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Re: NEW FIC: "Finding You"

Postby pikescoob » Fri Oct 18, 2002 5:36 am

Loved the updates Sleek :grin Will must be kinda freaked from her encounter with that Phoebe chick, I know I would be. Interesting how Tara thought the cat was trying to say something to her :p Should be interesting to see what Serendipity tries to do to help T find W. Can't wait for more :D



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: NEW FIC: "Finding You"

Postby barnabasvamp » Fri Oct 18, 2002 5:51 am

*BV slides into the seat beside saule77, and takes a glance at jen in the window seat* Had to go and request more munchies, girls. After these last 2 updates, I think we are gonna have to tighted the seat belts a little tighter, and hang on!

Sleek, Whew-had me scared for Tara with that pushy Phoebe chick. Miss kitty to the rescue :bounce

More soon? (to early for beer, will have expresso instead)

BV

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

barnabasvamp
 


Part 6 Dreaming

Postby Sleek » Fri Oct 18, 2002 5:56 am

Author's note:

Thanks for appreciating my work. You don't know how much it keeps me going!




KJchicago
hope you'll like my AU

4WiccanLuv
thanks for reading! more to commme.



Michelle
yeah, it sucks to say goodbye to old memories. but there are new ones to collect.

Mollygig
Willow is worried alright. And yeah, I deliberately made Linda annoying. Can't risk having Tara warming to someone else now can we?



Snuggle79
your wish is my command. update is here.



BV
hope yer still readin with yer chips. enjoy!

Liz
i hope you'll like
this
part.

saule77
hey, so you're the captn of the Fate plane.Thanks for the flight announcement.



Jen
all in good time. our gurls will find each other. sit back and relax.

MissTizzyFantastico
Thank you for your words of encouragement. you don't know how much this helps in my writing.

BTVSfunatic
Keep beein hooked. i have great hooky plans for this fic.



Will
patience my kitten. all in good time..



on to the update!


***

There is a smattering of R scenes. Kittens, you have been warned!



I'm sorta nervous about this one.



****


Part 6


Dreaming




"Oh baby…that feels
sooo
good!"Willow moaned softly.

The supple, hot body of her lover pressed urgently against Willow's naked form. A breathless gasp escaped Willow's parted lips as she felt the tender weight of two full breasts rub slowly against her sensitive inner thighs.

The woman on top proceeded to rake her nipples across Willow's fevered belly until their breasts kissed.

Willow ran a palm over her lover's graceful back and reveled in the silky smooth texture her skin. The pleasure was almost too much to bear.


Jasmine. I'm rolling in petals of jasmine.


Willow arched her back, hungry for more delicious contact. She wrapped her slender legs around her lovers' buttocks as she reached out trembling fingers and tenderly caressed the face of the woman she loves.

"Ahh.." Willow stirred awake. Popping open her sleep drugged eyes, she noticed that her pillows and sheets were quite rumpled and damp from her sweat.

Willow sat up and sniffed something in the air. Her bed kinda smells….
musky
.Realizing what that could possibly mean, Willow glanced down at her shorts and noticed that she was also quite damp between her legs.

A warm flush spread over her cheeks.Good thing Buffy wasn't sharing the room with her anymore.Buffy would probably tease her about how flushed she is, all for a wo--


Wait a minute…Did I just dream of making love to a woman?


Catching her reflection on the dresser mirror, red hair tousled, lips dry and partially open--Willow knew it was true.

It was nice. Willow decided.No..it was more than nice.It was…it was…

A giddy grin stole across Willow's features.It was
hot
and
sexy.
Something she hadn't felt in a long time since Oz…

Willow stopped herself.


Well, in case I turn out to be kinda gay, would it mean I would stop thinking about Oz?


It's been days now since she had wondered about her werewolf ex.What he did still hurts.

Willow shuddered involuntarily at the memory of his infidelity.

But it's not so hard to deal with what happened.
Not anymore.


Willow realized something new. Yes, it still hurt. But now she can see herself moving forward. Maybe to other possibilities.
Maybe hook up with a woman,
Willow thought idly.

Worry suddenly creased her face.
But what that psychic said though…I was supposed to meet someone yesterday….a female someone..


To delay is to die.

Willow felt anxiety constrict her chest.She hasn't shared this with Buffy or Giles or any of the Scoobies yet. Well, it's not as if they were capable of speaking yesterday. With the Gentlemen stealing their voices and all.


Soon
, Willow decided, she's gonna consult the gang soon.If meeting that female someone is supposed to prevent her death, she better meet that girl soon.

A flash of sweeping curves and full lips slipped inside her mind.


Hmm,
Willow mused, meeting that female someone would be
quite
interesting.

Smiling silly, Willow disappeared under her rumpled covers and went back to sultry dreamland.

***

TBC more to come.



next update will have our girls 'bumping' into each other. stay tuned!
Sleek
 


Re: Part 6 Dreaming

Postby barnabasvamp » Fri Oct 18, 2002 6:12 am

Sleek;

No need to fear, you did an excellent job with the dream :thud

Can't imagine what you will be able to do when our girls finally get back together! :bounce



This was a new take on Willow coming to the realization that she liked girls. Me liked alot.



Keep the great stuff coming

BV

P.S. saule77 finished the chips last night, animal crackers with coffee right now.......:grin

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

barnabasvamp
 


Re: NEW FIC: "Finding You"

Postby saule77 » Fri Oct 18, 2002 6:22 am

BV, thanks for the munchies... although after what I've just read, I think we'll need DRINKS as well... Gee, that was hot!



Anyway, time for an announcement:



"We hope that all passengers have enjoyed the in-flight entertainment! :wink Refreshing towels are available at the front of the aircraft..."



I'm sure Jen enjoyed the view too... Window seat... Wish I'd thought about that one... Mind you, I'm captain, aren't I? BV, you're co-pilot. You're the one with the organisation and survival skills... Just let me know when a stopover is needed to refill on those munchies and coffee! :p



"Control Tower Sleek, please indicate next route. Awaiting order. OVER."







Edited because BV a fast one!

Yummy chps they were tooo... Chips can go in bellies! :grin

Could I have some of those animal crackers too?

I have ice cold lemonade...



"You are Willow Rosenberg, vixen-y lighter of the flame and keeper of my heart.”

(Camp Flutie by Rane)

Edited by: saule77 at: 10/18/02 5:24:34 am
saule77
 


Re: NEW FIC: "Finding You"

Postby barnabasvamp » Fri Oct 18, 2002 6:34 am

Drinks would be good, however the Refreshing towels are surely a must right now! ;)

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

barnabasvamp
 


Re: NEW FIC: "Finding You"

Postby Tulipp » Fri Oct 18, 2002 9:59 am

Oh, I liked Willow's dream, and you are building up all kinds of tension with Serendipity and Fate and Phoebe and Linda... even though Fate said it was really up to Willow as the price for getting to go back like this, I hope that the extra help she also promised comes through if it all rests on this fateful day, as it seems to.


***************

"Run, flee, maybe skedadlle. We're not here to engage. This is strictly recon." Willow, on season seven, in "This Year's Girl"

Tulipp
 


Re: NEW FIC: "Finding You"

Postby mollyig » Fri Oct 18, 2002 10:01 am

Willow dreaming. I'm taking that as a good sign that she's taking seriously what Phoebe had to say.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: NEW FIC: "Finding You"

Postby BTVSfunatic » Fri Oct 18, 2002 8:30 pm

Oh...don't you worry I am tuned!!!

Willow:I knew it. I knew it! Well, not knew it in the sense of having the slightest idea, but I knew there was something I didn't know.

BTVSfunatic
 


Re: NEW FIC: "Finding You"

Postby The Rose24 » Fri Oct 18, 2002 9:15 pm

Hi Sleek,



I just found this fic, and I must say this is a very interesting idea you have. There are several fics about W/T meeting, and none of them are the same. It says a lot about the talented writers on this board.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

The Rose24
 


Re: NEW FIC: "Finding You"

Postby willow420 » Fri Oct 18, 2002 9:59 pm

:thud



I mean, um, great update. :grin

--------------------------------------

A.K.A. Liz


WILLOW:
"I'm Willow Rosenberg. 'Willow'!
Funny name."
TARA: "I think it's pretty."

********************
They love the women that will never love them. They are Lesbros!

willow420
 


Re: NEW FIC: "Finding You"

Postby pikescoob » Sat Oct 19, 2002 3:16 pm

Wow what a lovely dream Will had :grin can't wait to see what happens when they bump into each other :D Thanks for the update Sleek :)



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


soon

Postby Sleek » Sat Oct 19, 2002 6:35 pm

hey everyone.



thanks for keepin up with this fic. i'm already done with the update..just editing and stuff.



this took me a while to finish cuz..you know..it's the "meeting" scene..very um..delicate situation..



i can assure you that W and T would be 'bumpin' soon. ;)



see you in a few! :bounce

Sleek
 


Re: NEW FIC: "Finding You"

Postby ZvXLurkerXvZ » Sat Oct 19, 2002 6:51 pm

wow this is cool. I've been meaning to ask this Phoebe wouldn't happen to be one of the halliwell sisters??



Nice dream!! I hope you update soon cause this is great!!



~Krystal~





I never will forget that look upon your face.
How you turned away and left without a trace.
But I understand that you did what you had to do.
And I thank you.
~Michelle Branch~ Here with me

ZvXLurkerXvZ
 


2 updates

Postby Sleek » Sat Oct 19, 2002 9:41 pm

to my fellow kittens, i'm in the process of weaving a very steamy love scene.in the meantime i hope the following update will do.

thanks for keeping up with me.




Sleek.


***


Part 7


Desire



Two shadows huddled in a dark dank alley.

"So.You got the goodies?" A woman's voice. Nervous and high pitched.

"Yes." Came a smooth, male baritone.

"Did you uh…gave her a dose?" The woman shifted slightly, her dark form gliding with the night air.

"Three nights in a row now."The man smiled cheekily.Moonlight spilled on his face, revealing his perfectly chiseled features encased in a velvet cloak.His lazy, half-lidded stare was directed towards Serendipity.

"Do you think it worked?"

"If hearing the redhead moan raggedly against her pillows for three nights is any indication…I believe it did."

Serendipity sighed apprehensively."I really need your assistance on this Desire.This mission is important to me. I cant…I can't afford to fail."

"I know Serendipity." Desire looked at her fondly. He traced a finger across Serendipity's face. "I used to love looking at you…for several eternities it seemed. You were so beautiful…" There was a catch in his voice. "And now they turned you into
this
."

"I'm still me Desire.Underneath the shadow and the annoying shrilly voice is me." Serendipity said, forlorn.

"And soon," Serendipity said firmly, "I'll be restored to radiance."

Desire looked sadly into the film of darkness that was Serendipity.He nodded, bowing his head low.And with the swish of his velvet cloak, he was gone.

Serendipity stared wistfully at the space where Desire disappeared. She twirled her body and twisted into the form of a half-grown, black kitten.


I better hurry
, she thought.
Tara will be back in her dorm soon.


The ebony cat darted off, blending into the night.

***




Part 8

[/b]The Chase [/b]


"Kitty! I'm home!" Tara announced brightly.

"Kitty?Miss Kitty Fantastico?"Tara searched her kittyless room.

Serendipity emerged from underneath her bed.

"Oh. There you are. I bought some catnip.You like catnip?" Tara dug her hand into a brown bag and proudly produced a can of cat food.

Serendipity stared glumly at the gleaming can.

Tara scratched briefly Serendipity's head and spilled the food in a dish labeled "Miss Kitty Fantastico".

"Now you go be a good kitty and eat your nummy treat." Tara shoved the food underneath Serendipity's nose."Mommy's gonna take a quick shower before she hits the books, okay?"

Serendipity sniffed and scrunched her face in disgust at the scentless smell of the cat food. Tara was still looking at her with adoration so Serendipity dutifully peeked out her tiny cat tongue and appeared to appreciate the meal.

Satisfied, Tara turned and grabbed some toiletries.

As soon as she heard the door shut, Serendipity sprang into action.


Tonight,
Serendipity thought happily,
Tara will meet her soulmate.


***



Tara emerged from the shower feeling refreshed and light.


What a day
. Tara thought as she mulled over the recent events.

When a hush fell over the whole of Sunnydale four days ago, Tara searched her books for spells on speeches and silences.But the spell required a considerable amount of magical force.Meaning she needed another adept witch for the spell casting to take effect.

Tara considered joining the college Wicca group before, hoping she would find another practicing witch.But taking one good look at the group's aura, Tara found, to her dismay, that they were just a bunch of blessed wanna bees.

Despite the lack of a magical friend, Tara continued to try and improve her craft.


Which led to this morning's mishap.
Tara thought wryly.

Tara tried to float a rose and magically pluck its petals. It was a test of focus and concentration--which she probably didn't have at that moment.The rose ended up zipping around her room, burning a blaze behind it, and a trail of singed clothes and burned drapes.


My mojo's gone wonky
.Tara thought miserably.Maybe this has something to do with the surge of mystical force she felt days before.Her intuition told her someone has tipped the balance of the natural forces.
Someone or something.


Tara clad herself in a long sleeved, powder blue cotton shirt and charcoal gray cargo pants.She was armed and ready for some serious studying when she noticed Kitty behaving strangely.

The cat's intelligent gray eyes were fixed on Tara's face.Not for the first time, Tara felt the cat was telling her something important.


Come follow me
Serendipity thought. If only she had her former powers, she would have no trouble communicating right now.

Meowmph.

Tara noticed something furry and purple clenched between the cat's little teeth. And it wasn't catnip.


Hey, those are my favorite socks!
Tara realized and bent down to tug the material away from the cat.

But the black cat was too quick for her.

In one swift motion, the cat dashed outside the room.


Wait. I could've sworn I locked the door.
Tara hesitated a second before turning her heel to chase after her errant cat.


***




Everybody's getting spanked but me.
Willow thought bitterly as she lugged her laundry and wobbled towards the laundry room.

Thoughts of Xander and Anya made a look of displeasure cross Willow's face.Everybody was so wrapped up with their own stuff. Last night at the Bronze.Buffy came in late, escorted by a flank of those commando guys.And just when Willow thought things could not get worse, Buffy got beeped off and flew away with her superfriends.

Willow sighed as she distractedly lifted the washing machine's lid and tossed her clothes in unceremoniously.

She never got the chance to talk to the Scoobies about Phoebe's premonition.


Well…at the rate things are going. Good ol' reliable Willow could get kidnapped by some lethal demon and nobody would notice.
Willow thought sullenly.

It also didn't help that she wasn't getting enough sleep lately.

For the past nights now Willow has been dreaming she was making mad, passionate love to a beautiful, jasmine scented woman.And the bad thing is, the dream gets better and clearer every time.


Maybe I should've paid more attention to evil skanky me.I mean, look at her. No fear. Setting her own rules. Taking anyone she wants at will.



I bet she gets spanked all the time.
Willow thought enviously.

Willow scooped a bundle of her soggy clothes and shoved them in the dryer.


***


"Kitty! Stop!"Tara let out, a bit out of breath.


Kitty seemed to have a clear idea where she wanted to go.
Tara thought suspiciously.

Serendipity purposively wove through the legs of several passing humans. And she was still several feet away from Tara.


My oh my. She does look pissed now.
Serendipity chuckled.
But you will thank me later.


Serendipity picked up her pace, and casting an encouraging look at Tara, reached the entrance of the Laundry Room.


***
TBC Part 10 The Laundry Room

next scene is the 'bumpin' scene. stay tuned! (man, did i just sound like a radio DJ) shakes head.

more later! promise!

g
Sleek
 


Re: 2 updates

Postby The Rose24 » Sat Oct 19, 2002 9:57 pm

Ugggghhhh!!!! Why in the sam hill did you stop there? That is so mean. ;)

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

The Rose24
 


Re: 2 updates

Postby willntlover » Sat Oct 19, 2002 10:30 pm

:lol

Tara's mad at the kitty :lol



But yay! They are going to meet soon!!!!!



-Will

"Hear that baby? You're my always."

"well, you know, when you play a lesbian witch you've gotta get killed in this fun kind of exciting way, so the heart was the way to go..."

"we have the most amazing fans though they LOVE us."


willntlover
 


Part 9 The Laundry Room

Postby Sleek » Sat Oct 19, 2002 10:42 pm

yes. I am a tease.






***


Part 9


The Laundry Room (a)




Willow heard a commotion outside.

She was about to go and find out what it is about when a black cat sprang into view.


Strange cat,
Willow thought.

She took a step closer towards the cat when a blonde woman came barreling into her.

"Ooomph!"

Overwhelmed by the sudden impact, Willow tumbled backward butt first onto the floor.

Tara fell forward and landed sitting on Willow's lap.

Both women stared wide-eyed at each other.


***


Wow.
Tara thought.
She's got the most adorable face I have ever seen.


Tara stared in utter fascination, drinking in the features of the redhead underneath her.

Pools of large, dark green bore into her.Candy pink lips parted a fraction.Willow's nose protruded daintily on her delicate face.Her flaming tresses curled just past her ears and Tara felt a sudden compulsion to weave her fingers through them.


***


She's beautiful.
Willow whispered the thought in her mind.

Willow discovered that she just couldn't tear her eyes away from the blonde's sapphire gaze.They held her, tentatively but softly.

Blushing at Tara's open stare, Willow slowly pulled her eyes away and they landed on Tara's partially open, succulentred lips.

Willow gulped inwardly.


Those lips.
Willow thought.
Her lips are the most exotic fruit I have ever seen.
Willow's heart thudded violently against her chest.


I. Want. To. Taste. Her.


***

Both women were so enraptured with each other that they didn't notice a black cat grinning mischievously and slowly slinking away.


Mission control, we have a perfect landing
.Serendipity thought smugly.
Now for the next part of the plan.


With a flick of her paw and the swish of her tail, the laundry room plunged into darkness.

***

TBC
Sleek
 


Re: Part 9 The Laundry Room

Postby The Rose24 » Sat Oct 19, 2002 11:20 pm

Go cat!!! Go cat!!!!! :bounce :bounce :bounce



They meet again. ;)

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

The Rose24
 


Part 9 The Laundry Room-Continuation

Postby Sleek » Sun Oct 20, 2002 12:54 am

Part 9


The Laundry Room (b)




"The lights." Willow suddenly found her voice.

"Oh..ummm.We should…" Tara started to shift but ended up straddling Willow more snugly against her.

Tara felt her face grow scarlet as she felt her center pressing against Willow's firm tummy.

"I…sorta…couldn't get up."Willow said, a bit flustered at their position. "With you sitting on me.Uhh.. not that it's bad…and not that I.. you know…not that I mind." Willow stopped herself, horrified at what she had just said.


Not that I mind?! What kind of pervy doofus she must think I am?!


Tara responded with a chuckle.And Willow's heart danced with Tara's melody.

Tara started to get up, causing her to brush herself briefly upwards against Willow-tummy and breasts.

Willow held back a gasp as she caught a whiff of Tara's intimate scent.

"I think the door is somewhere over here..."

Willow heard Tara shuffling and fumbling around the dark laundry room.Her ears picked up the sound of a doorknob being twisted and turned several times.

"Uh..I-I-I think…umm.. the doorknob…I-it w-w-wouldn't" Tara silently cursed herself.
Go me.I am apparently trapped in the laundry room with a very attractive redhead and all I can do is s-s-stutter?


"Here..lemme help."Willow got up and started to press her palms against the walls and several washing machines, groping her way in the darkness.When her hands touched the doorframe, Willow reached out and grabbed--

"Uh…I don't think that's the knob."

Tara's voice pierced through Willow's shock.

Willow, to her chagrin, realized that her right hand was squeezing something fleshy and warm.It was soft, round and
very
full…

***
Sleek
 


Re: Part 9 The Laundry Room-Continuation

Postby willntlover » Sun Oct 20, 2002 1:22 am

:rollin



I can't figure out who is more embarassed! LOL!!



I am so loving this, thanks for the update.



-Will

"Hear that baby? You're my always."

"well, you know, when you play a lesbian witch you've gotta get killed in this fun kind of exciting way, so the heart was the way to go..."

"we have the most amazing fans though they LOVE us."


willntlover
 


Re: Part 9 The Laundry Room-Continuation

Postby barnabasvamp » Sun Oct 20, 2002 4:38 am

Sleek;

Absolutely adorable, nice twist to the meeting-up story

Saul77....Were getting closer, keep the towels handy!

BV

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

barnabasvamp
 


Re: NEW FIC: "Finding You"

Postby katydid » Sun Oct 20, 2002 9:14 am

I love this so far. Willow groping Tara while looking for the doorknob...lol Can't wait for more.



Katie

--------------
She practically had genuine molded plastic stamped on her ass.

katydid
 


Re: Part 9 The Laundry Room-Continuation

Postby snuggle79 » Sun Oct 20, 2002 10:32 am

:laugh
Quote:
"I…sorta…couldn't get up." Willow said, a bit flustered at their position. "With you sitting on me. Uhh.. not that it's bad…and not that I.. you know…not that I mind." Willow stopped herself, horrified at what she had just said.
:lol



And where did Willow's hand go "accidently" ? ;)



:bounce



I love this! :D

------------------
"I got so lost"
"I found you, i will always find you"

snuggle79
 


Re: Part 9 The Laundry Room-Continuation

Postby Tamara » Sun Oct 20, 2002 1:38 pm

I this fic. It's like a really good drug that i've become addicted to :D





~*~Tamara~*~

Tamara
 


Re: Part 9 The Laundry Room-Continuation

Postby pikescoob » Sun Oct 20, 2002 4:09 pm

Go kitty go!! :grin I'm lovin' their first meeting. Serendipity and Desire have done a great job setting it up. :lol I have a pretty good idea what Willow grabbed instead of the door knob :p Can't wait for more :D



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: Part 9 The Laundry Room-Continuation

Postby XWickedXWiccan » Sun Oct 20, 2002 4:20 pm

:laugh :laugh :laugh :laugh



lol omg!! I need a new chair that has sides to stop me from falling or I should at least get a cushion for my bottom or it's gonna get sore soon!



-Trinity-





--------------------------
Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love, the clarity of hatred, and the ecstacy of grief. It hurts sometimes more than we can bare. If we can live without passion maybe we'd know some peace. But we'd be hollow, empty rooms, shuttered, and dank, With out passion we'd truly be dead. ANGEL in "Passion"

XWickedXWiccan
 


Re: Part 9 The Laundry Room-Continuation

Postby MissQuirky » Sun Oct 20, 2002 4:43 pm

I'm gone for a whole week and come back to find an awesome fic waiting! :grin I Love it! The idea of Willow making the wish and Fate, Serendipity, and lil Miss kitty/Desire helping to reconnect W/T again is a great idea itself! But the actual 1st meeting in the laundry room - which btw ya can't have em meet anywhere else ;) - i definitely think it went well! :D The whole thing, falling on one another and them in search for the door knob but all Will can get her hands on is ahh... well some Tara goodness! :lol Very funny! Can't wait to read more! :)



~Ashley~

MissQuirky
 


Re: Part 9 The Laundry Room-Continuation

Postby tommo » Sun Oct 20, 2002 9:26 pm

Well I don't know how I missed this. It's a lovely fic. Really sweet and I like how you're bringing in Fate and Serendipity and Desire as well. There's an underlying sexuality to what you write as well; a fullness that really gives the senses a workout. :)



One little thing, I notice that you're occasionally slipping into the present tense in some of your narrative; I wondered if this was intentional or not. If it is, then please, ignore me. If not, then maybe you want to run this past a beta reader before you post? Just a thought.



Can't wait to read more. Thanks for this. :)


----------
"You exquisite little tart!" ~ Diana Lethaby

tommo
 


Re:Part 9 The Laundry Room-Continuation

Postby BTVSfunatic » Sun Oct 20, 2002 9:29 pm

I don't think I can wait much longer for this!!!

Great Story

BTVSfunatic
 

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