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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 26)

Postby Grimlock72 » Fri Apr 18, 2003 9:32 am

Since it IS Rain's simulation why can't she terminate it ?



I'm glad to have Sark killed or whatever but it was a dumb move on Echolon's part. Rain relies more on her own power than Sark likely would, which makes Rain slightly easier to avoid and possibly defeat. Fear of being killed or demoted does not make a program smart, leaders like Stalin tested that concept I eventually figured that out. (which is why the russian army had a lot of inexperienced but loyal generals). Fear does not make for loyal servants either, it does create soldiers who only obey when directly supervised and who will run away once they have the opportunity. Hopefully Rain and her stupidness will experience that one day.



Who's to say that Echolon doesn't have it's own defensive-wall like GDI has anyway ? I suppose it does have SOME forces in reserve at least. So far I've not seen much reason to think of Echolon as a particulair smart program.



Rain has another thing coming if she thinks Willow will just watch while she kills Tara. I'm all for Rain focussing on only one of them though, heh... gives the other enough time to drop a recognizer on her head or such :D .



We never saw what power Sark had except that he reported directly to Echolon, didn't we? Just wondering why rain was so excited about absorbing Sark like that. She seems mighty vulnerable after such an abosrb/de-rez act by the way. Can't see a way to exploit that at the moment though.



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

Grimlock72
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 26)

Postby Artemis » Fri Apr 18, 2003 10:32 am

Grimlock72: The manta is Rain's simulation in that it was generated specifically for her use, but it's not actually connected to her. It just pisses her off that little bit more that it's *her* ride that Willow and Tara 'borrowed' :)



Echelon's not quite as capricious as it seems at the moment - it recognised that Sark's approach wasn't working, and faced with a potentially-lethal crisis, turned to Rain. Sark was a military leader, a general (if a sadistic one, which did tend to interfere with his objectivity now and then), and he had trouble wielding his army against Tara - the old saying about a single fighter having an advantage over a group of attackers, unless the attackers are perfectly coordinated. Sark army isn't perfect, it's just programs with weapons (when you get right down to it, GDI programs are much better soldiers than Echelon's, it's just that Echelon has a whole lot more of them).



So far, Rain is the only program who's soundly defeated Tara - she tracked her down in the open system and deactivated her, then injured her in the Game Grid (prior to being squashed by a rogue fractal), then managed to get close enough to steal Willow from practially under her nose. Echelon knows that Willow is probably the biggest threat, because of her unknown abilities, but it also knows that whatever defence it mounts against Willow is going to have to defeat Tara, and Rain is the only program who can do it. Realistically, Rain is Echelon's only hope. Echelon isn't worried about how she handles the army, because the army isn't going to be much use in the current crisis. Seeing as the current crisis could result in Echelon being destroyed, it's postponing all other concerns until later.



Echelon does have defences of its own, but not the kind that GDI has. GDI is a fortress, designed to resist attacks. Echelon started out as an unassuming commercial program, and slowly grew - its structure is very much different. Its main defence, apart from its colossal armies, is the fact that no-one outside its own forces has access to the codes that will locate it with a transit beam (the same way Willow had to go to Buffy's machine to locate GDI and create a beam there). Hence the advantage of Willow and Tara stealing Rain's simulation - it's all set to go straight to Echelon, avoiding the necessity to hunt it down and give Rain that much more time to find them. It's got other ways of defending itself, though.



Sark's power (which Rain absorbed) was his position as commander-in-chief - he had massive memories full of battle plans, strategy, tactics, details of every simulation and program in Echelon's armies. Knowledge is power, literally in the Tron world. Also, as a result of the amount of power Echelon gave to Sark, his 'personality' was probably the most complex of any program, apart from Tara and Willow - he tasted real good, to Rain's fairly warped sense of pleasure.

Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 26)

Postby chilled monkey » Fri Apr 18, 2003 11:50 am

Okay, one down, two to go (three if you count Warren himself).

One thing I really admire is the amount of thought and detail you put into your writing. I bet you could tell me a character's entire life history if I asked.



Keep up the good work. :applause

chilled monkey
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 26)

Postby TemperedCynic » Fri Apr 18, 2003 5:54 pm

Artemis's vivid imagination said:
Quote:
Y'know, I can just picture Willow as Han Solo (and Xander as Chewbacca) - she's got that cheekily charismatic 'scoundrel' appeal. I'd be sorely tempted if I hadn't already sketched out the basics of a Star Wars plot, with Willow as a junior assistant to a Senator. Maybe I can come up with a reason for her to wear those tight Corellian Navy pants anyway...
Willow in tight Corellian Navy pants.....oh, double *sigh*!!



Echelon is desperate, Rain is commander and Sark is "lunch". Rain is a "new and improved" badass. Willow and TARA will need every scrap of unpredictability to beat Rain now. Man, I'd hate to see Rain de-rezz TARA. Willow would find a way to re-activate her, but each instance of a program is unique - how could TARA 2.0 be the same? Let's hope Rain's need to infkict pain distracts her from Echelon's purpose.


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

TemperedCynic
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 26)

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Fri Apr 18, 2003 5:59 pm

Relieved of Rank! Wahooooooo!!! All command allocated to Rain? Acknowledge including rank? That might've burnt Sark even more than Willow's sword!:clap :clap :clap



I was surprised how much better I felt after the humiliation. His "torture" was almost more than I needed.;) I just appreciated that you were somehow able to make me feel lighter without making me succumb to my baser instincts.::peace



I've gained even more appreciation for the complexities of Rain. You've managed to write a character whose contradictions of personality are credible and intriguing. She crushes her own defense ships "without feeling" for the casualties. It's just necessary. And yet she seems to enjoy killing the menial and *savors* her revenge on Sark. Is she devoid of the encumbrances of all emotion or has she incorporated only those that suit her program's original design? True - she seemed angry at Sark when she couldn't take care of Willow herself. But this might have just been a response to being denied to function as she's supposed to. Can she know disappointment? Anguish? Fear? And to "kill" with a kiss?:shock I remain fascinated and enthralled by Rain.



~Suse

"Now I have seen that sad surrender in my lover's eyes

But I can only stand apart and sympathize.

For we are always what are situations hand us-

It's either sadness or euphoria."
~Summer Highland Falls (Billy Joel)

Cindy Lou Who
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 26)

Postby Artemis » Fri Apr 18, 2003 11:23 pm

Thanks all :)



chilled monkey: Oh I am *so* counting Warren. And he is going down. I've got the perfect fate in mind :)



TemperedCynic: De-rezzing is terminal for a program - there's no way to bring them back. The only option would be to load a new instance of the program, and that can only be done from outside the system.



Suse: Yeah, can you tell I didn't like Sark :)



Rain is an odd character. She's not emotionless, but she is completely lacking in empathy in any form. Her own range of emotions is somewhat limited too - her only positive aspect, if you can call it that, is her distaste for making other programs do her dirty work. Unlike Sark, Rain is at least willing to face her enemies - any enemies, regardless of how powerful they are - in combat. You're actually better off being her enemy than under her command, because she'll expend the lives of her soldiers any way she sees fit (like terminating the crews of those recognisers just to get the Carrier moving faster), but she'll always fight her enemies face to face. The only other 'positive' I can think of is that she is capable of feeling pleasure, but seeing as that's directly linked to how much pain she's inflicting - particularly de-rezzing - I really don't think that counts.



As a rule, it's part of Rain's basic programming that she hates everything. She was designed to be introduced into a rival network, in which she would destroy every piece of functioning code available - a corporate doomsday device. She hates Echelon too, but she is ultimately just a normal program, and is bound to obey her superiors. Her problem with Sark has always been that he was not in her 'core' chain of command - Echelon activated her, and Sark's authority over her came solely from his position as right-hand-program to Echelon. Obedience to Sark wasn't something that was integral to her (in human terms, it'd be like troops being assigned an officer who they felt hadn't earned his position - like Lt Gorman in Aliens, a newbie straight out of academy assigned to command experienced veterans). On top of that, Rain regarded Sark as a coward, which is one of the worst possible things you can be around her, because it nullifies the tiny bit of fair-play instinct she has. She did feel that she had the right to try to break Willow herself, because Sark was going to do it clinically - Rain would have gone into the isolation field with Willow and allowed her at least the chance to fight back (not much of a chance, but I never said Rain was *completely* fair).



She is capable of disappointment, but she's not inclined to brood. If something goes wrong for her, she either blames herself - in which case she pushes herself harder to be a better killer - or she blames someone else, in which case she gets royally pissed off at them. Or both. In any case, disapointment leads almost instantly to blinding rage.



Anguish - tricky. It depends how you define it. In most cases, anything that occurs around her that could 'upset' her would lead to more rage at whatever's responsible. She's a very angry program. I don't think she's capable of fear.

Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 26)

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Apr 19, 2003 3:19 am

Ah... so they NEEDED such dedicated beam to find Echolon in the first place. I didn't get that intially :) . That makes things more interesting since enemies who can hide/cloak tend to depend at least partly on that for defense.



Assuming Echolon came in as a normal commercial program, WHO (and how) gave it authority over other programs ? Why should a program like Rain (which likely is better at combat then Echolon) even listen to Echolon ??



I'm very happy to read that Rain doesn't know or feel fear. Very usefull that, heh... she'll find out one does need such an emotion now and then. Hopefully she'll find out waaaaay to late. Same goes for empathy, if she doesn't know it she'll underestimate her enemies.... unless she was paying attention to Willow the last time she hurt Tara :D .



A virus like Rain seems to me to be too destructive to be usefull in invading other systems. Sure, Rain can kill all programs around but that doesn't leave much to invade/conquer/rule :) .



Hmm.... about users turning of the power and thus killing Echolon like Willow told Sark; modern systems can do a powerdown all on their own. Granted that's usually on a user's order but it can be done by a temperature-monitoring program, when it decides it's to hot for the system to continue running. That would be rather suicidal for Willow and Tara, though it could safe the outside world from all sorts of horrors.



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

Grimlock72
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 26)

Postby justin » Sat Apr 19, 2003 4:29 am

Another great update.



It was good to see Sark getting his come uppance.



It just goes to show that you shouldn't mistreat your subordinates.



Though Rain probably would have tortured him anyway seeing as she is :evil



As to using the fact that Rain is weakened after Derezzing a program the best way would be to create a simulation of Tara and While Rain is derezzing it, drop something heavy on her.



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


justin
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 26)

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Apr 19, 2003 10:34 am



Yeah, I thought using a decoy simulation of that. Trouble is that Rain gets all happy and vulnerable because she absorbs power from her victim. So the only way a decoy would work is if it has sufficient power to suck out of it.



Come to think of it, Tara's fighting style isn't really that suited for fighting Rain I think. Tara relies for a large part on speed/evasion and that usually works on soldiers she can throw around. Throwing Rain around is going to be hard, though likely very satisfying : -->>: . She lost rounds #1 and #2 for a reason, to bad we hardly know anything about #1 when Tara got de-activated.



Do those disc-guns do ANY damage to Rain by the way ? Assuming they hit of course.



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

Grimlock72
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 26)

Postby Artemis » Sat Apr 19, 2003 11:40 am

Grimlock72: The idea that a network can be physically absent if you don't know it's there is something that got left out a little by the beam-transit system. If it weren't for that (and the consequent high-speed approach to every destination) I'd have done something like the appearance of Hamunaptra in The Mummy.



No-one intentionally gave Echelon authority over other programs - all I'll say now is that it was a mistake. Rain obeys Echelon because when she was brought online, she was initialised within the chain of command, below Echelon. I've only got a vague idea of how to explain it - the space that was prepared for Rain's program to be loaded into wasn't blank, it already contained the necessity to obey Echelon. This instance of Rain is therefore bound to serve Echelon, regardless of any other factors. If Rain were loaded again (from the CDs in Warren's office that the program is stored on) into a blank space, with no pre-existing instructions, she'd be completely independent.



It's true Rain doesn't know fear, but that's not quite so useful as when it's true of a human. For one of us to 'not know fear' usually means we're either incredibly brave, or more likely somehow unable to properly grasp the potential dangers that exist around us. Fear, in a human, is part of the evolved set of instincts that keep us alive. Unfortunately it can work too well, making us act with poor judgement out of fear, and ultimately putting us in danger. Rain doesn't have that problem - she has no fear, but she does have all sorts of caution and self-preservation instincts. Lack of empathy, on the other hand, is a definite weakness for Rain, but she's so damn lethal that it doesn't make any difference most of the time :)



You're right, Rain is too destructive to be used as an effective corporate warfare tool - the amount of damage she does is catastrophic (in the scenario she was developed for, she wouldn't be operating under the authority of another program like Echelon, and would simply kill everything she could get her claws on). That's why Cycorp never used her. They never sold her because if they did, someone might have used her against them (and they weren't sure they could keep Rain out of their own network if she was set against them), and the legal repercussions if it became public that Cycorp had developed a program like Rain would be disastrous.



Willow was being metaphorical when she was taunting Sark - obviously powering down a computer doesn't terminate (or even harm) the programs on it. But what she meant was that (seeing as she didn't know about Echelon's plan to invade the real world), there would be no way for Echelon to defend itself against users simply deleting Echelon from the outside. It wouldn't be easy - Echelon can be evasive like a virus if need be - but ultimately, if there's no other way, they could just cut the power and go through the hard disks one by one, under an external operating system, until they'd gotten rid of it all.



Disc-guns can harm Rain, but a single shot won't terminate her - she's too powerful. Not a lot of programs can survive being shot with a disc on full power, as the guns are very straight-forward code - they have one function, and they do it really well. But a program as powerful as Rain can survive being shot a good few dozen times before the cumulative impacts start damaging her body. That's not taking into consideration her ability to dodge discs or deflect them with her spider-legs (those are, in case anyone's interested, Rain's equivalent of a data disc - she can't remove them, but they can interface and download code the same way). If you wanted to shoot Rain into submission, the best bet would be to use several of the high-powered disc turrets they have fitted on the Carriers, and don't stop firing until you're *really* sure she's dead.



Tara's fighting style won't be a weakness in itself - it's just a matter of motivation. Tara is a more elegant fighter than Rain, and Rain has more limbs to attack with, but both are fundamentally damn fast and hit very hard. The thing is, both times she's faced Rain so far, Tara has been unsure of herself. Now that she knows her evolution isn't a malfunction, not to mention the whole being in love thing, she's a lot more sure of herself. The downside to being a human-like program is that Tara's state of mind affects her ability to draw on her innate strength. If she's uncertain of herself, she's weaker (still kick-ass, but weaker nonetheless). If she's got confidence in herself, she's stronger. For Tara to fight at 100% of her ability would require absolute belief in herself - we haven't seen that yet. Tara is human (mentally, anyway) and humans generally only get one of two moments in their entire lives when they are 100% without doubt.



justin: Thanks :) Yes, the moral is either don't be nasty to your minions, or just don't be Warren or Warren-like if I'm in charge of the story.



I wouldn't say Rain is weakened by de-rezzing a powerful program, exactly - more like overcome. I dare say she'd have enough 'subconscious' survival instincts to keep herself alive, possibly even fight fairly well, while her higher brain functions are busy being orgasmic.



Grimlock's right about the duplicate idea, unfortunately - if it were possible, Rain would know in an instant that it was fake, unless it was an exact duplicate. In which case, feeding it to Rain just to keep her busy is ethically impossible.

Artemis
 


Fic: TARA (chapter 27)

Postby Artemis » Sat Apr 19, 2003 11:43 am

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Twenty-Seven

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The manta-ray rocketed along its transit beam, the landscape of the open system a blur beneath it. Inside, in a cockpit designed for a single program, Willow was curled up to Tara's side. Tara kept one arm around Willow's waist, using her free hand to make occasional adjustments to the simulation. Willow just watched her, in comfortable silence, content to study Tara's expression of concentration as she steered the craft, and the occasional warm smiles as she glanced sidelong at Willow.



"Did I mention how amazing you are?" Willow murmured.



"Seventeen times so far," said Tara with a grin. She made a few final adjustments to the manta-ray's controls then shifted in the pilot's seat, rolling over to face Willow.



"You saved my life," said Willow quietly. "I mean, you already have, against Rain, and escaping from the Game Grid, but... you came through an army to save me, that's, well, here I go saying 'amazing' again."



"You made me this way. Not like that," Tara added hastily, seeing the frown on Willow's face, "when I first activated I wasn't capable of fear, or doubt. Or love. But I grew, I changed. And when I found you, when we came together... when we achieved unity," she said shyly, "that's how you made me what I am. You were in danger... I would have followed you anywhere. If I hadn't," she shrugged, "I wouldn't deserve you."



"You make me sound like I'm... perfect, or something," said Willow, brushing a finger over Tara's lips.



"I think none of us are perfect," said Tara thoughtfully, "not programs, not even users. Not even my Willow," she added, nipping playfully at Willow's finger then releasing it. "But if I believe my Willow *is* perfect anyway... it seems I'm capable of contradictory beliefs." The corners of her mouth quirked up in a wry grin. "I'll manage."



"We'll manage," laughed Willow softly. "I am, you know."



"What?"



"Yours," Willow said, utterly sincere. Tara stared at her, as if mesmerised.



"I could say the same thing," she whispered.



"I remember you did," said Willow, "in... rather intense circumstances," she blushed.



"I know," Tara said. "I meant every word."



An alarm broke the silence that descended on the pair as they leaned closer. Tara heaved a frustrated sigh and glanced at the controls. Her expression grew serious in an instant.



"We're approaching Echelon," she said.



"What's our plan?" asked Willow, all seriousness.



"This transit should bring us past the perimeter and whatever shield walls it has in place," said Tara, "but we can't expect to get all the way in. No-one knows exactly what Echelon has become. GDI's analysis indicated that it had absorbed so much code it had become like a network. We may actually have to go inside Echelon itself."



"If we do, we can deactivate it?"



"I've got a set of fragmentation codes on my data disc," explained Tara, "GDI put them together as a last resort. And some of the programs we brought from the I/O tower escaped from partitions that were close to Echelon when it all began. They helped GDI customise these codes. According to what they heard, Echelon gains power by absorbing other programs. It destroys them as programs, but leaves their functionality intact. Even the soldiers aren't quite separate programs - even when Echelon allows a program to survive, to serve it, it makes them a part of itself."



"So we're going to cut it off?" asked Willow. Tara separated her disc from her back.



"We have to get this disc to the core of Echelon," she said, "to the original Echelon program, what it was before it began taking over everything around itself. Normally it would be invulnerable, the combined power of all those programs is too much. The codes on this disc will break the links between that original Echelon and everything it's absorbed. It'll be vulnerable, for a fraction of a millicycle, just like any other program."



"And then?"



"We terminate it," said Tara darkly. "There's no other way. Even if it's deactivated, the influx of power from its slave programs would revive it the instant the links reconnect. We have to terminate it."



"Tara, I'm sorry," said Willow quietly. She dropped her eyes, unable to meet Tara's questioning gaze.



"What for?"



"It's my fault you're doing this," Willow admitted, "I created you to shut down Echelon. I wish there was another way-"



"There isn't," Tara insisted. "I don't want to terminate any program, but this is the only way to free the system. And it's not your fault. If there was some other way, I'd defy the instructions you gave me." Willow looked up, with the beginnings of tears in her eyes.



"Promise?" she said.



"Promise," Tara assured her. She checked the controls again.



"We're close now," she said, "remember, be careful, and stay with me. There's never been a program like Echelon before, not even GDI knows what it'll be like in there."



"You bet I'll stay with you," said Willow earnestly, "I'm not letting you out of my sight!" Tara smiled back at her.



"Promise?" she asked.



"Promise," said Willow with a grin. Tara hugged Willow, then rolled back over to pay full attention to the manta-ray's controls.



"We're about to come out of transit," she warned. For a moment Willow saw a silhouette looming on the horizon, then it was as if a storm cloud had passed over the sun. The manta-ray vibrated as it slowed to normal motion, in front of a monumental structure, an artificial mesa hundreds of miles wide. Willow stared up at the solid, sheer cliffs, miles high, with trails of power running up over them like waterfalls in reverse - drawing power in, instead of letting it flow outwards. Ahead of them their beam vanished into the shadows of a huge chasm in the cliffs. Ribbons of power crackled across the gap in the cliff, lightning discharges in which each bolt was itself thicker than the manta-ray, and brighter than the sun. The energy whipped violently through the entire length of the chasm, as far as Willow could see into the shadow, and perilously close to their transit beam.



"It's alright," Tara said reassuringly, though Willow could her the awe in her voice, "they won't hit us."



Willow shrank back from the transparent canopy of the manta-ray regardless, pressing herself up against Tara. The simulation moved slowly along the beam, with enough energy to vaporise it crackling barely metres away. In between flinching from the discharges, Willow stared out at the walls of the chasm, seeing them grow more jagged and irregular the further they went. At the point where it cut through the giant cliffs the chasm had been perfectly smooth, like a knife had sliced it out of the landscape, but now, further in, there were forms emerging from it, things that looked like huge power conduits twisting out of the walls, crossing each other like a massive lattice.



At last they emerged from the canyon, but not into what passed for daylight in the system. Looking up, Willow saw the sky covered by dark structures, semi-opaque sheets of blackness with muted flashes of energy pulsing within them. Beneath this ominous sky the ground rose up, miles high, a giant mountain drawing all the power in the system into itself. Willow saw power feeds the size of buildings snaking up the sides of the structure, but as she cast her gaze out across the landscape it all blended together - it was too big, and all she could see was the single, vast shape rising up towards the heavens. At its apex was a volcanic crater, pulsing with red energy, emitting a plume of pure darkness, like a cloud of ash, with raw power writhing inside it. It was a living thing, huge and malevolent.



"Is that..." whispered Willow.



"Echelon," confirmed Tara.



Their tiny craft drifted along its beam, towards the mountain until all Willow could see through the canopy was Echelon's massive form, and the turmoil in the ash cloud above it. Finally they were close enough to see their destination, a great archway set into the side of the mountain. Lit by only the beam, Willow could just make out the shapes of huge buildings inside, towers taller, more massive, than anything she had yet seen. As the manta-ray crossed the threshold of the archway, the beam vanished, plunging the interior of Echelon into darkness again. Willow felt Tara shiver as their craft passed into the shadow, drifting slowly down to land in darkness.



Once grounded the manta-ray's hull split and folded in on itself until it had become a hollow skeleton of its previous form. Tara took Willow's hand and helped her clear the sharp edges of the craft, barely visible in the light from the archway behind them. Neither of them showed any inclination to release the other's hand once they stood in open ground, facing the blackness ahead of them.



"We should hurry," said Tara quietly, "Sark and Rain won't be far behind us. They must know what we're trying to do, and Echelon won't place any goal above preserving itself."



"At least they'll leave GDI alone," Willow suggested.



"That was the plan," said Tara.



"Can you see anything?" asked Willow.



"Not enough," Tara answered. She glanced over her shoulder at the archway, then turned to face the darkness again. "We go straight ahead," she said, "the real Echelon will be at the heart of all this." They set off, hand in hand, into the shadows. Willow kept glancing over her shoulder, at the archway - the light was inviting. With every step they took, it seemed to die a little more, as if the air had darkness suspended in it. After a few minutes, Willow couldn't even see the arch, and had to rely on Tara's sense of direction to know which way they were going.



"Tara, I'm... scared," she admitted. Tara gave her hand a reassuring squeeze.



"Me too," she said. "But we have to do this."



"I know," said Willow, trying to sound more sure of herself. "If there was any light, you'd be able to see me looking very resolute right now."



"I can imagine," said Tara. Willow heard a little more happiness in her voice, and smiled.



"It'll be alright," Tara spoke again after a moment's silence, "I'll protect you. I won't let anything hurt you."



"I know," said Willow. "Tara?"



"Yes?"



"If you turn around, will you be able to remember which way is inwards?"



"Yes, why?" asked Tara. Willow took Tara gently by the waist, turned her around and kissed her.



"I love you," she whispered into Tara's lips.



"Unity," said Tara softly, "I love you."



"Don't let anything hurt you, either," Willow warned.



"That's the plan," said Tara, taking Willow's hand again and leading her on into the heart of Echelon.



Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 27)

Postby chilled monkey » Sat Apr 19, 2003 3:15 pm

Oddly enough, TRON will be showing on Sunday in the UK (and so is one of Amber's movies). I'm looking forwards to seeing both.

Willow and Tara are really in the heart of darkness now. This is riveting stuff. Awesome!

chilled monkey
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 27)

Postby Grimlock72 » Sun Apr 20, 2003 3:45 am

Heh, someone failed to tell Echolon to block that inbound transit... wave goodbye to most of your defense system :) .



Echolon looks rather big though, might take a while to it's core. Judiging by all the power supplies I'm wondering what would happen if you took out say half of those. Echolon seems to need a LOT of power, for what exactly ?



If at all possible I would recommend Willow and Tara destroy or de-active Echolon's connection-ports first. We don't really WANT Rain to go visit them now do we ?



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

Grimlock72
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 27)

Postby Artemis » Sun Apr 20, 2003 11:19 am

chilled monkey: Thanks :) And make sure you watch Tron, it's a great film. That and The Black Hole. It's a real pity the box office returns made Disney pull back from real sci-fi, those two films have got a *lot* or originality in them, compared to most of the formulaic stuff that was being made at the time.



Grimlock: It's not so much a case of Echelon needing power, as wanting it. Just like any other program, it's self-contained and can continue to function with no external source of energy (assuming a program doesn't do anything particularly strenuous). But Echelon is deliberately drawing all the power of the open system into itself, making itself larger, stronger, more intelligent.



Echelon couldn't block the transit - for all its power, it still has to obey the fundamental rules of its reality. Essentially, once a transit beam has been engaged and a simulation is riding it, the transit has already been completed - it's just a matter of time. Unfortunately destroying Echelon's transit projectors wouldn't help their present situation - the Command Carrier (and the other Carrier simulations, recognisers and H-Ks, but the Command Carrier is the fastest) is capable of self-contained transit, and doesn't need a beam.

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Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 27)

Postby justin » Sun Apr 20, 2003 11:22 am

That was a great description of Echelon. It certainly sounded a lot more impressive than the master control program from Tron.



I agree with the idea of trying to cut off access to Echelon so they don't have any surprise visitors but given how large Echelon is that might take too long.



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


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Fic: TARA (chapter 28)

Postby Artemis » Sun Apr 20, 2003 11:23 am

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



--

Chapter Twenty-Eight

--



After a long time walking in the dark, Willow began to see the barest hint of light.



"Tara," she whispered.



"I see it," Tara said, "we're close." A dull red glow was building, just enough for Willow to make out the shapes of enormous towers on either side of them. The further they went the brighter the blood red light became, enough for Willow to be able to see the towers clearly - stretching up as far as she could see, and beyond them, like an artificial sky, the interior of the mountain itself. It was difficult for Willow to see, but it looked to her as if the towers were part of it, merging at their tops. Dark shapes were moving on the edge of vision, and now and then Willow caught sight of whole segments of towers swinging ponderously around, realigning themselves. Far overhead a bridge swung around, making a deep rumble as it moved past, disconnecting from one structure and attaching to another.



"Willow, careful," warned Tara. There was a hazy barrier ahead, bending what little light there was, making everything beyond it indistinct. Tara tentatively raised a hand and touched the barrier. It rippled from her touch, like water. She frowned, glanced at Willow, then pushed her hand through, finding no resistance.



"What is it?" asked Willow.



"I don't know," admitted Tara. "Whatever it is, we have to go through it. Ready?"



"Ready," said Willow. They gripped each other's hands tighter and both stepped through the barrier at once.



Willow blinked in the sudden, pure light. All around her she could see the towers of Echelon's interior, clearly now. The motion among them had stilled, and the faint traces of power that had flowed over them were gone. Willow took a few steps towards the nearest one, and reached out to touch it. It was dry, and brittle - where her fingertips brushed the surface, tiny trails of dust leaked out. She turned to Tara.



"What happened?"



"I don't know," said Tara, looking around in confusion, "I don't feel any power here. It's as if it's been terminated. Look up there," she added, pointing up and ahead. Willow looked, and saw, beyond the tops of the crumbling buildings, the vast volcano crater, dead and silent. Through the crater hole she could see the clear, bright sky, lit with thousands of strands of energy, rushing back and forth.



"The system's free," whispered Tara in awe. "We did it."



"How?" protested Willow. "We didn't do anything. Did we?"



"I don't know," repeated Tara, frowning. "Perhaps that barrier was the edge of the core. Maybe just by bringing the fragmentation code through it, we somehow broke Echelon's link with its slave programs."



"But what terminated it?" asked Willow. "If we didn't-"



"Careful!" warned Tara, as a noise echoed through the silent citadel. She was on guard in an instant, ready to protect Willow, but no attack came. After a moment there was another sound, quieter this time, a faint scraping noise. Tara cautiously went to investigate, with Willow following her.



There were two programs sprawled on the ground, at the base of one of the towers. Willow shivered as she recognised Rain, lying face-down with her arachnid combat limbs bent and twisted. She had been reaching forward, and both her forearm-blades were fully extended, piercing the chest of the other program and protruding from its back. Her last victim was a giant, eight feet tall if he had been standing, with massive shoulders, thick arms and legs, and a sturdy, square face staring blankly to one side. His right arm ended in a thick sword, which had pierced Rain beneath her jaw and sliced straight through her head, coming out among her crest of blades. Both programs were completely lifeless.



"Who is it?" asked Willow automatically.



"Look," said Tara, pointing at the giant program's chest, half-visible as he lay on his side with Rain's blades through him. "Look at the pattern."



Willow looked, concentrated, and in an instant recognised it. The program's tracery was an exact replica of the pattern of power flows she had seen before, the pattern drawn over miles on the surface of the mountain itself.



"This is Echelon?" she said disbelievingly.



"Was," said Tara.



"Why did Rain kill him?" said Willow. "I mean, I know she was a monster, but I thought Sark had some sort of command- where's Sark? If Rain's here, he must be around."



"Over here," said Tara. She was standing a few metres from Echelon and Rain, staring down at a third lifeless program. Willow joined her and looked into Sark's dead eyes.



"Well, I can't say I'm very sorry," she said after a moment.



"He was more of a monster than Rain," Tara said quietly. Willow jumped as a light appeared behind her, casting her and Tara's shadows sharply over Sark's remains. Both of them whirled around to see a single point of white light floating in the air a few metres away. The point became a line, and the line split and curved to become an oval, large enough for a person to step through. The space inside it shimmered and changed.



"Oh goddess," breathed Willow. Through the portal she could see the workstation she had been using, the chair she had been sitting at, her sports bag hastily shoved under the desk. Everything was just as it had been when she had been shot by the quantum storage experiment's laser, and brought inside the system. She took a step forward instinctively.



"Is that-" Tara whispered.



"Home," said Willow.



"I can see it," said Tara, "I can see your world. Willow, I shouldn't be able to, it's not possible."



"Why not?"



"If that's really the user world," said Tara, staring through the portal, "it's built differently to the system, out of a different type of reality, it's... I don't know how to explain it. Its code is incompatible with ours. If I can see it..."



"Do you think-" began Willow. Tara moved towards the portal.



"Careful," said Willow, staying at her side.



"It's safe," said Tara quietly, to herself. She reached out slowly and put just the tip of her finger through the film of energy across the mouth of the portal. Beyond, it remained solid and real. She pulled her hand back and inspected it, finding no damage.



"Willow," she said excitedly, "I think I can come with you!"



"You don't have to," said Willow quickly, trying not to give in to her own rising excitement, "I'll stay here with you-"



"That's your home," insisted Tara, "you belong there. And I belong with you, wherever you are. There's nothing for me to stay here for. Willow..." Willow took Tara's hand.



"Let's do it," she said. Both closed their eyes and stepped through the portal. Willow was surprised to feel nothing at all unusual as she returned to her own world - she had expected some sensation from the portal, a tingling feeling on her skin or something. All she felt was the familiar feeling of her clothes on her body. It was a little strange after so long as a program, with no clothing and no reason to wear any.



"Oh, my," said Tara softly, "you *are* perfect." Willow glanced at her hands - their normal skin colour - and then looked up at Tara, who was gazing at her as if she were an angel descended to earth. Then Willow frowned in confusion.



"You're... still a program..." she said hesitantly. Tara glanced at her own hands, then touched her body, running her fingers over the tracery covering her grey skin. Willow took a quick glance down at herself, even peeked inside her shirt, but she was fully human. Tara slowly reached out and touched Willow's shoulder. Willow felt it as if she were a real, physical being.



"I can't be real," said Tara, "but I *am*... what am I?"



"I don't know," trailed off Willow. A nasty suspicion was forming. "Tara, if we were inside Echelon, inside the mountain, could it affect us? Make us see things?"



"No-one knows," said Tara, "I don't think anyone's ever been inside it and come out. Why?"



"I don't think this is real," said Willow darkly.



"It isn't?" said Tara, looking around in confusion. "Does it look wrong? I can't tell."



"It's too easy," Willow said, "Echelon, Sark *and* Rain all terminated without us even having to do a thing, the portal coming out of nowhere, you being able to come into my world... it's too good to be true."



"But if it's not true-" said Tara.



"We're still inside Echelon," finished Willow, "we still have a job to do, come on!" Willow started towards the portal, but it snapped shut.



"Damn!" she exclaimed, "how do we get back?" Tara took both her hands and stood to face her.



"If you're right," she said, "we never left. We just have to concentrate. If Echelon is getting into our minds somehow, we have to fight it, keep it out."



"How?" asked Willow.



"Concentrate on what you know is true." Tara gathered Willow in her arms and touched their foreheads together. "I love you," she whispered.



"I love you," answered Willow. The connection between them began to grow, and Willow felt it struggling slightly, as if it was fighting something. She stared into Tara's eyes, and felt a shadow lift off her thoughts. Everything except Tara's face blurred and twisted, as if she was trying to see both sides of an optical illusion at once. Suddenly the light was gone, and Willow blinked in the darkness. Only the reassuring feel of Tara holding her kept her from panicking. After a moment her eyes adjusted enough to see the dull red glow of Echelon's power.



"We did it," she murmured.



"We did," agreed Tara. "There can't be far to go now."



Tara took Willow's hand and led her onwards, at a faster pace. They ran between the looming towers, which were growing closer on either side of them, the motions among the structures growing faster and more dynamic as they neared Echelon's core. Finally the red glow ahead grew to something approaching daylight, from between two towers so close there was only room for one person to slide between them. Tara went first, keeping hold of Willow's hand as she followed.



They emerged on a thin walkway running around the edge of a massive circular pit. Hundreds of metres beneath them a sea of pure power churned like magma, waves crashing together, sending bursts of energy arching through the air. Ahead of them, joined to the outer walkway by three narrow bridges, was the heart of Echelon, a solid half-sphere, its flat end facing upwards. From its centre a beam of pure red energy reached up, merging with other strands of power as it climbed through the miles-high chamber, finally emerging as the column of ash and fire that Willow and Tara had seen from outside the mountain.



"This is it," said Tara, taking her disc from her back and holding it tightly. She took Willow's hand and led her onto the nearest bridge, heading for the core. When they were half-way across the bridge a tortured scream echoed down the chamber from above. Willow and Tara both stared up, seeing a dim shape descending through the column of power far above them. The energy was tearing at it, shredding it to pieces even as it neared them. Fragments of it were breaking off, tumbling down into the magma sea beneath, becoming a constant storm of debris.



"What is it?" screamed Willow above the noise of tearing metal and explosions.



"Command Carrier!" yelled Tara. Willow stared up in shock, seeing the vague outline of the massive vessel's prow descending towards them. It was being torn to pieces, huge strips of its hull breaking away as the energy column lashed at it, but still it came, filling the whole width of the massive chamber.



"What the hell is it doing?" Willow yelled.



"Trying to terminate us! Come on," Tara pulled Willow forward, towards Echelon's core, "we're safe there!" Willow staggered along, noticing that, though the bridges and walkways were being struck with debris, the core was intact - the same energy that was tearing the Carrier apart was keeping its debris from striking Echelon's heart. Willow ran as fast as she could with Tara, trying to ignore the crashing of huge pieces of the Carrier on either side of her, thundering down towards the sea of power beneath them where they disintegrated without a trace. As Willow watched, the entirety of the Carrier's docking bay broke away and crashed through one of the other bridges.



She gasped with relief as she and Tara made it to the core. Looking down at the ground she stood on, Willow saw it was made of hundreds of geometric blocks, melded together to create the surface on which Echelon, the program itself, was housed. Its shape was barely visible from within the column of red light streaming up around it. Willow started forwards, but Tara quickly held her back, staring up. Willow followed her gaze, and saw, from the disintegrating wreckage of the Command Carrier, Rain diving towards them.



She landed on all four limbs and all eight of her spider-legs, somehow absorbing the massive force of her fall without crushing herself. The volcano chamber echoed with a colossal detonation as the remains of the Carrier, stripped of its outer hull and prow but still some four miles of solid simulation, tore apart. Rain stood up and slowly approached Willow and Tara, as the wreckage of the Carrier thundered down all around them, sparing only the core as it crashed into the magma sea and began to sink.



Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 28)

Postby justin » Sun Apr 20, 2003 11:36 am

Echelons certainly tricky. Using the illusion to buy time for the command carrier to arrive.



Though how do Willow and Tara know that what they're seeing is real? they might have just escaped from one illusion into another. They might only be in the outer sections of Echelon, with Echelon making them think that it's the core.



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


justin
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 28)

Postby chilled monkey » Sun Apr 20, 2003 11:54 am

I didn't get to see TRON as it was cancelled and replaced with something else :rage



Oh well, I still have this fic and that's all I need. It's shaping up for a truly spectacular climax.



I suppose that in the next update, we will learn Echelon's origins. Should be interesting.

chilled monkey
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 28)

Postby Grimlock72 » Sun Apr 20, 2003 12:47 pm

Why would Echolon kill it's own Command Carrier ?? Rain isn't the only soldier on board that vessel, all combined would easily outnumber Willow and Tara.



The simulation Echolon tried wasn't too bad but I smelled a trap before they entered the portal (mostly because it would be rather dissappointing to win so easily :) ). Also why would such a portal suddenly come into existance AND point straight to Willow's room ? Sloppy Echolon, sloppy :) .



Good thing the portal wasn't really a trap-door or something. The thing that interested me the most in that simulation is how Rain was killed, that might be valuable information later on.



Their current environment seems restricted as far as movement goes. Falling of those walk-ways wouldn't be healthy, right ? Hmm, what would happen if Echolon is killed while Rain is still alive ? Would she die automaticly ??



Btw. when you refer to _The Black Hole_ you mean this one ?



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 4/20/03 11:52:17 am
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Postby MellindraX » Sun Apr 20, 2003 5:27 pm

Ok, I just got caught up from being away for a few days. First of all, I bow to you as the best updater I have EVER read from. Major kudos about that! Second, this story is just getting better and better! Personally, my favorite part was Rain ripping Sark apart. Fun visuals :devilish

I'd beg for more updates, but I've bcome confidant in your ability to provide even without begging!

It is my solace, my home, the place where my walls crumble and fall away, because no one can know who I truly am. Thank goodness for the Internet, preserver of sanity! -Unknown

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Re: ...

Postby Artemis » Mon Apr 21, 2003 9:23 am

Thanks all :)



justin: I wanted something bigger and meaner than Tron's MCP - that visual was just a bit too un-evocative for me (is that a real word? Well, it is now). I love the way volcanoes look - they have a sort of life of their own that's utterly devoid of humanity. Lord of the Rings did it best in that shot of in Fellowship, during the prologue Last Alliance battle when the voice-over is saying 'at the foot of Mount Doom', and the camera pans up from the Orc army, *way* up, to look at the huge, churging ash/fire cloud. Not that LotR is the only time I've loved volcano imagery - Aliens used it well, I'm quite certain they deliberately made the Atmosphere Processor look volcanic. Plus I've spent a day wandering around the ruins of Pompei with Vesuvius looming on the horizon.



And yes, technically there's no way to know if what we're seeing now is reality or more illusion - but any time any story does an illusion scene, there's always going to be that doubt. I remember a story idea for Deep Space Nine (that eventually turned into 'Shadowplay', but was completely different from the original premise by then) where they would have had O'Brien imprisoned by aliens in a holographic jail. He'd break out, think he'd escaped, and then the world around him would revert back to his cell because he hadn't really got away. At the end of the show, when the rest of the crew had got him home, the last scene would be him and his wife sitting together, with her saying how glad she was he was back, and he'd say "That's just it, I don't know if I *am* back. I'll never know." That would have been an excellent Torture O'Brien episode (they did one of those every year or so).



Ultimately, there's no way to be sure. According to Descartes, we can't be sure of anything except that we exist - maybe we're being fed illusions constantly, maybe we really are in the Matrix, maybe (to use my old lecturer's example) we're just brain in jars on someone's desk. From Willow and Tara's point of view, they've fought the illusion as best they can, so they might as well just assume they've beaten it. If they haven't, they can't so why bother?



Speaking from my position as author, yes, they're in 'reality' again :)



chilled monkey: I'm not planning to spend *too* much time on Echelon's origins and background, but there'll be some explanation coming up.



Grimlock72: I knew someone was going to ask why the Command Carrier got trashed like that :) Two reasons. The 'story' reason is that it was the fastest way for Rain to get into the core of Echelon, taking the Carrier in and jumping off it once she was close enough to survive the fall. The real reason is I wanted to blow the thing up really elaborately, and if building that scene in CGI doesn't kill me, it'll look *really* cool.



In storyline terms, though, it makes a sort of sense. If Rain had parked the thing outside and gone in on her own, it would have taken longer to get there. The crew of the Carrier are expendable to Rain and Echelon - they wouldn't have been able to stop Tara anyway. In the system, a sufficiently powerful program *can* defy an army alone. Echelon's only defence is Rain, because she's the only program more powerful than Tara.



The illusion wasn't supposed to fool anyone very long (hence Sark's body being there, though we already know he's dead and dust). Echelon wasn't exactly controlling it, though - it was causing Willow and Tara to see what they wanted. They both wanted the bad guys dead, so they saw it. Given the option to take Tara with her, Willow would rather return to the real world; Tara, also, would rather go with Willow if she were able than have Willow stay in the system with her (as Willow's much more attached to her world than Tara is to the system) - so that's what they saw. The fault, as it turned out, is that neither Willow nor Tara know what Tara would look like if she were made human, so there was no template in their desires to create that illusion.



The current environment is exceedingly dangerous. Falling into the magma sea would be almost instantly fatal - a program would survive just long enough to be in hideous agony for a split second. If Echelon were terminated before Rain, Rain would probably be disoriented by the sudden loss of her link to Echelon (through the power she absorbed from Sark), but it wouldn't kill her.



And yes, that's the Black Hole I mean. Mostly, it's a fairly straight-forward adventure, but it has a lovely dark, gothic atmosphere, the Cygnus is a beautifully ominous ship, and the plot occasionally dips into some dark places. It's the kind of film that I really appreciate - it tries to be different. Even if it doesn't necessarily succeed at everything it tries, that elevates it above most of the formulaic movies I've seen.



MellindraX: Thanks :) Yep, being able to literally tear Warren, as Sark, to shreds was a nice scene for me to write (under the right circumstances, I can be *very* vindictive, and not at all nice). And there's still another Warren left! He he he...



Unfortunately, I have to break my habit of updating every day just now. Today was spent entirely on work on my website, and going out to see Chicago for the 8th time. Plus there was another thing that rattled me a bit, so I'm not quite in a writing mood just now. But fear not, the next chapter will be here tomorrow.

Artemis
 


Re: ...

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Tue Apr 22, 2003 5:30 am

Dammit!:ban
Quote:
"It's too easy," Willow said, "Echelon, Sark *and* Rain all terminated without us even having to do a thing, the portal coming out of nowhere, you being able to come into my world... it's too good to be true."
You got me again!:( Sucked in by my tendencies (with which - by now - you are all too familiar) toward the emotional.:miff



I was all ready to smack you (playfully) for sewing things up so neatly. NOW???:eek



I still begrudgingly like Rain...but I want her to lose. Is that so wrong?;)



No need to reply...I sit and sigh and wait for the denouement.



~Suse

"Now I have seen that sad surrender in my lover's eyes

But I can only stand apart and sympathize.

For we are always what are situations hand us-

It's either sadness or euphoria."
~Summer Highland Falls (Billy Joel)

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Re: ...

Postby Artemis » Tue Apr 22, 2003 11:33 am

Suse: No need to reply? I think not! I love feedback, it's only fair I answer it, and besides, what author doesn't like talking about his/her work? :)



I like Rain too. She's a sadistic bitch and a bloody menace to anything around her, but on those terms I like her. She's like the aliens (from the movie Alien - man, they need a name of their own). I first saw Aliens when I was 10, on the big screen no less (don't ask me what my parents were thinking), so I have a strange affection for the aliens. I'm glad Ripley wins against them, but I really feel something for their perfection as a predatory species - they're beautiful in a bizarre way. They're evil (from our point of view - they, of course, have no concept of morality at all), but they're pure evil, not evil out of bitterness, jealousy, inadequacy or any of the other petty motives that are generally to blame for humans being evil.



I'm not quite trying for that ideal with Rain - for one thing, she's not beautiful except in the way she moves, which is like a big cat on the prowl and thus has a certain elegance. And she's not 'pure', quite - revenge comes into her pursuit of Willow and Tara, after the setbacks they've caused her. But I've tried to keep her mostly away from the flawed motives and character traits that make Sark (and Warren, for that matter) such revolting specimens.



And now (despite taking the evening off to see Ned Kelly), it's time for the Big Duel, in which Tara gets to show off her Jet Li skills, and I get to use my favourite line from Aliens.

Artemis
 


Fic: TARA (chapter 29)

Postby Artemis » Tue Apr 22, 2003 11:35 am

TARA



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG

Summary: Cycorp programmer Willow Rosenberg knows her boss is up to no good - but can she break into the impenetrable Echelon system to prove it?

Spoilers: Pretty much none.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Tron' created by Steven Lisberger. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Twenty-Nine

--



Tara stepped in front of Willow, and behind her back held out her data disc. Willow took it.



"Wait for a clear shot," said Tara softly, her voice only just reaching Willow's ears above the noise of the Carrier's demise, "then throw it directly at Echelon. As soon as I get Rain out of the way."



"Tara-" began Willow nervously, as Rain stalked closer, flexing her bladed limbs.



"Don't worry," said Tara grimly, "she's not going to lay a hand on you."



She squared her shoulders and walked forward, heading directly for Rain. The two stopped in front of each other, each sizing the other up.



"Sacrificing yourself for the cause, little program?" taunted Rain. Tara met her stare unflinchingly.



"I'll give you this chance," said Tara, "stand aside. Otherwise one of us will be terminated. It won't be me."



Rain lashed out with both forearms at once, the blades folded inside her arms whipping out too quickly to see. Tara moved like lightning, striking the sides of both blades with her open palms, deflecting them. Even as they were missing her head by millimetres she launched a kick at Rain's chest, but the nightmare program flicked her abdominal claws up, crossing them over her chest and absorbing Tara's blow. Both programs eased back just a fraction, circling each other warily. Willow waited for an opening, but Rain kept herself between Willow and Echelon.



"I've beaten you before," said Rain.



"I know," replied Tara without feeling.



"No deactivation this time," spat Rain, "Echelon won't hold me back."



She leant forward, her body blurring with speed, and slashed four of her spider-legs at Tara's neck. Quick as a gymnast Tara bent backwards, the blades flashing over her body. Balancing on her hands she whipped both legs up, kicking Rain in the jaw. She completed the backflip and stood ready for Rain's next attack. Rain narrowed her eyes and stroked her jawline with her mandibles.



"You're stronger than before," she said.



"So are you," said Tara. "That's Sark's code inside you, isn't it?"



"He was always weak," grinned Rain. "What new code have you found, little program?"



"You couldn't begin to understand what I've found," said Tara quietly. She settled back, raised a hand, and gestured for Rain to attack. Rain almost took a step forward, then glanced sidelong at Willow, and held her ground between her and Echelon.



"Oh, no," she said lightly, "I won't fail so easily."



"Have it your way," said Tara.



She took two quick steps forward and launched herself at Rain. Rain dug her lower arachnid limbs into the ground and kicked up with both legs, springing into the air. Tara kicked at her body, but she twisted out of the way; in return Rain lashed both arms and her abdominal blades at Tara, but missed as Tara grabbed her forearms and swung herself over her head. Contorting to avoid Rain's crest of blades, Tara kicked her in the middle of her back, somersaulting to a landing as Rain fell to the ground. She was back on her feet in an instant, edging sideways as Willow moved to try to get a clear shot at Echelon beyond her.



Tara attacked again at once, driving Rain back with a flurry of blows. Rain blocked with inhuman speed, her blades and limbs flashing in front of her body, deflecting Tara's attacks as quickly as they came. For a moment Rain retreated, then she snarled and went on the offensive, striking at Tara every millisecond, her forward limbs aiming for her chest and stomach, her spider-legs curling around to attack her from the sides and above. Somehow Tara blocked every attack, glancing the blades off her forearms without being cut. Rain kicked at her legs and she turned her defensive jump into a kick, passing between Rain's attacking limbs to strike her in the chest, stalling her advance. Tara landed on the balls of her feet, like a dancer.



"Want to play rough, do you?" Tara said with a faint smile.



"You never were as good as me," snarled Rain.



"I don't enjoy inflicting pain," said Tara, her smile vanishing, "I wouldn't expect you to understand the difference."



Tara flipped forwards, kicking at Rain, both arms deflecting her blades as she flew. Rain dodged back a few inches, giving herself space to defend. Tara had barely landed when she launched herself again, sailing over Rain's spider-legs as all eight of them slashed low. Rain rolled beneath Tara and tried to catch her with her forearm blades, spearing them upwards, but Tara rolled sideways in mid-aid and slipped between the blades, landing on her hands. She reversed her direction, flipping forwards with a double kick, ending up on her feet with Rain twisting around to face her.



Rain lunged again, bladed limbs flying in all directions. Tara twisted impossibly, with Rain's blades passing above her, below her, millimetres from her face, her arms, her body, but never quite close enough. Tara turned her move into an attack, kicking then punching as she flipped over, flinging out whichever of her limbs was nearest Rain, who had to lean back to avoid the blows. Rain blurred forwards, trying to tackle, but Tara was already moving nearly as fast, and dodged out of the way. They ended up mere metres from Echelon itself.



"Come on," said Tara, "give me your best shot." For a second her eyes were on Willow, who understood, and drew her arm back, ready to throw the disc.



Rain yelled in anger and slashed down with both her forearms, blades extended like a pair of swords. Instead of dodging, Tara caught the twin blades between her palms, stopping them a fraction of an inch from her face. Rain stared in disbelief as Tara held her back.



"That's it?" taunted Tara. Rain struck out with her spider-legs, but Tara jumped, using the leverage she had on Rain's arms. As Rain's lower limbs tried to cut Tara's legs from under her, Tara leapt up, balancing on them for a split second. In the space of a heartbeat she had run up Rain's eight arachnid blades, sailed over her head, still holding her arms, and used all her weight and momentum to flip over, lifting Rain off the ground and throwing her towards the edge of the platform, towards the abyss beyond. Willow threw the disc.



"No!" Rain bellowed. She twisted in the air, thrashing her spider-legs at full stretch. Two of them caught the platform, gouging into it. The disc flew straight and level, aimed right at the centre of the dim shadow at the core of Echelon's beam of blood-red power. At the last second it rebounded off a force field, visible for an instant as a glassy column surrounding Echelon. The disc flew out across the magma sea and began curving back for Willow to catch.



Rain struggled for a moment, her legs and body hanging over the edge of the platform, then she hauled herself forward with her outstretched blades and flipped to her feet. She took half a step towards Willow and blurred, but in the instant she appeared a metre from Willow, Tara was there as well, cannoning into Rain from the side. Willow caught the disc and threw it again in a single motion, as Rain and Tara went down in a tangle of thrashing limbs.



Again the disc rebounded off the force field. Willow's gaze was wrenched away from it as she saw Tara fly backwards, thrown away by Rain. She landed on her feet, but with shallow cuts on her arms and legs where she had struggled with Rain's blades. No sooner had her eyes settled on Willow than she began to run directly towards her.



Willow spun around to see Rain lunging at her, blades drawn back to strike. She threw up her hands to protect herself, both unfolding into shields by instinct. At the last moment she realised Rain would miss her - her lunge took her past Willow, shoving her out of the way. Without realising she was doing it Willow formed a sword in her hand nearest Rain and slashed hard at her back, drawing a deep line of red between the thick joints at the base of the arachnid limbs sprouting there.



Then she saw what Rain was lunging for - Tara's disc, humming through the air, straight towards where Willow had been and where Rain now was. Rain leapt, stretching out; Tara leapt as well, like a diver, arms outstretched. Her hand closed around the edge of the disc just as Rain's forearm blades scissored into it from above and below. There was a blast of energy, throwing both programs back. Rain landed and rolled back to her feet. Tara staggered, holding the shattered remains of her data disc.



It was only then that the pain from Willow's attack seemed to register with Rain. She drew herself upright and twisted around to look at Willow, her face set in a cruel smile. In the instant Rain was distracted Tara collided with her, holding her around her waist, throwing her towards the edge of the platform. As Rain fell her spider-legs closed around Tara, holding her even as Tara let go, both of them sailing over the edge, over the sea of magma energy that was finally consuming the last of the Carrier's wreckage.



"*Tara*!" screamed Willow, lunging forwards without thinking. She fell at the edge of the platform, watching in slow motion as Tara and Rain fell away from each other. Tara was twisting around, reaching for a hand-hold that wasn't there. Willow screamed inarticulately, barely noticing as a tendril of red energy whipped out from behind her, reaching down towards the two falling programs. Tara's eyes locked on Willow for a moment, and her expression changed. Willow saw all her desperation, her fear, all vanish, leaving something beautiful in its wake, an expression that was fashioned from perfect peace.



Then her sight was blocked as Rain flew up towards her, a writhing mass of blades in the grip of a web of blood. Willow threw herself back, tears streaming down her face, as Rain came over the edge of the platform. The tendril of energy, emanating from Echelon itself, held her aloft, caressed her, covered her in strands of its own power. Rain's own tracery merged with it, flushing with newfound strength, creeping up over her face like a glowing tattoo. Her eyes, now shining red from edge to edge, settled on Willow.



"Go to hell!" Willow screamed, caught between the will to throw herself into the fire, and the need to somehow make Rain pay for what she had done. A slow smile spread across Rain's face as her clawed feet made contact with the platform's surface. She took two steps forward, staring at Willow, who couldn't move for the sobs wracking her body. Then she opened her mouth, and the deafening wave of sound that came from her throat was like the roar of a blast furnace. She spread her many limbs wide, readying all her blades to strike. Red energy ran across all of them, making them look as if they were already coated in blood.



Light flooded the vast chamber from behind Rain, pure, dazzling light, reducing her to a silhouette to Willow's eyes. She turned, and beyond her Willow saw Tara, rising up above them, the lines of power on her body so bright that only the edges still had a hint of green, and the centre of her tracery lines had become pure white. In one hand she held a sword, with a blade that glittered like solid diamond, and behind her billowing sheets of white light spread out like wings. And when she spoke, it was with the unconquerable voice of an avenging angel, filling the vast volcano:



"Get away from her you *bitch*!"



Artemis
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 29)

Postby chilled monkey » Tue Apr 22, 2003 12:38 pm

WOW! That was incredible! :applause



That was one of the best fight scenes I have ever read! Very well done. This fic should be made into a movie, I'm sure Amber Benson would be willing to learn some Matrix style wire-work.

What exactly has happened to Tara I wonder?

chilled monkey
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 29)

Postby justin » Tue Apr 22, 2003 1:19 pm

Wow! That fight was very exciting. You really described the combat well.



I especially like the Aliens moment at the end.



It seems that Tara's gotten a power boost from somewhere, but where?



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


justin
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 29)

Postby Grimlock72 » Tue Apr 22, 2003 2:41 pm

Yeah that would be my question as well. Though if Tara kept holding on to Rain (which I suspect she would) there's no logical way Echolon would be able to haul Rain back up without Tara.



I don't follow why Willow threw the disc a second time, any reason to assume the force-field would just dissappear ?? Just get closer to Echolon and either try to get the field down by direct contact, merge and go through it or as final option disconnect the power to Echolon to at least weaken the shield. But just throwing the disc again and again ain't gonna do much good I think :)



I'm wondering if there's a place on Rain's back where she can't reach with her arms. For some reason I keep thinking there should be such a safe place, assuming she's indeed as spider like as I keep thinking. Oh yeah, this line is rather obvious: " Rain blocked with inhuman speed"... Rain most definitly isn't human, heh. Neither is Tara which in this case is a good thing.



That fight-scene is going to be a lot of CGI work I'll tell you :-). ... not sure if I have those backflips you're so fond of, heh. Ouch... those moves are expensive, $35 each :( click here to see, motion captured should look nice though. (heh, motion capturing Tara...hmm....)



Good thing nobody saw me when I read that fight-scene either. I tend to try to follow such scenes by pretending I'm watching it as a movie. Kinda hard to explain why I'm moving my head around when my monitor is standing still, heh :)



Ah well, back to the story... I wonder how much power Rain can contain and/or handle. Sure Echolon has lots of power but dumping all that into Rain might just as well overload her, and that would be soooooo sad : -->>: .



At first I thought that the red power line was Willow trying to hold on to Tara. I suppose Willow and Tara's union could have something to do with Tara going down all peacefully but where the heck is Tara's power coming from ?



About Rain sacraficing the entire battlecruiser just to be on scene 3 seconds earlier... it would have worked a tiny better if we had had a scene in that cruiser of Rain obsessivly steering the cruiser amidst killed navigator programs :) . It shows that Rain doesn't do tactical very well, "Rain + 50 soldiers" is still more than just Rain. For starters, those 50 soldiers could have handled Willow while Rain kept Tara busy. Can't have a smart Rain though, wouldn't be good for Willow or Tara.



Yep, thats a line from _Aliens_ alright. Riply, true to form :-).



Hmm... can't Willow open a transit-connection to GDI and have their carrier come into lend a hand ? Seems Echolon's inner defenses are poor to say the least. Not a single soldier guarding the Echolon core itself, thats how to spell 'arrogance' for sure :) .



Grimmy

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She(Tara) knew that she was Willow too. If she knew that then why hadn't Willow herself? That wasn't fair. She was Willow. she should have known that first. -- Willow in _Sidestep Chronicle_ (part 80)

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 4/22/03 1:44:00 pm
Grimlock72
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 29)

Postby xita » Tue Apr 22, 2003 8:59 pm

Just wanted to say, I love the aliens' line at the end. Great action, once again!

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Si nos dejan buscamos un rincón cerca del cielo

Si nos dejan haremos con las nubes térciopelo



José Alfredo Jiménez

xita
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 29)

Postby chilled monkey » Wed Apr 23, 2003 4:11 am

Well there's always the option of making this fic into an on-line comic. A series of static images should be easier to do than moving ones. Either way, I'd like to see it.



By the way, the Aliens do have a name of their own. They are sometimes called Xenomorphs.

chilled monkey
 


Re: Fic: TARA (chapter 29)

Postby Artemis » Wed Apr 23, 2003 7:29 am

Thanks all :)



chilled monkey: The option I'm pursuing at the moment is rendering the story in still frames using Poser and Photoshop (for effects), essentially computer-generating the images for a comic. Animation is way, way beyond what I can do, both in terms of complexity and computing power, and of course it would require voices, and I don't know anyone who sounds like Willow and Tara (unless they're Australian all of a sudden) :) The comic may take a long time to do but (barring unforseen catastrophe) I *will* be doing it. I've always been very impressed by the amount of 'moving' action conveyed in comics (such as my favourite, Witchblade), so I know it can work.



Seeing as you mentioned Matrix, in this part: "She [Tara] settled back, raised a hand, and gestured for Rain to attack." Tara is doing Morpheus's little 'come on' gesture, and I'll be watching that scene carefully and building that frame of the comic to pay homage to it. Because Morpheus is incredibly cool :)



I know the aliens get referred to as xenomorphs, but that's not a species name - when Lt Gorman says it, he's obviously talking about alien animals in general (we never so find out if huamnity, in that setting, has encountered other living alien civilisations). Xenomorph just means 'alien', really. I just call them 'aliens' - or 'sexy aliens' when I want to freak people out.



justin: Yeah, that's the big question. I won't be going into too much detail on what Tara's done - the next part will explain a bit, but not completely. Suffice to say, for now, that she was faced with a situation that demanded more than she knew she was capable of. No-one *really* tries to fly until they've already fallen off a cliff.



Grimlock72: Tara fell away from Rain because she was trying to let go the whole time - her plan had been to push Rain off the platform, but not fall herself. Rain grabbed her and took her down with her. Even Rain didn't know Echelon was going to link with her like that.



Willow threw the disc again because she assumed (correctly, if she'd been able to do it enough times) that the disc would eventually break through the force field if she hit it enough. It's just a matter of persistence, like Tara blasting out the hull of the recogniser earlier on - keep hitting it until it shatters.



Rain doesn't have a 'blind spot' as such - there's a point just between her shoulderblades where her spider-legs can't reach (a very small spot - she's very flexible) but her arms, and the blades built in to them, can reach there.



I can't imagine the amount of work that would go into rendering that scene as an animation - that's why I'm sticking to stills. I know what it looks like moving, though, so it's just a matter of re-reading all the fight scenes in my issues of Witchblade to learn how they translate motion into still images, and keep it looking like it's moving. Since I started thinking about this, I've noticed there's a hell of a lot more thought in comics than most people realise :)



Willow and Tara's unity is the source of Tara's power, but not in a direct transfer-of-energy sense. The source of Tara's power is Tara.



I did actually have a scene planned where Rain would be standing on the deck of the incoming Carrier, with all the other programs dead around her. I just didn't quite find the moment for it - it would have either been before the illusion sequence, in which case seeing Rain there would have undercut the illusion *too* immediately (I wanted it to seem almost convincing until they find Sark's body as well), or after it, in which case it would have cut some surprise out of the Carrier's appearance in the volcano.



You're right though, Rain doesn't do tactical well. If Rain has a failing in combat, it's that she's pretty much obsessed with facing her opponents one-on-one. The notion of having a bunch of soldiers to help her out is sort of unsatisfying to Rain. She wouldn't have gone alone if she had been able to get herself and the soldiers into Echelon as quickly, but given the delay of offloading troops from the Carrier and leading them in, she wasn't really concerned that the more direct approach - piloting the Carrier straight into Echelon's core and diving off it as it de-rezzed - was one that only she could do and survive.



GDI isn't really in a position to help immediately - they've still got Echelon's army camped out in front of their walls, wondering what to do now that their leaders seem to be otherwise occupied :) A GDI Carrier-class simulation could reach Echelon without a transit beam, if they knew where to go, but Echelon's 'location' in the system remains hidden from them. And while it's true to say Echelon's inner defences aren't very secure in this instance, it's a matter of perspective - you could equally say that Sauron's defences were pretty shoddy, if a pair of hobbits could sneak all the way to Mount Doom. It's not a matter of walls and guards, it's a matter of recognising the potential for that kind of threat. Echelon (and Sauron - the volcano imagery isn't the only parallel) expected an assault to be of the big, massed-armies variety.



xita: Thanks :) I'm a big Aliens fan, and I love the whole construction of the scenes leading up to Ripley's appearance in the power loader. I find it a really good example of a whole movie peaking at a single point, just the way it should.

Artemis
 

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