funkyasian's random poetry and other writings...

[funkyasian]

i'm a posting fiend!!



okay...so here's something i wrote up while i was supposedly learning about anti-harassment policy of my glorious company...yeah...didn't hear a whole heck of a lot...hope i don't have to ever call upon that knowledge



for my love...



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torrents of emotion

tears of joy streamed down

the guard at last overpowered

your eyes shone with love

my heart filled

our souls finally complete

promises of forever

sealed with a kiss

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oh yeah...and thanks to aimee for giving me "constructive criticism"



~steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[ExtraFlameyWT]

woo hoo for a poem!!! great job, steph. i loved it.



eep, gotta run...take a shower, and study for my physics exam...



love,



Aimlet

Edited by: DrG at: 12/13/02 2:03:26 pm

[TheWhiz]

Wow! 2 Great poems, completing contrasting the dark and light- wonderfully written I'm glad you continue to post and share your work.

[Drakkenfyre]

Steph, my dearest, if you continue to post such wonderful work, I shall have to lay down my pen and retire. You have a fantastic talent. Never let anyone tell you differently.



The Lady Dragon

I am the dragon that hides from the sun and flies in the moonlight.

[tiredsoul]

There's that silver lining you were talking about



This was great Steph. I like the obvious feeling behind it. promises of forever/sealed with a kiss Wow.



Update for update, huh? I don't know. How about word for word?



Keep it up you posting fiend!



And this new reply screen is freaking me out!



--celia

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"That was just rude. Now I forget what I was saying."

[SquishyTrishy]

hey beautiful



you already know what i think of your words, i just wanted to leave you note.



note;

~I am my beloved's and my beloved is mine!~ Soul Shatter

[ninjitsugrrl]

Wow, lovely poem. The ending is very strong, "promises of forever/ sealed with a kiss". I love those lines.

"I know the answer! The answer lies within the heart of all mankind! The answer is twelve? I think I'm in the wrong building." - Lucy in "Peanuts" by Charles Schultz




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[barnabasvamp]

Such wonderful words. The progression of each work seems to lead right into the next! And the ending for this one, so powerful.

BV

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

[funkyasian]

*ExtraFlameyWT* - always first in line, my loyal fan...although, you tend to be a bit...ripe? anyway, hope you like the new one...



*TheWhiz* - hey there...i'm glad you like both the dark and the light stuff...i like to explore both sides of the spectrum, and hopefully i've done an okay job at expressing myself.



*Drakkenfyre* - LAURA!!!! *hugs* i'm so glad you stopped by. as for retiring, there will be none of that talk ...i have so much to go before i can even dream of catching up with you - that's something i'm aspiring to... love you...



*tiredsoul* - hey celia - so...no update for update? eh, oh well...it was worth a shot wasn't it?



*SquishyTrishy* - hello my sweets. you know it means the world to me when you actually stop by...and yes, i know you read all of this stuff before it gets posted...but...i like it when you stop by... - love you beautiful...



*ninjitsugrrl* - hey there...good to see you again. the last two lines are probably my favorite too...kinda makes me want to breathe a sigh of contentment.



*barnabasvamp* - hey there...i'm glad you're enjoying my poems. i hope you'll keep coming back...and i promise i'll try my best not to disappoint!



well lovely readers, that's all the replies for now...*whew* - can i just mention that i've had to type the same stuff over a few times 'cause i'm retarded and would keep clicking on links that come up in IM windows...which then changes this window...thus losing all the replies i worked so hard on!!

but i triumphed in the end!! okay...a new poem soon...just have to work out a few wording issues and it should be posted either tonight or early tomorrow morning. thanks again all...



~steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[ExtraFlameyWT]

Hi, Steph! I love that smiley, it's so cute!



So you had trouble posting replies? I think you were supposed to, cuz you were mean to me...



I can't wait for more!



Love,

Aimlet

Watch out for ankle-biters.

[funkyasian]

Good evening all...thought i'd liven up a dreary monday evening with a poem...btw...if anyone has any doubt, ALL POETRY POSTED ON THIS THREAD ARE REGARDING WILLOW AND TARA AND THEIR LOVE - just in case anyone didn't catch the memo...



and on with the show...



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I’ve drowned a thousand times

Your oceans of blue

Engulfing me

A willing captive

Bonded to a heart so gentle

Forgiving my trespasses

Drawing me into your sanctuary

Boundless love

Passes

Infused

In a kiss of heated passion

My prayer answered

My absolution

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i think it's a bit rough around the edges still...but hey...i've been working on SMS all night and my brain has turned to mush ...so this will have to do...hope you all like it!!



~steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[ExtraFlameyWT]

wow, steph...this is beautiful!!!



These two lines

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I’ve drowned a thousand times

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A willing captive

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are my favorite...i don't know why, exactly...they just are awesome.



umm, right...well, i think i have to go do some homework...otherwise i WILL be kicked in the knee tomorrow by several people...



Great poem!!!



Love,

Aimlet

Watch out for ankle-biters.

[barnabasvamp]

Quote:

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In a kiss of heated passion

My prayer answered

My absolution

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I loved this! One kiss having such an effect on the soul!

BV

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

[The Pineapple Head]

Steph - Quite the poem you have there. It's very powerful both in its imagery and emotion. Something about that "willing captive" line that sticks in my head. Losing yourself, only to have someone else discover you.



Diana

Early one morning the sun was shining, I was laying in bed - Wondering if she changed at all, if her hair was still red.

[SquishyTrishy]

<------(note, these things are so cool)





i think my love *makes her thinky face* i really like this one..



yours,

~I am my beloved's and my beloved is mine!~ Soul Shatter

[ninjitsugrrl]

Really, the whole poem is simply lovely. I especially liked this bit, "Forgiving my trespasses/Drawing me into your sanctuary/Boundless love..." Well done!

"I know the answer! The answer lies within the heart of all mankind! The answer is twelve? I think I'm in the wrong building." - Lucy in "Peanuts" by Charles Schultz




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[urnofosiris]

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just in case anyone didn't catch the memo...

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Nope, I didn't get the memo seeing as you had not mentioned Willow and Tara before in this thread, though it should of course be a given that all poetry should be about Willow and Tara on a WillowTara board. It does not go without saying however, so the big yellow fonts are most welcome. Thanks.

[TheWhiz]

Beautiful poem- I loved the opening 3 lines:

'I’ve drowned a thousand times

Your oceans of blue

Engulfing me'

Great work

[tanniyn]

Um....Hi! I just thought I would tell you I love your poetry!!! Please keep posting. I have been a poetry lover for years and am always amazed at the creativity of writers on this board. I find that poetry is like using a "punching bag" for your emotions. You write, you fight, you get them out. All is good, no worries. Hope to see more from you soon.



Perhaps with your encouragement I might be willing to post some of my own stuff...okay scarednow...



Thanks again,

Tanniyn

And from the ashes of destruction emerged a dragon...

[SquishyTrishy]

wow..now doesnt this poem just sing tara and will?



Thats just the sweetness my beautiful..u have the whole godess thing going for u, the look, the talent for beautiful poetry, the love, the beautify, the power..hehe but i am the ONLY one that gets to whorship you. *gives u a devilish grin* so what can i do to convince u for more lovely w&t poetry?



hehehehe

[funkyasian]

it seems that monday is the day that i decide to say my hellos , and give my thank you's ...and if i feel the mood strike me, i just might have a poem to post after all this



*ExtraFlameyWT* - hola aimlet...and once again, you're first...and once again i thank you for your "wow". you really flatter me too much you know...my head will grow to this abnormal size and it'd be all your fault... but of course i'm not saying stop with the compliments!!



*barnabasvamp* - hi bv - i'm a firm believer that religion exist not in the traditional form but within ourselves, so to me, it's only natural that when together with your soul mate, you will find absolution...i'm so glad you like it...



*The Pineapple Head* - hey diana...don't all of us experience that at some point? feeling as if we're so lost, only to be found...and so willingly surrender our heart and soul to another...in any case...at the risk of sounding formal, i'm glad you stopped by...



*SquishyTrishy* - hi my love...i figured you would like this one... love you...



*ninjitsugrrl* - *makes a sweeping bow* - thank you for your affirmation...it's always nice to know my work is appreciated...



*DrG* - hey there...i'm glad the memo went through then and you've received it...at least that's one thing that's working for me...



*TheWhiz* - hola! thank you for your compliments...i really like the beginning lines too...eyes to me are one of the most attractive features...and to be able to lose yourself in your lover's eyes...i think is pure heaven...thanks for stopping by!



*tanniyn* - woohoo!! a new face!! it's always nice to have a new face amongst my supporters. i'm glad you like my poems...and you're right, writing is an outlet, a way to let off steam. anyway...i can't wait to see some of your stuff...new poets are always exciting (yeah, listen to me, like i'm such an old timer )



*SquishyTrishy* - hi baby girl again...well, i think the whole point was to have it scream w&t - ya think it worked??



wow...so that's it...thank you all again for your support and incredibly kind words...it's the people who make up this board that makes coming back and sharing what i write and how i feel worth while...



~steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

Edited by: Warduke at: 12/23/02 8:01:16 pm

[funkyasian]

well, color me confused...a curious thing happened...i thought i posted this poem last night...but maybe a slip of my finger (or brain or whatever) made it disappear...*shrug* so here we go again...



disclaimer: well, yes it's about w/t...quick look at the love they make...



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Slowly stroking

Your skin burning

Setting me aflame

Scent of arousal

Taste of sweetness

Soaking

Assaulting

My senses reeling

Your love flowing

Sweet lava

Velvet softness grasp me

You become my world

My universe

Eternity starts now

Forever is this moment

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hope you like...and hope i don't do anything stupid to make it disappear again...

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

[urnofosiris]

There can never be enough WT loving on a WT forum. That was a lovely poem, thank you.

Edited by: DrG at: 12/24/02 8:25:32 am

[SquishyTrishy]

+ =



My beautiful baby girl, you know how much i love this poem. Which is very incretibly muchly greatly lots..i love my sweets.

[funkyasian]

quick thanks first then on with something new...



*DrG* - well, you're right, there can't be enough of w/t lovin'...thanks for reading!!



*SquishyTrishy* - hello there my love...i know how much you like my poems...and well...it makes me feel warm and fuzzy to make you feel all warm and fuzzy - i miss you baby...hurry home...



okay...so here's something new...hope you all enjoy...and merry belated christmas to all who celebrated...



disclaimer: i never liked the idea of the candle being blown out after the end of NMR, great for an ending of an episode, not so good for the whole romantic lighting thing while you're...doing whatever...so, i've resurrected the candle...



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Soft glow

Ethereal light

Sheen of sweat

Reflecting

Entwined bodies

Soft breaths

Whispers of love

Promises of atonement

In a darkened room

The candle burned on the windowsill

Lighting the path to forever

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hope you all have a great upcoming weekend...just wanted to add an end note to my girl...happy anniversary my love, you are my forever...

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

Edited by: funkyasian at: 12/26/02 9:10:33 pm

[ExtraFlameyWT]

WOOHOO!!!! TWO WT POEMS!!!! I love them both, Steph...the last line of the second poem really sticks with me...I love it! Wonderful job, as usual...



Can't wait for another!!!



Love,

Aimlet

Watch out for ankle-bit[/i]

[The Pineapple Head]

Steph - Well you're not the only one that's confused, because I could have sworn that I responded to your previous poem. Oh well, must be the tragic forgetfulness of youth. At any rate, by now you have to know just how talented you are and that I simply adore reading your work.



Diana

Early one morning the sun was shining, I was laying in bed - Wondering if she changed at all, if her hair was still red.

[SJ]

Great poetry

[tiredsoul]

Now I missed two pieces ... my bad.



Got to give you a for the first one. Quite the image you painted there



And the last one. I like how you reconstructed the candle.

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Whispers of love

Promises of atonement

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Love it. Thanks for sharing. More please.



--celia

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The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.

[tanniyn]

Um...Hi! Don't know if you remember me or not but I just wanted to tell you I just read your last 2 poems and...well....



Really, those were great!!! I'm still trying to work up the courage to post my own stuff. One big .



Again, great poems and please keep writing.



Tanniyn

And from the ashes of destruction emerged a dragon...