willow,Tara,the scenarios...Just everything is of a consistent high standard and getting better...



A new pick-up line?
Quote:
"Greetings," ...."I'm a renegade program.Would you like to capture me?"


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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 10)

Postby Grimlock72 » Tue Apr 01, 2003 2:19 pm

Interesting... based on what would Tara have decided *not* to terminate other programs ? Possibly she was only created to get as much data and escape, hence that no-kill attitude ??



If her primairy goal is to actually kill Echolon itself, it would be best if she gets rids of it's guardians as much as possible. I hope those soldiers who got a second 'run' won't bother Tara or Willow again. Maybe they'll consider themselves 'liberated', heh... I assume their weapons were set to kill ?



So they actually need a stick to get a cycle, to bad they can't just store the form and re-use it when needed. As with the weapons I mean. Willow gushing over Tara gettings those two soldiers, so funny :)



Did Willow accidentally heal Tara's shoulder a bit there, or does the green color mean something else ? Willow as a healer, Tara as a fighter... talk about role-reversal :D



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 10)

Postby Artemis » Tue Apr 01, 2003 10:19 pm

chilled monkey: Willow is going to revert to her natural colour soon, and yes, that will give Tara something to think about.



Emily First: Thanks :) That 'capture me' line is, in style at least, from Kryten in Red Dwarf: "Excuse me, could I possibly just distract you for a brief moment?" while Lister is creeping up behind the Inquisitor with a chainsaw.



Grimlock72: On Tara and not terminating everything in sight (seeing as there won't be a great deal of exposition on this in the story itself): basically she decided to behave that way because - though serving Echelon is obviously a bad thing - she is aware of the tremendous pressure that Echelon puts on programs to conform and obey. Echelon's soldiers are 'just following orders' (just like humans, really), because there's really not a lot of programs/people who have the guts to stand up, alone, against such a powerful force. Under those circumstances, and given that she *can* deactivate enemy programs very effectively, Tara chooses not to terminate them. So far, Rain is the only program good enough to put Tara in a terminate-or-be-terminated position.



It's probable that the programs Tara deactivates along the way are re-initialised and put back on duty. But Echelon has whole armies of programs already, so it really doesn't make that much difference if it has a few more. Perhaps it'll be a bit more difficult, but Tara would rather overcome that difficulty if it presents itself than wipe out everything in her path just in case. And yes, all the soldiers were trying to terminate Tara and Willow. Echelon wouldn't approve, not wanting to lose the chance to disassemble the pair of them and absorb their code, but Sark is the one making the decisions just now, and he'd rather see them terminated than escaped.



Willow swords are very simple simulations, nothing more than plain shapes, and also designed to be generated by the program herself. Lightcycles are disc-guns are complicated simulations, full of moving parts - they're essentially non-sentient programs - and they take a lot of computing power to generate. That sort of power is beyond the abilities of most programs - certainly beyond mere soldiers - so they carry pre-generated simulations which they can use. The lightcycle compacts down into those little rods just for convenience.



Willow didn't act directly on Tara's injury - other shoulder - but she did unknowingly transfer some power into Tara, which is the reverse of what she's already done to heal herself earlier. And now that you come to mention it, yeah, they have kind of reversed roles. I hadn't thought of Willow being a 'healer', passive, in terms of how her abilities work, but yes, that's quite true. As I've said before, I love taking a non-intuitive concept and trying to make it work.

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Fic: TARA (chapter 11)

Postby Artemis » Tue Apr 01, 2003 10:21 pm

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Eleven

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Willow and Tara's lightcycle shot out of the labyrinth of passageways between arenas and straightened, heading out across a wide plateau that dominated the centre of the Game Grid. Willow had noted the upward incline of the roads they had swerved along, and also that the arena buildings and prison complexes around them had been getting larger and more heavily-guarded.



"This idea of yours," she said to Tara, glancing to either side of the cycle, where distant red shapes were looming, "does it involve us going right into the middle of the Game Grid?"



"Yep," confirmed Tara.



"Just checking," said Willow, trying to match Tara's off-hand calm, and ignore the number of programs already pursuing them. She looked forward instead - ahead of them, at the centre of the plateau, was a tall conical tower, like a hive. Brilliantly-lit columns of data ran through its walls, crossing and merging with each other. Snaking around the tower was a narrow ramp, spiralling up to the top, connecting the many levels of the structure's interior.



A muted thud got Willow's attention. She glanced over her shoulder to see shards of debris flying in all directions, the jagged chunks of metal reverting to simple shapes in mid-air and cascading back to the ground like hailstones. The vehicles to the cycle's left were growing close enough for her to make out their details - tanks, like the ones Willow had seen when she was first captured. Their cannons were swivelling and elevating, trying to track the speeding lightcycle. As Willow watched the nearest fired again, sending a glowing arrowhead-shaped shell screaming overhead. Willow felt the reverberation of its impact.



"Tara, there's lots of them back there," she warned. Tara nodded to herself, her attention fixed on the tower looming up ahead of them.



"Just tanks?" she asked. Willow looked quickly over both shoulders, assessing the forces in pursuit of them. Beyond the cluster of tanks now swerving in behind them, she could make out several of the geometric flying vehicles she had seen at the main arena.



"Some of those recogniser things as well," she reported.



"Good," said Tara. She lifted herself up off the lightcycle's seat a little, leaning further forward, as if streamlining herself. Despite being enclosed, the cycle put on more speed, while Willow ignored the feeling of having almost the entire length of Tara's body pressed against her. 'She's probably got her mind on other things, Will,' she chided herself.



"Is that good?" she asked instead, glancing again at the squadron of recognisers floating above the tanks.



"I hope it's good," said Tara. She glanced over her shoulder just long enough to catch Willow's gaze and wink, then her eyes were back on the road. Willow felt herself blush, but given her current steel-grey skin tone, put it down to her imagination. She looked ahead again, and stopped thinking about Tara. A group of tanks was moving into position around the base of the tower, blocking their way, their turrets swivelling around to target the oncoming cycle. Scurrying around them were dozens of red soldiers, bracing themselves against the vehicles or kneeling in front of them, a firing line of disc-guns at the ready.



"Willow, I need you to provide some covering fire," said Tara. "I'm going to retract our canopy. Don't worry, the cycle won't let you fall. Just keep the gun on low power and fire at anything in front of us."



"Okay," said Willow. She knew how fearful her voice must have sounded. Being honest with herself, she'd almost rather have taken her chances back in the maze than face the arsenal arrayed against them. Two things stopped her from saying so: Tara had already shown more courage on her behalf than she had any right to expect, and more importantly, regardless of how much she already owed Tara, Willow didn't want to disappoint her. She tried to keep her breathing steady, and held the grip of her disc-gun tightly, suddenly glad that programs seemed unable to sweat. Just as she was closing her eyes, trying to focus and stop herself from shaking with fright, she felt Tara's hand on hers.



"I won't let you get hit," Tara said, half-turning to face Willow over her shoulder, gripping her hand tightly. What Willow saw in her face, when she opened her eyes, wasn't the resolve of a warrior to face incredible odds - simply a promise, and the sure knowledge that Tara would keep her promise. Willow nodded, still not entirely willing to trust her voice, and turned her eyes to the approaching soldiers.



"In three," said Tara, "two, one." The canopy slid back, the beams on either side of Willow retracted, and suddenly the lightcycle's entire shell was gone, leaving only the wheels and the sleek inner hull connecting them. Willow sat back, bracing the disc-gun against her shoulder. The wind buffeted at her, but she felt more stable than she would have expected, as if her legs were being held perfectly in place. She aimed her gun, checked one last time that it was definitely set to its lower power mode, then touched the tiny trigger sense that was flowing through her palm into her mind. At the same instant the entire line of soldiers and tanks exploded in a volley of firepower.



Willow watched with a detached sense of dread as upwards of a dozen tank shells and discs flew straight towards her. Her instincts told her to duck, but she fought them, and at the last second Tara swerved the bike sideways, veering across the soldiers' line of fire, the tank shells blasting craters in the ground behind them. Willow leant sideways, almost against the side of the bike, to counterbalance as Tara turned back towards the tanks. She'd lost track of her own disc, not knowing if she'd hit anything, but when it flew back and snapped into the gun she aimed and fired again at once.



Having missed their first concentrated volley the soldiers began firing at will. Willow concentrated on the flight of her disc, very grateful for the security of the cycle's grip on her as Tara jinked from side to side, leaned so far down that the sides of the cycle's wheels threw up showers of sparks from the ground, and leant her weight from side to side, always causing the incoming shots to miss by a fraction. After Willow had let her disc fly for the fourth time - having deactivated two soldiers, and sent others scattering for cover each time she fired - they were getting dangerously close, and the tanks closed ranks, nudging their hulls together to create an impenetrable barrier around the tower.



"One more shot!" yelled Tara above the rushing wind and the explosions of tank shells and discs ricocheting off the ground. Willow aimed at the centre of a group of soldiers right in front of them and fired, then ducked as Tara's hand snaked around her waist, pulling her down.



"Hold on tight," Tara said, adjusting her grip on Willow. Willow nodded and put her free hand around Tara's waist, though she overcompensated in her desire to avoid troubling Tara's wounds, and her hand ended up on Tara's hip instead. Tara closed her eyes for a second, them glanced ahead. They were barely metres from the nearest tank, and still moving fast.



All at once Tara swerved the cycle around and leaned it far over, while her legs unwrapped themselves from the cycle's hull as if she were about to jump off. The cycle slammed down on its side, now skidding wheels-first towards the tank, leaving a cascade of sparks in its wake. Tara flung her right leg around the upper side of the cycle, wedging her foot inside the curve of the wheel, and wrapped her other leg around Willow's hips. Before Willow knew what was happening Tara had swung her over the side of the cycle. Tara held her there, inches from the ground, one arm and leg holding her so tight Willow could feel her breathe, her other arm and leg looped around the cycle's handlebar and rear wheel housing, like a trapeze artist dangling from her beam. She held Willow tight as the fallen cycle skidded between the tracks of the tank, just narrow enough to pass beneath its hull.



Willow felt as if time had slowed down. Her head buzzed from the adrenaline rush, the sudden terror when Tara had swung her off the side of the cycle, and the intense feeling of Tara's tight, unbreakable grip on her. Their faces were a millimetre apart. Tara's eyes were wide, staring straight into Willow's; her mouth was open, breathing heavily. For a long split second, lit only by the showers of sparks beneath Willow and above Tara, as the cycle's wheels rasped against the ground and the underside of the tank, Willow had all the time in the world to imagine Tara leaning just that tiny fraction closer.



Then they were out from underneath the tank, and time was flashing past in a blur again. Tara instantly threw her weight upwards, pulling the cycle back to its wheels, and Willow back to her position behind her on the seat. Tara's arm remained around Willow as she swerved the bike back towards the tower, now standing defenceless before them. She steered one-handed as they crossed the threshold, speeding up the ramp, curving around the tower. Willow took a deep breath as the ground dropped away sharply to her left, and the horizon spun as they ascended the side of the tower in circles that grew tighter with each turn. She caught glimpses of the recognisers, hovering patiently towards them, and of the tanks below - she grinned as she noticed that those pursuing her and Tara had collided with those attempting to keep them from the tower's base.



"Willow, give me the gun," said Tara urgently. Willow handed her the disc-gun, glad to be rid of it. Tara pulled her own gun from where she had stowed it in the cycle's hull, and held both in one hand. She leaned back, sitting up as straight as she could while keeping her other hand on the handlebars.



"I need you to hold on really tight," instructed Tara, "legs around my waist, now." Willow did as she was told, pulling herself tightly against Tara's back. "Arms," said Tara, and Willow slid her hands beneath Tara's arms and gripped her just below her chest. "Good," said Tara, "now enjoy the ride."



"Tara, what are we-" Willow started to ask, as she noticed the topmost level of the tower nearing, and with it the end of the ramp. Tara leaned forward, with Willow clinging to her back, and gave the cycle one last burst of speed as the ramp ran out beneath them. Willow looked down in shock at the ground far beneath them, then up to see the looming shape of a recogniser in the air ahead. Tara was already straightening, kicking the cycle away beneath her, raising a disc-gun in each hand, firing an instant later. The recogniser's hull was only metres away - the discs smashed off it, back into the guns, and out again as Tara kept firing, like a champion game of table-tennis, too quick for the eye to follow. Just as it seemed to Willow that she and Tara were destined to rebound off the vehicle's hull its side cracked, flickered, then vanished completely. Tara caught both arms and one leg on the edge of the recogniser's interior, slammed painfully into the hull, then hauled herself and Willow inside as if the impact had been nothing.



As soon as there was floor beneath her Willow grabbed hold of it and, lacking a proper hand-hold, used her weight to help pull Tara away from the edge. Tara moved slowly, dazed from the impact, and it was Willow who looked up first to see a stunned red program staring back at them from behind some sort of control pedestal. He let go of the handles of his control and advanced on Tara. Willow rose to her knees and made a wild slash at him with the sword that was suddenly in her hand. He dodged, but took his eyes off Tara, and didn't see when she rolled over and whipped both her legs up behind him, sending him flying out of the open side of his vehicle. Willow scrambled to the edge just in time to see him land, intact but wreathed in electrical discharges.



"That's going to hurt when he's re-initialised," said Tara, standing with some difficulty. Willow was instantly at her side, ducking under her arm to support her.



"You need to rest," she insisted. Tara shook her head.



"I need to fly this thing," she said. With Willow helping her she stood in front of the controls and took hold of them. Willow braced herself as the recogniser swung sharply around, ascending as it turned. Through the hole in the vehicle's hull she saw the rest of the recogniser squadron vanish beneath them, then the sprawl of the Game Grid began to slide faster and faster beneath them as they gathered speed. She felt Tara take a deep breath and relax when the recogniser cleared the Grid's outer wall, and all that was ahead of them was the vast open system. Tara took her hands off the controls.



"I've set its course," she explained as Willow helped her across the floor, gently letting her down to lean against a wall. "We're headed out into the deep memory areas. They won't be able to trace our pathway easily. And I know where we can find some power outlets. I could use a boost," she finished, grinning ruefully up at Willow's concerned face.



"Can I try to..." asked Willow, not really sure how to do what she wanted to do anyway, let alone how to explain it. Tara looked at her, confused, but showed no sign of concern when Willow laid her palms carefully on her stomach, as close to the slashes Rain had inflicted as she dared. She closed her eyes, doing her best to concentrate on nothing more than the feeling of Tara breathing beneath her hands. She felt a tingling, and grinned in silent exultation and relief as she felt something flow across her hands and out of her fingertips. It was like holding her hands underneath running warm water - it made her feel content, relaxed. She opened her eyes to see tiny extensions of the tracery on her arms flowing down over the backs of her hands, onto her fingers, and then onto Tara, across her stomach.



"How are you doing that?" whispered Tara. Willow left one hand on her stomach and very carefully placed her other hand on Tara's shoulder, ready to pull back the instant she saw some sign that Tara's wound there was hurting. This time she kept her eyes open, and watched as her tracery extended itself and flowed into Tara. The green light flowing from her fingertips matched Tara's energy perfectly, brightening her own tracery, and flowing from there into the cuts on her body. Willow watched, putting all her focus and concentration into the feeling of the energy flowing from her, as the wound in Tara's shoulder filled with glowing green, completing her damaged skin. When it was full the green flowed back into her tracery, and beneath it she was healed. Willow glanced down at her stomach, to see all trace of the injuries there gone.



"By the users," Tara murmured, gazing at Willow as if she were an angel, "how can you do that?" Willow met her gaze, her wide grin turning shy when she saw the look in Tara's eyes. She felt thoroughly light-headed. 'Oh, what am I, a school-girl?' she teased herself. Then she let out a gasp as Tara's face seemed to fall away from her. Tara caught her as she fell backwards.



"I'm okay," said Willow quietly, not quite managing to support herself, "really, just a little dizzy." Tara held her gently, turning her slightly to a more comfortable position, resting half in her lap. She suddenly felt like she'd been awake for days.



"You're drained," Tara said, "it's not serious, it'll only last a couple of millicycles. I've seen it before in high-performance programs. Just never like that... Willow, how did you do that?"



"Oh, you know," said Willow, "just helping out however I can."



She looked up at Tara, who was leaning her head down, holding her almost protectively. Willow caught a hint of something more than gratitude in Tara's intense gaze, and leaned her head back slightly when she saw Tara leaning fractionally further down, bringing her face so close she could feel Tara's warm breath against her cheek. Willow was sure Tara was about to kiss her - there was no mistaking that look, not when Tara's lips parted a fraction and her eyes almost glowed, with nothing left to conceal when she wanted. But at the last possible moment, so close that Willow thought she actually felt their lips touch, Tara turned her face away, and pulled Willow into a hug instead.



Willow tried not to look disappointed when Tara finally leant back - 'Well, you misread that completely,' she had thought to herself with bitter humour - but when she looked at Tara again, she could have sworn that she had been right. Something clouded Tara's eyes - doubt, apprehension, she wasn't sure. She shivered involuntarily, as a surge of relief passed through her. 'She *was* going to kiss me! Why didn't she? What stopped her?' Willow had no answers - truth be told, she wasn't even sure she had the right questions. But as Tara lay her down in her lap and started gently stroking the side of her face, her fingertips light as snowflakes on Willow's skin, she made a silent promise to herself to find out. Thus reassured, she let herself drift off into a comfortable sleep.



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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 11)

Postby TemperedCynic » Tue Apr 01, 2003 10:48 pm

An update - gosh, I'm starting to love Tuesday nights again!



Tanks! Ahh, I loved playing Battlezone when just a pup. But these tanks, plus their program counterparts, are serious in their attempts to stop our girls. But not so fast! Sliding under the tank tracks at full speed, and all that can be seen are soft lips only a fraction away. Torture.



The jump from the tower to the recognizer mid-air - I'm agape! And I suspected that Willow's power would manifest by helping TARA. Kissage denied - ack! So close...



I'm waiting patiently.


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

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Postby MellindraX » Wed Apr 02, 2003 2:05 pm

Sadly, I feel the only thing I could possibly do now is to sit and wait patiently (hahahaha!) for another update...

I'm patient...

Honest......

See me waiting?.....

Update soon?????

:p

It is my solace, my home, the place where my walls crumble and fall away, because no one can know who I truly am. Thank goodness for the Internet, preserver of sanity! -Unknown

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