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Re: okay so im in for it with this one.....

Postby Wired vixen » Sat Dec 04, 2004 12:35 pm



Well, well, well....i dont think i was supposed to read that! LOL Very, uh, graphic! but good :) And uh, thats all i have to say on the matter! :D



Stace xXx

"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87

Wired vixen
 


Re: okay so im in for it with this one.....

Postby WickedReds » Sat Dec 04, 2004 1:10 pm

:thud

that was just wow... hot... hehe



-reds:willow



Mein Banane tanzt für Schmutz :banana

Smutbunny Anthem: *sung to tune from Goldfinger* Smutbunnies...they'e the bunnies, the bunnies that love the smut...and Willow's butt. They surf for smut fiction...always lookin' for the next naked sweaty fix...of Tara's tits.- Written By Cameron(tarawhipped) For Us Smut Bunnies

WickedReds
 


Re: okay so im in for it with this one.....

Postby onyxsundrops » Sat Dec 04, 2004 11:18 pm

:lol Nicely done! Ya just have to love the way the mind works sometimes.



Yvonne:peace

onyxsundrops
 


Re: okay so im in for it with this one.....

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Sun Dec 05, 2004 12:49 am

:thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud

:thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :jaw :jaw

:jaw :jaw :jaw :jaw



oh my heck sis! where in the hell...that was...omg FUNNY! I never thought you would do that! frilly heck....that was nice and desriptive!!! Dude that reminds me of Rachels abs!! mmm rachels abs.... :drool :drool :drool :drool :drool

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: okay so im in for it with this one.....

Postby FallenAngel981 » Sun Dec 05, 2004 1:48 am

hmmm it almost seems borderline ....smut maybe...

FallenAngel981
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby shadowygirl » Mon Dec 06, 2004 7:46 pm

Hummm been reading a lil more of your work , and this stood out to me



Oh say it again

pretend it doesnt hurt





it made me sad yet made me think And I love things/poetry/stories/ that make me think I loved those two lines they could mean so many different things to so many people awesome job





Luv April

shadowygirl
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby SJ » Tue Dec 07, 2004 2:10 am

Great poem :read

SJ
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Miss Evanescent » Sat Dec 11, 2004 7:12 pm

Clearly theres no answer

to why i feel this way

just the day to day hell

of living here

there arent enough words

to make enough endings

to make up

for my beginning



I just dont see the point

in life if everything

dies anyway

everything alive

wont be here

everything that is born dies

even ideas

some just take longer

to expire

it would be so much easier

if we all had expiration dates

what a waste

living on gambled time



tell me something beautiful

and i find the pain beneath

i know enough

to know i know better

sometimes i feel like im

unwraveling

and all my pieces

are out of reach

and if only my arm

was a little longer

eveyrthing could be

put back in order



a glimpse into the life of me

who am i?

reading the journals

the posts entries notebooks

who is this girl?

and does she know

that im living her life.



so many ways to say i love you...this much is true. :sob

Not quite broken but i'd still like to be fixed

~Me

Miss Evanescent
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby WickedReds » Sat Dec 11, 2004 10:22 pm

Oooo poemness...

Quote:
sometimes i feel like im

unwraveling

and all my pieces

are out of reach




loved that part...



-reds:willow



Mein Banane tanzt für Schmutz :banana

Smutbunny Anthem: *sung to tune from Goldfinger* Smutbunnies...they'e the bunnies, the bunnies that love the smut...and Willow's butt. They surf for smut fiction...always lookin' for the next naked sweaty fix...of Tara's tits.- Written By Cameron(tarawhipped) For Us Smut Bunnies

WickedReds
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Wired vixen » Sun Dec 12, 2004 5:20 pm





Hellooooo!!! I've missed you! :aww But you're here! yay!!



Quote:
I just dont see the point

in life if everything

dies anyway

everything alive

wont be here

everything that is born dies

even ideas

some just take longer

to expire

it would be so much easier

if we all had expiration dates

what a waste

living on gambled time






I liked all that part! It really hit me, like, in the face!! But wow...sis....amazing!! MORE!!

:seesaw < yeah that is cool!!



:sheep



Stace xXx

"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87

Wired vixen
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby SJ » Mon Dec 13, 2004 1:59 am

Great poem :read

SJ
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby angel of salvation » Mon Dec 13, 2004 6:46 am

woah......i see greatness



Quote:
everything that is born dies

even ideas

some just take longer




great lines :) write more soon! :D



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

angel of salvation
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Miss Evanescent » Mon Dec 13, 2004 7:28 pm

In winter

with the soft snow

flowing 'round

coating the trees

like lies

that melt

into icey teardrops

crying out

for the warmth

of love

of spring's

first kiss

and summer's romance

winter baits me

with candied sugar

sprinkled liberally

over my life

tempting to taste

the sweet green leaves

frozen beneath

hiding from

the taste of longing

of love lost

and life waiting.

Not quite broken but i'd still like to be fixed

~Me

Miss Evanescent
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Tue Dec 14, 2004 1:31 am

LOOK SIS IM LEAVING YOU FEEDBACK!!! :)



Awesome lil poemness sis! And sooo sorry I havent left FB in a while, you know Im lazy just like you! :P

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby Wired vixen » Tue Dec 14, 2004 8:58 am





I loooved that poem! :bounce The description was amazin sis, its poems like this that i see how great your poetry is, and it makes me wanna read more!! :bounce

So i'll slip on rose's tutu ;) And do a lil dance in spite of the large rip it has in it! Cos i ripped when i was dancing last....looong time ago....*sigh* So more! :bounce



:sheep



Stace xXx

"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87

Wired vixen
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby WickedReds » Tue Dec 14, 2004 1:49 pm

Jessica!!! hehe...

Quote:
winter baits me

with candied sugar

sprinkled liberally

over my life

tempting to taste




u know that could be... ummm read as something sexual... but then again when dont i find things sexual..hehe



-reds:willow



Mein Banane tanzt für Schmutz :banana

Smutbunny Anthem: *sung to tune from Goldfinger* Smutbunnies...they'e the bunnies, the bunnies that love the smut...and Willow's butt. They surf for smut fiction...always lookin' for the next naked sweaty fix...of Tara's tits.- Written By Cameron(tarawhipped) For Us Smut Bunnies

WickedReds
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby SJ » Wed Dec 15, 2004 1:58 am

Great poem :read

SJ
 


Re: Society in Denial

Postby SilverWolf » Sun Dec 19, 2004 8:17 pm

Alright love i'll finally leave you some fb. Great poems baby i'm so proud of you *MUAH* And to answer a question in one of them... Yes Jessica I will marry you. Hehe but you already knew that didn't you. Anyways keep up the good work beautiful



~Shanna

SilverWolf
 


inspired by an odd friend....umm enjoy i dunno what it means

Postby Miss Evanescent » Wed Dec 22, 2004 4:04 am

Tidings come but

Mid morning greetings

Slip unnoticed

Passing by life

And everything

We make it

Carefully rambling

Through forgotten years

Trembling down

Upon the knees

Of many masses

Bowing broken across shadows

As they wept

Seeing a savior

In their unsightly delusion

As all that was

Closes in

And things to be

Crackling as fallen glass

To the floor

Those that believe

See red

While the ‘defiled’

Gaze skyward

Watching readily

The dark

As society collapses

Among them.



Not quite broken but i'd still like to be fixed

~Me

Miss Evanescent
 


Re: inspired by an odd friend....umm enjoy i dunno what it m

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Wed Dec 22, 2004 2:47 pm

:eatme :sheep :bounce :D :bow :bow



YAY POEMNESS!! "waves at sis" I liked this, and yes it did make sense. Well it sorta made sense, Im trying to figure out what it means...but yet Im distracted cuz Im listening to Lacuna Coil...mmm lacuna coil...:drool "stares off into space" ah where was i? Oh poemness! I think that this has to do with people or friends....yes thats what I think and you know what I think always matters! :D

:pride

-Rose

"You were everything, everything that I wanted, we were meant to be supposed to be, but we lost it. All the memories so close to me just fade away.."-Avril

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: inspired by an odd friend....umm enjoy i dunno what it m

Postby Wired vixen » Wed Dec 22, 2004 3:23 pm



YAY! more poemness!! *happy dance*



Quote:
See red

While the ‘defiled’

Gaze skyward

Watching readily






WOW SIS! I really loved those lines! Reminds me of uhm, aliens, am i strange? LOL You knew that! ok, ima go kick my own butt for saying stupid things!!



:sheep



More!!!!



Stace xXx

"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87

Wired vixen
 


Re: inspired by an odd friend....umm enjoy i dunno what it m

Postby SJ » Fri Dec 24, 2004 2:05 am

Great poem :read

SJ
 


Re: inspired by an odd friend....umm enjoy i dunno what it m

Postby Wired vixen » Sat Dec 25, 2004 11:58 am

Here i am being a good lil sis and giving you more fb!!!!



MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!



MOOORREEE!!!!



*goes to play with mic* wuv yous!

"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87

Wired vixen
 


Re: inspired by an odd friend....umm enjoy i dunno what it m

Postby WickedReds » Sun Dec 26, 2004 4:19 pm

another good on jessica keep up the wonderful writting..:D



-reds:willow



Mein Banane tanzt für Schmutz :banana

Smutbunny Anthem: *sung to tune from Goldfinger* Smutbunnies...they'e the bunnies, the bunnies that love the smut...and Willow's butt. They surf for smut fiction...always lookin' for the next naked sweaty fix...of Tara's tits.- Written By Cameron(tarawhipped) For Us Smut Bunnies

WickedReds
 


Inspired by m'lady

Postby Miss Evanescent » Mon Jan 10, 2005 7:56 pm

sitting on the porch swing

hands and hearts entwined

lovers sit

enjoying the sunrise

reflecting on days gone by

and how after all the

years together

every moment was

still precious

still beautiful

still exhilarating

still theirs

and after years of

beautiful words

'as long as they live

they still have things to say'

but silence is still

as golden as the sunrise

the absolute trust

and understanding

of the forever kind of love.



'words inbetween these are parphrased from Shanna' woo!

thankyou babygirl!!! :flower :bigkiss :love

Not quite broken but i'd still like to be fixed

~Me

Miss Evanescent
 


Re: Inspired by m'lady

Postby Wired vixen » Tue Jan 11, 2005 6:24 am

Sis!!!! Poemness!!!! PRETTY POEMNESS!!!



Quote:
sitting on the porch swing

hands and hearts entwined

lovers sit

enjoying the sunrise




Thats such a cute image!! Sheepies for you!! :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep :sheep





MORE NOW! :D



:sheep



Stace xXx

I've been waiting, for things that never come.... -VD

Wired vixen
 


Re: Inspired by m'lady

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Tue Jan 11, 2005 2:13 pm

:bounce :bounce

Poemness! With the pretty sappy cutesy poems! WOOT SIS WOOT! :applause :eatme :sheep :sheep :p

:pride

-Rose

"You were everything, everything that I wanted, we were meant to be supposed to be, but we lost it. All the memories so close to me just fade away.."-Avril

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: Inspired by m'lady

Postby SJ » Wed Jan 12, 2005 2:07 am

Lovely poem :clap

SJ
 


Re: Inspired by m'lady

Postby Miss Evanescent » Tue Jan 25, 2005 6:08 pm

suffocating

trapped

drowning

crushed

broken

devastated

depressed

lonely

weeping

dying

starving

acheing

bleeding

is everything

i am without you

the only one

that keeps me going

the ony thing

i live breath and strive for

is you

i love you

you save me

everyday

from all the wieght

that drags me down

everything melts away

as soon

as i see that smile

see those eyes

feel that embrace

and hear your

sweet lips at my ear...

Not quite broken but i'd still like to be fixed

~Me

Miss Evanescent
 


Re: Inspired by m'lady

Postby SJ » Wed Jan 26, 2005 1:59 am

Great poem :clap

SJ
 

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