AU Fic: SUNRISE

[fidds]

great update!

i love to read about their thoughts and feelings for each other

can't wait for the next update



*Hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

[mollyig]

Lovely start, you've set the scene well, giving us background on both. I like when Tara says that even though she's a romantic at heart that she never before believed in love at first sight.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

[Darn Salem Judges]

Hey Aimee!! Totally excellent update!!



Had a really bad day 2day and coming home and reading this made me feel so much better! THANX!! XxX



Can't wait to see how this progresses!! U TEASE! hehehe!



Love to all Kitties cuz u guys rock!!

Em xXx

AMBER: It's been really interesting because, you know, I've never stuck my tongue in a girl's mouth before!

[ally02]

Aww Tara testing Willow's name...how cute?!? Also after what Wiccanwiggle said - I am quite worried this story is gonna end with them all dieing and some guy with a bad Welsh asking a bunch of dead people if they are alive!! No offence to anyone here who happened to die on the titanic And what a shame for Tara thrown through a window and all! I hate those smell MacLay men! Mostly cos they are men! Loved Willow's little recollection at the end. For someone who's so smart it did take her a while to put attracted to women and gay together. Wow what a long reply! Leaving now!



love Aly xxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

[wiccanwiggle]

Poor Tara



Tho not to fear, Willow's here. I'm sure she is going to make it all better



Maybe this story will have Tara drawing Willow wearing nothing but a necklace and a smile!!



Great update and am now looking forward to Wednesday! Thank you Aimee!



Flo xxx

Everybody's Gettin' Spanked But Me...!

[ally02]

OMG if that happens - I want a copy of the drawing! :O



love Aly xxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

[pikescoob]

That was so cute of Tara to test out Willow's name....and when her arm brushed Willow's....awwww.....this is so sweet.



--Michelle

[snuggle79]

very lovely! very well written! very enjoyable!

Oh baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Hi, um Tara..how are you? well...I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time...for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

[MadeinNZ]

Looks like our girls have hitched a ride on The Love Boat. Captain Stubing at the helm.



Really enjoying it so far.

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"When someone falls for Willow, they stay fallen" - Normal Again

[ExtraFlameyWT]

Thank you for all your wonderful feedback everyone! I was really blown away by your kind words and encouragement...



JD: ...pregnant pause...hehe, I don't rock! But thanks anyway!



Ellie: Yep! More Wednesday! *looks out at Ellie camping outside thread* You sure you don't want to wait in here? I can make it nice and cozy...



fidds: Thank you...I like seeing their thoughts, as well. I feel it's important to know what's going on in their minds...



mollyig: *sigh* I'm a romantic at heart, too. Thanks for the feedback!



Darn Salem Judges: I'm really sorry about your day..I'm glad I could help! Hehe...I'm SO a tease!



ally02: No worries about a Titanic type ending...And yes, Maclay men suck!



wiccanwiggle: I really just think you're horny. I'm just kidding. Thanks so much for the replies! And you don't have to thank me...I love writing this!



ally02: Hehe...wouldn't we all want a copy?



pikescoob: Thanks! I liked how she tested her name, too.



snuggle79: Lots of "very"s...Thank you very much!



MadeinNZ: Thank you so much...ahh, the Love Boat...



Thanks to everyone! I'm signing off for the night...I have a long day at work tomorrow. Yuck...I'd much rather be writing.



Aimee

*****
"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

[SlayerTazz]

Great start - I can't wait to read more. I love the first meetings between W/T.

A dream is a wish the heart makes.

Willow: "You had two eggs, sunny-side-up. I remember because they were wiggling at me like little boobs."

Tara: "Sassy Eggs."

[witchbitchwillow]

aimee- well its not to bac relaly, i have my little camp fire and my guitar, but ure welcome to come join me.



oh but could you bring some marshmallows please??



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

[Kieli]

Ok now Aimee, you have to do an update. You see this last bit made me a puddle on the floor so if I have any hope of saving any last shred of dignity, you'll give us what we crave, MORE PLEASE!

Love is tricky. It is never mundane or daily. You can never get used to it. You have to walk with it, then let it walk with you. You can never balk. It moves you like the tide. It takes you out to sea then lays you on the beach again. Today's struggling pain is the foundation for a certain stride through the heavens. You can run from it but you can never say no. It includes everyone."--Amy Tan "The Hundred Secret Senses"

[ExtraFlameyWT]

slayertazz: thanks...I'm glad you're enjoying it!



Ellie: I'm glad it's not too bad...I will happily join you and bring marshmallows!



Kieli: Hehe...look for an update a little after midnight eastern time...



Thanks!



Aimee

*****
"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

[ExtraFlameyWT]

Hey..I got it up a little earlier than I expected. Hope you don't mind..



Here goes:



TITLE: Sunrise

AUTHOR: ExtraFlameyWT

DISCLAIMER: Don’t own them, they belong to Joss, ME, UPN, etc.

SPOILERS: None

RATING: PG-13

FEEDBACK: Yes, if you feel the desire to do so…please feel free.

AUTHOR’S NOTE: This is an AU fic, and all thoughts are in italics..

SUMMARY: This fic takes place mostly on a cruise ship..Willow and Tara have both been sent on vacations by their friends.



SUNRISE



PART 3



Tara was off balance when she pulled away so quickly, and she started to fall. Willow rushed forward, and grabbed the blonde woman before she fell completely.



The redhead cradled Tara in her arms. “Are you okay?” She asked as she brushed blonde locks away from blue eyes.



Tara was looking into the green depths of Willow’s eyes in a mixture of wonder and embarrassment. “Yeah,” she breathed.



Willow smiled genuinely, and whispered, “Good.”



That seemed to bring Tara back down to Earth, and she looked away from Willow. “I-I’m sorry f-for being so c-clumsy.” She pulled herself out of Willow’s arms, albeit reluctantly, and tried to stand up.



Willow scrambled up, and reached to help Tara. “Why are you sorry, it’s alright. You didn’t do anything wrong.” The redhead took Tara by the hand pulled her up. Once Tara was standing, Willow didn’t relinquish the hand.



They both looked at the clenched hands and Willow slowly let go. Her hand moved to the hem of her skirt, where she played idly with a loose string.



“I’m s-sorry. I have to go. Thank you for c-catching me.” Tara ran off.



Willow was shocked. “Wait! Don’t you want to watch the sunrise?” Tara didn’t hear Willow yell after her, though, and Willow sighed sadly. She turned back to the railing and it was then she realized that they had already missed the sunrise. The red morning sun shone just above the water on the horizon.



So much for that, Willow thought morosely. Like she could ever like you.



End Part 3



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No more till Friday...I think.



Aimee

*****
"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

[willntlover]

Evil!!! Pure evil!! you can't leave it right there!!



Loved it



-Will

"Hear that baby? You're my always."

"well, you know, when you play a lesbian witch you've gotta get killed in this fun kind of exciting way, so the heart was the way to go..."

"we have the most amazing fans though they LOVE us."

[ExtraFlameyWT]

willntlover: okay...so I'm evil. Did I ever deny it? I'm just kidding. Umm..since I left you hanging with that one, I think I'll post Part 4 either tomorrow or Thursday. It's my favorite part that I have written so far...



Thanks for the feedback!



Aimee

*****
"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

[The Rose24]

I just read this story today, and I must say you have done a beautiful job with what you have written so far. I like the stories that are away from Sunnydale the best because Willow is not really herself around Xander and Buffy. She is always wearing her brave face around them. The main reason why I love the W/T relationship is because we learn more about Willow through Tara's eyes. Willow never has to put up a front with Tara. If she did, Tara would call her on it anyway.

Willow always has to confess.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.

Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

[Thanatopsis]

Just started reading this. AU's are always fun. And I like how you started them in this incredibly romantic setting and yet they're both so filled with doubts. Waiting to see what you do next.

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No, it's great... if we want to make ferns invisible, or communicate with shrimp, I've got the goods right here.

[SlayerTazz]

UPDATE - UPDATE...can't leave it there...torture...can't wait for the next one!!

A dream is a wish the heart makes.

Willow: "You had two eggs, sunny-side-up. I remember because they were wiggling at me like little boobs."

Tara: "Sassy Eggs."

[witchbitchwillow]

wahooo, great update!!!



more friday you say?



cheers for marchmallows, i think i might set outide with my hammock this time. only a couple pf nights i thik i can cope.



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

[mollyig]

Ah Tara all insecure about what she was feeling ran away. But hey, they're on a boat, which is good, they have to meet again at some time.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

[pikescoob]

Yeah....heh....there's only so far Tara can go cuz a boat kinda has limitations. Awww....Willow thinks she doesn't like her. I'm really enjoying this fic



--Michelle

[AmberBensonRockzMyWorld]

Great update, I hope you post the next part real soon. That was so cute, Willow catching Tara. You rule.

Much Love,

Lisa

This is our Last Embrace, Must I dream and Always see your face.~ Jeff Buckley "Last goodbye"

[snuggle79]

great update! But Friday?? That's way tooooo long to wait...

Oh baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Hi, um Tara..how are you? well...I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time...for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

[wiccanwiggle]

Nice! Very 18th Century-esque...the sunrise, slight touch of arms, Willow caching Tara, Tara runing off...



Loved it!



See Aimee, i'm not just horny, i'm also a complete romantic!



Hopefully more soon!



Flo xxx

Everybody's Gettin' Spanked But Me...!

[ally02]

Nooo cant wait till Friday - its so Fri and day!! Waaa may go insane...I told the cats! lol Great update....awww so cute!



love Aly xxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

[fidds]

great update!

very cute





*Hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

Edited by: fidds at: 6/27/02 8:36:40 am

[StRaWbErRy]

Ack! That's it?!?! You're stopping THERE!?!!? Okay that is just plain mean.



Anyway. You write really well. I can't wait for the next update, and please make it soon! Or else i will drop dead on the spot. Ah...dear, dear.



-SB

[SquishyTrishy]

See, I am so not the only one. Reading, reading..o there isnt any more ..yet :'( :'( LOL. Keep going girl. You kick butt!



Hugs

Trish