Since I'm pretty happy with the essay as it originally came out - unlike the first two, which were almost totally rewritten from their originals - I thought I'd just put the changes here in the same thread for you to look at:
The second paragraph now looks like this, switching the positions of my email and Ang's article:Nevertheless, the issues of Tara's death last season on [u:aed80a6ff2]Buffy the Vampire Slayer[/u:aed80a6ff2] and the season in general haven't let me off the hook yet. I'm continuing to receive emails responding both to the three essays I've written on the subject and to my recent
review of the pilot for [u:aed80a6ff2]Firefly[/u:aed80a6ff2]. On top of that, there's a new article going around, with the title "
Misrepresentations. Misunderstandings. Slurs and allegations." It's an interesting title, because while the article does made some reasonable points, it also contains exactly what it says - misrepresentations, misunderstandings, slurs and allegations. In this case, directed toward me. It's all made me think a bit more about the relationship between Mutant Enemy and the fans in general.
And the paragraph that follows - the first one of the new section - now looks like this:Lets look at the rebuttal article, which was written by someone calling herself Ang. It covers pretty much the same ground as the emails Ive been receiving, and its laid out well enough that we can explore all the issues in turn. As I said, the article does make some reasonable points, but in some cases it does so by refuting a point that I didnt actually make, and in other cases it does so by ignoring evidence, even when that evidence is in plain sight.
The first paragraph after the two example quotes from my essay now looks like this:I've been very careful throughout my essays to make sure that what I said wouldn't be seen as a claim that anyone at Mutant Enemy was homophobic. Why? Because I don't believe that anyone at Mutant Enemy was homophobic. I never have. I believe they were [i:aed80a6ff2]careless[/i:aed80a6ff2] and [i:aed80a6ff2]irresponsible[/i:aed80a6ff2] by not paying attention to the consequences of what they were doing, and I made every effort to stress that point. The first words you see in the title of my first essay are "[b:aed80a6ff2]It's not homophobia[/b:aed80a6ff2]." How much more clear can I get?
Next, I changed what I had Oliver Stone say in my paragraph about the government-hating neighbor to make him sound more like Joss.Again, shes right - but again, is the comparison valid? Her neighbor might have decided to hate the government without Oliver Stones help, but as someone who hates the government, her neighbor might look to Oliver Stone as a sympathetic figure, perhaps even as a champion for the cause of hating the government. Imagine what would happen if Oliver Stones next movie had a very pro-government message - a story where a group of CIA assassins were the heroes, for example. Suppose Oliver Stone gave an interview where he said, The needs of the story required me to trust the government. I treated the CIA hitmen as individuals, not as government workers. Besides, hating the government is so pass. Im over that. Wouldnt Ms. Angs neighbor feel like Oliver Stone had become a traitor to the cause?
I've greatly expanded the reply to Ang's bit about Joss giving 90% of the fans what they need. Here it is:This line of argument makes a couple of highly dubious assumptions.
First, it assumes that continuing the Willow/Tara relationship and "major Willow drama" were mutually exclusive - that the couple had to be "perfectly happy" in order to be acceptable on the show. I've said several times now that the Dark Magic Willow story could have been achieved in a way that didn't require Tara's death (and I'll do so again in a few moments). But even if you don't believe me, I would think the brain-sucking story arc from Season 5 was all the proof you'd need that the Willow/Tara relationship and "major Willow drama" were capable of coexisting.
Second, it assumes that the only people who cared about the Willow/Tara relationship were lesbians. I myself am living proof to the contrary (unless your definition of "lesbian" includes the Riley Finn sense of the word, at any rate). Fans of Willow and Tara include both men and women, both gay and straight. Willow and Tara were voted "Best Couple" in this year's "Golden Fang Awards" at
The Succubus Club. The gay and lesbian fans may have been the ones who benefited [i:aed80a6ff2]directly[/i:aed80a6ff2] in social terms from the portrayal of Willow and Tara, but that didn't mean others couldn't appreciate it or enjoy it.
I added the quote mscheckmate found in the [i:aed80a6ff2]Salt Lake Tribune[/i:aed80a6ff2] to the quotes about the ratings, and left the other three as they were. I then added these comments on reruns:One more thing about the summer rerun ratings - a number of people have emailed me to claim that the low numbers don't count, because after all they're only for reruns. But remember that Hollywood depends on the audience's willingness to watch a show repeatedly, especially on a series like [u:aed80a6ff2]Buffy[/u:aed80a6ff2], which runs roughly one million dollars in the red per episode. There's money to be made in the reruns on FX, syndicated reruns on local TV stations and DVD sales - but if viewers aren't even willing to tune in for a second broadcast on UPN, the prospects for all those other avenues aren't good.
Finally, I added this paragraph to my closing, after my quote from Ben's round table piece:Mind you, I don't feel this way about [i:aed80a6ff2]everyone[/i:aed80a6ff2] who disagrees with me on this issue. I know there are plenty of people out there with different but no less rational points of view, and I have no problem agreeing to disagree with them. It's just that generally speaking they aren't as [i:aed80a6ff2]noisy[/i:aed80a6ff2] about their views, and so I sometimes feel like they've been overwhelmed by their more enthusiastic comrades.
The rest of the changes are simple grammar touch-ups and smooth-outs.
What do you think? Do the changes work?