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 Post subject: Re: Shadows of the Past
PostPosted: Wed Feb 23, 2005 3:32 pm 
Shadows of the past

Author: Justin

Rating: pg-13

Summary: This is an Uber fic set in the Babylon 5 universe. A young techno mage and a telepath race to solve a mystery that threatens the galaxy

Notes: This story is set in the year 2267, 2 years after the Drakh released their plaque on the Earth.

Disclaimer: Willow & Tara and a lot of the other characters from this story belong to Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy. Babylon 5 was created by J. Michael Straczynski

Feedback: yes please

Distribution: Anyone can take it, just let me know please



Chapter 13



“Are you sure this was such a great idea?” Willow asked, for what was probably the hundredth time. Xander had persuaded her to go with him on a hiking expedition, through a local desert. This had been fine till they had somehow gotten separated from the others, and then quickly gotten lost. Willow wiped her brow, she couldn't believe how hot it had gotten.



“Look, how about coming up with some suggestions rather than just complaining,” Xander snapped.



Willow opened her flask and tried to take a drink. She threw it to the ground as she found that it was empty. Turning to Xander she said, “Hey it wasn't my idea to...” Willow stopped as she lost her footing, slipping down an embankment, As she fell she wondered why she hadn't seen it there. Willow grabbed at the ground, trying to slow her descent. It didn't work as her fingers just slipped through the soil. She hit the ground hard, her leg twisting under her.



“Willow!” Xander called, peering down from the top, “Are you okay?”



“I think so.” Willow tried to stand up, crying out as there was a burst of pain in her ankle, “I think I twisted my ankle.”



“Wait there,” Xander called starting to sound frantic. He disappeared from the edge for a moment, before coming back and calling, “I'll get help.”



“Xander, wait! Xander!” There was no answer. “How is he going to get help if he doesn't know where he is?” Willow asked herself. She watched the top of the bank, but there was no sign of the young man.



***



Tara reached the bridge just as the White star exited hyperspace and entered normal space. “I assume that you heard that,” Tessa said, turning to greet Tara.



Tara couldn't speak. She just nodded, still feeling numb from what had happened.



“So far we haven't picked up any ships approaching us, but we're going to have to be careful.”



“Can... Can I talk to you?” Tara struggled to ask. She kept telling herself that she couldn't fall apart until she'd found a way to help Willow.



“Sure.” As Tessa led her into the office she said, “I've been in touch with Sheridan. The Excalibur is on route to help us, though it's still some distance away. He estimates it'll be...”



“That was Willow,” Tara said quietly.



It took Tessa a few moments to work out what Tara meant, “Surely you don't mean...”



“They used her to activate the Shadow Vessel.”



“How do you know?”



“I...” Tara stopped, not sure how to explain the connection to Willow. “I just know.”



“I really am sorry.”



Tara nodded, “I'm going to try to get her back.”



“That's never been done before.”



Tara closed her eyes a moment, trying to gather her resolve, telling herself she'd been expecting this. “Has anyone ever tried?”



“Good point, no they haven't. There have been cases of people who had been mind wiped through other ways, and their original personality restored. I suggest you look in Babylon 5's databases for any information.”



“Thanks, I'll do that.” Tara turned and started to leave.



“There's one other thing. You said the Shadow Vessel fought back, when you tried to stop it?”



“That's right.”



“Well several years ago Psycorp tried to ship a number of telepaths to the Shadows to use as controllers for their ships.”



“Yes, I... You think that's what happened? The controller was a telepath so they were able to fight back.”



“It seems the most logical reason. After all this is the first time this has happened. It means we won't be able to use you if we do encounter any more Shadow Vessels.”



Tara nodded, they both knew that in a straight fight they didn't stand much of a chance. “I'll go and get started.”



“Good luck.”



***



As time passed, with no sign of Xander, Willow tried standing again. She was surprised to find there was no pain in her ankle. A part of her knew that she ought to stay put, that it was her best change to be found, but she sensed that she need to get moving. As she started walking a breeze began to pick up. It started to get cold as the wind grew and as it began to get dark. Looking up Willow saw something moving in front of the sun, blocking it out. Then it began to move away again and the sky grew light again. Shivering, despite the returning heat, Willow continued walking.



***



Getting to her quarters Tara accessed Babylon 5's databases. Once she had access she said, “I want a list of anyone who's personality has been erased, and later on restored.”



***



Tara was sitting meditating when the computer beeped to tell her it had finished it's search. Going over she saw there was only two results. The first was a woman called Talia Winters. She had been an unwitting part of a psycorp experiment. They had implanted a second personality within her psyche which would act as a spy. When she received the correct mental command the second personality had taken over, destroying her original one. Tara read that a few years later her original personality had been restored using a recording which had been made by the Vorlon ambassador Kosh.



The second was a serial killer, called the Black Rose. He had been sentenced to death of personality and had been mind wiped. However that punishment hadn't satisfied the families of his victims. They had hunted him down and had used a Centauri telepath to undo the mind wipe, before killing him.



Sitting back Tara thought about what she had found out. In both cases there had been a recording of the persons original personality, which had been used to help restore it. Tara started to lose hope, knowing that she didn't have one for Willow. Then it occurred to her that she might not need one.



***



Willow hadn't gotten far when she heard a strange sound behind her. Turning she saw a patch of darkness. Then Willow realised it wasn't just darkness, but emptiness, a spot where the universe had disappeared. Black tendrils grew out from the darkness, spreading towards her. Willow didn't know what would happen if they caught her, but she knew it wouldn't be good. Turning Willow started running as fast as she could.



***



“Tessa.”



Tessa hurried to the bridge. “Oh damn,” She said, seeing a pair of Shadow Vessels on the screen. “how many?”



“Four.”



“Get us out of here.”



“Opening jump point.” The particle tunnel surrounding the jump point opened up in front of them and the Whitestar began to move down it towards the singularity that would take it through into hyperspace.



“They're opening fire,” A technician called.



Through the view screen they saw a ball of energy go past the ship.



“They missed,” the pilot said. No sooner had he said this than the jump point began to change colour.



“They weren't aiming at us,” Tessa said, “Turn us around, full power to the engines.”



The white stars engines turned it round, then the main engines fired, taking it out of the jump point, which had started to collapse. As the jump point collapsed the particle tunnel that surrounded it fell inwards catching the back of the white star, sending it spinning out of control.



“How bad is it?” Tessa asked as soon as they had managed to get the ship under control.



“Main engines are down.”



Tessa looked at the approaching Shadow vessels, “This is not good.”



***



Willow looked over her shoulder. The emptiness wasn't slowing at all. She had a few seconds before it reached her. Turning back to the cliff Willow heard a voice in her head, “If you fall, I'll catch you.” Willow took a moment to prepare herself then started running. Willow's legs burned as she pressed herself to run faster and faster, trying to keep clear of the emptiness. Then her foot hit the edge of the cliff and she propelled herself over, into the abyss.





TBC

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Homer Simpson: When will people learn, democracy just doesn't work.



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 Post subject: Re: Shadows of the Past
PostPosted: Wed Feb 23, 2005 4:15 pm 
*gasp*



"If you fall, I will catch you"

That sounds like something i've heard before..but not like that..more like.. "If you [something], they will come"..or something like that.



But yeah, hopefully everything ends up well with Willow.



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 Post subject: Re: Shadows of the Past
PostPosted: Thu Feb 24, 2005 2:59 am 
Damn, what is it with this universe and people jumping into chasms? It's like they heard of bungee, but never got the full set of instructions... :D



Well, Willow's certainly in a spot of bother, and it looks like it won't be easy at all to get her out of it. Then again, I don't think Tara will give up easily, so it might just work out. It'll work out, right? :paranoid



Oh, and they got Talia back? Yay! My interest in B5 pretty much halved (which still left a lot of interest left over, of course) when she stormed off to do whatever it is psychotic artificial personalities do. Certainly after that they had a constant uphill struggle to make the whole Psicorps arc seem at all relevant... so, did she and Ivanova hook up for some hot steamy lovin'? :D

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Smut Bunnies!: Saving the world, sexily!



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 Post subject: Re: Shadows of the Past
PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 11:54 am 
And as per usual I feel I've missed something...



Just exactly HOW did who-ever force Willow to active that shadow-vessel? Given that I know next to nothing about those vessels, why would Willow's personality be gone when she pilotted one?



For that matter, wouldn't it be rather foolish to let an enemy pilot such a vessel while being close to you? Whats to stop Willow from turning it around and shooting down the others? Assuming that a telepath is needed to control a fighter is fine, just explain why said telepath would take orders from anyone....



How to get Willow in such a fighter/vessel to start with. It's not like they can just grab her and drop her into the cockpit. Lots of info missing there.



I'm guessing doing anything with a shadowy vessel isn't healthy for humans, resulting in Willow going on a fever-trip. Thats the only explanation I can find for that. All verrry confusing.



Those fighters firing at the hyperspace tunnel is weird. That would more than likely destroy the WhiteStar if it had been in there. For some reason I doubt they will now just shoot to destroy the WhiteStar, as it's pretty much defenseless now.



Willow's desert adventure is also one of those things that make me go 'HUH???', bit like _Restless_ in that respect :) . Significance is hard to determine at the moment.



Reading Chris' comments doesn't relieve the 'I am so lost' feeling either... am I the only person not to have seen B5 ??



Oh yeah, Willow being in appearant danger is NOT a good thing. Just so you know :lol .



Grimmy (who's utterly lost by now)

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine



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 Post subject: Re: Shadows of the Past
PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 1:21 pm 
xonethousandtears08x:



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That sounds like something i've heard before..but not like that..more like.. "If you [something], they will come"..or something like that.




You mean, "if you build it, they will come?" Actually Willow is going to make a baseball field so that dead players can play on it, in the next update. Though, now you've spoiled the surprise ;)



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hopefully everything ends up well with Willow.




I'm keeping my fingers crossed.



Thanks for reading



Artemis



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Damn, what is it with this universe and people jumping into chasms? It's like they heard of bungee, but never got the full set of instructions... :D




Actually it's more parachuting without a parachute. It's the latest craze in extreme sports.



All the cool kids are doing it.



Though, only once.



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Well, Willow's certainly in a spot of bother, and it looks like it won't be easy at all to get her out of it. Then again, I don't think Tara will give up easily, so it might just work out. It'll work out, right?




I don't know, things aren't looking good at the moment ;)



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Oh, and they got Talia back?




Yep. It was always strange that they made a big thing of Garibaldi remembering the recording of Talias personality Kosh had made, but didn't do anything with it. Also I couldn't understand why Ivanova didn't mention Talia in the final episode when they were giving the names of people they'd lost. Then I realised it was because Talia had been saved and they were now living together (with, to answer your next question, lot's of hot steamy loving). Incidentally Talia wasn't in that episode because she had Martian Flu and couldn't travel.



Grimlock72:

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Just exactly HOW did who-ever force Willow to active that shadow-vessel?


Well the fact they're working with the creatures that made Willow's technology helped with that. Mostly they kept her unconscious until she was in the ship.



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Given that I know next to nothing about those vessels, why would Willow's personality be gone when she pilotted one?




Well it was never explained why it happened on the show, just that it did. My understanding is that when someone takes control of a Shadow vessel their mind merges with the ship's, which is a rather devastating experience. In any event the ship's mind takes over and the pilot becomes just a biological component of the ship.



BTW When Shadow Vessels fly past people hear screaming in their mind. I've often wondered if it's the ship or the pilot that's screaming.





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For that matter, wouldn't it be rather foolish to let an enemy pilot such a vessel while being close to you? Whats to stop Willow from turning it around and shooting down the others?




Well it would be if it weren't for the fact that the pilots personality is taken over by the ship. Basically Willow's not in control, and unless someone (like a certain telepath) does something quick, soon there won't be any Willow left.



Then again that descision might bite them in the behind if someone were to, say, rescue Willow and restore her personality.



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How to get Willow in such a fighter/vessel to start with. It's not like they can just grab her and drop her into the cockpit. Lots of info missing there.




When someone approaches a Shadow Vessel a part of it extends out and pulls them inside. Once the persons inside they then bond with the ship.



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I'm guessing doing anything with a shadowy vessel isn't healthy for humans, resulting in Willow going on a fever-trip. Thats the only explanation I can find for that. All verrry confusing.




Unhealthy is an understatement. Willow's personality has been sealed up into a small part of her mind, which is why she's having the fever-trip. The emptiness is her mind being taken over by the Shadow Vessel.



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Those fighters firing at the hyperspace tunnel is weird. That would more than likely destroy the WhiteStar if it had been in there.




Well the Whitestar had been partway within the jump point when they fired at it. It's just that it was nimble enough to get out before the jump point collapsed, though it was seriously damaged.



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Reading Chris' comments doesn't relieve the 'I am so lost' feeling either... am I the only person not to have seen B5 ??




quite possibly, yes ;)



Thanks for the feedback. Sorry for the confusion.



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Homer Simpson: When will people learn, democracy just doesn't work.



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 Post subject: Re: Shadows of the Past
PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 10:21 am 


Forgot to comment that the title of the story is very cleverly done :)



I was/am confused about how easy it seemed the bad guys got Willow into that shadow ship thingie. Given that Willlow was 'introduced' to us as a techno-mage, which are supposedly very powerfull? She escaped from Warren's jail easy enough.



In response to your explanation to the B5-newbie here :lol . So a shadow vessel needs a human/mind as a sort of ignition or also to actually run (on) ?? Sort of sacrificial fuel... hmm..



Why would a ship that big (1km you said?) with appearantly a mind all of its own need any external mind/supply?? And who IS flying/piloting anyway ? Weird vessels for sure... worthy of very carefull research.



I have faith Tara will try all she can to reach Willow. That will be difficult though, given that the current screaming is hard for her to block-out.



For some reason this does remind me of a certain Hellgodess in a certain season... how strange :lol .



Oh yeah, FYI: I think I saw the movie "In the beginning" which didn't create much love for the minbari if I recall correctly. They had nifty ships though.. think I saw those again in some random ep. I saw with earth forces attacking B5 ?? (sounds silly, why would they do that... but that is what it looked like)



Ah well, maybe I'll eventually rent the entire set and watch it anyway :)



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 2/26/05 9:26 am


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 Post subject: Re: Shadows of the Past
PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 2:23 pm 
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Forgot to comment that the title of the story is very cleverly done




Thanks :)



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I was/am confused about how easy it seemed the bad guys got Willow into that shadow ship thingie. Given that Willlow was 'introduced' to us as a techno-mage, which are supposedly very powerfull? She escaped from Warren's jail easy enough.




Yes, Techmages are pretty powerful. But that's as a result of Shadow technology, so that puts Willow at a disadvantage when dealing with the Shadows.



Her escaping from Warren was mainly down to his underestimating her. He made the mistake of thinking it he could leave her alone in the cell. Though if it hadn't been for Tara Willow would have still been in trouble since Warren would have destroyed the Whitestar, leaving Willow stranded on the asteroid till Neotech arrived.



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So a shadow vessel needs a human/mind as a sort of ignition or also to actually run (on) ?? Sort of sacrificial fuel... hmm..



Why would a ship that big (1km you said?) with appearantly a mind all of its own need any external mind/supply?? And who IS flying/piloting anyway ? Weird vessels for sure... worthy of very carefull research.




I think the SV needs the pilots brain to act as a control system. Thinking about it I think when the pilot merges with the ship their brain is effectively formatted and a new operating system is installed, and that's what controls the ship.



This was never really explained though. The Shadows are a rather sadistic race, so it's possible they do it just for the fun of it :evil



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For some reason this does remind me of a certain Hellgodess in a certain season... how strange




I had the same thought. Great minds think alike :)



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Oh yeah, FYI: I think I saw the movie "In the beginning" which didn't create much love for the minbari if I recall correctly. They had nifty ships though..




Well you don't see them at their best in that film, they're pretty much insane with rage at the death of their leader.



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think I saw those again in some random ep. I saw with earth forces attacking B5 ?? (sounds silly, why would they do that... but that is what it looked like)




Not silly at all, since that is what was happening.



Following the death of President Santiago (who was assassinated by the Shadows) his VP Clarke took over. He started tightening his control on Earth (such as starting groups like the Nightwatch, who were there to look for any signs of disloyalty) while Isolating Earth from the other races.



A research base on IO discovered a dormant Shadow Vessel there and accidentally activated it with an unprepared pilot. In it's insane state it destroyed the research base before being destroyed by Sheridan (who lured it into Jupiters aptmosphere where it was crushed by the pressure). Clarke used this as an excuse to declare Martial Law, and have the senate arrested. Not trusting the B5 command staff he sent a group of ships to take control of the station. That's why Earth ships were attacking B5.



DId I mention I love talking about B5? :lol





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Ah well, maybe I'll eventually rent the entire set and watch it anyway




To quote Salem from Sabrina the Teenage Witch "Do it! Do it!" ;)



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PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 2:36 pm 
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Now for the penultimate part

Shadows of the past

Author: Justin

Rating: pg-13

Summary: This is an Uber fic set in the Babylon 5 universe. A young techno mage and a telepath race to solve a mystery that threatens the galaxy

Notes: This story is set in the year 2267, 2 years after the Drakh released their plaque on the Earth.

Disclaimer: Willow & Tara and a lot of the other characters from this story belong to Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy. Babylon 5 was created by J. Michael Straczynski

Feedback: yes please

Distribution: Anyone can take it, just let me know please

Chapter 14

Tara reached her mind out to each shadow vessel in turn being careful to withdraw as soon as she felt it starting to react. As she scanned the third ship a smile of recognition formed on her face.

***

One moment Willow was falling, wondering how long it would take her to hit something, or even if she would hit anything The next she was floating still. After a moments thought she realised something was holding her up. Looking up Willow knew what it was. “Tara,” She whispered.

“Willow can you hear me?”

“Just about. Where am I?”

“You're inside a Shadow vessel.”

For a moment Willow couldn't think of anything to say. Finally she said, “That's... not good.”

“I'm coming to get you, but first we've got a slight situation.”

***

One the bridge of the Whitestar one the pilot said, “One of the ships is firing.”

“Everyone brace for...” Tessa stopped as she saw that the Shadow Vessel wasn't aiming at them. It's energy beam went through one of the other Shadow vessels, slicing it in two. The other two stopped and hung motionless for a moment. Tessa got the impression that they weren't used to one of their own attacking them. Not wanting to wait round to see what would happen Tessa said, “Use whatever engines we have left to get us the hell out of here.”

“Activating get us the hell out of here engines,” The pilot said.

The ship began moving away from the battle as quickly as possible, though not quickly enough for Tessa's liking.

Tessa watched as the renegade Shadow vessel destroyed the other two. It turned and headed towards the planet. Tessa sighed with relief.

“Ms Holloran, the techno mage's ship has just left.”

It only took a moment for Tessa to work out who was flying it. “Tara.”

***

Tara hurried to her case and opening it up pulled out a short metal rod. “Thanks Faith,” She whispered as she slipped it into her pocket. She left the room. Technicians were hurrying about, moving to repair the damage to the ship. Tara hurried to the docking bay. Hoping it would work Tara placed her hand against the control panel. She was a little surprised as the door opened. Going in she said to herself, “Well I guess that was the easy part, how do I control this thing?”

As Tara sat down in the cockpit and started looking over the controls she was surprised when some of them started to light up. She was even more surprised when a voice said, “Welcome aboard Ms Maclay.”

“Uh, you know me?” Tara asked, not used to space ships talking to her.

“Ms Rosenberg programmed me to recognise your biosigns.”

“Why didn't she tell me?”

“I'm afraid I'm rarely able to figure out what Ms Rosenberg is thinking, or if she even does think at all.”

“Well we need to get after her. She's in that Shadow vessel.”

“Beginning launch procedures.”

As the ship was heading towards the Shadow Vessel Tara asked, “Why haven't you spoken before?”

“I communicate with Ms Rosenberg through her neural interface. I must admit that I find this form of communication to be... quaint.”

As she approached the Shadow vessel she saw a small capsule being fired from it. The vessel then turned and headed towards the sun. As the ship moved up alongside the capsule the computer said, “One more thing, if you ever hurt Ms Rosenberg then at the first opportunity I will space you.”

“uh...”

“A vague disclaimer is nobody's friend.”

“I'll keep that in mind.” Seeing that the capsule was being brought on board Tara got up and raced to the hold. As she got their she found a large black, oblong object with veins running along it's surface. The object opened up and Willow stumbled out. Falling into Tara's arms she started sobbing.

“Shh,” Tara said, holding onto Willow. “It's okay, you're safe now.”

“I was so lost.”

“I found you,” Tara said, “I'll always find you.” After they had been holding each other for a while Tara said, “We better get back to the Whitestar.”

“No, we need to go to the planet, or they might destroy any evidence.”

Tara frowned, “I know you want to stop the people behind this, but don't you think we've been through enough?”

“You don't understand, they have Shadow technology,” Willow explained.

“I know...” Tara started, not getting what Willow meant.

“We can use it. To find a cure for the plague.”

Tara's face lit up as she understood, “Of course.”

***

On the bridge of the Whitestar Tessa asked, “What's Tara doing?”

“She picked up something from the Shadow vessel, now she's heading to the planet surface.”

“Dammit, does she have a death wish?” When no one answered, She went on, “Okay what about the Shadow vessel?”

“It flew into the sun.”

“Well that's new. Are there any other's in the area?”

“Negative.”

“Okay then send some fighters to the surface, see if we can stop Tara getting in too much...”

A technician turned and said, “Ms Halloran, there's a jump point forming. It's big.”

“How big?” Tessa had the feeling that, given how her luck was going, it'd probably turn out to be a planet killer.

“That big,” The tech said as the jump point appeared. A moment later a ship started to emerge from it.

Tessa smiled, “Well look who's arrived just after the nick of time.”

***

“So what's the plan?” Tara asked as they approached the planet, “Since I'm guess they're not going to let us walk in and get the information we need.”

“That probably would be expecting too much,” Willow agreed, “Also sneaking in isn't really an option since they're probably already tacking us. So I guess the plan is we hope they still want me alive and don't shoot the ship down and after that... we'll have to see how it goes. Thanks.”

“What?”

“I was just telling Ms Rosenberg that there is only one ship on the planet and only minimal life signs,” The ship said.

“I'm guessing that in order to avoid attracting attention to the base it'll only have a minimal staff, which will make things easier.”

“So the plan isn't totally insane.”

“Not totally.”

***

As Willow set the ship down she said, “Now that was easy, though the guards outside might not be.”

“How many are there?” Tara asked.

“Three at the moment.”

Tara nodded, she shook the small rod she was holding and it extended into a long staff, “We'll have to hurry.” Tara started moving as the doors were still opening. Coming out she caught one of the guards round the head before he could react. Another began to reach for his gun, but Tara was already moving towards him. Swinging her pike she caught him across the stomach, knocking him out. The third moved back, pulling his gun out. He aimed the PPG, but before he could fire Tara swung her staff round catching him across the arm, making him drop the PPG. He moved back pulling out a shock stick. He swung at Tara a couple of times, but she was always able to move out of the way. After a wild swing put him off balance, Tara swung the pike along the ground, knocking him over, She then knocked him out. Turning she saw that Willow had dealt with the other guard.

“How did you do that?”

“It's hard to fight someone who knows what you're going to do before you do it,” Tara said, tapping her forehead.

Willow nodded, “Oh yeah. We'd better get going.”

***

They started towards the compound. “How are we going to get in?” Tara asked,

“I'll handle the door if you keep an eye out.”

Tara nodded, looking round for any guards. A moment later the door opened. “So what are we looking for?” Tara asked.

“Somewhere where I can access there databases or, better yet, someone in charge.”

“Maybe we should have asked one of those guards.”

“It's not that large a place, how long could it take?” Walking down the hallway Willow stopped at a doorway saying, “There's a terminal in here.”

They went into a small office. There was a desk with a computer terminal at one end. Willow sat down at it and started working at it. After a few moments she said, “I think that I've... oh dear.”

“What?”

“They were cleverer than I thought. I've set off a silent alarm. I'll just... No good,” Willow got up saying, “We better get out of here.”

Tara stepped back into the hallway, looking for guards. No sooner had she stepped out of the room when the door slammed down behind her. Spinning round she hit the door, “Willow!”

“Don't worry, I'll get it open.”

Tara glanced down the hall, “There are guards coming. I'll lead them away.”

“What? Tara wait.” But Tara had already set off.

***

Two guards walked slowly down a corridor, neither seeming to be in much of a hurry. “So what do you think it is?”

“Probably a false alarm.” His companion answered.

“But they lost contact with the people at the landing field. I bet we've got an intruder.”

“So why aren't we hurrying?”

“They'll be sealed in the room, so no...” He stopped as Tara appeared in front of them, coming out from another passage.

“Hi,” She said before turning and running back down the passageway.

“You were saying?”

“Come on,” They both hurried after Tara.

Tara stopped in order to get her bearings. The good news was she had lost the two guards, the bad news was she had lost herself in the process. 'Willow?' Tara thought, wondering if they still had the connection.

'Tara, are you okay?'

'Yes, I got away from the guards. Where are you?'

'Over the east side of the building.'

'I'm going to head over to you.'

'Be careful.'

'You too.'

Concentrating a moment Tara worked out the way she'd have to go to get to Willow. There was a conference room which she worked out she needed to go through. She walked into the room and stopped a moment. She had been sure that she had sensed someone in there. Not seeing anyone Tara continued towards the next door.

***

The guard watched as Tara entered the room, starting to move forwards. He stopped as she hesitated. Had she seen him? Wearing a black light suit that shouldn't have been possible, but if he had been moving too fast she might have noticed something. Then Tara continued on, apparently unaware of his presence. When she was close enough he ran forwards, swinging his baton at her head, only to find she had her moved her fighting pike in the way. Tara spun towards him, twirling the pike round she forced him back. He tried to fight back, all the while he trying to work out how she could see him. Not only that but she seemed to know where he was going to hit before he moved. Then he saw it, her eyes were closed. He bumped against a desk, and while he was distracted Tara hit him in the chest, and then round the head.

***

Opening her eyes Tara leant down to remove the hood from her opponent. As the black light suit deactivated he appeared on the floor. “Must be some sort of camouflage,” Tara mused, “Too bad you were fighting someone who doesn't just see with her eyes.”

There was someone behind her with a PPG.

Tara dropped to the floor just before bolt of plasma went past where she'd just been. Rolling towards the gunman Tara rose, swinging her pike, knocking the PPG out of his hands. She then swung it into his stomach, and then brought it down over his back. Tara then left the room, keeping her senses tuned for any other attackers.

***

Willow stepped through the door to find the man who had interrogate her their. “There you are,” She said, “So are you going to cooperate?”

“No,” He smiled, “It's you that will.”

“Why? You don't have any Shadow vessels left.”

“We're already growing more. Besides here's the reason.” As he said this another door opened and Tara came in. The man put a small cylindrical object on the desk, “Tara, do you recognise this?”

Tara shook her head.

“It's the same device that killed your mother.” Arnold smiled pleasantly as he turned to Willow, “You see unless you want me to activate this device and turn her into a vegetable, then I suggest you do what I say.”

Bowing her head Willow nodded.

“Good, now come over here.”

Willow started to approach the desk. Tara tried to work out a way out of this. Then she remembered the dreams she'd been having about her mother's death. One of her mother's colleagues had been hired to investigate the device, which is what had set it off. She sent a telepathic message to Willow, “He's bluffing. He needs a telepath to activate it.”

Willow didn't seem to have heard, as she kept moving towards Arnold. As she reached the desk he said, “Very good.”

“There's just one problem,” Willow said.

“And what is that?”

Willow punched him the the face, sending him flying backwards into his chair, “You're all unconscious.” Turning Willow held her hand moaning, “Ow!”

Running forwards Tara asked, “Willow, are you okay?”

“His chin was harder than it looked,” Willow whimpered, still holding her hand.

Taking Willow's hand she kissed it gently before saying, “We need to get out of here.”

Willow nodded, “Good idea.”

They were starting towards the door when Tara stopped them, “Willow there's something in the room.”

“More black light suits?”

“No, I think it's one of them.”

There was a faint buzzing sound and then a large, black, six legged creature appeared. There was a small ball of energy forming between it's front limbs.

“Whatever that is,” Willow said, “I don't think it's good.”

Tara grabbed Willow and started to pull her to the ground.

“Get down!” A voice shouted from behind them. A moment later a stream of plasma shots fired over them, into the Shadow. The creature writhed in pain for a few moments, before collapsing to the floor. Standing Willow started to move towards it, but stopped when she smelt something burning.

“I'd stay back if I was you, they don't like people messing about with their bodies.”

They turned to see a bald headed man, who was wearing a flack jacket and carrying a plasma cannon. Putting the cannon down on the desk he said, “Man I really hate those things.”

“Thanks for the help, um...” Tara said.

“Garibaldi,” The man answered, “Michael Garibaldi.”

“So what exactly is the president of Edgar Industries doing out here?” Willow asked.

“Like I said I really hate those things. Let's just say we've had a few run ins in the past. So when I heard there was a chance for a little pay back. I grabbed a BFG and then got a ship out to meet the Excalibur.”

Tara turned to give Willow a questioning look. Willow mouthed,'Big Fucking Gun.” She then asked Garibaldi, “The Excalibur, it's here?”

“In orbit at the moment. You know if you want to come up for a tour of the ship I'm sure Gideon won't mind. I could show you both my second favourite thing in the galaxy.”

“No thanks,” Willow said.

“I think we'll pass,” Tara added.

As they walked towards the exit Willow put her arm round Tara whispering, “I'd much rather spend tonight seeing my favourite thing in the galaxy.”


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Thank tha Great Maker, Willow and Tara are safe :party And I totally agree with their prioritisation of favourite things :wtkiss

They'll get to see Garibaldi's Second-Favourite Thing at some point, though? Cause I really think that's something no-one should miss out on.

I really liked Tara kicking ass through the Shadow base. The augmentation of her fighting skill by her telepathy is something I don't recall ever being raised in B5, but it makes perfect sense, and I wish they had.

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Wooo.. a part I could follow

I can understand how Tara can sense somehow wanting to hit her, but how does she know WHERE he is? I guess she had sufficient combat training after all, heh.

Oh yeah, Willow or Tara did make sure to destroy or carefully investigate that anti-telepath device I hope? Come to think of it, it would probably be best if that investigation is done by Willow with Tara far away.

I thought the evil baddies had more or less stolen Shadow technology, but now it seems either one was working with them or 'it' escaped during all the fighting. Description reminded me a bit of the spider-lady in season1 of BtVS :lol.

So how did Willow manage to control that shadowy vessel anyway? Must have been somewhat fascinating to her techo-mage mind, even though it's a dangerous place to be (understatement of the year: "that's not good" :lol).

It's a good thing Tara is not a defenseless damsel-in-distress, though her fighting went over fairly easy it seems. And how on earth do you avoid a laserbeam shot ?? Got to learn that trick sometime.

More of a B5 question; nobody knows what comes through a jumpgate not even Friend-or-Foe ? That would seem to create rather dangerous situations.

I like space/SF stories... yep.

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Don't worry they'll get to see it at some point :)

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You're right it is a pity.

Actually I got the idea from the X-Men comics. In those Psylocke uses her telepathy in a similar way.

Thanks for the feedback :)

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true, and the reasons for Tara's fighting skills will be explained a bit in the next part.

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They were definitely working with the Shadows,or perhaps that should be working for them.

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Well they're not actually lasers. The weapons people are using are Phased Plasma Guns, which fire a small ball of plasma which is held in a magnetic field. They're used in space instead of other weapons since they're less likely to puncture the whole resulting in a CALRI (Catastrophic Aptmosphere Loss Related Incident)

Though dodging them would be dificult unless you have some forewarning about being shot. Which is what happened. Thanks to her telepathy Tara Knew he was going to fire, before he did, giving her time to move out of the way.

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More of a B5 question; nobody knows what comes through a jumpgate not even Friend-or-Foe ? That would seem to create rather dangerous situations.


It definitely causes problems.

Thanks for the feedback

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Shadows of the past

Author: Justin

Rating: pg-13

Summary: This is an Uber fic set in the Babylon 5 universe. A young techno mage and a telepath race to solve a mystery that threatens the galaxy

Notes: This story is set in the year 2267, 2 years after the Drakh released their plaque on the Earth.

Disclaimer: Willow & Tara and a lot of the other characters from this story belong to Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy. Babylon 5 was created by J. Michael Straczynski

Feedback: yes please

Distribution: Anyone can take it, just let me know please


Chapter 15

Garibaldi led them out of the room into another one, where a pair of rangers were waiting. Garibaldi said to them, “I want you to guard the prisoner.”

They both nodded and left.

Garibaldi turned back to Willow and Tara, “Now we should see about getting you both out of...”

“Wait!” Tara gasped.

Seeing the worried expression on Tara's face Willow asked, “What's wrong?”

“We need to get moving. There's still some fighting going on,” Garibaldi said.

“We need to go this way,” Tara said. Without waiting for any argument she started moving, with Willow following a short distance behind.

“But...” Realising that no one was listening to him he hurried after them both.

After going down a couple of corridors they came to a large chamber. It was filled with large glass pods containing small black shapes. Some were tiny and barely formed whilst others were starting to resemble small shadow vessels.

“What the hell is this?” Garibaldi asked.

“A nursery,” Tara answered, as she walked through the room, not paying much attention to the pods.

“That man said they were already growing more shadow vessels.” Willow added.

“There looks to be at least a hundred,” Garibaldi said, “This is bad.”

“It gets worse.” Tara led them to a door at the end of the chamber, going through they came to a balcony running around an even larger cavern which extended a long way above and below them. In the middle there was a black mass which had pipes running to it from the walls.

“Please tell me that isn't what I think it is,” Garibaldi said.

“It's a planet killer,” Willow said.

“I said tell me it isn't”

“You said the Excalibur was in orbit?” Willow asked.

Garibaldi nodded.

“Good, I think we're going to need it.” Willow turned to Tara, who was looking at the ship with an expression of horror, “Come on, we need to get out of here.”

Tara nodded, and let Willow lead her away.

***

As they got close to the docking bay they came across the Rangers carrying a stretcher, which had a body bag on it.

“What happened?” Garibaldi asked.

“The prisoner tried to escape,” One of the Rangers answered.

“Okay carry on.”

***

When they got to the docking bay Garibaldi took a Starfury up to the Excalibur, whilst Willow and Tara took Willow's ship up to the Whitestar. They were greeted by Tessa as soon as they boarded, “I hear you had an interesting encounter.”

“Yeah, that planet killer gave me the creeps.” Willow shuddered, “After having being inside one of their command ships I don't want to go anywhere near that thing.”

“Actually I was referring to my predecessor. Well that planet killer is something we will have to deal with. I wonder if Neotech would actually have used it.”

While they were talking they made their way to the bridge. As they arrived someone said, “Everyone's been evacuated from the surface and the Excalibur is in position.”

Beams of light fired from the tips of the Excalibur's three wings, they converged at the front of the ship where they merged to form one beam which fired down at the planet. They could see a burst of light where the beam hit the surface.

“Well hopefully that's the end of that,” Tessa said.

***

“This has been quite a week,” Willow said as they returned to their quarters, “I mean I came back from the rim I thought I'd just catch up with my friends and then see if my dad could help me get a job somewhere. I never expected to get caught up in an interstella conspiracy and be fighting an ancient alien race.”

“You think you've got it bad, I thought I was just going to Babylon 5 I thought it'd just be to act as an intermediary for some boring business deal, not that I'd be doing any of those things.” Tara smiled, “Of course I also didn't know that I'd meet the love of my life.”

“That is a plus,” Willow said. Then frowning she asked, “You do mean me, right?”

Tara laughed then kissed Willow, “Of course.”

“Well as long as nothing goes wrong, things should be a lot more peaceful now.” Seeing the look of horror on Tara's face she asked, “What's wrong?”

“The jinx! You just jinxed us.”

“Oops. I didn't mean it. Isn't there some way I can take it back.”

Tara shook her head, “We're just going to have to live with the consequences.”

“I'm sure we'll be able to handle it. Speaking of which I couldn't help notice you're pretty good in a fight. I mean those three guards didn't really stand a chance.”

“Oh well there's a reason for that. You remember I said I was mugged, or at least I thought that I had been.”

Willow nodded, “Yeah.”

“Well after I woke up, I became rather paranoid. I was afraid to leave my apartment, afraid that it'd happen again. After a couple of weeks though I realised it was silly to keep hiding from the world and I needed to deal with my fears. So I started taking self defence lessens. That was where I met Faith. She helped me with my training and after she became a ranger she showed me some Mimbari techniques.”

“Such as how to use one of those fighting sticks. She sounds like a good friend.”

Tara nodded, “Yes. I mean she can be a bit... aggressive for some people but she's a good person.”

“I wonder what we're going to do now this is all over?” Willow asked.

“I don't know, we should probably discuss it with Tessa tomorrow.”

***

Early the next day Tessa, Willow and Tara took a shuttle across to the Excalibur. As captain Gideon greeted them Willow asked, “Is Galen on board?”

Gideon shook his head, “He left a couple of weeks ago. We haven't had any word from him since then.”

“Oh,” Willow said, looking disappointed.

“Is he a friend of yours?” Tara asked.

“More a mentor. He helped to train me to become a Tech mage.”

Captain Gideon led them into the briefing room. Once in their he said, “Investigators have spoken to a number of people from Neotech. Several directors have confessed to being involved. They all say the same thing, they were working alone and Morganson had nothing to do with it.”

“So once again he gets away with it.”

“Well we'll know to keep an eye on him,” Garibaldi pointed out.

“I've had some people keeping an eye on him since I took over from you, the problem is he's very good at getting people to take the blame for him.”

“He's an ideologue,” Willow said. As everyone turned to her she went on, “They're not taking the fall for him, they're doing it for the ideals he espouses.”

“Probably right. So have we got all the Shadow technology they had access to.”

“We can question the people who confessed, see if there's any other facilities.”

“I'd suggest using a high level telepath when you do.”

“Anything we find, won't be admissible in court,” Gideon pointed out.

“I'm not so much worried about any trial as I am that they'll show up one day with a couple of fully formed planet killers.”

“Good point.”

“So there's just the question of why they were so interested in Willow,” Tessa said.

“The people we questioned about it all say it was just a private thing between Birkins and his compatriots,” Garibaldi answered.

“So he took it to the grave with him. Maybe that's why he tried to get away, he was worried what would happen if he told us anything so he forced them to kill him.”

“Could be.”

The meeting went on for a while after this but nothing new was revealed.

After they'd taken the shuttle back to the Whitestar Tessa said to Tara, “Can I have a word with you?”

“Sure,” Tara answered, turning to Willow she said, “I'll meet up with up...”

She stopped as a ranger approached them saying, “There's a call from the president, for Miss Rosenberg.”

For a moment Willow didn't know what to say. Finally she said, “Right, I'll take it now.”

***

Tara followed Tessa into her office then waited as Tessa went through some papers. Finally she looked up, “You were taking quite a risk today. Both when you went after that Shadow vessel, and then when you went to the planet rather than returning here.”

“Well we wanted to get there, before they could destroy the tech. Willow... We thought we could use it to help find a cure for the plague.”

“Well that is commendable but didn't you think we could handle that?”

“Yes well the Whitestar was damaged and... it seemed like a good idea at the time.”

“Ah that defence. Do you know G'kar?” Seeing Tara didn't understand she went on, “It doesn't matter. The thing is you'll need to learn to think more about these things if you want to work for me full time.”

Tara considered this a moment, “So the whole you telling me off thing was just your way of offering me a job?”

“Yes.”

“Do you treat all your new recruits like this?”

“That's nothing, you should see how I treat my ex-boyfriends. So what do you say?”

“I'd love to.”

“good.”

***

When Tara got to their quarters she asked Willow, “So what did the president want?”

“He wants me to work with the medical team looking for a cure for the plague.”

“That's great.” Tara started, stopping as she realised that he might want Willow to be working on Minbar, or possibly the Excalibur, “Uh, where will you be working?”

“Well they said I can work anywhere, but they'd prefer me to work from Babylon 5. What about you, what are your plans?”

“Tessa's offered me a permanent job working for the intelligence agency.”

“Well you should be good at that, seeing as you're so intelligent.”

“There's the matter of living arrangements,” Tara went on, “It's probably a bit early to be living together, it's only been a couple of weeks.”

“Is that all? It seems like longer. You're right. That would be a big step. Though we will be living together, we'll be on the same station.”

“We'll probably end up spending all our time staying at each others quarters.”

“Speaking of which, when we get back, will it be your quarters or mine?”

“yours, they're nicer.”

***

After getting back to the station Tara went back to her quarters to pick up some things. She was on the way when she heard a voice in her head, “You think this is all over, but the truth is, it's only just beginning.”

Spinning round she saw a man staring at her. He had long hair and an intense expression. Turning he walked away.

Tara's link sounded. Lifting it to her mouth she said, “Yes?”

“Tara,” Willow said, “Did something strange just happen?”

“You could say that.”

***

When Tara reached Willow's quarters Willow greeted her by asking, “Do you know what happened to Babylon Four?”

For a moment Tara was a bit taken aback by the question. She answered, “It disappeared soon after it was brought online. No one know what happened to it.”

“Actually it was sent a thousand years back in time to be used by the Minbari as a base in a previous Shadow war.”

“Oh, I didn't know that,” Tara looked confused as she said this.

“You're probably wondering how that's relevant. Well some sort of temporal disturbance was left behind afterwards. Lately they've been picking up tachyon emissions from it. They seem to coincide with when you've been seeing dead people.”

“So it's these tachyon emissions? They're letting me see the past?”

“I'm not sure, I mean these people are interacting with you. There are philosophies which say that people leave traces of themselves behind whereever they go. Maybe these tachyon emissions are letting you interact with these traces.”

“The person I saw said that this isn't over, that it's barely begun.”

“Well I figured that. I mean we don't know why the Shadows and everyone else is so interested in us.”

“The Shadows were only interested in you, they just wanted me dead.”

“I've been thinking about that, I think they knew they'd have to put me in one of their ships, do the whole mind wipe thing to get me to cooperate. I think they also knew that you'd be able to save me.”

“So that's why they wanted me killed.”

“Yes, I think it's that connection between us, that makes us important.”

“Well we don't really have enough to go on at the moment. Maybe we should leave discussing this till we know what we're discussing.”

Willow nodded, “True.” She smiled, “Actually I know a more pressing subject. It's my birthday next week.”

“Really?”

“I guess it'll be time for the yearly call from my parents. I'd like to tell them about you, that we're an item.”

“Of course.”

“I mean, are we?”

“I wouldn't have done that stuff to you last night if we weren't.”

Willow smiled, “Good.”

As Tara got into bed next to Willow her mind went back to what Willow had just said. Trying to work out what to get Willow for her birthday. A smile formed on her face as she thought of something. The only problem was, how was she going to get Strawberries delivered to Babylon Five?

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Hey, you finished :applause, but there's more to come? I mean, with the threat of the Shadows and having to find out why they want Willow and/or Tara, and of course their new lives together.

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Of course!

You're probably sick of people leaving feedback and starting with "I've never seen Babylon 5 but ...". Well, I've never seen B5, and was at first a little intimidated by the new terminology and settings. But with a little imagination and a large dose of :wtkiss lovin', it's not a problem.

Thanks for the story, I hope you will continue some more in this universe.

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Yes there is definitely more.

When I first had the idea for the story it was going to just be a very short story, but as I thought about it, it kept growing. So much so that I had to split it into two parts.

Now it's happening again. I recently read some reviews for some unfilmed episodes of Babylon project crusade which has given me some more ideas, so the plan now is for it to be a trilogy. It remains to be seen whether that means a trilogy or a trilogy in five parts :)

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I'm probably not even half as sick of hearing that as you are of people starting there feedback with "I've never seen the amazing race but..." or "I don't like reality shows but..." ;)

Anyway as long as feedback doesn't start with, "I hated this story and by extension I now hate you..." it's all good.

I'm glad you were able to enjoy the story despite not being familiar with the setting.

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Strawberries! :blush That made my day, thanks :bow

So there's going to be more? I'm looking forward to that, especially a guest appearance by Ranger Faith :pray I enjoyed all of this chapter, from the Shadow nursery (shiver) to the Excalibur's BFG (yay!) to Willow and Tara finding gainful employment (Tara would make a great intelligence operative - you can't help but trust her) and of course smoochies :wtkiss

(But now that I'm over the creepy factor of the nursery, I keep imagining this little tiny Shadow cruiser getting out, and Miss Kitty hunting it down and swatting it whenever it tries to blow up Willow and Tara's lingerie drawer or something :D )

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Strawberries... I vagualy recall reading such things on B5 somewhere in a story... yes I do.

Of course most B5 references fly right over my pretty head, but the story itself is nice to :). So planet killers are sort of Mother Alien type of creatures.. suprising since I was imagining some sort of Deathstar like thingie. To much techno-mage in me I suppose :lol

Tara becoming fully employed is nice of course, I do however wonder if she'll like her job. She likes to trust people and treat them fairly, sort of spying on them and reporting on that to someone else doesn't exactly fit that. She'll perform good on that job, thats for sure... I just wondered about it.

Now why did whatever legally elected president (gets confusing on B5:)) ask Willow to join an anti-plague medical team? Willow's suited for the job, true.. but so are probably lots of other people? Is it the universal way to say 'thank you from saving us from the evil shadows' ?? :lol

I hope Willow won't have too many nightmares about her short time in shadow-land. I'm sure Tara will comfort her should need arise, heh :flower

This has been a nice story, even for the B5-n00bs among us, like me :party

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Well soon after starting the story I knew I'd have to include some sort of homage to your story :)

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Actually Faith was supposed to have appeared in this story, but due to scheduling conflicts it wasn't possible. She will definitely be in the next story though.

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:lol, that's a great image

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I think you're right there. However Tara's job wouldn't involve spying on anyone. It's just a continuation of her job as a commercial telepath. She'd be acting as an intermediary in any negotations during which she'd only be able to scan the other person's surface thoughts and only with their permission. Anything else would be against the rules for telepaths and if she was asked to do that, Tara would probably resign on the spot.

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Well Willow's very clever and she has experience with very advanced technology. You're right that there are a lot of people with those qualifications and they're already part of the anti plague team. Basically time's running out for Earth and they need all the people they can get working on a cure.

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PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2005 3:57 pm 
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I realize I'm late to this party, but I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your story. While I've heard of Babylon 5, I never watched it. Despite this, the story was easy to follow. I really liked the darkness, and the pacing of the plot. I really like sci-fi, so I might have to check out some Babylon 5 DVDs.

The only critique I have pertains to dialogue. Once or twice I found myself having to re-read the beginning of a conversation because I lost track of which character was saying what. I believe this is known as "talking heads," and it only happened twice. That said, I did think your dialogue was concise, yet moved the plot along at a good pace.

Well done, and looking forward to a possible sequel. Thanks for the story.

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 Post subject: Re: Shadows of the Past
PostPosted: Fri May 20, 2005 12:38 pm 
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ringwaldoeuvre If you like SF then there's a good chance you'll like Babylon 5.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story :)

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The only critique I have pertains to dialogue. Once or twice I found myself having to re-read the beginning of a conversation because I lost track of which character was saying what. I believe this is known as "talking heads," and it only happened twice.


Well anything which interrupts the flow of the story is of the bad. I'll keep an eye out for this in the future.

Thanks for reading

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