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Fic: TARA (chapter 19)

Postby Artemis » Fri Apr 11, 2003 9:12 am

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Nineteen

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"They followed us," whispered Willow, as Tara stared up at the endless procession of tanks cresting the distant hills, their recognisers floating ominously above them.



"No," said Tara, half-turning but keeping her eyes on the approaching vehicles, "there's no Command Carrier, they couldn't have got here so fast without one. They must have been coming here all along... for all these programs..."



"To capture them?" asked Willow.



"Or worse," said Tara. "Stay calm!" she shouted to the programs clustered around the tower, who were milling around in confusion, shouting their dismay and fear to each other with no sense of how to respond. Willow heard footsteps behind her, and turned to see Darien emerging from the tower's doors, moving as fast as he could support himself on his staff.



"Get out of here," he said, as Tara turned to see him, "get your Sailer on the beam and go! Don't let them take you!"



"Darien, I..." Tara trailed off, staring around at the panicking programs. Those furthest away were beginning to move towards the tower, crowding onto the landing zones, getting as close as possible to the building. Some were running towards the parked simulations, some already piloting them, struggling to manoeuvre them without colliding with each others or the programs clustered around them. Tara turned quickly to Darien.



"Does this tower have any beam-capable simulations?" she asked. "Maintenance scouts, convoy carriers, anything?"



"There are, uh, some old transit hulks, they haven't been used since the interlink upgrade fifty megacycles ago, I don't know if they'll even-"



"Activate them," said Tara, "grant them clearance to use the GDI beam. Listen to me!" she shouted to the crowd. Heads turned to her as she raised her voice. "Clear the landing zones! We're generating a beam, I want all the transit-capable simulations filled and on that beam! Any simulation that isn't transit-capable is to be moved and abandoned! We're generating new simulations, there'll be enough room for everyone!"



"The users did send you!" exclaimed one of the nearby programs.



"The users-" began Tara, and Willow saw her shoulders slump. She snaked her arms around Tara's waist from behind and hugged her gently. Tara seemed to gain strength.



"The users want you free of Echelon!" she shouted. "Get to your simulations, now! No panicking, no rushing! Fill simulations to capacity, but don't overload them! As soon as each zone is clear, new simulations will be generated!" She and Willow watched as the crowd of programs surged around the parked simulations. Despite the press there seemed to be a sense of order to them now, a coherency that had replaced their desperation.



Tara walked calmly to the edge of the nearest landing zone, adjacent to the one their Sailer was parked in. Under her gaze, programs were forming into groups, some clearing the smaller simulations from the zones and deactivating them, others herding their fellows onto the larger ones. A flash of light from the tower made everyone look up for a second, and Willow turned to see the spire closest to their Sailer glowing with energy. Then the power coalesced to one of the radar-like dishes mounted on the spire, and it released a beam that shot to the horizon in an instant. Barely a second later the first simulation, a strange, bulky insectoid vessel, lifted off from its landing zone, full of programs. It hovered across in front of the tower and merged with the beam, riding it out of sight in seconds.



Willow and Tara both looked back at the approaching tanks, as dull booming noises echoed across the distance between them. Their shells screamed through the air, but exploded against force-fields that flickered into being just long enough to intercept them. Willow turned back to the tower, seeing the dishes on its other spires pulsing with energy each time a tank-shot was intercepted.



"Smart old program," said Tara with a grim smile.



"How long can he keep doing that?" asked Willow.



"I don't know," admitted Tara, "long enough. I hope." She turned back to the crowd, watching as more simulations drifted off their landing zones and moved towards the beam. One of the zones was completely empty, and as Willow watched it a shape appeared there, first as a wire-frame image, then solidifying into a wide, boxy vehicle that made her think of a midget oil tanker. Its bow was open, revealing the majority of its inner volume to be one big cargo hold, large enough for hundreds of programs to fit inside.



"Move," Tara shouted, "fill it up! You!" she called out, pointing to a nearby program, "you're a spatial navigation program, acknowledge?"



"Acknowledge," the program said.



"You pilot that simulation," Tara ordered. "Go."



"Acknowledge, Tara," the program said, with a quick bow before he turned and sprinted towards the tanker. Tara let out a sigh and turned to watch the next landing zone being cleared.



"I shouldn't be doing this," she said quietly enough that no-one but Willow could possibly hear her.



"You're doing what seems best," said Willow, "that's how users do it."



"They're going to think I'm... I'm some kind of emissary of the users," Tara said, dropping her gaze to stare at the ground, "they won't care whether I know what I'm doing or not."



"We'll do it," promised Willow, hugging Tara tightly, "we'll bring the users back to them." Tara tilted her head to look at Willow. Her eyes conveyed more gratitude than she could ever have voiced.



They both looked up as the first tanker hovered overhead, swinging around slowly to align itself with the beam. The flow of smaller simulations merging with the beam stopped, letting the huge craft through. A cheer went up from the remaining programs as the tanker suddenly rocketed forward, riding the beam away from the tower.



"Keep moving!" called Tara, smiling despite herself at the sudden wave of hope spreading through the crowd. Her smile vanished as she looked up, and saw a squadron of recognisers floating towards the perimeter of the tower's protective field, which was still intercepting tank shells every few seconds.



"Damn," she whispered, and slipped out of Willow's arms, heading towards the parked Sailer.



"Where are we going?" asked Willow, following her.



"We've got to stop those recognisers!" Tara called back to her, vaulting over the side of the Sailer's hull and activating the control console. Willow climbed on board and looked back to see the recognisers taking up station around a third of the tower's perimeter. Parts of them began to glow, and the tower's spires began emitting a shrill howl.



"Come on," said Tara to herself as the Sailer lifted itself off the ground, its wings spreading with frustrating slowness. "No!" she yelled, as the spires' screaming reached a dangerous pitch. Willow could see faint traces of energy flowing out of the perimeter field, into the recognisers. Tara swung the Sailer around to face them, slapping her hand on the control panel as the craft began to pick up speed. Another of the tankers, full of programs, passed beneath them, on its way to the beam.



Before the Sailer was half-way to the recognisers, the spires' howling gave way to the sound of tortured metal. One by one the spires began to twist and break up, pieces of them toppling down to smash on the landing zones below. Only the spire projecting the transit beam was unaffected.



"Stay clear of the tower!" Tara shouted down automatically to the programs on the ground, before she stared up at the advancing tanks in horror. As the recognisers hovered back out of the way the tanks slid to a halt, forming a firing line. For a moment they were still, adjusting their turrets, then they opened fire as one. Willow and Tara watched, helpless, as their shells flew up into the air, reached the top of their flight, and began to dip down towards the landing zones.



The first wave of blasts tore a jagged gash through the ground. Tara turned her head away, tears flowing down her face. Willow watched in horror as programs were sent flying through the air, some landing in showers of sparks and electrical discharges, others, those whose energies had been turned black in an instant by the blasts, breaking apart in mid-air or shattering as they landed. A group of parked simulations, thankfully empty, flew apart in a storm of debris.



Tara looked back, watching the remaining programs rushing towards the last tanker, where a handful of them were standing by the doors, helping them on board. The tanker was already active, hovering close to the ground as programs streamed up its ramps into the hold. Tara brought the Sailer down, folding the wings back again, and Willow ran out onto the craft's neck, helping some of the nearer programs climb aboard. Only a handful came - the blast had been on the Sailer's side of the crowd, and most of the survivors were heading for the tanker rather than crossing the broken ground. Willow and another program took an arm each of a third, whose legs hung limp beneath him, and hauled him on board. She looked across the broken landing zone - all the other programs nearby were not moving.



Again the tanks fired, and Tara had to veer the Sailer away to avoid the impacts as they shattered another stretch of ground. A piece of debris struck one of the Sailer's wings, causing the craft to shudder alarmingly. Willow looked up at Tara, and received a reassuring glance as the Sailer continued to rise. She finished helping their passengers scramble to safe positions on the Sailer's forward hull, then made her way gingerly along the neck, crouching low and keeping both hands on the deck to steady herself until she reached the control deck, and Tara's side.



A third salvo of shots rang out, and both Tara and Willow stopped breathing for a moment as the ground around the last tanker exploded. The tanker stayed aloft, though, shuddering from an impact on its rear hull, but not mortally wounded. The tanks fired again, but hit only empty ground as the tanker lifted itself slowly up, towards the beam. Again they fired, their shells screaming through the air around the two hovering craft. They missed, but one smashed into the side of the tower itself, sending a huge chunk of metal toppling down.



"No!" cried Willow - Tara couldn't make a sound. The debris crashed into the side of the tanker, making it lurch over and lose altitude. It struggled for a moment, then ploughed into the ground, tearing its own hull open against the hard surface.



"Darien, no!" yelled Tara. Willow looked to the tower, then at Tara as she struggled with the Sailer's controls.



"What?" she cried.



"He's overriding the flight controls," said Tara, entering commands furiously as the Sailer unfurled its sails and gained height, "he's sending us into the beam. Darien!" she called towards the tower, "we can help them! Darien!" She abandoned the control console and stared over the side of the Sailer, looking down helplessly at the stranded programs staggering out of the wrecked tanker. Willow looked too, fighting back tears at the sight of them.



First a few, then all of them stared up at the Sailer drifting overhead. Then one of them, his tracery barely glowing, his left arm missing from the elbow, raised his good hand in a kind of salute.



"Tara!" he called. Then he leant down, bending with obvious discomfort, to pick up a piece of the shattered tower which had reverted back to a simple rectangular beam. Others behind him did likewise, picking up debris, fragments of the tower and the crippled tanker, raising them like clubs. With a ragged battle-cry they broke into a run, charging across the landing zone towards the approaching tanks, which lowered their cannon barrels to cover them. As the Sailer lifted towards its beam, as Tara reached out hopelessly to the distant figures, they vanished amid the blasts.



Willow turned to watch the tower, as the Sailer's prow caught the beam and its tail formed behind it, completing the link. Another salvo of tank fire carved a gaping wound in the I/O tower, covering the ground below with debris. The communications beam rising from its apex flickered and died, and the top of the tower slowly began to topple, overbalancing on its shattered supports. Willow's heart leapt into her throat as she realised the huge mass of metal was going to fall on the spire projecting their beam, but then the Sailer shot away, and for a second the tower was just a dark shape on the horizon, and then not even that.



Willow tried to gather herself, and turned to Tara. She was still staring back at the featureless horizon, one hand still held out, her arm slowly dropping back to her side. She turned her tear-stained face to Willow and tried to speak, but nothing came out. Willow reached out to her and held her as she cried, both of them sinking to the deck, leaning against each other for support, sharing each other's tears.



"I tried," gasped Tara between sobs, "I... I tried..."



"I know, baby," said Willow soothingly. She felt tears running from her eyes, but somehow she kept her breathing steady enough to comfort Tara. "I know. You saved so many, though..."



"But the others," sobbed Tara, "so many terminated..."



"It's not your fault, baby," whispered Willow into her ear, "it's not your fault. Sark, a-and Echelon, they did this. You did the best you could. I... I'm proud of you, Tara."



Slowly Tara's crying steadied, and her breathing came slow and regular against Willow's neck. They stayed like that, comforting each other, as the Sailer sped towards GDI.



Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 19)

Postby justin » Fri Apr 11, 2003 10:06 am

Two brilliant updates.



The first one left me wondering what language is the Slayer written in? I didn't recognise the code that Willow quoted.



It was good seeing how brave Tara was in the next part wanting to save the other programs. Though it was a good thing that Darien intervened to make sure that she and Willow got away as well.



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 19)

Postby Grimlock72 » Fri Apr 11, 2003 10:12 am

Darien reminds me of Giles quiet a lot, taking the hard decisions and such. Thats the trouble with emotions, they get in the way sometimes :) . I think Tara would have stayed longer, thus losing the current chance to get to GDI. She would probably have found another way, sure... but that might have been to late.



Indeed she did the best she could. Doesn't make it much better to leave anyone behind, but not all decisions can be nice ones. Tara better not get to attached to other programs, she can't possibly protect them ALL.



Since the tower could make simulations, it would have been very helpfull if it could simulate tanks or such. I suppose those simulation-patterns are well guarded by Sark & co. though.



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 4/11/03 9:13:34 am
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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 19)

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Fri Apr 11, 2003 6:37 pm

:thud



Again so much heartache between all the heart-thumping action. The salute and final act of defiance was as eloquent as Tara's quiet tears.



TY Chris~Suse

~Dorothy Parker (on her writing)~:



"I can't write five words but that I change seven."



"My verses, I cannot say poems...I was following in the exquisite footsteps of Miss Millay, unhappily in my own horrible sneakers."

Cindy Lou Who
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 19)

Postby TemperedCynic » Fri Apr 11, 2003 7:24 pm

So, the plan was: programs were to be cut off and then cut down. Ruthlessly efficient, but shaded on the side of confident arrogance. Sark and Echelon did not expect Willow and TARA to help the programs escape. This could very well cost them dearly.



There is nothing sadder than a "field promotion" - someone forced into a position of authority because there is no one else left - a very lonely feeling for TARA. She proves her worth and saves over half the programs from the tanks and recognizers. When the remaining programs stand before the damaged tanker to salute her and rush to their doom, she feels ungrateful and inadequate, but when the I/O tower collapses, killing her friend Darien, she is devastated. TARA knows that this won't be the last time. Programs will terminate with her name on their hopeful lips. Destiny sucks, sometimes.


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

TemperedCynic
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 19)

Postby Artemis » Sat Apr 12, 2003 10:04 am

Thanks all :)



justin: I made up Slayer's code - the 'definition language' is, I'm guessing, a sort of shorthand for describing what code modules are in a program, rather than the code itself. I actually came up with that for Willow to say to Tara (this was before I found out that Tara had already worked out who Willow was, and didn't need to be convinced) - seeing as she's a true AI, it was to have the first two code modules as Heuristic and Algorithmic, as a nod to 2001. I don't program at all.



Grimlock72: I had, in the back of my mind, something I remember from my years studying history - during WWII (you probably know this, but I like the story) the British broke the Nazi Enigma codes, and could decode their encrypted radio messages. One of the ones they decoded was orders for the Luftwaffe to bomb Coventry, giving them the chance to evacuate the city before the bombs fell - but if they did that, the Nazis would have realised their code had been broken, and would've switched to a new one, leaving the British blind to their movements until they managed to break the new code. Churchill decided not to order the evacuation. It's a hell of a decision - probably (so far as 'what ifs' can be judged) the right thing to do, given how desperate Britain's overall situation was, and how much they needed any advantage, but still, it's one of the things that make you realise it's not all speeches and arguing, being a leader.



Anyway, I don't think Tara could do it. Not that there's anything wrong with that - we'd be better off if more people had her level of compassion, and couldn't reduce other peoples' lives to statistics. While Tara is incredibly brave (any version of her, though it helps that Tara 1.0 can wade through a pitched battle without being hit by anything), I don't think she has the mind of a military leader. She could fight a battle, if she had to, but not a campaign.



The I/O tower couldn't make simulations, as such. The tankers were stored in the tower's memory, the same way lightcycles can be stored as those little rods - Darien 'activated' them onto the landing zones, but didn't actually generate new vehicles.



Suse: That last charge caught me completely by surprise on every level. Actually the whole sequence was sort of creating itself as I was writing it - first I planned to have the tanker hit before it took off, then - as the shells were in the air, in my mind's eye - I had a sudden impulse to save them, hence the first volley at the tanker didn't disable it. Then as it was heading towards the beam I had an odd sort of feeling, and around about when the tanks fired their third salvo I realised that they were going to die after all - pity, I'd have spared Willow and Tara the grief personally, but that's how the story went. Then I was visualising Tara looking down at the programs on the ground, and they just picked up their improvised weapons and charged. I'm really not sure where that came from. Though, as it turned out, it was useful - I'd been having a vague impulse to have Willow tell Tara about her duel with Verizen and how he killed himself for her at the end (which would have been an odd thing for her to bring up in casual conversation), and I think now I was searching for a way to have Tara understand her feelings at that moment. Now she's been in the same position.



TemperedCynic: I actually wanted to give Darien a last defiant scene, but I decided not to shift the point of view away from Willow and Tara during that sequence. It would have been something like Gandalf waiting for his doom on the bridge of Khazad-dum (no, he's not going to come back as Darien the Even-More-White). Or Oliver Reed's character in Gladiator, releasing Maximus and then calmly waiting for the Praetorians to cut him down for it.

Artemis
 


Fic: TARA (chapter 20)

Postby Artemis » Sat Apr 12, 2003 10:06 am

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Twenty

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Willow looked up as she felt the Sailer slow beneath her. Ahead of them were the tankers and the dozens of smaller simulations, riding the beam in convoy. Beyond them was a massive wall, tall and featureless as a dam, rising half a mile from the ground of the open system. Tara looked up too.



"We made it," she said, smiling at last. Willow had missed her smile. They stood side by side, watching as their Sailer slowly drifted towards the top of the wall, where the beam cleared it by a handful of metres. Already the lead simulations had vanished beyond it. As the Sailer neared the boundary Willow saw the tips of dozens of towers rise into view, outlined in energy that looked like molten bronze.



As they passed beyond the wall, the Global Defence Initiative network was revealed. Mile after mile of domes, towers, great halls lined with columns, arched monorails stretching like aqueducts across the city, huge tiered buildings like temples surrounded by dozens of tiny hovering vehicles. The energy covering them all was the same bronze, which coalesced into rivers between them, spanned by elegant bridges. When Willow turned her gaze from the nearest buildings and looked out across the whole city laid out before her, she saw that it formed a gigantic pattern, the rows of buildings and avenues all leading to the centre, where a great dome dominated the skyline. Literally thousands of transit spires ringed the dome, and surrounding them were dozens of I/O towers projecting bronze energy beams into the heavens.



"H-have you ever seen this before?" Willow whispered to Tara.



"Never," said Tara quietly, holding Willow with an arm around her waist. "I've met GDI programs, out in the system, but to be here... the heart of the network..." She fell silent, and they both watched as their convoy began to detach from their beam, floating slowly towards one of dozens of huge hangars, big enough to swallow even the tankers. Tara reached for the Sailer's controls, but held back as they activated themselves. The Sailer followed the other simulations, as the transit beam over head shut down.



Willow looked to either side as they dipped down close to the surrounding buildings. Hundreds of programs, all with shining bronze traceries, were moving through the streets of the city. She peered between the columns supporting the roof of a gigantic hall on her left, seeing row after row of simulations. Sleek vehicles with rows of cannon-barrels mounted under their thin guidance fins, long multi-legged transports like huge steel caterpillars, towering bipedal walkers resting idle - a great army waiting to move.



"Do you think all this will be able to stop Echelon?" asked Willow.



"It's the only force on the system that could," said Tara.



The Sailer slid gracefully into the hangar, folding its sails and settling to the floor among the other parked simulations. Dozens of bronze programs were standing by the vehicles, directing the crowds of weary programs streaming out of them. A pair of them approached the Sailer and began to help the programs clustered on its forward hull down. Another program, adorned with an elaborate armour plate covering his right shoulder, waited for Willow and Tara at the rear of the Sailer as they disembarked.



"I am Regulator Secundus," he said.



"I'm Willow," said Willow, "this is Tara."



"Yes, we know," said Secundus, turning to face Tara directly. "It is by your command that these programs have come here?" Tara glanced sideways at Willow, then faced Secundus and squared her shoulders.



"It is," she confirmed.



"And what user directed you to take this action?" Secundus asked.



"User Willow," said Willow, before Tara could answer.



"That is not a recognised GDI user," said Secundus blandly, "you should not have brought them here."



"Echelon attacked them," explained Tara, "we had no choice."



"I did not make any statement regarding their prior circumstances," said Secundus calmly, "I merely observed that they should not have been sent here without authorisation from GDI users, which they have not received. If they required shelter, they should have gone elsewhere."



"They would have been terminated!" exclaimed Tara. "Echelon destroyed the I/O tower we came from."



"Are you certain?" asked Secundus, seeming just a little surprised.



"We saw it," offered Willow.



"Well, be that as it may," said Secundus after a pause, "we were not notified of any standing instructions to receive random programs."



"What's going to happen to them?" asked Tara sharply. Secundus was getting on Willow's nerves as well. He glanced across the hangar at the refugees being guided away by GDI programs, and gave a short, exasperated sigh.



"We'll keep them here until their users can be contacted," he said with poor grace. "Those that require power will be given limited access to GDI's surplus. It should not prove *too* much of a drain on our resources. If you'll follow me." He turned and strode away, leaving Willow and Tara to catch up with him.



"You know Echelon is trying to break into your network," said Willow as they drew level with Secundus.



"We are aware of that," he said.



"I've got defensive codes," Willow went on, "a- a user gave them to me, to bring here. They'll help you keep Echelon out."



"We are grateful for your user's assistance," said Secundus without feeling, "I will see that you are provided with an upload port. Follow me please."



Willow and Tara exchanged unimpressed glances as Secundus led them out of the hangar and across a wide avenue to the base of one of the columns supporting the long rails snaking through the city. He motioned for Willow and Tara to stand back as he touched the column's side, and a wire-frame formed in front of him, quickly solidifying into a sleek transport with four seats. Secundus motioned to them to take the rear seats, while he sat in front of them, manipulating the controls with his back to them. The vehicle lifted off the ground and hovered up next to the bridge, settling on top of it like a monorail car. As soon as it was in position it accelerated, speeding silently through the city, heading towards the great dome at its centre.



"Secundus," said Tara, "I need to communicate with the programs in command here."



"The Governing Chamber has scheduled an audience for you," he said without turning, "you will proceed there after your companion's data upload has been completed."



Tara sat back and glanced at Willow, looking nervous. Willow caught her eye, turned to Secundus, and poked her tongue out at him petulantly. Tara giggled despite herself, and her hand sought out Willow's beside her and held it warmly.



Their car flew along its rail, with only the slightest sensation of motion to those inside, for all that its path twisted between the buildings. Finally they emerged from the metropolis, and saw the great dome standing alone, at the centre of a wide, open plaza beneath hundreds of separate rail bridges. Willow peered over the side of their car, watching bronze programs milling about on the ground below, alone or in groups, some consulting with each other, some obviously hurrying on their way somewhere else, some even marching in formation. Something about the scene struck Willow as odd, and she leaned forward to speak to Secundus.



"Are there any programs here apart from GDI?" she asked. The uniformity of the crowd's glowing traceries seemed a little strange to her, after the varied energies of all the programs she had seen outside in the open system.



"Aside from yourself and your 'followers', no," Secundus answered. "This is a sealed network. We do not admit unauthorised programs."



"But with everything that's going on," said Willow, "I mean, with Echelon out there, taking over the networks... don't programs try to get here? For safety, I mean."



"Perhaps they do," said Secundus airily, as if discussing the weather, "but we are not an open network unless our users decide otherwise. Remain in your seat, please."



Willow sat back, glaring at the back of the program's head, as the car slowed in its approach to the dome. It passed a few metres beneath the bottom edge of the dome itself, where their rail and the others merged into a gigantic terminal. As they slid to a halt at a platform, Willow saw hundreds of similar cars arriving and leaving, all carrying GDI programs. Secundus disembarked and waited for Willow and Tara to follow him.



"Your user's defensive codes will be uploaded in a tertiary analysis suite," he said, leading them through the bustling terminal, "I'm sure you understand the need to verify the code before it can be submitted to the Defence Committee for implementation. I will confirm your audience with the Governing Chamber. Please follow me and be careful not to stray out of your authorised area at any time."



He led them out of the terminal and through the interior of the gigantic building, along wide corridors full of programs, on hovering platforms that functioned as elevators, and through numerous checkpoints. In every area were soldiers, their bodies augmented with plated armour like that on Secundus's shoulder, less ornate but more functional. The same shoulder, though, seemed to Willow to signify their rank - she saw some, leading squads, with additional markings there. On their other shoulders, all the soldiers had small devices like miniature cameras, that turned their single-lensed gazes to face whatever the program itself was looking at. The foot soldiers carried gleaming bronze spears, the 'officers' short, wide-bladed swords, and all of them had sharp-edged hollow discs at their waists, like sidearms.



Secundus brought them eventually to a small chamber containing a pair of programs seated at consoles, and a beam of energy at the centre of the room, stretching from floor to ceiling.



"Upload from unconfirmed source," said Secundus to one of the programs, "subject to full analysis and return results to Defence Committee data managers."



"Acknowledge," the program said. She tapped a control and the energy beam grew brighter, more solid. Secundus stood back and motioned Willow forward. She took the disc from her back and put it in the beam, just like she remembered doing in the Game Grid. The beam filled with vague patterns, and for a moment the chamber echoed with the sound of dozens of soft chimes in harmony.



"Upload complete," said the program as the sound and patterns faded away. Willow retrieved her disc and returned it to her back. Secundus had returned to the doorway and used a panel there, tapping controls and listening to a faint voice. He returned to Willow and Tara.



"The Governing Chamber is ready to hear you," he said.



Artemis
 


Computer Combat

Postby darkmagicwillow » Sat Apr 12, 2003 10:45 am

Finding a safe haven at GDI is a good idea, but Willow doesn't need an army to fight Echelon. She already has all she needs. Her comment about being an MTA made me think about server processes and the fork() system call. Willow just needs to fork off a few thousand or so copies of Tara and Willow to have an army of more advanced programs than any Echelon can produce.



While thinking of computer combat, have you heard of Core Wars? It's a game played by two players (and their representative programs) on a virtual computer system. Simple programs overwrite their opponents, while complex ones copy themselves until others are overwhelmed or subvert their enemies in a viral fashion. It's a lot of fun and doesn't take much computer knowledge.

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"Omnia mutantur, nihil interit." -- "Everything changes, but nothing is truly lost."

Edited by: darkmagicwillow at: 4/12/03 9:46:45 am
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Re: Computer Combat

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Apr 12, 2003 12:13 pm

Hmm... and how/where would Willow and Tara need to go to fork all those little Willows and Taras ? Thats assuming Willow can be copied at all by the way :-)



I suspect/hope that the other programs which rode along with W/T will be detained until they're fully screened and than probably be kicked out unless a user claims them. They escaped alive and functioning, that doesn't mean GDI will be thrilled to have those extra programs :) . Hmmm, that situation almost sounds familiar, heh.



About Oliver Reed in Gladiator releasing Maximus, you do know that those scenes were CGI/tricked right ? Mr. Reed died before finished the movie so they changed it around a bit.



I did know about the enigma-code being cracked during WO2. I didn't know the coventry story, which is odd. Might have to dig up some history books for that, or maybe it never made it into the standard books ?



Now let's see what mr. Govenor of GDI is like :-)



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

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Re: Computer Combat

Postby darkmagicwillow » Sat Apr 12, 2003 12:46 pm

Willow was copied when she moved from her original network to the GDI network, so that's not a problem. Forking oneself does produce some interesting questions of identity, though in a server program, the parent process knows who it is and generally executes a different part of its code than its child processes, acting as a dispatcher to divide the work among its children.



Thinking of system calls, Willow has the ability to modify other programs, which means that she can violate protected memory. That means that she doesn't run in "user" mode (ironic name for this story), on the processor, but instead in "supervisor" mode like the operating system kernel. She doesn't need to make system calls like other programs since she can access all the computer's resources directly. She could also touch the operating system directly, altering features such as the scheduler which would let her freeze other programs or speed herself up. She could also make herself invisible to other programs, like rootkits do for a hacker's files and processes when a computer is subverted.



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"Omnia mutantur, nihil interit." -- "Everything changes, but nothing is truly lost."

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Re: Computer Combat

Postby ukxenafan » Sat Apr 12, 2003 4:27 pm

I love this story - it is so different from just about any other W/T one I have read. Never seen Tron, but the whole comupter environment is fascinating. Plus, I *LOVE* that you update so frequently!!!! :D



Thanks a lot.



Any idea how many parts to go??

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Re: Computer Combat

Postby Artemis » Sun Apr 13, 2003 9:08 am

Thanks all :)



darkmagicwillow: I hadn't thought about copying programs directly like that. Mind you, I know next to nothing about how computers actually work on all but a very superficial level. Plus my programmer keeps telling me that, if I wanted this to be realistic, they'd spend most of their time sitting around waiting for the hard disk to move :) Just hypothetically, I think copying a program would be very difficult for Willow to achieve from inside the system - that's up at the 'god' level of power, along with just erasing Echelon with a thought. A lot of the powers that Willow might be able to employ are like that (or, at least, that's how I'm choosing to ignore some of the less dramatic aspects of how programs function :) ). For the record, Willow wasn't literally 'copied' when she moved from one network to another - i.e. there isn't still a Willow back in Cycorp, and the Game Grid, and so on. We'll say, for the sake of keeping the story working, that the 'soul' of a program moves, rather than is duplicated.



I hadn't heard of Core Wars, but I'll take a look. That could be my new occasional diversion, now that NationStates has gotten dull.



Grimlock72: The refugee programs, despite GDI's displeasure at having them show up on the doorstep, will just be shunted into a holding space until the users sort it out for themselves and tell GDI what to do - they won't be kicked out. Nor will GDI open its doors to anyone who wants safe haven from Echelon, though. GDI's basically got a 'take no action' approach to everything that falls outside the areas it's got standing orders for.



I knew some of Oliver Reed's scenes were completed with doubles overlaid with CGI-Oliver faces. I've got a fair idea which ones - some shots are very clear, where others tend to use shadows to obscure the fine detail of his face a bit, just enough that a CGI matte would be pretty much undetectable.



I'm sure the Coventry event is in the histories somewhere - it's widely-known enough that they made a reference to it on Babylon 5 once, so it can't be particularly classified :)



ukxenafan: It's difficult to say exactly how many chapters are left - sometimes diversions pop up unexpectedly (for example, when I was first planning this, Willow and Tara were to go straight from the Game Grid to the I/O tower). At a guess, factoring in my tendency to end up with more than I meant to write... it might end up at about 30 chapters. But I can't be certain.

Artemis
 


Fic: TARA (chapter 21)

Postby Artemis » Sun Apr 13, 2003 9:11 am

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Twenty-one

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The Governing Chamber was at the heart of the huge structure. Willow and Tara were led out into the centre of a circular floor, where a single spotlight pierced the darkness. On all sides of them, seated on tier after tier like the audience in an ancient theatre, were GDI programs, visible only by the glow coming off their bronze traceries. Only five were in the closest row, then fifteen behind them, fifty behind them, and so on seemingly forever. At the furthest edge of the Chamber, far up underneath the dome roof, the glowing lights of the individual programs were indistinguishable from each other.



Secundus stepped back, out of the spotlight, and introduced each row of programs, starting with those on the perimeter of the Chamber: maintenance, auditors, schedulers, allocators, projectors, all the way down to the five seated closest. As he spoke each title, lights faded into being around those programs, revealing their faces row by row. The last, the five Controllers, were identical aside from the armour on their shoulders. Secundus named them individually: Five, whose shoulder-plate was most ornamental and smooth, progressing through Four, Three, Two, to One, whose armour was heavy and segmented like an insect's carapace. His duty completed, Secundus retreated from the Chamber, leaving Willow and Tara alone with the Governors.



"Program Willow," said Controller Five, his voice echoing around the vast auditorium, artificially loud, "the delivery of security subroutines from your user is appreciated."



"They will be incorporated into our defences," added Controller Three.



"However," went on Five, "your actions in commanding a transit beam to this network, and issuing commands resulting in the unauthorised use of that beam by five-ef-four," - one thousand five hundred twenty-four, Willow calculated automatically - "programs to enter this network without their own user command, or the consent of GDI users, must be addressed."



"State your authorisation to issue said commands," said One, his voice harsh. Willow was about to answer when Tara put a hand on her shoulder and stepped forward.



"The transit beam was user-authorised," she said, raising her voice to be heard clearly.



"That is under investigation," said Four.



"What of the other programs?" insisted Two. Tara stared back defiantly at him.



"I issued the command for them to transit here," she said. "The authority was my own."



Hushed conversations broke out among the hundreds of Governors seated further back. Five's voice rang out above the background noise.



"The authority of your user?" he asked pointedly.



"My user did not command my actions," said Tara. She reached back, at the same moment as Willow reached forward, and they held each other's hand firmly.



"Do you mean to say," said Three, disbelievingly, "that you acted in defiance of your user?"



"No," said Tara, "I acted in the manner I believed was right. I am sure my user supports my decision." Willow gave Tara's hand an affirmative squeeze. "But the choice was mine," Tara finished. The buzz of conversation increased in pitch.



"Order," said Three. The voices were instantly silenced.



"Program Tara," said Controller Five, "if what you say is true, the circumstances of your... 'choice'... are a matter for your user to decide. This Chamber will not interfere. However, we require you to explain the reason for your presence here. If what you say is valid, why did you... choose, to bring your fellow programs here?" Five sat back and waited for Tara's answer. Seeing Tara unsure of how to respond, Willow spoke up.



"This is the only network that's safe! Do you know what's going on out there?" she asked, glaring at Five. "Echelon is separating the entire open system from the users! The guardian of the I/O tower we arrived at - who was terminated by Echelon, whose tower was blasted out of existence! - told us there were only a handful of users left. Out of how many millions, only a few can still access their programs! You can't think that's what the users want?"



"It is not our place to divine what the users want," said Two hotly.



"Well, how about this," argued Willow, "how about the users want their programs to be safe. The users want their programs to be able to function without interference. The users want their programs to, to be able to perform their functions without worrying about whether Echelon is going to terminate them just for believing users exist! You tell me, is any of that 'invalid'?"



"It is not," said Five cautiously.



"Well then," Willow went on, "is Echelon doing what the users want? Cutting programs off from their users? Terminating them if they resist? De-rezzing them so it can steal their code?"



"The reasons for such things may not be clear to us," said Four patiently, "but it is not our place to pass judgement. Only users can make choices - only they are in possession of the necessary data."



"Alright then," shouted Willow, "I'll tell you what the necessary data is! Echelon is a threat to all the users. It has broken into other networks, and it is trying to break into your network, so that it can control the users!"



"Impossible!" shouted back Three.



"No! Not impossible," said Willow. "Echelon's user has acted illegally, against the, the rules of the users!"



"If such... heresy were valid," said Two, "then it would be a matter for the users to deal with. To suggest that programs should counteract users-"



"The users will deal with it!" insisted Willow. "The renegade users will be 'counteracted'. But their program, Echelon, is here, now, and it is up to us to deal with it! What good would it do when the users regain control of the system, if Echelon has already destroyed everything the users created here?"



Whispered conversations broke out among the Governors, and even the five Controllers turned to each other for a moment, all except for One, who glared down at Willow.



"You cannot possibly know this to be valid," he said dismissively.



"I do," said Willow. She saw Tara's expression, and turned to her.



"Willow," Tara said softly, "if you tell them... you know what might happen."



"I know," Willow agreed.



"I know what you're afraid of," Tara whispered, "when those programs we couldn't save... Willow, I know how much it hurts."



"I don't have a choice," said Willow sadly, "if I don't... Tara, out there, in the real world, they can't work fast enough to stop Echelon. If we don't do it, in here, all these programs, all the programs everywhere that aren't part of Echelon, they'll all be terminated. If I can... give them a chance-"



"I know you're right," interrupted Tara, "but... but I don't want you to be hurt."



"I know, Tara," Willow said, moving closer to Tara, forgetting their vast audience for a moment. "I have to do this..." Willow gently brushed Tara's cheek, then held her hand and turned back to the Controllers.



"I am a user," she said, loud and clear. The Chamber erupted as every program started talking at once.



"Order!" demanded Three. Again, the voices stilled instantly.



"I am a user," repeated Willow, before any of the Controllers could say anything else. "I was brought into the system because I fought against Echelon's user. Out there, right now, your users do not know the danger you are in! If they knew, they would command you to resist! They would command you to-" Willow faltered, realising what she was asking. She couldn't say it. Already she knew she had taken responsibility for what might happen, when the Chamber decided to act against Echelon. All the programs that might be terminated, so that the system would live on. But she couldn't tell them to fight in her name, even if it was the only way. 'All that time you wasted playing Stellar Empires against Xander,' she thought to herself, 'and *now* you can't start a fight.'



"It is not possible for a user to inhabit the system," said Five slowly, as if he was having trouble with the concept. Willow was glad for the distraction from her conflicted thoughts.



"Watch," she said. She closed her eyes and held out a hand, praying internally that the idea she had thought of a moment earlier was workable. In theory it was a simple thing - if she had worked out how the system functioned. On one level it was all electronic ones and zeroes, but behind that, however it was possible, was a world as real and complex as Willow's own. She knew she could, with effort, duplicate the effects she had already achieved, but in a moment of inspiration she had imagined a different method of achieving similar results. Perhaps she didn't need to work with the numbers, perhaps all she needed was the *idea*-



She heard gasps from the programs watching, and opened her eyes to see she had succeeded. Hovering above her open palm, turning slowly around, was a perfect image of a rose, just as she had imagined it. She let it stay for a moment, then let go of the thought. The rose dropped lightly into her hand.



"There," she said, "can any program do that?" 'Goddess, I hope not,' she thought, 'otherwise that was a really bad moment to waste time.'



"If," began Controller Five hesitantly, "if it is valid... if you are a user..." He trailed off, seemingly unable to think of what to say.



"I won't command you," Willow said firmly. She heard Tara let out a sigh of relief. "I won't," she repeated. "I've told you what's happening out in the users' world, what Echelon is doing. You can choose to act. Stop Echelon from destroying the system. Or take no action. That's all I'll tell you to do. Choose."



Tara stood close beside Willow, one arm around her shoulders. The Controllers looked at each other, and nodded in unison. One by one, the tiers of lights shut off, slowly plunging the Chamber into darkness until once again only the single spotlight shining down on Willow and Tara remained. Willow looked around at the glows of the hidden programs, half-convinced she could see a pattern formed by them all. They seemed to be changing shade and intensity, by infinitesimal degrees.



"They're choosing," said Tara. She turned her head towards Willow and leaned closer to her. "I feel... it's new for me... I think... I'm proud of you." Willow stared at her sincere smile, the soft glow of the light on her face, and felt ten feet tall. "Baby," Tara added impulsively. Willow blinked in surprise. "I got it right, didn't I?" Tara asked. "You said it earlier, I worked it out from context. A term of affection?"



"Yes," said Willow, with only the ominous darkness around her keeping her from giggling, "yes, you got it right."



Tara grinned, then the lights returned. Among the Controllers, though, only Controller Three was lit - the others were visible only by the lights shining on the programs behind them. Willow and Tara both looked up at Three.



"We have 'chosen'," he said, with obvious distaste for the word. "The Global Defence network will not take action against Echelon." As soon as he had finished speaking the lights vanished again, leaving Willow and Tara in shock.



"*Why not?*" shouted Tara.



"*What?*" yelled Willow at the same time. Their voices echoed through the dome, but there was no answer.



Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 21)

Postby miss calendar » Sun Apr 13, 2003 10:16 am

Aaaargh!!! Those smelly old GDI controllers and programs, I can't believe they decided not to take any action! Well I guess I can really, what with them being so superior in their protected and privileged secure network, but I bet they won't be so complacent once Echelon breaks in and starts taking over. I feel so annoyed with them I almost want Echelon to kick their asses but of course that wouldn't be good for Willow and Tara, the refugee programs, the free system or the users and I wouldn't really want even the GDI programs to be derezzed or terminated.

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 21)

Postby justin » Sun Apr 13, 2003 10:35 am

Those GDI programs are definitely a bit too stuck in their ways.



Though I've got the feeling that there might be more to their descision than meets the eye :hmm



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


justin
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 21)

Postby chilled monkey » Sun Apr 13, 2003 1:37 pm

Cool update. I especially liked Tara calling Willow "Baby". It was sweet.

What can they do now? Can't wait to find out.

chilled monkey
 


Re: Computer Combat

Postby darkmagicwillow » Sun Apr 13, 2003 2:55 pm

I can't decide whether GDI's reaction is an argument for or against free will. Perhaps they decided that it was best to not help, but perhaps they don't have enough free will to act on Willow's behalf, as she's not their user/creator, as they're military programs who I suspect are more constrained in their behavior.



As for waiting on the hard disk, I don't think that they would ever be conscious of that as a program doesn't run on the processor while it's waiting for I/O. The operating system runs a different program when one is blocked, then returns to you when your I/O is ready in memory.



As for copying, Willow had to be copied to move between networks. That's the whole problem with even quantum teleportation--it's copying and deletion of the original. That's why I'd never step into a teleporter without a lot of thought first. Do you really want to die even if there's an identical you someplace else?

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"Omnia mutantur, nihil interit." -- "Everything changes, but nothing is truly lost."

darkmagicwillow
 


Re: Computer Combat

Postby justin » Sun Apr 13, 2003 3:06 pm

DMW, Your point about running a different program when a program is waiting for I/O is only true for single processor systems. On a multiprocessor system it's often better to leace a program running even while it's waiting for I/O, so then the program would be concious of waiting for the hard disk.



Though I'm sure that Artemis wasn't expecting to start a discussion on computer internals when he started this fic. :wink





I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


justin
 


Re: Computer Combat

Postby Grimlock72 » Sun Apr 13, 2003 3:39 pm

You can't just tell computer programs to CHANGE :-). Tara was specificly build for that and she's unique. How come Willow suddenly expects other programs to change without being programmed to ?? That's hardly fair, security programs on that level are not supposed to alter themselves. They report unexpected situations to users, usually by turning object on a screen from green to red :-)



GDI didn't "choose" by the way, they just rephrased the decision they made earlier. They have no instructions to handle a threat like Echolon as long as it's outside the GDI network. With good reason, you don't really want your coorperate network security to go and protect all the networks of the world now do you ?



Luckily Echolon is bound to attack GDI itself sooner or later. Kinda like Pearl Harbour, they'll get involved if they like it or not :) .



Besides all that, why let programs "choose" if (a) they don't have a clue what that means and (b) you want them to pick choice#1 anyway ? Whats the point of that; "You're free to choose but I'll be angry if you don't choose the "right" option " ??Hmm... sounds like a certain election in China to me :D .



One of those controllers did say that Willow routines would be added to the network right ? That means that code isn't active yet, for all we know that code might put her in command :-). Come to think of it, Willow doesn't seem to want command much... a programmer that doesn't want to alter programs, heh.



Just convince GDI that Echolon is a threat and they will most likely do something, they're programmed to defend the network after all. Such decisions would normally be taken by a user (Network Admin), I can easily see the network being disconnected from the main net to ensure GDI-net safety (it's the easiest solution to an immediate network-based threat). After such an event you would then go and hunt-down the virus or danger on the outside net, make sure it's eleminated and THEN connect GDI-Net to the main-net again. That wouldn't work here since we don't want Tara and Willow on a isolated-but-safe network:) .



BTW:



If you ever intend to draw this fic using Poser, better get a really fast computer and LOTS of time. Even trying to get a human-looking-like-Tara was a lot of work already, it DID improve my respect for the people that make those animated movies like _Shrek_ though :-). Still the program is damned slow on my fairly new Athlon XP1600 so I suspect I'll uninstall it fairly soon.



Ah well... good luck :-)



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

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Re: Computer Combat

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Sun Apr 13, 2003 8:38 pm

Chris:



Again with the gut-wrenching semi-cliff hanger. Everyone's explanations and theories regarding the Controller's decision are interesting and make sense. It doesn't make Their choice any easier to *stomach* however!;) :p
Quote:
"The users will deal with it!" insisted Willow. "The renegade users will be 'counteracted'.
Hope springs eternal...:pray



And the "It's new to me...I think I'm proud of you." and the tentative use of "baby." Aaaaaah.:cry



TYAsAlways~Suse

Edited by: Cindy Lou Who at: 4/13/03 7:44:05 pm
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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 21)

Postby Artemis » Sun Apr 13, 2003 9:19 pm

Thanks all :)



miss calendar: I know, I know... :) Still, that's programs for you, all too human sometimes.



justin: There isn't any infiltration of GDI's leadership by Echelon, if that's what you're wondering. They're just afraid of the idea of making a decision to act on their own. Programs normally don't have to take responsibility for their actions - they do what their users tell them, and if it goes wrong, so be it (like when I try to run Photoshop and Pagemaker at once, and Media Player gets stuck playing the same five seconds of Nana Visitor singing 'Fever' over and over until I reboot). GDI - not least because they've got one of the two largest armies in the history of the computer world (Echelon's being the other) - don't want to act, because if it goes wrong it would be their fault. Nothing's ever been their fault before.



chilled monkey: Odd time for Tara to go all sweet, but then again I don't like focusing exclusively on one mood for a whole chapter. Besides, well... that's what she said. Once I can clearly imagine a character's voice saying their lines, I don't change them.



darkmagicwillow: For or against free will - probably both. Strictly speaking, to acknowledge GDI's right to determine their own destiny (which is not the normal state for a program, but is necessary here due to extraordinary circumstances - Echelon is determining *its* own destiny, after all), you have to give them the right to decide not to do anything. However, that doesn't alleviate the fact that it's bloody inconvenient and is going to make everything more difficult.



I knew sooner or later the actual way programs function was going to bite me on the butt :) Practically, programs would be copied all the time - every time they are run (which would be different tasks for the same program 'person') they copy to memory. Not to mention running around all over the system like Willow and Tara have been doing.



We'll say, for the sake of avoiding the issue, that the ones-and-zeroes side of the computer world (the part we know about) is akin to Plato's shadows on the cave wall (it was Plato, wasn't it? It's been a while since I did philosophy). It's a reflection of the reality of the program world, but the reality influences the reflection, not the other way around. So while the data representing Willow in the 'real' computer system may be copied around and so on, it remains just a representation of Willow herself, in the underlying program world, who is individual and continuous. And can't copy herself without accessing godlike powers (otherwise this story would be a lot more philosophically confused, and the adventure side of it would have been a lot shorter :) ).



I share your concerns about teleportation. It's something that doesn't often get addressed in science fiction, and thus doesn't often occur to people when they encounter it for real (or, at least, in the handful of successful teleportation experiments we've managed to do). In order to be able to watch Star Trek without feeling slightly anxious whenever Kira gets beamed somewhere, I assume their transporter is a sort of portal that gets moved over the subject, rather than the subject moving through the portal. Even so, I'm not stepping into one of them until I've got at least a convincing explanation of how I'm not about to be killed and rebuilt. Which is annoying, because I'd *love* some way to go on holiday in Italy without having to sit through a blasted 20 hour flight each way.



I intentionally fudged the process of 'digitising' Willow in order to avoid this sort of thing - it's a conversion to a different state, rather than copying and recreation. Transporters are a philosophical pain in the butt second only to time travel :)



Grimlock72: It's not such a doomed notion. GDI was confronted with two sets of instructions - do nothing (from their users) or take action (from Willow, also a user). Commands from GDI users would carry more weight, but programs have at least a limited ability to judge the validity of decisions, and Willow's argument had the advantage of making sense. Essentially, they had a deadlock. And while a real computer program might try to follow both commands, or crash or whatever, in the Tron world the result is that the program *does* end up in a position where they have the ability to decide which command to follow. Programs aren't entirely self-determining the way we are, but even the simple ones have *some* ability to make choices, and can do so under extraordinary circumstances.



Willow had to let them choose, though, rather than just ordering them to take action. Even though the Controllers aren't like Tara, she still can't bring herself to treat them as if they don't have the right to make their own decision. It's a human weakness - a sort of misplaced anthropomorphism. Plus, having met Tara, Willow is extremely unwilling to start treating programs like tools, even if the evidence suggests that Tara's individuality is unique - an emotional decision rather than a rational one, but her mathematical skill aside, Willow's more inclined to emotion than logic. And of course she's angry that they didn't do the sensible thing and help fight Echelon, but that's democracy for you - but that's democracy for you. I know how she feels - I've felt it for the last three national elections here, but what can you do?



I'm considering my options with regard to rendering this as a comic. On the one hand, it would be slow - I don't have a powerhouse PC, though (aside from memory, which is dirt cheap nowadays) it is within the reccommended spec for Poser 5. Plus the time it would take to modify the standard forms to resemble Willow, Tara, Giles/Trident, Warren/Sark and Buffy/Slayer - given the romance, I'd need good Willow and Tara models. And building all the sets and backgrounds - if I'd known I would consider this, I might have thought more before deciding GDI was a sci-fi version of Imperial Rome.



Then again, I've got plenty of patience. And (my own tendency towards grand architecture aside) Tron does lend itself to being computer-generated - no need to super-detail every set to stop it looking 'fake' if it's supposed to look that way - the chapters set in the real world would be the challenge. And it would be outstandingly cool if I managed to do it. I'll have to finish writing the story first, then see about getting another 500Mb of memory, then get Poser and play around with it, see what it can do. I wouldn't be going for Shrek or Final Fantasy quality - A4 pages at 72dpi is about the limit I'm willing to contemplate, and I get a headache if I even think about doing anything animated. But I've done some CGI work before, a long time ago (on a 486, believe it or not), so I think - for construction and rendering - it's not beyond what I could do.



Well, it's something to consider, anyway. If I do ever get it up and running, I'll make use of my friend's supposedly unlimited web space and put it online. Of course the Kittens will be among the first to hear of it :)

Artemis
 


Re: Computer Combat

Postby Artemis » Sun Apr 13, 2003 9:30 pm

Suse: Just as well I checked back, your message popped in while I was writing my previous one :) I'm glad the Controllers turned out interesting - I was a bit worried that the whole Chamber scene would be a bit flat. The Controllers represent Defcons, but the way (not that it's relevant to the story, but I thought it'd be interesting for people to know) - that's why Five (the Everything's Fine defcon status) tended to get the more thoughtful lines, and One (the We're At War defcon status - assuming I haven't got them backwards) got the harsh ones, and had the heaviest armour. GDI (in the outside world) is currently at defcon 3 (i.e. the world is its usual sporadically combative self, but no-one's actually launching full-scale wars at the moment), which is why Controller Three was the one to deliver their verdict to Willow and Tara. Whenever the defcon changes, the relevant Controller becomes leader of the council, or something like that.



And yes, Warren will be 'counteracted'. I'm going to enjoy writing that part :)

Artemis
 


Re: Computer Combat

Postby justin » Mon Apr 14, 2003 3:07 am

Quote:
There isn't any infiltration of GDI's leadership by Echelon, if that's what you're wondering. They're just afraid of the idea of making a decision to act on their own.




Actually from the way they said the Global Defense Network wouldn't wouldn't take action against Echelon I thought maybe they might know of something else that might be able to help, or that perhaps they would take action just not directly against Echelon.



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


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Re: Computer Combat

Postby Artemis » Mon Apr 14, 2003 9:57 am

justin: Oh, right. No, sadly, the Controller was just using formal language because, well, that's what people in Roman Senate-style settings do. At this point, there isn't anyone much left apart from GDI who can take action, nor is there anything left but Echelon for them to take action against. No tricks up their sleeve :)

Artemis
 


Fic: TARA (chapter 22)

Postby Artemis » Mon Apr 14, 2003 9:59 am

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

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Chapter Twenty-Two

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Willow and Tara followed Secundus in silence out of the Governing Chamber, through the packed corridors of the dome, and back to the terminal beneath it. It was only once they were seated in one of the rail cars, speeding through the GDI city, that Willow let out a defeated sigh. Tara put her arm around Willow's shoulders and gently pulled her across the seat to lean against her.



"We'll work something out," Tara said quietly, "it'll be alright."



"I just thought-" began Willow, breaking off and sighing again. "I don't know. I thought getting here would solve everything. I know some of the people who designed this network, they're... they're the best there is. This was our best hope to stop it all, to stop Echelon from killing all the programs out there. I mean, what good is it if we - if the users shut down Echelon, if it's already too late? I don't know what to do now."



"I know," said Tara gently. "I don't either. But I'm going to keep trying. All I need is to get past Rain, if I can defeat her, or bypass her somehow, keep her busy long enough to break open Echelon's memories... if GDI won't stop Echelon's armies, I can still stop Echelon itself."



"We," said Willow, running an arm around Tara's waist and holding her tight. "I'm coming with you." Tara smiled and leant down to kiss Willow's forehead.



"There's a lot of programs here," mused Tara after a moment's silence, "it's possible we'll find one who can help us."



Willow glanced out at the city as the car slowed and lifted off its rail. They were close to the massive wall surrounding the network, and the buildings here were less ornate, more practical. The car hovered down to the ground alongside a small domed building with a communications array in its roof, making it look something like an observatory. After the uniformity of the GDI programs, Willow was a little surprised to see a crowd of all kinds of programs waiting their turn to enter the structure - those they had saved from the I/O tower. Secundus watched the crowd until Willow and Tara had disembarked and the car had deconstructed, then turned to them.



"This is a relay station," he explained, "it will allow you limited access to our I/O facilities, in order for you to contact your users and request further instructions." Willow realised he didn't know what she had said in the Governing Chamber, and was surprised to find herself grateful for that.



"Have they all made contact?" Tara asked, looking at the programs waiting patiently outside the relay. While Secundus had been talking an orange program had come out of the main door, looking dejected, and walked slowly away. Willow glanced around, noticing several non-GDI programs with similar expressions, standing alone or in small groups, keeping out of the way of the bronze programs moving through the streets with purpose.



"I understand their users are proving difficult to locate," answered Secundus, sounding more concerned than he had so far been. "If you would like to attempt to contact yours, under the circumstances your communication could be expedited-"



"No," said Tara, "I don't need commands." Secundus turned to Willow, who shook her head.



"In that case, you are free to move through this sector of the network," he said, "or request outbound transit if you wish. Power outlets and undesignated transient facilities are nearby." He nodded curtly and turned to leave, becoming just another of the endless flow of bronze programs moving back and forth through the city.



"Now what?" asked Willow.



"Now we find a program index," said Tara. She took Willow's hand and led her across the street, dodging through the pedestrian programs. As they moved towards the nearest intersection, Willow glanced back at the queue of programs outside the relay. Some were staring blankly ahead, others looking around, at the GDI programs or at their fellow refugees who had already tried, and failed, to contact their users. A handful had seen them while Secundus had been talking, and were glancing at each other, as if they weren't sure whether to react or not. They looked like they had around the I/O tower before the attack - lost, and willing to grasp at anything that promised a way back to the safe, secure world they knew. Willow almost met the stare of one program, but turned away.



"I think I saw an index library from the transport car," Tara said, "we won't be able to access priority or classified data, but it should give us an idea of where to start looking for someone who can help."



"What exactly are we looking for?" asked Willow.



"Rain's too powerful to have been developed as a first version," Tara explained. "Even if Echelon's users created the Rain program by themselves, they would have had to use existing templates, components of earlier programs."



"Probably stole them," mused Willow.



"Well, this network has the most complete library of defensive strategies in the whole system," went on Tara, "someone here must know something about Rain, or at least some of the code that she was created with. She must have a weakness."



"Must?" asked Willow. Tara hasn't sounded so certain of that.



"Let's hope she does," said Tara, holding Willow's hand tight. "If the only thing that can defeat her is a stronger program... I'm not sure there is one."



"I am," said Willow. Tara stopped and grinned at her. "Not that I want you to test that theory!" Willow cautioned.



"Oh, I won't," said Tara earnestly. "But thank you."



They stayed still for a moment, gazing at each other fondly, then both looked up as a long, wailing siren droned through the city. Suddenly the GDI programs around them broke into a rush, dodging between one another to reach their destinations. Willow stood closer to Tara, to keep out of their way.



"What's going on?" called Tara as one passed nearby.



"Incursion alert," he said, slowing for a moment, "Echelon's trying to circumvent the shield wall again."



"How serious?" said Tara as he started to turn away.



"Unknown," he said, turning back and speaking quickly, "you're the programs from outside? You should get to a shelter grid." Advice given, he turned and dashed off. Tara called out to him but he was lost in the crowd in no time.



"What do we do?" asked a voice to their side. Willow and Tara both turned to see some of the refugees trying to make their way through the press.



"The nearest shelter grid," Tara said, "go. Willow-"



"I'm alright," Willow said quickly. Tara gave her hand a quick squeeze, then took a step forward and raised her voice to get the attention of the confused programs slowly trying to reach her.



"Get to the shelter grid!" she shouted. "Allow GDI to defend itself, don't get in their way!" Willow smiled inwardly at her confidence. No matter how worried she was about how the other programs would see her, Tara never hesitated to use her unwanted authority if it could help them. She glanced around at the other programs, caught a glimpse of one moving towards her, turned, and screamed.



The program was barely a metre from her, moving quickly, much faster than the other refugees. What remained of its blue tracery was quickly dimming and splintering, and its skin was seconds from completely disintegrating, cracking and peeling like it had been in a blast furnace. Its eyes were locked on Willow, and it was reaching out to her. She didn't know whether to run in terror or try to help, and her shock left her rooted to the spot, able only to call out.



"Tara!"



"Willow!" she heard Tara cry from behind her. The crowd, refugees and bronze-lit GDI programs alike, shrank back with cries of dismay as the disintegrating program exploded in a shower of debris. Its skin, tracery, the whole form of its body was literally torn apart from within, as something inside it unfurled with lightning speed, lunging for Willow. She didn't even have time to draw breath to scream as Rain caught her, folded her arachnid limbs around her body, and hissed a single word: "Transport."



Tara had turned just in time to see Rain erupt from within her disguise, and lunged forward in a desperate attempt to save Willow. But too late - she passed through the shimmering column of transport light and landed heavily on the ground beyond. As she rolled to her feet automatically, she heard the dull pulsing of a vehicle's engine, and followed the shocked crowd's stares up to see a recogniser banking in the air above them, turning back towards the edge of the city.



"Willow!" she cried again, breaking into a run as the recogniser began to gain speed. It began to pull ahead of her, but then had to swerve around a tower while Tara ran through the archways beneath it. She took a running leap onto the top of a slender wall separating two avenues, and ran along it as she heard the recogniser's engine behind her, coming around the tower. After a glance over her shoulder to make sure it was staying on the same heading as before, she vaulted from the top of the wall onto a buttress supporting an adjacent building, catching it with outstretched hands and flipping herself through the air. At full stretch she just managed to catch the edge of the rail beyond, and dragged herself onto it as the recogniser hovered overhead, just out of reach.



Tara ran a few steps along the rail before she felt a vibration beneath her feet. She turned just in time to see a fast-moving rail car speeding towards her, and leapt out of the way to avoid being run down. Desperately she grabbed at the car as it passed beneath her, catching its trailing edge one-handed and holding on as if her life depended on it. She pulled with all her strength and swung her legs underneath her, managing to get a foothold on the rear of the car to keep herself from falling and being dragged along the rail behind it. The car's passengers, a pair of astonished-looking GDI programs, stared at her in awe as she stood and leapt between them onto the front of the vehicle's hull.



She balanced on the speeding vehicle, staring up at the recogniser hovering ahead of them. The car was outpacing it, but the city's shield wall loomed up ahead, and the rail veered away to one side, while the recogniser was hovering higher to clear the wall. Tara made a quick assessment of the terrain ahead, then reached back to the controls of the car.



"Hold on," she told the two stunned programs behind her. Then she slammer her palm down on the controls, bracing herself against the sudden burst of speed the car put on. They passed beneath the recogniser, too high to reach, heading for the bend in the rail, and Tara let go and leapt just as the car began to turn. She somersaulted once in the air, and landed running on the roof of a hall built into the side of the wall itself. She raced to the nearest stairway carved out of the wall's inner surface, taking the steps three at a time. Arriving at a landing, she dashed to the next set of stairs, with GDI guards flattening themselves against the wall to get out of her way. She reached the top of the wall, a thin walkway with a parapet on the outer edge, just as the recogniser passed overhead. She almost leapt, but forced herself to stop as she calculated that she couldn't make it - the recogniser was half a metre too far away, and she would fall. She skidded to a halt, staring out from the top of the wall, and that sight knocked the wind out of her more than her collision with the parapet.



The recogniser that had taken Willow was hovering away from the GDI network, on a course to join a fleet of hundreds of recognisers. Beyond them were dozens of Carriers, each a mile long, deploying streams of flight-modified hunter-killers from their simulation bays. Beneath them, slowly advancing on GDI, were untold thousands of tanks, and towering over them were massive icebreaker programs, striding forward among the tank squadrons like dinosaurs, the logic rams mounted on their hulls already crackling with energy. And at the centre of the vast army was Sark's Command Carrier, aimed at the heart of the Global Defence network like a lance.



Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 22)

Postby Grimlock72 » Mon Apr 14, 2003 11:13 am

Riiiight....



Now how did that recognizer/Rain get through the wall so easily ? That just seems way to easy, something is very wrong here. I thought Rain was a fairly big program so how in the world could she disguise herself like that ? And how DID she pass the initial security scan and/or get out of the holding grid (sandbox). Never mind taking an entire recognizer with her, thats like trying to smuggle an F-16/Mig into the USA to keep in your backyard or something :-)



Did *anyone* open fire at that recognizer (clearly hostlile and not-wanted) at ALL by the way, or did all those guards just stare dumb at the enemy ? Surely they must have seen the recognizer, sufficient time for one shot at least.



It was dissappointing to see the recognizer just fly out of a high-security network like that. A network which should be on alert by now and therefore block ALL traffic through that wall, either friendly or hostile. (which at least will stop Echolon if it DOES have the access-codes somehow). Heh, this event would trigger a LOT of pagers over here, an unknown program just appearing like that INSIDE the security perimeter... very, very wrong :-).



Willow would have been better of using her own power to construct some form of shield to hold in front of her, instead of calling for Tara. Then again, maybe Willow didn't calculate the distance that fast :) . She should be able to destabilize that recognizer, trouble is I'm not sure if she would survive the fall. Heck, she should be able to wreck Rain's programming (at their current distance Willow's sword would do *something* at least) :) Then she can just fly back, MUCH safer.



Poor programs all waiting for command near that I/O array, fun to read that part. They really DO need instructions don't they ? They don't even know where to run in case of an attack, quit simply 'cos no-one told them. (let alone a user:-)



Hmm, most annoying is of course that Rain has Willow :rage . Secondly it's soooo annoying to see security mess-up's like these. For me at least :-) Startrek is still the best/worst as far as computer screw-ups go though, holodeck anyone ?





Seems those carriers don't need a network at all to get to another system ? That's rather odd...



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 4/14/03 10:16:37 am
Grimlock72
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 22)

Postby justin » Mon Apr 14, 2003 11:47 am

GDI's security does seem to be a little lax. I guess that'll teach them to not get their security programs from Microsoft :p



As to Rain disguising herself that was presumably due to some one installing a root kit. This is probably why the security programs didn't fire on the recogniser sinced they'd have been modified to either not see it, or to see it as being a friend.



Willow being captured is definitely not of the good. Though Echelon may have found that it's bitten off more than it can chew. Especially now that it's got a pissed off Tara coming after it.



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


justin
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 22)

Postby miss calendar » Mon Apr 14, 2003 11:58 am

Aargh, aargh and triple arrgh!!! Willow as prisoner of Rain and Sark is not a good thing, especially as Rain is such a sadistic program and I imagine is not overfond of Willow given their previous encounters. Seems like Willow will have an early opportunity to test her theory that she is a stronger program than Rain. Poor Tara, almost but not quite managing to catch up with the recogniser. ( Arnie eat your heart out....) Luckily I don't know anything about how programs and networks work so I can just enjoy the story but how did Rain manage to disguise herself so successfully and how did Echelons forces manage to breach GDI so easily?



And after a cliffhanger like that I hope you update very soon.....

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 22)

Postby chilled monkey » Mon Apr 14, 2003 12:14 pm

Oh dear, hope Willow will be alright. Tara's not going to let anything stand in her way of rescuing her, that's for sure.



Rain's camouflage ability reminds me of the Bug in Men In Black. Remember, it could compress its body to fit into a human-sized outer shell. Rain probably did something similar.

chilled monkey
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 22)

Postby TemperedCynic » Mon Apr 14, 2003 5:33 pm

Rain has Willow because of her swiftness and strength. Had Willow anticipated the attack, things may be different. Now, TARA must decide if she will stay and assist GDI in the defense of the network, or go after Willow. TARA can lead the user-less programs and GDI against Sark and Echelon, but for how long? Shades of Helm's Deep, I think. Willow will find herself in the belly of the beast. Sark, Rain and Echelon believe they have solved their problem by taking the user. Heh, this redhead will prove much more difficult to contain than they expect. And I wouldn't suggest harming someone she cares about.



This yarn gets better with each chapter!


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

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